Kajiura Yuki - Lacie [Osu|Taiko]

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Arakawa_Nyx
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, June 18, 2013 at 1:09:34 PM

Artist: Kajiura Yuki
Title: Lacie
Source: Pandora Hearts
Tags: Pandora hearts Lacie
BPM: 140
Filesize: 1872kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.63 stars, 110 notes)
  2. Hard (4.55 stars, 163 notes)
  3. Luster's Insane (4.98 stars, 224 notes)
  4. Normal (2.83 stars, 106 notes)
  5. sacchann's Taiko (5 stars, 394 notes)


Download: Kajiura Yuki - Lacie
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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It's My First beatmap ~

*still in progress*
JT123
arakawaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...
beatmap na da bagus ... ni aq posisi na da betulin
http://puu.sh/Fj2n
h-728
hi

[General]
Timing Signature - 3/4(Waltz)
BPM - 140.000
Offset - 530, I think.

this song has 3/4(waltz) rhythm, so you have to set timing signature as I showed.
then, you should resnap all notes to fit this rhythm.
at the time, I recommend you to be aware of downbeat(red circle), and it will make you easy to read rhythm.


after you fix these, please PM for me.
I'll gladly mod your map!
of course, if you encounter any problem, don't hesitate to ask me.
good luck
takonodans
hi
[General]
Hit sound :arrow: Soft

[Normal]
00:23:886 (6) - Grid level 3,and perfectly overlap.
00:25:386 (4,5,6) - this jump is too hard for "Normal"
00:32:243 (4) - too many returns. Try to split?
00:40:386 (1,2,3) - too hard. N player Confused.
00:59:886 (6) - too many returns.
01:11:672 (7) - nc
01:15:101 (2) - too many returns.
01:21:744 (6) - nc
01:21:958 (1) - remove nc
01:22:172 (1) - spinner start 01:22:387 and end 01:22:387

[Hard]
00:15:100 (1) - spinner end 00:19:814
00:24:957 (4) - remove this circle and add spinner
00:51:958 (1) - this slider end 00:52:815
00:54:636 (6) - remove this circle
01:12:529 (12) - nc


good luck.
Wreath
from #mod-req
hi, Arakawa_Nyx

[General]
Offset : i think 529 is no match. you should fixed it.
HS is too noisy
Hit Sound : Soft
Volume : 40%~60%
Countdown : i think countdown is unnecessary
KIAI time is not same
this is unrankable. you should fixed it.

[Hard]
  1. 00:14:993 (1) - i think 00:16:172 (1) - ~ 00:19:814 - is better
  2. 00:20:029 (1) - umm... it doesn't follow the music well. i hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
  3. 00:33:529 (9) - reverse arrow is hidden in hit burst, this is unrankable. you should fixed it.
  4. 00:36:100 (1) - i think 00:36:100 (1) - ~ 00:37:386 - is better
  5. 00:37:386 (1) - i think 00:37:815 (1) - ~ 00:39:958 - is better
  6. 00:53:136 (2) - it doesn't follow the music well. i hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
  7. 00:54:529 (5,6) - it doesn't follow the music well. i hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
  8. 00:56:886 (1) - i think 00:57:101 (1) - ~ 00:58:386 - is better
  9. 00:58:922 (1,2) - it doesn't follow the music well. i hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
  10. 00:59:672 (3) - i think 00:59:672 - ~ 01:01:386 - is better
  11. 01:01:922 (1) - i think 01:01:601 (1) - ~ 01:04:172 - is better
  12. 01:04:347 - unsnapped timing point
  13. 01:06:101 (4,5,6) - 01:06:958 (8,9,10) - 01:08:672 (14,15,16) - 01:09:958 (2,3,4) - 01:11:244 (7,8,9) - 01:16:815 (5,6,7) - it doesn't follow the music well. i hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
  14. 01:15:101 (2) - i think 01:15:101 (2) - ~ 01:15:744 (3) - is better
  15. 01:17:244 - add note
  16. 01:22:387 (1) - i think 01:22:387 (1) - ~ 01:25:387 (1) - is better

[Normal]
  1. 00:23:886 (6) - 00:25:600 (5) - 00:36:743 (3) - 00:40:600 (2) - 00:45:743 (5) - 00:55:172 (6) - 01:06:315 (5) - 01:08:029 (4) - 01:11:029 (5) - 01:17:458 (3) - 01:19:172 (5) - 01:21:744 (6) - remove this notes. its hard to play for beginners.
  2. 00:32:243 (4) - 00:59:886 (6) - 01:15:101 (2) - 01:17:672 (4) - its no good, too many returns. can you make another pattern like this?
  3. 01:08:640 - unsnapped timing point

gl :oops:
kyuten
Hi Arakawa_Nyx Random check from #modreq
\Kajiura Yuki/

First some general suggestion:
<1> Usually use Grid Snap for your first map which can make it easy to rank.
<2> The hitsound doesn't fit this song and it's too noisy.
<3> You should not use 1/4 stream for a soft song, try some 1/2 slider.
<4> Don't forget to set a preview point.
<5> The kiai time must have an end. Fix the timing.

Now about the map set:
offset sounds weird...
00:15:100 - why you start here :( there's no difference with the part before.
make sure where you'd better set a note and where is a slider or spinner.
the rhythm by your map does't fit for this song :(

Overall I think you should better draw lessons from other maps, that should be helpful.
And then do some remap.

You can call me for help when you did these, and I will give you a mod if this map is in good state ww

Good luck with your first mapヾ(*´∀`*)ノ゛
Topic Starter
Arakawa_Nyx
Thanks all >< ~
I Finish fix this Beatmap xD ~
thanks xD ~
Go Check it xD xD ~
by the way.. i still don't know how much i must change my offset T_T, Please Help me >< ~
and If There is a still Mistake.. Please.. Tell Me >3< ~
h-728
Hi! as promised

[General]
  1. I think this count down doesn't quite match with this song.
    remove the check of "Enable countdown" from song setup.
  2. and if the diff doesn't have break time, remove the check of "letterbox during break" too.
  3. I know that you reduce the volume, but it sounds still loud for me.
    I think the volume is enough with 30% or so.
  4. you must use more than 80% of the music file, or you have to cut your mp3 file.
    I recommend you to put notes header of the song.
  5. about spacin:look at here and select Unintuitive Spacing.
    it will help you for your mapping.


[Hard]
  1. slider tick rate - 2 is enough imo
  2. slider velocity 2.0 is too high for Hard. consider to reduce. (if you reduce it after you put slider, you have to adjust length of all sliders...)
  3. clap pattern doesn't match with this melody. how about replace them with whistle pattern?
  4. 00:00:529 - I think you can put note from here. then, if you star at here, there is only 0.5 second from we select this beatmap to start playing.
    it is too difficult to hit the first note.
    this is resolved by setting audio-leadin. set it about 1 or 1.5 second from song setup.
  5. 00:15:100 (1) - I think this spinner doesn's follow the music. replace it with some other notes.
  6. 00:19:814 ~ too short break time will confuse player. delete it, and remove check of "letterbox d~~"
  7. 00:22:815 (2,3) - too narrow. widen, and we can read the rhythm easily.
  8. 00:24:957 (1) - end at 00:25:815 is better.
  9. 00:33:958 (10) - reverse arrow is covered with 00:33:529 (9). this is unrankable, so you have to fix
  10. 00:36:100 (1,2) - same as 00:15:100 (1)
  11. 00:37:600 (1) - ^
  12. 00:46:815 (1) - ^
  13. 00:57:101 (1) - ^
  14. 00:59:672 (1) - hmm..I think this heart-shaped is great, but this slider should end at 01:00:636 imo...
  15. 01:01:922 (1) - start at 01:01:386, and end at 01:03:958 is better.
  16. 01:04:815 - Kiti Time should be started from here.
  17. 01:17:030 (7) - end at 01:17:244.
  18. 01:22:387 - add note
  19. 01:22:387 (1) - star at 01:23:244, and end at 01:25:387.
  20. 01:25:387 - Kiai Time should end at here.


[Normal]
  1. first of all, in these for-newbie diff, I highly recommend you to keep distance same level.
  2. second, slider velocity is tooooo high. use 1.2 or lower than it is better. and it seems you changed slider velocity after you put slider. recheck all of sliders.
  3. third, I almost say same things that I said in Hard. consider with put notes at header, spinner, and Kiai Time.
  4. 00:57:101 (2) - I can't see the path of this slider. it must be visible.


well, that's all this time.
if you need recheck, please recall me.
good luck
Topic Starter
Arakawa_Nyx
Thx h-728 xD ~
Almost Fixed :3 xD ~
hitmefast
okay here a mod from #modrequest

general
background size its not recomended. try to find an 1024x768
set preview point (in edit mode 'timing' and 'set current position as preview point')
please solve audio leadin (put in all diffs the same lead)
^same in letterbox in breaks
add tags.



normal

01:17:672 (4) - unsnapped slider
01:17:672 (4) - ^
01:17:672 (4) - ^

hard
that start its strange and doesn't fit beats in the song with your notes please try to fix that ... and its really long the part is not really acorded with the song
try to don't spam with spninners and don't make this: 00:37:039 thats kinda horrible and more in hard diff
i took a look fast couse there are a huge part of notes in bad places
and please whats that? XD
00:59:672 (1) -
maybe helps that

waiting more updates ^^
:)
Topic Starter
Arakawa_Nyx
Finish ~ xD xD ~
thanks hitmefast xD xD ~
hitmefast

Arakawa_Nyx wrote:

Finish ~ xD xD ~
thanks hitmefast xD xD ~
yw

today i will take a better look^^
hope changes are done

#cancel kudo star
Topic Starter
Arakawa_Nyx
Done >,< ~
But If There Still a mistake Tell me T_T Maybe I forgot to fix it xD
Zack_F
if you play this map in the CTB version
there is one mistake
the fruit color is white
but the seed color is black
i hope you can fix that mistake :D
Topic Starter
Arakawa_Nyx
How ? >< change the color ? ><
Zack_F
one more thing i forgot to tell you
the beat in the taiko mode doesn't suit very well
hope you can make the taiko difficulty :D
Topic Starter
Arakawa_Nyx
Okay >< ~
hitmefast
Note: don't give kudos without reason please. they can be denied and you may be punished ;D

here's the mod i said:

http://puu.sh/HM28 - its an .osu document you need to add this document in the folder of the song
there you can hear the notes hit in some correct places
note: don't full upload with this!!! - delete it before you upload it again

next ... the source its fine couse its from Pandora Hearts but ... remove the 'Pandora Hearts OST' from tags couse its allready in source
for change the colour of fruits/notes w/e go to song setup -> colours and there select better ones imo pure black its kinda bad for any song maybe a really black gray should do the same effect

the blackground image its the same but you changed the tittle of it so the song can't recognice his blackground - iff you're going to change the image for another one delete it from the folder

okay the lead in as i said before its wrong couse the 3 diffs have diferent ones - to correct that you need to go to song setup -> audio and there put a number ... THEN do the same in ALL diffs the song have BTW the lead in should be great at 2

next thing ... letterbox its the same as in the lead all 3 diffs have diferent ones - to solve that go to song setup -> StoryBoarding and put the same value for all the diffs

preview point ... as i said in the 1º post to set a preview point go to ... timing (the one in the menu not the one in the editor) and 'set current position as preview point' AND do the same in all diffs ...

easy:
00:51:958 (2) add new combo

normal
use 1/4 bot 1/6 please.


a lot of work ... good homeworks :D
enjoy ~

i will come once i see important changes ... hope thats soon ^^
bye~
Topic Starter
Arakawa_Nyx
Sorry for a long time T_T

how to add the document to folder song ? T_T

Change the tag -> Finish ><
Change the color -> Finih >< Black to gray
By the way i change the background for many times, But why the background still blank ? T_T What should I Do T_T

I Finish Fix this beatmap >< but if there still a mistake, please tell me ><
maybe i forgot fix that >3<

Sorry for my poor english >< i can't speak well >< ~
Indra145

Arakawa_Nyx wrote:

Sorry for a long time T_T

how to add the document to folder song ? T_T

Change the tag -> Finish ><
Change the color -> Finih >< Black to gray
By the way i change the background for many times, But why the background still blank ? T_T What should I Do T_T

I Finish Fix this beatmap >< but if there still a mistake, please tell me ><
maybe i forgot fix that >3<

Sorry for my poor english >< i can't speak well >< ~
Did you use full submission?
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