Kalafina - Hikari no Senritsu (TV Size)

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Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]
no tags? consider adding some.


[Easy]
00:04:118 (1) - finish at start
00:09:118 (1) - make it symmetrical.
00:24:118 (1) - finish at start
01:25:368 (2) - reduce a return


[Normal]
00:40:680 (4) - start at 00:40:836


[Hard]
00:00:368 (1) - finish at start
00:06:618 (1) - this is jump?If not,plz adjust the spacing
00:54:743 (8) - stack with (3) ?
00:55:368 (10) - dont place here...it's difficult to read
01:00:055 (4) - suggest placing it near the beginning of the (3) ,or maybe plaers will think that (3) has 2 returns
01:05:993 (8) - make it symmetrical with (6)(7)?
01:26:618 (2) - use a circle instead of the slider ,slider is useless here.


[Insane]
01:26:618 (2) - use a circle instead of the slider ,slider is useless here.
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Great Mapset
Good Luck :D
Topic Starter
Zejky
tks you for moding
Update
Wreath
hi, Zejky

re-check :oops:

Blue : you should fix it, its not so good
Red : its unrankable. you should fix it

[Insane]
  1. i love it. great


[Hard]
  1. OD-1. OD 7 is very high
  2. 01:16:305 (2) - move to x:192 y:264
  3. 01:16:618 (3) - move to x:88 y:248

    good job :oops:


[Normal]
  1. you not fix distance?


[Easy]
  1. ^


okay, give a star
please say to me if you want re-check at any time
good luck, Zejky :oops:

P.S. no need kudosu ;)
kusano
From my queue

[General]

This is TV Size song, add opening tags.

[Easy]

00:28:493 (1,2) - switch NC
00:42:243 (3) - add NC
01:00:993 (1,2) - switch NC

[Normal]

00:11:930 (5) - add NC
00:18:805 (1) - ^
00:22:243 () - ↓ like this?

00:25:055 (1) - remove NC
00:30:055 (1) - ^
00:36:618 (4) - add NC
01:02:555 (1,4) - switch NC
01:12:555 (1,5) - ^

[Hard]
OD7 is same as in Insane diff. OD-1 it's better imo

00:08:493 (1,3) - switch NC
00:41:618 (8) - add NC
00:48:493 (4) - ^
00:54:118 (6,1) - switch NC
01:05:055 (6) - add NC
01:08:493 (4) - ^
01:14:118 (7,1) - switch NC
01:26:305 (1) - remove NC

[Insane]

00:21:618 (6,1) - switch NC
00:30:055 (1) - remove NC
01:15:055 (1,1) - switch NC
01:26:305 (1) - remove NC

sorry NewCombo mod ;_;
Nice song and mapset!
good luck~ :)
hibarirailwayz
from modding queues~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]
none

[Easy]
00:35:993 (2,3) - not good as visual. I suggest you separate two sliders.
00:55:993 (1) - 1grid up and 1grid left

[Normal]
01:20:993 - add circle

[Hard]
00:25:055 (1,2) - remove and add NC
00:30:055 (1,2) - ^
00:31:305 (1,2) - ^
00:41:618 (8) - add NC
00:54:118 (6,1) - add and remove NC
01:02:555 (4) - add NC
01:03:493 (1) - remove NC
01:04:118 (3) - add NC
01:14:118 (7,1) - add and remove NC
01:16:618 (3,4) - match the sliders endpoint.
01:25:055 (1,2) - remove and add NC

[Insane]
00:38:024 (1) - remove NC
00:38:804 (5) - add NC
00:39:430 (1) - remove NC
00:41:618 (6) - add NC

Good luck!!
Topic Starter
Zejky
tks
thank everyone who has mod
sorry about the delay
Topic Starter
Zejky
update !!!
[quote="Wreath"]hi, Zejky


Blue : you should fix it, its not so good
Red : its unrankable. you should fix it


I do not know what red. you can talk clear


P/S: sorry for the language I use it from google.
Wreath

Zejky wrote:

update !!!

Wreath wrote:

hi, Zejky


Blue : you should fix it, its not so good
Red : its unrankable. you should fix it


I do not know what red. you can talk clear


P/S: sorry for the language I use it from google.
Blue : you should fix it, its not so good
Red : its unrankable. you should fix it

this is template, sorry :(
kurohana
Mod req from My Queue

Easy

00:28:493 (4) - move 5 grids right
00:40:993 (2) - spacing
00:46:618 - 1,2x spacing in Easy? Too hard for beginners, please fix, then fix spacing >.<
01:06:618 - again ^
The spacing-changes are very difficult for bginners to read, they must be fixed!

Normal

00:14:118 (1) - Spacing
00:16:618 (1) - Spacing
00:19:743 (2) - Spacing
00:26:305 (1) - Spacing
00:30:055 (3) - Spacing
00:32:555 (3) - Move like 00:31:305 (1) this note (Fix spacing when you change it)
00:33:493 - Add note, sounds empty >.<
00:40:836 (4) - I'm not sure about this one...
00:46:618 - Spacing change again, i prefer to delete 1,2x and fix spacing, because on 00:56:618 - it's normal again, very confusing (Especially for beginners)
01:06:618 - Change again >.<

Hard

00:28:805 (1) - Delete NC
00:40:368 (5) - Make this slider like this Fix spacing
00:55:368 (5) - This is confusing, better change it
00:56:618 - Spacing changes to normal, at 01:06:618 it's 1,2x again, delete 1,2x or do 1,2x at 00:56:618 too
01:16:618 (3,4) - Stack the ends like this then move 01:17:868 (5,1) - 1 grid down

Insane

00:24:430 (1) - Remove NC
00:55:368 (8) - Move 1 grid down, should stack with 00:53:805 (5)
00:56:618 - Same like Hard
01:10:368 (4) - Ctrl + R
01:25:055 (1) - Remove NC and add NC to the following note

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Zejky
tks for moding
update !!!
kyuten
Hi~Request from my queue

[General]
Tag: Kajiura Yuki Red Moon

[Easy]
-Timing-
00:04:118 - delete the green line, no need to add here
00:17:399 - useless green line
-Beatmap-
00:17:243 - remove slidertick here is better
00:40:993 (2) - add whistle here?
00:48:493 (2,3) - I perfer this rhythm
01:08:493 (2,3) - ^
01:12:243 (5) - eee...so..make it more beautiful..?


[Normal]
-Timing-
00:04:118 - OK~It's also this ww You can use just one red line with N:C1 here, the green line here is useless :D
00:45:993 - useless green line
-Beatmap-
00:05:368 (3) - Hmmm...it doesn't symmtric with 00:04:118 (1) but its also OK..just nazi..you choose the idea
00:16:618 (1) - whistle here is a little noisy 00:17:243
00:48:493 (2,3,4) - begin from here the distance is changed cuz you used x1.20. In my opinion there is no need to use x1.20 for its just changed little...still try x1.00?
00:52:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is ugly...



[Hard]
-Difficulty-
OD-1
-Timing-
00:00:368 - add red line here with S:C2 30%
00:04:118 - same as Easy and Normal
-Beatmap-
00:01:305 (2) - one grid down on the centre
00:13:493 (7) - one grid down, its not symmetric
00:25:055 (1) - remove NC
00:25:368 (2) - add NC
00:30:055 (1) - remove NC
00:30:368 (2) - add NC
00:31:305 (1) - remove NC
00:31:618 (2) - add NC
00:46:305 (4,5,1) - the distance is different from 00:45:680 (1,2,3) why @.@???
00:52:555 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this pattern it more beautiful :D
01:03:493 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - try this pattern :D?(3 under 1, 5 under 2 and 01:05:680 (2) under 7
01:16:618 (3,4) - nazi...the stack
01:25:367 (2,3,4,5,6) - fix the pattern smoooooth :3
01:27:868 - no hitsound at the end. mute..?


[Insane]
-Timing-
still some problems...fix these as in Hard
-Beatmap-
00:37:555 (5,6,7,8,9) - a little noisy..try this?
01:28:493 - mute

Good work :3


[Overall]
\Kalafina/ <3333
taiko hitsound in Hard and Insane sounds weird and noisy...taiko hitsound doesn't fit for the song imo..
fix some nazi should be nice www
Good luck and star~☆
Topic Starter
Zejky
tks for mod and stars
Spectator
[ Insane ]

00:11:930 (2,3,4,5) - how about this square jump? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/371906

00:13:649 (6,7,8,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/371910

00:15:368 (3) - Ctrl+R

00:16:305 (4) - x:368 y:344

00:19:118 (2) - stack slider's end at 00:18:180 (3) -

00:25:055 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/371923

00:26:618 (2,3,4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/371927

00:56:305 (2) - stack this on 00:55:368 (8) 's end

00:56:618 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/371915

01:07:868 (3) - Ctrl+R

01:08:493 (1) - x:320 y:288

01:10:368 (4) - stack this slider at 01:09:430 (2) -

01:11:305 (2) - x:424 y:72

01:14:118 (6) - NC

01:19:118 (3) - x:336 y:184



Lovely song <3

Good luck with rank!
meiikyuu

yay kalafina ^^, feel free to ignore anything you don't like

Easy
  1. 00:06:618 (2) - hm...why not put this slider here, right under 1? http://puu.sh/IOpu might look neater
  2. 00:46:618 (1) - add finish at beginning of slider? (edit: maybe you don't need to do this b/c there's not other finish sounds lol)
  3. 00:59:118 (5) - NC
  4. 01:00:993 (1) - remove NC
  5. 01:01:618 (2) - then NC here
    so that the combos follow each line of vocal
  6. 01:10:993 (4) - NC?
  7. 01:21:618 (5) - NC please(new section of vocals)


Normal
  1. 00:34:743 (2) - add whistle at beginning of this slider , and then remove the whistle at the reverse..
  2. 00:38:805 (1) - remove NC here and NC on the next note


Hard
  1. 00:10:993 (1) - remove NC here and NC on next note
  2. 01:16:618 (3,4) - stack the ends of these 2 sliders more neatly


Insane
  1. 00:50:680 - add note to keep the flow going~
  2. 00:56:305 (2) - stack with 00:55:368 (8) - ? xD
  3. 01:17:868 (5) - ctrl+ r might play better


nice song ^-^ hope it gets ranked, would rate a 10 lol
Topic Starter
Zejky
thank for mod
update !!
Chewin
Hi Zejky, mod request from my modding queue :3

Red : You must fix it
Blue : You should fix it
Black : Just suggestions

[General]
Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections. You must set the same red timing sections in all diff

[Easy]
00:42:243 (1) - This vocal starts at 00:41:618, so it would be better you if you remove NC from 00:42:243 (1) adding it on 00:44:118 (2) instead with the new vocal sound.
00:46:618 (1) - I think you really need to use a finish on this slider's head to fit the kiai time
00:55:993 (1,2) - Mh. Even if the vocal starts on (1) you should to remove NC from 00:55:993 (1) adding it on the long white tick where new sound starts: 00:56:618 (2)
00:58:493 (1,2) - ^
01:01:618 (5,1) - ^

01:02:243 (1) - I think you could to remove this circle since this is the easiest diff
01:06:618 (1) - Same above about the finish
01:19:118 (3) - New combo

[Normal]
00:37:868 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - Select these elements and move to x:120 y:240 to center the 00:40:680 (3)
00:46:618 (1) - Same of easy about the finish
00:54:118 (7) - New combo for consistency with 01:14:118 (1)

[Hard]
00:11:618 (6) - New combo to avoid 00:13:493 (11)
00:26:618 (6) - New combo
00:27:243 (1) - Remove New combo
00:26:618 (6,1,1) - I don't agree about this antijump. I highly suggest you to use a different spacing than 00:26:305 (5,6) or 00:25:055 (1,2,3) that are 1/2 while this is 1/1.
00:27:868 (1) - Remove New combo
00:29:117 (4) - Use New combo
00:30:055 (1) - Remove New combo
00:35:368 (4) - I think this rhythm is better: http://puu.sh/JkGF or http://puu.sh/JkGQ
01:23:493 (7) - CTRL + R it?
01:25:836 (5) - move to x:40 y:272 for symmetry with 01:25:523 (3)

[Insane]
00:10:993 (1) - Useless New combo, remove it.
00:57:243 (4,1,1) - This antijump çwç
00:57:868 (1) - Remove NC
01:09:430 (5) - Improve the overlap with 01:07:868 (3)
01:14:118 (6) - New combo
01:15:993 (1) - Remove New combo
01:16:618 (3) - New combo
01:25:367 (1) - 1 grid right for spacing consistency with 01:25:367 (1,2,3,4,5)

That's all ;3 Good luck >w<
Topic Starter
Zejky
tks for mod
update hard and insane
re-edit all easy and normal to be able to sync.
Topic Starter
Zejky
Update complete !
Kurokami
Hi. :3

[Hard]
Oh god, my second try was a big fc. o.o Which is very rare. Oh well your jumps just want from me to touch them and I want to touch them too. :3

00:03:493 (6,7) - the spacing here is smaller then 00:03:805 (7,1) - here, so how about this: move this 2 00:03:493 (6) - right 1 grid, then this 00:03:805 (7) - left 1 grid. It maybe looks better
00:54:743 (3) - i dunno if it placed here for purpose, but 1 grid left will look better

That's all for this diff. Its all nazy. ._.

[Insane]
You used some magic, aren't you? o.o

00:47:868 (3) - this jump feels a bit weird to me. I catched it always, but still... ctrl+R on this 00:47:243 (2) - ?

I wanted to mention the small notes too, but they are just weird on the first try. On my second try I already get used to it.
[]
Not too many. ._. Well this mapset is very good therefore I give you 2 star. One, because I unable to find any real problem, and the second is because I love this song. :3 Good luck and get this ranked as fast as possible. ^^
Topic Starter
Zejky
tks you for moding and stars
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