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FIELD OF VIEW - DAN DAN kokoro Hikareteku

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年2月8日 at 上午 04:59:01

Artist: FIELD OF VIEW
Title: DAN DAN kokoro Hikareteku
Source: Dragon Ball GT
Tags: anime TVsize OP
BPM: 133
Filesize: 9493kb
Play Time: 01:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.65 stars, 104 notes)
  2. Normal (1.95 stars, 142 notes)
  3. Hard (3.46 stars, 290 notes)
Download: FIELD OF VIEW - DAN DAN kokoro Hikareteku
Download: FIELD OF VIEW - DAN DAN kokoro Hikareteku (no video)
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This is my first map. Hope you like it.>.<

changed the MP3 to get higher quality

finished

Thanks l1106188's amazing advice!!!!

I am back. 2017/2/8
Loneight
Request from in-game


  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是要討論的問題
    紅色 是unrankable

[general]

  1. 整體來說 ... NC 通常都是長白線起NC 除非真要配合唱歌者或是突如其來的大跳
  2. 有些slider 我覺得可以拉得更好看 :3
  3. slider 通常都會結束在紅線或白線 (個人觀感)
  4. 有些節奏我聽起來怪怪的 不過我都打出來了

[Normal]

  1. 00:04:424 (3) - 結束在 00:05:101 - 會不會比較好呢?!
  2. 00:05:101 - kiai time 不是該設置在這邊嘛OAO?
  3. 00:06:679 (4) - 改成00:06:679 - 1個circle 然後 在00:06:905 - 加一個slider結束在 00:07:356 - 如何?! 若有改成這樣 記得 00:06:905 - 要NC
  4. 00:28:559 (1) - 不是結束在 00:29:236 - 嘛?
  5. 00:29:687 (1) - re NC
  6. 00:37:582 (4) - NC
  7. 00:40:965 (1) - 結束在00:41:191 -
  8. 00:42:995 (3,1) - (3) NC (因為前面那段也同樣有NC可是這邊沒有)然後 (1) re NC
  9. 00:44:123 (1) - 結束在00:44:800 -
  10. 00:47:958 (1) - re NC
  11. 00:49:537 (1) - 間距問題 ... 這裡會誤導新手
  12. 00:50:890 (1) - re NC
  13. 00:51:116 (2) - 結束在00:51:792 -
  14. 00:59:236 (6) - NC
  15. 01:02:845 (1) - re NC
  16. 01:04:649 (1) - 同樣間距會誤導
  17. 01:05:552 (1,2,1) - (1) re NC, (2) NC 然後(1) re NC
  18. 01:10:965 (1,2) - (1) re NC 然後 (2) NC
  19. 01:14:574 (1,2) - ^
  20. 01:24:499 (1) - kiai time 應該是在這邊才開始 .
  21. 01:26:304 (5) - NC
  22. 01:27:206 (8,1) - 這裡節奏讓我感覺怪怪的,看要不要把(8) re 然後把(1)拉到(8)的位置 結束在一樣時間點
  23. 01:29:010 (1) - re NC
  24. 01:34:424 (1) - ^
  25. 01:38:033 (5) - NC
  26. 01:44:236 - 在這設置kiai time 結束

[Hard]

  1. 00:03:297 (5,1) - (5) NC 然後 (1) re NC
  2. 00:05:101 - 同Normal
  3. 00:06:004 (1) - re NC
  4. 00:06:905 (5) - NC
  5. 00:07:356 (1,1,1) - 不懂為何要NC ...
  6. 00:09:613 (1) - re NC
  7. 00:22:243 (1,2) - (1) re NC 然後 (2) NC
  8. 00:26:078 (1) - re NC
  9. 00:28:559 (7,1) - (7) NC 然後 (1) re NC
  10. 00:29:687 (1) - 間距讓人困惑 ... 以為是1/4拍就按下去了 loool
  11. 00:31:266 (4) - NC
  12. 00:32:168 (8,1) - (8) NC 然後 (1) re NC
  13. 00:33:522 (1) - 同樣間距
  14. 00:33:973 (1) - re NC
  15. 00:35:326 (1) - ^
  16. 00:36:454 (1) - ^
  17. 00:42:995 (9,1) - (9) NC 然後 (1) NC
  18. 00:46:605 (7) - NC
  19. 00:55:627 (3) - ^
  20. 00:59:236 (6) - ^
  21. 01:02:619 (5) - 不覺得這裡節奏怪怪的嘛 ~~
  22. 01:10:063 (4) - NC
  23. 01:13:672 (13,1,1) - (13) NC 然後 (1) 都 re NC
  24. 01:15:477 (5) - NC
  25. 01:15:928 (1) - re NC
  26. 01:17:732 (9) - NC
  27. 01:24:499 (1) -同 Normal
  28. 01:21:792 (1,1) - re NC
  29. 01:22:695 (4) - NC
  30. 01:24:950 (1,1,1) - re NC , NC不是這樣用的阿!!!
  31. 01:29:913 (7,1,1) - (7) NC 然後(1)都 re NC
  32. 01:34:424 (1) - re NC
  33. 01:35:777 (1,1,1) - ^
  34. 01:38:484 (1) - ^
  35. 01:38:935 (1) - 把他移到01:39:161 (1) - 上去 然後 01:39:161 (1) - 移到01:39:386 (2) - 位置上去 以此類推 最後01:42:544 (4) - 看你想擺哪裡 然後01:39:161 (1) - re NC ,01:39:837 (4,1) - (4) NC and (1) re NC ,01:40:740 (4,1) - 也是 , 01:41:642 (4,1) - 也是
  36. 01:44:349 (1) - 轉盤時間結束點也跟Normal一樣吧~
對第1次做圖的人來說 算不錯了!!
加油!
good luck ~

edit:
阿! 我忘了說
149教練 還需要再找人去確定這首的timing
我測的timing 在最後面 結尾不准了
NC=new combo
^=同上面
Topic Starter
1491625364981
已修正

感謝MOD \:D/
S o r d a
from queue

[overall]:
  1. title should be DAN DAN Kokoro Hikareteku
  2. 2ndKIAI end maybe 01:38:935 - ?
[Hard]:
  1. Circel size+1 please stream Too hard Not this diff hard i think Insane
  2. 00:13:672 (4,5,6,7) - dont fit finish
  3. 01:24:499 (7,1) - swaps newcombo
  4. 01:43:898 (3) - 01:44:236 end better music
[Normal]:
  1. 00:40:965 (1) - spinner bug add newcombo
Amainya
Hi~ ><


General

timign好像不对样子..试试1526?
preview没设置呢
最后一个kika没有设置结束哦


Normal

00:58:108 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这里感觉有点不合适,单点太多


Hard

连打下的有点太多了
整体排列不大好看(直线排的的太多了?

End

不过这作为第一张图的话感觉已经很好了(比我好太多了(被拖走
Topic Starter
1491625364981

S o r d a wrote:

from queue

[overall]:
  1. title should be DAN DAN Kokoro Hikareteku fixed
  2. 2ndKIAI end maybe 01:38:935 - ?
fixed

[Hard]:
  1. Circel size+1 please stream Too hard Not this diff hard i think Insane circle@.@? fixed
  2. 00:13:672 (4,5,6,7) - dont fit finish fixed
  3. 01:24:499 (7,1) - swaps newcombo fixed
  4. 01:43:898 (3) - 01:44:236 end better music
fixed

[Normal]:
  1. 00:40:965 (1) - spinner bug add newcombo
fixed

Thanks for mod :)
Topic Starter
1491625364981

OrangeNeKo wrote:

Hi~ ><


General

timign好像不对样子..试试1526? 感謝測試!!
preview没设置呢 已設置
最后一个kika没有设置结束哦 已修正


Normal

00:58:108 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这里感觉有点不合适,单点太多 抱歉!!因為我是新手所以這裡不知道要如何處理 :(


Hard

连打下的有点太多了 感謝建議!
整体排列不大好看(直线排的的太多了? 抱歉!! 我試著要彎曲它 可是怎麼彎都不對D:

End
不过这作为第一张图的话感觉已经很好了(比我好太多了(被拖走
感謝你的支持 :)

Thank for mod :)
Konei
General

get a better mp3 quality

enable countdown (song setup - storyboarding)

you need a diff that has less then 3 stars.


Ok, let's look what you can do - with ths mp3 I cant mod because it's to low ._.


Good luck^^

Really good for your first beatmap.
GugUCorn
hello! :D
there are my some suggestion , no need to follow if you dont really like.

[Normal]

HP drain : 4~6
Cricle Size : 3~4
Ovarall difficult : 4~6
Approach Rate : 4~6
Slider velocity : 1.00~1.20
Distance Snap : 0.90~1.20

I think that it is standard...
and I think that Circle Size is 3 than 4
because Circle Size 3 is be good-looking than size 4 in normal.

Normal

00:10:097 (4,1) - too close
00:58:142 (1)-01:01:751 (4) - don't you think that here is hard? modify more easy...
01:05:135 (x) - add
01:06:939 (x) - add

-----------------------------
and...
01:38:969 - odds sound...get better mp3 file

thank you for see my poor mod
Topic Starter
1491625364981

Konei wrote:

General

get a better mp3 quality changed

enable countdown (song setup - storyboarding) fixed

you need a diff that has less then 3 stars. I found rule that is lower 3.24 :?:


Ok, let's look what you can do - with ths mp3 I cant mod because it's to low ._.


Good luck^^

Really good for your first beatmap.
Thanks :D
Topic Starter
1491625364981

[Pisces] wrote:

hello! :D
there are my some suggestion , no need to follow if you dont really like.

[Normal]

HP drain : 4~6
Cricle Size : 3~4
Ovarall difficult : 4~6
Approach Rate : 4~6
Slider velocity : 1.00~1.20
Distance Snap : 0.90~1.20

I think that it is standard...
and I think that Circle Size is 3 than 4
because Circle Size 3 is be good-looking than size 4 in normal.

Normal

00:10:097 (4,1) - too close fixed
00:58:142 (1)-01:01:751 (4) - don't you think that here is hard? modify more easy... ok,I will try to doing
01:05:135 (x) - add add
01:06:939 (x) - add add

----------------------------k
and...
01:38:969 - odds sound...get better mp3 file changed

thank you for see my poor mod
Thanks for mod:D
-Nothing-To-Do-Here-
Hello from E.E's modding queue!
[Hard]
00:23:573 (1,2,3) - something like this?Im think this sound better.
00:40:265 (1) - ?
00:46:580 (11) - add circle after this
01:04:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ?
01:43:423 (3) - sound better
Also start second Kiai time here 01:09:588 (1) -
Good luck!
Topic Starter
1491625364981

EvilElvis wrote:

Hello from E.E's modding queue!
[Hard]
00:23:573 (1,2,3) - something like this?Im think this sound better. I don't like this,sorry :(
00:40:265 (1) - ? added
00:46:580 (11) - add circle after this dislike this either :(
01:04:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ? added
01:43:423 (3) - sound better fixed
Also start second Kiai time here 01:09:588 (1) - changed
Good luck!
thank!

Thanks for modding!! :)
hibarirailwayz
from modding queues~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]
You should give kudosu EviElvis.
offset -8

[Normal]
00:27:851 (2) - bad visual. separate circle and slider.
01:17:249 (1) - ^
01:23:114 (2) - ^
01:28:528 (1) - finish=01:28:979
01:38:678 (1) - finish=01:43:641

[Hard]
00:06:656 - want note. I suggest you put slider Start=00:06:431, Finish=00:06:656
00:13:649 - add note and ↓
00:13:649 (1) - Start=00:13:761
00:19:287 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I like!
00:31:693 (1) - remove NC
01:09:588 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I like! but, lools like Insnae.

good luck!
Topic Starter
1491625364981

hibarirailwayz wrote:

from modding queues~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]
You should give kudosu EviElvis. sorry,I really forget it :(
offset -8 changed

[Normal]
00:27:851 (2) - bad visual. separate circle and slider.fixed
01:17:249 (1) - ^ fixed
01:23:114 (2) - ^fixed
01:28:528 (1) - finish=01:28:979 I want to finish on 01:29:206 -
01:38:678 (1) - finish=01:43:641 fixed

[Hard]
00:06:656 - want note. I suggest you put slider Start=00:06:431, Finish=00:06:656 added
00:13:649 - add note and ↓
00:13:649 (1) - Start=00:13:761 added
00:19:287 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I like! Thank!
00:31:693 (1) - remove NC fixed
01:09:588 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I like! but, lools like Insnae. Thanks!

good luck!
Thanks for modding!! :)
ProjectNymph
Normal
00:06:202 (4,5) Spacing - Should be a little bit closer (timing/spacing of 1,2,3,4,5 is the same)
00:50:413 (2,3) Placing - Could be distracting for new players (normal diff)

Hard
00:24:924 (4,5,6,7) Spacing - Too close (look at (8,9,10) same spacing but faster clicking)

Keep on going!
Topic Starter
1491625364981

_CryThis_ wrote:

Normal
00:06:202 (4,5) Spacing - Should be a little bit closer (timing/spacing of 1,2,3,4,5 is the same) fixed
00:50:413 (2,3) Placing - Could be distracting for new players (normal diff) fixed

Hard
00:24:924 (4,5,6,7) Spacing - Too close (look at (8,9,10) same spacing but faster clicking) fixed

Keep on going!
Thanks for modding :)
TTTTTTTTTTTT
背景图片可以换个清晰度更高的其实可以。。。

From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

-把source中的ball改成Ball

-不加些tags么?

[Normal]

00:04:624 - 这个kiai线是unsnapped的
00:04:624 - 价格finish在这里,打起来会感觉更好
00:06:428 - 这里不价格whistle么?和后面那个统一,而且这么加感觉不错的ww
00:15:902 - 这个么,NC是不必要的
00:28:082 - 这个跟人声的话,结束在红线上是最合适的了,现在蓝线上感觉有些延迟..
00:42:518 - 和后面的对称不更好么?
00:51:541 - 作为最低难度嘛,这个虽然是合乎一切标准的,不过有些快,在这个难度中,建议换成circle或slider了...
00:55:827 - 这里其实没必要降低note的密度了,继续跟vocal我觉得更不错呢,在这俩circle后面都加一个1/2的slider,这是我的建议,现在的状况还不错的ww
00:57:631 - 这串有些难了,把00:57:857后面这三个circle改成一个从00:57:857到00:58:308的slider是不错的方式..
01:07:781 - 结束在01:09:135,给予更多反应的时间更适合这个难度
01:09:586 - unsnapped kiai timing
01:09:586 - 我的建议是加一个finish
01:22:218 - 这里缺whistle了

[Hard]


00:04:624 - 这个kiai线unsnapped
00:04:624 - finish?
00:06:992 - 右移一格,间距目前看着有些怪
00:07:894 - ^
00:12:744 - 这两个连续的clap 听起来效果并不怎么好,去掉前面的其实会好些
00:13:759 - finish和whistle放一起听起来很刺耳的
00:18:496 - 这串连点音量降到40% 因为声量太大这里显得
00:22:669 - finish加上,去掉clap
00:22:669 - green timing是unsnapped
00:25:827 - (8)(9)(10)(11)这4个右移2格,之前的距离有问题
00:28:646 - 没重叠好
00:32:255 - ^
00:34:849 - (2)(3)下移一格
00:46:127 - 加一个NC
01:09:586 - unsnapped kiai timing
01:09:586 - 我的建议是加一个finish
01:19:285 - (6)(7)(8)上移一格
01:24:022 - (1)没snap,而且要右移2格

Good luck!
Topic Starter
1491625364981

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

背景图片可以换个清晰度更高的其实可以。。。 我會再找找的!

From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

-把source中的ball改成Ball 已修正

-不加些tags么? 不是很懂Tag是做甚麼的 我會再去問問

[Normal] 都已修正 除了倒數第四項

00:04:624 - 这个kiai线是unsnapped的
00:04:624 - 价格finish在这里,打起来会感觉更好
00:06:428 - 这里不价格whistle么?和后面那个统一,而且这么加感觉不错的ww
00:15:902 - 这个么,NC是不必要的
00:28:082 - 这个跟人声的话,结束在红线上是最合适的了,现在蓝线上感觉有些延迟..
00:42:518 - 和后面的对称不更好么?
00:51:541 - 作为最低难度嘛,这个虽然是合乎一切标准的,不过有些快,在这个难度中,建议换成circle或slider了...
00:55:827 - 这里其实没必要降低note的密度了,继续跟vocal我觉得更不错呢,在这俩circle后面都加一个1/2的slider,这是我的建议,现在的状况还不错的ww
00:57:631 - 这串有些难了,把00:57:857后面这三个circle改成一个从00:57:857到00:58:308的slider是不错的方式..
01:07:781 - 结束在01:09:135,给予更多反应的时间更适合这个难度 不過這樣對節奏有一點不太合呢 抱歉了OAO
01:09:586 - unsnapped kiai timing
01:09:586 - 我的建议是加一个finish
01:22:218 - 这里缺whistle了

[Hard] 以全部修正 有小部分更動


00:04:624 - 这个kiai线unsnapped
00:04:624 - finish?
00:06:992 - 右移一格,间距目前看着有些怪
00:07:894 - ^
00:12:744 - 这两个连续的clap 听起来效果并不怎么好,去掉前面的其实会好些 我去掉後面的@.@
00:13:759 - finish和whistle放一起听起来很刺耳的
00:18:496 - 这串连点音量降到40% 因为声量太大这里显得
00:22:669 - finish加上,去掉clap
00:22:669 - green timing是unsnapped
00:25:827 - (8)(9)(10)(11)这4个右移2格,之前的距离有问题
00:28:646 - 没重叠好
00:32:255 - ^
00:34:849 - (2)(3)下移一格
00:46:127 - 加一个NC
01:09:586 - unsnapped kiai timing
01:09:586 - 我的建议是加一个finish
01:19:285 - (6)(7)(8)上移一格
01:24:022 - (1)没snap,而且要右移2格

Good luck!
感謝你得mod :)
Arnold0
From Let me TRY to mod your maps
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.

[General]
You have two times the red combo color, you should change or delete one

[Normal]
00:30:563 (1) - Finish this slider at 00:30:789 -
00:31:014 - New slider which end at 00:31:240 -
01:01:466 (1) - end at 01:01:804 - (1/4Beat snap dividor needed) - without reverse arrow
01:02:142 - Add note

[Hard]
This diff should be called insane I think, it's too hard for an hard diff.
00:28:647 (2) - Remove note
00:29:775 (4) - Remove note
00:32:256 (6) - Remove note
00:33:609 (2) - Remove note
00:33:722 (2) - Remove note
01:02:142 (5) - End at 01:02:368 -
01:02:706 - Add note
01:02:932 - Add note

Nice for your first map
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
1491625364981

Arnold0 wrote:

From Let me TRY to mod your maps
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.

[General]
You have two times the red combo color, you should change or delete one sorry,I can't find another red. so I misunderstand what you say :(

[Normal]
00:30:563 (1) - Finish this slider at 00:30:789 - It wil be harder, sorry :?
00:31:014 - New slider which end at 00:31:240 - ^
01:01:466 (1) - end at 01:01:804 - (1/4Beat snap dividor needed) - without reverse arrow fixed
01:02:142 - Add note ^

[Hard]
This diff should be called insane I think, it's too hard for an hard diff
00:28:647 (2) - Remove noteremoved
00:29:775 (4) - Remove note^
00:32:256 (6) - Remove note[color=#FF0000^][/color]
00:33:609 (2) - Remove note^
00:33:722 (2) - Remove note^
01:02:142 (5) - End at 01:02:368 - ]It wil be harder,and you maybe miss 01:03:045 - , sorry :(
01:02:706 - Add note^
01:02:932 - Add note^

Nice for your first map Thank you!
Good luck :)
Thank for your mod! :)
Aunxfb
Hi,From m4m

Normal
---------
00:02:819 (4) - 把它删掉吧,对我来说有点多余 :P
00:03:947 (3) - 把它拉长些,再把它缩短成三个圈>http://puu.sh/LyGe
00:04:624 - 如果跟了上一个,这里加个圈吧
00:19:060 - 这对我来说也是多余了,把它删掉,把spinner拉前到这里,再把spinner弄长些.
00:22:669 - spinner 加个"finish"
00:33:496 (4) - 加个whistle吧
00:34:172 (1,2,3) - 这也好像怪怪的,建议改去http://puu.sh/Lzwa
00:38:458 - 把后面的spinner拉过来吧
00:40:037 - 加个circle 或者把spinner拉长到这
00:45:225 (3,4,5) - timing好像不对,建议改去:http://puu.sh/Lzj2
00:47:368 - 2号好像这个timing比较适合
00:49:060 (1) - slider改短至00:49:736 -
00:49:962 - 加个 circle

Hard
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天啊!这难度还叫[Hard] 吗?...
这难度的Map我 mod 不了,抱歉了!><
不过我玩的时候还蛮顺畅的 :) ,这map还不错,不过难度还是改去[Insane]吧 ><


新手modder,mod不好不要见怪 :oops:
Topic Starter
1491625364981

Aunxfb wrote:

Hi,From m4m

Normal
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00:02:819 (4) - 把它删掉吧,对我来说有点多余 :P 刪了會怪怪的
00:03:947 (3) - 把它拉长些,再把它缩短成三个圈>http://puu.sh/LyGe 不太合節奏
00:04:624 - 如果跟了上一个,这里加个圈吧 ^
00:19:060 - 这对我来说也是多余了,把它删掉,把spinner拉前到这里,再把spinner弄长些. 已修正
00:22:669 - spinner 加个"finish" 已加入
00:33:496 (4) - 加个whistle吧 有些刺耳
00:34:172 (1,2,3) - 这也好像怪怪的,建议改去http://puu.sh/Lzwa 已修正
00:38:458 - 把后面的spinner拉过来吧 這裡跟人聲似乎合適些
00:40:037 - 加个circle 或者把spinner拉长到这 ^
00:45:225 (3,4,5) - timing好像不对,建议改去:http://puu.sh/Lzj2 已修正
00:47:368 - 2号好像这个timing比较适合 我聽不適合@.@
00:49:060 (1) - slider改短至00:49:736 - 已修正
00:49:962 - 加个 circle ^

Hard
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天啊!这难度还叫[Hard] 吗?...
这难度的Map我 mod 不了,抱歉了!><
不过我玩的时候还蛮顺畅的 :) ,这map还不错,不过难度还是改去[Insane]吧 >< 我會考慮的>.<


新手modder,mod不好不要见怪 :oops:
感謝你得MOD!! :)
Sure
[General]
You have to make Easy diff that has under 3 stars difficulty level. Or this mapset is unrankable.


[Hard]
There are many unsnapped notes. You can check them by AiMod(Ctrl+Shift+A).
You can snap them by Timing - Resnap All Notes.

00:24:924 (4) - Add NC or adjust spacing. It's too close to previous note. I suggest fixing spacing like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/384173
00:29:887 (4) - Stack under end of previous slider?
00:31:691 (5) - x:440 y:304
00:40:714 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/384180
01:20:187 (3) - Add clap to end
01:25:827 (7) - NC

This diff is too overmapped.
For an example, 00:41:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11). Here are not any beats in the music for streams.
Also other parts have many triple circles that doesn't fit music.
Please follow the music correctly, which is the best way.


[Normal]
00:35:977 (3) - Spacing. This position would work well. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/384186
00:45:225 (3,4,5) - Its rhythm is a bit hard to read. You'd better bind them to a slider.
01:01:466 (1,2) - ^
01:07:781 (1) - Shorten its length to 01:09:135. Because the next note comes too soon after spinner.
01:23:120 (2) - Stack under the end of previous slider correctly.
01:28:082 (4) - NC instead of next note
01:34:398 (4) - Hidden slider track is unrankable.
01:38:684 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).


Not bad stuff for first map. Good luck!
Beige
Hello~ I'm late.. sorry..

[General]

You must make more diff

[Normal]

00:03:947 (3) - : It is Normal diff this build is not good.

00:35:977 (3) - : this overlap is not good

00:41:390 (3) - : It is Normal diff so many turns

01:01:466 (1,2,3) - : It is Normal diff, these overlap are not good

01:06:654 (2,1) - : so far

01:23:120 (2) - : you must do stuck

01:38:458 (3,1) - : so far

[Hard]


00:03:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - : Same distance spacing plz

00:06:878 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - : rhythm is weird

00:13:194 (4,5,6,7,8) - : these build are not good

00:26:955 (1,2,3,4,5) - : these overlap are not good

00:30:790 (1,2,3,4,5) - : ^

00:41:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - : Same distance spacing plz

00:55:828 (5) - : NC

That's all good luck
Topic Starter
1491625364981

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
You have to make Easy diff that has under 3 stars difficulty level. Or this mapset is unrankable.


[Hard]
There are many unsnapped notes. You can check them by AiMod(Ctrl+Shift+A).
You can snap them by Timing - Resnap All Notes. fixed

00:24:924 (4) - Add NC or adjust spacing. It's too close to previous note. I suggest fixing spacing like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/384173fixed
00:29:887 (4) - Stack under end of previous slider? fixed
00:31:691 (5) - x:440 y:304 fixed
00:40:714 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/384180 fixed
01:20:187 (3) - Add clap to end fixed
01:25:827 (7) - NC fixed

This diff is too overmapped.
For an example, 00:41:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11). Here are not any beats in the music for streams.
Also other parts have many triple circles that doesn't fit music.
Please follow the music correctly, which is the best way. I got it! I will check it again.


[Normal]
00:35:977 (3) - Spacing. This position would work well. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/384186 fixed
00:45:225 (3,4,5) - Its rhythm is a bit hard to read. You'd better bind them to a slider. fixed
01:01:466 (1,2) - ^ fixed
01:07:781 (1) - Shorten its length to 01:09:135. Because the next note comes too soon after spinner. fixed
01:23:120 (2) - Stack under the end of previous slider correctly. fixed
01:28:082 (4) - NC instead of next note fixed
01:34:398 (4) - Hidden slider track is unrankable. fixed
01:38:684 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).fixed


Not bad stuff for first map. Good luck!
Thank for mod!! :)
Topic Starter
1491625364981

W h i t e wrote:

Hello~ I'm late.. sorry.. That's ok :)

[General]

You must make more diff

[Normal]

00:03:947 (3) - : It is Normal diff this build is not good.sorry

00:35:977 (3) - : this overlap is not good fixed

00:41:390 (3) - : It is Normal diff so many turns ??

01:01:466 (1,2,3) - : It is Normal diff, these overlap are not good fixed

01:06:654 (2,1) - : so far

01:23:120 (2) - : you must do stuck fixed

01:38:458 (3,1) - : so far

[Hard]


00:03:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - : Same distance spacing plz fixed

00:06:878 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - : rhythm is weird fixed

00:13:194 (4,5,6,7,8) - : these build are not good fixed

00:26:955 (1,2,3,4,5) - : these overlap are not goodsorry

00:30:790 (1,2,3,4,5) - : ^ sorry

00:41:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - : Same distance spacing plz I remove it

00:55:828 (5) - : NC
fixed

That's all good luck
Thank for mod!! :)
Walaaa
Hi~哇啦啦來也

[Easy]
有些slider的反彈次數過多 我遇過有MAT不太喜歡這樣
00:28:759~00:29:210 - add slider
00:32:142 - back to 00:31:917
00:32:142~00:32:593 - add slider
00:44:999(1,2,3) - 換成反彈2次的slider?
另外有幾個note 對新手有點難以判斷
00:35:977(3)、00:55:827(3)、00:56:729(4)

[Normal]
circle size希望改回3,畢竟spacing1.1x讓新手夠辛苦了

[Hard]
哇這hard有點難=_=
01:08:909(1,2,3) - 三連打增加成五連打如何? ;)
Topic Starter
1491625364981

Walaaa wrote:

Hi~哇啦啦來也

[Easy]
有些slider的反彈次數過多 我遇過有MAT不太喜歡這樣 遇到再說(誤
00:28:759~00:29:210 - add slider 不接受 沒有比較好得感覺
00:32:142 - back to 00:31:917 fixed
00:32:142~00:32:593 - add slider add
00:44:999(1,2,3) - 換成反彈2次的slider? 換成兩個slider
另外有幾個note 對新手有點難以判斷
00:35:977(3)、00:55:827(3)、00:56:729(4) 第一個刪除 二三刪不得 也不好處理

[Normal]
circle size希望改回3,畢竟spacing1.1x讓新手夠辛苦了 改了

[Hard]
哇這hard有點難=_=
01:08:909(1,2,3) - 三連打增加成五連打如何? ;)
不好 會跟不上下一個slider

感謝MOD :)
Deni
From ★ ~ dubbadeni ' s Beginnner Modding Queue ~ ★
I'm a beginner, don't expect too much! ;)
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Easy

00:02:819 (1) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for Easy.
00:03:721 (1) - That Spinner is too short for Easy! (AiMod)
00:05:075 (1) - This circle is too close after this spinner.(AiMod)
00:06:428 (3) - Same as 00:02:819 (1)
00:10:037 (4) - New Combo
00:13:195 (1) - That Spinner is too short for Easy! (AiMod)
00:14:999 (1) - This circle is too close after this spinner (AiMod)
00:16:804 (4) - New Combo
00:18:157 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:29:436 (3,4) - Stacks can be too hard for beginner!
00:30:563 (1) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for Easy.
00:36:428 (1) - This slider doesn't fit. Map something normal and not 3000 reverse arrows :P
00:40:037 (3) - New Combo
00:42:969 (6) - New Combo
01:00:563 (3) - Add a curve to this slider.
01:01:917 (4,5) - No Stacks in Easy + Maybe change this slider into something else.
01:09:586 (1) - Too short after Spinner (AiMod)
01:11:842 (4) - New Combo
01:17:255 (1) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for Easy.
01:19:962 (3) - New Combo
01:22:218 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:29:436 (4) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for Easy.
01:36:654 (5) - New Combo

Normal

00:03:721 (2) - Delete this circle
00:03:947 (3) - Move this to 00:03:721 .
00:26:954 (1) - Those Sliders don't look that pretty :? Maybe only add 3 points. Begin, Curve in the Middle, End.
00:28:082 (3) - ^
00:56:729 (3) - Move this circle to x:120 , y:48
00:03:721 (2,3) - Same as the 2 thing I coloured green.
Topic Starter
1491625364981

dubbadeni wrote:

From ★ ~ dubbadeni ' s Beginnner Modding Queue ~ ★
I'm a beginner, don't expect too much! ;)
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Easy OK! I almost fixed! Expect spinner.Because I turn it with150(speed) can be 300 .so I think it is fine :)

00:02:819 (1) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for Easy.
00:03:721 (1) - That Spinner is too short for Easy! (AiMod)
00:05:075 (1) - This circle is too close after this spinner.(AiMod)
00:06:428 (3) - Same as 00:02:819 (1)
00:10:037 (4) - New Combo
00:13:195 (1) - That Spinner is too short for Easy! (AiMod)
00:14:999 (1) - This circle is too close after this spinner (AiMod)
00:16:804 (4) - New Combo
00:18:157 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:29:436 (3,4) - Stacks can be too hard for beginner!
00:30:563 (1) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for Easy.
00:36:428 (1) - This slider doesn't fit. Map something normal and not 3000 reverse arrows :P
00:40:037 (3) - New Combo
00:42:969 (6) - New Combo
01:00:563 (3) - Add a curve to this slider.
01:01:917 (4,5) - No Stacks in Easy + Maybe change this slider into something else.
01:09:586 (1) - Too short after Spinner (AiMod)
01:11:842 (4) - New Combo
01:17:255 (1) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for Easy.
01:19:962 (3) - New Combo
01:22:218 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:29:436 (4) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for Easy.
01:36:654 (5) - New Combo

Normal all fixed.But I understand last one.Maybe it is important,so say twice?

00:03:721 (2) - Delete this circle
00:03:947 (3) - Move this to 00:03:721 .
00:26:954 (1) - Those Sliders don't look that pretty :? Maybe only add 3 points. Begin, Curve in the Middle, End.
00:28:082 (3) - ^
00:56:729 (3) - Move this circle to x:120 , y:48
00:03:721 (2,3) - Same as the 2 thing I coloured green.
^this

good mod and Thank for mod!!
Poggo
Hi from my mod Q ^^

• AudioLeadIn: 1996 better put 2000 on all diffs
• offset 993
• slider tick rate 2 on all diffs

Hard

00:13:173 - add whistle on all slider
00:14:526 - remove whistle
00:24:902 - remove NC and add nc on 00:25:805
00:25:579 - remove whistle
00:31:669(5,6) - stack better
00:32:571 - add note here
00:33:925 -^
00:38:662 - make this slider double
00:44:752 - add note
00:48:812 - ^
00:51:519 - add NC
00:53:774 - add note
01:03:699 - ^
01:06:632(1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421563
01:14:977(6) - lift it http://puu.sh/11HaZ
01:22:196(6) - add whistle on all slider
01:31:218 - add note
01:33:023 - add whistle on all slider and remove NC
01:33:925 - remove NC

Normal

• Distance spacing should be 0.8 on normal diffs~

00:02:368(1,3) - overlap
00:39:811 - end spinner here
00:41:390(3) - this slider have many repeats it's not playable~ http://puu.sh/11Hlr better try this, it sounds better and more playable
00:42:518(1,2) - stack better
00:45:225(3,1) - overlap
00:51:541 - this spinner better replace on slider with nc http://puu.sh/11Hpy
00:58:533 - remove this note. not sound here
01:28:533(2,3) - stack better
01:32:593(2,3) - ^

Easy

Slider velocity should be 1.0-1.2 correct it~

00:05:075 -remove this note~ very close to spinner, for beginners it will be difficalt
00:14:999 - ^
00:32:142(5) - NC
00:57:631 - make this slider shorter and put on white tick (end on big white tick) and add note on 00:57:405
01:02:368(5) - NC
01:08:684 - end spinner here, very close to spinner
01:11:842 - remove NC
01:33:045(3) - add whistle on all slider

This is just basic things that you should fix~ need MOREEEEE work but good luck ^^
Topic Starter
1491625364981

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my mod Q ^^

• AudioLeadIn: 1996 better put 2000 on all diffs not change
• offset 993 not change
• slider tick rate 2 on all diffs fixed

Hard

00:13:173 - add whistle on all slider fixed
00:14:526 - remove whistle fixed
00:24:902 - remove NC and add nc on 00:25:805 fixed
00:25:579 - remove whistle fixed
00:31:669(5,6) - stack better fixed
00:32:571 - add note here fixed
00:33:925 -^ fixed
00:38:662 - make this slider double fixed
00:44:752 - add note fixed
00:48:812 - ^ not changed
00:51:519 - add NC fixed
00:53:774 - add note mot changed
01:03:699 - ^ ^
01:06:632(1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421563 fixed
01:14:977(6) - lift it http://puu.sh/11HaZ fixed
01:22:196(6) - add whistle on all slider fixed
01:31:218 - add note fixed
01:33:023 - add whistle on all slider and remove NC fixed
01:33:925 - remove NC fixed

Normal

• Distance spacing should be 0.8 on normal diffs~not changed

00:02:368(1,3) - overlap I not got it
00:39:811 - end spinner here mot fixed
00:41:390(3) - this slider have many repeats it's not playable~ http://puu.sh/11Hlr better try this, it sounds better and more playable
00:42:518(1,2) - stack better fixed
00:45:225(3,1) - overlap I mis understand
00:51:541 - this spinner better replace on slider with nc http://puu.sh/11Hpy fixed
00:58:533 - remove this note. not sound here not fixed
01:28:533(2,3) - stack better fixed
01:32:593(2,3) - ^ ^

Easy

Slider velocity should be 1.0-1.2 correct it~ all fixed expect 1 2 6

00:05:075 -remove this note~ very close to spinner, for beginners it will be difficalt
00:14:999 - ^
00:32:142(5) - NC
00:57:631 - make this slider shorter and put on white tick (end on big white tick) and add note on 00:57:405
01:02:368(5) - NC
01:08:684 - end spinner here, very close to spinner
01:11:842 - remove NC
01:33:045(3) - add whistle on all slider

This is just basic things that you should fix~ need MOREEEEE work but good luck ^^
I think that mean I should get more mod or.....remap?(I not hope so. I will do it if remap is necessary. :(

Thank for your mod!!
Flower
Hi~ mod from the queue~

[Easy]
00:03:721 (5) - Slider end add whistle
00:05:075 (1) - Add whistle
00:08:233 (1,2) - ^
00:13:195 (1) - Does not fit the groove. Suggest replace with 2 one-beat long sliders.
00:29:436 (3) - Slider begin add clap
00:32:142 (1) - Add clap
00:33:496 (4) - Remove clap
00:33:947 (1) - Slider begin add clap
00:34:849 (2) - Slider begin add clap, slider end remove clap
00:36:202 (3) - Slider end add clap
00:37:105 (4) - ^
00:38:458 (6) - Slider begin add clap
00:42:969 (1) - Add clap
00:44:323 (3) - Remove clap. Rearrange position, avoid stacking
00:44:774 (4) - Slider begin add clap
01:02:368 (1) - Slider begin add whistle and finish, slider body add whistle
01:04:172 (2) - ^
01:09:586 (1,2) - Add whistle
01:13:195 (1,2) - ^
01:24:022 (1,2) - ^, but remove slider body whistle

[Normal]
Sound suggestion is same to Easy.
However, the diff seems to be a bit messy. Increase SV and avoid overlapping like 00:11:390 (4,5,1,2,3)
Besides, you should choose follow the vocal or the drum. Some notes like 00:28:082 (3) are weird.

[Hard]
00:19:285 (1) - Remove NC. Put a bit farther.
00:19:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Do you think this jump look good?
00:19:962 (4,1,4,1,4,1) - NC is wrong. Select them and press Q.
00:25:939 (6) - Move to 00:25:714
00:47:481 (2,3,4) - DS is no good.
01:06:654 (1,2,3,4,5) - The jump is weird. Create polygon circles (Ctrl+Shift+D) and select comfortable scale. Then rearrange like a star.
Neverend Story
Hi, 1491625364981.
Mod ths beatmap by your request.

[General]
- Inconsistency in Kiai Times at Normal. Please change to this inherited section.
00:22:664 move to 00:22:669
- Unsnapped inherited sections at all difficulty. Please change to this inherited section.
01:38:454 snap to 01:38:458
- I think combo colour 3 and 4 looks same colour. Remove combo colour 3 or 4.
- Unchecked Letterbox during breaks.

[Easy]
- I think Easy and Normal have same slider velocity is not good. How about change slider velocity at this difficulty?

[Normal]
- Unsnapped inherited sections at this difficulty. Please change to this inherited section.
00:22:664 - snap to 00:22:669
00:51:541 (5) - New Combo
00:52:894 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:29:436 (3) - New Combo
01:38:684 (1) - Unsnapped spinner end

[Hard]
- I think Approach Rate 8 is so fast at this song. Approach Rate - 1.

Good luck :D
Topic Starter
1491625364981

Flower wrote:

Hi~ mod from the queue~

[Easy]
00:03:721 (5) - Slider end add whistle
00:05:075 (1) - Add whistle
00:08:233 (1,2) - ^
00:13:195 (1) - Does not fit the groove. Suggest replace with 2 one-beat long sliders.
00:29:436 (3) - Slider begin add clap
00:32:142 (1) - Add clap
00:33:496 (4) - Remove clap
00:33:947 (1) - Slider begin add clap
00:34:849 (2) - Slider begin add clap, slider end remove clap
00:36:202 (3) - Slider end add clap
00:37:105 (4) - ^
00:38:458 (6) - Slider begin add clap
00:42:969 (1) - Add clap
00:44:323 (3) - Remove clap. Rearrange position, avoid stacking
00:44:774 (4) - Slider begin add clap
01:02:368 (1) - Slider begin add whistle and finish, slider body add whistle
01:04:172 (2) - ^
01:09:586 (1,2) - Add whistle
01:13:195 (1,2) - ^
01:24:022 (1,2) - ^, but remove slider body whistle
almost fixed
[Normal]
Sound suggestion is same to Easy.
However, the diff seems to be a bit messy. Increase SV and avoid overlapping like 00:11:390 (4,5,1,2,3)
Besides, you should choose follow the vocal or the drum. Some notes like 00:28:082 (3) are weird.
no fixed
[Hard]
00:19:285 (1) - Remove NC. Put a bit farther.
00:19:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Do you think this jump look good?
00:19:962 (4,1,4,1,4,1) - NC is wrong. Select them and press Q.
00:25:939 (6) - Move to 00:25:714
00:47:481 (2,3,4) - DS is no good.
01:06:654 (1,2,3,4,5) - The jump is weird. Create polygon circles (Ctrl+Shift+D) and select comfortable scale. Then rearrange like a star.
some fixed
Thanks for mod!!
Topic Starter
1491625364981

Neverend Story wrote:

Hi, 1491625364981.
Mod ths beatmap by your request.

[General] fixed
- Inconsistency in Kiai Times at Normal. Please change to this inherited section.
00:22:664 move to 00:22:669
- Unsnapped inherited sections at all difficulty. Please change to this inherited section.
01:38:454 snap to 01:38:458
- I think combo colour 3 and 4 looks same colour. Remove combo colour 3 or 4.
- Unchecked Letterbox during breaks. I not think so.red and orange is diffence,right?

[Easy] no fixed
- I think Easy and Normal have same slider velocity is not good. How about change slider velocity at this difficulty?

[Normal] some fixed
- Unsnapped inherited sections at this difficulty. Please change to this inherited section.
00:22:664 - snap to 00:22:669
00:51:541 (5) - New Combo
00:52:894 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:29:436 (3) - New Combo
01:38:684 (1) - Unsnapped spinner end

[Hard] I think 8 is fitter than 8
- I think Approach Rate 8 is so fast at this song. Approach Rate - 1.

Good luck :D
Thanks for mod!!
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