The MP3 you have is at 320 kbps. I re-encoded it at 192 kbps.

MP3 Here

EDIT: Talked about cutting the song and video file length, but he (CDFA) came to the conclusion that he would map the rest of the song in time.

Random mod


[Normal]
00:18:608 (1) - make this slider not so far down?
00:35:927 (1) - ^
00:45:824 (1) - ^

[Hard]
HP + 1
00:17:371 (4) - make symmetrical to 00:18:608 (1) - ?
00:39:020 (2) - make symmetrical to 00:38:402 (1) - ?
01:21:082 (2) - curve kinda like 01:20:463 (1) - ?
02:12:113 (3) - move out from under 2 to keep consistency with prev. combo
01:13:041 (1) - not so far down?
01:22:938 (1,2) - ^
01:45:102 (8) - NC on previous note instead

[Nyan~]
OD +1/2
00:20:876 (11,12) - what are these mapped to?
00:43:247 (7) - NC on previous note instead
01:17:371 (7) - too long
02:21:907 (6) - seems unnecessary

Sorry about short mod D:

Hello Mod From My Queue




Hope This Will Help You
Good Luck ~

Normal
When the notes stack over each other (i.e. 00:50:15 - ) it feels a little odd to me.
Not a big problem, just opinion.
I can't really give advice for the other difficulties because I'm not that good yet ._.

Otherwise, it's a really great beatmap and I hope it gets ranked soon :3
First mod, hope it helped

i should look at these sometime lol

Yes you should.

god I, like this.

Feel free to contact me for a mod if you are done with the other ones.

Konei wrote:

god I, like this.

Feel free to contact me for a mod if you are done with the other ones.

I finished the other ones lol

Err ok lol, just wanted to make sure <~<


[General]

1. Didn't you change the mp3? However, if I'm not wrong it's still unrankable o.o
   
   
2. Timing points (and especially KIAI points) are all unsnapped.
   
   
3. Use a KIAI flash for this spot? Chorus feels like restarting here.
   
   
4. Would have been cool if you had mapped the end aswell but whatever.
   
   
5. SV gap from Normal to Hard is kinda harsh, you see; 1,00 -> 1,80. I'd like it if Hard's SV was lower.

[Normal]

1. 00:30:979 (1,3) - Looks a bit untidy, actually you could recreate 1 to stack it's end with 3's end.
2. 01:27:886 (5) - Whew, probably not intentional but the whole Slider got that finish.
3. 01:36:546 (4) - ^
4. 03:01:907 (1,3) - Actually I think, those two could be neater if you see what I mean.
   
   SPOILER

   [img]03:01:907[/img]
5. Yooo, this is pretty neat.

[Hard]

1. 00:30:979 (1) - I think you can redo a smoother shape with one wavepoint, right?
2. 00:46:443 (1) - I don't see the purpose of this NC; music doesn't really change and this is in the middle of the vocals.
3. 01:19:536 (2,3) - Space them out to prevent that overlap? Looks rather ugly in my opinion.
4. 01:37:164 (5,6) - ^Same
5. 01:53:246 (3,4) - ^Same
6. 02:11:185 (1) - Whistle on the Sliderbody sounds weird, aaand I don't think you did that on purpose, right?
7. 02:16:133 (1) - Same^
8. 02:19:226 (1) - Remove NC here and start it on the next note? Follows the beat much better since the next Slider plays on the downbeat.
9. 03:00:566 (5,6,7,8) - Uhmm, space those out again?
10. 03:08:092 (1,4,5) - Allign this pattern? Looks a lot more tidy :3
11. Pretty cool, but the SV gap irks me huee~

[Nyan~]

1. 00:17:680 (6) - You could actually move this a bit to stack it with 1's start.
2. 00:26:030 (1) - Looks and plays strange to break the pattern all of the sudden, try to keep the same pattern as before?
3. 00:49:226 (4) - Wuuut, what is the purpose of this wry shape? :< You could do a much better one with one wavepoint
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:25:412 (1) - Move this a bit back to prevent them from touching? Also you can improve the blanket a bit.
5. 01:33:453 (3) - Uhmm, you could redo this shape? It looks a bit odd ;__;
6. 01:34:072 (4) - If you do above, copy paste it here of course.
7. 01:56:030 (4) - Humm, something to blanket it would actually make this cooler in my opinion, see if you like the suggestion below :3
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 02:12:422 (1) - Remove whistle on the Sliderbody? Sounds still weird to me :<
9. 02:13:659 (4) - ^
10. 02:16:133 (4) - ^
11. 02:26:649 (1) - Move the start point a bit down? I think the shape is not tooootally symmetrical.
12. 02:35:927 (1,2,3) - Quite nazi, but make the spacing between those 3 consistent.
13. 02:47:371 (2) - Ughh, I think you can the that the blanket can be improved quite a lot.
14. 03:05:927 (4) - Move it a bit farther away to have the same spacing from 3 as 2.
15. 03:06:855 (1,2,3,4) - Make spacing between those 4 consistent
16. Pretty cool, I enjoyed it :3

Yep, that's it for now.

Nyaa~

[general]
none really

[normal]
00:33:453 (5) - new combo
01:00:670 - why not add a finish at the end of the slider?
01:22:938 (5) - NC
02:00:051 - add a finish again
02:54:175 (4) - make this green as well as 02:56:649 (8) - to represent gumi's color, plus i think it adds a nice touch to the symmetry
03:00:979 (3) - NC
03:11:804 - finish again

[hard]
do finishes to spinners
02:12:113 (3) - i found this hit circle cruel, try moving it somewhere else or try making it more noticeable
02:15:824 (3) - ^
02:32:010 - try putting a kiai here and end it short here 02:32:113 -
02:46:752 (3) - again with the hitcircle

[nyan~]
spinner finishes
00:20:670 (9) - NC
01:49:536 (3) - ^
02:36:855 (4) - ^
02:46:752 (5) - ^

done
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS SONG!
i used to listen to this song on repeat on youtube XD .
If it's ok with you, i think i'll try to make a easy mode on this if i have enough freetime

Ima shoot you a star too just because this is one of my favorite vocaloid songs.
So ok if i make an easy diff or no?

If you want to, go for it :3~. Just be aware that I hold the right to deny it if it isn't that good ouo

yep. i know. ill try to make mine at least DECENT.
if you dont like it then you can throw it away,change it yourself, have it for dinner. XD
i don't care its your map now XD

p.s. you DO realize that my user is snlrocks, not snlrules right?
XDXD nyan~

From modding queue
(>‘o’)> Good map I hope it gets ranked!

Now mod my pending map!

-_- I had the mod, I HAD THE MOD AND PRESSED BACKSPACE NOW EVERYTHING IS GONE!!

I give you Feedback now instead, really can't be bothered to write this again. Tomorrow when I calmed down you'll receive my mod I suppose.

[General]

You passed

[Nyan~]

My thoughts: Really enjoyable diff!
Suggestinos: I think you should work on the slider shapes mostly, also the blankets. The rhythm is acceptable! I'm just a bit worried about the spacing, if you put a slider, and then a circle afterwards, I think you should reduce the DS between them a bit, it'll look much more polished then!

[Hard]

My thoughts: Didn't finish to Play it, but seems okay.
Suggestions: I think you should definetly work on the rhythm and please reduce the SV for at least 0.3 .. It will make everything more readable! Please, also use more stacking, because the way you used DS after a slider, I don't really like it! But I think for a 1/3 song it's very important to get a nice flow with the rhythm, so I think you should overthink these Things again.
[Normal]

My thoughts: I like it!
Suggestions: Not much, this diff is almost perfect, there are a few weird rhythms where I think you should map to the lyrics, but apart that I think it's great!

Don't hesitate asking me~

no kd, this is 1) not helpful and 2) not a real mod, but i feel more satisfied instead of doing nothing now. xD

You're getting kudosu and you're going to like it.

Fixing changes in a bit. should be up soon

CDFA wrote:

You're getting kudosu and you're going to like it.

Fixing changes in a bit. should be up soon

alright, ask me again then~

== Hard Diff ==
Can you move some of the circles between these time points please?
It may not get ranked due to this.
02:48:312 - 02:49:550
Thanks!

Hi CDFA ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VI

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

That's it ^^

Hope to get ranked soon !!!!

In general I dislike Vocaloid but OHHH ♥ Nyan~ I LOVE this song And the video story is amazing too

Att.

OHMIGOSH i finally finished it.

It's so incredibly hard to make an easy.
I'm not even sure if i did good on this song. welp i hope you like it.
Feel free to make any changes you want or trash it all together.

Hi~

[General]
* Wasn't the artist should me "Nem"? I saw that in your video
* Use orange, yellow, and green combo colour? Default one seems boring to me

[Nyan~]
00:33:776 (2) - Unsnapped tail slider

Good job, call me when you're ready

snlrocks wrote:

OHMIGOSH i finally finished it.

It's so incredibly hard to make an easy.
I'm not even sure if i did good on this song. welp i hope you like it.
Feel free to make any changes you want or trash it all together.

snlrock's easy

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 40902
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 8

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TitleUnicode:Ah, It's a Wonderful Cat Life!
Artist:Nem-P
ArtistUnicode:Nem-P
Creator:CDFA
Version:snlrock's easy
Source:
Tags:Megpoid Gumi Kagamine Len
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OverallDifficulty:0
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258,235,115721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
57,235,116340,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,232,116958,2,0,B|255:277|255:277|308:253|308:253|360:280|360:280|360:220,1,200,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,44,118195,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,118814,12,0,120051,0:0:0:0:
44,108,129948,5,10,3:3:0:0:
243,108,130566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,108,131185,2,0,P|487:163|467:179,1,99.9999999999999
381,169,131804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,169,132422,5,0,0:0:0:0:
381,169,133041,1,0,0:0:0:0:
239,310,133659,2,0,L|358:309,2,99.9999999999999
468,108,134896,5,10,3:3:0:0:
269,108,135514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
69,108,136133,2,0,P|25:163|30:169,1,99.9999999999999
131,169,136752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,169,137371,5,0,0:0:0:0:
131,169,137989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,310,138608,2,0,L|386:310,1,99.9999999999999
372,210,139226,2,0,P|380:162|316:134,1,99.9999999999999
243,131,139845,5,0,0:0:0:0:
143,131,140154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,201,140463,1,0,0:0:0:0:
142,271,140773,1,8,0:0:0:0:
241,271,141082,2,0,L|358:271,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,271,141701,2,0,L|441:156,1,99.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,71,142319,5,0,0:0:0:0:
341,71,142628,1,8,0:0:0:0:
270,141,142938,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,70,143247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
99,70,143556,2,0,L|27:171,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,251,144175,2,0,L|129:341,1,99.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,304,144793,6,0,P|272:352|352:288,2,200,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,256,146340,2,0,P|280:280|328:248,3,99.9999999999999,0|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,216,147474,5,8,3:0:0:0:
312,170,147680,1,4,3:0:0:0:
152,218,148092,1,8,3:0:0:0:
200,168,148298,1,4,3:0:0:0:
312,72,148711,5,8,3:0:0:0:
201,73,148917,1,8,3:0:0:0:
256,124,149123,2,8,L|257:246,1,99.9999999999999,0|4,0:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
256,192,149742,12,0,152216,0:0:0:0:
176,192,152835,5,0,0:0:0:0:
375,192,153453,2,8,B|375:144|375:144|327:96|327:96|326:103,1,99.9999999999999
237,107,154072,2,8,L|341:107,1,99.9999999999999
436,107,154690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,248,155309,1,8,0:0:0:0:
294,48,155927,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,48,156237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
122,118,156546,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,256,157164,6,0,L|376:256,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,155,157783,2,0,L|234:155,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,155,158402,1,8,0:0:0:0:
233,84,158711,1,8,0:0:0:0:
303,154,159020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
402,154,159329,6,0,L|402:52,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,254,160257,1,8,0:0:0:0:
201,254,160876,2,0,L|332:254,1,99.9999999999999,8|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
301,154,161494,2,0,P|249:136|209:152,1,99.9999999999999,8|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
138,222,162113,5,8,0:0:0:0:
138,22,162731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
338,22,163350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,92,163659,1,8,0:0:0:0:
337,162,163969,1,8,0:0:0:0:
195,303,164587,5,8,0:0:0:0:
336,161,165206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,161,165824,1,8,0:0:0:0:
65,90,166133,1,8,0:0:0:0:
135,19,166443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,33,167061,6,0,L|252:145,3,99.9999999999999,0|0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,174,168298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,244,168608,1,8,0:0:0:0:
222,244,168917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,169536,12,0,170773,0:0:0:0:
129,84,171082,5,0,0:0:0:0:
228,84,171391,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,84,171701,1,8,0:0:0:0:
427,84,172010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
426,287,172628,5,0,0:0:0:0:
225,287,173247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
125,287,173556,1,8,0:0:0:0:
54,216,173865,1,8,0:0:0:0:
54,15,174484,5,8,0:0:0:0:
254,15,175103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,15,175721,1,8,0:0:0:0:
453,114,176030,1,8,0:0:0:0:
382,184,176340,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,224,176958,6,0,P|96:232|56:136,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
54,342,178195,1,8,0:0:0:0:
85,247,178505,1,8,0:0:0:0:
155,176,178814,1,8,0:0:0:0:
354,176,179432,6,0,P|442:184|482:88,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,104,180670,2,0,P|224:112|200:176,1,99.9999999999999,8|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
120,104,181288,2,0,P|176:112|200:176,1,99.9999999999999,8|4,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
128,216,181907,5,8,0:0:0:0:
269,357,182525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,215,183144,2,8,L|472:120,1,99.9999999999999
394,60,183762,1,8,0:0:0:0:
193,60,184381,5,8,0:0:0:0:
51,201,184999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,342,185618,2,8,L|272:240,1,99.9999999999999
182,192,186237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,336,186855,6,0,P|368:287|368:224,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,181,187474,2,0,P|333:129|389:113,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,43,188092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
195,43,188402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,113,188711,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,212,189020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,189329,12,0,191804,0:0:0:0:

I've taken a look at the diff, and although it's an ok diff, I sadly won't take it since this is so close to ranking ;A;

Sorry about that ;A;.

Just for some tips on mapping, though, since I did take a look at it

If you're making a lower diff for someone, make sure you're consistently checking with the diff above it to make sure that your parts aren't harder than the diff above. That happened a few times with this map (And I know for this map in particular, it was hard, since I mapped Normal as minimally as possible)

Sorry about that ;AAA;

I'll fix Leorda's changes in a bit. I gotta check on the artist name, tho.

EDIT: Source for anybody that's curious

http://vocaloid.wikia.com/wiki/Nem

Will make changes.

Yep thats fine. i did make this map out of boredom after all XD

i made changes and um

like

choo choo

uguu nyan

[Normal]
00:47:075 (3) - can you move this so that the slider path is centered over the previous sliderend?
00:52:024 (3) - ^
01:24:498 (2) - line this up with the straight part of 1
01:46:456 (3) - same sliderpath thing
01:51:405 (3) - ^

[Hard]
rename to CDFA is Hard
holy mother of slider velocity
01:27:900 (5) - the second curve looks asymmetrical
~.~ copy pasta chorus
02:43:055 (3) - the slight turn at the end, I feel, would work better if you placed it closer to the middle of the slider. It looks pretty wonky right now cus it doesn't fall on any beats. Perhaps move it so that it falls on the 1/6 at 02:43:209

[Nyan~]
00:33:467 (1) - move this down slightly to follow linearly out of 5
01:11:508 (4,5) - fix stacking
01:53:261 (3) - move this down to flow out of 2
02:42:745 (3) - can you line this up with 2?
02:54:189 (7) - ^ 6
02:55:426 (4) - ^ 3
just a couple flow nitpicks. otherwise looks pretty cool~

From my queue~

[General]

1. Title: "嗚呼、素晴らしきニャン生"
   (Romanised Title is OK)

[Normal]

1. 00:45:529 (5) - move to x:448 y:292
2. 01:24:498 (2) - move slider-end to x:426 y:257
3. 01:36:560 (4) - the following looks good, I think
   

   256,116,96560,2,4,P|356:104|400:200,2,200,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 01:51:405 (3) - move to x:176 y:152

[Hard]

1. 02:13:673 (4) - end at 02:14:292
2. 02:49:550 (5) - move to x:256 y:148

[Nyan~]

• 
  Good!　 Nyan~~

Go, Go, ranked!
~Good Luck~

from queue, sry im so late orz

General
- the kiai times in Normal and Hard are unsnapped. Please make them match Nyan~

- Title Unicode: 嗚呼、素晴らしきニャン生

- "vocaloid" in tags wouldn't hurt


Normal
00:14:910 (2) - Try using Soft sample set on the reverse and tail (with a whistle somewhere possibly). Better contrast between the trumpet instrument and the vocals imo
00:17:694 (2,3) - ^
03:04:395 (5) - NC, like 02:54:498 (1) -

Hard
- the SV seemed a bit extreme compared to Normal's, consider lowering it?

00:30:684 - Add note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/955689 The trumpet is emphasized here, making the notes sound more natural imo
00:35:632 - ^
01:25:117 - ^
01:30:065 - ^
01:35:013 -
and so on
02:16:147 (1) - Pretty sure you could make a better blanket with (2) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/955698

Nyan~'s pretty fun

Is Leorda coming back lol

Leorda's not coming back

I'll do changes soon. College orientation is a lot of work

also mother fuck I have to pretty much remap hard then

@Sakuya: I'll PM you when I remap the diff if you want o3o.

NOTE: These mods were not requested proceeding my desire to quit mapping or modding. These mods were all requested beforehand, and are being applied due to common courtesy. Please do not send me mod requests. I am not back.

I swear to fucking god I will get this shit ranked if its the last thing I do

General:
According to AiMod there are a lot of unsnapped kiais and green sections and also some inconsistencies between the difficulties, so please check it.
Also, you should rename Nyan~ difficulty to insane, or have similar difficulty names, from which it is easy to tell the differencies between them (so which is Normal Hard and Insane). (you should check this thread for more information)

[Normal]
Some hitsound suggestions:
00:11:199 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider? since the music has a similar sound, it would fit well imo
00:12:436 (2) - same here, add finish to the beginning of the slider, because it is a stronger beat
00:13:673 (1,2) - ^
00:16:147 (1) - ^ and also the end of the slider
00:18:622 (1,3) - add finish like I said previously (beginning of the slider and hit circle)
01:40:271 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider, it will emphasize the start ot the kiai nicely

00:43:364 (2,3) - try a different direction for better flow? - http://puu.sh/65K6J.jpg
00:55:735 (1,3) - don't hide the reverse arrow on (3), this is a similar pattern to yours, but the reverse arrow is visible: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1218258
the start point of 00:55:735 (1) - is at the place where it was, the mid point is at x:236 y:208 and the end point is at x:208 y:108 (then just copy paste and ctrl+h ctrl+g)
01:12:127 (2) - small thing, but put this a little up and make a better blanket so that the pattern is nicer - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1218269 (you can see the coordinates on the screenshot)
01:25:426 (1) - try placing this a little up, and also making a better blanket, because the end of the slider is a bit too much out of the grids - http://puu.sh/65Qm7.jpg
01:36:251 (3,4) - try making a better balnket? (sorry for nazi stuff :<) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1218396
well since the rest is copy paste, I suggest the same things that I already mentioned:
01:42:745 (2,3) - direction of the slider
01:47:384 (4,1) - blanket
01:55:116 (1,3) - reverse arrow
01:46:147 (2) - this is too close to the previous note
02:09:962 (1,3) - it would be better if you didn't make them overlap, because this is the easiest difficulty of the map, try to replace (1) and (2) a bit - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1218410
03:01:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - you shouldn't have such a long combo on a Normal diff, so add new combo here? 03:04:395 (5) - you used to add new combos after that nyan nyan nyan part, so why not do it like this here as well?

[Hard]
The hitsound suggestions from the normal difficulty apply to this difficulty as well.

00:17:385 (4,1) - you could make these flow better if they had a different direction, because 4 goes from right to left and back, and then you have to go left again, so it would be better to have something like this: http://puu.sh/6696j.jpg
00:35:941 (1,2,3) - imo this doesn't flow well, because - http://puu.sh/66dIJ.jpg - you go from one place to another back and forth, imo it doesn't really play well so try a different pattern, and it might be better if you make this 00:36:869 (2) - a hit circle and a slider, because he starts singing a new word(?) here 00:37:178 (3) - (I guess), it sounds like a new "section" - http://puu.sh/66dT4.jpg
00:39:034 (2,3) - why don't you have the same distance here, with the one you had here 00:38:416 (1,2) - ? they sound the same, so it would be reasonable to use the same distance - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1218988
00:52:024 (6,2) - this overlap is not nice imo, try this maybe? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1219013
01:19:859 (4) - why not use normal sampleset on this? the beat sounds big, so I think normal sampleset would sound better
01:29:653 (3,1,2) - this will flow better imo, because (3) will lead to (1) nicely, and (1) will lead to (2) nicely - http://puu.sh/66fui
01:37:178 (5,6) - small thing but make them have the same direction so that the pattern looks nicer - http://puu.sh/66fEz.jpg
01:39:446 (4) - ctrl+G on this slider would make a better flow
01:51:405 (6,2) - I already mentioned this, but since it's copy paste, I'll mention it again :< make a nicer overlap please
01:53:879 (5,6) - stack (6) with (5)'s end properly?
02:16:663 (2,3) - ctrl+G on the timeline, it fits so much better to the music, listen to the background sound (I don't know what instrument it could be), and also try making a nicer pattern? - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1219040 - you could also try this? fits well to the music imo - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1219052 (but of course it's just a suggestion)
02:18:003 (2,3,4,5) - nice pattern :3
02:37:075 (7) - it feels a bit weird to have this sliderend at a start of a section in vocals, maybe use 2 hit circles instead? - http://puu.sh/66gHu.jpg - or something different >.<
03:03:158 (5,1) - nazi but you could make this a blanket so that you have a nicer pattern - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1219062

[Nyan~]
00:11:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you should use a soft sampleset at the end of the sliders because the song is not so fast here and it sounds awkward that the normal hitsounds are so loud as well
00:22:952 (5,6,7) - kind of nazi but the distance between 6 and 7 is not the same as between 5 and 6 :< so put them a little further?
00:33:776 (2) - put this a little down, because right now it looks like a halfmade blanket, but if you put it a little down it won't look similar to a blanket
00:44:910 (5,6,7) - this pattern looks kind of awkward >.< try something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1300873
00:46:457 (3,4) - same here, I think the pattern needs some polishment http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1300889
00:53:261 (1,2,3,4) - ^ - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1300921
01:14:910 (8) - this slider should end on 01:15:117 - because that's where the beat is in the song, you could also use hitcircles instead of a slider? you use too many sliders in this difficulty so it wouldn't hurt to make it vary
01:15:838 (2,3) - what about this? - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1300935
01:17:385 (7,1) - imo it would fit better to the song if you used a hit circle 01:17:385 - and then started a slider 01:17:694 - because of the vocals, the song between 01:17:385 - and 01:17:694 - is too silent so there is no need to use a slider there
01:24:704 (3) - it's annoying that the vocals start in the middle of the slider, so why don't you remove the reverse and add something? for example use 2 hit circles so that you don't have to change the pattern - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1300963
01:34:601 (5) - same as above ^ and also some improvement on the pattern - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1300978 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1300983
01:40:271 (1,2,3,4) - I think you could improve this pattern - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1301019 (I copy pasted (4) and used it for (2)) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1301019
here's the code for both this point and the next one:

16,200,100271,6,0,P|88:192|136:244,1,146.666666666667
64,260,100580,2,0,B|64:188|140:132,1,146.666666666667,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,84,100890,2,0,B|264:68|336:84,1,146.666666666667,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,136,101199,2,0,B|384:208|308:264,1,146.666666666667,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,199,101508,2,0,P|372:196|384:295,2,220

01:41:199 (4,5) - make a nicer curve for (5) - http://puu.sh/6Gm68.jpg
01:42:436 (2) - you could make this curve nicer C:
01:45:220 (2,3) - make this nicer >.< - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1301033
01:55:117 (1,2) - same as above ^ - http://puu.sh/6Gn3A.jpg
02:09:962 (1) - dat old slider xD could be nicer :<
02:20:787 (4) - put the end point of the slider 1 grid up or copy pasyte (3) and replace the new (4) to where it was before
02:26:663 (6) - make this symmetrical >.<

184,280,146663,2,0,B|196:224|256:204|256:204|316:224|328:280,1,220

02:29:446 (1) - what about using a drum clap maybe? a normal clap doesn't sound so nice imo
02:35:632 (6) - put the end of the slider point a bit to the left so that it will look nicer - http://puu.sh/6GnJc.jpg
02:35:941 (1) - place this a little up so that it has the same distance between 02:35:941 (1,2) - and 02:36:251 (2,3) -
02:47:385 (2) - make this curve nicer
03:03:158 (5,7) - it's not really good to have the slider end under another slider so I would suggest something like this - http://puu.sh/6Go12.jpg
03:05:941 (4) - I think it would be nice if you had a hit circle here and not a slider, because the vocals kind of "stop" at that point so it would play nice imo - http://puu.sh/6Go5q.jpg
03:07:797 (4,1) - I don't know why you used different spacing here, so put (1) closer to (4)?

I'm sorry that I mentioned too much "nazi" stuff but I think that the patterns need some work

Sorry that it took so long to finish! I was busy with exams >.< Good luck with the mapset!

NYAN NYAN NYAN NYAN

thats right nigga

I made this +50 star priority because someone said they'd mod stuff that was +50 star prioity

Someone for the sweet love of jesus please

rip

CDFA: I updated my mod with the last difficulty, so please check it and answer whenever you can :<

WAIT HOLY FUCK MYSTYK UPDATED HIS/HER MOD OH FUCK

The lord jesus will give me the strength to try to get this ranked over the week I have of spring break.

nyan~ is not a rankable diff name

kd please

Asked two more BATs to look at this and the most I've gotten is "your parallel lines suck lmao"

One day