lol so let's try getting this ranked.

Listen!! is going to be put on hold for a bit. I'll still get mods for it, but this is going to be my main map, once I can finish it

I love this song
TAKE MY KUDOS<3

If anyone can find a humane way to make an easy diff for this map that's still playable and enjoyable but fits the star rating criteria then I will seriously get a gender change and bear 3 of your children

[General]

Your folder size is 11.0 MB which is greater than the allowed size of 10.0 MB without video. I guess it because MP3, what unrankable too due to bitrate (320 kb/s, which is above the maximum of 192 kb/s.). And please, cut useless part of MP3.

Vocaloid names are no longer allowed as artists. Change artist to:

ギガP - 嗚呼、素晴らしきニャン生

Romanized:

Giga-P, Neko96 - Ah, It's a Wonderful Cat's Life!

And add Kagamine Len and Megpoid Gumi to tags.

And source VOCALOID is no longer allowed too, just clear it.

And resnap green lines in all diffs, thay are totally unsnapped now.

[Normal]

00:19:845 (3,5) - Overlap. Please, move 00:20:463 (5) a little bit down.
00:30:979 (1,3) - Please, avoid overlaps like this in relax-diffs, it can confuse beginners.
00:55:721 (1,3) - ^
01:35:618 (5) - new combo here?
01:55:102 (1,3) - Please, avoid overlaps like this in relax-diffs, it can confuse beginners. [2]
02:09:948 (1,3) - overlap reverses on sliders in relax-diffs is a very bad idea as fore me. Please, avoid it.
02:27:577 (1) - 02:28:505 - I think better end spinner here follow vocal. And add break or map this part.
02:44:587 (5,7) - so cruel overlap again :\
02:47:061 (1,1) - ^
03:01:907 (1,3) - This is unrankable. 03:03:144 (3) - half of this slider are really hidden, you must unstack them to make all this slider visible due to the rules.

[Hard]

Lol, its more insane for me than hard.
Well.. Since it ~200 bpm i strongly suggest you use AR8 and OD 7 for better balancer and readability.

02:17:061 (3) - This note is hard to aim. How about move it to the end of 02:16:649 (2)?

[Nyan~]

LOL CLOSED ON 1/16
OD+1 please for better balance.
Why sv is sooo big? :\

00:20:670 (9) - NC please
00:23:556 (7) - Personally: i dont like this slider. How about change it to spinner better?
00:42:938 (5) - NC here please
00:55:721 (9) - ^
00:58:195 (4) - how about add nc here for better readability of this note?
01:27:886 (7) - I dont like this slider. Change to spinner better i think.
01:56:340 (5,6) - Stack endings of this sliders better please.

Good luck!

It's a wonderful lif.

There are SO MANY SLIDERS OFF DA GRID.
cdfa pls.
also incredible map
also nyan nyan nyan~
(This mod is just pointing out everything off grid. Possibly some of these are still rankable but just letting you know CDFA.)
disclaimer this is my first mod pls dont hurt me for pointing out stupid shit.
[Nyan~]
00:11:185 (1) -
00:11:804 (3) -
00:12:628 (5) -
00:14:896 (6) -
00:16:133 (1) -
00:17:680 (6,7) - 6's slider end is off grid. 7 obvi.
00:19:845 (6,7) - again 6's end is off. 7 start is off. (These are only barely off the left of the grid but the bottom of 7 is off the bottom.)
00:23:556 (7) - both the right and left side of this huge slider is off grid.
00:25:103 (2) -
00:24:999 (1,2) - both of these are off bottom of the grid a tiny bit.(again not sure if its only off by this much if it's unrankable or not but just going to mention all similar cases.)
00:26:340 (2) -
00:27:268 (3) -
00:30:051 (5) -
00:31:288 (2) -
00:32:216 (3) -
00:33:762 (2) - barely off grid
00:36:237 (2) -
00:36:546 (3) -
00:38:092 (7) -
00:39:432 (4) -
00:41:494 (2) -
00:42:113 (4) -
00:43:247 (7,8) -
00:43:969 (10) -
00:45:206 (3) -
00:46:752 (4) -
00:47:061 (5) -
00:47:989 (7) -
00:51:082 (2) - slider end
00:52:010 (5) -
00:53:556 (2) -
01:11:185 (3) -
01:11:494 (4,5) -
01:12:113 (6) -
01:15:515 (2) -
01:18:608 (4) -
01:20:773 (2) -
01:22:938 (6,7) -
01:30:360 (2,3) -
01:40:257 (1) -
01:42:422 (2) -
01:43:969 (1,2) -
01:48:608 (4,1) -
01:50:154 (1) -
01:51:391 (5) -
01:54:175 (6) -
01:55:103 (1,2,3) -
02:09:948 (1) -
02:13:659 (4,5) -
02:20:360 (2,3) -
02:22:938 (3) -
02:36:958 (4,5,1) -
02:38:711 (6) -
02:39:639 (4) -
02:40:876 (8,9) -
02:41:494 (1) -
02:43:350 (5) -
02:47:680 (3) -
02:54:175 (7,1) -
02:56:030 (6) -
02:58:195 (5) -
03:00:979 (6) -
03:01:597 (8) -
03:02:525 (3,4) -
03:04:381 (8) -
03:08:092 (1) -
03:09:020 (1) -


OK So I literally just pointed out sliders, circles, and slider ends that were off grid but I dunno if slider ends being off grid is unrankable and a lot of the things I pointed out actually might be okay but some of them are definitely unrankable.
get ranked quick pls CDFA

THE SUBMIT ACTUALLY WORKS NOW SO I'LL MAKE CHANGES AND STUFF WOHOO

star cause 2 kudosu~
also new page sup. better get this ranked cdfa.

So yeah I got snaked on ponies so i decided to mod some vocaloid (and 2 kd ofc)

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
lold at 320kbps mp3, better change it now than never
All ur green lines are unsnapped (delayed), snap them properly plz ><
since when did Lin get together with Gumi? Rin must be sad

[Normal]
CS3? (beware if you do this some sliders will be out of the screen and then they need to get fixed and stuff)
00:38:402 (1) - feels better if you end it at 00:40:257
00:52:938 (1) - clap
00:56:649 (2) - ^
01:17:989 (4) - NC to keep consistent with the previous combo
01:27:887 (5) - unsnapped slider wwww
01:35:618 (5) - NC
01:38:092 (1) - same as 00:38:402 (1)
02:16:133 (3,5) - try not to overlap these two, and NC on 02:17:371 (5)
02:22:319 (5) - NC
02:48:298 (1) - no NC
02:52:010 (1) - finish on start
03:01:597 (5) - clap
03:06:855 (1,2,3) - i was expecting something like this:
[Hard]
this...sv...whoa
OD+1 will fit better with the difficulty of this diff
00:17:371 (1) - no NC
00:21:082 (2) - NC here instead of 00:20:773 (1)
00:22:010 (3) - out of screen orz
00:30:051 (1) - no NC
00:46:443 (1) - ^
01:30:257 (1) - delete this note, due to the different timed stack at 01:29:432 (2,3) this stack plays really confusing
01:45:824 (1) - no NC
01:47:886 (2,3,4,5) - use stacks on these to have some contrast with 01:50:978 (3,4,5,6)
02:20:154 (3) - perfectly center this
02:26:649 (6) - shorten this to 02:26:855 and add note at 02:26:958 to cover the drums
02:48:608 (2,4) - oh no not perfectly stacked (though stack leniency comes into effect here)
03:08:092 (1,2,3,4,5) - symmetry epiccc first part of the last kiai didnt have finishes, was that intentional?

[Nyan~]
i would name this "Nyan Nyan Nyan~" to follow the lyrics just saying
00:20:979 (12) - having this placed here is very anti-flow, move it here:
00:33:762 (2) - oh man that blanket can be better
00:43:247 (7) - NC
00:55:618 (8) - ^
00:57:577 (3,4) - having the note first then the slider feels more natural to play imo
01:15:412 (1) - i would delete this note, quite a minor beat here in the music
01:27:886 (7) - why that kink with the red node? make the curve smoother looks alot better
01:56:340 (5,6) - shift the extending direction so the ends of the two sliders are stacked here
02:28:917 (9) - stack this on 02:27:474 (2) (re-adjust this hexagon so its actually a proper hexagon xD)
02:36:546 (3) - shorten this to 02:36:752 and add note at 02:36:855, feels kinda awkward not pressing there
02:41:185 (9) - whoa out of screen ><
02:45:721 (6) - NC
02:46:340 (9) - same as 02:36:546 (3)
02:49:536 (7) - stack on end of 02:48:298 (5), or just dont overlap it at all
03:06:855 (1) - one grid up to have the same slider-distance as 03:07:164 (2,3,4)
03:09:020 (1) - no NC
where are the finishes? xD

Cool stuff have a star, good luck on ranking Nyan~

Yaay, mya!~ >w<~.

I'll do edits later, it's almost 2AM for me right now ;A;.

Most stuff fixed. Just applying the stuff on normal and I'll upload it

I'll ask moreso about the CS in Normal to see if others like it owo

The MP3 you have is at 320 kbps. I re-encoded it at 192 kbps.

MP3 Here

EDIT: Talked about cutting the song and video file length, but he (CDFA) came to the conclusion that he would map the rest of the song in time.

Random mod


[Normal]
00:18:608 (1) - make this slider not so far down?
00:35:927 (1) - ^
00:45:824 (1) - ^

[Hard]
HP + 1
00:17:371 (4) - make symmetrical to 00:18:608 (1) - ?
00:39:020 (2) - make symmetrical to 00:38:402 (1) - ?
01:21:082 (2) - curve kinda like 01:20:463 (1) - ?
02:12:113 (3) - move out from under 2 to keep consistency with prev. combo
01:13:041 (1) - not so far down?
01:22:938 (1,2) - ^
01:45:102 (8) - NC on previous note instead

[Nyan~]
OD +1/2
00:20:876 (11,12) - what are these mapped to?
00:43:247 (7) - NC on previous note instead
01:17:371 (7) - too long
02:21:907 (6) - seems unnecessary

Sorry about short mod D:

Hello Mod From My Queue




Hope This Will Help You
Good Luck ~

Normal
When the notes stack over each other (i.e. 00:50:15 - ) it feels a little odd to me.
Not a big problem, just opinion.
I can't really give advice for the other difficulties because I'm not that good yet ._.

Otherwise, it's a really great beatmap and I hope it gets ranked soon :3
First mod, hope it helped

i should look at these sometime lol

Yes you should.

god I, like this.

Feel free to contact me for a mod if you are done with the other ones.

Konei wrote:

god I, like this.

Feel free to contact me for a mod if you are done with the other ones.

I finished the other ones lol

Err ok lol, just wanted to make sure <~<


[General]

1. Didn't you change the mp3? However, if I'm not wrong it's still unrankable o.o
   
   
2. Timing points (and especially KIAI points) are all unsnapped.
   
   
3. Use a KIAI flash for this spot? Chorus feels like restarting here.
   
   
4. Would have been cool if you had mapped the end aswell but whatever.
   
   
5. SV gap from Normal to Hard is kinda harsh, you see; 1,00 -> 1,80. I'd like it if Hard's SV was lower.

[Normal]

1. 00:30:979 (1,3) - Looks a bit untidy, actually you could recreate 1 to stack it's end with 3's end.
2. 01:27:886 (5) - Whew, probably not intentional but the whole Slider got that finish.
3. 01:36:546 (4) - ^
4. 03:01:907 (1,3) - Actually I think, those two could be neater if you see what I mean.
   
   SPOILER

   [img]03:01:907[/img]
5. Yooo, this is pretty neat.

[Hard]

1. 00:30:979 (1) - I think you can redo a smoother shape with one wavepoint, right?
2. 00:46:443 (1) - I don't see the purpose of this NC; music doesn't really change and this is in the middle of the vocals.
3. 01:19:536 (2,3) - Space them out to prevent that overlap? Looks rather ugly in my opinion.
4. 01:37:164 (5,6) - ^Same
5. 01:53:246 (3,4) - ^Same
6. 02:11:185 (1) - Whistle on the Sliderbody sounds weird, aaand I don't think you did that on purpose, right?
7. 02:16:133 (1) - Same^
8. 02:19:226 (1) - Remove NC here and start it on the next note? Follows the beat much better since the next Slider plays on the downbeat.
9. 03:00:566 (5,6,7,8) - Uhmm, space those out again?
10. 03:08:092 (1,4,5) - Allign this pattern? Looks a lot more tidy :3
11. Pretty cool, but the SV gap irks me huee~

[Nyan~]

1. 00:17:680 (6) - You could actually move this a bit to stack it with 1's start.
2. 00:26:030 (1) - Looks and plays strange to break the pattern all of the sudden, try to keep the same pattern as before?
3. 00:49:226 (4) - Wuuut, what is the purpose of this wry shape? :< You could do a much better one with one wavepoint
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:25:412 (1) - Move this a bit back to prevent them from touching? Also you can improve the blanket a bit.
5. 01:33:453 (3) - Uhmm, you could redo this shape? It looks a bit odd ;__;
6. 01:34:072 (4) - If you do above, copy paste it here of course.
7. 01:56:030 (4) - Humm, something to blanket it would actually make this cooler in my opinion, see if you like the suggestion below :3
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 02:12:422 (1) - Remove whistle on the Sliderbody? Sounds still weird to me :<
9. 02:13:659 (4) - ^
10. 02:16:133 (4) - ^
11. 02:26:649 (1) - Move the start point a bit down? I think the shape is not tooootally symmetrical.
12. 02:35:927 (1,2,3) - Quite nazi, but make the spacing between those 3 consistent.
13. 02:47:371 (2) - Ughh, I think you can the that the blanket can be improved quite a lot.
14. 03:05:927 (4) - Move it a bit farther away to have the same spacing from 3 as 2.
15. 03:06:855 (1,2,3,4) - Make spacing between those 4 consistent
16. Pretty cool, I enjoyed it :3

Yep, that's it for now.

Nyaa~

[general]
none really

[normal]
00:33:453 (5) - new combo
01:00:670 - why not add a finish at the end of the slider?
01:22:938 (5) - NC
02:00:051 - add a finish again
02:54:175 (4) - make this green as well as 02:56:649 (8) - to represent gumi's color, plus i think it adds a nice touch to the symmetry
03:00:979 (3) - NC
03:11:804 - finish again

[hard]
do finishes to spinners
02:12:113 (3) - i found this hit circle cruel, try moving it somewhere else or try making it more noticeable
02:15:824 (3) - ^
02:32:010 - try putting a kiai here and end it short here 02:32:113 -
02:46:752 (3) - again with the hitcircle

[nyan~]
spinner finishes
00:20:670 (9) - NC
01:49:536 (3) - ^
02:36:855 (4) - ^
02:46:752 (5) - ^

done
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS SONG!
i used to listen to this song on repeat on youtube XD .
If it's ok with you, i think i'll try to make a easy mode on this if i have enough freetime

Ima shoot you a star too just because this is one of my favorite vocaloid songs.
So ok if i make an easy diff or no?

If you want to, go for it :3~. Just be aware that I hold the right to deny it if it isn't that good ouo

yep. i know. ill try to make mine at least DECENT.
if you dont like it then you can throw it away,change it yourself, have it for dinner. XD
i don't care its your map now XD

p.s. you DO realize that my user is snlrocks, not snlrules right?
XDXD nyan~

From modding queue
(>‘o’)> Good map I hope it gets ranked!

Now mod my pending map!

-_- I had the mod, I HAD THE MOD AND PRESSED BACKSPACE NOW EVERYTHING IS GONE!!

I give you Feedback now instead, really can't be bothered to write this again. Tomorrow when I calmed down you'll receive my mod I suppose.

[General]

You passed

[Nyan~]

My thoughts: Really enjoyable diff!
Suggestinos: I think you should work on the slider shapes mostly, also the blankets. The rhythm is acceptable! I'm just a bit worried about the spacing, if you put a slider, and then a circle afterwards, I think you should reduce the DS between them a bit, it'll look much more polished then!

[Hard]

My thoughts: Didn't finish to Play it, but seems okay.
Suggestions: I think you should definetly work on the rhythm and please reduce the SV for at least 0.3 .. It will make everything more readable! Please, also use more stacking, because the way you used DS after a slider, I don't really like it! But I think for a 1/3 song it's very important to get a nice flow with the rhythm, so I think you should overthink these Things again.
[Normal]

My thoughts: I like it!
Suggestions: Not much, this diff is almost perfect, there are a few weird rhythms where I think you should map to the lyrics, but apart that I think it's great!

Don't hesitate asking me~

no kd, this is 1) not helpful and 2) not a real mod, but i feel more satisfied instead of doing nothing now. xD

You're getting kudosu and you're going to like it.

Fixing changes in a bit. should be up soon

CDFA wrote:

You're getting kudosu and you're going to like it.

Fixing changes in a bit. should be up soon

alright, ask me again then~

== Hard Diff ==
Can you move some of the circles between these time points please?
It may not get ranked due to this.
02:48:312 - 02:49:550
Thanks!

Hi CDFA ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VI

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

That's it ^^

Hope to get ranked soon !!!!

In general I dislike Vocaloid but OHHH ♥ Nyan~ I LOVE this song And the video story is amazing too

Att.

OHMIGOSH i finally finished it.

It's so incredibly hard to make an easy.
I'm not even sure if i did good on this song. welp i hope you like it.
Feel free to make any changes you want or trash it all together.

Hi~

[General]
* Wasn't the artist should me "Nem"? I saw that in your video
* Use orange, yellow, and green combo colour? Default one seems boring to me

[Nyan~]
00:33:776 (2) - Unsnapped tail slider

Good job, call me when you're ready

snlrocks wrote:

OHMIGOSH i finally finished it.

It's so incredibly hard to make an easy.
I'm not even sure if i did good on this song. welp i hope you like it.
Feel free to make any changes you want or trash it all together.

snlrock's easy

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: WorkDammit.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 40902
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Ah, It's a Wonderful Cat Life!
TitleUnicode:Ah, It's a Wonderful Cat Life!
Artist:Nem-P
ArtistUnicode:Nem-P
Creator:CDFA
Version:snlrock's easy
Source:
Tags:Megpoid Gumi Kagamine Len
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:0
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:0
ApproachRate:0
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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156,47,38402,5,8,3:0:0:0:
355,47,39020,1,8,3:0:0:0:
264,192,39845,1,8,3:0:0:0:
264,192,40051,1,8,3:0:0:0:
184,192,40257,2,12,P|224:120|336:160,1,200,8|14,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
323,317,41494,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,168,42113,2,0,P|208:112|264:88,1,99.9999999999999,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,164,42731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
129,305,43350,5,0,0:0:0:0:
129,104,43969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,44587,2,8,L|450:104,1,99.9999999999999
428,204,45206,2,0,P|412:252|368:254,1,99.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,324,45824,5,0,0:0:0:0:
155,182,46443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,182,47061,2,8,P|400:192|404:260,1,99.9999999999999
415,137,47680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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144,108,48917,2,0,L|144:216,1,99.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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352,224,50154,2,0,P|396:255|384:320,1,99.9999999999999,8|4,3:3|3:3,3:3:0:0:
298,297,50773,5,0,0:0:0:0:
98,297,51391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
239,155,52010,2,8,P|194:192|157:147,1,99.9999999999999
93,103,52628,2,0,P|56:58|73:29,1,99.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,28,53247,5,0,0:0:0:0:
372,28,53865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,224,54484,2,8,P|344:280|288:263,2,99.9999999999999
304,169,55721,6,0,L|96:169,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,304,56958,2,0,L|240:96,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58195,12,0,59432,0:0:0:0:
256,144,60051,22,8,L|256:256,2,99.9999999999999
169,144,70566,37,0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,71391,2,0,B|141:99|208:80,1,133.333333333333,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,144,73041,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,73866,2,0,B|371:99|304:80,1,133.333333333333,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,234,75103,6,0,P|89:313|130:374,1,133.333333333333,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,272,76340,2,0,P|207:337|275:362,1,133.333333333333,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,272,77989,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,32,78814,2,0,P|432:64|448:144,1,133.333333333333,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,134,79536,5,8,0:0:0:0:
352,240,79845,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,272,80154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
185,201,80463,6,0,P|121:153|137:121,2,99.9999999999999,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,200,81701,2,0,P|384:152|368:120,2,99.9999999999999,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,8,82938,6,8,B|104:160|376:248|241:366,2,400,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,78,86030,5,8,0:0:0:0:
336,216,86649,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,360,87268,1,8,0:0:0:0:
325,218,87886,6,0,P|351:191|335:255,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,218,89123,2,0,P|161:191|177:255,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,60,90360,5,8,0:0:0:0:
216,128,90670,2,0,B|255:93|255:93|313:146,2,99.9999999999999,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,200,91597,2,0,B|182:165|182:165|240:218,2,99.9999999999999,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,197,92525,2,0,B|329:165|329:165|369:200,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,56,93453,5,8,0:0:0:0:
152,256,94072,1,8,0:0:0:0:
293,114,94690,1,8,0:0:0:0:
293,314,95309,6,0,L|371:233,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,168,95927,1,8,0:0:0:0:
219,314,96546,2,0,L|141:233,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,171,97164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
379,171,97989,5,8,3:0:0:0:
312,171,98195,1,4,3:0:0:0:
178,171,98608,1,8,3:0:0:0:
111,171,98814,1,4,3:0:0:0:
205,265,99226,1,8,3:0:0:0:
271,265,99432,1,8,3:0:0:0:
318,312,99639,2,0,P|375:336|422:304,1,99.9999999999999,4|14,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
406,222,100257,5,8,0:0:0:0:
205,222,100876,2,0,B|173:286|69:286|29:214,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,154,101804,2,8,L|130:272,2,99.9999999999999
107,54,102731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
307,54,103350,5,0,0:0:0:0:
507,54,103969,1,8,0:0:0:0:
507,153,104278,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,223,104587,1,8,0:0:0:0:
235,223,105206,6,8,B|125:222|125:222|154:126,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,135,106443,2,0,P|415:119|463:151,1,99.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,231,107061,2,0,P|379:247|331:215,1,99.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,234,107680,2,0,L|249:122,3,99.9999999999999,0|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,63,108917,6,0,L|290:79,1,99.9999999999999,8|4,3:0|3:3,0:0:0:0:
377,77,109536,1,8,3:0:0:0:
377,176,109845,1,4,3:0:0:0:
277,176,110154,6,0,L|165:176,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,176,110773,2,0,P|55:234|87:282,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,337,111391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,266,111701,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,336,112010,1,8,0:0:0:0:
349,265,112319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,194,112628,6,0,L|291:194,1,99.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,194,113247,2,0,L|99:194,1,99.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,94,113865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,94,114175,1,8,0:0:0:0:
317,94,114484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
458,235,115103,5,8,0:0:0:0:
258,235,115721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
57,235,116340,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,232,116958,2,0,B|255:277|255:277|308:253|308:253|360:280|360:280|360:220,1,200,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,44,118195,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,118814,12,0,120051,0:0:0:0:
44,108,129948,5,10,3:3:0:0:
243,108,130566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,108,131185,2,0,P|487:163|467:179,1,99.9999999999999
381,169,131804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,169,132422,5,0,0:0:0:0:
381,169,133041,1,0,0:0:0:0:
239,310,133659,2,0,L|358:309,2,99.9999999999999
468,108,134896,5,10,3:3:0:0:
269,108,135514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
69,108,136133,2,0,P|25:163|30:169,1,99.9999999999999
131,169,136752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,169,137371,5,0,0:0:0:0:
131,169,137989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,310,138608,2,0,L|386:310,1,99.9999999999999
372,210,139226,2,0,P|380:162|316:134,1,99.9999999999999
243,131,139845,5,0,0:0:0:0:
143,131,140154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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142,271,140773,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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441,71,142319,5,0,0:0:0:0:
341,71,142628,1,8,0:0:0:0:
270,141,142938,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,70,143247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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40,251,144175,2,0,L|129:341,1,99.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,304,144793,6,0,P|272:352|352:288,2,200,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,256,146340,2,0,P|280:280|328:248,3,99.9999999999999,0|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,216,147474,5,8,3:0:0:0:
312,170,147680,1,4,3:0:0:0:
152,218,148092,1,8,3:0:0:0:
200,168,148298,1,4,3:0:0:0:
312,72,148711,5,8,3:0:0:0:
201,73,148917,1,8,3:0:0:0:
256,124,149123,2,8,L|257:246,1,99.9999999999999,0|4,0:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
256,192,149742,12,0,152216,0:0:0:0:
176,192,152835,5,0,0:0:0:0:
375,192,153453,2,8,B|375:144|375:144|327:96|327:96|326:103,1,99.9999999999999
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294,248,155309,1,8,0:0:0:0:
294,48,155927,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,48,156237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
122,118,156546,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,256,157164,6,0,L|376:256,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,155,157783,2,0,L|234:155,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,155,158402,1,8,0:0:0:0:
233,84,158711,1,8,0:0:0:0:
303,154,159020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
402,154,159329,6,0,L|402:52,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,254,160257,1,8,0:0:0:0:
201,254,160876,2,0,L|332:254,1,99.9999999999999,8|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
301,154,161494,2,0,P|249:136|209:152,1,99.9999999999999,8|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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195,303,164587,5,8,0:0:0:0:
336,161,165206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,161,165824,1,8,0:0:0:0:
65,90,166133,1,8,0:0:0:0:
135,19,166443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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393,174,168298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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222,244,168917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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129,84,171082,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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328,84,171701,1,8,0:0:0:0:
427,84,172010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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225,287,173247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
125,287,173556,1,8,0:0:0:0:
54,216,173865,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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254,15,175103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,15,175721,1,8,0:0:0:0:
453,114,176030,1,8,0:0:0:0:
382,184,176340,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,224,176958,6,0,P|96:232|56:136,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
54,342,178195,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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155,176,178814,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,216,181907,5,8,0:0:0:0:
269,357,182525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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394,60,183762,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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192,342,185618,2,8,L|272:240,1,99.9999999999999
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328,336,186855,6,0,P|368:287|368:224,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,181,187474,2,0,P|333:129|389:113,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,43,188092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
195,43,188402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,113,188711,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,212,189020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,189329,12,0,191804,0:0:0:0:

I've taken a look at the diff, and although it's an ok diff, I sadly won't take it since this is so close to ranking ;A;

Sorry about that ;A;.

Just for some tips on mapping, though, since I did take a look at it

If you're making a lower diff for someone, make sure you're consistently checking with the diff above it to make sure that your parts aren't harder than the diff above. That happened a few times with this map (And I know for this map in particular, it was hard, since I mapped Normal as minimally as possible)

Sorry about that ;AAA;

I'll fix Leorda's changes in a bit. I gotta check on the artist name, tho.

EDIT: Source for anybody that's curious

http://vocaloid.wikia.com/wiki/Nem

Will make changes.

Yep thats fine. i did make this map out of boredom after all XD

i made changes and um

like

choo choo

uguu nyan

[Normal]
00:47:075 (3) - can you move this so that the slider path is centered over the previous sliderend?
00:52:024 (3) - ^
01:24:498 (2) - line this up with the straight part of 1
01:46:456 (3) - same sliderpath thing
01:51:405 (3) - ^

[Hard]
rename to CDFA is Hard
holy mother of slider velocity
01:27:900 (5) - the second curve looks asymmetrical
~.~ copy pasta chorus
02:43:055 (3) - the slight turn at the end, I feel, would work better if you placed it closer to the middle of the slider. It looks pretty wonky right now cus it doesn't fall on any beats. Perhaps move it so that it falls on the 1/6 at 02:43:209

[Nyan~]
00:33:467 (1) - move this down slightly to follow linearly out of 5
01:11:508 (4,5) - fix stacking
01:53:261 (3) - move this down to flow out of 2
02:42:745 (3) - can you line this up with 2?
02:54:189 (7) - ^ 6
02:55:426 (4) - ^ 3
just a couple flow nitpicks. otherwise looks pretty cool~

From my queue~

[General]

1. Title: "嗚呼、素晴らしきニャン生"
   (Romanised Title is OK)

[Normal]

1. 00:45:529 (5) - move to x:448 y:292
2. 01:24:498 (2) - move slider-end to x:426 y:257
3. 01:36:560 (4) - the following looks good, I think
   

   256,116,96560,2,4,P|356:104|400:200,2,200,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 01:51:405 (3) - move to x:176 y:152

[Hard]

1. 02:13:673 (4) - end at 02:14:292
2. 02:49:550 (5) - move to x:256 y:148

[Nyan~]

• 
  Good!　 Nyan~~

Go, Go, ranked!
~Good Luck~

from queue, sry im so late orz

General
- the kiai times in Normal and Hard are unsnapped. Please make them match Nyan~

- Title Unicode: 嗚呼、素晴らしきニャン生

- "vocaloid" in tags wouldn't hurt


Normal
00:14:910 (2) - Try using Soft sample set on the reverse and tail (with a whistle somewhere possibly). Better contrast between the trumpet instrument and the vocals imo
00:17:694 (2,3) - ^
03:04:395 (5) - NC, like 02:54:498 (1) -

Hard
- the SV seemed a bit extreme compared to Normal's, consider lowering it?

00:30:684 - Add note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/955689 The trumpet is emphasized here, making the notes sound more natural imo
00:35:632 - ^
01:25:117 - ^
01:30:065 - ^
01:35:013 -
and so on
02:16:147 (1) - Pretty sure you could make a better blanket with (2) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/955698

Nyan~'s pretty fun

Is Leorda coming back lol

Leorda's not coming back

I'll do changes soon. College orientation is a lot of work