Sorry for the delay. i was crazily playing DayZ lately so i totally forgot this ;_;
[General]
Reduce Audio lead-in to 1000ms in all diffs except S.S. 1081+2000ms is too long imo
[DS's Easy]
00:07:691 (2) - Shorten this by 1/2 beat to follow the emphasis better? it'll be more exciting imo o.o
Also it should be placed at x:224 y:212 to make blanket better
00:09:216 (1,2,3) - a bit nazi though you can place them like this for better-looking
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/431705
00:13:792 - Remove this unused green line...? it wont effect anything though
00:18:369 (1) - I'd suggest to remove this note because it's too weak and almost inaudible what the note follows. so i guess it's kinda hard for beginners to get the rhythm due to the previous spinner
00:29:555 (1,3) - Maybe curve these sliders more? looks a lot better to me and flow will be better too
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/431710
00:33:623 (5) - Finish+clap is too loud orz would be best if you removed the clap here
00:37:691 (5) - Snaredrum doesnt exist here so clap doesnt fit as well. remove it please
00:47:860 (3) - I can hear a cymbal here, so maybe finish sounds nice
00:55:996 (1) - I'd rather add whistle at the beginning than the end. because the current position of whistles is a bit continuous and doesnt sound that good to me.
00:57:013 (2) - Oh, same as 00:33:623 (5) - . consider removing clap here
01:00:064 (3) - You can keep 1/1 rhythm here because of snaredrum at 01:00:572 - . steady beat enables beginners to get rhythm easily imo
01:04:131 (1) - This may be confusing for beginners because the spinner appears so suddenly.
so start the spinner at 01:04:258 - instead so that players can see it after (3) ends
01:07:182 (1) - I can hear some snaredrum sounds here, so add custom clap to both beginning and end?
01:20:911 (1) - Feels empty here due to lack of clap. why isnt clap here?
01:25:487 (2) - I'd move this slider leftward a bit for better flow
01:29:809 (3) - it would be better to follow 01:31:080 - here to keep claps consistent. remove a repeat from (3) and add 1/2 slider at 01:30:826 -
01:36:674 (1) - Why is spinner here? it's not fitting with the song at all and this section is totally mappable. would be best if you could remove it and remap here.
01:28:538 (1) - I can hear a cymbal here, so maybe finish sounds nice
01:47:352 - I guess you forget a clap here
01:50:911 (4) - Add a whistle here? just suggestion
01:52:945 (4) - ^ also same thing as 00:07:691 (2) -
01:57:013 (1) - Add finishes to both the beginning and end for the same reason as above
01:59:047 - As you can see all other diffs have a spinner here so add it on this diff too for consistency?
Oh if you agree with me about 01:04:131 (1) - , make it start at 01:59:174 - instead.
[Homu's Normal]
00:07:182 (3) - Feels a bit off to me, a better rhythm would be this;
http://puu.sh/14WMS
00:12:267 (4) - it's too weak and almost inaudible what this note follows. so try this rhythm
http://puu.sh/14X6o
00:17:352 - Add finis here
00:23:453 (4,5,6) - They look a bit random to me. try something like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/431737
00:33:114 - Add clap here instead of whistle to follow the snaredrum
00:35:148 - Add whistle instead of clap. it doesnt fit with music at all
00:35:657 (4,5,6) - Same as 00:23:453 (4,5,6) -
00:39:216 (4) - ^
00:41:758 (1) - Finish is really too loud here. better to remove it
00:43:792 (3) - ^
00:45:826 (1) - ^
00:48:877 (1) - This newcombo breaks your newcombo pattern. remove newcombo here
00:50:403 (4) - Add newcombo here due to change of melody
00:48:877 ~ 01:03:877 - Where are whistles? D:
00:50:403 - There's no snare here so clap sounds really weird to me.
00:52:436 - ^
00:54:470 - ^
00:56:504 - ^
01:15:826 (5) - Somehow it's on different place than 01:12:775 (1) - . it should be placed at x:260
01:18:369 - Finish is really too loud.
01:20:403 (5) - This combo is quite long imo. so add newcombo here?
01:22:945 (1) - Remove newcombo here if you changed ^
01:24:470 (4) - And add newcombo here
01:29:047 (1,2,3) - What's point of these sliders? feels very overmapped to me. try to simplify them
01:34:640 - Finish is too loud here
01:38:962 (1) - I can hear a cymbal here. try to add finish
01:39:216 (2) - Finish+clap is too loud and doesnt sound that great really. better to remove clap
01:46:843 (4,5,6) - same as 01:29:047 (1,2,3) -
[Hard]
00:03:114 (1,5) - Would make more sense if they were symmetrical
00:08:835 (4) - Add clap? the percussion is too strong to be ignored imo
00:08:199 (3) - This slider should start at 00:07:945 -
00:09:979 (2) - Move this note to x:208 y:308 or so? flow will be much better imo
00:11:758 (6) - Considering the other newcombos in this part, newcombo should be here
00:17:860 (1) - This newcombo seems unnecessary
00:31:589 (1) - sorry for nazi but it should be spaced at 1.0x
00:35:657 (1) - lol
00:43:792 (3) - not stacked correctly
00:40:742 (3) - Move this slider upward by 1grid to make it more symmetrical
00:48:877 (3) - This note shouldnt be here but at 00:49:131 -
01:07:818 (3) - Add clap here
01:23:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - really off rhythm. try this instead
http://puu.sh/14XuU
01:37:182 (3) - Map the middle of this slider? orz you should follow the emphasis imo
01:39:979 (1,2,3,4,5) - Dont make star formation manually orz use CTRL+SHIFT+D instead. the current one looks too wide orz
01:48:496 (8) - Add clap here
[Miya's Hard]
00:01:081 ~ 00:17:352 - i wonder why you didnt add whistles in this section like what you did for 01:40:742 ~ 01:57:013 -
00:15:318 (1) - Space this note at 1.3x instead? It'll be more fitting with the song imo
00:08:835 (4) - Add clap here? The snaredrum the note follows is very similar to 00:08:708 - and you have a clap there. so it should be more consistent
00:27:013 (3) - Add whistle here instead of clap. i think it would fit music best because there's no snare drum here
00:33:114 (8,9,10,11,12) - Hmm what's the point of this stream? i couldnt find any reason and sounds really overmapped to me
00:38:708 - Add a note here (or change the previous slider into triplet)? In fact the accent exists on whitetick in this section so it'll make more sense imo
01:03:623 (4) - Sorry for nazi mod x_x Move this note leftward by 1grid to make the blanket a bit better
01:23:199 (8) - Feels empty here, So add a whistle at the beginning to follow the piano?
01:23:580 (9,10,11,12) - I think it's a bit weird to have an even stream here. i'd suggest to remove (10) and extend (9) by 1/4 beat for better playing~
01:51:674 (5) - I'd prefer this rhythm. it's more fitting with music
http://puu.sh/16U6v
01:57:013 (1,2) - I filed to get 300 here at first play because i thought it was 1/2 rhythm here. it'd be better to change them into a slider or use larger spacing at least
[S.S]
00:00:318 (2,3) - Why is such a huge spacing here? it doesnt fit music at all and almost unreadable imo
00:08:708 (5) - Move this slider downward by 1grid to stack it under (3) correctly
00:55:106 (4,5) - Add claps here for consistency with 00:51:038 (6,7) -
01:02:860 (2) - Remove a repeat and add notes at 01:03:623 - and 01:03:877 - ? you will be able to add clap more consistently and i think it's not that good to follow the emphasis with a end of a slider
01:37:945 - Finish is too loud and doesnt fit very well here imo
01:58:792 (4) - Sounds better if you removed this clap. it's really too loud imo
All diffs are nicely made, and loved both Hard diffs especially <3 seems easier diffs need more works but they are still nice o.o anyway good luck~
[General]
Reduce Audio lead-in to 1000ms in all diffs except S.S. 1081+2000ms is too long imo
[DS's Easy]
00:07:691 (2) - Shorten this by 1/2 beat to follow the emphasis better? it'll be more exciting imo o.o
Also it should be placed at x:224 y:212 to make blanket better
00:09:216 (1,2,3) - a bit nazi though you can place them like this for better-looking
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/431705
00:13:792 - Remove this unused green line...? it wont effect anything though
00:18:369 (1) - I'd suggest to remove this note because it's too weak and almost inaudible what the note follows. so i guess it's kinda hard for beginners to get the rhythm due to the previous spinner
00:29:555 (1,3) - Maybe curve these sliders more? looks a lot better to me and flow will be better too
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/431710
00:33:623 (5) - Finish+clap is too loud orz would be best if you removed the clap here
00:37:691 (5) - Snaredrum doesnt exist here so clap doesnt fit as well. remove it please
00:47:860 (3) - I can hear a cymbal here, so maybe finish sounds nice
00:55:996 (1) - I'd rather add whistle at the beginning than the end. because the current position of whistles is a bit continuous and doesnt sound that good to me.
00:57:013 (2) - Oh, same as 00:33:623 (5) - . consider removing clap here
01:00:064 (3) - You can keep 1/1 rhythm here because of snaredrum at 01:00:572 - . steady beat enables beginners to get rhythm easily imo
01:04:131 (1) - This may be confusing for beginners because the spinner appears so suddenly.
so start the spinner at 01:04:258 - instead so that players can see it after (3) ends
01:07:182 (1) - I can hear some snaredrum sounds here, so add custom clap to both beginning and end?
01:20:911 (1) - Feels empty here due to lack of clap. why isnt clap here?
01:25:487 (2) - I'd move this slider leftward a bit for better flow
01:29:809 (3) - it would be better to follow 01:31:080 - here to keep claps consistent. remove a repeat from (3) and add 1/2 slider at 01:30:826 -
01:36:674 (1) - Why is spinner here? it's not fitting with the song at all and this section is totally mappable. would be best if you could remove it and remap here.
01:28:538 (1) - I can hear a cymbal here, so maybe finish sounds nice
01:47:352 - I guess you forget a clap here
01:50:911 (4) - Add a whistle here? just suggestion
01:52:945 (4) - ^ also same thing as 00:07:691 (2) -
01:57:013 (1) - Add finishes to both the beginning and end for the same reason as above
01:59:047 - As you can see all other diffs have a spinner here so add it on this diff too for consistency?
Oh if you agree with me about 01:04:131 (1) - , make it start at 01:59:174 - instead.
[Homu's Normal]
00:07:182 (3) - Feels a bit off to me, a better rhythm would be this;
http://puu.sh/14WMS
00:12:267 (4) - it's too weak and almost inaudible what this note follows. so try this rhythm
http://puu.sh/14X6o
00:17:352 - Add finis here
00:23:453 (4,5,6) - They look a bit random to me. try something like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/431737
00:33:114 - Add clap here instead of whistle to follow the snaredrum
00:35:148 - Add whistle instead of clap. it doesnt fit with music at all
00:35:657 (4,5,6) - Same as 00:23:453 (4,5,6) -
00:39:216 (4) - ^
00:41:758 (1) - Finish is really too loud here. better to remove it
00:43:792 (3) - ^
00:45:826 (1) - ^
00:48:877 (1) - This newcombo breaks your newcombo pattern. remove newcombo here
00:50:403 (4) - Add newcombo here due to change of melody
00:48:877 ~ 01:03:877 - Where are whistles? D:
00:50:403 - There's no snare here so clap sounds really weird to me.
00:52:436 - ^
00:54:470 - ^
00:56:504 - ^
01:15:826 (5) - Somehow it's on different place than 01:12:775 (1) - . it should be placed at x:260
01:18:369 - Finish is really too loud.
01:20:403 (5) - This combo is quite long imo. so add newcombo here?
01:22:945 (1) - Remove newcombo here if you changed ^
01:24:470 (4) - And add newcombo here
01:29:047 (1,2,3) - What's point of these sliders? feels very overmapped to me. try to simplify them
01:34:640 - Finish is too loud here
01:38:962 (1) - I can hear a cymbal here. try to add finish
01:39:216 (2) - Finish+clap is too loud and doesnt sound that great really. better to remove clap
01:46:843 (4,5,6) - same as 01:29:047 (1,2,3) -
[Hard]
00:03:114 (1,5) - Would make more sense if they were symmetrical
00:08:835 (4) - Add clap? the percussion is too strong to be ignored imo
00:08:199 (3) - This slider should start at 00:07:945 -
00:09:979 (2) - Move this note to x:208 y:308 or so? flow will be much better imo
00:11:758 (6) - Considering the other newcombos in this part, newcombo should be here
00:17:860 (1) - This newcombo seems unnecessary
00:31:589 (1) - sorry for nazi but it should be spaced at 1.0x
00:35:657 (1) - lol
00:43:792 (3) - not stacked correctly
00:40:742 (3) - Move this slider upward by 1grid to make it more symmetrical
00:48:877 (3) - This note shouldnt be here but at 00:49:131 -
01:07:818 (3) - Add clap here
01:23:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - really off rhythm. try this instead
http://puu.sh/14XuU
01:37:182 (3) - Map the middle of this slider? orz you should follow the emphasis imo
01:39:979 (1,2,3,4,5) - Dont make star formation manually orz use CTRL+SHIFT+D instead. the current one looks too wide orz
01:48:496 (8) - Add clap here
[Miya's Hard]
00:01:081 ~ 00:17:352 - i wonder why you didnt add whistles in this section like what you did for 01:40:742 ~ 01:57:013 -
00:15:318 (1) - Space this note at 1.3x instead? It'll be more fitting with the song imo
00:08:835 (4) - Add clap here? The snaredrum the note follows is very similar to 00:08:708 - and you have a clap there. so it should be more consistent
00:27:013 (3) - Add whistle here instead of clap. i think it would fit music best because there's no snare drum here
00:33:114 (8,9,10,11,12) - Hmm what's the point of this stream? i couldnt find any reason and sounds really overmapped to me
00:38:708 - Add a note here (or change the previous slider into triplet)? In fact the accent exists on whitetick in this section so it'll make more sense imo
01:03:623 (4) - Sorry for nazi mod x_x Move this note leftward by 1grid to make the blanket a bit better
01:23:199 (8) - Feels empty here, So add a whistle at the beginning to follow the piano?
01:23:580 (9,10,11,12) - I think it's a bit weird to have an even stream here. i'd suggest to remove (10) and extend (9) by 1/4 beat for better playing~
01:51:674 (5) - I'd prefer this rhythm. it's more fitting with music
http://puu.sh/16U6v
01:57:013 (1,2) - I filed to get 300 here at first play because i thought it was 1/2 rhythm here. it'd be better to change them into a slider or use larger spacing at least
[S.S]
00:00:318 (2,3) - Why is such a huge spacing here? it doesnt fit music at all and almost unreadable imo
00:08:708 (5) - Move this slider downward by 1grid to stack it under (3) correctly
00:55:106 (4,5) - Add claps here for consistency with 00:51:038 (6,7) -
01:02:860 (2) - Remove a repeat and add notes at 01:03:623 - and 01:03:877 - ? you will be able to add clap more consistently and i think it's not that good to follow the emphasis with a end of a slider
01:37:945 - Finish is too loud and doesnt fit very well here imo
01:58:792 (4) - Sounds better if you removed this clap. it's really too loud imo
All diffs are nicely made, and loved both Hard diffs especially <3 seems easier diffs need more works but they are still nice o.o anyway good luck~
