This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012년 7월 7일 토요일 at 오전 1:17:12

Artist: StylipS
Title: MIRACLE RUSH (TV Size)
Source: Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A
BPM: 168
Filesize: 15132kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.42 stars, 165 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 316 notes)
3. Normal (3.22 stars, 122 notes)

Download: StylipS - MIRACLE RUSH (TV Size)
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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It's my first Beatmap.

Thnaks!

Normal - Done!
Hard - Done!
Insane - Done!

Just wanted to give you your first mod


General

Set the preview point to the Kiai time please

Unable letter box during breaks and count down please

Set for tags: " anime opening op


Normal


00:02:139 (3,4) don't you think of this sliderslides sounding ugly?

00:04:014 (1) start this spinner on red tick

00:16:782 (7) this slider breaks the flow maybe do like this: http://puu.sh/FQRZ

00:16:425 (5) add NC

00:17:496 (1) remove NC

00:36:067 (5) add NC

00:52:139 (4,5) no overlaps on a Normal Diff please (and not such ugly ones )

01:01:067 HERE does the kiai time starts and don't start it during spinner!

01:11:067 end Kiai here and start it 01:12:496 for a fontaine

01:17:057 please map this part here

01:23:925 Kiai ends here

01:12:228 unsnapped timing section




Hard


00:11:782 this break is pointless - remove it

00:12:317 this part is too loud reduce the volume

00:22:496 remove break

your preview point is not consistant set it on exactly same as on Normal



I think I stop here

You need work but the rhythm is pretty good for your first map


Good luck~

Konei wrote:

Just wanted to give you your first mod


General

Set the preview point to the Kiai time please

Unable letter box during breaks and count down please

Set for tags: " anime opening op


Normal


00:02:139 (3,4) don't you think of this sliderslides sounding ugly?

00:04:014 (1) start this spinner on red tick

00:16:782 (7) this slider breaks the flow maybe do like this: http://puu.sh/FQRZ

00:16:425 (5) add NC

00:17:496 (1) remove NC

00:36:067 (5) add NC

00:52:139 (4,5) no overlaps on a Normal Diff please (and not such ugly ones )

01:01:067 HERE does the kiai time starts and don't start it during spinner!

01:11:067 end Kiai here and start it 01:12:496 for a fontaine

01:17:057 please map this part here

01:23:925 Kiai ends here

01:12:228 unsnapped timing section




Hard


00:11:782 this break is pointless - remove it

00:12:317 this part is too loud reduce the volume

00:22:496 remove break

your preview point is not consistant set it on exactly same as on Normal



I think I stop here

You need work but the rhythm is pretty good for your first map


Good luck~

thank you for moderation ^^

Love this song!
there are my some suggestion , no need to follow if you dont really like

[General]
PreviewTime: 60353
Song Setup -> Storyboarding -> Disable countdown
Song Setup -> Audio -> Music Track Lead-in > 2s

[Insane]
00:06:782 (5) - uneven spacing?
00:08:211 (5) - ^
00:13:746 (7,1) - start the slider there following vocal?
00:14:996 (6) - I think new combo should start here following vocal
00:15:175 (x) - add note?
00:16:603 (12) - new combo
00:21:067 (1) - ^
00:21:782 (X) - add note and new combo
00:24:103 (x) - feel there should be a note
00:25:710 (2) - clap?
00:26:425 (5) - new combo and I think it can be a jump
00:29:282 (6) - ^
00:32:496 (6) - new combo
00:37:317 (x) - note?
00:37:853 (9) - new combo and remove the next new combo
00:38:389 (2) - new combo here
00:40:710 (2) - ^
00:41:246 (4) - ^
00:45:710 (1,2,3) - no need to slow down here
00:48:925 (10) - new combo and remove the next new combo
00:54:817 (8) - new combo
00:58:925 (1,2,3) - ^
01:06:782 (3) - ^
01:08:032 (x) - note?
01:11:246, 01:11:425 - note with finish?
01:20:175 (x) - note?
01:21:067 (spinner) - end at 01:22:317
01:25:353 (6) - new combo
01:27:853 (spinner) - mute it ? ( add a timing section at 01:29:192, reduce volume to 5%)
01:29:282 (Timing section) - add a timing section to close KIAI time

[Hard]
00:16:782~00:17:853 - I think you better map it, I feel something missing when I play
01:23:032 - ^
01:28:032 (1) - End this spinner same as insane?

[Normal]
00:06:067 (x) - I think new combo should start here
00:08:210 (1) - why new combo here?
00:18:567 (Break) - Players will hate this break really. (I tried this before)

00:26:782 (1) - new combo
00:32:496 (4) - new combo and remove the next new combo
00:36:425 (3,4) - really hard to read for beginner
00:38:210 (6) - NC
00:43:925 (6) - NC here
01:11:782 (x) - better map it
01:17:139 (1) - too close after the spinner.. in my view, I would change this spinner into notes and sliders
01:23:925 (6) - NC
01:25:353 (8) - NC
01:28:032 (1) - Change to spinner same as insane?

aesopl19193 wrote:

Love this song!
there are my some suggestion , no need to follow if you dont really like

[General]
PreviewTime: 60353
Song Setup -> Storyboarding -> Disable countdown
Song Setup -> Audio -> Music Track Lead-in > 2s

[Insane]
00:06:782 (5) - uneven spacing?
00:08:211 (5) - ^
00:13:746 (7,1) - start the slider there following vocal?
00:14:996 (6) - I think new combo should start here following vocal
00:15:175 (x) - add note?
00:16:603 (12) - new combo
00:21:067 (1) - ^
00:21:782 (X) - add note and new combo
00:24:103 (x) - feel there should be a note
00:25:710 (2) - clap?
00:26:425 (5) - new combo and I think it can be a jump
00:29:282 (6) - ^
00:32:496 (6) - new combo
00:37:317 (x) - note?
00:37:853 (9) - new combo and remove the next new combo
00:38:389 (2) - new combo here
00:40:710 (2) - ^
00:41:246 (4) - ^
00:45:710 (1,2,3) - no need to slow down here
00:48:925 (10) - new combo and remove the next new combo
00:54:817 (8) - new combo
00:58:925 (1,2,3) - ^
01:06:782 (3) - ^
01:08:032 (x) - note?
01:11:246, 01:11:425 - note with finish?
01:20:175 (x) - note?
01:21:067 (spinner) - end at 01:22:317
01:25:353 (6) - new combo
01:27:853 (spinner) - mute it ? ( add a timing section at 01:29:192, reduce volume to 5%)
01:29:282 (Timing section) - add a timing section to close KIAI time

[Hard]
00:16:782~00:17:853 - I think you better map it, I feel something missing when I play
01:23:032 - ^
01:28:032 (1) - End this spinner same as insane?

[Normal]
00:06:067 (x) - I think new combo should start here
00:08:210 (1) - why new combo here?
00:18:567 (Break) - Players will hate this break really. (I tried this before)

00:26:782 (1) - new combo
00:32:496 (4) - new combo and remove the next new combo
00:36:425 (3,4) - really hard to read for beginner
00:38:210 (6) - NC
00:43:925 (6) - NC here
01:11:782 (x) - better map it
01:17:139 (1) - too close after the spinner.. in my view, I would change this spinner into notes and sliders
01:23:925 (6) - NC
01:25:353 (8) - NC
01:28:032 (1) - Change to spinner same as insane?

thnak you for moderation about my beatmap!

Sorry for the late reply, my PC was on the other half of the world this month...

[Normal]
Too much overlapping. If you press ALT+ scroll mouse up you will be able to raise the beat spacing, how about putting it to 1.0x for example? It will allow you to have more beats without overlapping their spacing. I've used 0.8x for modding below just in case you decide not to.
00:03:139 (3,4) - Flip both sliders vertically(Click on the slider then Edit-->Flip Vertically). Then (3) x:208 and y:188 and (4) x:328 and y:100 (Those are coordinates so when you click any note once they will show in yellow below beat snap divisor, in case you don't know) I pointed this out so that you use the whole grid.
00:14:996 (4,5) - Again you are cramping up the notes in one space. Space them out so that they do not go back to the middle but to the low left grid box and then you can begin the combo what begins at 00:16:425 in the high left grid box then continue with the combo after that one going to the high right grid box. Click on this URL to see what I mean if you are still confused: Click.
00:21:067 (7) - Do a different shape, this one is weird. Try something like I've done in the screenshot above. And google Delicious Slider Guide if you need help with that.
Lots of more ugly overlapping points I would change such as 00:26:782. You should put it higher so that it does not overlap. At 0.8x everything overlaps if its 1/1 but even if you chose to keep it 0.8x you should only overlap it with the previous note because 2 overlaps make it too hard to see and it does not look good especially on normal, so by putting it higher you are not overlapping it with (4). This is a sample fix for overlapping in your beatmap, try to apply it when your notes are overlapping with more than 2 notes.
You also not fully using the grid. Example: (3) at 00:28:210. You should from now on use the left side of the grid because you just used the right but instead you going back to the right side. Try to fix these sort of problems.

[Hard]
00:02:675 (1) - Flip vertically then x:256 and y:172.
00:03:567 (2,3) - x:316 and y:120
00:13:925 (5) - Shape it so that it does not overlap with (4)
00:18:210 (1,2,3) - Make these lot travel above the previous pink combo to get to (4).
00:26:425 (7,8) - Don't overlap with previous notes in this combo.
00:57:853 (1) - Prev and Next spacing should be the same.
01:20:175 - No new combo
01:23:210 (7) - Different shape, this one is weird.

[Insane]
00:15:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - They NEED to have the same spacing. I don't think I saw any already ranked map do that, so I don't think this will get through. Same-wise, just because it's Insane does not mean spacing does not matter.
00:34:639 - New combo
00:42:139 - No new combo
00:42:496 - New combo
01:12:492 (9) - Spacing the same as the rest of the combo
01:27:496 (5) - Finish at the end
01:27:675 (6) - Finish

Needs some fixing with the spacing and slider shapes at times. There is quite a lot of overlapping which does not look good too but the beat is good and there seemd to be no problem with the right rythm in this beatmap, so I would say that you just need to focus on the spacing for now

Jebok wrote:

Sorry for the late reply, my PC was on the other half of the world this month...

[Normal]
Too much overlapping. If you press ALT+ scroll mouse up you will be able to raise the beat spacing, how about putting it to 1.0x for example? It will allow you to have more beats without overlapping their spacing. I've used 0.8x for modding below just in case you decide not to.
00:03:139 (3,4) - Flip both sliders vertically(Click on the slider then Edit-->Flip Vertically). Then (3) x:208 and y:188 and (4) x:328 and y:100 (Those are coordinates so when you click any note once they will show in yellow below beat snap divisor, in case you don't know) I pointed this out so that you use the whole grid.
00:14:996 (4,5) - Again you are cramping up the notes in one space. Space them out so that they do not go back to the middle but to the low left grid box and then you can begin the combo what begins at 00:16:425 in the high left grid box then continue with the combo after that one going to the high right grid box. Click on this URL to see what I mean if you are still confused: Click.
00:21:067 (7) - Do a different shape, this one is weird. Try something like I've done in the screenshot above. And google Delicious Slider Guide if you need help with that.
Lots of more ugly overlapping points I would change such as 00:26:782. You should put it higher so that it does not overlap. At 0.8x everything overlaps if its 1/1 but even if you chose to keep it 0.8x you should only overlap it with the previous note because 2 overlaps make it too hard to see and it does not look good especially on normal, so by putting it higher you are not overlapping it with (4). This is a sample fix for overlapping in your beatmap, try to apply it when your notes are overlapping with more than 2 notes.
You also not fully using the grid. Example: (3) at 00:28:210. You should from now on use the left side of the grid because you just used the right but instead you going back to the right side. Try to fix these sort of problems.

[Hard]
00:02:675 (1) - Flip vertically then x:256 and y:172.
00:03:567 (2,3) - x:316 and y:120
00:13:925 (5) - Shape it so that it does not overlap with (4)
00:18:210 (1,2,3) - Make these lot travel above the previous pink combo to get to (4).
00:26:425 (7,8) - Don't overlap with previous notes in this combo.
00:57:853 (1) - Prev and Next spacing should be the same.
01:20:175 - No new combo
01:23:210 (7) - Different shape, this one is weird.

[Insane]
00:15:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - They NEED to have the same spacing. I don't think I saw any already ranked map do that, so I don't think this will get through. Same-wise, just because it's Insane does not mean spacing does not matter.
00:34:639 - New combo
00:42:139 - No new combo
00:42:496 - New combo
01:12:492 (9) - Spacing the same as the rest of the combo
01:27:496 (5) - Finish at the end
01:27:675 (6) - Finish

Needs some fixing with the spacing and slider shapes at times. There is quite a lot of overlapping which does not look good too but the beat is good and there seemd to be no problem with the right rythm in this beatmap, so I would say that you just need to focus on the spacing for now

Ok!! Thanks