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AiRI - Dreamer (TV Size)

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10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
request from my queue :3

[General]
~~

[Easy]
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 00:32:754: last point to x264 y168 would be nice~
Rhythms
  1. 00:45:254: move the nc to 00:45:969 ?
  2. 01:08:469: add finish on the slider tail?
[GiNa's Normal]
Rhythms
  1. 01:04:362: remove note?
[Hard]
Rhythms
  1. 00:19:183: add whistle on the slider tail?
  2. 00:19:540: ^
  3. 00:20:076: whistle?
  4. 00:25:254: whistle on the slider tail?
  5. 00:25:612: whistle on the reverse ?
  6. 00:27:754: whistle on the slider tail?
  7. 00:28:112: ^
  8. 00:28:647: whistle?
  9. 00:30:612: whistle on tail?
  10. 00:30:969: whistle on the reverse ?
  11. 00:31:504: whistle?
  12. 00:38:469: remove whistle on the slider end
  13. 01:12:933: finish on the head?
[DN Angel's]
Rhythms
  1. 00:42:219: add note?
  2. 00:45:076: whistle on the head?
  3. 00:45:433: ^
thats all I can find, good luck ^w^
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
Thanks mod :)
Crok425
262 posts
Joined October 2010
Crok425
Hi, from the modding queue. Sorry for the delay, I'm lazy :P. Sorry if it's short, it seems like the map is looking perfect already.

[Easy]
You're overusing the whistle sound in the first part of the Kiai mode. Try to use less since hearing it over again it's kind of... annoying.
I can't really find anything because it's a well made map.

[GINa's Normal]
00:19:183 Add a circle there.
00:25:254 ^
01:08:112 ^ ... maybe...
01:17:040 ^ I don't like that empty spot. Put a clap sound also.
01:25:076 Add a slider of the same length as the next one. There is a vocal in that part, you should add it.
Done.

[Hard]
Same as easy... although not as overused... still, check it. I kinda think this song doesn't goes well with the whistle... but you can ignore that :).
... And so again... I didn't find anything... damn...

[D.N.Angel]
A... nope, nothing either. Ignore.
__________________

And that's all I can do. Sorry for the shortness, but I hope it's helpful enough and I wish you good lcuk on getting this ranked.
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,790 posts
Joined February 2010
-kevincela-
Hi :D

[Easy]

  1. 00:14:183 (5) - Remove the repeat and instead move the slider at 00:14:719 - or 00:14:897 - ? Imho,this would be a better choice here.
  2. 00:45:612 - Add a note here? It follows in a really good way the singer's voice :D
[GiNa's Normal]

  1. 00:50:076 (2) - Put this at x:240 y:176,so that this can countinue the flow with 00:48:826 (1) - in a better way?
  2. 00:56:862 (3) - If you want to make a better blanket with 00:57:397 (1) - ,then I suggest you to move the last waypoint at x:320 y:132
  3. 01:21:326 (2) - Little suggestion here: Move this at x:204 y:225?
[Hard]

  1. 00:36:683 (3) - CTRL+R here?
[D.N.Angel]

  • Really nothing to say,really good work here ^^
That's it. That's rather a short mod,really good map and good luck! ^^
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
Thanks Crok425's & -kevincela-'s mod :) :)

Fixed & updated
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn
hi there, sorry I'm late >_<

Easy: fine

Normal:

01:17:040 - add note?

Hard:

00:15:969 (5) - maybe put finish on repeat instead of whistle? it might match the cymbal in the song better o-o
00:53:112 (1) - remove finish? since there's no finishes in the rest of this part ><

D.N.Angel:

00:20:969 (3) - add whistle?
00:48:647 (4) - add custom soft 1 whistle like before?
01:11:862 (2) - maybe add whistle here?

nice map, good luck =w=
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
Thanks pieguy1372's mod

All fixed :) :)
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Chewin
Hi EmPao, mod request from my modding queue >w<

[General]
I suggest you to change this BG because Andrea has already used it for his mapset: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55494
To distinguish this map from the other one, it's better if you change it then.. (:
Add Evergreen to the tags?


[Easy]
00:18:469 (2) - I don't know but this slider doesn't convince me. I mean that beginners would think to find a rhythm like this:

I think it would be better to play for them, especially after a spinner's end
00:48:826 (1) - Instead of whistle here I would use finish on this slider's head, especially because it would sound perfectly together with 00:50:076 (2)'s finishes
00:51:683 (1,2) - You could make them symmetric, I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402472
I have fixed the spacing of the next elements too, then just copy this code:
308,92,51683,6,0,B|452:92,2,144,4|2|8
208,92,53112,2,0,B|64:92,2,144,4|2|8
196,188,54540,6,0,B|256:225|256:317|196:348,2,192,4|2|2
144,268,56326,1,8
92,188,56683,1,0
144,108,57040,1,8
240,108,57397,6,0,B|284:84|332:108,1,96,12|8
408,164,58112,2,0,B|432:212|408:256,1,96,8|8
332,316,58826,2,0,B|284:340|240:316,1,96,8|8
164,256,59540,2,0,B|140:208|164:164,1,96,8|8
01:00:254 (1) - Remove finish, it sounds too loud. Just a finish on 01:03:112 (1) is already perfect imo
01:11:326 (5) - New combo
I don't like this hitsound normal pattern you used during the kiai time D:
Good map btw :3

[GiNa's Normal]
00:18:647 (1) - Useless new combo, remove it
00:20:254 (1) - Finish here also for consistency
00:24:362 (1) - Remove new combo
00:26:147 (1) - To keep consistency with the previous part you should move this circle 1/2 earlier adding a finish on it, the rhythm is much better
00:30:076 (1) - Remove new combo
00:31:683 (1) - Finish on the slider's start
00:37:397 (1) - Finish
00:50:076 (2,3) - I would add finishes on (2) and on the (3)'s end. It would fit the music better especially together with 00:51:683 (1)
00:57:397 (1) - Finish on the head
00:58:826 (1) - ^
01:04:362 (1) - What about to use this rhythm instead that follows the vocal? I would put circle first and the slider after it

01:18:647 (4,1) - Same of 00:50:076 (2,3), these finishes are awesome
Nice, just small suggestions about hitsounds

[Hard]
00:02:219 (2) - Remove whistle?
Fine

[D.N.Angel]

Rename to D.N.Angel's Insane

01:00:255 (1) - What about to improve a bit this ugly slider's shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402506
256,192,60255,6,0,B|188:220|208:124|260:88|400:156|248:324,1,322,0|4
Just this

That's all, good mapset.
I wish you good luck with rank then ;3 Have my star :)
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

Chewin wrote:

Hi EmPao, mod request from my modding queue >w<

[General]
I suggest you to change this BG because Andrea has already used it for his mapset: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55494
To distinguish this map from the other one, it's better if you change it then.. (: I tried to find it ... But I cant find the other BG orz...
Add Evergreen to the tags?

[Easy]
00:18:469 (2) - I don't know but this slider doesn't convince me. I mean that beginners would think to find a rhythm like this:

I think it would be better to play for them, especially after a spinner's end Fixed
00:48:826 (1) - Instead of whistle here I would use finish on this slider's head, especially because it would sound perfectly together with 00:50:076 (2)'s finishes ^
00:51:683 (1,2) - You could make them symmetric, I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402472 Okay
I have fixed the spacing of the next elements too, then just copy this code: 
308,92,51683,6,0,B|452:92,2,144,4|2|8
208,92,53112,2,0,B|64:92,2,144,4|2|8
196,188,54540,6,0,B|256:225|256:317|196:348,2,192,4|2|2
144,268,56326,1,8
92,188,56683,1,0
144,108,57040,1,8
240,108,57397,6,0,B|284:84|332:108,1,96,12|8
408,164,58112,2,0,B|432:212|408:256,1,96,8|8
332,316,58826,2,0,B|284:340|240:316,1,96,8|8
164,256,59540,2,0,B|140:208|164:164,1,96,8|8
01:00:254 (1) - Remove finish, it sounds too loud. Just a finish on 01:03:112 (1) is already perfect imo ^
01:11:326 (5) - New combo ^
I don't like this hitsound normal pattern you used during the kiai time D: some people tell me this problem too.. so I decide to changed the hitsound to soft-whistle. (maybe it will be better now...orz)
Good map btw :3
[Hard]
00:02:219 (2) - Remove whistle? Fixed
Fine

That's all, good mapset. thanks mod, your mod is helpful xD
I wish you good luck with rank then ;3 Have my star :)
Thanks mod & star :) :)
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
waiting for GiNa & DarknessAngel check those mods ...and I will try to find MAT :P
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
thank for modding,everyone ~ :)

http://puu.sh/W9XJ


To Pao :
這圖的確是時候找MAT了
sry沒能給你mod ><
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
updated !!

Thanks DarknessAngel xD
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa
Totally in a busy life now T.T
Anyways, here
http://puu.sh/WjjR
I fixed what I think is necessary/make sense
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
okay~updated !!

Thanks to GiNa

yeah~
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
Easy
加个那么长的BREAK是要偷懒？

NORMAL
^

HARD
00:59:719 (3) - 这全部CLAP会呕的

INSANE不MOD了肯定坑人
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
@Sun Rainbow :

就算要騙KD也請別用吐嘈語氣好麼...
老實說如果是我我就不會給...


@ Pao :

I forgot to fix this,can you help me ?
這樣就不用傳檔案，我覺得方便點:p

Chewin wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

01:00:255 (1) - What about to improve a bit this ugly slider's shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402506
256,192,60255,6,0,B|188:220|208:124|260:88|400:156|248:324,1,322,0|4
Just this
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Easy
加个那么长的BREAK是要偷懒？前面的節奏比較複雜,在簡單的diff中我覺得不好做 所以沒做 用一個note帶過>_>

HARD
00:59:719 (3) - 这全部CLAP会呕的 I follow the drum
:)
Thanks mod

DarknessAngel wrote:

@ Pao :

I forgot to fix this,can you help me ?
這樣就不用傳檔案，我覺得方便點:p

Chewin wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

01:00:255 (1) - What about to improve a bit this ugly slider's shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402506
256,192,60255,6,0,B|188:220|208:124|260:88|400:156|248:324,1,322,0|4
Just this
Okay~

找不到MAT ;_;
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Easy
加个那么长的BREAK是要偷懒？

NORMAL
^
你的語氣聽起來像是來吵架的
reason同Pao，所以無修改

In return, 給個那麼短的MOD是要偷懶？
Btw, I agreed with DA's statement.
Spread Wings_old
67 posts
Joined May 2011
Spread Wings_old


Sorry for delay, I have to share the pc with a selfish sister at home :|

[General]

Clear!

[Easy]

AR+1 plays better in this diff.

  1. 00:08:469 - Add a note here? Feel empty without a one here.
  2. 00:23:112 - ^
  3. 00:28:469 - ^
  4. 01:00:254 (1) - End spinner in 01:01:504 and add a note in 01:02:754.
No spacing issues beacuse spacing is good, but consider "add a note". Feel some parts empty.

[Gina's Normal]

Looks good.

[Hard]

  1. 00:03:826 (1,2) - Try this: http://puu.sh/ZcYh
  2. 00:06:504 - Add a note here? Feel empty without a one here.
  3. 00:49:719 (2) - Finish in End
  4. 00:50:433 (3) - ^
[D.N.Angel]

Good

I'm tired for now, will sleep.
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
Thanks mod^_^
Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
1,731 posts
Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
hellow

[D.N.Angel]
00:05:612 (1) - Unexpected, threw me off twice.
00:17:219 (1,2) - plays weird since there isnt any sound here: 00:17:487 - in the song 00:17:487 -
that's abotu it, lovely diff

[GiNa's Normal]
00:25:612 (6) - I suggest replace by single note, I think sounds better
00:33:112 (1) - threw me off, maybe delete the slider and add notes at: 00:33:290 - 00:33:469 -

[Easy]
Lovely diff, maybe the notes after slider could enter later thou.

That's all
Good mapset
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
Thanks mod & star :D
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

Lizbeth wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
00:05:612 (1) - Unexpected, threw me off twice. //hmm...I think it made a ;) good ffect of emphasis by the jump and NC
I wanna keep it ><
00:17:219 (1,2) - plays weird since there isnt any sound here: 00:17:487 - in the song 00:17:487 - //it seemed that I wanted to follow the vocal a bit,ok fixed
that's abotu it, lovely diff
thank for modding ~ :)




林杯筆電沒puush所以sor請你辛苦點:p
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Dreamer.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 62397
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Dreamer (TV Size)
Artist:AiRI
Creator:EmPao
Version:D.N.Angel
Source:TARI TARI
Tags:opening Takagaki Ayahi Seto Asami Hayami Saori gina darknessangel

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.84
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,0,"tariop.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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364,192,2219,6,0,B|380:240|364:284,1,92,2|0
256,284,2754,2,0,B|256:192,1,92,2|0
148,192,3290,2,0,B|132:240|148:284,1,92
180,328,3826,5,2
228,356,4004,1,0
284,356,4183,1,0
332,328,4362,1,0
364,282,4540,2,0,B|380:240|364:192,1,92,2|0
364,136,5076,2,0,B|384:116|404:104,1,46,0|2
456,100,5433,1,0
256,192,5612,5,0
256,192,5790,1,0
184,88,5969,6,0,B|96:60|0:80,1,184,4|8
75,183,6505,2,2,B|163:211|259:191,1,184,2|0
408,104,7040,2,0,B|364:84|320:84,1,92,8|0
318,300,7397,2,0,B|364:300|408:280,1,92,2|0
176,272,7755,6,0,B|92:312,1,92
104,192,8112,1,2
104,192,8290,1,0
176,112,8469,2,0,B|92:72,1,92,8|0
236,192,8826,6,0,B|420:192,1,184,4|8
332,272,9362,2,0,B|144:272,1,184,2|0
148,112,9897,2,0,B|332:112,1,184,8|2
420,60,10433,6,0,B|380:28|336:16,1,92,0|8
340,208,10790,2,0,B|380:196|420:164,1,92,0|2
256,252,11147,1,0
331,112,11326,1,8
181,112,11504,5,8
181,112,11594,1,8
181,112,11683,2,0,B|96:80|0:84,1,184,4|8
124,240,12219,2,0,B|212:212|272:132,1,184,2|0
44,168,12754,2,0,B|30:259|76:348,1,184,8|2
435,348,13469,2,0,B|481:259|468:168,1,184,8|0
256,60,14183,1,2
256,192,14540,12,4,15969
256,352,16326,5,8
340,268,16504,2,0,B|308:232|256:227|204:232|172:268,1,184,4|0
256,352,17040,1,2
388,344,17219,6,0,B|416:316|424:284,1,68.9999979436398,0|4
472,216,17576,2,0,B|472:180|487:150,1,69.0000026321412,0|2
464,68,17933,2,0,B|424:76|392:76,1,68.9999979436398
244,40,18290,2,0,B|248:84|272:104,1,68.9999979436398,2|0
276,256,18647,2,0,B|308:240|332:212,1,68.9999979436398,0|2
164,120,19004,6,0,B|128:108|92:112,2,68.9999979436398,0|2|2
124,192,19540,1,0
96,272,19719,2,0,B|128:276|164:264,1,68.9999979436398,0|2
124,192,20076,1,0
124,192,20254,2,0,B|56:192,1,68.9999979436398,2|0
232,320,20612,5,2
208,176,20790,1,0
148,336,20969,1,0
264,240,21147,1,0
96,272,21326,6,0,B|60:284|36:308,1,68.9999979436398,2|0
416,272,21862,2,0,B|452:284|476:308,1,68.9999979436398,0|2
256,84,22397,1,2
256,84,22754,2,0,B|256:220,1,137.99999588728,0|6
320,304,23290,6,0,B|352:288|384:260,1,68.9999979436398,0|2
176,192,23647,2,0,B|152:168|140:133,1,68.9999979436398
336,192,24004,2,0,B|360:168|371:133,1,68.9999979436398,2|0
192,304,24362,2,0,B|160:288|128:260,1,68.9999979436398,0|2
76,180,24719,2,0,B|48:204|32:240,1,68.9999979436398,0|2
256,236,25076,5,2
300,168,25254,1,0
212,168,25433,1,0
336,240,25612,2,0,B|368:216|380:176,1,68.9999979436398,2|0
176,240,25969,2,0,B|144:216|132:176,1,68.9999979436398,2|0
256,92,26326,5,2
256,236,26504,1,0
344,84,26683,2,0,B|332:48|308:24,1,68.9999979436398
168,84,27040,2,0,B|180:48|204:24,1,68.9999979436398,2|0
256,92,27397,2,0,B|256:160,1,68.9999979436398
332,196,27754,1,2
256,236,27933,1,0
180,196,28112,1,2
340,112,28290,5,0
180,196,28469,1,0
84,232,28647,6,0,B|112:272|152:296,1,92,0|4
180,196,29004,2,0,B|152:156|112:132,1,92,0|0
236,276,29362,1,0
212,120,29540,1,2
84,232,29719,1,2
272,192,29897,2,0,B|316:176|364:180,1,92,0|0
460,154,30254,6,0,B|439:113|399:85,1,92,2|0
361,179,30612,2,0,B|369:223|400:261,1,92
151,179,30969,2,0,B|142:223|111:261,1,92,2|2
52,154,31326,2,0,B|73:113|113:85,1,92
212,104,31683,1,2
52,154,31862,5,0
192,272,32040,1,0
212,104,32219,2,0,B|172:80|124:88,1,92,0|2
256,192,32576,1,2
152,180,32754,1,0
300,104,32933,6,0,B|388:72|488:80,1,184
396,192,33469,1,0
396,192,33826,1,2
496,184,34004,1,2
452,276,34183,2,0,B|380:332|280:340,1,184,0|4
72,272,34719,6,0,B|96:320|132:344,1,92
92,180,35076,2,0,B|44:168|-4:180,1,92,0|2
164,248,35433,1,2
0,178,35612,1,0
120,88,35790,2,0,B|156:60|200:40,1,92,0|2
392,88,36147,2,0,B|356:60|312:40,1,92
200,136,36505,5,0
352,216,36683,2,0,B|372:260|372:312,1,92,2|2
160,216,37040,2,0,B|140:260|140:312,1,92
312,136,37397,5,2
160,216,37576,1,0
352,216,37755,1,0
200,136,37933,1,0
400,140,38112,2,0,B|420:100|412:48,1,92,2|2
256,72,38469,1,0
99,50,38647,2,0,B|92:100|112:140,1,92,0|2
302,204,39005,5,0
302,204,39094,1,2
302,204,39183,2,0,B|254:188|211:206,1,92
360,284,39540,2,0,B|388:244|396:200,1,92,8|0
116,200,39897,2,0,B|124:244|152:284,1,92,8|0
256,328,40255,5,4
256,56,40790,1,0
256,56,40969,2,0,B|256:152,1,92,2|8
360,248,41683,6,0,B|404:224|448:220,1,92,2|0
152,248,42397,2,0,B|108:224|64:220,1,92,2|0
12,144,42933,1,8
76,80,43112,6,0,B|120:56|164:52,1,92,2|0
256,56,43647,2,0,B|240:100|252:148,1,92,2|0
408,312,44362,1,8
408,312,44540,2,0,B|424:268|412:220,1,92,2|0
380,80,45076,6,0,B|404:68|428:64,1,46,2|2
328,168,45433,2,0,B|304:180|280:184,1,46,2|2
168,112,45790,1,0
168,112,45969,6,0,B|128:88|80:88,1,92,6|0
80,296,46683,2,0,B|128:296|168:272,1,92,2|2
256,192,47219,5,8
344,272,47397,2,0,B|384:296|432:296,1,92,2|0
432,88,48112,2,0,B|384:88|344:112,1,92,2|0
256,192,48647,1,2
168,112,48826,6,0,B|128:88|80:88,1,92,2|8
84,180,49362,2,0,B|84:232|68:276,1,92,0|0
172,340,49897,1,0
300,288,50076,6,0,B|364:264|436:272,1,137.99999588728,4|0
340,176,50612,1,2
216,116,50790,2,0,B|152:92|80:100,1,137.99999588728,4|0
188,228,51326,5,0
232,240,51415,1,8
276,232,51505,1,0
316,212,51594,1,2
340,176,51683,6,0,B|380:204|392:248|380:300|328:328,1,184,4|0
188,228,52219,2,0,B|148:200|136:156|148:96|200:76,1,184,2|0
260,156,52755,1,0
336,88,52933,6,0,B|304:48|264:32,1,92,0|2
264,284,53290,2,0,B|304:268|336:228,1,92,0|0
260,156,53647,1,0
164,120,53826,1,2
180,220,54005,1,2
260,156,54183,1,0
100,44,54362,5,0
240,56,54540,1,2
84,180,54719,1,0
260,156,54897,2,0,B|308:144|336:104,1,92
164,120,55255,2,0,B|156:168|180:208,1,92,2|2
368,324,55612,1,0
368,324,55790,6,0,B|428:256|412:148,1,184,2|0
408,52,56326,2,0,B|452:60|492:88,1,92
320,160,56683,1,0
228,116,56862,1,2
136,72,57040,6,0,B|92:56|44:60,1,92
116,192,57397,2,0,B|208:192,1,92,4|0
136,312,57755,2,0,B|92:328|44:324,1,92
116,192,58112,5,0
116,192,58290,1,0
256,300,58469,1,0
256,300,58647,1,0
256,84,58826,1,0
256,84,59005,1,0
396,192,59183,2,0,B|488:192,2,92
256,192,59719,5,0
256,192,59808,1,8
256,192,59897,1,0
256,192,59987,1,0
256,192,60076,1,0
256,192,60165,1,8
256,192,60255,6,0,B|188:220|208:124|260:88|400:156|248:324,1,322,0|4
128,92,61862,6,0,B|156:52|200:36,1,92,0|2
384,92,62219,2,0,B|356:52|312:36,1,92,0|2
256,120,62576,5,0
248,156,62665,1,0
252,192,62755,1,0
264,228,62844,1,0
288,256,62933,1,0
320,272,63022,1,0
356,276,63112,6,0,B|400:260|432:220,1,92,4|0
156,276,63469,2,0,B|112:260|80:220,1,92,10|0
80,128,63826,2,0,B|32:136|0:172,1,92,8|2
172,180,64183,1,8
172,180,64362,2,0,B|204:212|252:228|300:212|340:180,1,184,2|0
512,172,64897,2,0,B|480:136|432:128,1,92,10|0
429,222,65255,2,0,B|400:260|356:276,2,92,8|2|10
256,92,65790,5,0
136,64,65969,2,0,B|140:108|172:148,1,92,0|2
376,64,66326,2,0,B|372:108|340:148,1,92,8|2
200,272,66683,1,8
312,272,66862,2,0,B|296:224|260:196,1,92,2|8
108,240,67219,6,0,B|96:285|120:329,1,92,2|0
312,272,67576,1,0
200,272,67755,1,10
391,329,67933,2,0,B|415:285|404:240,1,92,2|8
252,196,68290,2,0,B|216:224|200:272,1,92,0|8
440,48,68826,6,0,B|256:48,1,184,4|8
72,120,69362,2,0,B|256:120,1,184,2|0
356,144,69897,1,8
428,216,70076,2,0,B|452:176|456:128,1,92,2|0
356,144,70433,1,2
328,240,70612,2,0,B|332:288|360:328,2,92,8|2|8
240,192,71147,2,0,B|140:192,1,92,2|10
68,252,71505,6,0,B|104:284|156:296,1,92,0|2
148,89,71862,1,2
148,89,71951,1,0
148,89,72040,2,0,B|104:100|68:132,1,92,8|2
436,248,72576,1,8
436,248,72755,1,8
380,332,72933,6,0,B|340:304|324:256|332:208|372:172,1,184,2|2
416,80,73469,2,0,B|456:108|472:156,1,92,8|2
303,63,73826,2,0,B|255:51|211:63,1,92,0|2
96,80,74183,1,8
96,80,74362,5,0
96,80,74451,1,8
96,80,74540,2,0,B|56:108|40:156,1,92,4|0
256,156,74897,1,8
256,156,75255,2,0,B|256:248,1,92,8|2
340,88,75612,1,8
340,88,75790,2,0,B|300:56|252:40|204:56|172:92,1,184,2|2
348,184,76326,2,0,B|392:168|428:136,1,92,10|0
164,184,76683,2,0,B|120:168|84:136,1,92,8|2
256,156,77040,5,10
256,256,77219,1,0
168,308,77397,2,0,B|128:332|76:336,1,92,0|2
344,308,77755,2,0,B|384:332|436:336,1,92,8|2
456,192,78112,1,8
468,80,78290,2,0,B|416:83|370:104|346:149|347:197,1,184,2|2
56,192,79005,1,8
56,192,79183,1,8
44,80,79362,2,0,B|95:83|141:104|165:149|164:197,1,184,2|0
128,288,79897,6,0,B|88:312|36:308,2,92,10|2|4
456,192,80612,1,8
468,80,80790,2,0,B|416:83|370:104|346:149|347:197,1,184,2|2
384,288,81326,2,0,B|424:312|476:308,1,92,8|2
256,192,81683,2,0,B|212:184|164:192,1,92,6|0
48,292,82040,1,8
48,292,82219,2,0,B|136:328|228:316,1,184,2|0
228,315,82755,1,8
176,100,83112,6,0,B|140:188,1,92,2|0
336,100,83469,2,0,B|372:188,1,92,2|0
144,92,83826,2,0,B|92:168,1,92,2|0
368,92,84183,2,0,B|420:168,1,92,2|4
192,192,85076,5,0
348,284,85255,1,0
164,284,85433,1,0
320,192,85612,1,2
256,352,85790,2,0,B|256:260,1,92,8|4
256,192,86058,12,0,88112
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
Okay ~updated :3

Edit :

Lizbeth wrote:

hellow hi :3

[GiNa's Normal]
00:25:612 (6) - I suggest replace by single note, I think sounds better
00:33:112 (1) - threw me off, maybe delete the slider and add notes at: 00:33:290 - 00:33:469 -

all fixed

[Easy]
Lovely diff, maybe the notes after slider could enter later thou. thanks

That's all
Good mapset
Thanks >w<

To GiNa :
我先照著Lizbeth的mod改了,如果哪裡有要再改的再告訴我一下 >_<
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa

EmPao wrote:

To GiNa :
我先照著Lizbeth的mod改了,如果哪裡有要再改的再告訴我一下 >_<
隨便，我沒什麼意見
Lizbeth的mod我挺喜歡的，現在這Normal的style有一半也是因為她以前的mod給我的idea
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3

※ 注意

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改
藍色的是需要討論的問題
黑色就只是建議

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. 首先 你這圖因為之前有Ranked版本 所以我知道這BPM一定是有問題的 請參考Andrea的 AiRI - Dreamer (TV Size)

Easy


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 00:00:612 - 感覺Break並不適合擺在這 感覺有些少了東西的感覺
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:40:254 - 60%的volume太高了 40%~50%會比較適合 從背景音樂聽來這邊應該要小聲些會比較能融合音樂
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:27:754 (3) - 節奏延長到00:28:469 - 感覺會比較適合 你可以稍微比較一下 因為00:28:112 - 這個音與00:28:469 - 相比 音會比較輕

  2. 00:30:254 (4,5,6) - 這我會給這樣的建議: 因為你的(4)是有弧度的 而後頭的(5,6)擺成直線相對來說會比較死板 建議你擺成符合(4)的曲線排法 例如:

  3. 00:40:254 (1,2,3,4) - 建議一下 若是能讓這個正方形的pattern擺成有點歪的 會感覺比較不會那麼死板... 但是這並不表示你原先排的就不好 只是個人觀感上的問題

  4. 00:45:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

  5. 00:57:397 (1,2,3,4) - 移到x248,y72? 讓00:57:040 (4,1) - 看起來比較符合曲線

Normal


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 00:00:612 - 同Easy所說, Break 感覺並不適合這邊 感覺有少了東西的感覺...
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:40:612 - 50%應該從這開始會比較適當 因為你這段的00:40:254 - 為了用finish 而且要夠大聲才用60%的 但是第2個音就沒必要了

  2. 00:48:826 - 63%? 額...你這地方不能懶阿...用60% 而且不該是60%的都必須種草放回50%
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:17:040 (3) - 加個note吧 如果note直接單獨放在1/2節奏上(就是前面沒東西 但是接下來以note開始 而且放在紅線上) 會很容易confuse ((00:45:076 (3,1) - ,00:54:362 (4,1) - 這個是因為音樂很明確就放在1/2上 所以我就不挑了

  2. 00:42:397 (4,5,1) - 作成一條直線吧 說實話我不是很喜歡這樣的折點法 感覺彆扭... 就是說一個弧形的slider後面接著反向的note+note(note+slider) 打起來手感不好:/

  3. 01:00:254 (1) - 對稱於00:57:397 (1) - slider尾?

  4. 01:10:254 - 感覺這個節奏多於了 若是能把音下在01:10:076 - 就會好很多

  5. 01:14:183 (5) - 同00:17:040 (3) - 的問題

  6. 01:20:254 (1) - slider結尾就直接在01:20:790 - 了吧 放2/1拍感覺真的彆扭

  7. 01:21:683 (3) - ^

Hard



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

  1. 01:24:719 - slider節尾不可靜音... 使用30% 試著把聲音與背景融合吧...
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)前段節奏很奇怪 感覺並不適合音樂 例如說:00:01:683 - 應該是空音 但是你下了 試試看這樣的節奏吧:
總體來說沒什麼太大問題 就是個人風格/習慣了~我比較不喜歡有note直線擺成正的(意思是90∘或180∘這樣) 感覺比較不好 有如我在Easy所說的 有些slider弧型作的不錯 但是後頭的note卻只是與slider結尾成一直線而不是成弧形 感覺真的可惜了...


  1. 00:40:076 - 感覺加個note會比較好(音效 S:C1 clap )

  2. 01:03:112 (1,2,3) - 被spinner text擋住了 會造成player 難以讀懂後頭的物件↓

D.N.Angel



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 前頭音效有點混亂阿 在打的時候感覺有點confuse 00:17:754 - 和00:18:290 - 的音效聽起來有些奇怪 因為你4個slider開始都是在1/2節奏上 但是你這兩個分別下在1/1和1/2上 而且又是在同ㄧ個pattern裡 打起來的感覺就不會這麼合諧... 建議改掉
  2. 00:23:469 - 與00:24:004 - 同上
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:07:397 (4,1) - 這樣的排法挺拗手的 你可以看到(4)往右邊劃出slider 可是(1)卻幾乎和(4)的尾端平行劃出像左下的slider 而且是個大跳. 於是我建議你想辦法作出類似繞園或是不要這麼跳的pattern 感覺打起來會比較舒服

  2. 00:11:147 (3,4) - reverse 作出流線型flow會比現在好打很多

  3. 00:23:290 (1) - reverse and 00:24:004 (3) - 分次reverse 作出flow ((喔草 這段你居然做了對稱

  4. 00:54:362 (1,2,3) - reverse會更好些 你可以用test看看 打起來的手感比較不會有順時針pattern 突然呈現逆時針的感覺

  5. 01:00:255 (1) - ⑨ baka 你的slider拉沒拉好 這個可以拉的更好些的...你懂>_>

  6. 01:08:112 - 我反到覺得這個音不應該出現 你可以聽聽看 如果不加這個音和加這個音哪個比較適合音樂
Please used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.
and you can used 中文 or English to reply for me :)

嗯... 說實話還有些地方還沒準備好到可以bubble 所以你還需要再找一些modder再找我回來 還有BPM的問題一定要改 而且在找我之前最好再找個timing modder來看過一次
Good luck
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

spboxer3 wrote:

D.N.Angel



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 前頭音效有點混亂阿 在打的時候感覺有點confuse 00:17:754 - 和00:18:290 - 的音效聽起來有些奇怪 因為你4個slider開始都是在1/2節奏上 但是你這兩個分別下在1/1和1/2上 而且又是在同ㄧ個pattern裡 打起來的感覺就不會這麼合諧... 建議改掉
    //這邊我都跟著voice下的，我覺得完全沒問題
  2. 00:23:469 - 與00:24:004 - 同上
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:07:397 (4,1) - 這樣的排法挺拗手的 你可以看到(4)往右邊劃出slider 可是(1)卻幾乎和(4)的尾端平行劃出像左下的slider 而且是個大跳. 於是我建議你想辦法作出類似繞園或是不要這麼跳的pattern 感覺打起來會比較舒服...我只能說，你不懂lol，rejected

  2. 00:11:147 (3,4) - reverse 作出流線型flow會比現在好打很多

  3. 00:23:290 (1) - reverse and 00:24:004 (3) - 分次reverse 作出flow ((喔草 這段你居然做了對稱 //以我而言這flow頗無聊lol，話說對稱有啥問題0.0?

  4. 00:54:362 (1,2,3) - reverse會更好些 你可以用test看看 打起來的手感比較不會有順時針pattern 突然呈現逆時針的感覺 //我個人很喜歡這個，而且僅此這次我想也不要緊
    我在此做個說明，這是雙式交叉三角形的flow，我認為只要間距控制好很多人會喜歡的

  5. 01:00:255 (1) - ⑨ baka 你的slider拉沒拉好 這個可以拉的更好些的...你懂>_> //遺憾的是這是Chewin給的code，而且還拉得比我好看，我看不出問題...OAO

  6. 01:08:112 - 我反到覺得這個音不應該出現 你可以聽聽看 如果不加這個音和加這個音哪個比較適合音樂 //好，已移除
Please used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.
and you can used 中文 or English to reply for me :)

嗯... 說實話還有些地方還沒準備好到可以bubble 所以你還需要再找一些modder再找我回來 還有BPM的問題一定要改 而且在找我之前最好再找個timing modder來看過一次
Good luck
雖說你說還不到泡的標準但怎麼都nazi ... 0.0
嘛，謝謝MOD ~ :)

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180,220,54005,1,2
260,156,54183,1,0
100,44,54362,5,0
240,56,54540,1,2
84,180,54719,1,0
260,156,54897,2,0,B|308:144|336:104,1,92
164,120,55255,2,0,B|156:168|180:208,1,92,2|2
368,324,55612,1,0
368,324,55790,6,0,B|428:256|412:148,1,184,2|0
408,52,56326,2,0,B|452:60|492:88,1,92
320,160,56683,1,0
228,116,56862,1,2
136,72,57040,6,0,B|92:56|44:60,1,92
116,192,57397,2,0,B|208:192,1,92,4|0
136,312,57755,2,0,B|92:328|44:324,1,92
116,192,58112,5,0
116,192,58290,1,0
256,300,58469,1,0
256,300,58647,1,0
256,84,58826,1,0
256,84,59005,1,0
396,192,59183,2,0,B|488:192,2,92
256,192,59719,5,0
256,192,59808,1,8
256,192,59897,1,0
256,192,59987,1,0
256,192,60076,1,0
256,192,60165,1,8
256,192,60255,6,0,B|188:220|208:124|260:88|400:156|248:324,1,322,0|4
128,92,61862,6,0,B|156:52|200:36,1,92,0|2
384,92,62219,2,0,B|356:52|312:36,1,92,0|2
256,120,62576,5,0
248,156,62665,1,0
252,192,62755,1,0
264,228,62844,1,0
288,256,62933,1,0
320,272,63022,1,0
356,276,63112,6,0,B|400:260|432:220,1,92,4|0
156,276,63469,2,0,B|112:260|80:220,1,92,10|0
80,128,63826,2,0,B|32:136|0:172,1,92,8|2
172,180,64183,1,8
172,180,64362,2,0,B|204:212|252:228|300:212|340:180,1,184,2|0
512,172,64897,2,0,B|480:136|432:128,1,92,10|0
429,222,65255,2,0,B|400:260|356:276,2,92,8|2|10
256,92,65790,5,0
136,64,65969,2,0,B|140:108|172:148,1,92,0|2
376,64,66326,2,0,B|372:108|340:148,1,92,8|2
200,272,66683,1,8
312,272,66862,2,0,B|296:224|260:196,1,92,2|8
108,240,67219,6,0,B|96:285|120:329,1,92,2|0
312,272,67576,1,0
200,272,67755,1,10
391,329,67933,2,0,B|415:285|404:240,1,92
252,196,68290,2,0,B|216:224|200:272,1,92,0|8
440,48,68826,6,0,B|256:48,1,184,4|8
72,120,69362,2,0,B|256:120,1,184,2|0
356,144,69897,1,8
428,216,70076,2,0,B|452:176|456:128,1,92,2|0
356,144,70433,1,2
328,240,70612,2,0,B|332:288|360:328,2,92,8|2|8
240,192,71147,2,0,B|140:192,1,92,2|10
68,252,71505,6,0,B|104:284|156:296,1,92,0|2
148,89,71862,1,2
148,89,71951,1,0
148,89,72040,2,0,B|104:100|68:132,1,92,8|2
436,248,72576,1,8
436,248,72755,1,8
380,332,72933,6,0,B|340:304|324:256|332:208|372:172,1,184,2|2
416,80,73469,2,0,B|456:108|472:156,1,92,8|2
303,63,73826,2,0,B|255:51|211:63,1,92,0|2
96,80,74183,1,8
96,80,74362,5,0
96,80,74451,1,8
96,80,74540,2,0,B|56:108|40:156,1,92,4|0
256,156,74897,1,8
256,156,75255,2,0,B|256:248,1,92,8|2
340,88,75612,1,8
340,88,75790,2,0,B|300:56|252:40|204:56|172:92,1,184,2|2
348,184,76326,2,0,B|392:168|428:136,1,92,10|0
164,184,76683,2,0,B|120:168|84:136,1,92,8|2
256,156,77040,5,10
256,256,77219,1,0
168,308,77397,2,0,B|128:332|76:336,1,92,0|2
344,308,77755,2,0,B|384:332|436:336,1,92,8|2
456,192,78112,1,8
468,80,78290,2,0,B|416:83|370:104|346:149|347:197,1,184,2|2
56,192,79005,1,8
56,192,79183,1,8
44,80,79362,2,0,B|95:83|141:104|165:149|164:197,1,184,2|0
128,288,79897,6,0,B|88:312|36:308,2,92,10|2|4
456,192,80612,1,8
468,80,80790,2,0,B|416:83|370:104|346:149|347:197,1,184,2|2
384,288,81326,2,0,B|424:312|476:308,1,92,8|2
256,192,81683,2,0,B|212:184|164:192,1,92,6|0
48,292,82040,1,8
48,292,82219,2,0,B|136:328|228:316,1,184,2|0
228,315,82755,1,8
176,100,83112,6,0,B|140:188,1,92,2|0
336,100,83469,2,0,B|372:188,1,92,2|0
144,92,83826,2,0,B|92:168,1,92,2|0
368,92,84183,2,0,B|420:168,1,92,2|4
192,192,85076,5,0
348,284,85255,1,0
164,284,85433,1,0
320,192,85612,1,2
256,352,85790,2,0,B|256:260,1,92,8|4
256,192,86058,12,0,88112
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa
http://puu.sh/14fUe
8-)
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3

DarknessAngel wrote:

雖說你說還不到泡的標準但怎麼都nazi ... 0.0
嘛，謝謝MOD ~ :)

最重要的一點 BPM沒有準確你說我怎麼泡 ((stress
而且圖當然是質量越好越保險 你知道的 很多泡圖都會被戳 即使是一些小事. 我必須保證圖的質量才不會讓mapper的泡被戳

Edit: 還有我說的是再找一些mod之後再找我回來 並不是不recheck
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GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa

spboxer3 wrote:

Normal


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 00:00:612 - 同Easy所說, Break 感覺並不適合這邊 感覺有少了東西的感覺...　我相信你是明理的人，前面節奏並不固定，所以我覺得不適合map，自創節奏對於Easy/Normal來說又太難了
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:40:612 - 50%應該從這開始會比較適當 因為你這段的00:40:254 - 為了用finish 而且要夠大聲才用60%的 但是第2個音就沒必要了　Fixed
  2. 00:48:826 - 63%? 額...你這地方不能懶阿...用60% 而且不該是60%的都必須種草放回50%　Fixed
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:17:040 (3) - 加個note吧 如果note直接單獨放在1/2節奏上(就是前面沒東西 但是接下來以note開始 而且放在紅線上) 會很容易confuse ((00:45:076 (3,1) - ,00:54:362 (4,1) - 這個是因為音樂很明確就放在1/2上 所以我就不挑了　I followed vocal
  2. 00:42:397 (4,5,1) - 作成一條直線吧 說實話我不是很喜歡這樣的折點法 感覺彆扭... 就是說一個弧形的slider後面接著反向的note+note(note+slider) 打起來手感不好:/　Sorry, I hate straight line patterns
  3. 01:00:254 (1) - 對稱於00:57:397 (1) - slider尾?　Fixed
  4. 01:10:254 - 感覺這個節奏多於了 若是能把音下在01:10:076 - 就會好很多　I don't get what the hell you're talking about -_-
  5. 01:14:183 (5) - 同00:17:040 (3) - 的問題　Same as 00:17:040 (3)
  6. 01:20:254 (1) - slider結尾就直接在01:20:790 - 了吧 放2/1拍感覺真的彆扭　Fixed
  7. 01:21:683 (3) - ^　Fixed
檔案連結在上面，忘記按Edit了lol
As of timing ... I don't know what to say about it
It seems/plays fine to me
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

spboxer3 wrote:

※ 注意

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改
藍色的是需要討論的問題
黑色就只是建議

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. 首先 你這圖因為之前有Ranked版本 所以我知道這BPM一定是有問題的 請參考Andrea的 AiRI - Dreamer (TV Size)
    我覺得現在的timing打起來還可以... 而且Andrea版本的紅線好多條...orz, 我會再請人來check timing的

Easy


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 00:00:612 - 感覺Break並不適合擺在這 感覺有些少了東西的感覺
    同GiNa,Easy diff不太好下...(也有考慮說把這個note拿掉 ,從後面開始做)
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:40:254 - 60%的volume太高了 40%~50%會比較適合 從背景音樂聽來這邊應該要小聲些會比較能融合音樂
    Fixed，改成50%
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:27:754 (3) - 節奏延長到00:28:469 - 感覺會比較適合 你可以稍微比較一下 因為00:28:112 - 這個音與00:28:469 - 相比 音會比較輕
    Fixed

  2. 00:30:254 (4,5,6) - 這我會給這樣的建議: 因為你的(4)是有弧度的 而後頭的(5,6)擺成直線相對來說會比較死板 建議你擺成符合(4)的曲線排法 例如:

    這個我保留了,最簡單的diff我比較喜歡擺直的QQ
  3. 00:40:254 (1,2,3,4) - 建議一下 若是能讓這個正方形的pattern擺成有點歪的 會感覺比較不會那麼死板... 但是這並不表示你原先排的就不好 只是個人觀感上的問題
    同上
  4. 00:45:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
    ^
  5. 00:57:397 (1,2,3,4) - 移到x248,y72? 讓00:57:040 (4,1) - 看起來比較符合曲線
Fixed

Hard



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

  1. 01:24:719 - slider節尾不可靜音... 使用30% 試著把聲音與背景融合吧...
    Fixed
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)前段節奏很奇怪 感覺並不適合音樂 例如說:00:01:683 - 應該是空音 但是你下了 試試看這樣的節奏吧:
Fixed
總體來說沒什麼太大問題 就是個人風格/習慣了~我比較不喜歡有note直線擺成正的(意思是90∘或180∘這樣) 感覺比較不好 有如我在Easy所說的 有些slider弧型作的不錯 但是後頭的note卻只是與slider結尾成一直線而不是成弧形 感覺真的可惜了...>_<


  1. 00:40:076 - 感覺加個note會比較好(音效 S:C1 clap )
    我這留一個空 一是這裡mp3好像就沒有聲音，二是接下來的part 速度是x0.8，我想在這做一個停頓

  2. 01:03:112 (1,2,3) - 被spinner text擋住了 會造成player 難以讀懂後頭的物件↓
    Ok.我重擺了

Please used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.
and you can used 中文 or English to reply for me :)

嗯... 說實話還有些地方還沒準備好到可以bubble 所以你還需要再找一些modder再找我回來 還有BPM的問題一定要改 而且在找我之前最好再找個timing modder來看過一次
Good luck

Okay.我想先找人來check timing先
謝謝Mod :D :D :D
Lami
1,756 posts
Joined June 2011
Lami
hi~

[GiNa's Normal]
01:05:254 (3) -
01:14:362 (5) - remove note(?)

[Hard]

00:33:469 (5) - remove NC
00:33:826 (1) - add NC
00:59:719 (3) - missed beat, correct beat > <
01:04:897 (5) - remove NC
01:23:112 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - it's so hard.... really...
(01:23:469 (4,5) - decreasing space each other?)

[D.N.Angel]

00:17:933 (3,4,5) - how about decrease space each other?
imo, this part don't need jump
00:25:076 (1,3) - ctrl+R(?) (decreasing space)
00:52:933 (1,2) -
01:12:397 - add something(?) feel empty..
01:14:897 (4) -
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
hi

Easy
00:00:344 - boring break . I think you can put some notes.
00:09:183 - add clap. please keep rhythm
00:12:040 - ^
00:58:826 (3) - add clap on head?

Normal
00:00:433 - ^ same as easy
SPOILER
00:07:397 (1) - remove nc
00:08:826 (3) - add nc
00:10:254 (1) - remove nc
00:32:933 (3,1) - try this? http://puu.sh/17hIK follow vocal is better
00:56:862 (3) - add 1 repeat and follow vocal

Hard
00:51:683 (1) -make more straight ? http://puu.sh/17iuJ
01:15:790 (1) - like this http://puu.sh/17ivG
00:53:112 (1) - make same pattern as 00:51:683 (1,2,3,4) http://puu.sh/17iyL

D.N.Angel
01:15:790 (7) - bit strange for me. please 2nd waypoint 1grid up and 3rd 1grid right http://puu.sh/17iDn
Lizellota
467 posts
Joined October 2011
Lizellota
Hello ;3 From my queue~ Sorry for the delay TAT

[D.N.A]

00:01:326 (3) - Delete 1 repeat and add whistle to the end of the slider
00:11:504 (1,2) - remove claps? sounds weird ><
00:23:112 - remove whistle
00:24:004 - ^
00:24:183 - add whistle
00:25:076 (1) - remove whistle
00:25:254 (2) - add whistle
00:45:612 - missed clap(i mean S:C1)
00:48:647 (4) - clap instead of 00:49:183
01:25:612 - move that timing section to 01:25:433

[Hard]

00:01:504 - whistle
00:11:504 (4,5) - remove claps? TAT
00:25:969 - add finish?
00:28:737 - add a note?
01:10:969 (2) -
how about this?
01:11:683 - change whistle to finish
01:16:326 (2) -
~
01:21:683 - change whistle to finish

Other diffs fine for me~~
Good luck :)
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
Fixed~
Thanks mod :3

Edit:

To GiNa:

normal diff我自己先改過了

00:00:344 這個note我刪掉了

其他有改不好的地方再跟我說下
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
thanks for mod ! :)
http://puu.sh/191vN
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
決定這個週末來Fixed timing
;_;

Edit :

Easy/Normal/Hard diff的 timing改好了

所有diff的timing都改好了._.
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Hello there. Request from modding queue! TARI TARI!

General
-> Good, but I'm feel a bit iffy about the red timing sections.

Easy
-> Increase HP Drain Rate +1? 1 is almost unfailable XD.
00:10:249 (2) - Nazi Mod: Try to move the red anchor point at x:196 y:208? It looks awesome if the anchor point was at the same postion as the slider tick. Also, make sure to readjust the slider a bit so it still blanklets perfectly and follows the spacing.
00:38:119 (2) - Nazi Mod: Similar to what I suggested at 00:10:249 (2). Move the red anchor point so it's at the same postion as the slider tick.
00:39:552 (3) - Reverse selection? That way, it can follow the spacing better.

GiNa's Normal
-> Looks alright, but the map looks kinda messy.

Hard
-> Good!

D.N.Angel
-> Good!
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

BeatofIke wrote:

Hello there. Request from modding queue! TARI TARI! <3
General
-> Good, but I'm feel a bit iffy about the red timing sections. I use Andrea'sTiming (http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55494)

Easy
-> Increase HP Drain Rate +1? 1 is almost unfailable XD. I think 1 is ok since it is the easiest diff :P
00:10:249 (2) - Nazi Mod: Try to move the red anchor point at x:196 y:208? It looks awesome if the anchor point was at the same postion as the slider tick. Also, make sure to readjust the slider a bit so it still blanklets perfectly and follows the spacing.Fixed
00:38:119 (2) - Nazi Mod: Similar to what I suggested at 00:10:249 (2). Move the red anchor point so it's at the same postion as the slider tick. Fixed
00:39:552 (3) - Reverse selection? That way, it can follow the spacing better. x, I think short slider with reverse is too hard for newbie player to play.
Thanks your mod :3
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
recheck 別給KD
[general]
Easy的kiai需對準節奏線上 (( 01:14:476 -> 01:14:464
Hard的紅線 00:50:278 ->00:50:258 這才是正確的

[Easy]
00:15:249 (1) - 結尾對準00:17:398 - 需要改代碼 如果不會的話就複製下面那個吧(覆蓋掉HitObjects下的"256,192,15249,12,4,17392")
256,192,15249,12,4,17398

01:00:254 (1) - 同理 
256,192,60254,12,0,62377

slider穿過紅色timing會有誤差的部分我問過BAT 他說AIMOD如果沒說那就OK

[Hard]
00:50:432 (3,4,5,6) - 沒有snap好 把這些改到正確的位置上吧

[D.N.Angel]
00:05:627 (1) - 算是nazi 沒有對準第一條紅線 (1ms的變化 雖然沒什麼差但是有人會挑...)
00:25:969 (5,3,4) - 沒有snap的slider end 把這個改好吧
00:51:683 - 這條綠線是多餘的 因為BPM x1.0沒有變化 所以你要改音量直接改紅線即可

改完找我~
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