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Konei
Ok, fixed some.

http://puu.sh/LZ0W
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Thank you for mod, Nagisawa :)

Updated~
Poggo
Hi from my mod Q ^.^

Insane


00:28:511(1) - make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/M8VI
00:33:177(5) - better make so http://puu.sh/M8Xb better make identical distance between ends sliders
00:53:399 -here better sounds volume 40%
00:55:399 - add note here, it better follow the misic
01:25:844(4,5) - stack better
01:27:622(4,5,6) - ^

Hard

00:04:759 -remove this note, not sound here.
00:58:622 - ^
01:29:622(2) - better put so http://puu.sh/M93S it's looks better and more playable

Normal

00:28:066(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 9 notes you kidding? replace some on sliders bcz it difficult for normal.
00:35:177(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:10:733(6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:44:955 - 01:49:844 - ^

copypast brrr... really borring...

Easy

00:50:733 - better make so http://puu.sh/M99l spinner to short for easy.
01:11:177(1) - maybe try this http://puu.sh/M9a7 looks better
01:20:955 - http://puu.sh/M9aP

Good luck~~
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Fixed almost...

Thank you for mod, Katty Pie :)
Konei
Thanks~

http://puu.sh/M9Hb

Fixed~
kajiyatta
thanks for modding~
some updated http://puu.sh/MawS
BeatofIke
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Katty Pie wrote:

Normal

00:28:066(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 9 notes you kidding? replace some on sliders bcz it difficult for normal.
00:35:177(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:10:733(6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:44:955 - 01:49:844 - ^

copypast brrr... really borring...
How is symmetical patterns boring?
Remapped a few parts AGAIN!
http://puu.sh/Mgcu
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Updated~
Piscis
nao <3

[General]
All diff "Resnap All notes" please~
Tags change "Sugar Pot Konei BeatofIke" :arrow: "sugar pot konei beatofike"

[Konei's Easy]
00:03:592 (2,1,2) - Not distance snap...
00:28:511 (1) - ^
00:35:622 (1) - ^
00:41:399 (4) - ^
00:46:733 (1) - ^
00:55:622 (3) - Add clap to slider start
01:14:733 (1) - I think overlap
01:18:288 (1) - Remove clap to slider end
01:19:622 (2) - Add clap
01:20:066 (3) - Add clap to slider start
01:25:399 (2) - Remove clap to slider start and end
01:25:844 - Add clap
01:27:177 (1) - Remove clap
01:29:399 (2) - Add clap
01:30:288 (1) - Add clap to slider start
01:31:622 (2) - Remove clap
01:32:511 (1) - Remove clap to slider start. And add clap to slider end
01:33:399 (2) - Remove clap
01:34:288 (1) - ^
01:34:733 - Add clap
01:39:622 (2) - Remove clap
01:40:066 - Add clap
01:41:399 (1) - Remove clap
01:42:288 (2) - ^
01:43:177 (3) - ^
01:46:733 (1) - Remove clap to slider start. And add clap to slider end
01:47:622 (2) - Remove clap
01:48:511 (1) - ^
01:48:955 - Add clap
01:49:844 (2) - ^

[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:18:259 (1) - Add finish
00:53:622 - N:C1?
01:52:399 (1,2) - 1grid up
kajiyatta
thanks for modding~ all fixed
http://puu.sh/Mpkw
KokoroStudiox3
Request from eLtigreXXx's Modding queue~

[insane]
Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:01:026 - snap to 00:01:092







[kajiyatta's Hard]
suggestions
00:07:592 (3) - Add NC.





[BeatofIke's Normal]

Spinner New Combo
01:06:733 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
suggestions
00:14:259 (3) - Add NC.





[Konei's Easy]
suggestions
00:08:259 - Add a circle at {x:280 y:288}.
00:10:926 - Add a circle at {x:392 y:128}.
00:18:926 - Add a circle at {x:128 y:48}.
00:18:926 (1) - Remove this spinner.
00:19:592 - Add a spinner from here until
00:24:066, with a finish.
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki

Piscis wrote:

[General]
All diff "Resnap All notes" please~ ok, resnapped
Tags change "Sugar Pot Konei BeatofIke" :arrow: "sugar pot konei beatofike" Using the capitalized. Isn't a problem for ranking.

eLtigreXXx wrote:

[insane]
Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:01:026 - snap to 00:01:092 Fixed
Thank you for mod, Piscis and eLtigreXXx :)
BeatofIke
Minor fix. Updated!
http://puu.sh/ME56
Sushi
Hi hi, from #modreqs

This is already quite polished, so I'll investigate on details to make the map look better, and give suggestions.

Big Suggestions will be in italic.


The global hitnormal sounds very low compared to the custom hitsounds and the music itself, which has a quite high level, specially during the choruses. Maybe raise the volume of the hitnormal (and the hitclap as well we barely hear it actually) ? (not the volume of all hitsounds, heh ;) )

[Easy]
00:28:511 (1,2,3) - Moving (1) a grid up would be better, will make the spacing look even, and more eye pleasent :)00:35:622 (1) - Same as above, but on the left with a grid 4. this is really a detail
Globally this could be done on several patterns where it's clearly visible, like 00:39:177 (1,2,3) - but I won't list them all, unless you really want me to do it

[BeatofIke's Normal]
:D

[kajiyatta's Hard]
8-)

[Insane]
01:21:622 (2) - This note feels like it's not really on something... based on the music, I'd see a slider starting on the previous (1) instead
01:22:955 (2,4) - a clap on these would sound cool :)
01:32:955 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern sounds weird to me :s Below a suggestion for the timeline :
SPOILER
Instead of this :


Why no this ?



It will feel more like the rest of the map ;)


Cool :D
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Fixed all...

Thank you for mod, Sushi :)
raririn
Hi~~ From CLANNAD Modding queue

[General]
*inconsistency in kiai times:since there isn't much difference,consider making them the same?

[Normal]
00:06:259 (1) - (nazi)see the pic below↓
it can be better :D move the third and the last tick 1 grid down
same as the other sliders:
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00:00:926 (1) - 00:03:592 (3) - 00:08:926 (3) - 00:11:592 (1) - 00:14:259 (3) -
00:32:066 (1) - (nazi)
move the third tick 1 grid up
same as 00:33:844 (3) -
01:06:733 (1) - add NC here since this is the note after a spinner

[Hard]
00:21:400 - i strongly suggest you reduce the volume by at least 10% , it sounds a bit noisy here
00:41:844 (7) - add whistle on the beginning?
00:45:399 (6) - ^
00:48:511 (5) - add whistle on the end?
01:36:066 (1,2,3,4) - i really don't think it fits the music , consider changing into another pattern?

[Insane]
00:02:926 (5) - remove whistle ? it sounds strange here
00:06:259 (1) - add whistle on the end
00:10:926 (1) - add whistle?
00:34:622 (4) - remove the clap on the beginning
01:22:955 (2) - NC here since you change the SV
01:32:955 (4) - consider changing this slider into a circle?
(Oh it seems you change something before i post x.x)

didn't see much here,good mapset,good luck with rank~ :P
10nya
I'll do M4M from your queue ~

[General]
  1. I suggest to remove hentai from the tags
[Konei's Easy]
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 00:45:844: Make this symmetrical ? 2nd point to x96 y160 and 3rd point to x96 y88 ?
  2. 01:25:399: 2nd point to x248 y128 ?
[BeatofIke's Normal]
- AR -1 ?
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 01:18:288: how about CRTL < -ing the slider?
[kajiyatta's Hard]
- Make the same kiai timing
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 00:10:926: 2nd point to x100 y192?
Rhythms
  1. 00:15:592: add circle?
  2. 01:23:622: nc? suggestion tough
[Insane]
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 01:31:844: make this overlap with hit 3 on 01:31:177 ?
Rhythms
  1. 01:02:511: add circle?
thats all I can find, good luck for the rank ^w^)/
BeatofIke
Fixed some! Updated! :D
http://puu.sh/MWD9
kajiyatta
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eLtigreXXx wrote:

00:07:592 (3) - Add NC. no change

raririn wrote:

[Hard]
00:21:400 - i strongly suggest you reduce the volume by at least 10% , it sounds a bit noisy here fixed
00:41:844 (7) - add whistle on the beginning? fixed
00:45:399 (6) - ^ fixed
00:48:511 (5) - add whistle on the end? fixed
01:36:066 (1,2,3,4) - i really don't think it fits the music , consider changing into another pattern? I like this rythem but if others mention that, I'll change it.

- t e n n y a - wrote:

[kajiyatta's Hard]
- Make the same kiai timing ok
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 00:10:926: 2nd point to x100 y192?
another fixed

Rhythms
  1. 00:15:592: add circle? it's too hard for diff I think.
  2. 01:23:622: nc? suggestion tough
fixed
thanks for moddings~
EDIT updated→http://puu.sh/MWU7
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
raririn, I fixed some...
- t e n n y a -, I fixed only general recommend...

Thank you for mod, raririn and - t e n n y a - :)
DerekMcD
Just my own suggestions...

[Easy]

00:55:622 (3) - At the start: Where's the clap?
01:25:399 (2) - At the reverse: Where's the clap?

[Normal]

01:16:955 (3) - At the start: Where's the clap?
01:26:733 (5) - Clap?

[Hard]

00:21:844 (2) - Spacing?
00:24:511 (4) - ^
00:58:066 (3) - ^
01:07:622 (1) - ^

[Insane]

00:47:177 (4) - Spacing?
kajiyatta
thanks for modding=
some fixed http://puu.sh/Nd2u
Konei
http://puu.sh/Nidr

Okay, many fixed :)
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Fixed...

Thank you for mod, Koro McAlpine :)

Note: Waiting for BeatofIke's update.
BeatofIke
Minor Fix. Updated! :D
http://puu.sh/NjPD
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Updated!
Kitsunemimi
Mod4mod :O

The 135 BPM timing section should be 21,380. This song was a bit hard to hear the timing of, so my offset might be ±2ms off. Don't forget to move all your timing sections back by 20ms.

[Konei's Easy]
00:18:926 (1) - This spinner is REALLY awkward. It sounds much better if you shorten it to 00:21:400. Then you can put in a few more sliders/circles in the space after it.
00:59:177 (4) - The lump you have in this slider looks a bit ugly. Try to make the curve larger, or just make it a plain straight slider.
01:00:511 (1) - ^
01:04:955 (4) - You don't need a clap hitsound on the slider tail.
01:14:733 (1) - Is there a reason why you have that useless slider point in there? D: Just simplify it, make it a nice neat round slider.
01:16:511 (2) - ^
01:18:288 (1) - Clap hitsound doesn't belong on slider tail again.
01:20:066 (3) - Clap hitsound doesn't belong on slider head, rather it belongs on slider tail o3o
01:35:844 - Timing sections here are really inconsistent. Plus, your hitsound volume is so low anyways, nobody can tell the difference. Just get rid of the three sections in the middle of the spinner.

[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:17:592 (2) - I think it would sound better if you got rid of this hitclap.
00:29:844 (3) - Slider head missing hitclap.
01:50:288 (1) - Perhaps extend this to the white tick?
That's it! This difficulty is perfect.

[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:15:259 (2,3,4) - Most awkward rhythm ever. Lose the slider and place some notes normally on the red/white ticks.
...I couldn't really find anything else.

[Insane]
00:08:926 (5) - Doesn't need a new combo.
00:29:733 (5,6) - The spacing here is weird. Either move (6) out to the right of (5), or move them both underneath the end of (4).
01:12:066 (6,7) - Random unintuitive jump. Just use normal spacing.

Good map. It's looking very solid, however there are some problems with Easy. I mean, aside from the inconsistent hitsounds I pointed out, it would be nice if you went and prettied up some sliders. If you end up fixing that up, then I'll shoot a star your way~
Konei
Thank you very much Kitsunemimi~

Fixed all you said and made some slider prettier.


http://puu.sh/NKsF
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Fixed all...

Thank you for mod, Kitsunemimi
And Thanks in advance for star :)
kajiyatta
thanks for modding~
fixed and updated→http://puu.sh/NUrw
BeatofIke
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Updated!
meiikyuu

feel free to ignore whatever u don't like xD

Konei's Easy
  1. 00:06:259 (1,2) - make these 2 sliders the same shape? they look kind of random right now because the combos around them seem to be same shapes to each other but its up to u xD
  2. 00:25:380 (2) - switch to 4-grid level view for a sec and move this note to x:172 y:172 (so it is in the middle of 1 and 3)
  3. 00:36:935 (2) - switch to 4-grid level view again and move one grid to the left for even spacing between 1 and 3
  4. 00:48:046 (2) - its on the verge of touching 1 so..move down a bit? while keeping distance snap
  5. 00:50:713 (1) - same situation as above, move away a little to avoid touching 3?
  6. 01:14:713 (1) - add finish at the beginning like u did for 2
  7. 01:14:713 (1) - add note
  8. 01:50:268 (1) - pls extend the slider to 01:52:713 - , it'll make more sense
c:

BeatofIke's Normal
  1. 00:56:066 (1) - remove NC here and NC on the next note pls, because new vocal line starts on that next note
  2. 01:14:733 (1) - add finish at beginning
  3. 01:49:844 (4) - make 1/2 slider instead? xD
pretty nice

kajiyatta's Hard
  1. 00:11:592 (2) - blanket around 1 is not perfect, so i tried to fix the slider for u ^^ heres code if u want
    32,224,11592,2,0,B|48:256|92:288|144:256|164:224,1,160,4|10
  2. 00:39:379 - i think a note should be here because u can obviously hear the voice start here.. xD
  3. 01:01:844 (5,6) - highlight these 2 notes and move 1 grid down, then adjust 01:02:288 (1) - a little to fix spacing
  4. 01:05:399 (2) - the end of this is not stacking perfectly with the end of 01:06:288 (2) - , not too big of a deal though
another nice diff~

Insane
  1. 00:01:926 (2,3,4) - i feel like these triplets should be a little more spaced out? ><
  2. 00:39:157 (1,3,4,6) - i think it would also sound nice if you add a whistle to the end of these 4 sliders ^^
    edit: 00:42:713 (1,3) - same here xD whistles at end
    If you follow the whistle suggestions above, you can probably add some more to the rest of the soft part up to 00:51:602 - to keep hitsounds consistent~
  3. 01:02:491 - add note
  4. 01:27:046 (2) - move to x:408 y: 316?
nice

good luck, i love nao <3
kajiyatta
thanks for moddings~ some fixed
updated→http://puu.sh/OZT3
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Mostly fixed...

Thank you for mod, meiikyuu :)

Update Hard and Insane diff~
BeatofIke
Nathien
im a newb to modding, so if its not helpfull, sorry in advance ^^

moddingattempt
Easy:
00:18:926 (1) - maybe give that spinner a normal clap AND finish hitsound at 90% vol? I think it fits the background music better
00:22:268 (1) - here i would also use the normal hitsounds at 90% vol, its a more powerfull part of the song, so it sounds better with more hearable hitsounds
01:24:491 (1) - same here for the whole kiai-time =)
00:56:713 (1,2) - they feel a bit strange here, everything else is more based on the background-beat while these sliders are based on vocals. That may be a bit difficult for beginners. At least it broke my combo at the first play ^^

Normal:
00:21:380 (1) - i'd start that spinner one tick later and make it one tick shorter. Instead of the current spinnerstart, set a hitcircle with clap and finish sound. AND since its the powerfull part again i think normal-hitsounds at 90% vol sound better (same as above ^^)
01:23:602 (2) - same with the hitsounds
01:41:399 (1) - add clap (seems like you forgot ;) )

Hard:
00:04:926 (3) - i set this slider one tick earlier, made it one tick longer and deleted the reverse-arrow, instead of that i added a hitcircle at 00:04:259 (1) think this goes better with the vocals and since its "Hard" it shouldnt be a problem =)
00:12:592 (3) - one tick shorter would match the vocals better.
00:15:259 (2) - ^
00:21:380 (1) - same with the hitsounds as in every other difficulty ^^ for the powerfull part of the song normal-hitsounds at 90% vol
01:23:602 (1) - ^

Insane:
Gerneral: same with the hitsounds as in the other difficultys, just use the normal-hitsounds at 90% on the powerfull parts of the songs
00:03:426 (8) - add hitcircle?
00:09:926 (6) - add 2 more reversearrows? "feels" better to me ^^

thats what i noticed so far, mb it helped somehow =)
nice song anyway, gl with that ^^
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
I don't fix it. But thank you for mod, Nathien

Wait editing the guest diff. I will give kd, if they fixed it.
Leorda
Random mod


[General]
* Please full submit, because I have 3 diff when I download this map


[Konei's Easy]
* The first kiai should end at 01:37:379

00:50:713 (1) - Move further away from previous slider for preventing of overlapping (Nazi)
01:38:713 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu. It makes hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read)


[BeatofIke's Normal]
* There are 138 unsnapped note, please snap it


[Insane]
00:45:157 (2,3) - Add clap?
01:14:157 (4) - Move 1 grid up for fix the curve pattern



Good luck~
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Fixed all...

Thank you for mod, Leorda :)
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