Ovoui wrote:

Hi gezaucisse, j'espere que mon mod te sera utile o/


[Novice]

tout fait, j'ai réorganisé des notes du coup car parfois buguait tout un pattern

[Normal]

00:14:629 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ce genre de patten est vraiment bizarre pour une normal JISUIPOURRIEN
01:34:880 (6) - t'as un overlapping http://youtu.be/Dv_C1qQyefk?t=1m43s
je trouve vraiment aucun moyen de pas niquer mon pattern en revanche

[Standart]

00:14:629 (1,2,3,1) - ton spacing rend le pattern bizarre a jouer la SV est de 0,6 avec un DS de 1 ;_;

[123Lunatic]

00:44:633 (3) - c'est trop illicible c'est overlapping je pense stacking to a whole new level, ça rendrait la suite trop bizarre
02:02:895 (6,1,2,3) - ici essaye peut etre quelque chose comme ca pour le rythme http://puu.sh/cPl0L.png J'ai fait un truc légèrement différent afin d'avoir 02:03:618 - en actif.



Bon voila, y'a pas grand chose, c'est du nazi mod, désolé. Sinon je sais pas trop si ta map est rankable, faudrait peut etre que tu remap des morceau. Bref gl hf o/ J'ai mappé ça y'a 2 ans donc tu sais que c'est vraiment ancré dans mon style de l'année dans laquelle je l'ai mappée, et je compte garder la map dans ce style.

JFCLG wrote:

loul

Aldwych wrote:

JFCLG wrote:

loul

omfg.

Btw poussrouj car pas de taiko diff a ranker. ¦:<

Kurai wrote:

c dla merd

Aka wrote:

ayyyyyyooooooooooooooooo hi hentai lewd baka bat


general

・the previewpoint is unsnapped! I CHANGED IT WHO CARES
・not sure if u need that widescreensupport for that source picture at the end lol it's 4:3
・"Standard" is suppose to be a diffname for Normal i thought.. while your standard is like legit Hard diff D: because i wanted to use both french and english words. will change, they suck <_<


novice

・01:00:900 (1) - 01:15:360 (1) - 01:21:143 (3) - 01:26:927 (3) - 01:47:171 (3) - 01:52:954 (3) - 01:58:738 (3) - im really not sure about more than one reverse slider in easiest difficulty, since there was a situation with disqualification because of 2 reverses slider i don't know how to handle these ones basically, because 84~ bpm reverses are more predictable no matter who plays orz. i will try to have feedback from very new players ><


normal
CS increased by 0.5
・00:14:629 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - aaaaaaaaa thats really slow for such ar. i'd really recommend to higher the sv there like to 0.80 or something and make slider not toucher each other, as long as its a normal diff and 1/1 rhythm, make it clear o: increased SV to .75, deleted 00:16:798 (4) - to make a longer slider on 3.
・00:39:934 (5) - bring some variety for 1/2. sliders with lots of reverses are really unpredictable and not really comfortable most of times, so there i'd suggest to make smth like that with a NC on downbeat:

SPOILER

rearranged the previous notes to put that.
00:58:008 (1) - about variety and readability again and rearranged so it doesn't look fucked
01:37:772 (4) - let's try if slider+1reverse + 2 circles works.
01:45:725 (3) - ^
・00:50:778 (2) - saaaaame thing about reverses. would be nice to divide this with 1/1 sliders etc, or something else but with a circle on the last downbeat, it would suit good, i think cut into 2 sliders + 1 circle
・00:46:440 (1) - so there you followed wtf vocal, and there 00:46:983 (2,3) - .. piano? i'd stick to something one to make this part easier to read the part here is tricky because i actually followed the vocal on both. took out the reverses and modified a bit the part.

SPOILER

・00:49:332 (1,2) - i mentioned somewhere above about loooud finishers. these ones are really loud as well, would be nice to lower wolume a bit for those hitsounds i didn't even bother, lowered for the whole part because why not
・01:17:528 (4) - you just had 1/2 slider with 1 reverse 01:15:360 (1,2) - and now BAM there are 2 reverses. i tetplayed all diffs and this one as well and kinda thought there will be 1 reverse as well. to prevent more sliderbreaks i'd really suggest to change this one to two sliders
01:19:697 (3) - same (01:25:481 (3,4) - like this rhytyhm would be good) BUT PLEASE

SPOILER

thats really clamped and moreover youre continuing this pattern back 01:26:566 (4) - where just 3 secs ago a slider was, could you move it like somewhere out of this corner? I CHANGED THE WHOLE PATTERN THERE THERE
・01:47:171 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - yeyeyeyeye copypasta master, everything above conserns this pattern as well e.e changed the whole thing it's less copypasta


standard hard

・00:14:629 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - same thing about sv and spacing i mentioned in the previous diff >; SV 0.6 DS 1.2. looks alright.
・and overall i'd highly recommend to remake the diff by 1.2x spacing, so every note is clearly visible, exactly like you did in your kiai part OH SPEAKING OF 1.2X

SPOILER

to use a bit less circles. 01:24:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:50:243 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , such stuff etc might be pretty exhausting, baka. they are good for being using in insane instead;
keep in mind that thing about more than 1 repeat arrow and replace it with something iiiinnnnnteresting
nice diff, just try to keep it neat, with consistent spacing. if there was a logic a missed, you can explain to me, but now im just a bit asdghjkl;' on how kinda not really cute it looks /w\ less bk spacing less bk sliders but i keep some 3repeat D:


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・00:34:873 (1,2) - try swapping these objects,reverse slider fits that place better, cause of that BWEBWEBEWBEWBE sound
・00:35:776 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - try to be a bitmore SHY less generous .. with big spacing, make such (u have more later, yea) a biiiit smaller bk ded patrn
00:44:814 (1,2) - i'd rather keep that one as jump, when you're dad you're ded since it's a bit unexpected to have a rather loud sound (calm "la nature sauvage" loud "papa" calm "bonjour")
・00:43:910 (2,3) - PLEASE NO. JUST. DONT ;w; HOW DO I DO IT THEN ;W; *back to restak*
・00:43:187 (4,5,1,2,3) - ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm equalized spacing
00:45:717 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ugu
^^^^^^^ sudden jumps from big spacing to small spacing feels pretty not comportable for a small part of like that, try to ummm, a bit lowering the spacing of big jumps and making a bit bigger the ones i mentioned above
・01:09:576 (1,2,3,4) - remake it with 2 sliders, and triplet please i can undestand that the logic of lots of reverses are for following that BLABALABLABLA sounds but thats really confusing, especially when you see a triplet after a slider and that slider SUDDENLY goes back 2 times and you are break the slider and while messing up, also fucks up with the next, triplet pattern djsqjdjqs also chganged what were here to 2 doubles, feels plre intp song 01:10:660 (1,2,3,4) -
・01:23:312 (1) - any reason for NC? lyric scheme, another guy talks at that moment
・01:25:300 (1) - somthing like circle-slider would fit there much better, youre silencing the downbeat with the reverse while there could something to click
・01:29:819 (1,2,3,4,5) - the "stream" is out of beats actually, its 1/6.. i could help with thinking of the pattern but cant, just this comes to my mind

SPOILER

you also could ignore those sounds and make something simple like you did there: 01:33:795 (3,4) - (just remember the thing about clickable downbeat) but i wanted a simplified stream ;W;
・01:31:988 (1,2,3) - well, about consistent spacing once again what about 0.9 0.8 0.7 ;W;
・same thing goes for your very last kiai. try to stick to one spacing, it should really look and feel better i don't even know what to change ;w; (except 01:52:954 (1,2,3) - that was spaced a lot more and thus has just mirrored the patterus uwu)


and thats all

Kenterz wrote:

RECHEEEEECK

00:00:000 (0) - blanket plz
Kudo plz


[Novice]
00:58:008 (3) - Il est zarbi ce slider (surtout ses curves), essaye le pattern avec la red anchor :

SPOILER

j'ai l'impression qu'il fait moins naturel que ma courbe dans ce cas, mon slider fait plus "manuel" comme un coup de crayon.

[Normal]


00:17:521 (1,2) - blanket plz, c'est plus esthétique après J'ai essayé du mieux que j'ai pu.
00:28:727 (2,3,4) - Pourquoi pas faire un triangle équilatéral ? : done

SPOILER

00:33:427 (1,2,3) - Y'a pas un problème de distance snap là ? OUI EFFECTIVEMENT COMMENT IL A PU
00:39:934 (5,6,7) - Ce pattern là fait un peu trop "entassé" , essaye de les espacer pour que le player de niveau médiocre soit pas trop perdu : J'ai fait dans le même ordre d'idée, mais plutôt vers la gauche afin que je change pas l'intégralité du truc.

SPOILER

00:51:501 (3) - La tête de ce slider n'est pas assez emphasized pour mériter un finish hitsound, je pense que tu devrais le delete. ouais pas faux
01:01:623 (2,1) - Essaye de les bouger pour qu'ils blanket avec 01:01:984 (3) (et en les stackant) t'as pas NC par accident ? mon slider est 3 uwu
01:07:407 (2,4) - Tu devrais les stack, l'overlap est très moche =/
01:28:373 (3) - Sa queue n'est pas assez importante (ça clash) pour avoir un finish, delete le je pense
ok all accepeted

[Hard]
00:26:739 (1) - Tu devrais rajouter un normal hitsound, y'a un beat derrière qui le permet. en fait je
00:27:281 (3,4,5) - RIP la distance snap (vu que c'est une slowpart, je pense que c'est important de la suivre) augmenté à 1.0x
01:28:373 (3) - Même remarque pour le finish sur sa queue ok
01:35:241 (3) - Pareil, ce beat n'est pas assez emphasized, tu devrais delete le finish ok
01:38:676 (1) - ^
02:01:269 (8) - ^

[123Lunatic]

00:46:169 - Tu pourrais mettre un cercle ici, ça ne sera pas overmappé, ça suit le oLIvier de carglass en fait on revient presque au début
00:59:454 (2) - Essaye de refaire ce slider, les deux curves ne sont pas les même =/ corrigé
01:02:979 (5) - Ce cercle là est overmappé par contre =/ j'ai essayé de garder un bon truc là, un fake stack sur les 3 j'ai pas mieux
01:05:238 (1) - Pourquoi y'a un whistle sur ce slider ? C'est useless ouais.
01:46:809 (5) - Il est unrankable ce slider (comme je l'ai dit dans le dernier mod). Je te conseille de le changer pour évité le dq inutile =/ (et puis ça te coute rien de le changer) je viens de demander à Shiro, ça passe. J'vais essayer de choper d'autres avis car c'est un petit truc à la con, y'a pas vraiment de manip de SV à proprement parler et est "lisible" du premier coup (même si tu changes en TR2 tu peux lire correctement). Je garderai ça en réserve au cas où, ceci dit.

A toi de voir si ça mérite le kudosu
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Mao wrote:

What the song o.o

theramdans wrote:

multi reverse sliders ._.
easy (novice) diff has sv change ._.

*just saying, I would have avoided these If I were u, gratz btw, pls dont hit me or anything*

Guidelines wrote:

When including a slider velocity change, there should be a discernible change in the map's tempo. A spacing change, a short break in the map, or a slider containing at least one tick will help show the transition between them.