Shihori - Magic Girl !!

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08:59 <Metro> : what's your next map
09:00 <Frostmourne> : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/51145 here and http://osu.ppy.sh/s/53519
09:00 <Frostmourne> : I hope it would be fun also xD
09:00 <Metro> : tell me 1 map
09:00 <Metro> : I want to take al ook
09:01 <Metro> : and I need to go study
09:01 <Frostmourne> : the first one is relax song and second one is jumpy map
09:01 <Frostmourne> : you can choose to see what you want to xD
09:01 <Metro> : ok second one
09:01 <Frostmourne> : oh as I thought xD
09:02 <Metro> : I already have suggestions
09:02 <Metro> : lol
09:03 <Metro> : we need to spice up your mapping
09:03 <Frostmourne> : ohhh
09:03 <Frostmourne> : if it's good I will add them surely xD
09:04 <Metro> : nice hitsound work
09:04 <Frostmourne> : thank you :3
09:06 <Metro> : well
09:06 <Metro> : your maps are well mapped but it seems that you don't want to make them really difficult
09:06 <Metro> : as if you want to make them nice to play period
09:06 <Metro> : am I correct or are you just lacking ideas on how to make them harder
09:06 <Frostmourne> : oh that's true~
09:06 <Metro> : which one lol
09:07 <Metro> : you don't want to make them very hard?
09:07 <Frostmourne> : 1st one
09:07 <Metro> : yeah I figured
09:07 <Metro> : but I'll still suggest
09:07 <Frostmourne> : yeah let me see xD
09:08 <Metro> : 00:06:193 (1,2,3,4) -
09:08 <Metro> : amateur slider disposition
09:08 <Metro> : try to think something new
09:09 <Metro> : ok here is what I saw that is very important at least to me
09:09 <Metro> : 00:17:924 (1) -
09:09 <Metro> : many more sliders like this
09:09 <Metro> : I think that the SV should be a little bit more in them
09:09 <Metro> : you make sliders so they vibrate
09:09 <Metro> : but they're so slow they don't fit the music
09:09 <Metro> : they need to be a bit faster
09:09 <Metro> : understand?
09:09 <Frostmourne> : maybe I use high slider velocity with this slider ?
09:10 <Metro> : yes only in that slider
09:10 <Frostmourne> : that will sound interesting !
09:10 <Metro> : that slider and all others that are like that
09:10 <Metro> : that was the one thing I saw
09:10 <Metro> : now I'm thinking that maybe this slider could be shorter
09:10 <Metro> : let me try
09:10 <Frostmourne> : ok~
09:11 <Frostmourne> : but about 00:06:193 (1,2,3,4) - , it's like the first run of this song
09:11 <Metro> : wait wait wait
09:11 <Metro> : let me lead this
09:11 <Metro> : I just woke up and this is my first mod to something in months
09:11 <Frostmourne> : oh okay~
09:14 <Metro> : suggestion
09:14 <Metro> : 00:17:924 (1) -
09:14 <Metro> : asd
09:14 <Metro> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/359921
09:14 <Metro> : shorter slider
09:14 <Metro> : music wise
09:14 <Metro> : faster SV plz
09:14 <Metro> : then add note
09:15 <Metro> : and that's it!
09:15 <Frostmourne> : ohh ok !
09:15 <Metro> : oh the note I added should be start of new combo
09:15 <Metro> : my bad
09:15 <Metro> : 00:25:040 (2,3,4,5) -
09:15 <Metro> : amateur note disposition
09:16 <Metro> : think something better
09:16 <Metro> : 00:29:270 (1) -
09:16 <Metro> : important slider
09:16 <Metro> : please try to change it to something different
09:16 <Metro> : this is very average slider XD
09:18 <Metro> : 00:54:655 (1,2,3,4) -
09:18 <Metro> : more spacing! this part is very fit for jumps!
09:18 <Metro> : 00:58:116 (1,2,3) -
09:18 <Metro> : amateur notes disposition
09:18 <Metro> : please think something better
09:18 <Frostmourne> : ok made it
09:18 <Metro> : let me finish please :D
09:18 <Metro> : I shouldn't be doing this
09:18 <Metro> : I should be studying :3
09:19 <Metro> : 01:05:232 (2) -
09:19 <Metro> : previous 3 sliders are similar
09:19 <Metro> : but that's nice feeling to me
09:19 <Metro> : this one is like copypaste I don't know what to do
09:19 <Metro> : change direction!
09:20 <Metro> : ok STOP
09:20 <Metro> : now I need to check NC
09:20 <Metro> : 00:01:578 (2) -
09:20 <Metro> : this should be NC imo, not the previous note
09:20 <Metro> : (we will have a lot of disagreements here, you analyze the ones you seem fit and ignore me if you think they're not)
09:20 <Metro> : 00:02:540 (5) -
09:20 <Metro> : NC
09:21 <Metro> : 00:05:424 (1) -
09:21 <Metro> : imo remove NC and make 00:05:616 (2) - have it
09:21 <Metro> : or just remove NC completely
09:22 <Metro> : 00:08:116 (1) -
09:22 <Metro> : remove NC
09:22 <Metro> : also
09:22 <Metro> : 00:07:732 (1,2,1,2) -
09:22 <Metro> : amateur disposition imo, not that bad though
09:22 <Metro> : 00:08:693 (2) -
09:22 <Metro> : NC
09:22 <Frostmourne> : emm from my feel
09:22 <Metro> : don't answer frosty!
09:23 <Metro> : I just want to finish this
09:23 <Frostmourne> : -.-
09:23 <Metro> : you can answer in mod post later :D
09:23 <Frostmourne> : okok
09:23 <Frostmourne> : kk = =
09:23 <Metro> : 00:13:886 (7) -
09:23 <Metro> : NC
09:24 <Metro> : 00:15:424 (4) -
09:24 <Metro> : NC
09:24 <Metro> : 00:16:770 (1) -
09:24 <Metro> : remove NC
09:24 <Metro> : 00:16:963 (2) -
09:24 <Metro> : NC
09:25 <Metro> : 00:19:848 (5) -
09:25 <Metro> : imo replace slider with 2 circles
09:25 <Metro> : 2nd circle NC
09:25 <Metro> : 00:21:578 (1) -
09:25 <Metro> : look that is good NC
09:25 <Metro> : that's the way I want NC's to be
09:25 <Metro> : and you did it yourself
09:26 <Metro> : all good until first break with combos after that :D
09:26 <Metro> : tururu!
09:26 <Metro> : 00:51:001 (1) -
09:27 <Metro> : I understand NC here
09:27 <Metro> : but is it really necessary?
09:27 <Metro> : up to you
09:27 <Metro> : 00:57:540 (1) -
09:27 <Metro> : here NC makes more sense
09:55 <Metro> : my internet died
09:55 <Metro> : I'll continue mod post later
09:55 <Metro> : this is last part
09:56 <Metro> : http://puu.sh/Fxvv
09:58 <Frostmourne> : end?
09:58 <Frostmourne> : I can talk ?
10:04 <Metro> : I'm VERY busy lol
10:04 <Metro> : let's finish this
10:05 <Metro> : 01:01:578 (8) -
10:05 <Metro> : NC!!!!!!!!!!
10:06 <Metro> : 01:01:193 (4) -
10:06 <Metro> : NC would look great here!!! think about it
10:07 <Metro> : baka why are you playing?!
10:07 <Metro> : 01:02:155 (1) -
10:07 <Metro> : remove NC
10:07 <Frostmourne> : because you told me to not answer you
10:07 <Metro> : 01:02:347 (2) -
10:07 <Metro> : add here if you want to
10:07 <Metro> : haha ok
10:08 <Metro> : NC check done
10:08 <Metro> : now I'll try to do both at the same time
10:10 <Metro> : ohh I'm seeing very good idea here
10:12 <Metro> : OH YES
10:12 <Metro> : THIS LOOKS GREAT
10:12 <Metro> : STOP PLAYING
10:14 <Frostmourne> : ..
10:17 <Metro> : haha lookk
10:17 <Metro> : 01:10:809 (1) -
10:17 <Metro> : from this part
10:18 <Metro> : http://puu.sh/FxHk
10:18 <Metro> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/360000
10:18 <Metro> : understand?
10:18 <Metro> : look at SCRENSHOT NUMBER
10:18 <Metro> : KAMI NO SIGN
10:19 <Metro> : KAMI MAPPING!
10:22 <Frostmourne> : = =
10:22 <Metro> : understand?
10:22 <Frostmourne> : emm = = I guess
10:22 <Frostmourne> : I see
10:22 <Metro> : harder to SS!
10:23 <Metro> : mostly with HR!
10:23 <Metro> : and fits music very well!
10:23 <Metro> : my note disposition there is only for show
10:24 <Metro> : you choose how you want it
10:24 <Metro> : but the rhythm I made I think fits very well
10:24 <Frostmourne> : kk , you post it so I can choose what I want
10:24 <Frostmourne> : Thank you very much Metro !
10:24 <Metro> : I'M NOT DONE BAKA FROSTMOURNE
10:25 <Metro> : 01:21:386 (1) -
10:25 <Metro> : remove NC
10:25 <Metro> : 01:21:578 (2) -
10:25 <Metro> : NC
10:25 <Metro> : 01:21:770 (1) -
10:25 <Metro> : remove NC
10:25 <Metro> : 01:22:155 (1) -
10:26 <Metro> : remove NC
10:26 <Metro> : 01:26:193 (3) -
10:26 <Metro> : NC
10:26 <Metro> : 01:26:578 (1) -
10:26 <Metro> : remove NC
10:27 <Metro> : 01:26:963 (1) -
10:27 <Metro> : suggestion, REMOVE NOTE
10:27 <Metro> : 01:27:155 (2) -
10:27 <Metro> : stack with previous note: 01:26:770 (5) -
10:34 <Frostmourne> : anything else ._.?
10:41 <Metro> : sorry dude
10:41 <Metro> : you have no idea how busy my life is now
10:42 <Frostmourne> : emm. I'm sorry
10:43 <Metro> : don't be sorry!
10:43 <Metro> : I'm just very busy! :P
10:43 <Metro> : I'll continue now
10:43 <Metro> : I love your maps and the songs you map to :D
10:43 <Frostmourne> : thanks for that~
10:44 <Metro> : about last thing I said
10:44 <Metro> : look
10:44 <Metro> : osu.ppy.sh/ss/360033
10:44 <Metro> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/360033
10:44 <Metro> : it's very good!
10:45 <Metro> : 01:31:770 (1) -
10:46 <Metro> : shorter slider with higher SV like I told you!
10:46 <Metro> : first half done :3
10:46 <Metro> : now I have to check 2nd half of map :D:D:D:D
10:47 <Metro> : 01:50:040 (1) -
10:47 <Metro> : suggestion, replace with 2 circles, just a little bit more of difficulty!
10:48 <Metro> : ok here
10:48 <Metro> : is one of the parts I liked but didn't like
10:48 <Metro> : 01:58:501 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) -
10:48 <Metro> : here I like going back and all the time
10:48 <Metro> : but I don't like that you use THE SAME shape twice
10:50 <Metro> : ok first
10:50 <Metro> : 02:00:040 (5) -
10:50 <Metro> : NC
10:50 <Metro> : 02:00:232 (1) -
10:50 <Metro> : remove NC
10:51 <Metro> : disregard about the same shape, I actually like it
10:51 <Metro> : but I want to change this
10:51 <Metro> : 02:00:809 (4,1) -
10:51 <Metro> : make this only 1 slider like this
10:51 <Metro> : 4 should be the start of the slider
10:51 <Metro> : end I'll tell you
10:54 <Metro> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/360051
10:54 <Metro> : like this!
10:54 <Metro> : no I change one slider position
10:55 <Metro> : osu.ppy.sh/ss/360053
10:55 <Metro> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/360053
10:55 <Metro> : like this
10:55 <Metro> : 02:03:116 (7) -
10:55 <Metro> : NC
10:56 <Metro> : 02:03:693 (2) -
10:56 <Metro> : remove NC
10:56 <Metro> : maybe if you click it won't work
10:56 <Metro> : I'm changing NC as I mod
10:56 <Metro> : but please look at the timings of each pasted line
10:56 <Frostmourne> : it does
10:56 <Metro> : oo
10:56 <Metro> : ok
10:56 <Frostmourne> : :3
10:57 <Metro> : 02:04:463 (1) -
10:57 <Metro> : remove NC
10:57 <Metro> : 02:04:655 (7) -
10:57 <Metro> : NC
10:57 <Metro> : 02:05:809 (1) -
10:57 <Metro> : remove NC
10:57 <Metro> : 02:06:193 (5) -
10:57 <Metro> : NC
10:59 <Metro> : 02:08:309 (4) -
10:59 <Metro> : suggestion, NC, I think it'd look better :3
11:00 <Metro> : 02:12:347 (4) -
11:00 <Metro> : NC
11:00 <Metro> : 02:12:540 (2) -
11:00 <Metro> : remove NC
11:00 <Metro> : 02:13:693 (1) -
11:00 <Metro> : suggestion: stack with slider end :3
11:01 <Metro> : "mandatory": NC
11:01 <Metro> : sorry
11:01 <Metro> : "mandayory": remove NC
11:01 <Metro> : mandatory FUCK ME XD
11:01 <Metro> : 02:13:886 (2) -
11:01 <Metro> : NC
11:07 <Metro> : 01:11:963 (6) -
11:07 <Metro> : I'm looking what I told you here
11:07 <Metro> : and I think I might not really like it
11:07 <Metro> : and maybe it should be the way you did it
11:11 <Metro> : 02:16:193 (6) -
11:11 <Metro> : suggestion: remove note
11:11 <Metro> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/360080
11:11 <Metro> : 02:16:386 (6) -
11:11 <Metro> : NC
11:12 <Metro> : 02:16:770 (1) -
11:12 <Metro> : remove NC
11:12 <Metro> : 02:16:963 (3) -
11:12 <Metro> : NC
11:12 <Metro> : 02:17:155 (4) -
11:12 <Metro> : remove NC
11:12 <Metro> : no sorry
11:12 <Metro> : 02:16:963 (3) -
11:12 <Metro> : this should be NC
11:12 <Metro> : 02:17:540 (1) -
11:12 <Metro> : remove NC
11:13 <Metro> : 02:18:501 (5) -
11:13 <Metro> : NC
11:13 <Metro> : 02:18:693 (1) -
11:13 <Metro> : remove NC
11:13 <Metro> : 02:22:924 (1) -
11:13 <Metro> : remove NC
11:13 <Metro> : 02:23:116 (4) -
11:13 <Metro> : NC
11:14 <Metro> : 02:23:309 (1) -
11:14 <Metro> : remove NC
11:14 <Metro> : 02:27:540 (1) -
11:14 <Metro> : suggestion, change for circle here
11:14 <Metro> : 02:27:540 (5) -
11:15 <Metro> : lalarun style
11:15 <Metro> : stacked on slider beginning
11:15 <Metro> : and then
11:15 <Metro> : 02:27:828 (6) -
11:15 <Metro> : NC
11:15 <Metro> : oh no
11:15 <Metro> : add note here
11:16 <Metro> : 02:27:732 (1) -
11:16 <Metro> : this note should be the NC
11:16 <Metro> : 02:28:693 (1) -
11:16 <Metro> : NC
11:16 <Metro> : 02:29:078 (1) -
11:16 <Metro> : remove NC
11:16 <Metro> : 02:29:270 (3) -
11:16 <Metro> : NC
11:17 <Metro> : 02:29:463 (1) -
11:17 <Metro> : remove NC
11:17 <Metro> : 02:33:309 (1) -
11:17 <Metro> : here I like wiggly slider with notes next to it :3
11:17 <Metro> : very good variation if you change previous wiggly sliders :3
11:18 <Metro> : 02:34:847 (5,6) -
11:18 <Metro> : replace with 2 x2 circles!
11:19 <Metro> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/360095
11:19 <Metro> : something like this
11:20 <Metro> : 02:46:193 (7) -
11:20 <Metro> : NC
11:20 <Metro> : 02:46:386 (1) -
11:20 <Metro> : remove NC
11:21 <Metro> : 02:58:501 (1) -
11:21 <Metro> : NC
11:21 <Metro> : 02:58:693 (2) -
11:21 <Metro> : remove NC
11:21 <Metro> : 03:00:040 (5) -
11:21 <Metro> : NC
11:21 <Metro> : 03:01:193 (3) -
11:21 <Metro> : change STUPID STRAIGHT SLIDER!!! XDDDDDDDDD
11:21 <Metro> : OK FINAL PART ALMOST
11:22 <Metro> : 03:10:809 (3) -
11:22 <Metro> : this is very nice looking slider!
11:22 <Metro> : other sliders should try to be original like this :3
11:22 <Metro> : 03:10:616 (1) -
11:22 <Metro> : remove NC
11:22 <Metro> : 03:10:809 (3) -
11:22 <Metro> : original slider NC
11:23 <Metro> : 03:11:963 (3) -
11:23 <Metro> : remove NC
11:23 <Metro> : 03:12:155 (4) -
11:23 <Metro> : NC
11:23 <Metro> : 03:12:924 (1) -
11:23 <Metro> : remove NC
11:23 <Metro> : 03:16:963 (1) -
11:23 <Metro> : THIS IS REALLY LAST PART
11:23 <Metro> : from here
11:24 <Metro> : I think you could use more spacing
11:24 <Metro> : like 1.2
11:24 <Metro> : make it a little bit harder at the end
11:24 <Metro> : but that's really up to you
11:24 <Metro> : and it's completely opposite to what you want of your maps
11:24 <Metro> : only my suggestion ;)
11:24 <Metro> : 03:18:309 (1) -
11:24 <Metro> : remove NC
11:24 <Metro> : 03:18:501 (7) -
11:24 <Metro> : NC
11:24 <Metro> : 03:18:693 (1) -
11:24 <Metro> : remove NC
11:24 <Metro> : 03:19:078 (1) -
11:25 <Metro> : remove NC
11:25 <Metro> : 03:20:040 (4) -
11:25 <Metro> : NC
11:25 <Metro> : 03:20:424 (1) -
11:25 <Metro> : remove NC
11:25 <Metro> : 03:21:386 (1) -
11:25 <Metro> : remove NC
11:25 <Metro> : 03:21:578 (8) -
11:25 <Metro> : NC
11:26 <Metro> : 03:22:924 (2) -
11:26 <Metro> : make bigger jump!!!!!!!!!
11:26 <Metro> : 03:19:463 (1) -
11:26 <Metro> : remove NC
11:26 <Metro> : 03:22:732 (1,2) -
11:26 <Metro> : this two could be very good jumps
11:26 <Metro> : both big spacing
11:27 <Metro> : 03:24:655 (4) -
11:27 <Metro> : NC
11:27 <Metro> : 03:24:847 (1) -
11:27 <Metro> : remove NC
11:27 <Metro> : 03:26:001 (1) -
11:27 <Metro> : remove NC
11:27 <Metro> : 03:26:193 (7) -
11:27 <Metro> : NC
11:28 <Metro> : 03:33:693 (1) -
11:28 <Metro> : remove NC
11:28 <Metro> : 03:34:078 (1) -
11:28 <Metro> : remove NC
11:28 <Metro> : 03:35:232 (1) -
11:28 <Metro> : remove NC
11:28 <Metro> : 03:35:424 (5) -
11:28 <Metro> : NC
11:29 <Metro> : 03:36:001 (1) -
11:29 <Metro> : remove NC
11:29 <Metro> : 03:36:386 (7,8) -
11:29 <Metro> : replace with 2 2x circles
11:29 <Metro> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/360104
11:30 <Metro> : maybe you can stack them so it's different from previous time
11:30 <Metro> : 03:36:963 (1) -
11:30 <Metro> : this is good but I would make another stream here
11:30 <Metro> : people get nervous at the end so don't put repeat sliders here
11:30 <Metro> : this is the time to make the map harder rhythmic wise
11:30 <Metro> : so they get x100
11:30 <Metro> : I'M SO EVIL :D
11:31 <Metro> : 03:39:847 (1) -
11:31 <Metro> : remove NC
11:31 <Metro> : 03:40:040 (3) -
11:31 <Metro> : NC
11:31 <Metro> : 03:40:809 (1) -
11:31 <Metro> : remove NC
11:31 <Metro> : 03:41:194 (5) -
11:31 <Metro> : NC
11:31 <Metro> : 03:42:155 (1) -
11:31 <Metro> : remove NC
11:32 <Metro> : 03:46:001 (1) -
11:32 <Metro> : remove NC
11:32 <Metro> : 03:46:193 (9) -
11:32 <Metro> : NC
11:32 <Metro> : 03:46:386 (1) -
11:32 <Metro> : remove NC
11:32 <Metro> : 03:47:155 (1) -
11:32 <Metro> : remove NC
11:33 <Metro> : 03:47:828 (1) -
11:33 <Metro> : make stream!!!!!!!!
11:33 <Metro> : 03:49:270 (1) -
11:33 <Metro> : make stream!!!!!!!!!!
11:33 <Metro> : 03:50:809 (1) -
11:33 <Metro> : make stream!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
11:33 <Metro> : 03:51:770 (3,4) -
11:33 <Metro> : now we keep 2x sliders
11:33 <Metro> : so people let go sliders because they think we'll put 2x circles again
11:33 <Metro> : :3
11:34 <Metro> : WE'RE EVIL PEOPLE
11:34 <Metro> : (or at least I am)
11:34 <Metro> : 03:52:347 (5) -
11:34 <Metro> : NC
11:34 <Metro> : 03:52:540 (1) -
11:34 <Metro> : remove NC
11:34 <Metro> : 03:53:309 (1) -
11:34 <Metro> : remove NC
11:34 <Metro> : 03:53:501 (5) -
11:34 <Metro> : NC
11:34 <Metro> : acceptable ending slider
11:34 <Metro> : ARE YOU ALIVE BRO
11:34 <Metro> : I'M DONE WITH YOUR MAP
11:36 <Frostmourne> : okk
11:37 <Frostmourne> : post it ~
11:37 <Metro> : yeah wait a bit
11:37 <Metro> : The world is not beautiful.
11:37 <Metro> : You can't get what you want like you dreamed or thought of it.
11:37 <Metro> : You can't trust anyone. You can't even trust your friend also.
11:37 <Metro> : You can trust only yourself. If you don't, you shouldn't even dare to do anything I swear.
11:37 <Metro> : this are very bad and sad words
11:37 <Metro> : The world IS beautiful.
11:38 <Metro> : You can get what you want like you dreamed or thought.
11:38 <Frostmourne> : I'm not happy right now btw
11:38 <Frostmourne> : many serious thing
11:38 <Metro> : You can trust lots of people. Start with your family and your friends. BUT be careful and pick wisely.
11:38 <Frostmourne> : I'm encounting btw
11:38 <Metro> : Trusting yourself is very important. If you don't, you shouldn't even dare to do anything, trust me.
11:38 <Metro> : FIXED text for you
11:38 <Metro> : READ IT
11:38 <Metro> : OK?
11:39 <Frostmourne> : it looks more happy and pleased
11:39 <Frostmourne> : but I'm not like that..
11:39 <Metro> : I'm telling you the way it is
11:39 <Metro> : even if you can't realize it
11:39 <Metro> : trust me
11:39 <Metro> : that's the way this world is
11:40 <Metro> : you can do it
11:42 <Metro> : wait a bit now please
11:46 <Metro> : 00:08:501 (1) -
11:46 <Metro> : this should be NC according to my mod
11:47 <Metro> : I'm fixing the map myself so you can see a lot of the changes, please wait
11:47 <Metro> : I meant
11:47 <Metro> : 00:08:501 (1) -
11:47 <Metro> : should be 5, not NC
11:47 <Metro> : you'll see in the map
11:47 <Metro> : I can't read you right now, I'm scrolled up
11:48 <Metro> : 00:13:886 (7) -
11:48 <Metro> : NC
11:50 <Metro> : 00:51:001 (3) -
11:50 <Metro> : I removed NC here
11:52 <Metro> : 00:51:001 (3) - this stays as it is
11:54 <Metro> : 01:50:040 (1) - forget this suggestion
11:57 <Metro> : 01:11:770 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) -
11:57 <Metro> : I make lots of changes here you'll see in my edited diff
IRC monologd.

Here is the diff with lots of my changes so you can understand my post better (I didn't apply all of them so you'll need to check the log thoroughly anyway).

Frosty ganbatte! <3.

PS: Present ;).
Topic Starter
Frostmourne
I did some NC respectively but some of them I won't change it cuz it does ruin my new combo system which is not same as many mapper do.
but it still makes sense at all because I did many in my previous ranked map. So I think some are fine but some I should fix.

Slider velocity, as I said via IRC, I would like to make consistency of shape,speed and distance with each other. So I will leave it here either.

00:54:655 (1,2,3,4) - I don't want to move it cuz in fact, it sounds in stream way , but I didn't add stream cuz I think it doesn't still reach kiai part so I won't make a jump which it should be stream like here.

01:03:693 (2) - and 01:05:232 (2) - , the end of slider exactly ends at the same point , I want to make it proper so I think it's ok to place it even it looks like copy paste , but I will do it if it does fit very well like here

and about intro part , I placed them very very neat. I just don't see anything else to be fitted more than these pattern.

That's all :3

Thank you very very much Metro :D
wcx19911123
from my queue
sorry for the huge delay
checked and all fine, kinda nice map
bubbled
Topic Starter
Frostmourne
so fast o_o''

Thank you wcx \:D/
blissfulyoshi
Yell it! Yell it! When you wish upon a star...... Woops wrong song....HAI!!!

I personally like 2s lead-ins more than 3s lead-ins. Long lead-in times annoy me as I have to constantly retry the map (personal thing, so feel free to do whatever you want here)
Your map uses soft custom hitsounds, but I don't see any soft custom hitsounds in the folder. Did you forget them, or they didn't exist in the first place?

Normal:
Aesthetics/Style mod:
01:48:501 (3) - I really want to align this note with 2, but I know it will cause overlap. I personally think it looks better if you move the note a bit upward to form a diagonal of sorts

Combo mod:
00:15:424 (3) and 00:16:963 (1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 so that the next few combos all follow the same sound in the music
03:12:347 (1) and 03:14:270 (4) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 4 because 4 is the start of a new line of lyrics (I know this creates a combo of 1 long, so I won't force you to do it)
03:26:193 (4) - new combo for new line of lyrics

Hard:
Aesthetics/Style mod:
00:48:501 (7) - align the end with 00:49:270 (1)?
01:21:770 (1,2,3,4) - the stacking creates overlap here, so if you want, you can manually stack it to make it look a bit cleaner (the repeat on the 2nd chorus is fine)
03:32:155 (6) - ^ (same scenario with stacking here)

Combo mod:
00:07:732 (3) - new combo to be consistent with your combos every large white tick
00:56:963 (3,1) - Make 3 part of the next combo because they lyrics seem to fit better that way.
03:36:963 (5) - new combo for large white tick

Lunatic:
Aesthetics/Style mod:
02:12:347 (4,1) - this antijump felt extremely awkward to play imo

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Open your eyes and the times has come to step. You are already a star in this floor now......
Been a while since I last modded but great mapset overall. Call me back when you made your changes/provide changes why you don't want to, and I'll see where to go from there. you will see the beautiful scenery ever seen so far... (I think I deleted my copy of eurobet vol.3, so these references will have to do)
Topic Starter
Frostmourne

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Yell it! Yell it! When you wish upon a star...... Woops wrong song....HAI!!! \:D/ Hi blissful
I personally like 2s lead-ins more than 3s lead-ins. Long lead-in times annoy me as I have to constantly retry the map (personal thing, so feel free to do whatever you want here) Emm , I personally want to keep 3s lead in as bamboo dance and bloody night are but I think this song is the longest so okay :D , 2s lead in ;) \

Normal:
Aesthetics/Style mod:
01:48:501 (3) - I really want to align this note with 2, but I know it will cause overlap. I personally think it looks better if you move the note a bit upward to form a diagonal of sorts I align 01:50:040 (5) - with 01:48:501 (3) - instead so it will look like (V shape?) :P

Combo mod:
00:15:424 (3) and 00:16:963 (1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 so that the next few combos all follow the same sound in the music Fixed, (I also think it can divide the type of slider and note too)
03:12:347 (1) and 03:14:270 (4) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 4 because 4 is the start of a new line of lyrics (I know this creates a combo of 1 long, so I won't force you to do it) according to vocal , I think new combo here is very fit :D (louder sound) so, leave it here :3
03:26:193 (4) - new combo for new line of lyrics fixed :3

Hard:
Aesthetics/Style mod:
00:48:501 (7) - align the end with 00:49:270 (1)? maybe my personal opinion , from moving a bit up between (7) and (1) I think it kinda follows the vocal too (I feel it more comfortable here) so leave it here :3
01:21:770 (1,2,3,4) - the stacking creates overlap here, so if you want, you can manually stack it to make it look a bit cleaner (the repeat on the 2nd chorus is fine)
03:32:155 (6) - ^ (same scenario with stacking here)
about stacking , I should blame stack leniency , I think they are fine , even a bit overlapped but I think it still look good :3
so leave it here~


Combo mod:
00:07:732 (3) - new combo to be consistent with your combos every large white tick fixed !
00:56:963 (3,1) - Make 3 part of the next combo because they lyrics seem to fit better that way. seems so ! fixed
03:36:963 (5) - new combo for large white tick fixed

Lunatic:
Aesthetics/Style mod:
02:12:347 (4,1) - this antijump felt extremely awkward to play imo Agreed :D, I separated them into 1 slider and 1 note instead and place like this (I think from (4) jump to (1) has given a very good flow now :D)

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Open your eyes and the times has come to step. You are already a star in this floor now......
Been a while since I last modded but great mapset overall. Call me back when you made your changes/provide changes why you don't want to, and I'll see where to go from there. you will see the beautiful scenery ever seen so far... (I think I deleted my copy of eurobet vol.3, so these references will have to do)
Thank you Blissful:3
blissfulyoshi
Write over the tears
Don't be afraid of going forward
Now, in your eyes, twinkle, sweet dreams So,
Everybody say the "Rank!!!"
Topic Starter
Frostmourne

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Write over the tears
Don't be afraid of going forward
Now, in your eyes, twinkle, sweet dreams So,
Everybody say the "Rank!!!"
Thank you blissful xD
Gray Wolf
gz with rank
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
12:34:567 (8) - move up 9 grids and move left 10 grids, then push inside for 11 grids xD
S o r d a
yey Gratz!
xsrsbsns
congrats~!
Quilt
congratz \^^/
Darksonic
Congratz, this is awesome <3
caren_sk
congrats !!
wring
gratzzzz ;)
Noob Man
Awesome map for an awesome song. =w=
Congrats !
KinomiCandy
Congrats, Frosty ~
Scorpiour
nice map~~congrats
Loneight
congrats ~ Frostmourne . :)
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