Hello, just thought I'll try modding this.
[Giffen's Shotgun]
00:19:459 (1,2) - Flow is great until here: probably reverse slider 2 and orient it so that the cursor draws a right-side-up U from right to left.
00:24:405 (9,10) - Remove these as the previous measure did not contain these 1/4 notes.
Regarding the previous note, throughout the song there are similar parts like these (e.g. 01:09:652 (4,5) and 01:11:441 (2,3) ) where the singer trails off at the end of a verse. Try to make the beat consistent on these parts.
00:39:452 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - These are all 1/2 notes and felt a little tedious. How about adding 1/4 notes when the singer goes "baby, you are"?
01:14:598 (6,7,8,9) - Stream instead of stack? Similar parts like 01:18:070 (2,3,4,5) are streams; they flow better.
01:45:955 (10,11,12) - same as above: stream instead of stack, especially since because of 01:45:745 (9) it feels awkward keeping cursor in same location.
[Hard]
01:33:960 (1,2,3) - Small change here, to make it more interesting:
http://puu.sh/7IPGZ.jpg[Bakari's Normal]
00:29:561 (5,6,1) - Let's make this one match the beat of 00:27:877 (1,2,3,4); perhaps move 00:31:034 (6,1) half a beat earlier.
02:29:098 (1,2) - Delete for pause in music.
02:54:352 (1,2,3) - Try arranging them in some sort of triangle instead of a stack.
[Easy]
00:49:344 (2) - Starting a slider here feels a little awkward, maybe break this into a circle followed by shorter slider instead. That way the beat feels more consistent overall to me.
02:40:463 (1) - Have this start one beat earlier, when the singer says "don't" (in the other kiai times, a slider starts as soon as singer says "don't", but in this part there is none, so again this is for consistency)
[Ends' Muzukashii]
00:26:404 (34) - d?
01:38:800 (321) - k (or make this section match the first kiai time section since they're pretty much the same anyway)
00:45:135 - add d here (too huge a gap)
01:32:276 - ^
01:38:484 - d (since 00:51:238 (133,134,135) had a triplet)
01:56:899 - add ddd here and anywhere else where there's a drumroll in the background (01:58:162 and others are longer, so ddddd)
[Ends' Oni]
00:52:079 (205) - move to 00:52:500 instead (to match the singer's pause in verse)
01:52:269 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121) - I see that you are repeating kkd to match the way the singer sings; however, you didn't map this type of beat in the corresponding times of the first kiai section (01:05:128 to about 01:06:811 ).
02:34:780 (38) - similar to above