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Duca - Ashita Tenki ni Naare (Short Ver.)

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S o r d a
Yume_old_old
Mythol you should remove the Short Ver from you map title >.< Because of the new rule~

no kd~
Topic Starter
Mythol
ok :>
-kevincela-
Another duca map! :O

[General]

  1. There's an .osb file in your folder. Feel free to delete it and full submit,since you aren't using any SB at the moment.


[Easy]

  1. 00:25:350 (1) - A whistle at the end of the slider would fit with the singer's voice alteration (that goes in high pitch). If you do this,remember to put a whistle at the end of the slider 00:26:770 (2) - !
  2. 00:36:710 (1,2) - The suggestion above applies for these sliders,too!
  3. 00:53:397 - Add a note here with a clap? This would make a bit more consistent the clap pattern with 00:50:557 (3) - and it plays pretty good there!
  4. 00:59:432 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider? It fits and again this makes the whistle pattern with 01:00:852 (2,3) - more consistent
  5. 01:10:793 (1) - ^
  6. 01:34:225 (1) - Move this note at x:140 y:172 to make a pretty blanket with 01:32:805 (3) - ?


[kosiga's Normal]

  1. 00:32:805 (1) - Move this new combo on 00:31:740 (4) - ?


[S o r d a's Hard]

  1. From AIBat:
    • Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
    1. 00:12:217 (snap to 00:12:213)
    2. 00:25:176 (snap to 00:25:172)
    3. 00:30:768 (snap to 00:30:764)
    4. 00:31:212 (snap to 00:31:208)
    5. 00:31:478 (snap to 00:31:474)
    6. 00:33:785 (snap to 00:33:781)
    7. 00:34:407 (snap to 00:34:403)
    8. 00:36:626 (snap to 00:36:622)
    9. 00:36:803 (snap to 00:36:799)
    10. 00:42:306 (snap to 00:42:302)
  2. 00:10:261 - Add a note here to follow the guitar in the background?
  3. 00:26:592 (6) - The whistle at the end of this slider sounds a bit strange,since there aren't any other whistles other than this and since the pattern is entirely done using claps. Delete it,since you aren't going to use this in the following pattern too?
  4. 00:28:012 (1) - The blanket with 00:27:657 (9) - is a bit wrong. Move this 1 grid down to fix that?
  5. 00:39:373 (7) - Since you have used this in the previous pattern,put a new combo here,too?
  6. 00:55:527 (1) - Pretty useless New combo... Delete it or move it to 00:54:994 (5) -
  7. 01:17:184 (3) - Add a clap at the beginning? It would follow the drums and it would fit with the 1/1 clap pattern you're using at 01:17:184 (3,1) -
  8. 01:36:355 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Well,it would be better if you use a pattern like this in this part... If you want to use this new pattern I have done for you,just copy the following code replacing the older ones:
    424,308,96355,6,0,B|409:346|370:363,2,80,4|0|0
    355,239,96888,2,0,B|317:256|278:240,2,80,8|0|0
    352,140,97421,2,0,B|313:125|296:86,2,80,4|0|0
    436,92,97953,2,0,B|419:54|435:15,2,80,12|0|0
    464,204,98486,5,8
    464,204,98841,1,8


[Insane]

  1. 00:44:521 (3) - move this in x:304 y:304 to make it equidistant with 00:43:811 (1,2) - ?


And that's pretty much it. Good luck with your map :D
MMzz
  • Insane;

    00:11:148 (4) - I think this sounds a bit better as a repeat slider instead of having a stack for 00:11:503 (5,6) - . No real reason to justify this just my personal opinion.
    00:37:953 (1) - New combo? To keep the consistency you had going with the combos along with the vocal pattern.
    00:44:521 (3) - This slider should be moved down more so the jump spacing is even, or else it looks very awkward. Do this possibly? http://puu.sh/FnlK And if you do this, it would be a better idea to have 3 as a kickback slider, unless you are going to move 00:44:876 (4) - somewhere else.
    00:46:651 (9) - NC here and remove the new combo from 00:47:184 (1) - . Might aswell combo to the beat when there are no vocals for this section.
    00:54:107 (4) - Just another suggestion, but maybe stack this ontop of 00:54:284 (5) - ? I thought it played a little better, just try it out and make your decision.
    01:06:533 (1) - Remove this clap, sounds very odd. And there is no snare there anyways.
    01:07:953 (1) - Add a finish here, listen very closely and you will hear it, it's kinda soft. (On the head of the slider)
    01:09:906 (2) - ^ On the head again.
  • S o r d a's Hard;

    First things first.
    Opened up AIBat;

    Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
    00:12:217 (snap to 00:12:213)
    00:25:176 (snap to 00:25:172)
    00:30:768 (snap to 00:30:764)
    00:31:212 (snap to 00:31:208)
    00:31:478 (snap to 00:31:474)
    00:33:785 (snap to 00:33:781)
    00:34:407 (snap to 00:34:403)
    00:36:626 (snap to 00:36:622)
    00:36:803 (snap to 00:36:799)
    00:42:306 (snap to 00:42:302)

    Fix these please.

    00:10:261 - add a note here? You could stack under 00:09:728 (6) - 's tail. Skipping that beat feels very weird to play.

    Sorry that's all I can find for this diff sorry.

All is good with the other diffs. Good mapset :3.
Topic Starter
Mythol
Some fixed~
ty :3
S o r d a
resnapped green lines
http://puu.sh/Fwmv
LunarSakuya
hi

General
nice

Easy
00:58:012 (3) - Whistle at beginning, I feel like this part needs to be emphasized

kosiga's Normal
00:11:148 (4) - try and make this blanket (2)? http://puu.sh/FVup
00:12:746 (2) - Add clap
01:09:373 (1) - Clap at end
01:26:592 (3) - Clap

S o r d a's Hard
00:02:628 (1) - Finish/whistle at beginning
00:12:391 (1) - maybe copy and paste (5) for some symmetry lol http://puu.sh/FVzU
00:25:350 (1) - Ctrl + J feels better to play imo
00:28:900 (1) - Delete NC
00:36:267 (3,4) - Add claps to fit bg music
00:39:373 (1) - Delete clap at end
00:40:616 - add note here to keep hitsound flow going?
00:46:119 (4,5,6) - Whistles? since the music is crescendo-ing..kinda idk
00:58:989 (6,7) - Claps
01:09:906 (1) - Finish, hear the bg music
01:14:344 (3) - Ctrl + H so it can blanket (2) http://puu.sh/FVFZ
01:29:077 (4) - Finish at beginning

Insane
00:22:509 (1) - try a rhythm like this, with a finish on the spinner http://puu.sh/FVIK
00:58:279 - maybe add a note here to match bg music

nice map
S o r d a
Fenya
Hi hi (≧▽≦)/~

General:
kosiga's Normal finished in 01:42:213, meanwhile the other diff finished in 01:40:438
All diff should finish in the same time... imo

Easy:
Fine

kosiga's Normal:
00:48:071 (1) - Put like this: http://puu.sh/G8oZ Sounds better, imo
00:52:332 (4) - I think the finish in the end of slider is unnecessary... imo

S o r d a's Hard:
00:30:675 (4) - Move to x:436... to meet the symmetry with (1)
00:40:261 (4) - 1 grid up
01:10:261 (3) - Move to x:289 to meet the symmetry with (1)
01:10:438 (4) - Move to x:226
01:10:616 (5) - Move to x:289

Insane:
00:54:994 (8) - Move to x:128

That's all, sorry for my nazi mod
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good map, good luck~
S o r d a

S o r d a wrote:

moe moe Mythol sama!
inaba-tan
may i make taiko diff ?
I see @@
Topic Starter
Mythol

inaba-tan wrote:

may i make taiko diff ?
sorry climbb already making :o
yeahyeahyeahhh
Insane:
Fine

Hard:
00:36:267 (3,4) - Maybe try triplet like this http://puu.sh/He84
00:40:616 - Add a note? Since your're rhythm is constant 1/2.
01:27:657 (3) - Start NC here? And remove NC here 01:27:835 (1).
01:33:338 (5) - ^

Normal:
Fine

Easy:
Fine

Gl :3
BeatofIke
Map so pro! :o
Topic Starter
Mythol

BeatofIke wrote:

Map so pro! :o
if its pro give me a star :<
alacat
Hi :3 moe Mythol :P

Sorry for the delay.

[General]
fine.


[Easy]
●00:30:320 (1) - add whistle on the slider's reverse?
●00:34:935 - add note ? and add S:C1 clap. follow drum sound ? i think there should be clap sounds here .
●00:39:551 (1) - remove whistle?
●00:43:101 (1) - add finish on the slider's reverse? I hear cymbal o.o
●00:48:071 (1) - volume down for 40% 00:48:071 - ~ 00:53:752 -
●00:56:592 (1) - add finish at the head instead of whistle? hear stronger sound .
●00:58:012 - ^ same,above.
●01:02:273 (1) - add whistle on the slider's reverse?
●01:20:024 - volume down for 40%. finish is too large >.<

[kosiga's Normal]
●AR -1? Easyとの差があり、少し早いと思います。
●00:04:048 (2) - 終点にwhistle追加
●00:48:071 (1) - 折り返しにwhistle追加
●00:58:012 (4) - 始点のwhistleをFinishに変更?サビの前なのでfinishの方がいいと思います
●01:34:225 (2,3) - spacingは (0.90x)と一定ですが狭くかんじました。少しだけ間をあけてみてはどうでしょうか http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/367625


[S o r d a's Hard]
●00:25:350 (1) - 始点にwhistleかfinishを追加
●00:26:592 (6) - 終点ではなく、始点にwhistleがあった方がいいと思います
●00:28:012 (1) - 始点にwhistleを追加
●00:29:432 (4) - 00:26:592 (6) - と同じです
●00:37:421 (3) -
●00:37:953 (4) -
●00:38:841 (6) -
●00:39:373 (1) -
●00:40:261 (4) -
●00:40:793 (1) -
このあたりの始点にもwhistleを追加してみてはどうでしょうか?
whistleが嫌いでしたら無視してくださいε=(ノ・・)ノ
●00:52:154 (4,5,6) - 01:15:941 (4,5,6) - と同じような感じにすると綺麗だと思います
●01:04:048 (2,3) - すこし狭くかんじたのでこういった配置はどうでしょうか http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/367641
●01:09:196 (5) - 01:09:373 - に音があるのでこういった音とりはどうでしょうか http://puu.sh/HBbU
●01:26:237 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/367647 このあたりまで移動してみてはどうでしょうか?
01:26:237 (1,2,1) - の間のspacingを見た目だけ同じにした方が綺麗だと思います

頑張ってください! 応援してます :oops:

[Insane]
●01:33:160 (6) - move to x:88 y:204? equal spacing better imo o.o

good diff!Sry that I can't find any suggestion.

Duca <3

good luck ~~
Topic Starter
Mythol

alacat wrote:

Hi :3 moe Mythol :P

Sorry for the delay.

[Easy]
●00:30:320 (1) - add whistle on the slider's reverse? clap better o.o
●00:34:935 - add note ? and add S:C1 clap. follow drum sound ? i think there should be clap sounds here . ok
●00:39:551 (1) - remove whistle? ok
●00:43:101 (1) - add finish on the slider's reverse? I hear cymbal o.o keep clap
●00:48:071 (1) - volume down for 40% 00:48:071 - ~ 00:53:752 - ok
●00:56:592 (1) - add finish at the head instead of whistle? hear stronger sound . theres almost nothing in music o.o so keep whistle
●00:58:012 - ^ same,above.
●01:02:273 (1) - add whistle on the slider's reverse? ok
●01:20:024 - volume down for 40%. finish is too large >.< change to 50%

[Insane]
●01:33:160 (6) - move to x:88 y:204? equal spacing better imo o.o fixed

good diff!Sry that I can't find any suggestion.

Duca <3

good luck ~~
thx mod <3
Roddie
IRC modding for Easy and Insane.

10:04 Roddie: : hi
10:04 Mythol: : hi
10:05 Roddie: : there is a couple of things I'd like to discuss about your map
10:05 Roddie: : do you have the time to go through irc modding?
10:05 Mythol: : i have time~
10:05 Roddie: : okay
10:06 Roddie: : its for this map
10:06 : *Roddie is editing (Duca - Ashita Tenki ni Naare)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/53158]
10:06 Mythol: : yeah
10:06 Roddie: : 00:27:835-
10:06 Roddie: : this timing point here
10:07 Roddie: : why is it necessary on this easy diff but not your insane diff?'
10:07 Mythol: : eh
10:07 Mythol: : i feel the clap is too loud in easy
10:07 Mythol: : but theres a triple there on insane so its not as noticeable
10:08 Mythol: : i can remove though i dont mind
10:08 Roddie: : okay
10:08 Roddie: : 00:29:610 (3)-
10:09 Roddie: : I think you forgot to add a clap on the end of that slider
10:09 Mythol: : yeah
10:10 Roddie: : 00:30:320 (1)-
10:10 Roddie: : you forgot to add a clap on the repeat
10:10 Mythol: : yup
10:13 Roddie: : your easy is all set
10:14 Roddie: : jumping to insane now
10:14 Mythol: : k
10:20 Roddie: : 00:58:989 (x)-
10:20 Roddie: : consider adding a note here
10:21 Roddie: : this will be formed part of a note triple (:
10:21 Roddie: : this actually sounds and plays well imo
10:22 Roddie: : its something like this
10:22 Roddie: : http://puu.sh/HE6q
10:22 Mythol: : yeah... i hear it in the song
10:22 Mythol: : but idk..
10:22 Roddie: : experiment with this and see o:
10:26 Mythol: : i dont want to add it ;_;
10:26 Roddie: : okay
10:27 Roddie: : any reason why?
10:28 Mythol: : it feels really out of place
10:28 Mythol: : music's pretty quiet here o.o
10:28 Mythol: : and also it would be the only double triplet in the map
10:28 Mythol: : 01:09:373 (1,2) - and this wouldn't have it
10:29 Roddie: : okay

General
  1. as we discussed in-game, the source is from a video game and its classified as an eroge game, as well as a visual novel. So, both eroge and visual can be added to the tags.


kosiga's Normal
  1. 00:53:752 (1)-A finish on the beginning sounds better than a clap. You can replace that clap with a finish or have both!


S o r d a's Hard

Nicely done~

And that's about it. Have a star from me~

Good luck!
S o r d a
>>alacat
almost fixed thank you~
>>Roddie
alacat did mod add some whitsle :3


http://puu.sh/HGDK
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