I bought this game just for Shinku :v
[General]
[Insane]
[Hard]
[Normal]
That said, the Insane diff is pretty nice to me so I will leave this star icon here for now. Good luck!
[General]
- You need to add some skin elements to complete skin set:
- approachcircle.png
- spinner-clear.png
- spinner-spin.png
- spinner-osu.png
- spinner-background.jpg needs to be in .png format!
- Easy difficulty has a wrong Audio lead-in. Make it 1000ms
- Disable letterbox in Fionana's Insane and n y a's Normal
- Suggesting having newcombos every downbeat, currently it sometimes counts up over 10 and doesn't look that great tbh.
- 00:01:493 (3) - Make this slider more curved so the blanket looks better. The same goes to 00:05:270 (3) - as well.
- 00:04:604 - Add a whistle here and set volume back to the right amount so it'll be consistant with 00:01:049 (1) - .
- 00:05:826 (1) - As far as I listen a soft whistle fits nicely with this percussion.
- 00:22:382 - Feels weird to use double whistle here, I'd suggest removing this whistle and add a finish here instead.
- 00:32:160 (9) - I don't like the angle of this slider, considering how it flows it shouldn't be like that. If I were you I would rotate it a bit counterclockwisely.
- 00:53:271 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - It'd be cool if there are some normal-hitnormal sounds within this stream.
- 00:56:382 (4,5,6) - This is obviously overmapped and doesn't make sense at all imo. Prefer if you remove this all and add a 1/2 slider here instead.
- 00:57:937 (1) - I think you forget to add a finish here.
- 01:10:826 (8) - 1/1 slider doesn't fit well with the vocal and instruments considering how the singer pronounces.
- 01:19:937 - 01:20:826 - 01:23:493 - 01:26:382 - 01:27:048 - 01:37:715 - 01:42:160 (8) - I thought there could be some finishes at these points.
- 01:23:937 (1) - Remove this newcombo. The single combo doesn't make sense.
- 01:32:715 - There's an extra snare-drum in the song as you can see, so I think a clap fits nicely and sounds good to me.
[Insane]
- 00:15:160 (7) - Feels better if this note is removed. Also as you can see it's totally overmapped. Though it's not a big deal.
- 00:18:048 (8) - Just a personal preference, but sounds better to me if there's a whislte on this note instead of (7).
- 01:17:271 (1,2,3) - There notes are placed too close to each other imo considering how large the spacing betwenn 01:17:048 (3,1) - is.
- 01:20:826 - Where's note? D: I don't think this blank results in any good and might be pretty boring.
- 01:24:382 (1) - Make this curved? I just thought the flow between (1) and (2) could be improved by doing this.
- 01:33:271 (5) - I'd move this note downward for a better flow. Also, blanket.
- 01:43:937 (1) - It's highly suggested to remove this finish. I can understand why you've added it but as you can see there's no cymbal drum here and it's too echoed imo.
[Hard]
- 00:04:604 - Feels empty here, I think there can be a whistle or custom finish here imo.
- 00:12:049 (3,6) - A bit overmapped considering the level of this difficulty.
- 00:14:382 (4) - Maybe add some normal sounds?
- 00:35:715 (6,1) - Please stack them properly.
- 00:40:826 - Add a finish here.
- 00:42:604 - ^
- 00:53:715 (3,4) - Spacing?
- 00:54:382 - Finish.
- 01:35:937 - ^
- 01:37:048 - ^
- 01:37:715 - ^ maybe.
- 01:40:604 - I prefer no finish here.
- 01:41:271 - Finish.
- 01:42:271 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/4 beat and remove the finish. Also you can add a clap or something I think.
[Normal]
- 00:41:715 - Add a finish here.
- 00:51:493 (2) - Move this a bit leftward maybe? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/725058
- 01:12:160 - From here this difficulty becomes pretty hard suddenly.. why?
- 01:42:160 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/4 beat, and move the last green line as well.
- 00:57:048 - Add a clap here instead of the finish.
- 00:52:604 (1,1,2) - This rhythm is pretty weird imo.. I'd suggest ending the spinner at 00:54:382 - and rearranging the rhythm like this.
- 01:09:937 (2) - What is the slider end following? I think this slider doesn't need to have a repeat. I personally prefer this rhythm so the notes fit better with the emphasises.
- 01:15:715 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/2I32r.jpg
- 01:23:493 - Finish here?
That said, the Insane diff is pretty nice to me so I will leave this star icon here for now. Good luck!