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2NE1 - Scream

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Gero
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 17 de noviembre de 2012 at 03:55:58 p.m.

Artist: 2NE1
Title: Scream
Source: 2NE1
Tags: Scream Kpop 2NE1 Nolza OtakuRock95
BPM: 127.98
Filesize: 6188kb
Play Time: 03:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.15 stars, 196 notes)
  2. Normal (2.86 stars, 187 notes)
Download: 2NE1 - Scream
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
My First Beatmap, I hope you enjoy! :)

SCREAM! ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah SCREAM! O(≧∇≦)O


WIP!!

Easy - 100 %
Normal - Working In This Diff!
Hard - Working In This Diff!

(5)Modders:
  • eLtigreXXx (2)
    pimpG
    shojimeguro
    dkun
    XinCrin
KokoroStudiox3
esto es en la hard

00:03:400 (3) intenta aser los slider mas bonitos y simetricos algo asi http://puu.sh/FSGg
00:04:572 (4) x:224 y:256
00:05:041 (1,2,3) x:64 y:256
00:05:510 (4,5,6) x:224 y:256
00:07:385 (2,3,4) x:208 y:144
00:07:853 (5,6,7) x:208 y:256
00:08:791 (1,2,3) x:40 y:144
00:10:197 (10) x:376 y:176
00:12:658 (4) este slider recorrelo al tick blanco i agregas una nota ai mismo 00:12:658
i arrelas ese slider mas bonito http://puu.sh/FSVU
00:17:932 (5) tambien areglas este slider simetricos i bonitos http://puu.sh/FSXj tambien arreglas el espaciado con las notas que sigen
00:23:557 (6) quitas el punto de en medio no es nesesario http://puu.sh/FT0h el otro punto que quede en el centro
00:25:432 (1) tambien arelga este eslider http://puu.sh/FT1P
00:27:072 (1) ^ igual http://puu.sh/FT1P
00:28:947 (2) ^
00:30:119 (6,7) ^ http://puu.sh/FT52
00:40:666 (2) ^ http://puu.sh/FT68
00:48:400 (2) algo asi http://puu.sh/FTa1
arrela todos los eslider que esten asi

tambien te recomiendo estos colores http://puu.sh/FTgp

si quieres probarlos te metes en http://puu.sh/FTcK

rempasas esa linea http://puu.sh/FTei
por esta
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,174,174
Combo2 : 89,0,89
Combo3 : 255,255,255
Combo4 : 129,129,129

ese es una parte ya que arregles eso volveré a revisar ^^
cualquier cosa que no entiendas me avisas por el juego yo te xplico
:3
XinCrin
mañana subo mi avance en la normal
XinCrin
Aqui mi diff normal terminada

http://puu.sh/LbTD

Suerte con el map!!
pimp
hi, random mod

general

offset -12 works for me

The bitrate for 2NE1 - Scream (Short Ver.).mp3 is 320 kb/s, which is above the maximum of 192 kb/s.

There should only be one .osb file in a folder (this folder has 2).

the way you shortened the song is a bit strange, the song end is so sudden

set a Preview Point to the diffs

Unused Image Files: reversearrowd.png

add "Xin-Kun" in all difficulties tags

remove (short ver.) from title, t/89198

easy

Spinner New Combo 01:32:463 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

hard

Spinner New Combo 01:10:666 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. 01:17:932 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

thats all, good luck :)
CTB Fia
Easy
Beat Snap Divisor 1/2 please
since you got wrong beat snap then you must re-arrange all beats again
and don't forget to put some sound effect!!!

Xin's Normal
Beat Snap Divisor 1/4 please (2nd warning :?: )
since you got wrong beat snap then you must re-arrange all beats again
and don't forget to put some sound effect!!!

Normal
this one is PERFECT!great job!!! :)

Xin's Hard
i have an idea that easy and xin's Normal is reverse with this diff
how can you put easy 1/6 beat snap while hard 1/2 beat snap :?:
anyway you can change it or re-arrange it again

Insane
It was PERFECT!!!

well that's all i can mod
i hope after you fix everything,your beatmap will be ranked! :)
KokoroStudiox3
^^ Request from eLtigreXXx's Modding queue~

me gustaria un kai time de aqui 01:02:908 asta 01:17:907 -
http://puu.sh/ZdpY creo que los numeritos estan mui ariva no se supone que tienen que estar en el centro ?
recomiendo que todas las diff terminen aqui 01:32:905

The bitrate for 2NE1 - Scream (Short Ver.).mp3 is 320 kb/s, which is above the maximum of 192 kb/s.

si no tienes SB elimina los dos .osb file

Skin Dimensions esto no estoi mui seguro :c
spinner-circle.png's dimensions must be exactly 666x666 (currently 575x613).
hit100k.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 279x279).
hit300k.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 279x279).
hit300g.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 279x279).

esto te puede servir mucho para tu eskin
skin
Missing/Unnecessary files in the package
The map has skin with an image file missing, or there's unnecessary files in the song folder.

Missing skin files

When most people use skins, they always miss the fact that skins should not mix incorrectly with the skin a user might have set. This can be very confusing or look ugly. This can be fixed either by adding the missing skin files or forcing a certain skin.

If you wish to use a certain custom object in your beatmap, make sure to use the full set.

The current object sets are as follows:

*Hitcircle:
hitcircle.png
hitcircleoverlay.png
approachcircle.png
reversearrow.png

*Slider:
sliderb.png
sliderfollowcircle.png
*Spinner:
spinner-background.png
spinner-circle.png
spinner-approachcircle.png
spinner-metre.png
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png

*Countdown:
ready.png
count3.png
count2.png
count1.png
go.png

*Cursor:
cursor.png
cursortrail.png

*Scorebar:
scorebar-bg.png
scorebar-colour.png

*Hitbursts:
hit0.png
hit50.png
hit100.png
hit100k.png
hit300.png
hit300k.png
hit300g.png

*Scorebar Ki:
scorebar-ki.png
scorebar-kidanger.png
scorebar-kidanger2.png

*Slider scores:
sliderpoint10.png
sliderpoint30.png

*Hitcircle numbers:
default-0.png
default-1.png
...
default-9.png

*Score numbers:
score-0.png
score-1.png
...
score-9.png
score-comma.png
score-dot.png
score-percent.png
score-x.png

*Section Markers:
section-pass.png
section-fail.png

*Fruits:
fruit-apple.png
fruit-apple-overlay.png
fruit-grapes.png
fruit-grapes-overlay.png
fruit-orange.png
fruit-orange-overlay.png
fruit-pear.png
fruit-pear-overlay.png
fruit-drop.png

All the other skin elements are considered independent from each other.

Unnecessary files

Often when including skin, the mapper includes useless elements to the song folder, such as mod selection icons. The osz package must be as clean as possible, so any unnecessary file needs to be deleted before ranking, regardless of what it might be.

This might be fixed at submission later on, but for now, any file that is in the song folder will be uploaded and included in the .osz file.
un ejemplo si solo quieres cambiar tus hitcircles metes todo este conjunto

*Hitcircle:
hitcircle.png
hitcircleoverlay.png
approachcircle.png
reversearrow.png

y si solo quieres cambiar los hitcirle i el cursor metes estos conjuntos

*Hitcircle:
hitcircle.png
hitcircleoverlay.png
approachcircle.png
reversearrow.png

*Cursor:
cursor.png
cursortrail.png

tambien esto lo tienes que arreglar
SPOILER
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Easy] :
Combo1 : 0,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 132,255,255

- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 255,174,174
Combo2 : 164,0,164
Combo3 : 255,255,255
Combo4 : 129,129,129

- [Insane] :
Combo1 : 255,174,174
Combo2 : 164,0,164
Combo3 : 255,255,255
Combo4 : 129,129,129

- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 255,174,174
Combo2 : 164,0,164
Combo3 : 255,255,255
Combo4 : 129,129,129

- [Xin's Hard] :
Combo1 : 0,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 132,255,255

- [Xin's Normal] :
Combo1 : 0,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 132,255,255

Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Easy] : 62463
- [Hard] : -1
- [Insane] : -1
- [Normal] : -1
- [Xin's Hard] : 62463
- [Xin's Normal] : 62463

Inconsistency in Countdown: en todas las diff desactiva esto
- [Easy] : 0
- [Hard] : 1
- [Insane] : 1
- [Normal] : 1
- [Xin's Hard] : 0
- [Xin's Normal] : 0

Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks: igual aqui desactivalo en todas
- [Easy] : 0
- [Hard] : 1
- [Insane] : 1
- [Normal] : 1
- [Xin's Hard] : 0
- [Xin's Normal] : 0

Inconsistency in Source:
- [Easy] : SCREAM
- [Hard] :
- [Insane] : SCREAM
- [Normal] : SCREAM
- [Xin's Hard] : SCREAM
- [Xin's Normal] :

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Easy] : 2NE1 OtakuRock95
- [Hard] :
- [Insane] : 2NE1 OtakuRock95
- [Normal] : 2NE1 OtakuRock95
- [Xin's Hard] : 2NE1 Xin-Kun
- [Xin's Normal] : Xin-Kun

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:932, ends on 00:17:228
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:932, ends on 01:32:228

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:952, ends on 00:17:228
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:932, ends on 01:32:228

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:952, ends on 00:17:228
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:932, ends on 01:32:228

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:952, ends on 00:33:400
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:932, ends on 01:32:228

- [Xin's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:02:932, ends on 01:17:932

- [Xin's Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:02:932, ends on 01:17:932


[Easy]

Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: estos puntos verdes estan fuera de lugar
00:02:932 - snap to 00:02:913
00:17:228 - snap to 00:17:208
01:17:932 - snap to 01:17:907
01:32:228 - snap to 01:32:202
00:10:412 (1) - intenta no salirte de la cuadricula c: http://puu.sh/Zdj8
01:35:718 mejor quita ese eslider i pon una nota con el audio reducido
01:03:377 (1,1,2,3,1) vonita convinacion i formas *0*
Spinner New Combo
01:32:437 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

[Hard]

ponle un preview point a esta diff
Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:02:952 - snap to 00:02:932
Spinner New Combo
01:10:666 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
01:17:932 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

[Insane]

tambien a esta ponle un Preview Point
Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: estas tambien estan fuera de lugar
00:02:952 - snap to 00:02:913
00:16:057 - snap to 00:16:036
00:17:228 - snap to 00:17:208
00:17:463 - snap to 00:17:443
00:31:057 - snap to 00:31:035
00:33:400 - snap to 00:33:379
01:17:932 - snap to 01:17:907
01:31:057 - snap to 01:31:031
01:32:228 - snap to 01:32:202
01:32:697 - snap to 01:32:671
Spinner New Combo
01:10:642 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
01:17:907 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

[Normal]
ponle Preview Point
Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: fuera de lugar
00:02:952 - snap to 00:02:913
00:33:400 - snap to 00:33:379
01:17:932 - snap to 01:17:907
01:31:057 - snap to 01:31:031
01:32:228 - snap to 01:32:202
01:32:697 - snap to 01:32:671

[Xin's Hard]
Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: fuera de lugar
01:02:932 - snap to 01:02:908
01:02:932 - snap to 01:02:908
01:03:049 - snap to 01:03:142
01:10:432 - snap to 01:10:407
01:10:549 - snap to 01:10:642
01:17:932 - snap to 01:17:907
Spinner New Combo
01:18:375 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

[Xin's Normal]

Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:02:932 - snap to 00:02:913
01:02:932 - snap to 01:02:908
01:17:932 - snap to 01:17:907
00:36:660 (5) nuevo combo

esto asta lo ultimo despues de que arreglen lo demas
Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections:
- [Easy]
Red timing sections at:
00:02:913, BPM of 128.010

- [Hard]
Red timing sections at:
00:02:932, BPM of 128.000

- [Insane]
Red timing sections at:
00:02:913, BPM of 128.010

- [Normal]
Red timing sections at:
00:02:913, BPM of 128.010

- [Xin's Hard]
Red timing sections at:
00:02:913, BPM of 128.010

- [Xin's Normal]
Red timing sections at:
00:02:913, BPM of 128.010

ya estan mejorando mucho ^^
acuérdate sliders bonitos i simétricos esa es la clave
cualquier duda i preguna no dudes en preguntarme
o a algun MAT o BAT
:3
XinCrin

eLtigreXXx wrote:

^^ Request from eLtigreXXx's Modding queue~

me gustaria un kai time de aqui 01:02:908 asta 01:17:907 -
http://puu.sh/ZdpY creo que los numeritos estan mui ariva no se supone que tienen que estar en el centro ?
recomiendo que todas las diff terminen aqui 01:32:905

The bitrate for 2NE1 - Scream (Short Ver.).mp3 is 320 kb/s, which is above the maximum of 192 kb/s.

si no tienes SB elimina los dos .osb file

Skin Dimensions esto no estoi mui seguro :c
spinner-circle.png's dimensions must be exactly 666x666 (currently 575x613).
hit100k.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 279x279).
hit300k.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 279x279).
hit300g.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 279x279).

esto te puede servir mucho para tu eskin
skin
Missing/Unnecessary files in the package
The map has skin with an image file missing, or there's unnecessary files in the song folder.

Missing skin files

When most people use skins, they always miss the fact that skins should not mix incorrectly with the skin a user might have set. This can be very confusing or look ugly. This can be fixed either by adding the missing skin files or forcing a certain skin.

If you wish to use a certain custom object in your beatmap, make sure to use the full set.

The current object sets are as follows:

*Hitcircle:
hitcircle.png
hitcircleoverlay.png
approachcircle.png
reversearrow.png

*Slider:
sliderb.png
sliderfollowcircle.png
*Spinner:
spinner-background.png
spinner-circle.png
spinner-approachcircle.png
spinner-metre.png
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png

*Countdown:
ready.png
count3.png
count2.png
count1.png
go.png

*Cursor:
cursor.png
cursortrail.png

*Scorebar:
scorebar-bg.png
scorebar-colour.png

*Hitbursts:
hit0.png
hit50.png
hit100.png
hit100k.png
hit300.png
hit300k.png
hit300g.png

*Scorebar Ki:
scorebar-ki.png
scorebar-kidanger.png
scorebar-kidanger2.png

*Slider scores:
sliderpoint10.png
sliderpoint30.png

*Hitcircle numbers:
default-0.png
default-1.png
...
default-9.png

*Score numbers:
score-0.png
score-1.png
...
score-9.png
score-comma.png
score-dot.png
score-percent.png
score-x.png

*Section Markers:
section-pass.png
section-fail.png

*Fruits:
fruit-apple.png
fruit-apple-overlay.png
fruit-grapes.png
fruit-grapes-overlay.png
fruit-orange.png
fruit-orange-overlay.png
fruit-pear.png
fruit-pear-overlay.png
fruit-drop.png

All the other skin elements are considered independent from each other.

Unnecessary files

Often when including skin, the mapper includes useless elements to the song folder, such as mod selection icons. The osz package must be as clean as possible, so any unnecessary file needs to be deleted before ranking, regardless of what it might be.

This might be fixed at submission later on, but for now, any file that is in the song folder will be uploaded and included in the .osz file.
un ejemplo si solo quieres cambiar tus hitcircles metes todo este conjunto

*Hitcircle:
hitcircle.png
hitcircleoverlay.png
approachcircle.png
reversearrow.png

y si solo quieres cambiar los hitcirle i el cursor metes estos conjuntos

*Hitcircle:
hitcircle.png
hitcircleoverlay.png
approachcircle.png
reversearrow.png

*Cursor:
cursor.png
cursortrail.png

tambien esto lo tienes que arreglar
SPOILER
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Easy] :
Combo1 : 0,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 132,255,255

- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 255,174,174
Combo2 : 164,0,164
Combo3 : 255,255,255
Combo4 : 129,129,129

- [Insane] :
Combo1 : 255,174,174
Combo2 : 164,0,164
Combo3 : 255,255,255
Combo4 : 129,129,129

- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 255,174,174
Combo2 : 164,0,164
Combo3 : 255,255,255
Combo4 : 129,129,129

- [Xin's Hard] :
Combo1 : 0,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 132,255,255

- [Xin's Normal] :
Combo1 : 0,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 132,255,255

Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Easy] : 62463
- [Hard] : -1
- [Insane] : -1
- [Normal] : -1
- [Xin's Hard] : 62463
- [Xin's Normal] : 62463

Inconsistency in Countdown: en todas las diff desactiva esto
- [Easy] : 0
- [Hard] : 1
- [Insane] : 1
- [Normal] : 1
- [Xin's Hard] : 0
- [Xin's Normal] : 0

Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks: igual aqui desactivalo en todas
- [Easy] : 0
- [Hard] : 1
- [Insane] : 1
- [Normal] : 1
- [Xin's Hard] : 0
- [Xin's Normal] : 0

Inconsistency in Source:
- [Easy] : SCREAM
- [Hard] :
- [Insane] : SCREAM
- [Normal] : SCREAM
- [Xin's Hard] : SCREAM
- [Xin's Normal] :

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Easy] : 2NE1 OtakuRock95
- [Hard] :
- [Insane] : 2NE1 OtakuRock95
- [Normal] : 2NE1 OtakuRock95
- [Xin's Hard] : 2NE1 Xin-Kun
- [Xin's Normal] : Xin-Kun

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:932, ends on 00:17:228
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:932, ends on 01:32:228

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:952, ends on 00:17:228
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:932, ends on 01:32:228

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:952, ends on 00:17:228
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:932, ends on 01:32:228

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:952, ends on 00:33:400
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:932, ends on 01:32:228

- [Xin's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:02:932, ends on 01:17:932

- [Xin's Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:02:932, ends on 01:17:932


[Easy]

Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: estos puntos verdes estan fuera de lugar
00:02:932 - snap to 00:02:913
00:17:228 - snap to 00:17:208
01:17:932 - snap to 01:17:907
01:32:228 - snap to 01:32:202
00:10:412 (1) - intenta no salirte de la cuadricula c: http://puu.sh/Zdj8
01:35:718 mejor quita ese eslider i pon una nota con el audio reducido
01:03:377 (1,1,2,3,1) vonita convinacion i formas *0*
Spinner New Combo
01:32:437 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

[Hard]

ponle un preview point a esta diff
Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:02:952 - snap to 00:02:932
Spinner New Combo
01:10:666 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
01:17:932 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

[Insane]

tambien a esta ponle un Preview Point
Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: estas tambien estan fuera de lugar
00:02:952 - snap to 00:02:913
00:16:057 - snap to 00:16:036
00:17:228 - snap to 00:17:208
00:17:463 - snap to 00:17:443
00:31:057 - snap to 00:31:035
00:33:400 - snap to 00:33:379
01:17:932 - snap to 01:17:907
01:31:057 - snap to 01:31:031
01:32:228 - snap to 01:32:202
01:32:697 - snap to 01:32:671
Spinner New Combo
01:10:642 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
01:17:907 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

[Normal]
ponle Preview Point
Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: fuera de lugar
00:02:952 - snap to 00:02:913
00:33:400 - snap to 00:33:379
01:17:932 - snap to 01:17:907
01:31:057 - snap to 01:31:031
01:32:228 - snap to 01:32:202
01:32:697 - snap to 01:32:671

[Xin's Hard]
Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: fuera de lugar
01:02:932 - snap to 01:02:908
01:02:932 - snap to 01:02:908
01:03:049 - snap to 01:03:142
01:10:432 - snap to 01:10:407
01:10:549 - snap to 01:10:642
01:17:932 - snap to 01:17:907
Spinner New Combo
01:18:375 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

[Xin's Normal]

Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:02:932 - snap to 00:02:913
01:02:932 - snap to 01:02:908
01:17:932 - snap to 01:17:907
00:36:660 (5) nuevo combo

esto asta lo ultimo despues de que arreglen lo demas
Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections:
- [Easy]
Red timing sections at:
00:02:913, BPM of 128.010

- [Hard]
Red timing sections at:
00:02:932, BPM of 128.000

- [Insane]
Red timing sections at:
00:02:913, BPM of 128.010

- [Normal]
Red timing sections at:
00:02:913, BPM of 128.010

- [Xin's Hard]
Red timing sections at:
00:02:913, BPM of 128.010

- [Xin's Normal]
Red timing sections at:
00:02:913, BPM of 128.010

ya estan mejorando mucho ^^
acuérdate sliders bonitos i simétricos esa es la clave
cualquier duda i preguna no dudes en preguntarme
o a algun MAT o BAT
:3
AiBAT?
dkun
hello. noticed this map in #modreqs. hope you don't mind me modding it.

my modding key

this is unrankable.
this should be highly considered.
this is just a normal suggestion/praise.

General
  1. Your MP3 is sitting at 320kb/s. The guidelines listed here indicate this.
  2. You are not to use "Short ver." in your title, as indicated here.
  3. You're missing skinning elements of the skinned parts of your map. Refer to the ranking criteria (linked above) on this.
  4. You cut your MP3 and fade it in the middle of the bridge of the song. Consider changing where you've cut your MP3, please.
  5. Your kiai times in all diffs are inconsistent with each other. Please resolve this by selecting one map and using that kiai time with the rest of the set.
  6. The map's spread is fine, good job!
Easy
  1. A relatively solid Easy, could use some work.

    00:02:912 (1,1) - Are these two supposed to be perfect circles? Because they're far from it. Having 2 right after where they're placed at the moment is also very counter-intuitive.
    00:13:693 (1,1,1,1) - Are all these new combos necessary?
    00:15:568 - Place a beat here, or replace how you've done your sliders on this portion. It keeps the same beat, yet you don't follow it.
    00:33:379 (1) - Move 1 to shadow the start of 4 of the previous combo.
    01:03:377 (1) - Is this slider meant to be symmetrical? It needs composition work with the middle points and the ending point.
    01:15:094 (4,5) - Why not copy/paste 4 to 5 and flip?
Xin's Normal
  1. An alright Normal, could use some slider work. I'd like to refer this guide.
  2. A lot of this difficulty goes with the Y grid via symmetry, but a lot of it as well derives from it. Try to be more consistent, please.

    00:02:912 (1) - The way this slider is composed could be improved to be more symmetrical, take this picture into consideration.
    00:16:036 (4) - The entire slider could look better with some changes to it. Try to use the Y axis as you do with some of the map as it is to make this better.
    00:27:286 (3) - Same as above.
    There's nothing much else to note, this difficulty is readable and fun to play for a Normal.

Normal
  1. Nothing much to note. Take in mind my slider suggestion with Xin's Normal, though.
Xin's Hard
  1. Same suggestion in your Normal, Xin.
  2. Did you really copy/paste half this map..?
Insane
  1. Nothing much to note.
XinCrin
Hola! Tratando de ayudar este mapa pensaba modear todas las diffs pero por lo que veo solo acabaste la diff Easy , Bueno comenzemos :?

[General]
-Porque no trabajar en Grid Level 4 (te serviria hacer sliders mas simetricos)
-En mi opinion es innesario aver puesto el archivo aplauuse.mp3 :|
-No hagas slider muy grandes porque se ven un poco feos
-No combines por ejemplo un clap y whistle juntos porque suenan feos por ejemplo 03:11:544 (1)
[Easy]
- Sinceramente esta diff no parece una easy por la tremenda velocidad que pusiste y el spacing que usaste . Podria ser una normal talvez
00:02:140 (1) - Mas simetrico por favor y quita el clap del final del slider
00:05:890 (1) - Quita el clap del reverse y el del final
00:13:391 (5) - NC y remueve el de aqui 00:15:267 (1) por el cambio de vocales
00:17:142 (3) - NC
00:56:992 (3) - Este slider esta siendo tapado por este 00:55:117 (1) - Recomiendo que lo muevas a otro lado
01:09:650 (1) - Quita el Clap y pon un Finish
01:17:151 (1) - Clap con finish :?: Solo finish imo
01:21:839 (1) - Spacing Por favor No importa que se vea mejor pero respeta el spacing
01:37:779 (3) - Este slider no lleva el ritmo :?
01:39:655 (1) - A partir de aqui perdiste el ritmo con los claps te adelantaste uno creo :x
01:59:345 (6) - Muevelo a X:432 Y:304 Esta chocando con este slider 01:57:470 (4)
02:04:502 (3) - Intenta crear otra forma y muevelo a X:200 Y:352
02:17:629 (1) - Esta muy dificil ara newbies reaccionar cuando aparesca este slider porque se encuentra muy lejos del centro y tampoco no entiendo porque usaste un slider random :|
03:07:794 - Podrias añadir un break aqui


Prometi ayudarte desde el comienzo cuando te conoci y lo cumplire :)
Suerte! Te dejo una STAR
KokoroStudiox3
pero que pasho
esta bien are una gues diff nomas dime cual
Topic Starter
Gero

eLtigreXXx wrote:

pero que pasho
esta bien are una gues diff nomas dime cual
Podrias Ayudarme Con Una Hard :D!
XinCrin
Animo ~ cuando termina el mapa :cry:
Topic Starter
Gero

XinCrin wrote:

Animo ~ cuando termina el mapa :cry:
ya lo retomare :D!
Reiden_old
I want this to be ranked : (
Topic Starter
Gero

Reiden wrote:

I want this to be ranked : (
me too U.U I will endeavor :'3
cokeshawty
We all want this!
Reiden_old
No... We NEED this to be ranked : P I really don't understand why there are only 2 ranked songs by 2NE1 (and I don't really like these 2 songs ;c) :( They are so popular and it's just kinda weird :E
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