1. KIAI TIME end- 01:12:849. 02:09:019. 03:20:509 - Hard diff put it in the middle of the slider. so I think it is better to change this↓
   01:12:849⇒01:13:168. 02:09:019⇒02:09:338. 03:20:509⇒03:20:828.

1. 00:39:019 (1,2) - remove whistle to end of the slider. (To increase the difference between the previous part, remove the whistle is better imo. )
   00:41:572 (1,2,3,4) - here is better if you put a whistle.
2. 00:49:232 (1,2) - ^
3. 01:24:977 (1,2) - end feel a little strange to me because 01:26:253 - Here does not have anything to end ( vocal,drum..etc ) so, I recommend that match here with a vocal. vocal end 01:26:413: http://puu.sh/DFSO If you change it, please match volume with a vocal. and 01:26:253green line - move to 01:26:413.
4. 01:31:360 (3) - Overlap in appearance a little bad with 01:32:636 (1). Suggestion of the form: http://puu.sh/DFZg ( so move with 01:30:083 (1,2) )
   

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5. 01:35:189 (1,2) - same 00:39:019 (1,2)
6. 01:45:402 (1,2) - ^
7. 01:46:679 (2,1) - Why use DS0.8x o.o? i suggest 01:46:679 (2) - rotate -5° and move to x148,y296.
8. 02:28:806 (1,2) - same 01:24:977 (1,2) but end is 02:29:923. so i suggest 02:28:806 (1) - slider 02:28:806~02:29:923
9. 03:07:104 (1,2) - Suggestion of rhythm: http://puu.sh/DGeP Rhythm matches this one and the rhythm is simple
10. 03:09:657 (1,2) - Here there is a continuous rhythm. I felt a little bit difficult to do this two repeat sliders. so i suggest rhythm with 03:11:572 (2) http://puu.sh/DGj2
11. 03:28:806 (1) - remove NC. ( same as 01:21:147 (3) )
12. 03:48:594 (2) - add whistle to start of the slider
13. 03:53:062 (1) - add finish
14. 04:02:955 (1) - If you put a spinner here, I think there is no need to be lowered gradually. I think is enough volume at 10%.

1. 00:33:913~00:39:019. 00:44:126~00:49:232. 01:30:083~01:35:189. 01:40:296~01:45:402. So many whistle, I thought that better to reduce a whistle here. ( delete 1 whistle and think only with 3 enough )
2. 00:39:657 (3,1,2) - whistle here: same normal diff 00:39:019 (1,2)
3. 00:49:870 (3,1,3) - ^
4. 01:02:796 (3) - one grid down.
5. 01:14:764 (1) - remove whistle to start of the slider
6. 01:24:977 (1) - same normal diff
7. 01:35:189 (1) - remove whistle to start of the slider ( Why put it together and finish? 00:33:913~00:54:338 - You have not been here how to use such )
8. 01:35:668 (2,1,2) - same normal diff 00:39:019 (1,2)
9. 01:40:296 (1) - remove whistle to start of the slider
10. 01:45:402 (1) - ^
11. 01:45:881 (2,1,2) - same normal diff 00:39:019 (1,2)
12. 01:50:429 (3) - The blue line does not fit here. 01:50:349 and 01:50:509 - it is better to put a circle here
13. 02:28:806 (1) - same normal diff
14. 03:05:828 (1) - move to 03:05:987. i think follow the vocals fit here
15. 04:02:955 (1) - same normal diff

[Normal]

[Hard]

1. Best names for .mp3 and BGs ever. Also, everything's fine on the block I suppose, although since this song sounds pretty intense, I don't think Normal's BG would fit with it, and the bookmarks aren't snapped by the way...

1. 00:09:338 (2,3,4) - ...Are you sure? I mean, using a 1/1 triplets (not sure if they're supposed to be named like that :\) seven times in a row? Although it's certainly fine, I think occasionally using a 1/1 slider that repeats once for some variations won't hurt, since it feels... boring to play the same pattern continuously. It's up to you, though.
2. 00:27:530 (1) - Uh... what's with this? It sounds really wrong to me. Removing the repeat, and then adding a 1/1 slider 1/2 beats after this one (thus making 00:28:806 (2) positioned 1/2 beats after this new slider) goes very well. I wouldn't add a timeline picture, but I'm being serious here. (Simple ver.: Remove the repeat on this slider, then add a slider that begins at 00:28:328 and ends at 00:28:647.)
3. 01:23:700 (3) - ^ (The case is similar as above.)
4. 01:24:657 (5) - Make this a 1/2 slider? It's weird to hear an unmapped beat after this circle... (Actually, there's still some cases like this on the second chorus, but they're pretty minor, not causing any awkwardness, and this would be a Normal+ if we're actually going there.)
5. 02:39:019 - 02:49:232 - Hmm... I would like to make this a slowdown section, but that's just me.
6. 03:30:721 (2,3) - Huh? Why are you only doing this now while you can do it on 02:27:530 (2) too? I think it would be better that way.
7. 03:52:104 (4) - Similar with 01:23:700 (3).
8. 04:02:955 (1) - Eh... I don't think you'll need a spinner for the fade out. Removing this and adding Finish to the entirety of 04:02:636 (2) should be sufficient.

1. Almost 16 million points of maximum score and 1,070x max combo... I am sure enough this is not a Hard diff, even if the song's length is 4 minutes and the BPM is 188. I would rather call this a(n) Hard+ or even Insane- diff, since the only thing this diff lacks to be a true Insane diff is jumps. And the distance between Normal and Hard's scores is... around 14 millions. Oh well, looks like I'm the only one whining about this, so I guess I can stop now.
2. 00:11:413 (3) - Stacking the beginning of this slider below 00:11:253 (2) works better.
3. 00:16:679 (4) - ^ (Stack below 00:16:519 (3).) Also, I'm seeing lots of things like this, so I'll assume it's your way of mapping and won't touch on this kind of stuff any further.
4. 01:09:179 (2) - I'm not really sure about how well will the spacing inconsistency work here...
5. 01:29:444 (1,2,3) - Stack these circles above the beginning of 01:30:402 (1)?
6. 01:57:689 (6) - NC this and remove the one on 01:58:168 (1)? Yeah, I know we're not switching to another stanza yet, but it's better than the previous NC placement, IMO.
7. 02:30:402 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm... I guess I know why the score is crazy high. Removing this section yielded a ~14,2 million points worth of score and 1,022x max combo, but then again it's still a bit too much... and you have already done them, anyway, so let it be as is.
8. 02:46:200 (5,6) - I would convert these objects to a 1/1 slider that repeats once, but I guess it's pretty good for now.
9. 03:08:062 (3,4) - Make them a slider?
10. 04:02:955 (1) - Same as Normal, except the object you should add a Finish to is 04:02:636 (2).

1. nothing wrong here

1. 01:10:939 (1,2,3,4) - i feel bit bored like this? use spacing 1.2http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/359876
2. 01:46:200 (3) - move to x272 y255
3. 01:46:359 (4) - ^ x328 y311 looks better 01:46:679 (1,2) - Please don't forget adjustment of the distance
4. 02:09:338 (3,1,2,3,4) - make star shape?
5. 03:13:966 (2) - move to x237 y106
6. 03:14:125 (3) - ^ x293 y49
7. 03:22:264 03:22:344 add note?

1. Good

1. Resnap all of bookmarks ( blue line ) ? , oh , just saying~ ,You don't need to change them xD
2. 02:39:019 ~ 02:49:232 Canon!!??!?

1. This map just Normal and Hard , and BPM is 188 high!! No Easy diff on this map , so suggest reduse AR 2~1 to make it more easy , AR is too high now on the easiest diff
2. 00:27:530 (1) - Add clap on arrow sounds better to me
3. 00:39:019 (1) - Remove whistle start , just leave finish here like Hard diff
4. 00:44:126 (1,2,3) - ( Nazi ) Very tiny spacing issue
5. 00:53:062 (3,4,1) - Same as above
6. 01:01:998 (5,1) - Swap New Combo like 00:56:572 (4,1) -
7. 01:01:998 (5) - To make a better flow , try this , It maybe can make flow good ~
   
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8. 01:26:253 - This Timing Section should move forward 2 tick to 01:26:413 - , make the kiai time the same with Hard diff
9. 01:35:189 (1) - Same as 00:39:019 (1) -
10. 01:41:572 (3) - Change this slider to three circles ? this part has no 1/2 , different with other same part
11. 01:58:168 (5,1) - Same as 01:01:998 (5,1) -
12. 03:09:657 (4,1) - Same as above
13. 03:30:721 (2,3) - 1/4 slider appear on this difficult looks weird , And it will scared of some beginners , please make them more easy
14. 03:40:296 (3,4,1) - ( Nazi ) Spacing issue~
15. 03:47:636 (4,1) - Same as above
16. 03:51:147 (2,3,4) - Same as above
17. 04:02:636 (2) - Incorrect rhythm I think >_< Make this slider start at 04:02:477 - to make it correct
18. 04:02:955 (1) - Big suggest to remove this spinner , while I spin this spinner , I feel become bad , I don't know , just say my feeling

1. 00:09:657 (1) - This slider isn't follow the music... ( And sounds strange on my first play >_< ) I think this is the correct rhythm I think , try to change this slider~
   
2. The same slider I want you change :
   
   1. 00:12:210 (1) -
   2. 00:14:764 (1) -
   3. 00:17:317 (1) -
   4. 00:19:870 (1) -
   5. 00:22:423 (1) -
   6. 00:24:976 (1) -
   7. 00:27:530 (1) - About this , it is fits the music here , so you don't need to change it
   8. 03:56:891 (1) -
   9. 03:59:445 (1) -
   10. 04:01:998 (1) - Change to 4 circles to follow the drum
3. 00:48:593 (3) - This circle maybe can cover by 00:47:955 (1) - try to move this to other place?
4. 01:02:476 (3,4) - Change to a slider ?
5. 01:24:657 (4) - Delete this slider and add a circle 01:24:657 - to follow the music , there is nothing 01:24:657 -
6. 01:35:668 (2,3,4) - Unrankable stuff , you should make players can read them
   
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7. 01:48:593 (3) - Ctrl+R to make the combo number appear , and Ctrl+R on 01:48:913 (4) - too , change them can avoid players can't read it and can have a betterrrrr~~ flow~
8. 01:49:232 (1,2) - This part isn't follow the music correctly , try this rhythm to follow the drum more
   
9. 02:28:806 (1) - Why whistle on this spinner , remove it like Normal diff
10. 03:11:732 (3) - Start normal-hitsound here may follow the music more
11. 04:02:955 (1) - Same as Normal

Frizz925 wrote:

From modding queue

[Normal]
Looks good

[Hard]
AR+1 maybe? Kinda weird seeing the slider goes faster compared to how the objects appear I guess no..
00:48:833 (4) - The clap here sounds weird, remove it and place it on 00:48:913 (5) instead ok
00:58:966 (4) - Remove finish on slider end? nope
01:08:381 (1,2) - Sudden jump here don't worry, that's still not really far
01:10:136 (2) - Whistle on slider end? nope
01:21:625 (2) - ^ ^
01:24:498 (3) - Whistle on slider start? nope
01:29:444 (1,2) - Ctrl+E here (remove both whistle and clap) removed whistle on (1) but not removed clap on (2)
01:30:083 (1) - NC here instead of 01:30:402 (2) and stack this on 01:30:402 (2) as well, feels better for me sure
01:39:019 (1) - Remove finish on slider end? nope
01:43:966 (4) - Whistle on slider end? ^
01:45:083 (4) - Remove finish on slider start, sounds a bit spammy here for following cymbal sounder
02:42:370 - Add note here, sounds better imo sorry, nope
02:46:200 (5) - Remove 02:46:519 (6) then make this slider end at 02:46:519 and then add clap on slider start. ^
03:07:583 (2,3,1) - Sounds better if you don't "spam" finish here, remove any finish on these no, I just following the bg music
03:27:051 (4) - x:72 y:344 looks better if this is inline with 03:27:210 (5) done

I guess that's all, gl

wmfchris wrote:

- S:C1 appeared in the song but you didn't put soft custom htisounds in it. Make sure this is wt you're expected. omg forgot to change this into default .-.

[Hard]
01:24:498 (3) - adding one more reversing tickk fits here well done
02:27:530 (1) - By folllowing the drum accent for (2,3,4,5) I'll also recommend two 1/2 notes on 02:27:530 - and 1/2 later instead of a 1/1 slider. changed into another pattern..
02:46:679 - in the canon section the melody flows really smooth and continous, and I wouldn't expect some 1/1 here... well, I have no idea ;; but the sound was good to me
03:09:657 (1,1) - feel like some accents should be done on the spinner (slightly heavier beats and the beginning of a sentence), try to swap whistle between (1,1)? done
03:56:891 (1) - the vocal sound doesn't really fall on the 3/4 tick, and you used 1/2 throughout the song, so 1/2 beats here sounds better done
04:01:998 (1) - ^ done

[Normal]
The difficulty rating is too low for a "normal" and it has a big gap with hard uh since the bpm was high, too hard make 'easier' normal diff ;; increase hp btw..
01:34:870 (4) - add whistle as well? the sound weird ;3;
04:02:636 (2) - similarly the second accent doesn't fall on the 1/2 tick so try a single note here and start spinner eariler? done

Some 1/2 beats are well made and the hitsounds fit the song as well. good luck!

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