1. Easy (2.64 stars, 278 notes)
2. Hard (4.99 stars, 603 notes)
3. Normal (4.2 stars, 322 notes)

mint_ong89 wrote:

can i do taiko maps on this.....plz because i love this song...

1. Add Yasora-chan to the tags? not really necessary but still, since it was your old username
2. 2 unused .osb's
3. 00:28:806 - I think you should change the title and move it here (28806) , maybe change the colors as well to something more fitting~♪.

-Bakari- wrote:

TEACH ME HOW TO MAP, SRSLY

Byakugan249 wrote:

before i mod this, there's 5 stars yet it shows a +8 SP? is this a bug?

1. KIAI TIME end- 01:12:849. 02:09:019. 03:20:509 - Hard diff put it in the middle of the slider. so I think it is better to change this↓
   01:12:849⇒01:13:168. 02:09:019⇒02:09:338. 03:20:509⇒03:20:828.

1. 00:39:019 (1,2) - remove whistle to end of the slider. (To increase the difference between the previous part, remove the whistle is better imo. )
   00:41:572 (1,2,3,4) - here is better if you put a whistle.
2. 00:49:232 (1,2) - ^
3. 01:24:977 (1,2) - end feel a little strange to me because 01:26:253 - Here does not have anything to end ( vocal,drum..etc ) so, I recommend that match here with a vocal. vocal end 01:26:413: http://puu.sh/DFSO If you change it, please match volume with a vocal. and 01:26:253green line - move to 01:26:413.
4. 01:31:360 (3) - Overlap in appearance a little bad with 01:32:636 (1). Suggestion of the form: http://puu.sh/DFZg ( so move with 01:30:083 (1,2) )
   

   58,178,90083,6,0,B|74:234|166:234|190:174,1,160,4|2
   250,134,91040,1,8
   286,206,91360,2,0,B|268:257|311:319|377:337,1,160,0|2

5. 01:35:189 (1,2) - same 00:39:019 (1,2)
6. 01:45:402 (1,2) - ^
7. 01:46:679 (2,1) - Why use DS0.8x o.o? i suggest 01:46:679 (2) - rotate -5° and move to x148,y296.
8. 02:28:806 (1,2) - same 01:24:977 (1,2) but end is 02:29:923. so i suggest 02:28:806 (1) - slider 02:28:806~02:29:923
9. 03:07:104 (1,2) - Suggestion of rhythm: http://puu.sh/DGeP Rhythm matches this one and the rhythm is simple
10. 03:09:657 (1,2) - Here there is a continuous rhythm. I felt a little bit difficult to do this two repeat sliders. so i suggest rhythm with 03:11:572 (2) http://puu.sh/DGj2
11. 03:28:806 (1) - remove NC. ( same as 01:21:147 (3) )
12. 03:48:594 (2) - add whistle to start of the slider
13. 03:53:062 (1) - add finish
14. 04:02:955 (1) - If you put a spinner here, I think there is no need to be lowered gradually. I think is enough volume at 10%.

1. 00:33:913~00:39:019. 00:44:126~00:49:232. 01:30:083~01:35:189. 01:40:296~01:45:402. So many whistle, I thought that better to reduce a whistle here. ( delete 1 whistle and think only with 3 enough )
2. 00:39:657 (3,1,2) - whistle here: same normal diff 00:39:019 (1,2)
3. 00:49:870 (3,1,3) - ^
4. 01:02:796 (3) - one grid down.
5. 01:14:764 (1) - remove whistle to start of the slider
6. 01:24:977 (1) - same normal diff
7. 01:35:189 (1) - remove whistle to start of the slider ( Why put it together and finish? 00:33:913~00:54:338 - You have not been here how to use such )
8. 01:35:668 (2,1,2) - same normal diff 00:39:019 (1,2)
9. 01:40:296 (1) - remove whistle to start of the slider
10. 01:45:402 (1) - ^
11. 01:45:881 (2,1,2) - same normal diff 00:39:019 (1,2)
12. 01:50:429 (3) - The blue line does not fit here. 01:50:349 and 01:50:509 - it is better to put a circle here
13. 02:28:806 (1) - same normal diff
14. 03:05:828 (1) - move to 03:05:987. i think follow the vocals fit here
15. 04:02:955 (1) - same normal diff

[Normal]

[Hard]

1. Best names for .mp3 and BGs ever. Also, everything's fine on the block I suppose, although since this song sounds pretty intense, I don't think Normal's BG would fit with it, and the bookmarks aren't snapped by the way...

1. 00:09:338 (2,3,4) - ...Are you sure? I mean, using a 1/1 triplets (not sure if they're supposed to be named like that :\) seven times in a row? Although it's certainly fine, I think occasionally using a 1/1 slider that repeats once for some variations won't hurt, since it feels... boring to play the same pattern continuously. It's up to you, though.
2. 00:27:530 (1) - Uh... what's with this? It sounds really wrong to me. Removing the repeat, and then adding a 1/1 slider 1/2 beats after this one (thus making 00:28:806 (2) positioned 1/2 beats after this new slider) goes very well. I wouldn't add a timeline picture, but I'm being serious here. (Simple ver.: Remove the repeat on this slider, then add a slider that begins at 00:28:328 and ends at 00:28:647.)
3. 01:23:700 (3) - ^ (The case is similar as above.)
4. 01:24:657 (5) - Make this a 1/2 slider? It's weird to hear an unmapped beat after this circle... (Actually, there's still some cases like this on the second chorus, but they're pretty minor, not causing any awkwardness, and this would be a Normal+ if we're actually going there.)
5. 02:39:019 - 02:49:232 - Hmm... I would like to make this a slowdown section, but that's just me.
6. 03:30:721 (2,3) - Huh? Why are you only doing this now while you can do it on 02:27:530 (2) too? I think it would be better that way.
7. 03:52:104 (4) - Similar with 01:23:700 (3).
8. 04:02:955 (1) - Eh... I don't think you'll need a spinner for the fade out. Removing this and adding Finish to the entirety of 04:02:636 (2) should be sufficient.

1. Almost 16 million points of maximum score and 1,070x max combo... I am sure enough this is not a Hard diff, even if the song's length is 4 minutes and the BPM is 188. I would rather call this a(n) Hard+ or even Insane- diff, since the only thing this diff lacks to be a true Insane diff is jumps. And the distance between Normal and Hard's scores is... around 14 millions. Oh well, looks like I'm the only one whining about this, so I guess I can stop now.
2. 00:11:413 (3) - Stacking the beginning of this slider below 00:11:253 (2) works better.
3. 00:16:679 (4) - ^ (Stack below 00:16:519 (3).) Also, I'm seeing lots of things like this, so I'll assume it's your way of mapping and won't touch on this kind of stuff any further.
4. 01:09:179 (2) - I'm not really sure about how well will the spacing inconsistency work here...
5. 01:29:444 (1,2,3) - Stack these circles above the beginning of 01:30:402 (1)?
6. 01:57:689 (6) - NC this and remove the one on 01:58:168 (1)? Yeah, I know we're not switching to another stanza yet, but it's better than the previous NC placement, IMO.
7. 02:30:402 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm... I guess I know why the score is crazy high. Removing this section yielded a ~14,2 million points worth of score and 1,022x max combo, but then again it's still a bit too much... and you have already done them, anyway, so let it be as is.
8. 02:46:200 (5,6) - I would convert these objects to a 1/1 slider that repeats once, but I guess it's pretty good for now.
9. 03:08:062 (3,4) - Make them a slider?
10. 04:02:955 (1) - Same as Normal, except the object you should add a Finish to is 04:02:636 (2).