TAK - Black Swan

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MMzz
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, July 19, 2012 at 4:21:36 PM

Artist: TAK
Title: Black Swan
Source: DJMAX TECHNIKA 3
Tags: Tchaikovsky Naye Tack Electronic Waltz Swan Lake Beauty and The Beast Alice in Wonderland Snow White iMuffin Tasha
BPM: 174
Filesize: 2862kb
Play Time: 01:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.17 stars, 120 notes)
  2. Maximum (4.9 stars, 348 notes)
  3. Muffin's Hard (4.81 stars, 184 notes)
  4. Normal (2.98 stars, 128 notes)
  5. Tasha's Taiko (5 stars, 634 notes)


Download: TAK - Black Swan
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Muffin's Hard by iMuffin.
Taiko by Tasha.

Everything else by me.

7/2/2012 - SoujiTheFox's Mod.
iMuffin
here's your hard :3

http://puu.sh/CZm7
Mayonnaise Dad
Quick mod here.~

[General]

Please add the names of your guest diff contributors into the tags for each difficulty.

[Easy]

Seems fine to me, just thought that this might be better for the ending: http://puu.sh/EHTF

To me, it just sounds as if it fits the music more.

[Normal]

Same on this difficulty, was very fun, but just a suggestion for the end instead of a repeating slider: http://puu.sh/EHW9

Also add a clap on 01:35:105 (3)

[Muffin's Hard]

Fix the spacing at 00:13:899 (2) to look more like http://puu.sh/EHXm. The first slider touches the 2nd one but is farther away from the 3rd.

00:39:588 (1) - Why is this spinner not extended to the bookmark line? Do so and add a finish to it, imo.

01:01:657 (2) - This slider is great for the guitar, but does not fall on it. The slider tick falls on the start of it. Please, fix that.

01:06:829 (4) - End of this slider starts on the guitar stream. Put the slider on top of the note, distance snap it, or find a different way to incorporate this stream, please. Try to not have a slider before it, just a note, then the slider stream.

01:17:519 (2) - The stream of sliders starting here. Would it be better to have them so they match the guitar riffs?

Like so:

01:35:795 (1) - Please extend this spinner so it falls on the blue bookmark note.

[Maximum]

00:02:175 (4) - Perhaps space this inbetween the note 3 and the slider. The music has a slight inflection so I think the note should too.

....to be honest, I don't find much wrong with this map. It's an excellent map.

[Tasha's Taiko]

..sounds fine to me. I'm not a taiko player, so I can't criticize. It isn't overmapped and fits the song well. Great job <3
Topic Starter
MMzz

SoujiTheFox wrote:

Quick mod here.~

[General]

Please add the names of your guest diff contributors into the tags for each difficulty. Done.

[Easy]

Seems fine to me, just thought that this might be better for the ending: http://puu.sh/EHTF I'm just going to keep it as it is for now, for the sheer fact of the style between the slider..

To me, it just sounds as if it fits the music more.

[Normal]

Same on this difficulty, was very fun, but just a suggestion for the end instead of a repeating slider: http://puu.sh/EHW9 Done.

Also add a clap on 01:35:105 (3) Done.

[Maximum]

00:02:175 (4) - Perhaps space this inbetween the note 3 and the slider. The music has a slight inflection so I think the note should too. Alright fixed, I stacked it ontop of the incomming slider. It kinda makes sense and consistency with the stacks I placed up ahead.

....to be honest, I don't find much wrong with this map. It's an excellent map.
DaxMasterix
Random Taiko Mod. huh

Tasha's Taiko:
Reduce the OD to 5 Because 6 is.. huh.. 5 is Perfect.
Reduce the HP to 6 or 5.. 7?? NO PLS
  1. 00:13:915 (2,3,1,2,1,1,1) [ddk,k,d,k,d] - I preffer kkd k d k d..
  2. 00:16:846 (2) [d] - D
  3. 00:22:621 (1,1) [kd] - Change to dk
  4. 00:24:087 (1,1,1,1,1) [dkdkd] - only ddddd Is just Perfect
  5. 00:26:673 (x) - Add a note ''k''
  6. 00:27:104 (2) [k] - Erase this note
  7. 00:28:397 (2) [d] - k
  8. 00:32:535 (2) [d] - k
  9. 00:32:621 (1) [k] - Erase this note
  10. 00:35:466 (3) [d] - D
  11. 00:38:052 (2) [d] - k
  12. 00:38:139 (1) [k] - Erase this note
  13. 00:39:432 (2) [d] - k
  14. 00:40:639 (1,1,1,1,1) [dkdkd] - only ddddd Is Better
  15. 00:47:190 (1) [k] - d
  16. 00:49:259 (1) [k] - d
  17. 00:55:811 (1) [k] - d
  18. 00:57:190 (4) [d] - k
  19. 00:57:880 (1) [k] - d
  20. 00:59:949 (1) [k] - d
  21. 01:02:535 (1) [d] - k
  22. 01:04:259 (2) [d] - k


Good Taiko Diff o3o.. Good luck in the Rank!~
nanda2009
Random check :v

[General]

  1. Source : DJMAX TECHNIKA 3 => It should be "DJMAX"
  2. if you do fix the source... then add "technika" at tags
:v no kds
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
00:11:674 (6) - stacks are actually quite difficult for beginners, you should probably unstack this from 5
00:21:846 (1) - putting a note on an offbeat after a pause is really confusing to newer players. You can either find a different place for this note on a strong beat or make a lead-in to this note to make it more obvious
00:27:880 (7) - again, you should unstack this note
00:36:156 (2,3,4) - you should avoid having 4 look related to 2, most beginners will try to go 2, 4, 3 instead.
00:54:776 (1) - this note also will require a lead-in to make sense to mappers, perhaps putting notes on each of the white ticks in the middle
01:21:673 (3,4,5) - here you have both stacking and a pattern that will confuse newer mappers much like 00:36:156

[Normal]
00:21:846 (1) - this note still feels awkward in normal, not because it doesn't fit with the music but because the music also does a weird twist here. I suggest adding a lead-in to it

[Muffin]
01:17:535 (2,3,4,5) - it might be because this is in 3/4 but it looks awkward to me. I'd suggest getting someone of higher playskill to look at it.
01:23:742 (8) - please stack under fading 4 (nazi)
01:24:604 (1) - center this between 8 and 2 (if you have trouble doing this, make a temporary slider from one point to the other and place this on the slider like so. Don't forget to delete the slider afterwards!)

[Maximum]
00:12:536 (7) - if you're going to make this a jump, it'd be really cool if you could make the following 1 have the same spacing as 6-7 for the ba-BAAA in the music and I think it'd fit a lot better
00:13:915 (2) - this jump is entirely unnecessary and doesn't seem to follow the music or make any particular pattern (especially since 3 isn't centered between 1 and 2, which might make it borderline ok)
00:20:294 - I feel like the music here demands something a little flashier than what you have, especially given how you highlight the rest of the variations on this note
00:26:328 (5) - again, this jump doesn't seem to fit the music at all
00:48:569 (1) - this slider looks weird because of your red follow point, you might want to try it again for a better curve

[Tasha]
looks fine to me
iamvanilla
make the normal a little bit harder. :|
and the normal mode should be the easy :D~
because the hard mode is the real hard.. :?
so you can make the normal
to be a little bit harder to practice against the hard :D
just that.. I'm still a noob at Osu .. so sorry if
my comment is not helping :/
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