1. Attention (5 stars, 759 notes)
2. Easy (2.78 stars, 210 notes)
3. Hard (5 stars, 579 notes)
4. Normal (4.18 stars, 279 notes)
5. Sp3 & KS's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 1223 notes)

Megurine Luka wrote:

;D Jin脑残粉前来报到

1. Tags里不要把Vocaloid3之类的加进去么……

1. 不考虑多放点2/4clap嘛？听着音效太轻了的感觉……
2. 02:05:850 (3,1) - 节奏调整建议……现在(1)断在了一个长音的中间感觉怪怪的，所以考虑把(3)做到结束在02:06:300 - ，然后(1)放到02:06:600 - 开始，结束点不变？虽然用了蓝线节奏但是因为bpm低而且都是slider所以我觉得应该没问题
   

1. 和Easy一样……我觉得可以多放点Clap...然后别的没了……

1. 00:28:950 (2,3,4,5) - 无论如何这种我还是觉得略难了……很多地方…………
2. 01:06:750 (1,2) - (nazi)做对称了？
3. 03:24:150 (3,4) - 感觉上把(3)加一个折返，删掉(4)，然后在(4)原先的尾巴那个位置放个note并且并入下一组NC会更流畅一点？

1. AR9………………………………还有你确认这真的不是200bpm而是100bpm with 1/8 beat么
2. 00:36:750 - 这个空拍不是很舒服……
3. 00:48:450 (2,1,2) - 调整下节奏? Vocal里"Ah~~"的长音是从00:48:600 - 开始的，所以00:48:150 (1) - 加个折返，去掉00:48:450 (2) - ，然后00:48:600 - 到00:49:050 - 整个一个长slider下来并且00:49:200 - 加note？
   
4. 01:35:550 (7) - 建议加个note
5. 02:00:150 (4) - 考虑做成一个折返slider（1/8折返，总长度不变）？

Leorda wrote:

kukupapa!!


[Easy]
* AR +1? not really want it Orz
r
03:12:750 (1) - Make a slider like this to make a blanket combo? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/379585 FIX


[Normal]
* I think this diff needs more hitsound in non-kiai section (e.g. 01:57:150 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2)) it will let me feel very bad so not Orz


[Attention]
00:20:250 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for them. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/379622 FIX~


Bye now~

1. As mentioned by at least two people, the BPM should be 200.
   

   Flask wrote:

   懷疑BPM是100還是200 ˋ

   Regou wrote:

   歌這麼輕快肯定是BPM200!! D:

   Raise BPM to 200, drop slider velocity by half, recalculate slider lengths, resnap all notes, and fix all sliders.
2. Offset 10356 or 10357 is much more correct; you can tell by the snare hitsounds you're using that your offset is early.
3. You may want to create your own sliderpoint10.png and sliderpoint30.png, since the default one doesn't look very nice with your custom hitbursts.

1. 00:11:250 (5,6,1) - Rhythm feels really awkward. Try this:
   
2. 00:15:450 (2) - Unnecessary stalling. Recommend against stacking; there are better alternatives.
3. 00:17:550 (3) - Kickback slider is unable to bring out the 4 tone melody. Try this:
   
4. 00:18:750 (1) - Remove new combo spinner, makes more sense since it's a continuation of 00:18:600 (3) - .
5. 00:22:200 (6,1,2,3) - Unnecessary stalling. Don't stack (1,2). Instead, use a rhythm pattern like 00:29:400 (6,1,2,3) - .
6. 00:56:850 (5) - Unnecessary stalling, again. Try stacking with head of (1).
7. 01:07:950 (1,2,3) - Stalling. Continuing use of 01:06:750 (1,2,3) - rhythm pattern would be much better.
8. 01:20:400 - Add an object here, so you can unstack 01:20:550 (1) - to prevent the stalling.
9. 01:23:550 (3) - Best if you made this the same distance to (1) as it is to (2). Try x:460 y:199 for a perfect 2.50x spacing equilateral triangle.
10. 01:35:550 (7,1) - The stacking you have for 01:33:450 (1,2) - and 01:34:350 (1,2) - are effective here. Stack (7,1), otherwise unstack everything else. Start a pattern, continue it, otherwise don't start it at all.
11. 02:09:750 (4,5) - Stalling very bad here, breaks the flow altogether. You can make 02:09:000 (1) - this combo go toward the top left more, then have 02:09:750 (4,5,1) - make a giant V.
12. 02:16:500 (1,2,3,4) - Does not make a lot of sense. Four tones of the scale are very obvious here, and unless you're stacking all four, don't stack any of these.
13. 02:36:600 - For the solo section, I expected the use of more daring patterns and more interesting slider shapes, and I was disappointed. This solo section is very exciting, yet you have this section mapped just like a verse.
14. 02:52:050 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Notice the repeating ascending chromatic scale, three times. You should be able to make something out of it instead of mapping it like it's all one flowing movement when it shouldn't be.
15. 02:54:750 (1) - Remove new combo spinner, it's an obvious continuation of 02:54:600 (5) - .
16. 03:18:750 (1,2,3) - See 01:07:950 (1,2,3) - .

those wrote:

Anything rejected must come with a good enough reason.

[General]

1. As mentioned by at least two people, the BPM should be 200.
   

   Flask wrote:

   懷疑BPM是100還是200 ˋ

   Regou wrote:

   歌這麼輕快肯定是BPM200!! D:

   Raise BPM to 200, drop slider velocity by half, recalculate slider lengths, resnap all notes, and fix all sliders.
2. Offset 10356 or 10357 is much more correct; you can tell by the snare hitsounds you're using that your offset is early.
3. You may want to create your own sliderpoint10.png and sliderpoint30.png, since the default one doesn't look very nice with your custom hitbursts.

FIX BPM and offest, I think sliderpoint is ok <3
[Attention]

1. 00:11:250 (5,6,1) - Rhythm feels really awkward. Try this: FIX
   
2. 00:15:450 (2) - Unnecessary stalling. Recommend against stacking; there are better alternatives. FIX
3. 00:17:550 (3) - Kickback slider is unable to bring out the 4 tone melody. Try this: FIX
   
4. 00:18:750 (1) - Remove new combo spinner, makes more sense since it's a continuation of 00:18:600 (3) - . FIX
5. 00:22:200 (6,1,2,3) - Unnecessary stalling. Don't stack (1,2). Instead, use a rhythm pattern like 00:29:400 (6,1,2,3) - . following Lyrics so no change
6. 00:56:850 (5) - Unnecessary stalling, again. Try stacking with head of (1). following Lyrics so no change
7. 01:07:950 (1,2,3) - Stalling. Continuing use of 01:06:750 (1,2,3) - rhythm pattern would be much better. I believe it almost ok <D
8. 01:20:400 - Add an object here, so you can unstack 01:20:550 (1) - to prevent the stalling. FIX
9. 01:23:550 (3) - Best if you made this the same distance to (1) as it is to (2). Try x:460 y:199 for a perfect 2.50x spacing equilateral triangle. FIX
10. 01:35:550 (7,1) - The stacking you have for 01:33:450 (1,2) - and 01:34:350 (1,2) - are effective here. Stack (7,1), otherwise unstack everything else. Start a pattern, continue it, otherwise don't start it at all. FIX
11. 02:09:750 (4,5) - Stalling very bad here, breaks the flow altogether. You can make 02:09:000 (1) - this combo go toward the top left more, then have 02:09:750 (4,5,1) - make a giant V. following Lyrics so no change
12. 02:16:500 (1,2,3,4) - Does not make a lot of sense. Four tones of the scale are very obvious here, and unless you're stacking all four, don't stack any of these. stress and small jump
13. 02:36:600 - For the solo section, I expected the use of more daring patterns and more interesting slider shapes, and I was disappointed. This solo section is very exciting, yet you have this section mapped just like a verse. it will be easy to read for player so i think is ok <3..
14. 02:52:050 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Notice the repeating ascending chromatic scale, three times. You should be able to make something out of it instead of mapping it like it's all one flowing movement when it shouldn't be. is ok i think, easy to read and easy to play
15. 02:54:750 (1) - Remove new combo spinner, it's an obvious continuation of 02:54:600 (5) - . FIX
16. 03:18:750 (1,2,3) - See 01:07:950 (1,2,3) - .

FIX

Should be enough to keep you working for a while. Call me back when you've accounted for everything; other diffs don't need much work.

tutuhaha wrote:

1. 02:36:600 - For the solo section, I expected the use of more daring patterns and more interesting slider shapes, and I was disappointed. This solo section is very exciting, yet you have this section mapped just like a verse. it will be easy to read for player so i think is ok <3..
2. 02:52:050 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Notice the repeating ascending chromatic scale, three times. You should be able to make something out of it instead of mapping it like it's all one flowing movement when it shouldn't be. is ok i think, easy to read and easy to play

those wrote:

tutuhaha wrote:

1. 02:36:600 - For the solo section, I expected the use of more daring patterns and more interesting slider shapes, and I was disappointed. This solo section is very exciting, yet you have this section mapped just like a verse. it will be easy to read for player so i think is ok <3..
2. 02:52:050 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Notice the repeating ascending chromatic scale, three times. You should be able to make something out of it instead of mapping it like it's all one flowing movement when it shouldn't be. is ok i think, easy to read and easy to play

That's not really the point here. Although it may be easy to read and easy to play, there are definitely alternatives that are both easy to read and play, as well as being mapped to the music more accurately. You've mapped the solo section like you've mapped a verse, which means you have totally neglected the fact that a solo section can be much more exciting than what you have right now. While what you have now may be fine for a verse, I don't think it's appropriate for this specific section of the song. Otherwise, everything else is fine.

• Timing -
  
  1. 756ms 200 BPM -> 755ms?
  2. 64356ms 0.5x
  3. 83556ms 0.5x
  4. 137556ms 0.5x
  5. 156606ms 0.5x
  6. 195156ms 0.5x
  7. 214356ms 0.5x

• Object / Notes

1. 00:16:656 (1) - o
2. 00:18:756 (3) - Why don't you use Spinner?
3. 00:34:206 (4) - o
4. 00:51:156 - Add a note?
5. 00:56:706 - Add a note?
6. 01:00:606 - Add a o
7. 01:27:681 (2) - Remove?
8. 02:55:956 - Break!?

• Somgthing Others
  
  No

Numbers 596108 wrote:

Simply Mod

Request from tutuhaha & spboxer3


Purple -> Must Fixed

• Timing -
  
  1. 756ms 200 BPM -> 755ms?
  2. 64356ms 0.5x
  3. 83556ms 0.5x
  4. 137556ms 0.5x
  5. 156606ms 0.5x
  6. 195156ms 0.5x
  7. 214356ms 0.5x

• Object / Notes

1. 00:16:656 (1) - o 這邊鼓聲有個clap的...所以沒改
2. 00:18:756 (3) - Why don't you use Spinner? spinner是連續打的...可是這邊我想讓它靜音 所以才用3連打 不過加spinner好像也不錯 我加了
3. 00:34:206 (4) - o
4. 00:51:156 - Add a note? 依然維持
5. 00:56:706 - Add a note? ^
6. 01:00:606 - Add a o ^
7. 01:27:681 (2) - Remove? ^
8. 02:55:956 - Break!? 恩...就像我說的 那個地方對vocal不準又沒有鼓點...所以暫時Break

• Somgthing Others
  
  No

Rating - 87. Pts / 100. Pts

ISHIDAMITSUNARI wrote:

Sp3 & KS's Taiko Oni

00:58:656 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4) - k d k d k d k d k d k k ddk k keep my way
01:10:206 (1) - k k
01:25:056 (1,2,1,2,3) - d d k d k sorry~ keep my pattern
02:09:006 (3) - k k
02:09:306 (4,5,1,1,1,2,3,1,2) - kkk d d ddk k keep my pattern
02:54:456 (1,2) - k d ->k D
03:48:156 - k
04:01:956 - d d k k D may be better. k

wmfchris wrote:

怎麼BG沒IA lol

[Taiko]
00:18:606 - only one drum sound here in the music, delete the second one to fit the music as well as leaving space for spinner? ok
01:03:006 - add a note before spinner starts? ok
02:56:106 - delete the break manually 這個地方是因為沒有鼓點 vocal也沒對上拍 所以我用break 而且手動消除不能Orz...

感覺第 2 3 個kiai overmap了...其實vocal也是1/1 1/2多 偏僱放了一堆1/4 個別的2連可以理解 不過 一堆2 3連就太糾結了 ._.

aabc271 wrote:

As requested by Sp3 & tutuhaha, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go :3

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to

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[Sp3 & KS's Taiko Oni]

Just wondering which part does a certain mapper did ~

00:18:756 ( 1 ) - This spinner could be a bit short and players might fail to finish it. Maybe delete it and add d at 00:18:756 ? 其實我本來是這樣的 但是眾多人建議 所以我改成用spinner了 keep it

00:51:456 ( 4 ~ 6 ) - I think it's better to map sth more intense here .___. add some note
01:21:456 ( 1 ~ 3 ) - ^ ^

01:03:006 ( 1 ) - imo a 4-plets b4 this spinner look odd. Maybe move the starting pt of this spinner 1/2 backward ( to 01:03:156 ) and add a d at 01:03:006 ? fixed by wmf's mod

02:28:956 ( 2,1,1,1 ) - A 5-plets fit better than 2+2 plets imo because the music has no such 2+2 beats ~ ->1+3
03:16:956 ( 2,3,1,2 ) - ^^

Suggested patterns

Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:17:106 ( 2 ) - Red note ? ( I just feel d suits better. No special reasons )

00:19:956 ( 1 ) - Add finish ? ( Start of a new song section )

00:29:556 ( 1 ) - ^ ( Start of the repeat of that section)

00:51:006 ( 3, 4 ) - Blue note for (3), and move (4) 1/2 earlier ( to 00:51:306 ) ? ( To fit the vocal ) keep my way

00:54:606 ( 2 ) - Blue note ? ( 3,1,2 has a higher pitch than 2,1,2. So kdk -> kdd fits well imo )

01:04:356 ( 1 ) - Add finish ? ( Start of kiai )

01:10:206 ( 1 ) - Blue note ? ( The vocal is at a higher pitch here, so k fits better imo )

01:13:956 ( 1 ) - Add finish ? ( Start of repeated section of kiai )

01:25:356 ( 1, 2 ) - ^ ( Emphasizing these 2 notes fit well imo )
01:30:156 ( 1, 2 ) - ^

01:42:456 ( 3, 4, 1 ) - Delete 4 & 1, and change 3 into blue note ? ( There is no music supporting the 1/4 )

02:02:106 ( 1 ) - Delete this ? ( To fit the pattern at 01:57:156 ( 1, 2 ) )

02:17:556 ( 2 ) - Add finish ? ( Start of kiai )

02:27:156 ( 1 ) - Add finish ? ( Start of repeated section of kiai )

03:15:156 ( 1, 2 ) - Change 1 into red note, and add finish at 2 ? ( 2 has a higher pitch of vocal and it's on a heavier beat )

03:24:756 ( 1 ) - Add finish ? ( Start of repeated section of kiai )

03:29:256 ( 1, 2 ) - O O ? ( Fit the heavier beats & vocal )

03:41:106 ( x ) - Add a red note ? ( To fit the overall feeling and prevent unexpected break )

03:53:556 ( 1 ) - Add finish ? ( The drum is emphasizing here )

改了些~

The map is OK overall ~

Some rests are placed in unexpectedly. Otherwise nice ~

Rating : 8/10 ( +0.5 : Hitsounds )

Star and good luck ~

spboxer3 wrote:

ISHIDAMITSUNARI wrote:

Sp3 & KS's Taiko Oni

00:58:656 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4) - k d k d k d k d k d k k ddk k keep my way
01:10:206 (1) - k k
01:25:056 (1,2,1,2,3) - d d k d k sorry~ keep my pattern
02:09:006 (3) - k k
02:09:306 (4,5,1,1,1,2,3,1,2) - kkk d d ddk k keep my pattern
02:54:456 (1,2) - k d ->k D
03:48:156 - k
04:01:956 - d d k k D may be better. k

thx your mod ><

wmfchris wrote:

怎麼BG沒IA lol

[Taiko]
00:18:606 - only one drum sound here in the music, delete the second one to fit the music as well as leaving space for spinner? ok
01:03:006 - add a note before spinner starts? ok
02:56:106 - delete the break manually 這個地方是因為沒有鼓點 vocal也沒對上拍 所以我用break 而且手動消除不能Orz...

感覺第 2 3 個kiai overmap了...其實vocal也是1/1 1/2多 偏僱放了一堆1/4 個別的2連可以理解 不過 一堆2 3連就太糾結了 ._.

thx your Help

aabc271 wrote:

As requested by Sp3 & tutuhaha, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go :3

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to

-----------------------

[Sp3 & KS's Taiko Oni]

Just wondering which part does a certain mapper did ~

00:18:756 ( 1 ) - This spinner could be a bit short and players might fail to finish it. Maybe delete it and add d at 00:18:756 ? 其實我本來是這樣的 但是眾多人建議 所以我改成用spinner了 keep it

00:51:456 ( 4 ~ 6 ) - I think it's better to map sth more intense here .___. add some note
01:21:456 ( 1 ~ 3 ) - ^ ^

01:03:006 ( 1 ) - imo a 4-plets b4 this spinner look odd. Maybe move the starting pt of this spinner 1/2 backward ( to 01:03:156 ) and add a d at 01:03:006 ? fixed by wmf's mod

02:28:956 ( 2,1,1,1 ) - A 5-plets fit better than 2+2 plets imo because the music has no such 2+2 beats ~ ->1+3
03:16:956 ( 2,3,1,2 ) - ^^

Suggested patterns

Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:17:106 ( 2 ) - Red note ? ( I just feel d suits better. No special reasons )

00:19:956 ( 1 ) - Add finish ? ( Start of a new song section )

00:29:556 ( 1 ) - ^ ( Start of the repeat of that section)

00:51:006 ( 3, 4 ) - Blue note for (3), and move (4) 1/2 earlier ( to 00:51:306 ) ? ( To fit the vocal ) keep my way

00:54:606 ( 2 ) - Blue note ? ( 3,1,2 has a higher pitch than 2,1,2. So kdk -> kdd fits well imo )

01:04:356 ( 1 ) - Add finish ? ( Start of kiai )

01:10:206 ( 1 ) - Blue note ? ( The vocal is at a higher pitch here, so k fits better imo )

01:13:956 ( 1 ) - Add finish ? ( Start of repeated section of kiai )

01:25:356 ( 1, 2 ) - ^ ( Emphasizing these 2 notes fit well imo )
01:30:156 ( 1, 2 ) - ^

01:42:456 ( 3, 4, 1 ) - Delete 4 & 1, and change 3 into blue note ? ( There is no music supporting the 1/4 )

02:02:106 ( 1 ) - Delete this ? ( To fit the pattern at 01:57:156 ( 1, 2 ) )

02:17:556 ( 2 ) - Add finish ? ( Start of kiai )

02:27:156 ( 1 ) - Add finish ? ( Start of repeated section of kiai )

03:15:156 ( 1, 2 ) - Change 1 into red note, and add finish at 2 ? ( 2 has a higher pitch of vocal and it's on a heavier beat )

03:24:756 ( 1 ) - Add finish ? ( Start of repeated section of kiai )

03:29:256 ( 1, 2 ) - O O ? ( Fit the heavier beats & vocal )

03:41:106 ( x ) - Add a red note ? ( To fit the overall feeling and prevent unexpected break )

03:53:556 ( 1 ) - Add finish ? ( The drum is emphasizing here )

改了些~

The map is OK overall ~

Some rests are placed in unexpectedly. Otherwise nice ~

Rating : 8/10 ( +0.5 : Hitsounds )

Star and good luck ~

>< thx your help!!

http://puu.sh/MJIa

1. 00:10:056 (1,2,1,1,1) - Five tones of a major scale, would make little sense using k for your third note. Use ddddk.
2. 00:12:756 (1) - This should be d, like 00:15:156 (1) - and 00:17:556 (1) - .
3. 00:54:306 (3,1,2) - Two claps in the music. Should be kkd. Apply to 00:55:506 (2,1,2) - .
4. 01:10:206 (2) - Clap instead of whistle outta nowhere. Best change back to whistle. And 01:25:656 (1) - .
5. 02:07:806 (1,2,1) - Triple should not be here at all; considering you have breaks like 02:06:756 - , 02:09:156 - , and 02:11:706 - , it'd be in your best interest to have a break at 02:07:956 - white.
6. 02:16:506 (2,3,4,1) - dkkk. The first and second notes have an interval of a third, whereas the second, third, and fourth notes share an interval of a second. The jump is between the first two notes and the Taiko tone change should be there instead.
7. 02:20:181 (2,1,1,1) - What are these being mapped to?
8. 02:23:631 (1) - And this?
9. 02:24:681 (1) - This too?
10. 02:26:181 (1) - This?
11. 02:27:381 (2) - And this; there are too many 1/4 objects that aren't triples, and are there just for the sake of being there. They don't appear to be justified. I could continue pointing them out, but that would require an unnecessary long post just to point them all out when you should be able to spot the problems yourself. This carries on throughout the second and third Kiai times.
12. 03:53:856 - The 4-note pattern should start at this time instead of 03:54:306 - . Suggested pattern:
    

those wrote:

[Taiko]

1. 00:10:056 (1,2,1,1,1) - Five tones of a major scale, would make little sense using k for your third note. Use ddddk. well~ok
2. 00:12:756 (1) - This should be d, like 00:15:156 (1) - and 00:17:556 (1) - . Done
3. 00:54:306 (3,1,2) - Two claps in the music. Should be kkd. Apply to 00:55:506 (2,1,2) - . ok
4. 01:10:206 (2) - Clap instead of whistle outta nowhere. Best change back to whistle. And 01:25:656 (1) - . lol'd It's make no difference.
5. 02:07:806 (1,2,1) - Triple should not be here at all; considering you have breaks like 02:06:756 - , 02:09:156 - , and 02:11:706 - , it'd be in your best interest to have a break at 02:07:956 - white. Umm... no change because 02:07:806 (1,2,1) - (for KS's part) 02:06:756 - , 02:09:156 - ,02:11:706 - (It's my part)
6. 02:16:506 (2,3,4,1) - dkkk. The first and second notes have an interval of a third, whereas the second, third, and fourth notes share an interval of a second. The jump is between the first two notes and the Taiko tone change should be there instead. I want emphasize the 02:16:956 (1) - so I want to make 02:16:806 (4) - and 02:16:956 (1) - use difference note. so I just keep my pattern
7. 02:20:181 (2,1,1,1) - What are these being mapped to? fix
8. 02:23:631 (1) - And this?fix
9. 02:24:681 (1) - This too?fix
10. 02:26:181 (1) - This? no. I think It's fit for the song.
11. 02:27:381 (2) - And this; there are too many 1/4 objects that aren't triples, and are there just for the sake of being there. They don't appear to be justified. I could continue pointing them out, but that would require an unnecessary long post just to point them all out when you should be able to spot the problems yourself. This carries on throughout the second and third Kiai times.
    you should know this.All Taiko mapper have different style. Don't try to use your style make other people to change. keep my pattern
12. 03:53:856 - The 4-note pattern should start at this time instead of 03:54:306 - . Suggested pattern:
    
    sorry. we follow the drum not the guitar. so I don't want to change this