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Machico - Magical Happy Show!

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Topic Starter
Rotte

lolcubes wrote:

Okay, here's a mod as promised.

[General]
*Your video file is too big and has black bars on top and bottom. 17.5 MB is too much for such a short video. Here is a smaller video file with cropped black bars, use this instead. Fixed

[Insane]
*Use OD7 please (OD+1). Timing is good enough for this to work even on doubletime. Fixed
*01:24:881 (5) - Missing a clap at the start. Fixed
*01:55:700 - Move this timing section to 01:55:752. Completely silencing hit objects is unrankable. Since this is the last object it's fine to have everything but the beginning silenced though. Fixed

[A32]
*Use OD6 please (OD+1). Timing is okay now. Fixed~
00:43:918 (2) - This object is unsnapped. Fixed
*01:07:916 (1,2,3) - This was strange to play. It's a bit unexpected since there is no such a rhythm in the music. I understand that following all of the drumline would make this a bit hard, but can you make this more simple? Like this or something, since that follows the bass guitar. no
*01:11:019 (1) - Finish? Fixed
*01:26:950 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I find this quite overmapped. There is nothing in the music that would warrant streams here. Can you just make it more simple using 1/2 notes? no
*01:55:804 (1) - This is placed on a wrong tick. Fixed

[Hard]
*OD6 please. Fixed
*00:05:849 (6,7) - This is unreadable. There is absolutely no way to guess that first one repeats 3 times and the second one repeats once. Try to make this more simple please. Fixed
*00:19:920 (1,2) - Too big spacing. Quite unexpected. Fixed
*01:33:368 (4,5) - This spacing is a little too big, can you reduce it a little? Fixed
*01:43:613 (5) - It's on a wrong tick. Fixed
*01:50:957 (2) - Unsnapped. Also put a new combo on it for consistency, since you did that in insane? Fixed
*01:55:700 - Just like in the insane, move this timing section a bit further, like this it's unrankable. Fixed

[Normal]
*OD4 please. Fixed
*00:21:575 (3) - Unsnapped. Fixed
*00:39:790 (1) - Unsnapped. Fixed
*01:37:921 (1,1) - This is a little too hard for a normal criteria. There is just not enough pause between the spinner and the next note. I suggest to remove 01:40:612 (1) entirely and just have the rest. Or you can just make it like in your easy diff, ending the spinner at 01:39:784. Fixed
01:50:233 (9) - Don't stack this, it's too hard. Also this is not snapped correctly, it's on a wrong tick. Fixed
01:55:700 - Same thing about the timing section. Fixed

[Easy]
*00:24:065 (2) - Missing a clap. Fixed
*00:56:335 (1) - Unsnapped. Fixed
*00:58:812 (3) - Missing a clap? Fixed
*01:01:295 (2) - I suggest that instead of a repeater you just make a long slider from 01:01:295 to 01:02:123 because like this it sounds bad. i like myself slider :)
*01:13:295 (3) - Missing a clap. Fixed
*01:27:780 (1,2) - Please don't use stacks in easy difficulties unless it's really intuitive (i.e. same tone in the music, or a quick 1/2). These are just 2 regular 1/1 notes, this shouldn't be stacked. Fixed

Be careful how you resnap your objects after a timing change, things can go wrong easily.

thx for modding~~ :)
lolcubes
You didn't fix a lot of things you said you did. ._.

[Timing]
Anyways, I have updated the timing for this map. A small change on some spots which makes the timing better.
Add these red lines to your existing ones:
BPM 145 Offset 43092
BPM 145.125 Offset 62958
BPM 144.95 Offset 71228

This should make the timing a little better. Don't forget to resnap your objects!

[Insane]
  1. Use OD7 please.
  2. 01:55:752 (4) - This slider is placed wrongly. I was placed correctly before. You need to move the timing section, not the slider, to 01:55:752, because if you don't the slider is unrankable because the whole object is silenced.
[A32]
  1. 00:43:918 (2) - This object is still unsnapped. Snap it correctly please.
  2. -[NYAN]- wrote:

    *01:26:950 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I find this quite overmapped. There is nothing in the music that would warrant streams here. Can you just make it more simple using 1/2 notes? no
    "No" is not a good reason. Until you give me a valid reason you want this stream to stay, I will insist on removing it.
[Hard]
  1. 01:55:700 - You didn't fix the timing section, move it to 01:55:752 because currently it makes the slider unrankable.
[Normal]
  1. 01:37:921 (1,1) - This is a little too hard for a normal criteria. There is just not enough pause between the spinner and the next note. End the spinner at 01:39:784 - and add a clap to it. It will be better then.
  2. 01:55:700 - You didn't fix the timing section, move it to 01:55:752 because currently it makes the slider unrankable.
[Easy]
  1. 00:58:812 (3) - This clap should be at the end I believe, not the start. Try that.
Here. It is very important to correctly resnap the objects once you change timing, so keep an eye out for that.
Topic Starter
Rotte

lolcubes wrote:

You didn't fix a lot of things you said you did. ._.

[Timing]
Anyways, I have updated the timing for this map. A small change on some spots which makes the timing better.
Add these red lines to your existing ones:
BPM 145 Offset 43092
BPM 145.125 Offset 62958
BPM 144.95 Offset 71228

This should make the timing a little better. Don't forget to resnap your objects!

[Insane]
  1. Use OD7 please.
  2. 01:55:752 (4) - This slider is placed wrongly. I was placed correctly before. You need to move the timing section, not the slider, to 01:55:752, because if you don't the slider is unrankable because the whole object is silenced.
[Hard]
  1. 01:55:700 - You didn't fix the timing section, move it to 01:55:752 because currently it makes the slider unrankable.
[Normal]
  1. 01:37:921 (1,1) - This is a little too hard for a normal criteria. There is just not enough pause between the spinner and the next note. End the spinner at 01:39:784 - and add a clap to it. It will be better then.
  2. 01:55:700 - You didn't fix the timing section, move it to 01:55:752 because currently it makes the slider unrankable.
[Easy]
  1. 00:58:812 (3) - This clap should be at the end I believe, not the start. Try that.
Here. It is very important to correctly resnap the objects once you change timing, so keep an eye out for that.

fixed this problem in quote

[A32]
  1. 00:43:918 (2) - This object is still unsnapped. Snap it correctly please.
  2. -[NYAN]- wrote:

    *01:26:950 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I find this quite overmapped. There is nothing in the music that would warrant streams here. Can you just make it more simple using 1/2 notes? no
    "No" is not a good reason. Until you give me a valid reason you want this stream to stay, I will insist on removing it.
delete this note 01:27:061 (4) -
Steph De Chine
From my Modding queue
好吧……先拜拜前面的神Mod们……我没有找到那么多问题……没问题么?
General
{全是Suggestion...没啥问题}
Easy
00:05:021 (3) - 这个的方向有些奇怪…… ^H一下?
00:19:918 00:23:238 00:26:549 - 这些地方不加个circle把前面那段和后面那段接起来?
00:52:612 - 这个"i"还是加个circle比较好吧……
01:05:847 - 既然前面那里都加了circle,后面这里没道理不加的吧?
01:10:398 (2,1) - 这里突然来overlay了……或许把2改成圈圈?或者把2和1连起来成长滑条,然后用红点来打拍子?
01:50:130 (3) - 这里也是用红点打拍子会好些吧……

Normal
和Easy一样,00:19:918 00:23:238 00:26:549 - 这些地方不加个circle把前面那段和后面那段接起来?
01:55:700 (4) - 这个如果改成circle会不会让人觉得歌突然停下来?

别的都很不错……
Insane:
01:55:752 (4) - 这个收尾似乎比A32渣了些啊……没有Insane之风,差评
Topic Starter
Rotte

Steph De Chine wrote:

From my Modding queue
好吧……先拜拜前面的神Mod们……我没有找到那么多问题……没问题么?
General
{全是Suggestion...没啥问题}
Easy
00:05:021 (3) - 这个的方向有些奇怪…… ^H一下?
00:19:918 00:23:238 00:26:549 - 这些地方不加个circle把前面那段和后面那段接起来?
00:52:612 - 这个"i"还是加个circle比较好吧……
01:05:847 - 既然前面那里都加了circle,后面这里没道理不加的吧?
01:10:398 (2,1) - 这里突然来overlay了……或许把2改成圈圈?或者把2和1连起来成长滑条,然后用红点来打拍子?
01:50:130 (3) - 这里也是用红点打拍子会好些吧……

Normal
和Easy一样,00:19:918 00:23:238 00:26:549 - 这些地方不加个circle把前面那段和后面那段接起来?
01:55:700 (4) - 这个如果改成circle会不会让人觉得歌突然停下来?

别的都很不错……
Insane:
01:55:752 (4) - 这个收尾似乎比A32渣了些啊……没有Insane之风,差评
都没修改

嘛嘛,你没有update,继续加油
a32
http://puu.sh/1rVlB
Here's the snapped version (if sth goes wrong just tell me since my AIBat has broken orz
Topic Starter
Rotte
i have been moded all snap,please check now
wcx19911123
lolicube call me recheck this o.o

[General]
red timing sections are not the same in all diffs, and there're tons of unsnapped objects in every diff.. this need to be fixed

[Easy]
00:06:676 (1,2,3) - 这种简单的E里面3/2的节奏最好一开始用slider,之后的相同节奏可以用circle,不然新人可能读不出
00:09:987 (1,2,3) - ^,这只是今后的建议,这图没必要改了
00:28:204 (3) - 这里ctrl+g可以有更好的flow,这也是今后的建议
00:31:514 (3) - 这种slider的四个锚点可以弄成接近Z字型,会好看点,今后建议
00:43:092 - 这里音量怎么突然小了好多。。很违和
01:50:543 - 感觉slider停在这好点
01:55:804 - 这地方真心不应该静音。。

[Normal]
00:43:092 - 这里音量同E,顺带就算减速了最好还是让1跟2之间的spacing跟之前的保持一致,不然会confusing
01:06:265 (1,3) - 这两个可以考虑换成3/4,好听点感觉
01:55:804 - 同E

[Hard]
00:43:092 - 还是音量问题
01:55:804 - 同E

[A32]
00:51:781 - slider停在这里感觉好点
01:55:700 (1) - 这非常的不科学,毛毛虫slider一般是用来告诉别人这里是减速的,这里居然还加速。。

[Insane]
HD+1
00:43:092 - 音量同E
01:02:958 - 这里怎么音量反而变小了。。

槽点蛮多的0.0..
改好了再叫我吧0.0
Topic Starter
Rotte

wcx19911123 wrote:

lolicube call me recheck this o.o

[General]
red timing sections are not the same in all diffs, and there're tons of unsnapped objects in every diff.. this need to be fixed

[Easy]
00:06:676 (1,2,3) - 这种简单的E里面3/2的节奏最好一开始用slider,之后的相同节奏可以用circle,不然新人可能读不出 呼应00:09:987
00:09:987 (1,2,3) - ^,这只是今后的建议,这图没必要改了 同上
00:28:204 (3) - 这里ctrl+g可以有更好的flow,这也是今后的建议 改了,知道了
00:31:514 (3) - 这种slider的四个锚点可以弄成接近Z字型,会好看点,今后建议 记住了
00:43:092 - 这里音量怎么突然小了好多。。很违和 改了
01:50:543 - 感觉slider停在这好点 改了
01:55:804 - 这地方真心不应该静音。。 嗯,好

[Normal]
00:43:092 - 这里音量同E,顺带就算减速了最好还是让1跟2之间的spacing跟之前的保持一致,不然会confusing
01:06:265 (1,3) - 这两个可以考虑换成3/4,好听点感觉 好的
01:55:804 - 同E 同E

[Hard]
00:43:092 - 还是音量问题 弄了
01:55:804 - 同E 同E


[A32]
00:51:781 - slider停在这里感觉好点 改了
01:55:700 (1) - 这非常的不科学,毛毛虫slider一般是用来告诉别人这里是减速的,这里居然还加速。。 32故意的,为了符合音效

[Insane]
HD+1
00:43:092 - 音量同E
01:02:958 - 这里怎么音量反而变小了。。 .......我错了

槽点蛮多的0.0..
改好了再叫我吧0.0


对了,换了音源,cx再看看吧
I changed this mp3 ,please recheck it
wcx19911123
recheck
NO KD PLZ

[General]
offset=1935(-8)更准点

[Easy]
00:32:149 (1) - 改了之前的slider之后这spacing不对,这个可以放到 x:312 y:76,以后改pattern的话要留意下spacing
01:11:253 - finish?
01:52:011 (3,1) - wrong spacing?

[Normal]
01:04:839 - 这里音量还是好小0.0

[Hard]
00:44:563 - 这里音量也小0.0
00:44:977 - 这里的话倒是可以再小一点,-20%的样子
01:57:598 (1) - 这个可以放到x:180 y:172
Topic Starter
Rotte

wcx19911123 wrote:

recheck
NO KD PLZ

[General]
offset=1935(-8)更准点

[Easy]
00:32:149 (1) - 改了之前的slider之后这spacing不对,这个可以放到 x:312 y:76,以后改pattern的话要留意下spacing
01:11:253 - finish?
01:52:011 (3,1) - wrong spacing?

[Normal]
01:04:839 - 这里音量还是好小0.0

[Hard]
00:44:563 - 这里音量也小0.0
00:44:977 - 这里的话倒是可以再小一点,-20%的样子
01:57:598 (1) - 这个可以放到x:180 y:172

以上全部修改~ :) easy的 00:32:149 由于不可抗因素稍稍有点改动
wcx19911123
rebubbled
Topic Starter
Rotte

wcx19911123 wrote:

rebubbled
thx~~~ =3=
lolcubes
Hi. I see you have a new mp3 which only needs one red line, nice!

[Insane]
01:57:590 timing section - Move this to 01:57:693. As it is now it is unrankable because slider heads are not allowed to be silenced.

[A32]
01:57:590 (1) - This should end at 01:58:003. Also move the timing section to 01:58:003 as well.

[Hard]
00:22:624 (1) - Clap at the end?
01:29:245 (4,1,2) - These jumps are too sudden. Try moving (4) to x176 y128 and (1) to x296 y144.
01:37:935 (5) - New combo please.
01:39:590 (1) - Clap?
01:42:486 (2) - Clap?

[Normal]
00:44:969 - Use 40% volume please, so this part is similar to other diffs. 70% is way too loud.

[Easy]
00:54:900 (4) - New combo please.
01:40:003 (1) - End this at 01:41:659 please. It is too hard for [Easy] if you leave it like this. Also add clap?
01:42:486 (1,2) - Unstack these please. Stacks like this are a bit hard for [Easy].

I should be able to rank this after you apply these fixes.
:D
Topic Starter
Rotte
I fixed some problem

but insane and A32 i don't think I need to mod

lolcubes wrote:

Hi. I see you have a new mp3 which only needs one red line, nice!

[Insane]
01:57:590 timing section - Move this to 01:57:693. As it is now it is unrankable because slider heads are not allowed to be silenced.

[A32]
01:57:590 (1) - This should end at 01:58:003. Also move the timing section to 01:58:003 as well.

because in 01:57:590 - ,this music have 2 audio track ,I choosed not have BASS's sound.
BASS's sound start at 01:57:693,but main music start at 01:57:590 - .
Could you please listen this music again?


:D
lolcubes
Insane has a problem of a silenced object. This is unrankable. This needs changing no matter what. (check your Hard diff, you did a good thing there, that is how insane should have it mapped, meaning that you don't have 5% volume at the start of the slider)

Both sliders start correctly, but in A32 diff it is too long. This is arguable however the slider tick is located at 01:58:003 and this sounds bad as well (and since it's faster you can get a slider break if you miss the tick). It also suggests that the slider is not snapped correctly.

I'm sorry but you have to change those.
Topic Starter
Rotte
Sorry,I english is not well...

Insane i fixed it

But a32 diff I only fixed length ,if have any problem ,please raise it ,I'll mod it,thank you :)
lolcubes

-[NYAN]- wrote:

Insane i fixed it

But a32 diff I only fixed length ,if have any problem ,please raise it ,I'll mod it,thank you
Yes, that's what I was asking. :)

[Hard]
01:29:452 (1,2) - New combo on 2, remove new combo from 1.

Sorry I missed this.^^

I will rank once you fix this.
Topic Starter
Rotte
ok~fixed
lolcubes
Great.

Congratulations on your first RANKED mapset then.

Have fun.
Topic Starter
Rotte
thank you very much!!! :)
Athena Tennos
lol!!!恭喜1st rank!!!~
Suimya
Gratz on your first rank :3
Scorpiour
finally~ congrats
Topic Starter
Rotte
thx very much~~

=3=
:)
Xinely
gratz for the rank nyan :3
wantuole
恭喜rank :)
kanpakyin
恭喜了
Zero__wind
Oh congratz~!
for the very 1st ranked one ^_^
Nymph
又rank差评差评
BeatofIke
First Rank Congrats :3
You are now an official mapper.
Loneight
恭喜囉 :3
Citrus
哇~恭喜rank~
Topic Starter
Rotte
thx everyone :)
x847606653
终于来了。。。。恭喜
Charles445
This is from a visual novel, right?
I'm not sure what to set for the Genre.
raririn
恭喜!
Flask
\小貓/
lkx_Shore
恭喜,努力终有回报
DarknessAngel
恭喜 !
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