Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

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[Easy]
00:10:607 (2) - 1 grid down then 00:09:987 (1,2) line up. fixed
00:13:297 - hmm? Try add finish here? fixed
00:46:400 (1) - The arcuations are a bit sharp, make them smooth! fixed
01:11:021 (3) - Add finish at the beginning. fixed
01:29:642 - Why so empty? Map here :< (at least end this part at 01:30:262) fixed
01:32:745 (3) - :< vocal



[Normal]
01:02:952 - Add finish here because of the downbeat. fixed
01:09:159 (6) - Remove this note,it makes no sense imo. in order to read maps easyly
01:49:711 (8) - Why clap here? Remove this plz /.\
01:50:124 (9) - Why not add a 3/4 slider with a return? fixed,but it's a syncopation
01:56:124 - Remove finish fixed


[Hard]
00:02:952 (7) - A single circle is enough i prefer myself style
00:32:745 (7,1) - 00:32:745 (7,1) - Change them into a slider fixed
00:42:676 (1) - Lower the volume fixed
01:53:435 (3) -

88,136,113435,2,0,B|88:168|112:200,1,70

fixed



[Insane]
00:29:435 (2) - Make this slider not touch 00:28:814 (5,6,7) fixed
00:38:745 (1) - Try ctrl+G? fixed
01:32:745 (6) - Newcombo fixed


[A32] Waiting a32 mod it..
00:04:607 (2) - Spacing?
00:33:366 (1) - ^
01:35:228 (2) - ^
01:33:159 (6) - Newcombo
01:55:711 (5) - Should be end at 01:56:124
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Wonderful Mapset
:3 GL

Nymph wrote:

A32：
00:04:607 (2) - 这个其实很像jump梗啊 作为正常spacing的话 我建议挪更远一点好
01:30:573 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这真的不建议减音量啊 很没打击感 fixed
01:55:711 (5) - 起码加个newcombo提示一下fixed

Flower wrote:

[a32]
rrt认证的神mapper我不太敢mod……
00:04:607 (2) - 其实呢我是觉得这里按照DS来比较舒服 我打了好几次都手滑了fixed
00:06:676 (1,2) - body加了whistle 滑条头却不加有点不爽感觉还好0.0
00:19:711 (8) - 形状ok
00:20:331 (9) - 单独+NC来强调（合唱？）ok
00:40:193 (2,3,4,5) - 一个是最好按Ctrl+D重摆一遍 另一个是 00:40:814 (3) - 可以和 00:42:056 (2) - stackstack做了...Ctrl+D没必要吧
00:42:676 (3) - 同样建议NCok
01:30:056 (2) - drum是01:30:262 开始的 所以在这里很容易搞错 建议就让连打从01:30:262 开始现在这个还好吧...连打太长不太好0.0
01:46:814 (5) - NCok

Snowy Dream wrote:

[A32]
00:04:607 (2) - Spacing?fixed
00:33:366 (1) - ^这个还好吧..
01:35:228 (2) - ^fixed
01:33:159 (6) - Newcombook
01:55:711 (5) - Should be end at 01:56:124 fixed!

Dark Fang wrote:

Hi

[Easy]

00:09:987 (1) - 1 grid right with others? i think it's no fit
00:34:814 (3) - Ctrl + G and adjust next notes? or change rhythm that is 1 slider and 1 circlei think former map is good
00:43:090 (1) - 1 grid down ok fixed
00:50:952 (2) - 1 grid down with (3) ? ok fixed
01:07:918 (3) - move to (208,128) ok fixed
01:19:090 (2) - move to (456,128) ok fixed
01:21:158 (1) - Ctrl + H with others and adjust next note previous queue is good

[Normal]

why don't you use Circle Size 3? c4 is well
00:01:297 (2) - 1 grid down ok fixed
00:09:987 (4) - add Whistle? ok fixed
00:10:607 (6) - ^ ok fixed
00:43:090 - this interval's sound is too low. can you use soft 50% instead normal? ok fixed
00:43:090 (1) - add Clap at end of slider previous queue is good
00:49:711 (1) - ^ previous queue is good
00:57:573 (2) - ~ keep DS ok fixed
01:47:642 - add Whistle follow music? previous sound effect is well

[Hard]

00:16:607 (1) - add Whistle at end of slider? ok fixed
00:19:711 (8) - remove Whistle not fit
00:20:124 (2) - add Whistle at end of slider ok fixed
00:21:573 (3) - 1 grid up with others not good at all
00:26:538 (9) - add Whistle at end of slider ok fixed
00:29:435 (7) - ^ ok fixed
00:33:573 (4) - Whistle ok fixed
00:40:400 (2) - why don't you use 1/2 3 hit repeat slider and 1 circle? ok fixed
00:43:090 - same as Normal diff ok fixed
01:35:642 (4) - keep DS ok fixed
01:40:193 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't overlap. That's not good it too difficult? i don't think it
01:52:193 (5) - try make bending with (3) i think it no need?

[A12] [A32] plz = =b waitting a32 mod it...

00:33:573 (2) - keep DS
00:36:883 (1) - ^ too far
01:36:056 (1) - last point of slider move to (336,304) ?
01:36:883 (2) - try make like above?
01:38:538 (2) - spacing this note?
01:45:780 (4) - NC here?

[Insane]

00:07:918 (3,4) - use 1/2 sliders. now is so awkward for play. no change,if use 1/2,the effect its not well...
00:11:228 (1,2) - ^ no change,if use 1/2,the effect its not well...
01:03:573 (2,3) - ._. ee... try make like this ? ok~ thank you
01:12:469 (2) - RNC and add Clap at start of slider thanks a lot
01:39:987 (3) - RNC thanks a lot
01:44:952 (3,4) - Ctrl + G maybe it's a good choice


Have a nice day

EDIT : too late? not late,thx

Dark Fang wrote:

[A32]

00:33:573 (2) - keep DSfixed a bit
00:36:883 (1) - ^ too farit's fine imo~
01:36:056 (1) - last point of slider move to (336,304) ?ok~
01:36:883 (2) - try make like above?ok
01:38:538 (2) - spacing this note?no;_;
01:45:780 (4) - NC here?fixed~

Charles445 wrote:

Something's off about the timing. It sounds like it resets the offset a lot.

I tried timing it and got these values.

BPM 145.000 --- Offset 46
BPM 145.000 --- Offset 13297
BPM 145.000 --- Offset 56326

You should check out that timing and ask others for their opinions. Not popping because I'm not sure if the timing I put is correct or not.

lolcubes wrote:

Hi.

I have actually checked timing and I came up with this:
Offset: 56ms BPM: 145,00
Offset: 16.607ms BPM: 144,95
Offset: 19.920ms BPM: 144,95
Offset: 21.572ms BPM: 144,00
Offset: 23.238ms BPM: 144,95
Offset: 26.549ms BPM: 144,90
Offset: 28.204ms BPM: 145,00
Offset: 39.787ms BPM: 145,025
Offset: 56.330ms BPM: 145,00
Offset: 87.780ms BPM: 144,95
Offset: 104.337ms BPM: 145,00
Offset: 110.942ms BPM: 145,00

I have set OD10 to your insane diff and played it from start to finish, and only had 1% mistimed hits (3 of the 100s and the miss is on purpose):

SPOILER

You can view timing in the new saved difficulty I made from your insane diff here: http://puu.sh/1lFF8

I might throw a mod today/tomorrow as well, so give me one day.
I will pop this because your timing is definitely wrong.

lolcubes wrote:

Okay, here's a mod as promised.

[General]
*Your video file is too big and has black bars on top and bottom. 17.5 MB is too much for such a short video. Here is a smaller video file with cropped black bars, use this instead. Fixed

[Insane]
*Use OD7 please (OD+1). Timing is good enough for this to work even on doubletime. Fixed
*01:24:881 (5) - Missing a clap at the start. Fixed
*01:55:700 - Move this timing section to 01:55:752. Completely silencing hit objects is unrankable. Since this is the last object it's fine to have everything but the beginning silenced though. Fixed

[A32]
*Use OD6 please (OD+1). Timing is okay now. Fixed~
00:43:918 (2) - This object is unsnapped. Fixed
*01:07:916 (1,2,3) - This was strange to play. It's a bit unexpected since there is no such a rhythm in the music. I understand that following all of the drumline would make this a bit hard, but can you make this more simple? Like this or something, since that follows the bass guitar. no
*01:11:019 (1) - Finish? Fixed
*01:26:950 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I find this quite overmapped. There is nothing in the music that would warrant streams here. Can you just make it more simple using 1/2 notes? no
*01:55:804 (1) - This is placed on a wrong tick. Fixed

[Hard]
*OD6 please. Fixed
*00:05:849 (6,7) - This is unreadable. There is absolutely no way to guess that first one repeats 3 times and the second one repeats once. Try to make this more simple please. Fixed
*00:19:920 (1,2) - Too big spacing. Quite unexpected. Fixed
*01:33:368 (4,5) - This spacing is a little too big, can you reduce it a little? Fixed
*01:43:613 (5) - It's on a wrong tick. Fixed
*01:50:957 (2) - Unsnapped. Also put a new combo on it for consistency, since you did that in insane? Fixed
*01:55:700 - Just like in the insane, move this timing section a bit further, like this it's unrankable. Fixed

[Normal]
*OD4 please. Fixed
*00:21:575 (3) - Unsnapped. Fixed
*00:39:790 (1) - Unsnapped. Fixed
*01:37:921 (1,1) - This is a little too hard for a normal criteria. There is just not enough pause between the spinner and the next note. I suggest to remove 01:40:612 (1) entirely and just have the rest. Or you can just make it like in your easy diff, ending the spinner at 01:39:784. Fixed
01:50:233 (9) - Don't stack this, it's too hard. Also this is not snapped correctly, it's on a wrong tick. Fixed
01:55:700 - Same thing about the timing section. Fixed

[Easy]
*00:24:065 (2) - Missing a clap. Fixed
*00:56:335 (1) - Unsnapped. Fixed
*00:58:812 (3) - Missing a clap? Fixed
*01:01:295 (2) - I suggest that instead of a repeater you just make a long slider from 01:01:295 to 01:02:123 because like this it sounds bad. i like myself slider
*01:13:295 (3) - Missing a clap. Fixed
*01:27:780 (1,2) - Please don't use stacks in easy difficulties unless it's really intuitive (i.e. same tone in the music, or a quick 1/2). These are just 2 regular 1/1 notes, this shouldn't be stacked. Fixed

Be careful how you resnap your objects after a timing change, things can go wrong easily.

1. Use OD7 please.
2. 01:55:752 (4) - This slider is placed wrongly. I was placed correctly before. You need to move the timing section, not the slider, to 01:55:752, because if you don't the slider is unrankable because the whole object is silenced.

1. 00:43:918 (2) - This object is still unsnapped. Snap it correctly please.

2. -[NYAN]- wrote:

   *01:26:950 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I find this quite overmapped. There is nothing in the music that would warrant streams here. Can you just make it more simple using 1/2 notes? no

   "No" is not a good reason. Until you give me a valid reason you want this stream to stay, I will insist on removing it.

1. 01:55:700 - You didn't fix the timing section, move it to 01:55:752 because currently it makes the slider unrankable.

1. 01:37:921 (1,1) - This is a little too hard for a normal criteria. There is just not enough pause between the spinner and the next note. End the spinner at 01:39:784 - and add a clap to it. It will be better then.
2. 01:55:700 - You didn't fix the timing section, move it to 01:55:752 because currently it makes the slider unrankable.

1. 00:58:812 (3) - This clap should be at the end I believe, not the start. Try that.

lolcubes wrote:

You didn't fix a lot of things you said you did. ._.

[Timing]
Anyways, I have updated the timing for this map. A small change on some spots which makes the timing better.
Add these red lines to your existing ones:
BPM 145 Offset 43092
BPM 145.125 Offset 62958
BPM 144.95 Offset 71228

This should make the timing a little better. Don't forget to resnap your objects!

[Insane]

1. Use OD7 please.
2. 01:55:752 (4) - This slider is placed wrongly. I was placed correctly before. You need to move the timing section, not the slider, to 01:55:752, because if you don't the slider is unrankable because the whole object is silenced.

[Hard]

1. 01:55:700 - You didn't fix the timing section, move it to 01:55:752 because currently it makes the slider unrankable.

[Normal]

1. 01:37:921 (1,1) - This is a little too hard for a normal criteria. There is just not enough pause between the spinner and the next note. End the spinner at 01:39:784 - and add a clap to it. It will be better then.
2. 01:55:700 - You didn't fix the timing section, move it to 01:55:752 because currently it makes the slider unrankable.

[Easy]

1. 00:58:812 (3) - This clap should be at the end I believe, not the start. Try that.

Here. It is very important to correctly resnap the objects once you change timing, so keep an eye out for that.

[A32]

1. 00:43:918 (2) - This object is still unsnapped. Snap it correctly please.

2. -[NYAN]- wrote:

   *01:26:950 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I find this quite overmapped. There is nothing in the music that would warrant streams here. Can you just make it more simple using 1/2 notes? no

   "No" is not a good reason. Until you give me a valid reason you want this stream to stay, I will insist on removing it.

delete this note 01:27:061 (4) -

Steph De Chine wrote:

From my Modding queue
好吧……先拜拜前面的神Mod们……我没有找到那么多问题……没问题么？
General
{全是Suggestion...没啥问题}
Easy
00:05:021 (3) - 这个的方向有些奇怪…… ^H一下？
00:19:918 00:23:238 00:26:549 - 这些地方不加个circle把前面那段和后面那段接起来？
00:52:612 - 这个"i"还是加个circle比较好吧……
01:05:847 - 既然前面那里都加了circle，后面这里没道理不加的吧？
01:10:398 (2,1) - 这里突然来overlay了……或许把2改成圈圈？或者把2和1连起来成长滑条，然后用红点来打拍子？
01:50:130 (3) - 这里也是用红点打拍子会好些吧……

Normal
和Easy一样，00:19:918 00:23:238 00:26:549 - 这些地方不加个circle把前面那段和后面那段接起来？
01:55:700 (4) - 这个如果改成circle会不会让人觉得歌突然停下来？

别的都很不错……
Insane:
01:55:752 (4) - 这个收尾似乎比A32渣了些啊……没有Insane之风，差评

wcx19911123 wrote:

lolicube call me recheck this o.o

[General]
red timing sections are not the same in all diffs, and there're tons of unsnapped objects in every diff.. this need to be fixed

[Easy]
00:06:676 (1,2,3) - 这种简单的E里面3/2的节奏最好一开始用slider，之后的相同节奏可以用circle，不然新人可能读不出 呼应00:09:987
00:09:987 (1,2,3) - ^，这只是今后的建议，这图没必要改了 同上
00:28:204 (3) - 这里ctrl+g可以有更好的flow，这也是今后的建议 改了，知道了
00:31:514 (3) - 这种slider的四个锚点可以弄成接近Z字型，会好看点，今后建议 记住了
00:43:092 - 这里音量怎么突然小了好多。。很违和 改了
01:50:543 - 感觉slider停在这好点 改了
01:55:804 - 这地方真心不应该静音。。 嗯，好

[Normal]
00:43:092 - 这里音量同E，顺带就算减速了最好还是让1跟2之间的spacing跟之前的保持一致，不然会confusing 好
01:06:265 (1,3) - 这两个可以考虑换成3/4，好听点感觉 好的
01:55:804 - 同E 同E

[Hard]
00:43:092 - 还是音量问题 弄了
01:55:804 - 同E 同E


[A32]
00:51:781 - slider停在这里感觉好点 改了
01:55:700 (1) - 这非常的不科学，毛毛虫slider一般是用来告诉别人这里是减速的，这里居然还加速。。 32故意的，为了符合音效

[Insane]
HD+1
00:43:092 - 音量同E 好
01:02:958 - 这里怎么音量反而变小了。。 .......我错了

槽点蛮多的0.0..
改好了再叫我吧0.0

wcx19911123 wrote:

recheck
NO KD PLZ

[General]
offset=1935(-8)更准点

[Easy]
00:32:149 (1) - 改了之前的slider之后这spacing不对，这个可以放到 x:312 y:76，以后改pattern的话要留意下spacing
01:11:253 - finish?
01:52:011 (3,1) - wrong spacing?

[Normal]
01:04:839 - 这里音量还是好小0.0

[Hard]
00:44:563 - 这里音量也小0.0
00:44:977 - 这里的话倒是可以再小一点，-20%的样子
01:57:598 (1) - 这个可以放到x:180 y:172

以上全部修改~ easy的 00:32:149 由于不可抗因素稍稍有点改动

wcx19911123 wrote:

rebubbled

lolcubes wrote:

Hi. I see you have a new mp3 which only needs one red line, nice!

[Insane]
01:57:590 timing section - Move this to 01:57:693. As it is now it is unrankable because slider heads are not allowed to be silenced.

[A32]
01:57:590 (1) - This should end at 01:58:003. Also move the timing section to 01:58:003 as well.

-[NYAN]- wrote:

Insane i fixed it

But a32 diff I only fixed length ,if have any problem ,please raise it ,I'll mod it,thank you