Hi there~~~ mod from queue~
red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - just suggestions
[Genera]
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red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - just suggestions
[Genera]
- Please use .jpg but not .png file as background to reduce your folder size. A 800x600 image with 1.83MB is horrible
- add Op and Opening to tags?
- 00:03:366 (4) - add a NC here?
- 00:04:193 (5) - add a clap at end to make your beat consistent?
- 00:12:469 (4) - ^, add at repeat?
- 00:23:228 (1) - i suppose it could be removed since you choose to leave a blank at 00:19:918 - .
- 00:23:642 (2) - add a clap. And also add a NC here if you accept my suggestion above.
- 00:30:262 (1) - clap?
- 00:33:573 (1) - ^
- 00:36:883 (2) - ^
- 00:36:469 (1,2) - same as 00:23:228
- 00:39:780 (6) - NC here, your combo is too long. Avoid to make your combo longer than 6 in E/N diffs.
- 00:42:676 (9) - remove clap here or add a clap at the end of 00:40:193 (7) - , up to u ... hmm. i may choose to remove :>
- 00:45:987 - i'd like to add a note here for vocal
- 00:48:883 (2) - remove clap? maybe not very suitable imo
- 00:52:607 - ^
- 00:58:814 (3,4) - move clap to (3)'s end
- 01:10:400 (2) - describe here with chinese because it's not unrankable and technically it is fine, and also easier for mapper to understand:
从技术上来说这里的节奏和排列没有任何问题。但是:Kiai的开头是整个乐曲的高潮进入点,当你把这里放在Slider中间的时候就,本来应该在进入高潮瞬间的一个爆发感一下子被严重的削弱了,换句话说,本来应该充满张力的地方变成了软绵绵的了。虽然这只是个Easy diff,但我依然建议把节奏做成这样: - 01:16:607 (3) - missing clap
- 01:19:090 (2) - ^
- 01:20:745 - add a note with clap for consistent beat & hitsounds
- 01:24:056 - ^
- 01:25:711 (2) - missing clap
- 01:27:780 (4) - recommend a NC here
- 01:29:849 (7) - missing clap at end
- 01:35:228 (2) - ^
- 01:37:918 - i think it's a good place to add a spinner.
- 01:43:918 (5) - add a clap?
- 01:48:883 (1) - note very sure if the NC here is designed or not.
- 01:52:193 (2) - add a clap
- 00:24:883 (3,4) - (nazi) blanket them well?
- 00:28:193 (3) - missing clap at end
- 00:48:883 (4) - move clap to head for consistent hidsounds. Actually, i suppose the volumn in this section (between 00:43:090 - and 00:54:676 -) should be reduced by approx 15% . Another choice is use normal-hitnormal as soft claps - add some inherited timing points or note specific sample ( placed top-left in editor)
- 01:05:435 (4) - add a clap for you have a clap at 01:03:780 (2) -
- 01:13:504 (4) - missing clap at end
- 01:37:814 - also recommend a spinner, same as easy
- 01:42:676 (4) - missing clap at end
- 01:47:228 - i suppose the spinner could be stopped at here~
- 01:55:504 (3) - a weird clap... remove it?
- 00:07:918 (3) - the clap here is not heard well, suggest a whistle :>
- 00:29:435 (7) - missing claps at both head & end
- 00:31:090 (2) - missing clap at head
- 00:37:090 - i'd like to add a note here for transition
- 00:43:090 - same as Normal, soft clap maybe not a good choice for this part, or at least reduce volumn here by approx 15%
- 01:02:331 (6,7) - ctrl+g for better flow?
- 01:06:056 - recommend to add a note here
- 01:11:021 (3) - move next NC to here for entering kiai
- 01:31:711 - i may choose to add note here
- 01:32:538 - ^ if you accept above one
- 01:42:056 - also suggest to add a note :>
- 01:48:883 (5,6,7,8) - i suppose the claps here is not fit
- 00:09:987 (3,4,5) - here, the beat is technically correct but the sense is not so good as 00:06:676 (1,2) -
- 00:19:711 (8) - adjust the shape?
272,284,19711,2,0,B|264:340|212:364|157:336,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
- 00:33:366 (1) - i recommend to move it to prev white tick.
- 00:43:090 - same as other diffs, use normal-hitnormal as soft-clap is better than default soft imo, till 00:54:676 - , or you can also reduce the volumn by approx 15%
- 00:49:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - heard weird a bit, i may choose to remove (1,2) then start stream at 00:49:297 -
- 00:51:159 - add a note here?
- 01:50:124 (9) - bad shape, try this?
- 01:55:711 (5) - suggest a NC here to warning the SV change
- 00:02:745 (4,5) - i think place the slider first and then note could make better beat:
- 00:07:918 (3) - hmm .. a whistle here is better than clap imo
- 00:11:228 (1) - ^
- 00:17:435 (5,6) - this kinda stack is not recommended because it will break your flow. i'd rather to apply a ctrl+g for (4,5) than select current style. like this:
- move (4) to 256:80
- ctrl+g to (5)
- 00:20:745 (6,7) - ctrl+g separately for better flow?
- 00:30:469 - add a note for consistent beat~
- 00:33:780 - ^
- 01:03:366 (2) - i don't know why but it's heard weird~ so suggest to remove clap
- 01:24:056 (1) - i'm worry about this jmp a bit.. 212:216 may be better? tell the truth i can't agree with a triplet followed by huge note jump immediately except some special cases..
- 01:36:883 (2) - how about move it to 336:180?
- 01:45:159 (4,1) - suggest to remove claps
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