kajiyatta wrote:

hi M4M can?
General
Easy
Placement
00:26:952(1,2) make beautiful? ok

SPOILER

00:32:745(4) suddun jump? you shouldn't change spacing in Easy for newbie if you don't special reason. ok
01:17:849(1)^ ok
00:39;780(1,2) maybe this? ok

SPOILER

Hit Sonud ok
01:24:649(1) add finish at head? not apply

Normal
Placement
00:44:745(3,4,1) maybe this? ok

SPOILER

00:50:952(2) not overlapped better. try to replace. ok
Hit Sonud ok
01:11:021(1) add finish at head? ok
01:24:469(1)^ ok

Hard
Placement
00:33:159(1) I don't like this jump because it doesn't fit to music. ok
01:06:883(2,3,4,5) a bit weird for me. so maybe this? ok

SPOILER

01:30:676(1,2) swap NC? ok
Rythem
01:50:538(3) delete this note? I suppose it isn't much better. ok
Hit Sonud
01:05:849(7) delete whistle? ok

A32 Wait A32 modding
Placement
00:31:504(7,8) maybe this?

SPOILER

00:59:021(9,1) try this?

SPOILER

Rythem
00:50:952 add a note? I can hear vocal.

Insane
Placement
00:05:021(1) it's overlapped with HP bar. replace better. ok
Rythem
01:50:538(2) delete this note? I suppose it isn't much better. ok

ok nice diff. good Luck with Rank and star!

wantuole wrote:

[A32]
32姥爷神麻婆
tick-1？减速slider那么多白点好难看 像这个00:54:676 (2)嘛...这个再看几个人意见吧
00:25:504 (7,8) - 从上向下或者横着 ，下往上完全无视了前面的slider，或者把00:25:504 (7,8,9) 这三个全部抬高点太高了点ww
01:17:435 (3,4,5,6) - ^，没啥主意去改,堆叠效果更差咱也不知道怎么改orz
01:55:711 (5) - 听节奏确实是降音的快速slider，但是堆叠那么多红点给人一种很慢的错觉 打起来还好吧...这个得再等几个人意见

32老爷别偷懒了 快把最炫名族风rank了，去拯救华语歌坛最近忙了> >

kajiyatta wrote:

A32
Placement
00:31:504(7,8) maybe this?seems nice~

SPOILER

00:59:021(9,1) try this?ok~

SPOILER

Rythem
00:50:952 add a note? I can hear vocal.fixed~

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
Slider Tick Rate 1 plz. It sounds awful in the 2/3 parts now.


[Easy]
00:11:228 (1) - add a note here and start the spinner later? fixed
00:36:883 (1,2) - better to change a direction, simply looks not good. fixed
00:41:435 (2,3,1) - i suggest do not change spacing during such patterns (espically when it's not even obvious). The note here looks quite ugly due to the inconsistent spacing, i know you turn the distance snap on, try to forget it when you arrange such patterns. fixed
01:50:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - just use a spinner here? the beats you used can't really express the feeling of music (for example 01:50:124 (1,2,3) - 2/3 here) only removed note 1&2

[Normal]
00:51:366 (3,4) - using ctrl+V/ ctrl+H/J to make the symmetry better fixed
01:13:504 (4) - end 1/2 earlier. fixed
01:50:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as Easy] only removed note 1&2

[Hard]
00:00:883 (2) - use whistles as a set or don't use at all. For example add whistle at 00:01:711 (5,6) - 's beginning, or just remove this fixed
00:16:814 (2) - 1/4s like this sounds not good to me, as i could see you used some like this and some just 1/1 like 00:29:435 (7,1) - i'd prefer 1/1 fixed
01:50:124 (1) - should be 2/3 not 3/4 fixed

[A32] wait a32 fixed
01:50:124 (9) - 2/3

[Insane]
00:18:469 (8) - change the direction a bit so it doesn't overlap with 7 fixed
00:35:228 (3) - clap and what's the point of this jump? i am nc & clap in note 3
01:18:469 (6) - slider reverse arrow is kinda hidden. fixed
01:50:124 (1) - just use a 2/3 reversed slider here. honestly i think this part is not that accuate with the music itself. fixed

NatsumeRin wrote:

[A32]
01:50:124 (9) - 2/3 thanks fixed~ (I also changed my diff to tick1

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[General]


[A32]
00:51:159 (3) - remove?ok
00:53:021 (8,1) - 1 grid upfixed

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[General]
well, i can't understand if it's an anime or a game.
If game, the Title should be "Magical Happy Show! (Game Size)" or "Magical Happy Show! (Short Ver.)" since is not the full version.
If anime, should be"Magical Happy Show! (TV Size)" or "Magical Happy Show! (Short Ver.)"
Tell me what is it and i'll tell you which is the correct one.

[Normal]
01:13:504 (4,1) - Spacing. I suggest to change like the image to fix it. fixed

SPOILER

01:54:469 (1,2,3) - I think that way sounds better (see image) fixed

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:02:952 (7,1) - Too distant to be hard to me. fixed
00:41:228 (3,1) - ^ not changed

[A32] Wait a32 modding
00:51:159 (3) - remove?
00:53:021 (8,1) - 1 grid up

[Insane]
01:09:366 (1) - That slider... please mooth it. on purpose
01:10:400 (2) - ^ on purpose
01:30:056 (6,7,8) - Maybe like this? I think it could be less confusing. i don't think so

Example

01:40:193 - New combo (it's a bug. It occurs sometime after a spinner.) ok~fixed

SPOILER

1. Please use .jpg but not .png file as background to reduce your folder size. A 800x600 image with 1.83MB is horrible
2. add Op and Opening to tags?

1. 00:03:366 (4) - add a NC here?
2. 00:04:193 (5) - add a clap at end to make your beat consistent?
3. 00:12:469 (4) - ^, add at repeat?
4. 00:23:228 (1) - i suppose it could be removed since you choose to leave a blank at 00:19:918 - .
5. 00:23:642 (2) - add a clap. And also add a NC here if you accept my suggestion above.
6. 00:30:262 (1) - clap?
7. 00:33:573 (1) - ^
8. 00:36:883 (2) - ^
9. 00:36:469 (1,2) - same as 00:23:228
10. 00:39:780 (6) - NC here, your combo is too long. Avoid to make your combo longer than 6 in E/N diffs.
11. 00:42:676 (9) - remove clap here or add a clap at the end of 00:40:193 (7) - , up to u ... hmm. i may choose to remove :>
12. 00:45:987 - i'd like to add a note here for vocal
13. 00:48:883 (2) - remove clap? maybe not very suitable imo
14. 00:52:607 - ^
15. 00:58:814 (3,4) - move clap to (3)'s end
16. 01:10:400 (2) - describe here with chinese because it's not unrankable and technically it is fine, and also easier for mapper to understand:
    从技术上来说这里的节奏和排列没有任何问题。但是：Kiai的开头是整个乐曲的高潮进入点，当你把这里放在Slider中间的时候就，本来应该在进入高潮瞬间的一个爆发感一下子被严重的削弱了，换句话说，本来应该充满张力的地方变成了软绵绵的了。虽然这只是个Easy diff，但我依然建议把节奏做成这样：
    
17. 01:16:607 (3) - missing clap
18. 01:19:090 (2) - ^
19. 01:20:745 - add a note with clap for consistent beat & hitsounds
20. 01:24:056 - ^
21. 01:25:711 (2) - missing clap
22. 01:27:780 (4) - recommend a NC here
23. 01:29:849 (7) - missing clap at end
24. 01:35:228 (2) - ^
25. 01:37:918 - i think it's a good place to add a spinner.
    
26. 01:43:918 (5) - add a clap?
27. 01:48:883 (1) - note very sure if the NC here is designed or not.
28. 01:52:193 (2) - add a clap

1. 00:24:883 (3,4) - (nazi) blanket them well?
2. 00:28:193 (3) - missing clap at end
3. 00:48:883 (4) - move clap to head for consistent hidsounds. Actually, i suppose the volumn in this section (between 00:43:090 - and 00:54:676 -) should be reduced by approx 15% . Another choice is use normal-hitnormal as soft claps - add some inherited timing points or note specific sample ( placed top-left in editor)
4. 01:05:435 (4) - add a clap for you have a clap at 01:03:780 (2) -
5. 01:13:504 (4) - missing clap at end
6. 01:37:814 - also recommend a spinner, same as easy
7. 01:42:676 (4) - missing clap at end
8. 01:47:228 - i suppose the spinner could be stopped at here~
9. 01:55:504 (3) - a weird clap... remove it?

1. 00:07:918 (3) - the clap here is not heard well, suggest a whistle :>
2. 00:29:435 (7) - missing claps at both head & end
3. 00:31:090 (2) - missing clap at head
4. 00:37:090 - i'd like to add a note here for transition
5. 00:43:090 - same as Normal, soft clap maybe not a good choice for this part, or at least reduce volumn here by approx 15%
6. 01:02:331 (6,7) - ctrl+g for better flow?
7. 01:06:056 - recommend to add a note here
8. 01:11:021 (3) - move next NC to here for entering kiai
9. 01:31:711 - i may choose to add note here
10. 01:32:538 - ^ if you accept above one
11. 01:42:056 - also suggest to add a note :>
12. 01:48:883 (5,6,7,8) - i suppose the claps here is not fit

1. 00:09:987 (3,4,5) - here, the beat is technically correct but the sense is not so good as 00:06:676 (1,2) -
2. 00:19:711 (8) - adjust the shape?
   
   SPOILER

   

   272,284,19711,2,0,B|264:340|212:364|157:336,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 00:33:366 (1) - i recommend to move it to prev white tick.
4. 00:43:090 - same as other diffs, use normal-hitnormal as soft-clap is better than default soft imo, till 00:54:676 - , or you can also reduce the volumn by approx 15%
5. 00:49:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - heard weird a bit, i may choose to remove (1,2) then start stream at 00:49:297 -
6. 00:51:159 - add a note here?
7. 01:50:124 (9) - bad shape, try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:55:711 (5) - suggest a NC here to warning the SV change

1. 00:02:745 (4,5) - i think place the slider first and then note could make better beat:
   
2. 00:07:918 (3) - hmm .. a whistle here is better than clap imo
3. 00:11:228 (1) - ^
4. 00:17:435 (5,6) - this kinda stack is not recommended because it will break your flow. i'd rather to apply a ctrl+g for (4,5) than select current style. like this:
   
   1. move (4) to 256:80
   2. ctrl+g to (5)
   3. SPOILER

      
5. 00:20:745 (6,7) - ctrl+g separately for better flow?
6. 00:30:469 - add a note for consistent beat~
7. 00:33:780 - ^
8. 01:03:366 (2) - i don't know why but it's heard weird~ so suggest to remove clap
9. 01:24:056 (1) - i'm worry about this jmp a bit.. 212:216 may be better? tell the truth i can't agree with a triplet followed by huge note jump immediately except some special cases..
10. 01:36:883 (2) - how about move it to 336:180?
11. 01:45:159 (4,1) - suggest to remove claps

OrangeNeKo wrote:

Hi~ ><
我来打酱油了;_;

Insane

00:05:228 (2) - 1,2,3弄成圆弧怎样 这个故意的

00:09:987 (1,2) - 感觉分开好点 难度不想在增了....

00:10:607 (3,4) - ^ 难度不想在增了....

00:07:918 (3) - 这里方向反一反好像好点 先扔着看看吧...

00:20:745 (6) - 方向反一反好像好点 先扔着看看吧...

00:21:159 (7) - 好像对齐前面的好看点 先扔着....

00:24:056 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这样? 好的~

SPOILER

00:28:400 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这个也是小跳啦

SPOILER

(其实1放到左边就比较好改了orz

01:26:538 (2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉这样不大好看呢? Orz.....小跳..

01:54:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 感觉这样的节奏好点?(1,23,45,67这样3组.. 那样有点坑...

SPOILER

x847606653 wrote:

A32
00:19:711 (8) - 丑changed as sco suggested~
00:33:366 (1) - 这个note放到前面的长白线，这里完全就没音ok~
01:30:469 - 这里音效全消么，来个渐变还是有点音吧..至于渐变歌本身不明显于是不弄了

Scorpiour wrote:

[A32]

1. 00:09:987 (3,4,5) - here, the beat is technically correct but the sense is not so good as 00:06:676 (1,2) - changed a bit~
2. 00:19:711 (8) - adjust the shape?ok~
   
   SPOILER

   

   272,284,19711,2,0,B|264:340|212:364|157:336,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 00:33:366 (1) - i recommend to move it to prev white tick.fixed
4. 00:43:090 - same as other diffs, use normal-hitnormal as soft-clap is better than default soft imo, till 00:54:676 - , or you can also reduce the volumn by approx 15%ok~
5. 00:49:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - heard weird a bit, i may choose to remove (1,2) then start stream at 00:49:297 - 音乐里有这个音吧...而且打起来也不是很难打来着
6. 00:51:159 - add a note here?ok~
7. 01:50:124 (9) - bad shape, try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed
8. 01:55:711 (5) - suggest a NC here to warning the SV changeok~added

x847606653 wrote:

Hi,there

General
没SB的话osb删掉 我文件夹里没osb.....

Insane
00:43:090 (2) - NC 感觉还是我自己的符合音乐
00:42:573 - 绿线放到00:43:090 - 感觉还是我自己的符合音乐
01:02:538 (9) - 换成slider,后面空一拍不舒服 好，换了
01:17:435 - 01:19:504 - 怎么没whistle了 忘了..估计
01:40:711 (5) - remove note 完全换了

A32
00:19:711 (8) - 丑
00:33:366 (1) - 这个note放到前面的长白线，这里完全就没音
01:30:469 - 这里音效全消么，来个渐变

Hard
00:22:193 (5) - 第三点向上微调一下 哦
00:54:676 (3,4,5,6) - 这种排列难度明显跟其它部分相差太大 改了

Normal
00:26:124 (4) - 移动到236.188 为了重叠...没变

Easy
fine

就这么多，再加油吧。star

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~~ mod from queue~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - just suggestions

[Genera]

1. Please use .jpg but not .png file as background to reduce your folder size. A 800x600 image with 1.83MB is horrible okey
2. add Op and Opening to tags? ok

[Easy]

1. 00:03:366 (4) - add a NC here? fixed~
2. 00:04:193 (5) - add a clap at end to make your beat consistent? fixed~
3. 00:12:469 (4) - ^, add at repeat? fixed~
4. 00:23:228 (1) - i suppose it could be removed since you choose to leave a blank at 00:19:918 - . fixed~
5. 00:23:642 (2) - add a clap. And also add a NC here if you accept my suggestion above. fixed~
6. 00:30:262 (1) - clap? fixed~
7. 00:33:573 (1) - ^ fixed~
8. 00:36:883 (2) - ^ fixed~
9. 00:36:469 (1,2) - same as 00:23:228 fixed~
10. 00:39:780 (6) - NC here, your combo is too long. Avoid to make your combo longer than 6 in E/N diffs. fixed~
11. 00:42:676 (9) - remove clap here or add a clap at the end of 00:40:193 (7) - , up to u ... hmm. i may choose to remove :> fixed~
12. 00:45:987 - i'd like to add a note here for vocal fixed~
13. 00:48:883 (2) - remove clap? maybe not very suitable imo fixed~
14. 00:52:607 - ^ Orz it's no note...maybe i deleted it according x847's mod
15. 00:58:814 (3,4) - move clap to (3)'s end fixed~
16. 01:10:400 (2) - describe here with chinese because it's not unrankable and technically it is fine, and also easier for mapper to understand:
    从技术上来说这里的节奏和排列没有任何问题。但是：Kiai的开头是整个乐曲的高潮进入点，当你把这里放在Slider中间的时候就，本来应该在进入高潮瞬间的一个爆发感一下子被严重的削弱了，换句话说，本来应该充满张力的地方变成了软绵绵的了。虽然这只是个Easy diff，但我依然建议把节奏做成这样： fixed~
    
17. 01:16:607 (3) - missing clap i think it not fit this music
18. 01:19:090 (2) - ^ fixed~
19. 01:20:745 - add a note with clap for consistent beat & hitsounds fixed~
20. 01:24:056 - ^ i think it not fit this music
21. 01:25:711 (2) - missing clap fixed~
22. 01:27:780 (4) - recommend a NC here fixed~
23. 01:29:849 (7) - missing clap at end
24. 01:35:228 (2) - ^ i think it not fit this music
25. 01:37:918 - i think it's a good place to add a spinner. because i want to #1
    
26. 01:43:918 (5) - add a clap? fixed~
27. 01:48:883 (1) - note very sure if the NC here is designed or not. fixed~
28. 01:52:193 (2) - add a clap fixed~

[Normal]

1. 00:24:883 (3,4) - (nazi) blanket them well? fixed~
2. 00:28:193 (3) - missing clap at end i want to use sound for this music
3. 00:48:883 (4) - move clap to head for consistent hidsounds. Actually, i suppose the volumn in this section (between 00:43:090 - and 00:54:676 -) should be reduced by approx 15% . Another choice is use normal-hitnormal as soft claps - add some inherited timing points or note specific sample ( placed top-left in editor) fixed~ & select the first
4. 01:05:435 (4) - add a clap for you have a clap at 01:03:780 (2) - fixed~
5. 01:13:504 (4) - missing clap at end fixed~
6. 01:37:814 - also recommend a spinner, same as easy fixed~
7. 01:42:676 (4) - missing clap at end fixed~
8. 01:47:228 - i suppose the spinner could be stopped at here~ fixed~
9. 01:55:504 (3) - a weird clap... remove it? fixed~

[Hard]

1. 00:07:918 (3) - the clap here is not heard well, suggest a whistle :> fixed~
2. 00:29:435 (7) - missing claps at both head & end fixed~
3. 00:31:090 (2) - missing clap at head fixed~
4. 00:37:090 - i'd like to add a note here for transition fixed~
5. 00:43:090 - same as Normal, soft clap maybe not a good choice for this part, or at least reduce volumn here by approx 15% fixed~
6. 01:02:331 (6,7) - ctrl+g for better flow? fixed~
7. 01:06:056 - recommend to add a note here fixed~
8. 01:11:021 (3) - move next NC to here for entering kiai fixed~
9. 01:31:711 - i may choose to add note here fixed~
10. 01:32:538 - ^ if you accept above one fixed~
11. 01:42:056 - also suggest to add a note :> i use a new rhyme
12. 01:48:883 (5,6,7,8) - i suppose the claps here is not fit fixed~

[A32]

1. 00:09:987 (3,4,5) - here, the beat is technically correct but the sense is not so good as 00:06:676 (1,2) -
2. 00:19:711 (8) - adjust the shape?
   
   SPOILER

   

   272,284,19711,2,0,B|264:340|212:364|157:336,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 00:33:366 (1) - i recommend to move it to prev white tick.
4. 00:43:090 - same as other diffs, use normal-hitnormal as soft-clap is better than default soft imo, till 00:54:676 - , or you can also reduce the volumn by approx 15%
5. 00:49:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - heard weird a bit, i may choose to remove (1,2) then start stream at 00:49:297 -
6. 00:51:159 - add a note here?
7. 01:50:124 (9) - bad shape, try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:55:711 (5) - suggest a NC here to warning the SV change

[Insane]

1. 00:02:745 (4,5) - i think place the slider first and then note could make better beat:
   
2. 00:07:918 (3) - hmm .. a whistle here is better than clap imo fixed~
3. 00:11:228 (1) - ^ fixed~
4. 00:17:435 (5,6) - this kinda stack is not recommended because it will break your flow. i'd rather to apply a ctrl+g for (4,5) than select current style. like this: fixed~and i used a new queue:3
   
   1. move (4) to 256:80
   2. ctrl+g to (5)
   3. SPOILER

      
5. 00:20:745 (6,7) - ctrl+g separately for better flow? fixed~
6. 00:30:469 - add a note for consistent beat~ fixed~
7. 00:33:780 - ^ fixed~
8. 01:03:366 (2) - i don't know why but it's heard weird~ so suggest to remove clap fixed~
9. 01:24:056 (1) - i'm worry about this jmp a bit.. 212:216 may be better? tell the truth i can't agree with a triplet followed by huge note jump immediately except some special cases.. this is system bug.....Orz
10. 01:36:883 (2) - how about move it to 336:180? fixed~
11. 01:45:159 (4,1) - suggest to remove claps fixed~

that's all~~ generally a good work for a new mapper :>

try to find more mods and stars ( you still need 8 stars provided by different modders~ ) then call me back to recheck

Nymph wrote:

Easy：
00:39:780 (6) - newcombo 略长了 好了
01:04:193 (2) - easy别用这种jump梗 好了
01:16:607 (3,4) - 这个感觉也不像easy 建议直接变成一个长slider 好了
01:33:159 (4,5) - 同上 好了
01:50:124 (2,3) - 3的位置不好 你仔细听一下的话 这有个压蓝线的节奏 所以3这位置本来没有音的 想个别的梗吧 好了
01:55:504 (2,3) - 同之前说的 好了
顺带一提 这个难度hitsound不是很整齐 建议你要用24clap的地方 就一直下 最好不要加一段然后突然少2个clap 然后又突然clap 我个人是不太喜欢这种下法 但是其实不仔细听 也没有特别大的区别 所以还是看你自己想法了
比方说：00:05:021 (3) - 最开头用的24clap 之后没有clap 但是3的结尾3白线出了clap 听起来就有点奇怪 我觉得正确的思路是：一直用24clap 然后3的结尾也用whistle 你试试看怎么样 换了一些，有些地方加了clap不好听啊
00:12:469 (4) - 这开头也推荐whistle 好了
00:59:642 (4) - 这个clap位置也很奇怪 好了
后面不举例了 你看看需要不需要整理一下这些hitsound（其他难度也是类似的hitsound问题 主要希望你能理解我给的这个思路）



Normal：
目测没大问题

Hard：
00:09:573 (7) - 这个减音量我没太懂用意是什么 Orz
01:55:711 (1) - 虽然是减速slider 但是我建议间距保持跟前面一样 这样感觉稍微有点不太好看 好了

A32：
00:04:607 (2) - 这个其实很像jump梗啊 作为正常spacing的话 我建议挪更远一点
01:30:573 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这真的不建议减音量啊 很没打击感
01:55:711 (5) - 起码加个newcombo提示一下

Insane：
00:55:918 (1) - 这里hitsound跟前面比声音有点太大了………… 稍微减少一点？ 好了
01:55:711 (4) - slider结尾可以考虑用soft音量5 这样MP3的吉他音就能更好的表现 好了


节奏和排列基本都没啥 hitsound目测还有不小空间 大概这样吧

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions
   

88,136,113435,2,0,B|88:168|112:200,1,70

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
[Easy]
00:10:607 (2) - 1 grid down then 00:09:987 (1,2) line up. fixed
00:13:297 - hmm? Try add finish here? fixed
00:46:400 (1) - The arcuations are a bit sharp, make them smooth! fixed
01:11:021 (3) - Add finish at the beginning. fixed
01:29:642 - Why so empty? Map here :< (at least end this part at 01:30:262) fixed
01:32:745 (3) - :< vocal



[Normal]
01:02:952 - Add finish here because of the downbeat. fixed
01:09:159 (6) - Remove this note,it makes no sense imo. in order to read maps easyly
01:49:711 (8) - Why clap here? Remove this plz /.\
01:50:124 (9) - Why not add a 3/4 slider with a return? fixed,but it's a syncopation
01:56:124 - Remove finish fixed


[Hard]
00:02:952 (7) - A single circle is enough i prefer myself style
00:32:745 (7,1) - 00:32:745 (7,1) - Change them into a slider fixed
00:42:676 (1) - Lower the volume fixed
01:53:435 (3) -

88,136,113435,2,0,B|88:168|112:200,1,70

fixed



[Insane]
00:29:435 (2) - Make this slider not touch 00:28:814 (5,6,7) fixed
00:38:745 (1) - Try ctrl+G? fixed
01:32:745 (6) - Newcombo fixed


[A32] Waiting a32 mod it..
00:04:607 (2) - Spacing?
00:33:366 (1) - ^
01:35:228 (2) - ^
01:33:159 (6) - Newcombo
01:55:711 (5) - Should be end at 01:56:124
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Wonderful Mapset
:3 GL

Nymph wrote:

A32：
00:04:607 (2) - 这个其实很像jump梗啊 作为正常spacing的话 我建议挪更远一点好
01:30:573 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这真的不建议减音量啊 很没打击感 fixed
01:55:711 (5) - 起码加个newcombo提示一下fixed

Flower wrote:

[a32]
rrt认证的神mapper我不太敢mod……
00:04:607 (2) - 其实呢我是觉得这里按照DS来比较舒服 我打了好几次都手滑了fixed
00:06:676 (1,2) - body加了whistle 滑条头却不加有点不爽感觉还好0.0
00:19:711 (8) - 形状ok
00:20:331 (9) - 单独+NC来强调（合唱？）ok
00:40:193 (2,3,4,5) - 一个是最好按Ctrl+D重摆一遍 另一个是 00:40:814 (3) - 可以和 00:42:056 (2) - stackstack做了...Ctrl+D没必要吧
00:42:676 (3) - 同样建议NCok
01:30:056 (2) - drum是01:30:262 开始的 所以在这里很容易搞错 建议就让连打从01:30:262 开始现在这个还好吧...连打太长不太好0.0
01:46:814 (5) - NCok

Snowy Dream wrote:

[A32]
00:04:607 (2) - Spacing?fixed
00:33:366 (1) - ^这个还好吧..
01:35:228 (2) - ^fixed
01:33:159 (6) - Newcombook
01:55:711 (5) - Should be end at 01:56:124 fixed!

Dark Fang wrote:

Hi

[Easy]

00:09:987 (1) - 1 grid right with others? i think it's no fit
00:34:814 (3) - Ctrl + G and adjust next notes? or change rhythm that is 1 slider and 1 circlei think former map is good
00:43:090 (1) - 1 grid down ok fixed
00:50:952 (2) - 1 grid down with (3) ? ok fixed
01:07:918 (3) - move to (208,128) ok fixed
01:19:090 (2) - move to (456,128) ok fixed
01:21:158 (1) - Ctrl + H with others and adjust next note previous queue is good

[Normal]

why don't you use Circle Size 3? c4 is well
00:01:297 (2) - 1 grid down ok fixed
00:09:987 (4) - add Whistle? ok fixed
00:10:607 (6) - ^ ok fixed
00:43:090 - this interval's sound is too low. can you use soft 50% instead normal? ok fixed
00:43:090 (1) - add Clap at end of slider previous queue is good
00:49:711 (1) - ^ previous queue is good
00:57:573 (2) - ~ keep DS ok fixed
01:47:642 - add Whistle follow music? previous sound effect is well

[Hard]

00:16:607 (1) - add Whistle at end of slider? ok fixed
00:19:711 (8) - remove Whistle not fit
00:20:124 (2) - add Whistle at end of slider ok fixed
00:21:573 (3) - 1 grid up with others not good at all
00:26:538 (9) - add Whistle at end of slider ok fixed
00:29:435 (7) - ^ ok fixed
00:33:573 (4) - Whistle ok fixed
00:40:400 (2) - why don't you use 1/2 3 hit repeat slider and 1 circle? ok fixed
00:43:090 - same as Normal diff ok fixed
01:35:642 (4) - keep DS ok fixed
01:40:193 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't overlap. That's not good it too difficult? i don't think it
01:52:193 (5) - try make bending with (3) i think it no need?

[A12] [A32] plz = =b waitting a32 mod it...

00:33:573 (2) - keep DS
00:36:883 (1) - ^ too far
01:36:056 (1) - last point of slider move to (336,304) ?
01:36:883 (2) - try make like above?
01:38:538 (2) - spacing this note?
01:45:780 (4) - NC here?

[Insane]

00:07:918 (3,4) - use 1/2 sliders. now is so awkward for play. no change,if use 1/2,the effect its not well...
00:11:228 (1,2) - ^ no change,if use 1/2,the effect its not well...
01:03:573 (2,3) - ._. ee... try make like this ? ok~ thank you
01:12:469 (2) - RNC and add Clap at start of slider thanks a lot
01:39:987 (3) - RNC thanks a lot
01:44:952 (3,4) - Ctrl + G maybe it's a good choice


Have a nice day

EDIT : too late? not late,thx

Dark Fang wrote:

[A32]

00:33:573 (2) - keep DSfixed a bit
00:36:883 (1) - ^ too farit's fine imo~
01:36:056 (1) - last point of slider move to (336,304) ?ok~
01:36:883 (2) - try make like above?ok
01:38:538 (2) - spacing this note?no;_;
01:45:780 (4) - NC here?fixed~

Charles445 wrote:

Something's off about the timing. It sounds like it resets the offset a lot.

I tried timing it and got these values.

BPM 145.000 --- Offset 46
BPM 145.000 --- Offset 13297
BPM 145.000 --- Offset 56326

You should check out that timing and ask others for their opinions. Not popping because I'm not sure if the timing I put is correct or not.

lolcubes wrote:

Hi.

I have actually checked timing and I came up with this:
Offset: 56ms BPM: 145,00
Offset: 16.607ms BPM: 144,95
Offset: 19.920ms BPM: 144,95
Offset: 21.572ms BPM: 144,00
Offset: 23.238ms BPM: 144,95
Offset: 26.549ms BPM: 144,90
Offset: 28.204ms BPM: 145,00
Offset: 39.787ms BPM: 145,025
Offset: 56.330ms BPM: 145,00
Offset: 87.780ms BPM: 144,95
Offset: 104.337ms BPM: 145,00
Offset: 110.942ms BPM: 145,00

I have set OD10 to your insane diff and played it from start to finish, and only had 1% mistimed hits (3 of the 100s and the miss is on purpose):

SPOILER

You can view timing in the new saved difficulty I made from your insane diff here: http://puu.sh/1lFF8

I might throw a mod today/tomorrow as well, so give me one day.
I will pop this because your timing is definitely wrong.

lolcubes wrote:

Okay, here's a mod as promised.

[General]
*Your video file is too big and has black bars on top and bottom. 17.5 MB is too much for such a short video. Here is a smaller video file with cropped black bars, use this instead. Fixed

[Insane]
*Use OD7 please (OD+1). Timing is good enough for this to work even on doubletime. Fixed
*01:24:881 (5) - Missing a clap at the start. Fixed
*01:55:700 - Move this timing section to 01:55:752. Completely silencing hit objects is unrankable. Since this is the last object it's fine to have everything but the beginning silenced though. Fixed

[A32]
*Use OD6 please (OD+1). Timing is okay now. Fixed~
00:43:918 (2) - This object is unsnapped. Fixed
*01:07:916 (1,2,3) - This was strange to play. It's a bit unexpected since there is no such a rhythm in the music. I understand that following all of the drumline would make this a bit hard, but can you make this more simple? Like this or something, since that follows the bass guitar. no
*01:11:019 (1) - Finish? Fixed
*01:26:950 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I find this quite overmapped. There is nothing in the music that would warrant streams here. Can you just make it more simple using 1/2 notes? no
*01:55:804 (1) - This is placed on a wrong tick. Fixed

[Hard]
*OD6 please. Fixed
*00:05:849 (6,7) - This is unreadable. There is absolutely no way to guess that first one repeats 3 times and the second one repeats once. Try to make this more simple please. Fixed
*00:19:920 (1,2) - Too big spacing. Quite unexpected. Fixed
*01:33:368 (4,5) - This spacing is a little too big, can you reduce it a little? Fixed
*01:43:613 (5) - It's on a wrong tick. Fixed
*01:50:957 (2) - Unsnapped. Also put a new combo on it for consistency, since you did that in insane? Fixed
*01:55:700 - Just like in the insane, move this timing section a bit further, like this it's unrankable. Fixed

[Normal]
*OD4 please. Fixed
*00:21:575 (3) - Unsnapped. Fixed
*00:39:790 (1) - Unsnapped. Fixed
*01:37:921 (1,1) - This is a little too hard for a normal criteria. There is just not enough pause between the spinner and the next note. I suggest to remove 01:40:612 (1) entirely and just have the rest. Or you can just make it like in your easy diff, ending the spinner at 01:39:784. Fixed
01:50:233 (9) - Don't stack this, it's too hard. Also this is not snapped correctly, it's on a wrong tick. Fixed
01:55:700 - Same thing about the timing section. Fixed

[Easy]
*00:24:065 (2) - Missing a clap. Fixed
*00:56:335 (1) - Unsnapped. Fixed
*00:58:812 (3) - Missing a clap? Fixed
*01:01:295 (2) - I suggest that instead of a repeater you just make a long slider from 01:01:295 to 01:02:123 because like this it sounds bad. i like myself slider
*01:13:295 (3) - Missing a clap. Fixed
*01:27:780 (1,2) - Please don't use stacks in easy difficulties unless it's really intuitive (i.e. same tone in the music, or a quick 1/2). These are just 2 regular 1/1 notes, this shouldn't be stacked. Fixed

Be careful how you resnap your objects after a timing change, things can go wrong easily.

1. Use OD7 please.
2. 01:55:752 (4) - This slider is placed wrongly. I was placed correctly before. You need to move the timing section, not the slider, to 01:55:752, because if you don't the slider is unrankable because the whole object is silenced.

1. 00:43:918 (2) - This object is still unsnapped. Snap it correctly please.

2. -[NYAN]- wrote:

   *01:26:950 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I find this quite overmapped. There is nothing in the music that would warrant streams here. Can you just make it more simple using 1/2 notes? no

   "No" is not a good reason. Until you give me a valid reason you want this stream to stay, I will insist on removing it.

1. 01:55:700 - You didn't fix the timing section, move it to 01:55:752 because currently it makes the slider unrankable.

1. 01:37:921 (1,1) - This is a little too hard for a normal criteria. There is just not enough pause between the spinner and the next note. End the spinner at 01:39:784 - and add a clap to it. It will be better then.
2. 01:55:700 - You didn't fix the timing section, move it to 01:55:752 because currently it makes the slider unrankable.

1. 00:58:812 (3) - This clap should be at the end I believe, not the start. Try that.

lolcubes wrote:

You didn't fix a lot of things you said you did. ._.

[Timing]
Anyways, I have updated the timing for this map. A small change on some spots which makes the timing better.
Add these red lines to your existing ones:
BPM 145 Offset 43092
BPM 145.125 Offset 62958
BPM 144.95 Offset 71228

This should make the timing a little better. Don't forget to resnap your objects!

[Insane]

1. Use OD7 please.
2. 01:55:752 (4) - This slider is placed wrongly. I was placed correctly before. You need to move the timing section, not the slider, to 01:55:752, because if you don't the slider is unrankable because the whole object is silenced.

[Hard]

1. 01:55:700 - You didn't fix the timing section, move it to 01:55:752 because currently it makes the slider unrankable.

[Normal]

1. 01:37:921 (1,1) - This is a little too hard for a normal criteria. There is just not enough pause between the spinner and the next note. End the spinner at 01:39:784 - and add a clap to it. It will be better then.
2. 01:55:700 - You didn't fix the timing section, move it to 01:55:752 because currently it makes the slider unrankable.

[Easy]

1. 00:58:812 (3) - This clap should be at the end I believe, not the start. Try that.

Here. It is very important to correctly resnap the objects once you change timing, so keep an eye out for that.

[A32]

1. 00:43:918 (2) - This object is still unsnapped. Snap it correctly please.

2. -[NYAN]- wrote:

   *01:26:950 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I find this quite overmapped. There is nothing in the music that would warrant streams here. Can you just make it more simple using 1/2 notes? no

   "No" is not a good reason. Until you give me a valid reason you want this stream to stay, I will insist on removing it.

delete this note 01:27:061 (4) -

Steph De Chine wrote:

From my Modding queue
好吧……先拜拜前面的神Mod们……我没有找到那么多问题……没问题么？
General
{全是Suggestion...没啥问题}
Easy
00:05:021 (3) - 这个的方向有些奇怪…… ^H一下？
00:19:918 00:23:238 00:26:549 - 这些地方不加个circle把前面那段和后面那段接起来？
00:52:612 - 这个"i"还是加个circle比较好吧……
01:05:847 - 既然前面那里都加了circle，后面这里没道理不加的吧？
01:10:398 (2,1) - 这里突然来overlay了……或许把2改成圈圈？或者把2和1连起来成长滑条，然后用红点来打拍子？
01:50:130 (3) - 这里也是用红点打拍子会好些吧……

Normal
和Easy一样，00:19:918 00:23:238 00:26:549 - 这些地方不加个circle把前面那段和后面那段接起来？
01:55:700 (4) - 这个如果改成circle会不会让人觉得歌突然停下来？

别的都很不错……
Insane:
01:55:752 (4) - 这个收尾似乎比A32渣了些啊……没有Insane之风，差评