Hi fanzhen~ Just want to take a look here, random mod (:
[General]-> Hmm, the difficulty gap between Beginner and Hyper is so gigantic here...
-> Your first note starts in 1683ms - really, you don't need to use 1500ms lead-in... (if you want to add lead-in to make the percussion blend-in smoothly, use
500ms instead, it should be enough)
-> Try offset 1694
(+11 ms)? (already tested in 25% playback)
-> Finally,
uncapitalize the "b" in Beatmania IIDX should be recognizable from that Leorda's link orz ._.[Beginner]-> Err... Why no claps here (as you did on Hyper and Another)? Whistle+Finish only sounds good on this diff, but personally I feel like something's missing... >_<
- 00:08:630 (2) - Try to put this lower (~x:150 y:311)? Uhm, actually I want to emphasize (1,2,3)'s arc here (it helps avoid overlap as well~)
- 00:14:946 (2) - (optional) Use a slider wave here perhaps? Flows cute with your next (1) :3
- 00:25:051 (2) - Uhm, I prefer to put the whistle on slider's end as the piano goes with a happy melody there, but if you want to keep consistency it's fine as well (:
- 00:34:525 (3) - Move the midpoint to ~x:260 y:36, it'll help to balance (4)'s curve (:
- 00:37:051 (1) - Hmm, not really fond of this slider's direction personally (as you still have a lot of space below)... I prefer:
- 00:54:735 (3) - orz, what happened to the slider's curve >_< - Try this perhaps?
480,184,54735,2,0,B|432:137|373:160|373:160|304:186|265:127|265:127|136:124,1,359.999971389771,2|2
- 01:01:683 (1) - (optional) I prefer whistle only here to emphasize the finish on (2) (:
- 01:17:998 - Is the 51% here (instead of 50%) intentional? orz, very minor though :3
- 01:27:577 (1) - Add circle here (with finish) and start spinner 1/2 after? (really, the cymbal here is very strong to be ignored ._.)
- 01:47:788 (1) - Why no finish here? T01:52:840 (1) - he cymbals are obvious though >_<
- 01:52:840 (1,2) - (optional) idk, I prefer something like this here ((2) is stacked to (4)'s end) to get a continuous flow with your next (3) :
- 01:57:262 (4) - Same as 01:01:683, but on this case I prefer to reduce this finish's volume~
- 02:13:051 (1) - Same as 01:27:577 here - plus a whistle on spinner's end here might help to accentuate the end (:
[Hyper]- 00:11:472 (4) - Minor stuff... Move the endpoint to ~x:443 y:319 to get a stronger feel from the arc?
- 00:14:314 (1) - (optional) Maybe create something like this for a continuous flow? :3
- 00:14:946 (2) - If you followed above suggestion, you can make this slider's first half encircling (1)'s end (: (new red waypoint on ~x:200 y:147 and new bezier waypoint on x:154 y:133)
- 00:22:525 (1) - Place this in the center (~x:256)? Yes, imo sacrificing the spacing a bit is worth compared to how tidy it will be xD
- 00:27:577 (1) - Silencing slider's end is unrankable (this map got unranked because a slider's end is silenced) - use ~20% instead?
- 00:30:419 (5,1) - (optional) I much prefer something moving here - perhaps stack (5) to (1)'s start, and then CTRL+R (1)?
- 00:44:946 (2) - Curve it downward instead? Flows better with (3,4) imo...
- 00:55:998 (1,2,3,4) - Apply accelerated spacing here? (also gives a better angle here imo! xD)
- 01:07:367 (1,2) - Move both to ~x:4 y:235 (manual stacking) so it will be perfectly stacked to your purple (1)'s start
- 01:08:630 (1) - No whistle here, is it intentional? imo it won't hurt for a whistle here~
- 01:17:472 (1,1) - Here also, I recommend to add whistle for consistency (:
- 01:47:788 (1,1) - (optional) ...to be honest I think CTRL+R'ing these two actually works well~ Not a must though (:
- 01:50:314 (1,1,1) - ...of course you can CTRL+R these three as well, but I don't recommend as much as the two above (as the two above's effects are MUCH greater than these three)
- 02:05:156 (2) - If you listen to the drum sequence carefully the snare actually lands on slider's start, so I recommend a whistle on slider's start as well (:
- 02:10:525 (1) - (optional) Put in ~x:345 y:303 to encircle (5)'s start? (if you do this, don't forget to move 02:11:788 (1) lower as well)
- 02:13:051 (1) - Same as Beginner (you've placed the spinner 1/2 later on 01:27:735... Why not here as well >_<)
[Another]- 00:06:314 (4) - Put in ~x:38 y:233 to avoid overlap? o.o...
- 00:10:840 (3) - Remove the whistle on slider's end here? I can't hear a strong snare as in (4)...
- 00:14:209 (5,1) - Manual-stack both to ~x:501 y:104 to make (4) encircle these two correctly in play mode? Then, if you do this:
- 00:14:946 (3) - Move higher (~y:95) to balance the line~
- 00:30:735 (2) - Why no whistle here (and on (3) as well, if you want)? The vocal goes strong here >_<
- 00:34:525 (3) - (optional) idk... I think placing the slider's end to (3) flows quite forced imo, perhaps try:
- 00:48:419 (1,2,3) - Uhm... Personally I don't really like the linearity here, perhaps let (2) encircle (4) like this?
- 00:57:262 (1,2,3,4) - Same as Hyper about the silenced slider end~
- 01:00:735 (1,2,3) - Hmm, because of how the vocal sounded here and considering (1,2)'s flow as well, I feel an arc flows better here (because your next (1,2) flows in an opposite direction) :
- 01:01:998 (2) - (optional) Use a sudden jump here by placing it above (1)'s start? idk if you feel it'll be too harsh though...
- 01:14:630 (6) - Just a minor correction here (: - move the midpoint to x:288 y:92 to encircle (1) properly?
- 01:19:998 (1,2,3,4) - (optional) A gradual volume increase starting on (1)'s repeat would be fitting the piano much imo (as the piano also uses crescendo here as well)... Your call though :3
- 01:35:788 (3) - ...not really sure if a repeating slider is required here (I don't hear anything strong on the repeat)... I prefer 1/1 slider or two circles separated by 1/1, but currently this slider doesn't sound abrupt though (:
- 01:40:840 (2) - Again here, quite confused with the rhythm... I prefer to remove one repeat on this slider, then:
- 01:41:367 (x) - Add note here stacked above (3)'s start - you won't lose your windmill formation this way, though xD
- 01:46:209 (1) - Add whistle here, as it gives the same vocal pitch as (2) did?
- 02:05:472 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as before about the crescendo starting on (1)'s repeat~
- 02:13:051 (1) - (optional) Move to ~x:298 y:126 to make this perfectly centered in your "eye" pattern?
This mapset is wonderful~ To be honest I learned a lot how to map slow 1/6 songs from your map, orz >_<
...actually I think this is ready for a bubble, except for that offset and (most importantly) enormous difficulty gap from Beginner -> Hyper...
Good luck fanzhen~ Dropping star icon for now (:
The first one is passable, the second one not so much in my opinion, but you could just copy paste the first one which would make the beatmap more consistent at the least
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