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Floxytek - Paranormal

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BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI
oh hi there
mod time via IRS request

[General]
замени светло-кремовый цвет комбо на какой-либо другой, т.к во время киаи мигающие белые объекты нехило давят на глаза плюс суровая челябинская сториборда
я предлагаю это
Combo2 : 157,159,168

[Homu's Normal]
00:45:720 (3) - NC here because starting with 00:40:667 (1) begin a new combo pattern (i think) and because at this note don't begin any of new moments
00:48:246 (3) - ^
00:48:878 (4) - 2 grid right and 1 up? *nazi*

[FoxShift's Abnormal]
00:58:352 (3) - нк, во-первых, из-за моей личной ненависти к комбо овер10, а во-вторых, на предыдущих белых тиках нк стоят
02:25:825 - зачем тебе там тайминг секция?
02:29:299 (1,2,3,4) - лучше вот так
дистанс 1.3
02:43:509 (1) - зачем тут нк?

[Paranormal]
отлично! или я уже устала, что ничего не нашла

я очень, очень хочу сделать изю ;w;
удачи с мапкой, да \о
FoxShift
59 posts
Joined February 2011
FoxShift

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

[FoxShift's Abnormal]
00:58:352 (3) - нк, во-первых, из-за моей личной ненависти к комбо овер10, а во-вторых, на предыдущих белых тиках нк стоят Исправлено
02:25:825 - зачем тебе там тайминг секция? Исправлено
02:29:299 (1,2,3,4) - лучше вот так Ок
дистанс 1.3
02:43:509 (1) - зачем тут нк? Исправлено
Спасибо.
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Poggo
на нормале исправила всё))) цвет пока не трогала ^^ пасиб за мод)
Saturnalize
1,490 posts
Joined March 2011
Saturnalize
Floxytek \oAo\

=General=
Always take a look at SB load, don't let it reach 5x+ by disable tweening. This will save SB load. Second option, change the .osb manually. But in this case, you should fix it manually.
black.png doesn't need scaling, since we only need to change the opacity. Same with white.png.

no kd
I'll continue later.

Here we go

=Homu's Normal=
Nothing bad perhaps.

=FoxShift's Abnormal=
To tell you the truth, the SV is waaaaaaay too little, but I like how you express the pattern, it's really nice. So perhaps give SV a big boost, and remap, maybe (because sv+)
But perhaps fix some overlap to make this map neater?
1. 00:40:983 (1,2) - Fix (1) to make it a bit further from (2) so it doesn't overlap, but (1) should still symmetric. http://puu.sh/B1I2
2. 02:25:825 and 02:26:299 - Delete useless timing.

=Paranormal=
1. 00:29:930 (1,2,3,4) - Fix this by ctrl+j and move (1) to the place it should be. Sudden jump here isn't necessary.

=Taiko Oni=
Seems you're afraid to make a triplet without k, please trim it so it'll be more enjoyable. Keep in mind that taiko will sounds better if it match with music's drum.
1. 00:16:667 (14) - d would fit the best.
2. 00:19:983 (20) - k, the bg music sounds like tatak tadum
3. 02:11:615 - 02:26:773 - You know you can put so many finish here and there. I would prefer to put it every 4 beats, it sounds so much better imo.

That's all from me, Taiko should get more attention imo, some pattern are just a bit random.
Star & good luck
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thx for mod fixed almost all ^^
Raimon
295 posts
Joined December 2010
Raimon

Loli Cjj wrote:

=Taiko Oni=
Seems you're afraid to make a triplet without k, please trim it so it'll be more enjoyable. Keep in mind that taiko will sounds better if it match with music's drum.
1. 00:16:667 (14) - d would fit the best.
2. 00:19:983 (20) - k, the bg music sounds like tatak tadum
3. 02:11:615 - 02:26:773 - You know you can put so many finish here and there. I would prefer to put it every 4 beats, it sounds so much better imo.

Taiko should get more attention imo, some pattern are just a bit random.
Changed everything, on the 02:11:615 - 02:26:773 - part changed some patterns too. edited 15~ patterns from the whole diff to make it less... random(?)

http://puu.sh/Bhvf
Poggo
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Poggo
Ok update ^^
crabovan
236 posts
Joined September 2011
crabovan
Привет :3

General

Where is name/abbreviated name of taiko diff creator?
Звук клапа больше на финиш похож (а это плохо для определения карт системой тайко будет, ИМХО)

Paranormal

00:16:667 (7,4) - может сдвинуть начала этих двух слайдеров в одно место?
00:17:299 (1,2) - подвинь на центр оси Y
00:19:194 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - ^^^
00:22:825 (2,3) - сделай как-то так http://puu.sh/Bno1
00:22:352 (1,1) - несимметрично же
00:23:930 (2,3,4,5) - переделай с ДС лучше как-то так http://puu.sh/Bnp8
00:24:878 (1,2,3) - сделай симметрично относительно 00:23:930 (2,3,4)
00:27:404 (1,2,3,4) - сделай как-то так http://puu.sh/Bnrd
00:29:930 (1,2,3,4,1) - слишком квадратно :D
00:35:615 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - сделай это всё в форме треугольника
00:43:194 (1,2,3,4,5) - переделай с помощью симметрии относительно оси X
00:44:457 (1,2,3) - ^^^
00:48:246 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - сделай как-то так http://puu.sh/Bntj
00:58:352 (5,6) - не понимаю я почему-то этот джамп, лучше переделай его
01:04:825 (3,4) - уменьши джамп где-то в 1.5 раза (3.7 - слишком большой, я такой даже в аппрувах не видел, наверное)
01:23:615 (1,2,3) - переделай с симметрией относительно оси Y
01:25:825 (1) - подвинь на центр оси Y
01:32:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - переделай с симметрией относительно оси Y
01:33:720 (1,2,3) - ^^^
01:36:246 (7,1) - подвинь на центр оси Y
01:38:141 (3,4,5) - куда делась симметрия?
01:42:878 (2,4) - чуть несимметрично
01:46:352 (1,3) и 01:46:667 (2,4) - несимметрично относительно друг друга
01:47:615 (1,3) - ^^^
01:56:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,8) - переделай с симметрией относительно оси Y
02:12:246 (2,3) - несимметрично
02:28:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - переделай с симметрией относительно оси Y
02:31:194 (3) - ^^^
02:31:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - переделай с симметрией относительно обеих осей
02:42:562 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - переделай с симметрией относительно оси Y
02:57:088 (1,2,3,4) - подвинь на центр оси Y
03:01:036 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - чуть несимметрично
03:02:773 (2,4) - ^^^
Я чуть устал, может быть, домоддю завтра :3
Poggo
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Poggo
Исправила симметрию где это действительно нужно было. Спасибо за мод :P :P :P
riffy
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2010
riffy
yo~ request from my queue(пора бы прикрыть эту левую забегаловку, но кто-то еще кидает туда реквесты)

[General]
МОАР МИГАНИЙ! БОЛЬШЕ!
clear

[Homu's Ultra-moe-Normal]
AR +1 won't hurt your diff :3
00:33:088 (1,3) - overlap. http://puu.sh/BMop
00:40:351 (3,2) - ^
00:40:351 (3,2) - stack? :D
01:01:825 - and so on.. missed note here. if you avoid putting them because want to make diff easier i suggest to put some reverse sliders. :3
01:06:562 (2,1) - overlap
01:21:088 (1,2) - y u no use same patterns as before? http://puu.sh/BMpY
01:53:615 (2,1) - looks messy :<

01:26:773 (2) - new combo

[Taiko]
huh? why you aren't using circle size 5? :<
about bg.. i think you shouldn't put artist on bg.. It should be "Paranormal"
volume - 60% :/

[FoxShift]
AR +1?
ну! ну почему так! Ну есть не только центр экрана. По краям тоже можно ноты. Смотрится странно. Я когда играл, чувствовал себя овцой в загоне. :/ Хотя! это ранкбл, но просто чтоб нареканий небыло часть паттернов можно бы и по углам распихать
есть места с неровной обводкой. сладеры подобные 00:15:404 (1) лучше строить по симметрии. вот так смотрится аккуратнее
00:22:667 - нота?
01:41:457 (2) - неудобно читать. новое комбо сюда
02:15:404 (1,2) - неровно же!
02:26:773 - вот начиная отсюда идет быстрая часть. хотя бы 1.20 и побольше нот. просто подумай об этом, я не заставляю применять.
02:51:246 (2,2) - стакни
02:55:983 (1,2,3) - хрен прочитаешь кол-во репитов :< хоть одинаковое сделай

[Pie's Diff]
у такой НЕРЕАЛЬЩИНЫ ИНСЭЙНОВОЙ D: AR8? Ты шутишь? Давай 10, ну или хотя бы 9 :<
по сути сказать нечего, только и есть, что нази.
00:16:667 (7,4) - стак
00:17:930 (3,4) - ну.. как бы пояснить-то. перезагнуты они что-ли.. просто скопипасти (7) с того паттерна. он лучше смотрится
00:38:141 (1,2) - не мод, примечание. смотрятся топорными. Плавнее загни >3< (или! погни их под красным вэйпойнотом.)
01:29:299 (8,10) - засимметричь (сделай симметричными)
01:31:194 (1,2,3,4) - вроде и перегнуты, использовала бы красные, было бы как-то ПОХАРДКОРУ получше
01:36:246 (7,1) - а в центр. по осям положить никак? там ониХАРДКОРНЕЕ лучше смотрятся
02:46:352 (1,2,3) - ритм ок, но я бы вклинил еще пару нот
02:49:509 (1, slider(4) - это стакнуть может?
02:52:983 (6,8) - перегнуты, имо.
03:02:773 (2,3,4) - потише?

~~~~~~~~~

Все. Удачи.
Raimon
295 posts
Joined December 2010
Raimon

-Bakari- wrote:

[Taiko]
huh? why you aren't using circle size 5? :< Circle size doesn't matter/affects on taiko diff. lol
about bg.. i think you shouldn't put artist on bg.. It should be "Paranormal" Agree but i didn't did the bg lol
volume - 60% :/ ok u.u
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Poggo
На нормале исправила пару моментов, на инсе тоже вроде парочку) спасибо за мод
Flanster
5,938 posts
Joined August 2010
Flanster
Sorry for late mod, so LAZY ;~;
This map is not good for children \;D/

[General]
Please remove Thumbs.db from the SB folder, its unneeded.
Suggestion - how about making the combo colours like this

[Colours]
Combo1 : 221,0,0
Combo2 : 254,249,207
Combo3 : 221,0,0
Combo4 : 145,0,0

so it doesnt go red after red and balance colours a bit xD

[SB]
no loops huh xD?

[Homu's Normal]
seems clean.

[FoxShift's Abnormal]
very symmetric I love it ^^
01:30:878 (5) - move this a bit down? since its not completely after the previous slider.

[Paranormal]
01:36:404 (7) - I can imagine everyone hitting this early XD
01:36:404 (7,1) - also why are they not in the center XD?
02:21:562 (3,4) - Ctrl+R ;3?
02:39:404 (1,2,3,4) - well, the sliderpoints arent set correctly xD

Im modding this map while the internet is out \:D/
So I'll post and star it when it comes :>

Good luck Katie Pie :3
Poggo
1,502 posts
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Topic Starter
Poggo
Thx for mod and star Loli <3 update
FoxShift
59 posts
Joined February 2011
FoxShift

-Bakari- wrote:

[FoxShift]
AR +1? Нее
ну! ну почему так! Ну есть не только центр экрана. По краям тоже можно ноты. Смотрится странно. Я когда играл, чувствовал себя овцой в загоне. :/ Хотя! это ранкбл, но просто чтоб нареканий небыло часть паттернов можно бы и по углам распихать Не люблю края экрана...
есть места с неровной обводкой. сладеры подобные 00:15:404 (1) лучше строить по симметрии. вот так смотрится аккуратнее Исправил
00:22:667 - нота? Нет уж..
01:41:457 (2) - неудобно читать. новое комбо сюда
02:15:404 (1,2) - неровно же!
02:26:773 - вот начиная отсюда идет быстрая часть. хотя бы 1.20 и побольше нот. просто подумай об этом, я не заставляю применять.
02:51:246 (2,2) - стакни Ок
02:55:983 (1,2,3) - хрен прочитаешь кол-во репитов :< хоть одинаковое сделай Ок
Благодарю.

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

[FoxShift's Abnormal]
very symmetric I love it ^^ Thanks :3
01:30:878 (5) - move this a bit down? since its not completely after the previous slider. Fixed
DarkSkyKnight
64 posts
Joined June 2012
DarkSkyKnight
My mods are generally suggestions, with red ones being things that you must change and bold ones things that I strongly recommend you to change.

General Comments
Source?

Suggest to remove countdown.

Well, the bg pic creeped out of me first time...you may consider giving a warning..?
Epilepsy warning doesn't apply here, so I suggest a storyboard warning of "This map contains PARANORMAL images. If you are easily frightened, EXIT AND RUN." etc. Just ....well yeah.

Combo colour....make the two reds more contrasting.

Normal
Nice. HP+1?

Abnormal:
Nice. AR-1?
Occasionally some combos have rhythms that feels awkward on playing.

Paranormal
Nice map. Too scary for me anyways...

[Normal]
Normal Mods
00:17:930 (2,1,2) - Try not to let these sliders overlap imo.
01:48:878 (1,2,3,1) - Suggest this:
SPOILER

[FoxShift's Abnormal]

Abnormal Mods
00:38:141 (1,2,3,4) - bad pattern imo.
01:03:720 (2,3,4,5) - awkward arrangement imo.
01:10:194 (3,4) - Suggest not putting 4 behind 3 but in front of it.
01:17:299 (1) - I don't think this should be stacked below.
01:21:088 (1) - Suggest not putting 1 behind the previous return slider.
01:40:667 (1) - nice
01:41:457 (2) - From here onwards everything seem really constrained. It's fine, but on occasions such as the following ones, it would be more of a problem imo.
01:42:562 (1) - This is not clear.
02:37:194 (3,4,5,6) - unclear.

[Paranormal]

Paranormal Mods
00:11:141 - Add note here to create the rhythm perhaps? If you do so, do this for other combos as well..
00:16:036 (3,4,5,6,7) - More distorted pattern and perhaps wider distance spacing would be nicer.
00:55:825 (1) - I think it's unnecessary.



DONE XD
Good luck with map, and please spend a minute evaluating my mod. Thx.
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thank you for mod :3 Update ~~
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this

SPOILER
Homu's Normal
01:16:036 (1) - add note and clap
01:53:930 (1) - how about this? http://puu.sh/CNlQ
03:05:930 - reduce spinner's length to 03:04:667 - here

FoxShift's Abnormal
AR-1 OD-1
01:16:036 (1,2,3,4,1) - how about changin pattern? looks so confused
01:31:352 (2) - 1 gird left

Paranormal
OD+1
01:09:957 (3) - add note
01:20:694 (10) - delete note
02:34:036 (7) - 1 grid up
02:41:930 (1) - delete Finish start of slider
02:49:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about making perfect pentagon?

O.o scary song ;(
but it is nice xD good luck!
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thx for mod UPDATE ^^
OnosakiHito
osu!taiko Paragon
6,812 posts
Joined March 2010
OnosakiHito
requested taiko mod from wmfchris queue~

Generel:
If possible please move the redline to 00:00:246 - because of the taiko diff., since at 00:10:351 - the redline and greenline are messing a bit arounf with the scrollbar. We should avoid, if possible, to put green-, and redlines into one timeing section.

[Taiko]

Oh, I mapped a taiko diff. for this song as well. hehe

You changed the placed from ,,don to kat" to ,,kat to don"{
00:16:667 (14) - don
00:17:299 (15) - kat
00:17:930 (16) - don
00:18:562 (17) - kat
00:21:088 (23,24,25) - same here as before ^
00:24:878 (32) - kat, and then follow the beat as I suggested before ^
}
00:42:878 (141) - kat
00:49:509 (191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201) - this should be mapped on 1/3
00:53:299 (217) - D?
01:36:246 (516,517,518,519,520) - You changed the placed from ,,don to kat" to ,,kat to don" again.
02:01:509 - SV x1,05 shold be here still used. 02:01:825 - put here a the new SV of x0,85
02:01:509 (679) - D
02:02:773 (680,681,682,683,684,685,686) - I would suggest you to have here rather just small don's because they make no nice effect and 02:11:615 (687) - it lowers the effect of this don down.
02:46:667 (900) - move to 02:46:509 -, or delete the note.
03:02:141 - this time line needs to be x1,05 as well.

Ai ai ai... we have here one obvious problem in the taiko map: Kat has been used as main-beat instead of don
This causes some big structur problems for the diff.. I think an example will explain why:

Examples
00:10:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Here you have used don as main beat, which should be normaly kept the whole song, since the song itself contains this beat
00:16:667 (14,15,16,17,18) - but then you are using the controversy case by using kat as main beat and that makes problems like this:
00:41:615 (130,131,132,133) - kdd d <- this dosen't fit anymore well because it dosen't follow the beat anymore which is importand in this song
00:42:246 (135,136,137,138,139,140,141) - same happens here, so it has been tryed to follow more the background music, but this dosen't sounds well at all because of the change of the main-beat.

At least there are some good parts in the song, but you losed in many other parts the control of your own beats.
Overall the map isn't bad, but maybe you should try for your self to make an Oni2 with don as main-beat, to see if this sounds better to you. If it does, you could remap it and give it Katty Pie as update. It's not a must. Just suggesting you to give it a try first.

If you should have question or need a recheck, just contact me.

For now good luck.
Raimon
295 posts
Joined December 2010
Raimon
Thanks onosaki :3 i changed everything and rechecked all diff and changed some dkk/kkd for kdk/ddk/kdd. changed other patterns too.

http://puu.sh/DwWC
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Poggo
thx for mod ^3^

edit: UPDATE :P
Jebok_old
69 posts
Joined May 2011
Jebok_old
Request via my queue!
Sorry for another late mod, this isn't like me :cry:

[Homu's Normal]
00:16:667 (1) - 1 grid down.
00:19:194 (1) - ^
02:16:667 (1) - No new combo
02:17:930 - New combo here instead. You'll see why when you get to the end of the combo...
And I think it should end in this epic spinner like all other difficulties.


[FoxShift's Abnormal]
00:24:526 - No new combo. Put the new combo at 00:24:246 instead.
00:34:667 - Add another repeat. I've seen you done a couple of those 3 and then gap and then slider but this once it doesn't fit, so I suggest repeating it again.
01:18:088 - Better if you add a note here as then you can have double the same pattern and then 2 different ones after, which fits quite nicely.
01:26:457 - New combo
02:32 :141 - Wrong clap placement - its at the start of the (2) not at the end, listen to the beat carefully - its just like at 02:27:088 :D

[Paranormal]
00:12:878 - I think FoxShift was right with his combo patterns of actually making them 4/1s so new combo here.
00:13:509 - No nc
00:15:404 (1) - 1 grid to the right, due to the previous fade of the (2) you can barely see so I am being totally nazi but its very annoying when you actually do spot this ''hey, there was another note there before but this note is like there but its like.......... 1gird away.''
01:09:720 (Whole combo) - Hell no, your breaking the symmetry! Wider the spacing if you have to here, but do put the slider (4) the same Y as (1)
01:28:194 - No nc. Fallow the 4/1 combo pattern?
01:28:667 - New combo here instead.
01:34:667 - No nc
01:34:983 - Nc
01:39:404 (6) - x:476 as you done for the (2) just above it what came earlier on in the combo.
02:38:141 - New combo here
02:38:457 - Instead of here, so remove nc here.

This song is really epic, thanks for mapping this :)
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thank you for mod ^^ correct some places :P
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion
Red = Check this

[Storyboard Related]
- You can decrease the size of the osz by making all these images .jpg. none of them have transparency, so you should save about 2.5MB if you made these all images .jpg. black and white.png can stay though, since they're the one color, .png is most effective.
- Why do you need a flipped hands image? you can horizontally flip an image in the editor.

Before:


After:



[Homu's Normal]
00:46:352 (2) - May as well maintain the same spacing as the previous slider combos. Maybe try something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/362169
01:53:930 (1) - Maybe move this out so it's not slightly under the previous note? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/362171
02:28:983 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Is there a reason these suddenly use different spacing compared to the previous combos?
03:00:878 (3) - Maybe try rounding this out a little bit? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/362177

[FoxShift's Abnormal]
01:10:194 (3,4,5) - (4) is kinda hard to see under the slider. Maybe adjust the combo like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/362867
01:16:036 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is unreadable and no fun at all. I wouldn't really consider this in an Insane. Change please.
01:21:088 (1) - Is hard to see under the previous slider. Please move this note out from under the slider kicker.
02:37:509 (5,6) - Move these out from under (3)

[Paranormal]
No issues that I can see here. It's rather well made for an...... insane.
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Jebok wrote:

[FoxShift's Abnormal]
00:24:526 - No new combo. Put the new combo at 00:24:246 instead. Fixed
00:34:667 - Add another repeat. I've seen you done a couple of those 3 and then gap and then slider but this once it doesn't fit, so I suggest repeating it again.
01:18:088 - Better if you add a note here as then you can have double the same pattern and then 2 different ones after, which fits quite nicely. Fixed
01:26:457 - New combo Fixed
02:32 :141 - Wrong clap placement - its at the start of the (2) not at the end, listen to the beat carefully - its just like at 02:27:088 :D

Azure_Kite wrote:

[FoxShift's Abnormal]
01:10:194 (3,4,5) - (4) is kinda hard to see under the slider. Maybe adjust the combo like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/362867
01:16:036 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is unreadable and no fun at all. I wouldn't really consider this in an Insane. Change please. Fixed
01:21:088 (1) - Is hard to see under the previous slider. Please move this note out from under the slider kicker. Fixed
02:37:509 (5,6) - Move these out from under (3)
http://puu.sh/GxAX

Thanks!
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