Nunnally Lamperouge wrote:

H

00:16:902 (4) - 重新拉一下吧，这里00:15:861 (1,2,3) - 没必要摆成三角，把4完美过渡我觉得比较好，或者3单折返，不要双折返
00:19:503 (1,2) - 考虑重新换个地方吧，感觉这两个是被独立出来的 ok
00:38:231 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 本当萌大奶，拉升角度十分难看 ...
00:43:260 (1,2,3) - DSDS ok
01:35:630 (1) - 开始变DS了，应该没关系吧···
01:55:745 (1,2,1,2) - 拉个左右对称吧 ok
总体感觉HARD不是我熟知的类型，至于能不能DT我是不清楚，但是这个HARD确实是简单暴力，不错！

1. 许多蓝线上的都空了
2. 01:49:166 (3,4,1) - 跟着节奏听的话有点不自然，听起来很怪

1. 01:54:368 - 02:08:068 - 这一段的长滑条有点老图梗，我个人觉得很不美观，而且不舒服;w;

1. 好多白线上的音没加note，四暗刻

Baihe House wrote:

[Lunatic]

1. 许多蓝线上的都空了
2. 01:49:166 (3,4,1) - 跟着节奏听的话有点不自然，听起来很怪

MIX

[Hard]

1. 01:54:368 - 02:08:068 - 这一段的长滑条有点老图梗，我个人觉得很不美观，而且不舒服;w;

MIX

[Normal]

1. 好多白线上的音没加note，四暗刻

MIX




关于BG不是很合理，建议比例采用16:9 或者 4:3 (没记错的话应该就是这样~）
图可以做得美观一点，自由点。 太规整我不喜欢 ;w;

tkcbahamut wrote:

Hi~ From queue~
God, love this music, please be ranked! PLEASE!

[Normal]
00:32:518 (4) - y:242 -> 240
00:59:917 - Add a circle
01:14:831 (2) - Make it a slider, end at red line
01:41:883 (3) -
Can you make this please?

It looks cooler
02:20:206 (3) - Add finish? maybe not
[Lunatic]
01:31:478 (7) - Put it between 6 and 8 refering beat snap if you want, but not stacking with 8 9 10
01:31:998 (11) - Put it like at the end of 01:32:172 (1) , but not stacking with 8 9 10

Sorry for my skill, but hope my suggestions help!
Star shot, hope to see this ranked!

Erina wrote:

hii~ from my mod for voice queue~

对不起，我的中文不太好。。。如果你不懂什么，你可以问我

[Extra Stage]
太难 :3 ←。←

[Lunatic]
AR：8 --> 9, 因为有太多的objects 不改
00:29:744 (8) - 加 NC √
01:46:565 (3,4,5) - 把他放到 x: 16 y: 208, 会跟好看 √

[Hard]
00:39:281 (1) - 把他放到 x: 392 y: 272 √
00:43:270 (1,2,3) - 这个spacing的变化有一点太大。。。把2和3自建的距离变小一点 √
01:08:588 (1) - 这里不用NC √
01:13:096 (2) - 这个slider不好看 √
01:23:501 (4) - 把他变成这个: http://puu.sh/8wxGW.jpg, flow会跟好。 √
01:56:449 (2,1) - 这两个slider不好看因为他们overlap. 0.0

[Normal]
00:54:715 (3) - 把他放到 x: 240 y: 96 √
01:07:027 (5) - 加 NC (因为跟这里一样 - 00:33:732 (1) - ） √
01:40:495 (1) - 把他放到 x: 144 y: 96， 会跟好看 √

Good luck! 现在你要跟我联系因为我要知道你想唱什么 :3 你可以pm我

stormling wrote:

Chinese:
百忙之中,抽出时间mod，细节不谈。
normal偏难，但没关系。hard感觉是hyper难度，可以该成hyper,其它的多难也没关系的
timing没时间测，大概没问题。
最好在歌曲名后面加“（short ver）”,因为这是从原曲剪的。
最后祝你rank成功。

Baidu Translation（English）：
His busy schedule, time mod, details don't talk.
Normal too difficult, but never mind. Hard felt hyper difficulty, can be the hyper, the other is also never mind
Timing no time, probably no problem.
The best in the song name followed by "(short ver)", because it is from the original song shear.
Finally, I wish you a successful rank.

sjoy wrote:

看到外面28FAV点进来只有22FAV莫名的伤感

[Hijiri Byakuren] wrote:

sjoy wrote:

看到外面28FAV点进来只有22FAV莫名的伤感

我觉得更伤感的是我连找谁要泡都不知道= =

sjoy wrote:

其实可以试试找LFJ

[Hijiri Byakuren] wrote:

sjoy wrote:

其实可以试试找LFJ

LFJ是谁？？？？？？？？？？？？

Tsukuyomi wrote:

jonathanlfj wrote:

ok来看看

[General]
http://touhou.wikia.com/wiki/Utsuho_Reiuji/Music 歌名应该是 “Solar Sect of Mystic Wisdom ~ Nuclear Fusion”，把罗马音放到tag里
Normal和Easy的combo colour悲剧了记得修复一下
kiai最好也弄成一样的

[Easy]
00:28:357 (1) - 离spinner太近，删掉然后把00:25:582 (1)拖到这里。记得00:28:877 (2)加NC
00:31:305 (2) - 有点难，拆成这样：

SPOILER

00:40:669 (1) - 去掉NC
01:01:651 (1,2) - 这里因为跟01:00:264 (2)间距问题导致有点难读，改成slider更好一些
01:04:599 (1,2) - 同00:31:305 (2)
01:13:964 (1) - 去NC，而且这里stack更好一些
01:36:333 (3) - blanket再做好一些
01:48:472 - 跳过这个感觉很别扭，可以考虑加个circle
01:54:021 - 同上
02:10:495 (3) - 挪到02:10:322更好打一些
02:16:391 (2,3,4,1) - 这里感觉有点难，看看能不能简化一下

[Normal]
00:14:137 (2,1,2,3,4) - 这里星星能做的更好一些
00:30:784 (7) - 这个note感觉有点多余建议去掉
00:45:698 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 这里整个排版感觉难读，建议你重新摆一下
00:50:553 - 加个note然后这里开始break
01:23:501 (1) - Normal里最好不要用1/4折返，改成1/2吧
01:44:137 (2,3) - 间距没弄好
01:51:073 (2) - 这个移到01:50:900更配音乐一些
02:18:299 (1,1) - 这个尾杀可不讨人喜欢，间距还是遵守为好（然后NC可以去掉）

[Hard]
试试AR7.5
00:03:213 (2,1) - 这里不要stack，会给读00:03:732 (2,3) 造成障碍
00:22:287 (1) - NC去掉
00:27:229 (2) - ctrl+g试试
00:34:079 (1) - 虽然你NC了但是因为之后你没再用过类似的antijump所以让这个玩起来有些别扭，改成普通间距吧
01:12:576 (1,2,3) - 为什么间距突然变小了
01:14:484 (2,1) - 没叠好
01:17:779 (4,5) - 试试x:304 y:224
01:33:385 (2) - 出界了需要往上提一些
01:35:640 (1) - NC去掉
01:53:675 (3,4) - 这里有点难打，把它俩再放近一些
01:56:449 (2) - 间距最好一样
02:09:455 (1,1,2) - 这么摆更好打

SPOILER

02:18:299 (1) - 少放个repeat然后02:18:819这里加个circle更好一些

[Lunatic]
这个打起来比Extra要难。。。AR8读图太勉强了试试AR8.5
00:17:779 (3,4) - 这种打起来切指很别扭，改成triplet要好一些
00:18:299 (6,7) - 然后这个可以上repeat slider
00:40:149 (1,2,1,2,1) - 这里跳得有点太狠了，间距再小一点
00:59:397 (6,7,8,9) - 全是circle有点难读特别是这种AR，这里换成1/4slider吧
01:00:958 (9) - 可以来个NC
01:52:114 (3,4,5,6) - 这种遮挡根本读不清楚，试试这种摆法

SPOILER

01:53:501 (3,4,5,6) - 同上
02:05:466 (1,2,3,4) - 突然从三连改成二连打起来很别扭，用1/4slider更好一些
02:18:472 (1,2,3) - 这种跳留给Extra吧，这里最好不要超过3.5x间距

[Extra]
00:44:831 (1,2,3) - 这里改成这样打起来更连贯

SPOILER

00:58:183 (1) - 去掉NC更好读一些
01:50:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里用这样的节奏更好打一些

SPOILER

01:54:021 (5) - 加NC同01:52:634 (1)
01:57:836 (1,2,3,4) - 这个antijump太坑人了，第一次打就是这里fail的，试试摆成这样

SPOILER

01:59:223 (1,2,3,4) - 同上
02:19:686 (1) - 这里最好不要stack，可以放在x:256 y:320

嗯Extra做的不错，但是其他的diff感觉质量还不到位... 这里先放个star，你再去找两三个资深modder帮你看看Extra以外的diff，搞定了以后再找我recheck一下

1. just say it, the hitsound of sliderticks sound a bit abrupt particularly in lower diffs, how about change it to another one like sound of light drum?
2. the present yellow of combo colour looks too bright and hard to see the reverse arrow under the custom skin.. try that? http://puu.sh/a9vD5/3e33ca78cc.png

1. the present sv looks not friendly enough as an Easy diff especially at 00:31:305 - or 00:38:761 - and so on.. personally i'd prefer to use 0.8 as the sv of the Easy diff with some pattern may confuse some beginners and not that unbefitting as the lowest diff. anyway just my opinion.
2. 00:17:258 (1,2) - long and vertical sliders are always not the best choice. how about to make some changes like that http://puu.sh/a9uwA/4839e76980.jpg
3. 00:32:518 - umm just wondering the slider starting at here would be a bit confused for beginners since the music has no stress here. how about to put the beat 1/2 tick off for a better effect
4. 00:49:859 (5,1,2,3) - as i see you can make blankets here for a neater pattern or just forget the blanket and move the repeat slider(5) up few grids like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1813885
5. 00:57:490 (3,1) - 只是单纯的想吐槽一下。。逼死强迫症。。(? ;w;~
6. 02:20:206 (3) - as the last note of the whole song, i'd prefer to use normal-finish on the tail of the slider for a stronger ending and make people feel the song is truely ended at that point.

1. 细节问题需要自己来修，就举几个例子。另外很多distance都很诡异感觉一会0.9一会1.0的.. 偏差大的地方就关掉snap
2. 00:10:322 (1,2) - try to make them symmetrical? http://puu.sh/a9w2W/963c986d8c.jpg
3. 00:25:582 (1,2,3,4) - i tried to arrange them again and they are looked much better for me, not a big change try it? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1813931
4. 01:18:125 (1,3,4,5) - umm.. http://puu.sh/a9wG3/a1b36c0db5.jpg

1. 00:48:992 (1,2,3,4) - 这里感觉乱乱的.. 不妨试试这样做一下（后面的kick slider是弄成垂直的 可能看不太清 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1817227
2. 01:18:819 (1,3) - 这边也是用ctrl+h好好搞对称一下。。总感觉斜的
3. 01:22:287 (1) - 直的水平的滑条也是前面用太多 而且这里再水平和上面的(4)过于接近，个人建议往下弯一下会很妥 http://puu.sh/aaWIh/e2a07825d2.jpg
4. 01:38:414 (4) - 结尾的锚点再向右边拉一拉 后面黄色的(1)也逆时针旋转下.. 明显不对称阿
5. 01:45:871 (2,1,2,3) - 非要挤在一起..

1. 01:25:582 - 这note下在这里有点奇怪。。既然前面要空拍不如就下在红线比如这种感觉 不过还是看个人喜好吧 http://puu.sh/aaXgc/bc0777323c.jpg 后面重复的地方相同节奏
2. 另外就是stack在一起的连打最好不要太多，虽然editor看起来还好 但实际打起来因为会有stack leniency所以安排不好就会感觉很凌乱.. 不如手动的按一定的spacing(可以小一些比如0.4或0.5但一定不要太小 L的话这里改进一些可能会整体效果好一些

Strawberry wrote:

[General]

1. just say it, the hitsound of sliderticks sound a bit abrupt particularly in lower diffs, how about change it to another one like sound of light drum?
2. the present yellow of combo colour looks too bright and hard to see the reverse arrow under the custom skin.. try that? http://puu.sh/a9vD5/3e33ca78cc.png

[Easy]

1. the present sv looks not friendly enough as an Easy diff especially at 00:31:305 - or 00:38:761 - and so on.. personally i'd prefer to use 0.8 as the sv of the Easy diff with some pattern may confuse some beginners and not that unbefitting as the lowest diff. anyway just my opinion.
2. 00:17:258 (1,2) - long and vertical sliders are always not the best choice. how about to make some changes like that http://puu.sh/a9uwA/4839e76980.jpg
3. 00:32:518 - umm just wondering the slider starting at here would be a bit confused for beginners since the music has no stress here. how about to put the beat 1/2 tick off for a better effect
4. 00:49:859 (5,1,2,3) - as i see you can make blankets here for a neater pattern or just forget the blanket and move the repeat slider(5) up few grids like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1813885
5. 00:57:490 (3,1) - 只是单纯的想吐槽一下。。逼死强迫症。。(? ;w;~
6. 02:20:206 (3) - as the last note of the whole song, i'd prefer to use normal-finish on the tail of the slider for a stronger ending and make people feel the song is truely ended at that point.

[Normal]

1. 细节问题需要自己来修，就举几个例子。另外很多distance都很诡异感觉一会0.9一会1.0的.. 偏差大的地方就关掉snap
2. 00:10:322 (1,2) - try to make them symmetrical? http://puu.sh/a9w2W/963c986d8c.jpg
3. 00:25:582 (1,2,3,4) - i tried to arrange them again and they are looked much better for me, not a big change try it? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1813931
4. 01:18:125 (1,3,4,5) - umm.. http://puu.sh/a9wG3/a1b36c0db5.jpg

先到这.. 滚去睡觉一会起来看球..

Strawberry wrote:

[Lunatic]

1. 01:25:582 - 这note下在这里有点奇怪。。既然前面要空拍不如就下在红线比如这种感觉 不过还是看个人喜好吧 http://puu.sh/aaXgc/bc0777323c.jpg 后面重复的地方相同节奏 除了这个 其他基本都改了

Heatherfield wrote:

aiaiclala fans club presents
#100 kd lol
All of these are just suggestions.
.

Nwolf wrote:

You might want to set 01:46:044 - as preview point as normally it is supposed to be the main or strongest part of the song (which is here)

wonders wrote:

迟了好多天，抱歉~

[Extra]
没有错误，但也没有趣味，作图的时候手脚没有放开，技巧也不够，所以给个中评吧。

00:02:206 这里带个红点吧
00:08:935 距离拉开
00:18:646 刚在附近转了一圈，不要再转了吧，要不就把前面的改了?
00:28:010 这里这么适合转的音乐却叠起来了
00:28:877 这里适合空拍
01:26:969 不舒服
01:43:270-01:44:675 试试这样？http://puu.sh/aCVYo/bb217d7a01.jpg、
00:25:466 http://puu.sh/aCWdg/d308dee107.jpg?
后面节奏下的不错

[lunatic]
偏简单了一点
01:23:848-01:31:988 这段好怪,改掉

[Hard]
00:08:414 节奏错误,先circle,再slider
01:13:964 和前面一个贴的太近了

[Normal]
01:21:767 1/4 slider

[Easy]
nothing

OnosakiHito wrote:

Thank you for your patience Hijiri. Finished Mzukashii and updated Oni. Gonna ask imidiatelly for some mods.
This time I made a bit harder Muzukashii than usual.

Downloads: http://puu.sh/aEaKR/a1d80b51c9.7z

Have one more star from me.

jonathanlfj wrote:

no kd
你忘了把tag改成罗马音了

[Normal]
02:10:669 (1) - 我还是觉得这些折返很难打，改成两个1/2滑条吧
02:17:605 (1,2) - 改成这样也行

[Lunatic]
00:12:923 (1) - 这里其实不用NC，或者改成在00:12:750 (5) 放
00:20:553 (5,6) - 一直觉得这里打起来有些别扭，改成折返滑条？
01:20:553 (2,3,1) - 这个跳的角度有点难打，弄成星形的话会好很多
01:45:351 (1,2,3,4) - 这里用跳的话更符合气氛一些

差不多就这些了其他diff没啥问题

Nwolf wrote:

SPOILER

woof short mod inc

[Oni's Ono]

00:00:261 (1) - Change to big kat to emphasis the crash in drums more. Repeat for all the other similar kats like 00:00:747 (1) - Oh, good idea. Applied.
01:04:513 (1,1) - Either delete the kat and change the don to big don for consistency across the kiai OR 01:10:062 - Add a don here and change the big kat to small for consistency with 00:36:767 (1,1) - Oh, you are right. Applied first suggetsion.
01:52:374 (3) - Somehow prefer this note to be 01:52:201 - here because.. triple triplet *hides* True.

[Ono's Muzukashii]

00:00:261 (1) - Maybe apply the finisher suggestion from Oni here too? Applied for now. Let's see what others say.
00:10:842 - Forgot don here, previously it was an extra don every 2nd time. Yes.


wee~

OnosakiHito wrote:

Nwolf wrote:

SPOILER

woof short mod inc

[Oni's Ono]

00:00:261 (1) - Change to big kat to emphasis the crash in drums more. Repeat for all the other similar kats like 00:00:747 (1) - Oh, good idea. Applied.
01:04:513 (1,1) - Either delete the kat and change the don to big don for consistency across the kiai OR 01:10:062 - Add a don here and change the big kat to small for consistency with 00:36:767 (1,1) - Oh, you are right. Applied first suggetsion.
01:52:374 (3) - Somehow prefer this note to be 01:52:201 - here because.. triple triplet *hides* True.

[Ono's Muzukashii]

00:00:261 (1) - Maybe apply the finisher suggestion from Oni here too? Applied for now. Let's see what others say.
00:10:842 - Forgot don here, previously it was an extra don every 2nd time. Yes.


wee~

Short but useful. Thank you for modding!
Update: http://puu.sh/aNSe3/a5100a43b8.7z

Tuxxy wrote:

SPOILER

I'm here, bby.

Love this song so much.

Focusing on hitsounding: there seems to be a scarcity of kats.

Ono's Shcmexy Muzu

00:00:585 d-k and the one after as well
00:03:732 set out like http://puu.sh/aO5ih/2edf98f63f.jpg Doublets fit here really well.
00:05:120 kat? I want to keep it simple. not making harder.

01:02:172 (2,3) kat This was rather intensional, so I have a bigger impact with 01:03:906 (1) -
01:17:779 (2,1) kat Possible. Well need to think about it.
01:34:599 kat Intentional. Want to keep the 1/3 easy.
01:43:790 kat If I do so, finisher at 01:45:351 (1) - would be less emphasized.
01:44:831 kat ^
01:46:218 d-d-k Actually a good idea, but as you can see, I have simple patterns here. Else it would become to hard.
01:46:565 d-d-d ^

01:54:021 kat This goes against the patterns I have made with the dons.
02:01:305 k-d-d-d-k Such a pattern is not allowed in a Muzukashii
02:01:998 ^ ^