00:56:274 (1) - NC?

00:05:570 (4) - RNC? cuz same as before
00:57:542 (1) - why don't you try make like this? cuz that is awkward for song

01:09:795 - unused inherited point

00:33:457 (3) - why don't you try make like this?

02:21:626 (6) - add Finish at tail?

00:47:823 (1,2) - why don't you try make like this? cuz that's too confusion

02:15:711 - add a note?

00:03:880 (1,4) - 我觉得吧这两个应该向右面移动一点点打起来会舒服点，看起来也好点
00:27:436 (2) - 小形状调整
00:32:190 (6) - 像这样向左下移动下会不会好点？
01:20:676 (3) - 这个也是小形状调整
01:56:697 (5) - 我觉得吧放在这里比较好，你觉得呢？
02:01:556 (5) - 这个也是向左下移动一点

01:25:640 (3) - 我强迫症了~这个向上一点点点点
哎你的hard我永远找不吃什么东西。。。

4.5星normal？？！！
00:04:725 (3) - 这个可以转一下，逆时针section center 15°
02:23:316 (2,3,4,5) - 我觉得吧摆放的圆一些会好看点，你觉得呢？

Hey Roddie~ whats up!~ long time no see~! and here's my mod~!
02:20:992 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - u want to make a pentagon? if so, you may wanna adjust the shape of 4 5 6 7 8 first and then rearrange 2 and 3. like this maybe?
others are good

没发现什么问题~！然后诡异形状拉条是我的最爱~

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//Storyboard Sound Samples

18:50 tutuhaha: : hi lissette~do you have time to irc recheck now ?
19:00 Lissette: : so you keep the Fate name diff?
19:01 tutuhaha: : ...I like that nameOrz
19:01 Lissette: : add to creators words, something like Fate: Insane
19:01 Lissette: : blah blah
19:02 tutuhaha: : :O~ ok
19:03 Lissette: : Fate: 00:22:260 (6) - imo jump would fit better if is from 6 to 00:22:471 (1) -
19:04 tutuhaha: : :O
19:04 tutuhaha: : it is ok~i feeling good so no change sorry =_=...
19:06 Lissette: : really?
19:06 tutuhaha: : yes i like jump like this ;_;
19:06 Lissette: : i mean the jump from 5 to 6
19:06 Lissette: : is kinda weird
19:06 Lissette: : and the strong sound here 00:22:471 (1) - calls for a jump
19:06 Lissette: : at least i think like that
19:06 tutuhaha: : :O
19:07 tutuhaha: : hummmmm
19:07 tutuhaha: : ok
19:07 tutuhaha: : change
19:07 tutuhaha: : wow feeling better
19:07 tutuhaha: : ok change <D!
19:08 Lissette: : icecream!
19:08 Lissette: : anyways 01:47:401 (2) - no change here?
19:09 tutuhaha: : no, i think is ok :O
19:10 Lissette: : why>
19:10 Lissette: : ?
19:11 tutuhaha: : make some different space can be more fun i think
19:11 Lissette: : thats true, but that not a very good why to do it
19:11 Lissette: : looks ilke wrong spacing
19:11 tutuhaha: : :O...
19:12 Lissette: : i mean, a very good way*
19:13 tutuhaha: : I have some very good player friends and they like some space different way in the map
19:15 tutuhaha: : and this song Rhythm can make sure player will not feel this is a "wrong spacing"
19:16 Lissette: : well lets get going
19:16 tutuhaha: : =V=
19:18 Lissette: : 02:39:373 - a stream would fit here
19:18 Lissette: : like following the drums in this combo
19:19 Lissette: : you only put triplets, and feels kinda empty
19:19 Lissette: : its up to you
19:20 tutuhaha: : :O...it can not make you feeling more fun in this part?
19:21 Lissette: : i just feel it empty D:
19:21 tutuhaha: : D:...
19:22 tutuhaha: : OK change
19:25 Lissette: : Hard 01:59:021 (1) - do the same you did with the other like this
19:26 tutuhaha: : OK fix
19:28 Lissette: : so i could accept not adding another break on Hard and Fate, since they have some kind of a "break" at
19:28 Lissette: : 01:51:204 -
19:29 Lissette: : player could rest, etc
19:29 Lissette: : but normal?
19:29 Lissette: : no another break around the middle?
19:30 tutuhaha: : :O you mean i need delete 01:51:204 (2,3,4) - and add break？
19:31 Lissette: : i mean, Normal diff should have another breaktime around the middle of the song
19:31 Lissette: : like you did on Easy diff
19:31 tutuhaha: : :O
19:31 Lissette: : also i still think this Normal's slider velocity is too high
19:32 Lissette: : maybe you could get a second opinion about that
19:32 tutuhaha: : OK ADD
19:32 tutuhaha: : roddie and me are all think this is a normal “Normal diff”
19:33 tutuhaha: : rhythm in normal is easy enough so it is not big problem
19:40 Lissette: : sorry
19:40 Lissette: : I have to go now D:
19:41 Lissette: : Ill continue later maybe
19:41 tutuhaha: : :O
19:41 tutuhaha: : ok
19:41 Lissette: : also sorry for the late reply, kinda busy now
19:41 tutuhaha: : savelog first
19:41 tutuhaha: : wwww is ok