Katakiri Rekka - Get The Regret Over

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NewRulerNA
hi

[General]

"alicesoft"をtagに追加

[Determination]
ApprovalとするならばODは8にしてしまっても良いように思えます

00:14:753 - なぜここの緑線がデフォルトのヒットサウンド?
normal-sliderslide.wavを使っているのでカスタムにするべきなのではないでしょうか

00:15:897 - この緑線の必要性は?
00:32:931 - ^

00:46:533 (2) - 1~2grid程度下に移動?
00:45:897 (1) の延長線上に綺麗に配置できていないように思えました

01:17:168 (3,4,1) - (3)のスライダーから(4,1)と綺麗に一直線に並んでおらず、私には汚く思えました
(3)のスライダーの傾きを調節してみては?

01:20:092 (3) - このスライダーに1/6を使った理由はなぜ?
どこの音を拾ったのか私には分からず、また01:20:092 (3,4) の部分だけが極端に難易度が上がるという2つの理由から1/4のスライダーでここは作っていくほうが良いように思えます

01:21:617 (3,4) - (4)が延長線上に綺麗に置かれていないように思えました
サークルをx184 y133に置くと綺麗に見えるのではないでしょうか?

02:02:295 - 同タイミングに緑線が2つありUnrankableです

02:33:312 (3) - 01:20:092 (3)と同じ

02:34:965 - この緑線の必要性は?
04:44:880 - ^

04:48:948 - この緑線はスピナー終了にあわせて04:49:075で良いのでは?

gl
Topic Starter
rui

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi

[General]

"alicesoft"をtagに追加 ok

[Determination]
ApprovalとするならばODは8にしてしまっても良いように思えます 保留で

00:14:753 - なぜここの緑線がデフォルトのヒットサウンド? 
normal-sliderslide.wavを使っているのでカスタムにするべきなのではないでしょうか この後のスライダーのtickは鳴らした方がいいと思ったので

00:15:897 - この緑線の必要性は? ないですね消し忘れ
00:32:931 - ^ ^

00:46:533 (2) - 1~2grid程度下に移動? ok
00:45:897 (1) の延長線上に綺麗に配置できていないように思えました ok

01:17:168 (3,4,1) - (3)のスライダーから(4,1)と綺麗に一直線に並んでおらず、私には汚く思えました
(3)のスライダーの傾きを調節してみては?ok

01:20:092 (3) - このスライダーに1/6を使った理由はなぜ?
どこの音を拾ったのか私には分からず、また01:20:092 (3,4) の部分だけが極端に難易度が上がるという2つの理由から1/4のスライダーでここは作っていくほうが良いように思えます 私には01:20:092 ~ 01:20:346の間で4回音がなっているように感じます。なのでやっぱり1/6であってると私は思います

01:21:617 (3,4) - (4)が延長線上に綺麗に置かれていないように思えました
サークルをx184 y133に置くと綺麗に見えるのではないでしょうか? ok

02:02:295 - 同タイミングに緑線が2つありUnrankableです 消した

02:33:312 (3) - 01:20:092 (3)と同じ

02:34:965 - この緑線の必要性は? 消し忘れ
04:44:880 - ^ ^

04:48:948 - この緑線はスピナー終了にあわせて04:49:075で良いのでは? ok

gl
NewRulerN mod ありがとうございました
Fight69
Hi !

[General]


Is your map finished ? It's still in the WIP forum lol
Don't forget to select "Pending" when uploading your map.

Use 1.5s for the Lead-In, 1s is a bit too short.

[Determination]

Well, your combos placement seems to be a bit random, there is a lot of "one circle combo" for no reason too...
Also, the Determination difficulty is really, really hard.
I know it's for approval, but don't you think it's a bit too much ? Probably most players can't clear it (like me).
I recommend you to make at least one easier diff, at least a standard Insane or Hard to make this map playable by more people.

00:39:795 (1) - No new combo
00:44:245 (1) - No new combo
00:54:033 (1) - No new combo
01:03:821 (1) - Watch out, it's a bit off-screen
01:14:753 (1) - No new combo
01:32:677 (1) - No new combo
01:36:872 (9) - New combo
01:57:465 (1) - No new combo
02:07:253 (1) - No new combo
02:10:939 (3) - This slider is a bit off-screen, behind the hp bar
02:16:151 (9) - New combo
02:16:278 (1) - No new combo
02:17:041 (1) - No new combo
02:45:007 (1) - No new combo
02:45:897 (1) - No new combo
02:51:999 (1) - No new combo
03:32:931 (1) - This circle is a bit too high too
03:48:058 (1) - No new combo
04:05:473 (5) - Another off-screen circle

To be honest, I don't really like this map, sorry :/
Good luck !
Topic Starter
rui

Fight69 wrote:

Hi !

[General]


Is your map finished ? It's still in the WIP forum lol
Don't forget to select "Pending" when uploading your map. I can't move Pending. Because this map have one diff only ><

Use 1.5s for the Lead-In, 1s is a bit too short. fixed

[Determination]

Well, your combos placement seems to be a bit random, there is a lot of "one circle combo" for no reason too... I think
Also, the Determination difficulty is really, really hard. I thought newcombo is easy to understand the difference rhythm (1/6, slowly slider etc...). but it was wrong. I deleted new combo
I know it's for approval, but don't you think it's a bit too much ? Probably most players can't clear it (like me).
I recommend you to make at least one easier diff, at least a standard Insane or Hard to make this map playable by more people. I don't think. This map is so difficult for most players but only one diff http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37292

00:39:795 (1) - No new combo ok
00:44:245 (1) - No new combo ok
00:54:033 (1) - No new combo ok
01:03:821 (1) - Watch out, it's a bit off-screen nope

01:14:753 (1) - No new combo ok
01:32:677 (1) - No new combo ok
01:36:872 (9) - New combo ok
01:57:465 (1) - No new combo ok
02:07:253 (1) - No new combo ok
02:10:939 (3) - This slider is a bit off-screen, behind the hp bar ok
02:16:151 (9) - New combo ok
02:16:278 (1) - No new combo ok
02:17:041 (1) - No new combo ok
02:45:007 (1) - No new combo ok
02:45:897 (1) - No new combo ok
02:51:999 (1) - No new combo ok
03:32:931 (1) - This circle is a bit too high too ok
03:48:058 (1) - No new combo ok
04:05:473 (5) - Another off-screen circle nope

To be honest, I don't really like this map, sorry :/ :(
Good luck !
Thank you mod Fight69
Gabe

rui wrote:

Fight69 wrote:

Hi !
Is your map finished ? It's still in the WIP forum lol
Don't forget to select "Pending" when uploading your map. I can't move Pending. Because this map have one diff only ><
If you're not planning on adding more difficulty, move it to pending, even if you have only one difficulty.

Determination

00:03:185 - Delete the slider and add a circle at 00:03:312. Do the same for 00:05:219.
00:40:431 - Add a clap here to keep the consistency.

That's all I have... Sorry for the little mod.
Good luck ~
Topic Starter
rui

Gabe wrote:

If you're not planning on adding more difficulty, move it to pending, even if you have only one difficulty. I can't move to pending :< http://puu.sh/ExbT

Determination

00:03:185 - Delete the slider and add a circle at 00:03:312. Do the same for 00:05:219. fixed, 00:05:219 move note
00:40:431 - Add a clap here to keep the consistency. fixed


That's all I have... Sorry for the little mod.
Good luck ~
Thank you mod Gabe :3
Gabe
Ask a BAT to move it to Pending.
DNR

Gabe wrote:

Ask a BAT to move it to Pending.
THE DIFF:
00:22:507 (10) - Really random jump o3o
00:45:897 (1) - Weird slider ;~;. Probably just make it a normal arc
00:49:075 (1) - Maybe make look more like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/356657
01:20:346 (4,5,6,7) - This plays kind of weird o-o. I think (3) might be the issue here
01:50:092 (2) - Make this curve more notable
01:53:778 (3) - ^
02:16:024 (8) - Touches HP bar
02:33:567 (4,5,6,7) - Same as before
03:29:499 (3) - MAke this into a pretty triangle shape with (1) and (2)?
04:03:185 (10) - Add NC

desu~
Topic Starter
rui

CDFA wrote:

Gabe wrote:

Ask a BAT to move it to Pending.
moved

THE DIFF:
00:22:507 (10) - Really random jump o3o no fixed
00:45:897 (1) - Weird slider ;~;. Probably just make it a normal arc fixed?
00:49:075 (1) - Maybe make look more like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/356657 nice better good imo
01:20:346 (4,5,6,7) - This plays kind of weird o-o. I think (3) might be the issue here difficult this part is difficult. but it is not obstacle to the play imo...
01:50:092 (2) - Make this curve more notable fixed
01:53:778 (3) - ^ fixed
02:16:024 (8) - Touches HP bar fixed
02:33:567 (4,5,6,7) - Same as before
03:29:499 (3) - MAke this into a pretty triangle shape with (1) and (2)? no fixed
04:03:185 (10) - Add NC fixed

desu~
Thank you mod CDFA ;)
[Luxord]
Hello! From my Queue

[General]
Maybe get a bigger picture? o: 1024x768 is nice o:

[Determination]
02:26:193 (1,2,3,4) - Make thsi stream with less distance :c it's hard to notice that is a stream
02:53:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Impossibru!! :c Hard to read D:
03:05:346 - Inherited Point at 10% Volume
03:13:609 - Make this 30% and then normal
04:45:092 (1) - Fade out and finish with 10% Volume - 5% is unrankable I think :c


The map is AWESOME *-*!

Good luck! :3
Topic Starter
rui

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello! From my Queue

[General]
Maybe get a bigger picture? o: 1024x768 is nice o: no changed

[Determination]
02:26:193 (1,2,3,4) - Make thsi stream with less distance :c it's hard to notice that is a stream no fixed. Those note is wide jump. same to 01:12:973 (1,2,3,4,1) -
02:53:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Impossibru!! :c Hard to read D: changed slider jump
03:05:346 - Inherited Point at 10% Volume changed 40% Volume. 10% Volume is too small imo
03:13:609 - Make this 30% and then normal Turning up the volume is nice idea. 50% Volume
04:45:092 (1) - Fade out and finish with 10% Volume - 5% is unrankable I think :c ok, changed


The map is AWESOME *-*! Thank you :3

Good luck! :3
Thank you mod KiyoshiX101 :)
pieguyn
hi, free mod here cause I love this song :)

02:39:668 - add note? this pause confused me a little bit :?
03:19:584 (6) - (nazi) move 2nd and 3rd points down 1 grid so it blankets (5) better? http://puu.sh/M1uK
03:53:016 (4,5) - space this like the others? might look a bit better IMO
03:59:117 (6) - end this 1/4 later?
04:22:634 (5) - add NC to emphasize vocal?

nice map, good luck =w=
Topic Starter
rui

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi, free mod here cause I love this song :)Yay! :)

02:39:668 - add note? this pause confused me a little bit :?no fixed
03:19:584 (6) - (nazi) move 2nd and 3rd points down 1 grid so it blankets (5) better? http://puu.sh/M1uK ok
03:53:016 (4,5) - space this like the others? might look a bit better IMO ok
03:59:117 (6) - end this 1/4 later? ok
04:22:634 (5) - add NC to emphasize vocal? ok

nice map, good luck =w=
Thank you mod & star pieguy1372 >w</
Holoaz
Thank you for request

[Determination]
全体的にspacingに統一が無いのでTiming読み辛いと思います
まぁぶっちゃけAppなんて何でもアリっちゃアリなんで変えなくても大丈夫だとは思いますが・・・

これを変えてしまうとかなり大きな変更になるので他の事は保留で

大まかなことしか言えなくて申し訳ない

nice map!
Topic Starter
rui
Appのつもりで作ったからだいぶ自由に作っているのは自覚しています
distanceはだいぶバラバラだけどAutoのカーソルがそこまで変な動きをしないようにしたつもりだから大丈夫だと思う・・・
もう一度見直して気になったところはdistance直しました
だけど基本的にこの譜面はこの様なスタイルでやっていこうと思います
Holoazさんありがとうございました
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]
Audio Lead-In is not enough ,try to extend a bit. (2000ms)


[Determination]
00:22:507 (10) - ctrl+r
00:22:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - why so close?.. I think that it is 1/8 stream at the first time.
04:36:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^
00:49:838 (2) - add a note here
01:26:448 (5) - ^
02:23:397 (2) - 2 grids left
02:35:600 (2) - move to x:156 y:112 (best place imo)
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No big problems :3
Great Mapset
:D Good Luck
Topic Starter
rui

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]
Audio Lead-In is not enough ,try to extend a bit. (2000ms) changed


[Determination]
00:22:507 (10) - ctrl+r nope
00:22:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - why so close?.. I think that it is 1/8 stream at the first time. This stream is brake for flow of next note. changed 1/8 first note.
04:36:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ ^
00:49:838 (2) - add a note here ok
01:26:448 (5) - ^ ok
02:23:397 (2) - 2 grids left ok
02:35:600 (2) - move to x:156 y:112 (best place imo) I think too
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No big problems :3
Great Mapset
:D Good Luck
Snowy Dream thank you mod
Scarlet Devil
Short mod~

The BG is unrankable, change it to 1024x768
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