wantuole wrote:

一听就先想到了哲学。我已经坏掉了

SPOILER

这是我的mod
[Ts8zs' Easy]
00:20:595 - 好多clap，这里也加上把
00:58:195 (1,3) - 开头的copy最容易被人体验出来，1，3也竖起来把。会感觉不同(我就经常那么干)
01:18:995 (2) - 完全在中间会更好，不只是一个slider的开头
[Flask's Normal]
00:28:995 (1) - 结尾+finish
00:35:395 (4) - 是刻意的放在最中间？(是的话没对齐)。看起来没问题，玩起来给我这个4向右移动的不舒适感，向左移动点或者ctrl+r平行3
01:13:795 (4) - 找个更好的位子把，孤零零的一个回跳,可以改成01:16:995 (7,1)这样的两个slider
[hard]
00:18:995 (8,9) - ctrl+r
00:26:195 (1) - 前面6,7,8,9已经是一个不错5角星，奇怪的一个ds出现个1 浪费了不错的梗
00:46:795 (6) - 扔到00:47:795 (5)位子叠加?,移动路线太不顺手了 把5角星从2或3的位子开始转
00:48:995 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 依旧奇怪的移动路线，改变了三次鼠标方向，00:49:995 (7,1) - ctrl+r
01:10:995 (1,2) - 比之前的好点，但是还是好明显的copy痕迹(旋转下就看不出了，我也经常那么干的)
[Collab]
good jb
01:34:195 (5) - 奇怪的回跳,去和2,3,4做个四边形啊，刚好6是升调 多个不错的跳(越到结尾越要用心,给人印象最深刻)

谢mod:3

T_T

Flask wrote:

T_T

拉出来了 周末更新:3

現在title是不是該改成Yasuo-P啊 / \

Excellent map, keep it up n 3 n ~

Rin Okumura x3 wrote:

Excellent map, keep it up n 3 n ~

thank you :3

wantuole wrote:

一听就先想到了哲学。我已经坏掉了

SPOILER

[Flask's Normal]
00:28:995 (1) - 结尾+finish 略吵 不適合
00:35:395 (4) - 是刻意的放在最中间？(是的话没对齐)。看起来没问题，玩起来给我这个4向右移动的不舒适感，向左移动点或者ctrl+r平行3 不是刻意的 也沒太大問題 所以不修改
01:13:795 (4) - 找个更好的位子把，孤零零的一个回跳,可以改成01:16:995 (7,1)这样的两个slider 沒有太大的必要就是

謝

Normal

先留上，等回复www

歌曲总体声音大，音效40%的话有些小H&I

Hard


Insane




真不知道为啥你们的跳安排的那么好，求解OTZ.....

From my mod queue!

[Geral]

Great map
I like yours Hitsounds sytle^^

i did my best to mod

[Collab]

01:09:195 (8) - A circle here instead of a slider make smore sense to me IMO
01:12:595 (1) - NC here because white tick, and song feels like a new melody, makes sense a NC to me
01:15:795 (1) - NC here for the same reasons
01:15:795 - Hitsound volume 60% here why? More feeling xD
01:16:595 - Back to 50% volume here
01:26:195 (9) - its fine! but maybe make the slider end 01:26:395? and add circle or slider in 01:26:595?
01:25:395 - Its fine! but if was me i change a little just to put a new combo new here
01:31:795 - NC here?
01:34:995 - hitsounds volume 70% for help player feel the spacing

[Hard]

00:14:995 (1) - New combo in my opinion. I think not wrong your combo colors (your style) but i gonna leave here my
suggestion about the New combos.
00:18:195 (1) - New combo
00:24:595 (1) - New combo
00:35:795 - add hitsounds volume to 60 - 65%?
00:37:395 - back to 55% volume
01:04:395 (7) - this circle dont get a BIG overlap because of 01:03:595 (5)?
Put 01:05:195 (2) in same placement of 01:05:995 (4)
01:09:395 (5) - New combo
01:18:995 (4) - New combo here? And remove new combo here 01:19:795 (1) ?
01:20:595 (1) - 00:35:795 - add hitsounds volume to 60 - 65%?
01:22:195 (4) - back to 55% volume
01:34:996 - hitsounds volume 65% for help player feel the spacing

[Flask's Normal]

00:28:595 (4,1) - Line them, same you did in 00:25:395 (5,1)
00:28:995 (1) - start the slider in center GRID line (vertical line)
00:29:795 (2) - in line with the end of the slider 00:28:995 (1). Why?? for space between 00:29:795 (2,1) be equal as 00:30:195 (3,1).
(ofc you need to fix the spacing in 00:30:195 (3) after that)
00:31:795 (2) - this slider seems weird comparative to 00:30:995 (1)
00:43:795 (1) - New combo Imo
01:10:595 (1) - IN my opinion a NC here, and remove new combo here 01:11:795 (2)
01:25:395 (1) - new combo

[Ts8zs's Easy]

00:46:995 (2,3) - this is how you have http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/455931. THis is how i think it should be http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/455933
01:30:195 (1) - this slider 1 grid up?
01:31:795 (2) - This sldier 1 grid up?
01:31:795 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/455937 make like this again

R e d wrote:

[Flask's Normal]

00:28:595 (4,1) - Line them, same you did in 00:25:395 (5,1) Nope
00:28:995 (1) - start the slider in center GRID line (vertical line) ^
00:29:795 (2) - in line with the end of the slider 00:28:995 (1). Why?? for space between 00:29:795 (2,1) be equal as 00:30:195 (3,1).
(ofc you need to fix the spacing in 00:30:195 (3) after that) That's nothing with the spacing, and I think it's good now. Nope
00:31:795 (2) - this slider seems weird comparative to 00:30:995 (1) Nothing~~
00:43:795 (1) - New combo Imo no
01:10:595 (1) - IN my opinion a NC here, and remove new combo here 01:11:795 (2) k
01:25:395 (1) - new combono

@raririn: 01:10:595 (4,1) - 幫我switch nc 就不附code了

changed some and uploaded~
too lazy to reply , orz

From my queue

[Easy]

1. 00:18:195 (4) - can you just stick to use 3-hit slider? sudden 4-hit slider would be confusing for noob players
2. 00:34:195 (2) - ^
3. 01:02:995 (4) - ^
4. 01:12:595 (2) - 1grid right, move it to center
5. 01:15:795 (4) - well 2 grid left ^
6. 01:18:995 (2) - maybe you know what i'll mention with it
7. 01:34:995 (4) - your copying style is too boring, remove the arrow and add a 2/1 slider for better mood instead

[Normal]

1. 00:26:995 (2,3,4) - add finish instead, whistle is not that strong to empgasize the music imo
2. 00:28:995 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^ for same points, or at least finish at 00:29:395 - . because you added at 00:26:195 -
3. 00:32:595 - use soft finish here or increase the volume
4. 00:38:995 - ^
5. 01:10:595 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as 00:26:995 (2,3,4) - and 00:28:995 (1,2,3,1,2) -
6. 01:17:395 (1) - you know what i'll mention with it
7. 01:35:795 (7) - add a 2/1 slider from here or 1/1 with an arrow

[Hard]

1. 00:15:795 (8) - 1grid left,up for perfect stack
2. 00:18:995 (8) - it's a bit hard for a Hard diff, ctrl+g plz
3. 00:19:395 (9) - ^, if you did
4. 00:30:195 - no sound here? add at least clap but i recommend to add finish here
5. 00:36:995 - whistle
6. 00:38:195 - ^
7. 01:10:795 (9) - move it to (360,244), keep ur distance till 01:10:995 (1) - . and overlapped note sucks
8. 01:21:795 - whistle
9. 01:22:195 (4) - whistle for head and body
10. 01:33:795 (3) - remove clap from arrow, add at tail

[Collab]

1. 00:38:195 (5) - whistle
2. 01:22:995 (11) - ^

Good luck with rank

?结尾为可考虑
*结尾为强烈建议

[General]
标出collab哪部分是谁做的(例如xx:xx:xxx-xx:xx:xxx by xxx)
虽然我知道哪部分是谁做的,但其他人第一眼看下来可能会搞混

[Ts8zs'Easy]
00:18:195 (4) - 来回4次打起来不是很舒服...
01:02:995 (4) - ^
01:18:995 (2) - ^

[Flask's Normal]
OD4→3
00:35:395 (4) - 放左下好点
00:35:795 (1) - whistle
00:48:995 (2,3) - 间距问题,3拉远点
01:01:795 (2) - 尾巴漏了clap
01:35:795 (7) - 用soft的finish

[Hard]
HP6→5
00:18:595 (7) - 尾巴漏clap
00:29:395 (3) - ^
00:37:395 (4) - 尾巴的finish换成whistle
01:10:995 (1) - 间距?
01:35:795 (3) - 用soft的finish

[Collab]
音效听起来好乱@ @
统一一下2/4clap吧

00:20:195 (3) - 蓝线停，白线加个note?
00:38:195 (5) - whistle
01:22:995 (11) - ^
01:35:795 (3) - 用soft的finish

Mod Request from my queue~ <3

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[bx1989's Taiko]

00:02:995 - k
00:05:995 - k

[Lia's Taiko]

00:22:795 - k

sorry i just can found this...

raririn大>.<
極短mod(?) go~~~
collab
這圖打起來很舒服,因為OD是6的緣故,所以1pc差点ss了...
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474578
00:10:595 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474580 試試這樣放?
00:20:195 (3) - 我總覺得這slider放得怪怪的...試試用1/2的代替
00:35:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - 放直一点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474581
00:38:195 (5) - clap比whistle好一点...如果保留whistle,建議40%

給力好圖
good luck

mintong89 wrote:

[Lia's Taiko]

00:22:795 - k - done

thx for modding ~

update ~ http://puu.sh/1kt8L

and new BG ~ http://puu.sh/1kt8U

Hi

[General]
You must change the Artist. Since the Guideline got changed, the Maker (Yasuo-P) must be set as Artist (and add Hatsune Miku as Tags).

[bx1989's Taiko]
00:00:595 - Set the Volume of the red Line at 85%.
00:00:595 (1) - D
00:02:995 (1) - k
00:29:795 - Remove this green Line.
00:30:158 - ^
00:53:595 (1) - k
01:15:595 (3) - d
01:15:155 - Remove the green Lines here.
01:17:195 - The Kiai comes very sudden, start it at 01:23:795.
01:23:795 (1) - D
01:23:895 (2) - Remove it.
01:26:295 (2) - Remove it, the long stream isn't neccessary and this d sounds too much.
01:28:595 - Remove the three green Lines here, they are unused (and the Kiai Flash is not rankable)
01:34:295 (3) - Same like 01:26:295 (2).
01:34:495 (2) - ^

[Lia's Taiko]
Please remove all the green Lines except the ones for the Kiai. (So keep 00:38:995 - 00:51:395 - 01:23:795 and 01:35:795)
00:00:595 - Change the Volume at 80% for the same Sound Volume.
00:00:595 (1) - D
00:36:695 - Circle with k
00:36:795 (1) - k
00:50:595 (1) - k
00:51:395 - Change the Volume at 80% for holding the same Sound Volume.
01:22:595 (3) - k

Nice Taiko Diffs
Good Luck ^^

Stefan wrote:

[Lia's Taiko]
Please remove all the green Lines except the ones for the Kiai. (So keep 00:38:995 - 00:51:395 - 01:23:795 and 01:35:795)
If volume control had not considered for ranked,I would remove green line
00:00:595 - Change the Volume at 80% for the same Sound Volume. - no change
00:00:595 (1) - D - no change
00:36:695 - Circle with k - done
00:36:795 (1) - k - done
00:50:595 (1) - k - done
00:51:395 - Change the Volume at 80% for holding the same Sound Volume. - no change
01:22:595 (3) - k - done

thx for modding ~ >.<

update ~ http://puu.sh/1kJip

Here's my mod request~only suggest

Ts8zs'Easy
最开头不放一个spinner么？
01:35:795 (5) - finish

Flask's Normal
同easy，前面空太多了，最好有个spinner
00:27:795 (3) - clap
01:12:595 (3) - clap

Hard
最前面同上两个难度，我就不多说了
00:32:595 (1) - remove NC
00:34:195 (4) - 如果你按照上面做了，这里加NC
00:41:595 (1) - remove
01:32:595 (1) - remove NC

Collab
00:50:195 (1) - remove NC
01:08:595 (5,6,7,8) - 这里感觉改成4个NOTE的JUMP更好点


恩，基本上没啥大问题了，打起来还是挺顺手的，Good map。

先占坑补星我错了（跪

Mystica wrote:

先占坑补星我错了（跪

跪了三个
其实不用星啊真的

Hi~ Hi~
Let's mod!

[General]

why don't you add "bx1989" in tags?
why don't you add some Finish follow music ? like Easy mod

[Ts8zs' Easy]

00:34:195 (2) - add Clap at both of slider ?
00:38:995 (1) - add Finish at start of slider ? and adjust DS
01:02:995 (4) - same as 00:34:195 (2) -
01:17:395 (1) - same as 00:38:995 (1) -
01:18:995 (2) - same as 00:34:195 (2) -
01:23:795 (1) - add Finish at start of slider ?

[Flask's Normal]

unused inherited points

1. 01:26:395 -

00:15:395 (4) - Ctrl + G and adjust next notes? just suggestion
00:24:595 (4) - ^
00:29:795 (2) - move to (136,156)
01:00:595 (4) - move to (136,356)
01:16:995 (7) - keep DS
01:26:595 (1) - ^
01:30:595 (2) - 1 grid right

[Hard]

Unsnapped inherited point:
00:21:195 (4) - 2 grid down?
00:22:995 (2) - I think ctrl + G is better good. consider pattern
01:23:395 (5) - remove this note ? consistent
01:25:395 (1) - NC
01:29:895 (5) - move to (352,304)

[Collab]

AR +1 ? I think AR 9 is more fit with this diff's pattern
00:19:895 (2) - use 2 hit circle instead slider
01:08:595 (1) - NC ? cuz notice for heterogeneous pattern



P.S : Taiko diff's sound is lower than music. That's so unplayable. Souond volume up pls. for example, KIAI Time's volume 95%

:OO sorry for poor mod.

wmfchris wrote:

[bx1989]
- tag bx1989 in all diffs
00:16:195 - according to the clap like sound in the music use k here?
00:22:595 - ^
00:34:995 - there're only 1/2 vocal notes so the transition in the 3rd/4th notes doesn't sound very well, try kkddd
00:36:595 - kkddk?
00:54:195 - ^
00:56:595 - the first triplet should go up and the second one goes down as indicated by the music, ddk kkd fits better
01:26:195 - the stream should stop here like the vocal
01:32:995 - you don't need to stream this too much
- Is it really necessary to put so many finishes in the middle?

[Lia's Taiko]
- tag Lia in all diffs
well made, good job

thx for modding~> <

Stefan wrote:

Hi

[General]
You must change the Artist. Since the Guideline got changed, the Maker (Yasuo-P) must be set as Artist (and add Hatsune Miku as Tags).

[bx1989's Taiko]
00:00:595 - Set the Volume of the red Line at 85%.
00:00:595 (1) - D
00:02:995 (1) - k
00:29:795 - Remove this green Line.
00:30:158 - ^
00:53:595 (1) - k
01:15:595 (3) - d
01:15:155 - Remove the green Lines here.
01:17:195 - The Kiai comes very sudden, start it at 01:23:795.
01:23:795 (1) - D
01:23:895 (2) - Remove it.
01:26:295 (2) - Remove it, the long stream isn't neccessary and this d sounds too much.
01:28:595 - Remove the three green Lines here, they are unused (and the Kiai Flash is not rankable)
01:34:295 (3) - Same like 01:26:295 (2).
01:34:495 (2) - ^

[Lia's Taiko]
Please remove all the green Lines except the ones for the Kiai. (So keep 00:38:995 - 00:51:395 - 01:23:795 and 01:35:795)
00:00:595 - Change the Volume at 80% for the same Sound Volume.
00:00:595 (1) - D
00:36:695 - Circle with k
00:36:795 (1) - k
00:50:595 (1) - k
00:51:395 - Change the Volume at 80% for holding the same Sound Volume.
01:22:595 (3) - k

Nice Taiko Diffs
Good Luck ^^

thanks very much~

[Ts8zs's Easy]
你这密度……你确定不要在白线上放多几个Circle之类的么？
00:18:195 (4) - 这个多加一个折返箭头？配合以相同频率发出来的“NaI”，并增加和下一个滑条的连接性
00:34:195 (2) - 这个为啥不做成和y轴平行的呢？或许让1和2的鼠标轨迹成一个椭圆？
以上建议同样适用于后半截……反正你的物件都是几乎一样的……好懒啊~

[Flask's Normal]
一看你这个星星数……无力吐槽……到底哪里出错了？
其实这个图还OK啦~只是或许注意下光标的轨迹会更好。
e.g. 00:23:795 (3) - 这个可以往右上方移动一下，让2在3头部的切线上，使光标轨迹成为一个完整的弧。
00:28:995 (1) - 这个也是，让4在它的切线上
etc.

[Hard]
00:41:595 (1) - 这个的话或许NC会好些？不然会习惯等下一句开始的时候才点的
01:02:595 (5,6,7,8,9) - 这个能不能像前面00:18:195 (6,7,8,9) - 这样弄成4个短滑条？

[Collab]
这个真没啥问题……

遲來的mod></最近病了...抱歉

[Lia's Taiko]
00:18:595 - k
00:20:195 - k
01:34:995 - K

[bx1989's Taikoni]
無聊吐糟 : 那bx is so happy是什麼鬼;w;"
00:12:795 - remove...不然不要finish
00:25:995 - k
00:31:795 - k
00:42:395 - d
01:31:995 - k
...修改的時候別忘了把new combo做好啦...不然錯的colour比不做還討厭

NewibornCLivee wrote:

遲來的mod></最近病了...抱歉

[Lia's Taiko]
00:18:595 - k　done
00:20:195 - k　done
01:34:995 - K　sorry , no change ...

...修改的時候別忘了把new combo做好啦...不然錯的colour比不做還討厭

thx for modding !! :3

update ~ http://puu.sh/1x2uU

MOD from PM

紧急
推荐
建议

[Easy]
全部用滑条略显单调，可以在空拍适当下几个Circle
01:02:995 (4) - 摆成水平吧

[Normal]
没问题

[Hard]
00:29:995 (4) - 往上摆一点：
00:18:195 (6,7,8,9) - 这种直弯的滑条我觉得不太好看..至少弯折的角度不要太厉害吧 120°左右最好
00:24:395 (5) - 摆在上面漂亮一点：
01:10:195 (8,9,1) - 排列不是很美观..建议把01:10:795 (9) 放到前后两个滑条中间，或者直接做成这样的对称滑条 挺漂亮的：
01:31:595 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 有点迷惑性..01:31:595 (4,1,2)这三个就别折返了，直接和后面统一，顺时针绕一圈吧。



[collab]

前半段的Flow做的有点别扭 我也提出了一些自己的建议（当然并不一定更好）
从01:10:595开始的后半段做的貌似比前半段好...
另外我觉得cRyo和DarknessAngel的图Flow做得很棒 不如去参考一下

00:12:995 (5,1,2,3) - 这段有点overmapping了 为了契合人声的话我的建议是改成这样：
去掉00:12:995 (5)和00:13:595 (1,2,3)，直接在00:12:995加一个Circle，再拉个滑条加个单点：
00:19:795 (1) - 去掉，把后面的滑条00:19:895 (2)延长到这个音
00:28:595 (5) - 这样改 节奏会好一点（滑条在前，单点在后 另外把滑条弄弯好看一点）
00:32:595 (2) - 和上面差不多 不过这里改不改不算很重要
00:36:995 (8) - 缩短一点，再在后面加一个Circle，好让重音落在Circle上。另外后面的两串连打最好别错开。
00:49:795 (4,5,1,2) - 从这儿开始的一串Flow我觉得这样摆能流畅一点
01:04:195 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 这两串连打安排成这样可以流畅一点：前三个遮挡 后四个移动
01:08:595 (1,2,3,4) - 略微鬼畜 安排成这样舒服一点（要是你采纳这条的话01:08:195 (4)和01:09:395 (1)也要转成竖直的使flow更流畅）
01:34:995 (1,2,3) - 如果感兴趣的话可以做成跳。

这什么破bug 卡了一下给了4kd

raririn wrote:

这什么破bug 卡了一下给了4kd

我去..怎么Deny掉剩下的？ 我只要1 kd啊...

Autumn wrote:

raririn wrote:

这什么破bug 卡了一下给了4kd

我去..怎么Deny掉剩下的？ 我只要1 kd啊...

反正草莓给过10kd╮(╯▽╰)╭...

General
建议把combo color 3和4的顺序互换 让两个相近的颜色分开

Easy 看不出什么了=。=

Normal also found nothin =。=

Hard
00:13:395 (1) - 或许把尾巴改成soft sampleset
00:41:595 (1) - 这种主要节拍以外的散点最好也改成soft hitsound音量不大的时候还好 像这样紧凑的打击声音让人觉得不太舒服
01:07:195 (9) - ^
01:32:795 (2) - ^
01:09:195 (4) - 或许和note2放在一起？
01:07:395 (10) - 把new combo加在这里 而不是它后面的滑条？
01:35:395 (2,3) - 最好给它们两个都加new combo 这样不容易误导玩家

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00:49:795 (4,5,1) - 这里感觉不太好看 或许把4和5的位置往左下调整一些让它们和滑条1的弧度保持一致？
01:13:395 (3) - 开头加whistle？尾巴上的whistle或者就去掉 或者就连01:13:995 (4) - 一起加whistle
01:25:595 (7) - 或许CTRL+G？ 这个随意吧

这么多mod了来找我……我个新人真是给你挑不出啥东西来诶
感觉也没什么unrankable的 估计可以找MAT了？
好运吧~

就这吧 我就一渣渣orz

Hi there

[General]
* Add "bx1989" to Lia's Taiko and bx1989's Taiko for consistency on each diff
* Inconsistent AudioLeadIn, you might want to make it consistent through the each diff


[Ts8zs's Easy]
00:18:195 (4) - Having more than 1 repeating slider can confusing for beginners


[Flask's Normal]
00:15:395 (4) - For better flow, reverse this by Ctrl+G
00:19:795 (1,2,3,4) - This linear pattern can be boring for beginners. Try something interesting? Like curve slider, unique pattern, or such?


[Hard]
00:47:595 (4) - This note is overlapped by hitbursts. You should make this note visible
01:00:995 (1,2,3) - Fix this spacing, please
01:25:195 (4) - If this a jump for the next pattern, this should be new combo and remove new combo at next object
01:32:795 (2) - Same issue as 00:47:595 (4)


[Collab]
00:50:995 (1) - Add finish for emphasis
01:07:595 (3) - End at 01:07:795??


Good luck then~

Irie Miyuki wrote:

SPOILER

[General]
Artist要换成Yasuo-P (咦压缩p), tag里加上hatsune miku, Source改成Vocaloid。。不得不说这rule真蠢

[Collab]
挑不出什么 nazi一下
00:12:995 (5) - 去掉两个折返 在00:13:395加一个note, NC
00:22:795 (5) - 往上移1 grid
00:39:995 (3) - 总觉得位置不太好,虽然没什么问题
00:46:595 (5) - 左移一点 00:46:995 (1) - 可以和前面的00:46:395 (4) - 重合一下
01:06:995 (4) - 移到x368, y184 可以和01:06:395 (2,3,4) - 成三角形
01:07:395 (1,2,3) - 打起来总觉得别扭 变成4连带一个1/2滑条?
01:25:595 (7) - Ctri+G一下?

[Hard]
00:25:395 (8) - 换成一个1/1滑条?
00:39:595 (2) - x168, y136
00:41:595 (1) - 好想让你把它删掉
01:10:795 (9,1) - 这个间距..
01:27:595 (3) - 没叠好

[Flask's Normal]
01:02:595 (3,1) - 会不会有点难.. 我完全不记得我玩normal时候是个什么情况了orz
01:05:795 (4,5) - ^
01:16:995 (7,1) - ^
总觉得前半部分和后半部分难度都不一样了orzzz

[Ts8zs's Easy]
..我看不出啥 同normal没啥印象了

就这吧 我就一渣渣orz

yeah~

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[General]
* Add "bx1989" to Lia's Taiko and bx1989's Taiko for consistency on each diff done
* Inconsistent AudioLeadIn, you might want to make it consistent through the each diff done


[Ts8zs's Easy]
00:18:195 (4) - Having more than 1 repeating slider can confusing for beginners fixed~


[Flask's Normal]
00:15:395 (4) - For better flow, reverse this by Ctrl+G orz>_<
00:19:795 (1,2,3,4) - This linear pattern can be boring for beginners. Try something interesting? Like curve slider, unique pattern, or such?/_\


[Hard]
00:47:595 (4) - This note is overlapped by hitbursts. You should make this note visible :O
01:00:995 (1,2,3) - Fix this spacing, please k~
01:25:195 (4) - If this a jump for the next pattern, this should be new combo and remove new combo at next object done~
01:32:795 (2) - Same issue as 00:47:595 (4) ;_;


[Collab]
00:50:995 (1) - Add finish for emphasis done:
01:07:595 (3) - End at 01:07:795?? sry ;_;


Good luck then~

I would love to see this ranked. .-.

Stefan wrote:

I would love to see this ranked. .-.

thanks >~<

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

[General]
Offset:587


[Ts8zs' Easy]
00:13:395 (1) - Why clap here? / Consider removing that and add finish.
00:14:995 (2) - Also you should remove clap here.
00:16:595 (3) - ^ (at least remove clap，it sounds so bad..)
00:19:795 (1) - ^ , and consider moving this slider to left of 00:18:195 (4).
00:21:395 (2) - ^ (something likes this will not be mentioned after)
00:48:595 (3) - Consider moving this slider to left of 00:46:995 (2) not below that
01:20:595 (3) - Drag it upward a bit with Distance Snap on.
01:33:395 (3) - Consider moving this slider to left of 01:31:795 (2) not above that


[Flask's Normal]
00:14:195 (2,3) - If I were you, I maybe put 00:14:595 (3) before (2)
01:00:995 (1) - hmm? Consider using finish instead of clap?
01:10:995 - Obviously you should add finish here.
01:14:195 - ^
01:20:595 (1) - hmm?..Maybe I may choose to remove this clap.
01:32:595 (5,1) - You may use a slider instead of them.


[Hard]
00:17:195 (3,4) - Sounds not so good to me, what about this?

00:26:195 - Why not use finish instead of clap?
00:41:795 (2,3) - Transform them into a slider.
00:42:995 (6) - Such a big jump for a hard diff.. Try lower the spacing
01:07:195 (9) - Delete this and reset the place of (10), then newcombo it.
01:10:795 (9) - What about removing this?
01:29:795 (4,5,6,7,1) - Comparing with before, the spacing of this stream seems a bit large.
01:32:795 (2) - Remove this and un-newcombo to 01:32:595 (1)



[Collab]
00:19:787 (1,2) - Sounds strange. I would only choose this.

00:39:987 (3,4,5) - Little change.
00:50:187 (1) - Move it to x:132 y:124
01:07:787 - According to the vocal, something should be here.
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"Collab" diff is ok, but other diffs seem not so good imo.
Great mapset , Good Luck

Random mod, because I'm bored. \:D/








Good luck~