Wreath wrote:

mod req from in-game
こんにちは、MODを行いに参りました！
まずはじめに、非常に細かい点の配置変更を提案しているので、参考までにお願いします

General
•Fine
スキンが可愛いです <3 ヾ(〃^∇^)ﾉ

Easy
•Fine

Normal
•Fine

Insane
•00:04:655 (6) - NC Downbeatで区切りたいのでno
•00:04:782 (7) - x:8 y:216 へ移動 直線のスライダーの手前なのでちょっと変化を付けたかったのでこのように配置してます。
•00:04:908 (3) - remove NC 上のNCに同じ
•00:17:387 (2) - x:128 y:60 へ移動 次のノートへのアプローチのため下方に少しずらしてます。
•00:17:513 (3) - x:112 y:60 ^ ^
•00:19:403 (2) - x:384 y:352 ^ ^
•00:19:529 (3) - x:400 y:352 ^ ^
•00:44:109 (3) - x:12 y:100 ^ 現在の配置では、確かにつながりが悪いと感じたので、別の配置にですが変更しました。
•00:44:613 (6) - x:108 y:100 ^ ^
•01:27:092 (3) - ここのリズムに違和感を感じました 何度か指摘を受けているので、変更を視野に入れたいと思います。が良案が思い付かないので、一旦は保留にします・・・。

MODは以上です、私のMODが必要だったかどうか気になるくらいの完成度だと思います！
とても綺麗で、手が凝っている素敵な譜面だと素直に思いました

これからも、譜面作り頑張ってください！

Leorda wrote:

Hi there


[eLtigreXXx's Hard]
* You need to add "SliderBorder : 255,255,255" under [Colour] tab inside your OSU files
sorry, it's my mistake ><

[Insane]
00:17:387 (2,3) - Move 1 grid up for parallel pattern? (Nazi) to approach to next note, I placed like that.
00:33:143 (1) - Add finish in head slider instead of clap hmm...it was pointed out by other modders too...okay, added.
00:43:983 (2,4) - Swap this clap hitsound? I think no matter with this clap pattern
01:04:403 (1) - Add finish? to be symmetry with pervious stream, I didn't added finish sound.


That's all I got, sorry

-kevincela- wrote:

Hi~

[General]

• ztrot wrote:

  To all MAT and BAT start popping bubbles that use any variant of Short Full Cut Ver unless it is in the title of the song. Amended
  
  There is no need to use any of these types unless they are part of the real song's title

1. So yeah,you have to remove the (Short Ver.) from the title of your map
2. There's an unused .osb file,delete it and Full Submit i see

[Easy]

1. 00:02:891 (3) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider? no, but added whistle to other point.
2. 00:20:537 - Add a note here? no
3. 00:35:160 (3) - Same as 00:02:891 (3) - done
4. 00:59:361 (3) - ^ done
5. 01:13:479 (1) - Ass a whistle at the repeat of the slider,to follow the drums done
6. 01:02:890 - Add a note here? no
7. 01:37:680 (1) - Add a finish here? done

[Normal]

1. 00:02:890 (3) - Add a whistle at the repeat of the slider to make the whistle pattern consistent done
2. 00:33:143 (1) - 1 grid left,just to make 00:31:630 (3,4,5,1) - a perfect diamond shape? done
3. 00:38:185 (3) - Add a whistle at the start of this slider to emphatize the singer's voice? hmm..I think it don't need.
4. 01:38:437 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider? done

[Insane]

1. 00:06:924 (5) - Add a whistle at the end of this slider? done
2. 00:19:403 (2,3) - Move this 2 grids down so that,thanks to the stack leniency, these notes seem alligned with 00:19:025 (1) - ,even if it isn't so no
3. 00:39:193 (4) - Move the middle waypoint at x:48 y:252 to make the blanket with 00:38:689 (2) - better? I don't think all sliders, like this, have to blanket with circle.
4. 00:44:109 (3,6) - Silence these 2 notes,since as now they sound a little strange with the hitsounds you used? I don't think so
5. 01:27:470 - Add a note here? done

Pretty good map for a mapper who hasn't any maps ranked. Hope my mod helped you!

Jacob wrote:

Hello!

General

It would look pretty cool if you could get a BAT to move the title text to during the first break for you. Just ask any BAT and they will do this. I'd like to ask.
Use tick rate 2 for this map! Here's a tip for your future maps that aren't in 1/3 - always use tick rate 2! It fits for most maps, including this one. done

Easy

00:24:571 (4) - Move this one grid to the right for a neater "blanket" with the previous slider. done
00:46:252 (2,3) - Please avoid these two sliders overlapping. It doesn't look very visually appealing. moved a little
00:53:311 (1,2,3) - I really love what you did here with this pattern. It's very intuitive and looks really nice. Good job! wow, thank you

One concern here; why is this difficulty the only one that doesn't have a clap pattern? I'll consider to add one, but there is not enough notes in this diff to make clap pattern which I like.
The sliders look extremely well done and symmetrical.

Normal

01:00:874 (1,2) - Make it so that these do not overlap. done
01:29:613 (3) - Add a finish to the beginning of this slider. It's in the music. done
01:35:664 (1) - Rather than a spinner, you should map this out. There's too many spinners in this short duration of time. I'd like to consider some pattern.

Insane

This difficulty is actually really nice.

Excellent work. XD

Konei wrote:

Looks pretty good~

Let's see what I can find


General

Add to tags: Visual novel hentai game done



Easy


fine~ XD


Normal


01:08:941 (1) Maybe try to place it anywhere else, because it's a bit misleading for beginners hmm..I think no problem with it, because I can see the start point, end, and path of the slider.



Couldn't find anymore T_T Nice map, nice skin

Come on and get this ranked

Aldwych wrote:

Hello h-728, i'm sorry for lating. don't worry. thank you for your advice

[General]

Did you try to your spin's bonus has the same skin like Great,perfect and spin? yes, and I decided not to add
Kyoko.jpg must have a size of 1024x768 done. but the rule is that: size of BG must be within 1024x768.

[Easy]

00:16:882 TS should be at 00:17:008
00:24:823 TS should be at 00:25:075
00:39:193 Dunno why but your bookmark is not on white tick (lol). bookmark position makes no effect for playing.
00:53:184 TS should be at 00:53:310
00:57:218 TS should be at 00:57:344
01:29:361 TS should be at 01:29:613
01:30:621 TS should be at 01:30:874
01:31:252 TS should be at 01:31:126
01:37:554 TS should be at 01:37:680
01:38:310 TS should be at 01:38:473 to place timing sections to both sides of a note has a sense: avoiding error.
of course, to place timing section on same tick with circle or slider isn't bad thing, but it's better to place like that I did.

No problem for NC imo.

[Normal]

I will say same things for timing sections. But just do like in easy, Ts between 2 sliders/circles etc.. is not beautifull imo, put it at the circle or a begining of a slider for example. same as Easy

No problem for NC again.

[Insane]

Beat snap in 1/8, wut? anyway, all notes are snapped correctly.
HP drain -1 or 2? this is Insane. so I think HD 7 is right.
Same thing like for easy normal and hard for TS between circles or sliders (exept your kiaï time for fountain at the middle of it for course). same as Easy


Hope it could help you and sorry again for late and nazi mod! ^^"
Nice beatmap you did.

TheVileOne wrote:

Easy

My only complaint would be that some of the sections felt really cramped, having so many notes clustered in certain spots.

00:33:143 (1) - Really fitting slider. Nice! thanks
01:23:058 - I think it plays better with a note here. done, and changed placement

Normal

I'm not so sure I like the double claps at the start. Really not much you need to do, I would really change that part at 39 seconds though. There's good rhythm and the hitsounds do sound nice for the most part. It's got a good difficulty gain from Easy.

00:27:092 (4) - End of this slider sounds so quiet. Add a hitsound? add clap, but at 00:27:596.
00:28:100 (5) - How about moving this 1/2th forward? (Adjust hitsounds to match) I think it plays more to the vocals there. hmm..sry but no change
00:39:193 (1,2) - This doesn't play very intuitively. The beat is here 00:39:949 - , not where the slider ends, so the transition is 1/2th closer than it should be. I suggest you make this sound more closer to the rhythm. I think 00:40:201 and 00:40:454 (2,3) follow vibrato, so no change

Insane

The strange double clap rhythm is even more present in this diff.My whole issue with those claps is that they sound so unlike the actual beat, and the sounds they are placed to are drown out by the clap. That's just my opinion though.

00:25:580 (1,2) - Straight sliders seem out of place here. Curved would work better IMO. from 00:26:336 (3) to next slider, notes are place linearly. to match with them, I chose straight slider.
01:02:387 (2) - Add whistle? feel strange, so no
01:27:092 (3) - This feels out of place and the distance snap between the next note increases that feeling.I would either increase the spacing with the sequence after so that the flow isn't broken or map this differently. hmm..I don't think so. hold.



Conclusion

It's a generic song, but all the difficulties are mapped quite well. This is close to rank ready status. So here's a star. Good luck.

meiikyuu wrote:

Easy
00:00:874 (1) - add whistle at beginning of slider done
00:39:193 (3) - please move the last point of the slider one grid to the left (to form a neater blanket around 2) done

nice diff.~

Normal
seems fine, nothing important i could find XD

Insane
00:19:782 (4) - move center point 2 grids to the right (more neater slider shape) fixed shape


nice map , gl

-Bakari- wrote:

yo~

kinda recheck

[General]
same tickate for all diffs have I unify them? it looks too bad if I use tick rate 2 in Easy because there are tick tick tick...

[Easy]
HP Drain and OD -1 (too hard now) HP -1 but no change about OD. 2 is fit to this diff imo
00:53:311 (1,3) - please avoid overlaps like this. beginner aren't able to read patterns like this I like this arrange and don't want to change. then, these slider is not continued. there is a circle between these slider. so I didn't change this.
01:06:924 (2,4) - make it more readable maybe done
01:30:874 (3) - seems too short (unreadable for beginners) consider the low BPM, no changed this. sorry
01:31:630 (1) - whistle~ done
01:35:159 (2,3) - still a bit overlapped with spinner's hitburst moved a little below.

[Normal]
hitsounds are a bit loud for me? maybe -5-10%? hmm..I don't think so, and well audible hitsounds are not bad things. so nochange
AR +1 to keep consistency in ar and lider velocity. it looks better with AR 5 tried 5, but it looked a little fast. I want AR 4.5 ><
00:27:092 (4) - nazi: third point: x164 y152 done
00:39:193 (1) - remove nc? (nc pattern: NC each 2nd big line) you're right!

[Insane]
01:22:807 (2,4) - ctrl + r. won't cause so many rages while playing with hidden I don't like the continual rotation to same direction
01:31:630 (1) - end at white line (shorter) + whistle it seems that vocal ends here. so no change.
01:35:664 (1) - ^^

those wrote:

Hey there. Nice to see you've applied the (Short Ver.) to the map, but in case anyone was wondering, here's the source: thanks!


[General]

1. When you mouseover pause-back, it touches the CAFE SOURIRE at the bottom of pause-overlay. http://puu.sh/LD0F
   See what edits you can make to this image to make it look better. oh yes...but I'm very poor at editing images...it may be fixed but I just deleted "CAFE SOURIRE".
2. 01:13:485 - Having the Kiai end here doesn't make a lot of sense. Try 01:21:552 - . fixed
3. 01:23:569 - Try adding a Kiai flash here. hmm..ok, I'll try it. but previous kiai time ends just 2 sec before and I feel it may use kiai effect a lot.

[Easy]

1. 00:31:132 (3,4,5) - This kind of overlapping may be confusing to newer players. fixed. I hope new pattern is alright...
2. 00:55:334 (3) - A lot of this slider is being covered by 00:52:812 (4,1) - . Consider a reposition, or even something like this: I loved that pattern, but too many modders said you should fix, so changed the rhythm as you show.
   

[Normal]

1. 00:06:930 (1) - Remove new combo from spinner; it's seemingly a continuation of 00:04:914 (1,2) - , and HP drain would be a lot better if you didn't get a burst of it in the middle of "kokoro no tane". I see. fixed
2. 00:47:519 (4) - Anchors make this slider bend at unnecessarily large angles. If you're doing that just so you can stack 00:48:779 (5) - with (3), then I don't think you're doing it right. Something like this would be more fitting; of course, please do your best to make it symmetrical: fixed the shape of slider.
   
3. 01:34:157 (1) - Remove new combo; best if you made 01:31:636 (1,1,2,3) - one entire combo. ok

[Insane]

1. 01:35:670 (1) - Would be a lot better if you mapped this drum fill instead of using a spinner. This is the Insane diff and you have three spinners at the end, which makes this not so attractive. Best if you could also map through 01:31:636 (1) - as well. yes I was thinking about this...ok, both done, then changed the flow around these parts and the pattern of NC.

I'll be back.

those wrote:

Everything's looking great.

[General]

1. Tag "vn"; really useful for in-game searching. hmm..it's new for me. added
2. See if you can do something about making the insides of cursor.png more centered. done, but I don't know it was perfectly solved.

Please PM me after this has been addressed.