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Ra-s
All Fixed. Thanks Garven
http://puu.sh/1pLYC
shikyu
mod request from my queue~

[Invicible]
00:07:429 (2) - ctrl+g? why this the only one that reversed? and remake the slider to make flow better,ss will included below
00:08:144 (5) - feel awkward with this slider, maybe something like this? if you do that fix spacing with (6) to keep consistency
00:12:001 (2) - why this the only one without big jump?
00:13:858 (9) - make it further from (8)
01:32:001 (2) - make this futher from (1), need to be more jumpy here

Actually I really hope this diff feel at least more jumpy, especially opening part (before reff 1)
Sorry for tiny mod, just mod something (imo) awkward
Birdy
[Invincible]
Heh, you don't want anyone to get full combo on this, if this gets ranked, I see.

00:11:001 (6,7) - Too intense jump.
00:54:572 (5,6) - ^
01:37:144 (5,6) - There is a line between difficult and impossible, not sure which one this is. Might want to change it, but might be okay.
02:51:715 (3) - Make the red points regular and the slider slightly thinner.
03:29:000 (4,5) - Too intense jump.
03:29:858 (8,9) - ^
04:39:429 (3,4,5,6) - This whole part, impossible.
05:02:247 (5,6) - Unfitting jump.

And that's it. Great map(set) overall, I hope this gets ranked soon~
Topic Starter
BinJip
shikyu

Static Noise Bird

ths
Garven
Did some IRC modding concerning missed mods on the Easy and these points on the Insane.

[Invincible]
00:30:858 (3) - This jump right here.. is really bugging me. It's just out of nowhere to keep your pattern pretty, but it plays rather poorly.
00:48:429 (1,2) - This jump doesn't make sense when you compare the same part of the music with 00:46:144 (1,2,3,4) -
00:57:429 (5) - Stack this with 00:57:858 (2) -
01:50:715 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - These returns to stacks are a little confusing to read. Think you can make it more clear?
02:02:715 (1,2,3,4) - This doesn't read very well afte doing a circular pattern at 02:01:858 (1,2,3,4,1) - The jump from 1 -> 2 is the culprit here. Maybe using more even spacing for all 4 instead of this random jump will fair better.
02:07:715 (5) - Change the spacing on this one too, considering the rest of the pattern.
02:59:715 (1) - This repeat arrow is slightly obscured by the hitburst from 02:58:858 (2) - . Should be easy to adjust.
03:35:144 (1) - I find this plays better unstacked
03:38:001 (4,5,6) - Maybe change these to something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/505284 Flows much better
04:02:429 (2) - This should be the slider, and the end of 04:02:572 (1) - should be the circle, rhythmically.
Thatgooey
I just want to say this map and song is incredible and cannot wait to see the finish product. I give all of my love to this map <3<3<3
Topic Starter
BinJip

Garven wrote:

Did some IRC modding concerning missed mods on the Easy and these points on the Insane.

[Invincible]
00:30:858 (3) - This jump right here.. is really bugging me. It's just out of nowhere to keep your pattern pretty, but it plays rather poorly.
00:48:429 (1,2) - This jump doesn't make sense when you compare the same part of the music with 00:46:144 (1,2,3,4) -
00:57:429 (5) - Stack this with 00:57:858 (2) -
01:50:715 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - These returns to stacks are a little confusing to read. Think you can make it more clear?
02:02:715 (1,2,3,4) - This doesn't read very well afte doing a circular pattern at 02:01:858 (1,2,3,4,1) - The jump from 1 -> 2 is the culprit here. Maybe using more even spacing for all 4 instead of this random jump will fair better.
02:07:715 (5) - Change the spacing on this one too, considering the rest of the pattern.
02:59:715 (1) - This repeat arrow is slightly obscured by the hitburst from 02:58:858 (2) - . Should be easy to adjust.
03:35:144 (1) - I find this plays better unstacked
03:38:001 (4,5,6) - Maybe change these to something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/505284 Flows much better
04:02:429 (2) - This should be the slider, and the end of 04:02:572 (1) - should be the circle, rhythmically.


ths Garven
Topic Starter
BinJip
very bothered
Garven
Bothered? By what?

[Easy]
03:56:287 (1) - Remove new combo
Topic Starter
BinJip

Garven wrote:

Bothered? By what?

[Easy]
03:56:287 (1) - Remove new combo
fixed

played LoL ww

osu! is Bothered ._.
Garven
Um, you changed the position of the slider. Was that on purpose?

Edit:

I guess spboxer is going to take a look when he gets some time. Let me know when he's done with it. :3
spboxer3

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. nope

Easy


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 01:59:143 - unsnapped kiai timing.
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. Yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:44:572 (2,3,1) -

  2. 02:04:858 (2,1) -

  3. 02:28:858 (1,1) -

  4. 03:23:429 (3,1) -
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:30:287 - & 00:30:572 - Meaningless finish hitsound. I can't hear any downbeat or drum beat like finish.

  2. 01:22:572 - to 01:29:429 - let the whistle hitsound set at 1/2 rhythm (the soft-whistle it's more like "hihit" sound, it's more likely assist drum beat . then, general we used main beat at 1/1 rhythm. so used whistle at 1/1 rhythm is not suitable imo.)

  3. 03:00:858 (1) - ,03:02:001 - remove clap to make hitsound consistency.

  4. 03:40:001 - & 03:40:287 - looks copy from 00:30:287 - & 00:30:572 -... so remove finish hitsound is better imo.

  5. 03:48:287 (3) - add clap hitsound to make hitsound consistency

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:19:429 (2) - (nazi) It's obvious need used symmetrical slider for your pattern: 00:19:429 (2,1) - so make the (2) blanket (1)'s slider end
    code
    268,116,19429,2,0,B|310:192|268:267,1,160.000001192094,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

  2. 01:22:572 (1,2,3) - Umm... you should make sense for your pattern like: flow,prettier shape.

  3. 02:06:001 (1) - I'm try to make symmetrical slider code for you.
    code
    180,60,126001,6,0,B|220:68|256:92|256:92|292:64|340:60,1,160.000001192094,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

  4. 03:29:144 (2,1) - you can used the code same as 00:19:429 (2) - ((looks it's copy pattern from 00:19:429 (2) -

  5. 03:56:287 (2,3) - Err... It's immature slider shape for this pattern. first, the slider end have overlaps issue (it should be stack or avoid overlaps to make pattern cleaner.) second, I can't understand why you used inconsistent spacing this pattern, It's doesn't make sense

Overall this map should more work, about flow (like:01:22:572 (1,2,3) - ,02:33:429 (1,2,1) - ...etc) fix messy pattern (like: 02:06:001 (1) - ,00:19:429 (2) - ,04:11:716 (1) - ...etc)

Star's Normal


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. unsnap kiai time:
    00:55:143 -
    01:59:143
    02:08:286 -
    04:14:000 -
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 02:13:429 - uhm? I think is used clap batter... but you used whistle. D:
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:20:858 (1) - unsymmetrical pattern,
    321,368,20858,6,0,B|321:294|256:274|190:294|190:368,1,220.000001192094,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

  2. 00:46:572 (2,3,4) - awkward pattern~you can make the layout better. ((for this pattern, I expect can make more coherent (smooth) flow to make the layout better.

  3. 00:57:429 (1,1) - you can avoid the object cover by "spinner-osu.png" issue. It's possible make confuse to player. you can add transparent photo for "spinner-osu.png" (( don't forget add spinner groups element.
  4. 01:56:858 (1,2,3) - Umm... it's immature messy pattern. perhaps, you can make those blanket to solve this case.

  5. 02:24:287 (1) - unsymmetrical pattern, but I guess you wnat to make it symmetrical. so here is symmetrical code:
    328,54,144287,6,0,B|328:142|183:142|183:54,3,220.000001192094,4|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

  6. 03:30:573 (1) - ^ ((btw, It's should snap to 03:30:572 -
    190,15,210572,6,0,B|190:89|256:109|321:89|321:15,1,220.000001192094,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

  7. 03:56:287 (2,3,4) - copy from 00:46:572 (2,3,4) - . awkward pattern too.
Worthy of improvement: inflexible flow like: "00:21:715 (2,3,4,1) - ,00:46:572 (2,3,4) - ...etc" and coherent (smooth,blanket) like: "00:36:858 (1,2,3,4) - ,00:48:287 (1,2,3) -,00:59:715 (1,2) - ...etc"

Ra's Hard


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 04:42:858 - break start at here?
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:59:429 (8,2) -

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:20:286 (5,6) - unsymmetrical pattern, but looks make this pattern symmetrical is better. move 00:20:572 (6) - to x304,y296

  2. 00:37:001 (1) - should add new combo in this case. you should add it at beginning of the sentence

  3. 00:40:429 (5,1) - (nazi) make blanket with 00:40:429 (5) - reverse.

  4. 01:24:286 (5,6) - copy from 00:20:286 (5,6) - . so still have the same issue.

  5. 03:15:429 (4,3) - stack issue.
It's a solid mapset~ nice work ;)

Invincible


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. unsnap kiai time:
    00:55:143
    01:59:143
  1. duplicate timing line:
    04:44:179 - (you can used red timeline to change the hitsound)
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:03:715 (5) - overmapped object. obviously, used empty it's better then add note. ((neither have drum beat nor have vocal. It can't make sense to enhance the pattern.

  2. 01:06:429 (6,4) - move to center.
    01:56:001 (7) - unsnap

  3. 02:51:715 (3) - add new combo to make this pattern more readable.
    03:34:787 (3) - unsnap (wrong rhythm ↓ )

Overmapped diff. you can used jump for you want to stress point(note/slider), but you used many confuse jump (like:00:03:858 (6,7,8) - ,00:12:715 (5,6,7) - ,00:31:001 (4,5,6) - ). Err... you should make more logic for your mapping skill: "why did I used jump here?", "Is it a best solution" not only force it's playable or rankable. :<


Taiko


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. recommend to make Taiko BG

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. looks it's fine~

You can call Garven to help you recheck your map~
Star Stream
fixed except
00:57:429 (1,1) - you can avoid the object cover by "spinner-osu.png" issue. It's possible make confuse to player. you can add transparent photo for "spinner-osu.png" (( don't forget add spinner groups element.
02:13:429 - uhm? I think is used clap batter... but you used whistle. D:

thanks for modding~

http://puu.sh/1wJLc
Ra-s
http://puu.sh/1x07q
All Fixed without overlap
Topic Starter
BinJip
ok,

finish
Garven
[Star's Normal]
Um, the video was removed from this.
Topic Starter
BinJip

Garven wrote:

[Star's Normal]
Um, the video was removed from this.

fixed
Sure
  1. Added Japanese Artist and Title.
  2. Fixed some stuff on Invincible diff.
Garven passed me the baton, here are simple suggestions.
Other diffs seem good enough to be ranked imo.

IRC Log
00:04 ykcarrot: 02:56:858 (3,4,5)- 이거 아무도 태클 안 걸어요?
00:05 BinJip: 가븐이 패스래요
00:05 ykcarrot: 흠.. 그냥 노트 일관성으로 통과시키려나 보네요
00:06 ykcarrot: 히트 사운드 모딩 몇 개 있어요
00:06 BinJip: 네
00:06 ykcarrot: 00:29:572 (5)-
00:06 ykcarrot: 00:29:572 (5)- Add clap
00:06 ykcarrot: 00:29:858 (7)- Add clap to head
00:07 ykcarrot: 노래 들어보면 스네어 세번 있더라고요
00:07 ykcarrot: 그거 때문에 제안한거고요
00:07 ykcarrot: 00:43:572 (2)- Add finish to tail
00:08 BinJip: 힛사만 해요?
00:08 ykcarrot: 다른 거도 있어요
00:08 ykcarrot: 00:52:429 (1)- Add whistle
00:09 ykcarrot: 01:48:715 (1)- Add finish to head
00:09 ykcarrot: 03:51:001 (2)- Add finish to tail
00:09 ykcarrot: 힛사는 이거로 끝
00:10 ykcarrot: 다 하셨음?
00:10 BinJip: 네
00:10 ykcarrot: 00:07:715 (3)- 한 칸 내리세요
00:10 ykcarrot: 00:43:858 (3)- 여기 뉴콤보
00:11 BinJip: 끝
00:11 ykcarrot: 02:23:144 (6)- 이거 보면 슬라이더 끝이 5번 끝이랑 겹치잖아요
00:11 ykcarrot: 그리고 약간 가까운 느낌이 있던데
00:12 ykcarrot: 6,7,8 번 노트 수평반전 해보세요
00:12 BinJip: 했어요
00:13 ykcarrot: 02:36:858 (6)- 이거 뉴콤보 말씀 드렸었나요?
00:14 BinJip: 아뇨
00:14 BinJip: 하나만 뉴콤보?
00:14 ykcarrot: 다음노트 말고 거기에 뉴콤보 넣으세요
00:14 ykcarrot: 3 2 3 이렇게 돼있으니까
00:14 ykcarrot: 노트 개수
00:14 BinJip: 네
00:15 ykcarrot: 마지막으로 아티스트랑 제목인데요
00:15 ykcarrot: 일본어 넣으세요
00:15 BinJip: 어디예요?
00:15 BinJip: 타이틀에요?
00:15 ykcarrot: http://puu.sh/1BYgm
00:15 ykcarrot: 이런식으로
00:17 BinJip: 끝?
00:17 ykcarrot: ㅇㅇ
Simple English
[Invincible]
00:07:715 (3) - Move down by 1 grid
00:29:572 (5) - Add clap
00:29:858 (7) - Add clap to head
00:43:572 (2) - Add finish to tail
00:43:858 (3) - You missed adding NC
00:52:429 (1) - Add whistle
01:48:715 (1) - Add finish to head
02:23:144 (6) - The spacing from previous note and overlap of its end a bit bothers me, it will be free from them by flipping horizontally.
02:36:858 (6) - Why didn't you add NC?
03:51:001 (2) - Add finish to tail


Go for it
Topic Starter
BinJip
ths!

yk!!
Garven
Thanks ykcarrot.

It's been a long time coming, but here you go!

Ranked!
Topic Starter
BinJip
THS GARVEN!
B2IN
축하해요 ~
Gloria Guard
빈집님 두번째 랭크 축하!
Rucker
Nice :)
-Neipezi
빈집님 랭 경축!
OnosakiHito
To be honest @ KDS and BAT's, I'm not sure about this break in the Taiko diff. at the beginning.
It has no reason to have such a - long - break, either I don't feel like it fits here in any way well. This isn't such a small issue. It feels akward, like it has been just cut at this part after this k-stream.

Please give me a reason why you used it here, else this should be unranked and mapped because of following guideline:
Breaks
All break sections should be artificially removed from the .osu file.
This also means to have in general no break sections as long as it dosen't fit.

Edit: I noticed right now, there are even more breaks. Why so KDS?
03:07:715~03:28:287 - those are 21 seconds are in general a not allowed time range, especially when the song it self is going on.
alacat
congrats BinJip san :3
Mythol
where's SS :(
Quilt
ome~
bmin11
랭크 축하드려요!
MadViolinist
love this song and the map great job <3
MMzz

OnosakiHito wrote:

To be honest @ KDS and BAT's, I'm not sure about this break in the Taiko diff. at the beginning.
It has no reason to have such a - long - break, either I don't feel like it fits here in any way well. This isn't such a small issue. It feels akward, like it has been just cut at this part after this k-stream.

Please give me a reason why you used it here, else this should be unranked and mapped because of following guideline:
Breaks
All break sections should be artificially removed from the .osu file.
This also means to have in general no break sections as long as it dosen't fit.

Edit: I noticed right now, there are even more breaks. Why so KDS?
03:07:715~03:28:287 - those are 21 seconds are in general a not allowed time range, especially when the song it self is going on.
I will tell you this right now, it's not getting deranked. You're free to have discussion with KDS as to why he did this though.
Mikkuri
gratz~ <3
C h i a_old
Nice map :3
OnosakiHito
Edit: ah whatever, like someone is going to listen to me
Tshemmp
finally, yay
Kanari
Yanaginagi ~ <3
Congrats on rank! >w<
LQA20Ans
Finally ranked! >_<

Congratulation!!!
JMC
Invincible (4.9 stars, 1245 notes)
Ra's Hard (4.98 stars, 764 notes)

le trolled
HelloSCV
So nice song!!! Nice work~
랭크 축하드립니다 :D
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