yanaginagi - Muteki no Soldier [Osu|Taiko]

posted
Total Posts
148
show more
marshallracer


DA FAQ?
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/51730
IT'S ASDFKLFSDJ ... first DoKo's stealing our BG and now you are
QUIT THIS GAME DUDE, SRSLY
You can't tell me you've got this BG elsewhere, it's either from DoKo's or my map, though he took it from our map anyway

If you can proof you didn't steal it, I'll apologize ..
ertyukjh010


Request from Modding Queue

[Unbeatable]

[Layout]
  1. 01:28:001 (7) - Don't stack, easy to miss, try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354499
  2. 02:52:715 (4) - Don't good-looking for me. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354502

[rhythm]
  1. 02:53:644 (1) - Unsnap slider??
  2. 04:31:715 (4) - Stream start here.

[Setting]
  1. 00:55:143 - Unsnap inherited point
  2. 01:04:286 - Unsnap inherited point
  3. 01:59:143 - Unsnap inherited point
  4. 02:08:286 - Unsnap inherited point
  5. 03:10:000 - Useless inherited point
  6. 04:04:857 - Unsnap inherited point
  7. 04:14:000 - Unsnap inherited point
  8. 04:23:143 - Useless inherited point
  9. 05:03:269 - Useless inherited point

[Opinion]
  1. Just opinion for me. I think you add a many 1/2 beat and lack of rhythm of design. For example you can add a stream here 04:36:287.
  2. Serious, many 1/2 beat slider start at red line like 04:15:001 (6,7). I do not know to explain in English, I try to use the Chinese, because I remember that you will be Chinese. 因為大部份的音樂的拍子8拍一組,其中每兩個拍子為一組,就像您的 04:15:001 (6,7) ,您的滑條強制分開了兩組拍子,打起上來其實很缺乏節奏感;I hope change all if you can.


Good lucky :)
Topic Starter
BinJip

marshall_racer wrote:



DA FAQ?
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/51730
IT'S ASDFKLFSDJ ... first DoKo's stealing our BG and now you are
QUIT THIS GAME DUDE, SRSLY
You can't tell me you've got this BG elsewhere, it's either from DoKo's or my map, though he took it from our map anyway

If you can proof you didn't steal it, I'll apologize ..
I not know the exact sources

I just received is -SS-
Topic Starter
BinJip

ertyukjh010 wrote:



Request from Modding Queue

[Unbeatable]

[Layout]
  1. 01:28:001 (7) - Don't stack, easy to miss, try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354499
  2. 02:52:715 (4) - Don't good-looking for me. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354502

[rhythm]
  1. 02:53:644 (1) - Unsnap slider??
  2. 04:31:715 (4) - Stream start here.

[Setting]
  1. 00:55:143 - Unsnap inherited point
  2. 01:04:286 - Unsnap inherited point
  3. 01:59:143 - Unsnap inherited point
  4. 02:08:286 - Unsnap inherited point
  5. 03:10:000 - Useless inherited point
  6. 04:04:857 - Unsnap inherited point
  7. 04:14:000 - Unsnap inherited point
  8. 04:23:143 - Useless inherited point
  9. 05:03:269 - Useless inherited point

[Opinion]
  1. Just opinion for me. I think you add a many 1/2 beat and lack of rhythm of design. For example you can add a stream here 04:36:287.
  2. Serious, many 1/2 beat slider start at red line like 04:15:001 (6,7). I do not know to explain in English, I try to use the Chinese, because I remember that you will be Chinese. 因為大部份的音樂的拍子8拍一組,其中每兩個拍子為一組,就像您的 04:15:001 (6,7) ,您的滑條強制分開了兩組拍子,打起上來其實很缺乏節奏感;I hope change all if you can.


Good lucky :)
thank~
popner
I didn't say you can ignore my rules by shooting a star.
Anyway, since you have shot a star at my map, i return one now.
Mythol
Requested mod from star~

[Unbeatable]
SliderMultiplier:1.80000000596047 should be fixed in .osu, and you must re-calculate slider lengths~ (I think this is rank-able now, so you don't have to fix, but looks nicer if you do)
00:11:715 (1,2,3,4) - Make these the same spacing?
00:36:572 (3) - 1 grip up ><
00:45:858 (6,7) - Try unstack like this?
01:01:144 (1) - Remove NC
01:01:715 (1) - ^
01:02:001 (2) - Add NC
01:11:572 (2) - Move note to ? same with 01:12:144 (4) but flipped
01:55:858 (6) - Move to here?
02:05:144 (2) -
02:10:429 (6) - Use x1.6 spacing for prev and next?
02:11:715 (7) - Add NC
02:11:858 (8,9) - I don't feel this jump fits well.. prefer if you switch 9 + 11
02:50:286 (1,2) - Switch order of these 2 with 02:49:429 (1,2)? I think going from smaller to bigger spacing fits better, and it helps the players prepare for the huge jumps
04:12:144 (2,4) - Ctrl + R? because you use this pattern a lot, and it flows nicer this way~

[S.S]
SliderMultiplier:2.00000000596047 should be fixed in .osu, and you must re-calculate slider lengths~ (Same as Unbeatable diff)
01:33:572 (5,6,7) - Dislike this stack.. try this?
01:40:858 - Add note, feels empty!
01:45:001 (3) - NC here to be consistent with all other combos, and remove nc on 01:45:429 (1) and add on 01:45:572 (2) instead~
01:51:858 (3) - ^
01:54:144 (3) - ^
01:56:429 (4) - ^
03:07:715 (1) - Move to center? current jump seems a little big.. and it looks nice when the notes before are a circle around it
03:57:572 (5) - same as 01:45:001 (3)
03:59:858 (2) - ^
there are more of these but you can find on your own^
03:58:857 (1) - Remove NC
04:09:144 (1) - ^
04:09:429 (3) - Add NC

Too many inconsistent NC.. please check again ><
and I think there are too many stacks, maybe you can be more creative and change into patterns :o
maybe re-mod this diff when you fix NC because I was angered by them and didn't watch the map closely..
kosiga
Hi~ BinJip :)

from my queue~

here my mod~

[General]
  1. Timig - 2nd red line - It is not unified. Please unify it
    from AIBat: - [S.S]04:44:180, BPM of 176.000. - [Unbeatable]04:44:179, BPM of 176.000.
  2. Song folder - normal-slidertick.wav - looks like you are not using. Please delete if not used.


[Unbeatable]
  1. 00:08:287 (5) - add NC (big jump point
  2. 00:37:715 (4,5) - Ctrl+R. It thinks that a flow improves more
  3. 00:55:143 - green line move to 00:55:144. It is not put on a line. Please put kiai time at least on a line.
  4. 00:58:572 (6) - add NC (big jump point
  5. 00:58:858 (8) - grid move to x132,y176. ( symmetrical with 00:58:572 (6) ) and ( 00:59:001 (9) - move to x256,y312 ? )
  6. 01:01:144 (1) - remove NC ( i think no need NC
  7. 01:01:714 - same 00:55:143
  8. 01:04:286 - ^
  9. 01:40:144 (4,5,6,7,1) - Seem to flow a little bad to me x.x for ex: in my case http://puu.sh/EGOL
    216,172,100144,2,0,B|165:166|133:198,1,90.0000002980235,0|12
    200,260,100429,5,8
    256,88,100572,1,4
    408,184,100715,1,8
  10. 01:40:429 (5) - add NC ?
  11. 01:59:143 - same 00:55:143
  12. 02:05:714 - ^
  13. 02:05:858(x) - add note. Better place to note here is a good rhythm.
  14. 02:06:001 (1,2,3,4) - This anti-jump is very confused. I recommend that you put here. (02:06:287.02:06:858.02:07:429.02:08:001.) I think that it is the rhythm that should make a anti-jump here.
  15. 02:08:287 - same 00:55:143
  16. 02:15:143 - ^
  17. 02:54:287 (3,4) - i think too far :(
  18. 03:10:225 - Unnecessary green line
  19. 03:53:429 (4) - add finish ( same as others )
  20. 03:54:715 (6,1) - Suggestion of the rhythm: 03:54:715 (6) - add repeat. and 03:55:001 (1) - remove note.
  21. 04:04:857 - same 00:55:143
  22. 04:14:000 - ^
  23. 04:22:001 (1) - remove finish ( dose not match imo x.x
  24. 04:23:143 - Unnecessary green line
  25. 04:41:287 - same 00:55:143
  26. 05:03:269 - Unnecessary green line
  27. 05:03:270 (1) - does not match the sound of the whistle. so 05:05:315 - S:C1⇒change to S is better.


[S.S]
  1. 00:08:001 (4) - add clap to end of the slider ?
  2. 02:39:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - How about putting it without stacked ? for ex: http://puu.sh/EHKy
  3. 03:18:429 (3,4) - Ctrl+R. I think it will flow better
  4. 05:03:356 (1) - dose not match end imo x.x spinner end 05:06:168. ( same as Unbeatable diff is better imo )

    04:44:180~05:00:202 - How to use this hitsound has no meaning x.x; enough just to use soft-hitsound. or Do you forget the addition of the silence-sliderslide?



good luck~ :)
LaceWingfield
hi~ :D
all are my suggestion and feel free to ignore.

[S.S]
00:28:001 (2,3) - Curve this a little bit more so it would make blanket each other
00:40:572 (8) - x=324 , y=148 ?
00:47:572 (8) - either 1 or 2 grid down
00:50:715 (1) - 1 grid right?
00:55:144 - i guess at this kiai, using normal whistle is better.
01:27:572 (4) - 1 grid down?
01:59:144 - same as 00:55:144
02:28:715 (6) - somehow i don't like the position here.. 2 grid right and 1 grid down?
02:58:572 - 03:02:715 i guess use soft default at this part
04:44:520 (1) - remove whistle

[Unbeatable]
00:08:001 (4) - 1 grid left?
00:11:144 (7) - make slider blanket like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/356734
00:13:429 (5) - spacing
00:30:144 (8) - x=184,y=260?
00:35:858 (5) - spacing
00:42:287 (4) - x=248,y=192?
01:08:715 (4) - spacing
01:53:715 (7) - 1 grid left?
03:10:429 (3) - ^
04:22:001 - remove finish from spinner
04:29:287 (3) - spacing
04:48:440 (1) - change this to a slider that ends at 04:48:610

That's all~ nice mapset :)
Topic Starter
BinJip
Mythol

kosiga

LaceWingfield

thanks~
Hinsvar
...I hope I'm not too late.

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>Unbeatable
  1. 02:06:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ...I found these anti-jump stacks pretty unexpected, especially after all those jumps. Maybe make some jumps here too, by moving 02:06:001 (1,3,5,7) to (x,32)? (x here means it's still the same value; you just need to make sure the y axis is 32).
  2. 02:08:001 (8) - Make this a 1/4 slider that repeats twice (begin at the current position, end at 02:08:215)? It fits with the music very well. If you do this, I suggest to make sure the end of the slider is located at (304,192) and make sure 02:08:286 (1)'s beginning is stacked below that.


>S.S
  1. ...A 1.2x speed-up on the kiai times for a 210 BPM song with 2.00 SV? Isn't that a bit... ridiculous?
  2. 00:08:572 (3,4) - Ctrl+R? I know you're making a square pattern here, but... don't know, I think it'll play better with this.
  3. 03:07:715 (1) - Don't really think this jump is necessary. Stacking it below 03:07:573 (7) should do.
  4. 04:44:180 - This section is supposed to be slow, right? Using 0.5x BPM won't hurt.


Eh... yeah, just that. Don't know what should I rant again here.

Good luck on the way 8-)
kyuten
Hi~Request from my queue

[General]
fine~

[S.S]
-Beatmap-
00:11:144 (4,5) - This kind of overlap is a little hard to read for a 210BPM song with AR9 imo..
00:15:715 (4) - ^
00:15:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and the distance here makes it a bad plow :(
00:17:858 (3) - overlap
00:40:715 (9,10) - ctrl+R..? this flows better imo..
01:03:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try this ww?
01:05:857 (3,4,5,6) - make this a beautiful shape ww
02:01:144 (6) - a jump here 0 0? i prefer normal distance._.
02:07:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is better imo ww
02:12:144 (1,2,3,4) - the distance bewteen 2 and 4 is nearer than 2 and 3...when I played this part I missed 3 and aim to catch 4
03:27:929 (6) - delete this note 0 0?
04:22:572 (1,2,3,4,5) - use 1/4 here?


[Unbeatable]
-Timing-
03:10:000 - useless green line

others are all fine for me ww


[Overall]
Nice song and map ww
Actually when I played S.S its usually "ee what i missed (°Д°)?? where is next note (°Д°)??" and only got pass with 86acc..
And Unbeatable I think this is more beatable ww I can catch every note and get 94acc ww
Maybe this is too hard for me Tv T...

Good luck ~
Topic Starter
BinJip
Hinsvar

kyuten

thanks!
alacat
Hi :3
Requested by star stream.

[General]
fine.

[Unbeatable]
●SliderMultiplier:1.80000000596047 change to 1.8
●00:39:001 (2) - add finish on the slider's end ?
●01:22:572 (1,2) - like this ?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/357695
●01:37:429 (1) - add finish on the slider's head ?
●01:43:286 (1) - ^
●04:03:715 (1) - add finish
●04:03:715 (1) - remove whistle ?


[S.S]
●SliderMultiplier:2.00000000596047 → 2.0
●00:04:287 (4) - change to 1/8 slider?
●01:38:572 (1) - add clap
●02:19:429 (6,7,8,1) - not stack better imo
●04:13:572 (6) - change to 1/8 slider? and stack on 04:14:001 (1) -


good luck :3
Topic Starter
BinJip

alacat wrote:

Hi :3
Requested by star stream.

[General]
fine.

[Unbeatable]
●SliderMultiplier:1.80000000596047 change to 1.8
●00:39:001 (2) - add finish on the slider's end ?
●01:22:572 (1,2) - like this ?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/357695
●01:37:429 (1) - add finish on the slider's head ?
●01:43:286 (1) - ^
●04:03:715 (1) - add finish
●04:03:715 (1) - remove whistle ?




good luck :3
ありがとうございます~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue

尼玛刚刷了一百多pp就给我这种图这不是打击我么, 什么心态 <-- ignore this line (off-topic, only for myself o.o)

Unbeatable

  1. 00:16:715 (2) - here looks better x:436 y:220
  2. 00:25:429 (1) - move last sliderpoint to x:144 y:144 to make blanket look better
  3. 00:33:144 (6,3) - it's not stacked perfectly
  4. 00:36:287 (1,2,3,4) - this gives a better flow http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358720
  5. 01:03:715 (9,1) - slider blanket like this..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358721
    141,191,63715,2,0,B|68:192|28:268|60:332,2,180,4|0|4
  6. 02:54:215 (2,3) - why 1/4..? missing note at 02:54:144 ?
  7. 02:58:001 (5) - better here..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358724
  8. 03:18:287 (3) - move to x:152 y:188
  9. 04:39:572 (4) - better blanket..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358728
  10. 04:42:572 - drag break here..? gives a pause break effect
  11. 05:06:252 - add note here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358730 ._.


S.S

  1. 00:15:858 (5,6,7) - imo ctrl+r plays better here o.o
  2. 00:23:144 (1) - I think this shape goes with music better orz http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358697
  3. 01:03:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - imo,,, back and forth jump at 210 bpm, it's so hard,,,,, and also, 01:04:001 (7) - stacks there ;__; maybe you can do like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358701
  4. 01:04:715 (3) - ctrl+r plays better here o.o
  5. 01:44:287 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358703 looks better...
  6. 02:07:144 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358704 how about this._.
  7. 02:16:287 (1,2,3,4) - stack somewhere else...?
  8. 03:42:001 (1,2) - you can do slider blanket better like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358708
    92,268,222001,6,0,B|132:208|104:120|24:104,1,200.000000596047,4|8
  9. 04:22:715 (2,3,4,5) - stream here


that's all

Good luck~
BCI
hi there
mod time via my queue

[General]
why you ignore kosiga's

kosiga wrote:

from AIBat: - [S.S]04:44:180, BPM of 176.000. - [Unbeatable]04:44:179, BPM of 176.000.
i still see it

[S.S]


[Unbeatable]


sorry but mapset is clean imo, please don't give kd /me runs
Ryu_old
[UB]
01:08:429 - 01:08:715 - slider 1 repeat
01:48:572 - 01:48:715 - slider
01:48:858 - 01:49:144 - slider 1 repeat
01:49:429 - 01:49:715 - slider
01:50:287 - 01:50:572 - slider 1 repeat
01:50:715 - remove
01:51:001 - ^

[S.S]
So Sexy

Good luck moemoe >w</
Leorda
Oh hey


[Unbeatable]
02:53:644 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider
02:54:572 (4) - Add clap at start slider
04:28:144 (3) - Move 1 grid left? (Nazi)
04:49:974 (7) - New combo?
05:03:269 (1) - Why whistle? It shouldn't have a whistle at last spinner


[S.S.]
01:49:001 (1) - Not stack correctly with previous note
02:04:001 (2) - Move down a bit so it's not overlapped by previous slider (Nazi)
02:39:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - An anti-jump after jump pattern will confuse the players, I guess
03:04:001 (4) - This note is touch the HP Bar
03:06:001 (5) - The tail slider is almost offscreen
04:11:429 (4) - I don't like if this place at same place as 04:11:429 (4).... Try to make something better?


That's all I got, sorry
bmin11
[S.S]
개인적으로 호루라기의 부재가 아쉬운 노래네요. 기타와 어울리리라 생각했는데 쩝...
01:47:287 (3) - 이 노트가 특별히 점프가 아닌 이유가 있나요?
02:07:144 (1,2,3,4,5) - 굳이 안티 점프라 여겨질 멜로디도 없고 노트가 겹쳐있기까지하다보니 되려 넓은 스트림으로 여겨질까 걱정되네요. 좌우 지그재그로 내려오는 패턴이 어떨까요? 이전 슬라이더들과도 어울리리라 생각해요.
02:16:287 (1,2,3,4) - 위와 같은 이유입니다. 다른 패턴을 추천드려요.
02:39:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - 으아아 파트의 클라이막스다보니 거의 확실하게 스트림으로 여겨지게 되네요. 위 두 패턴은 몰라도 이건 정말 알아낼 방도가 없었어요.
04:44:520 (1) - 개인적으로 이 이후로 Soft Whistle을 너무 남용하신게 아닌가 싶네요. 노래의 에필로그나 다름없으니 잔잔한 여운을 남기는게 좋으리라 생각합니다. 예를 들어 일정한 리등으로 넣으며 볼륨을 조금 줄이는것도 좋은 방법이구요.

[Unbeatable]
위 모딩과 같이 호루라기의 부재가 아쉬운 난이도네요.
00:23:715 (3) - 슬라이더 모양이 흐름에 굉장히 어긋나네요. U가 되도록 고쳐보세요.
00:30:144 (8) - 좀 더 내리셔서 다음 슬라이더로의 움직임이 수월하게 해주세요.
01:29:001 (5) - 이거 1/3으로 고쳐주세요.
01:59:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 노래와 무관한 점프네요. 물론 그런 점프가 이전에 아예 없다고 (두 난이도 포함) 할순 없겠지만 이건 특히 어긋나게 느껴지네요. 이전 같은 슬라이더 + 노트 점프가 더 어울리리라 생각합니다 굳이 점프가 필요하다면.
02:06:001 (3) - 패턴이 3노트로 이루어지면 안되고 4노트로 이루어져야겠네요. 보컬이 패턴의 시작점이 되게 패턴과 히트사운드를 고쳐주세요.
02:36:144 (3,4) - 갑자기 여기서부터 정상 스페이싱이 되니 헷갈리네요. 점프로 고쳐주세요.
02:54:144 (2) - 이 노트를 지워주세요. 이유는 다음 슬라이더를 위함입니다.
02:54:286 (3) - 위를 하신 후, 이 슬라이더를 이전에 있는 파란색 선으로 옮겨주세요.
03:32:144 (3) - 박수 추가
03:34:715 (4,5) - 이것들 1/3입니다. 고칠 필요는 없습니다 어차피 플레이어가 못느낄수도 있으니.
03:45:001 (1,2,3,4) - 이전 노트로부터 이어지기 편하게 왼쪽으로 조금 옮겨주세요.
04:44:519 (2) - 이 이후부터 박수는 안어울린다고 생각합니다 (솔직한 심정으로 말하자면 피아노 공연에서 축하용 폭죽 터트리는 듯한 기분). Soft Whistle이 더 어울릴꺼에요.



화이팅!
W h i t e

[Unbeatable]



OD : -1

00:21:858 (6) - : NC

00:34:001 (3,1) - : 조금 겹치네요... 조금 넓혀 주세요.

00:42:287 (4) - : stuck 해주시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

01:28:572 (3,4,5) - : 연타 길이 조금 좁혀주세요.

02:11:715 (7) - : stuck 해주시는게 좋을 것 같습니다. 그리고 NC

02:35:858 (1) - : 슬라이더하고 겹치는 건 조금 그렇습니다. 옆으로 해주세요.

02:53:644 (1,2) - : 박자가 조금 안맞는 것 같습니다. 1/4로 해보세요,

03:47:644 (2,3) - : 연타로 해주세요. 햇갈립니다.

04:06:144 (8) - : NC


[S.S]



02:04:858 (1,2,3,4) - : stuck 해주시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.


잘 만드셧습니다 ㅇㅅㅇ..
플레이도 잘하시고 매핑도 잘하시는 당신은 욕심쟁이 ㅇㅅㅇ...

늅모딩 봐주셔서 감사합니다 ㅎ..

그리고 이 스레드에 S.S = Star Stream이라고 넣어주세요.
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply