1. Asakichi's Expert (5 stars, 296 notes)
2. Master (5 stars, 384 notes)
3. Novice (2.96 stars, 96 notes)
4. Regular (4.91 stars, 225 notes)

Twilight Blue wrote:

こんにちは、ショートMODですが・・・

[Master]

SPOILER

1. 00:32:511 (4) - NC fix
2. 00:48:545 (5) - NC fix
3. 00:49:752 (5) - NC fix
4. 01:01:649 (5) - NC fix
5. 01:03:545 (6) - NC fix
6. 01:21:648 (5) - NC fix
7. 01:22:855 (5) - NC fix
8. 01:27:165 (5) - NC fix
9. 01:34:752 (7) - NC fix
10. 01:36:132 (4) - NC fix

とても面白い譜面だと思います 頑張ってください

• #1 Offset 11300
  #2 Offset 45105
  Kiai Timeの統一

• 短いスライダーの連続リバースはちょっと難しいと思います
  単発サークルはなるべく赤線を踏まないように

200,280,33368,6,0,B|100:260|88:176|100:96|200:76,1,300,4|2

• 00:21:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 7連ストリームは難しいと思います
  00:41:472 (3) - 急なSV変化は避けたほうがいいと思います
  01:34:415 (3,4,5) - 曲に合ってないストリーム
  大きすぎるジャンプが所々ありました
  ノートがスライダーの下に隠れている箇所がありました

• 00:56:484 (2,3,4) - 少し打ちづらい印象を受けました。00:56:829 (4) の角度を変更してみてはいかがでしょうか。
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:28:208 (2,3,4) - ^

• 00:13:713 (5,6,7,8) - (8)を削除し、ストリームを00:13:886に移動
  00:36:989 (1) - このあたりの間隔は少し離れすぎている気がしました
  00:49:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 直線に配置してください
  01:09:760 (3) - この後のギターパートの音をもう少し丁寧に拾って欲しいです
  01:29:415 (1,2) - 流れ的に少し叩きづらい気がしました

h-728 wrote:

from IRC mod

[Asakichi's Expert]

• 00:56:484 (2,3,4) - 少し打ちづらい印象を受けました。00:56:829 (4) の角度を変更してみてはいかがでしょうか。
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:28:208 (2,3,4) - ^

h-728 wrote:

from IRC mod

[General]

• #1 Offset 11300 fix
  #2 Offset 45105 fix
  Kiai Timeの統一 fix

オフセットの再設置作業、ありがとうございました

[Novice]

• 短いスライダーの連続リバースはちょっと難しいと思います fix
  単発サークルはなるべく赤線を踏まないように fix

追加:スライダーのコード忘れてました。

200,280,33368,6,0,B|100:260|88:176|100:96|200:76,1,300,4|2

[Regular]

• 00:21:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 7連ストリームは難しいと思います fix
  00:41:472 (3) - 急なSV変化は避けたほうがいいと思います fix
  01:34:415 (3,4,5) - 曲に合ってないストリーム fix
  大きすぎるジャンプが所々ありました fix
  ノートがスライダーの下に隠れている箇所がありました fix

[Master]

• 00:13:713 (5,6,7,8) - (8)を削除し、ストリームを00:13:886に移動 fix(提案、使わせて頂きました)
  00:36:989 (1) - このあたりの間隔は少し離れすぎている気がしました fix
  00:49:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 直線に配置してください fix
  01:09:760 (3) - この後のギターパートの音をもう少し丁寧に拾って欲しいです fix(配置変更・note/slider追加しました)
  01:29:415 (1,2) - 流れ的に少し叩きづらい気がしました no change(他の方の意見も参考にさせて頂きたいと思います)

がんばってください。☆

長時間のIRCMOD(特にオフセットの再設置作業)、ありがとうございました、お疲れ様でした！
親切丁寧で、とても良いMODをして頂きました
良い譜面を作れるよう、善処していきたいと思います！
本当に、ありがとうございました！
追記：☆までいただけるなんて、本当に申し訳ないです・・・
ありがとうございます

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

[General]
Offset 265
also i think second offset is unnecessary, better to remove it and resnap all notes. fix. yes, its better

[Master ]
00:58:713 (2) - finish tail fix
00:59:402 (4) - finish fix
01:00:092 (3) - finish fix
01:30:449 (4) - finish fix
01:33:208 (6) - finish fix

[Regular]
00:57:346 (2) - finish fix
00:58:725 (2) - tail finish fix
00:59:415 (4) - finish fix
01:00:105 (6) - finish fix
01:06:651 (1) - remove this note and extend spinner to 01:06:656, sounds much better for me~ fix. oh.. ty ^^
01:31:829 (2) - finish tail fix
01:32:518 (4) - finish fix
01:33:208 (6) - finish fix
01:39:760 (1) - same as before i think this sounds better http://puu.sh/EeVP fix. i think so ^^

[Novice]
00:31:989 (4) - try this http://puu.sh/EeX1, sounds better for me~ fix
00:34:748 (2) - remove unnecessary NC fix

Good luck~

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

[Asakichi's Expert]
00:41:644 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - this NC a bit confusing try to rearange them like this http://puu.sh/EeRb , its much more readable o.o!
Nice Idea, fix!
01:39:760 (1) - this part, i think it will be much better if you do this http://puu.sh/EeSK
no change.

1. remove letter box
2. change tickrate2 better i think

1. 00:21:644 - maybe stream start this line?
2. 00:16:471 (5) - 2grid down then stacked 3
3. 00:33:368 (1) - you should change this I cant first play this part i think other people too
4. 00:43:971 (1) - remove new combo
5. 01:03:196 (4) - stack with 01:01:816 (2) - i think look good
6. 01:07:161 (1) - near this note i think player confusion
7. 01:18:885 (3,1) - 3move to far? i think overlap bit messy
   

1. 01:10:265 (3) - 01:10:782 - i think end better?

1. 01:28:196 (3) - looks bad I think stack 01:27:506 (3) -
2. 01:17:678 - useless this line

1. 01:18:196 (1) - end add clap
2. finish good but this diff poor use clap please check this http://puu.sh/rIYY
   

2. 00:19:920 (1,2,3,4) - some whistles don't fit the music imo. add clap instead of claps? I think it's better.
3. 00:22:678 ～ 00:31:644 - Add claps to follow the drum. It would be better. (same as Sorda said)
4. 00:31:816 (4) - remove this note. It's hard to play for beginners.
5. 00:37:506 (1) - remove some whistle and add claps at the beginning, middle and end to follow the drum.
6. 00:38:885 (2) - add finish at the beginning?
7. 00:42:678 (2) - add clap at the end instead of whistle? I think it's better.
8. 00:58:885 (1) - add finish at the beginning and the end.
9. 01:25:092 (1) - remove new combo
10. 01:28:885 (1) - ^

1. 00:22:678 ～ 00:33:368 - same as Novice
2. 00:32:161 (3) - Hmm, it doesn't follow the music well. I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
3. 00:55:782 (6,1) - swtich new combo
4. 01:23:627 - add a note to follow the backsound?
5. 01:29:230 (1) - remove new combo
6. 01:29:747 (1) - ^
7. 01:31:127 (1) - ^
8. 01:39:747 - Inconsistency in Kiai times of other diffs, kiai time should end here.
9. 01:40:437 (1) - move to 01:40:351 same as Asakichi's diff. Because I felt starting is delay. Also don't forget moving the green timing point.

1. 00:22:678 ～ 00:33:368 - hitsoundが物足りなく感じるのでドラムに沿ってclap入れると良いと思います
2. 00:20:954 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ノーマルヒットサウンド使って徐々に音量を上げていき連打の部分は下げると良いと思います
3. 00:32:161 (3) - これはあまり音楽に合っていないので消してみては？
4. 00:33:368 (1) - 先頭にfinish
5. 00:38:885 (1) - ＾
6. 00:48:540 (4,5) - スペーシングが狭いです
7. 00:56:127 (1) - remove new combo
8. 01:40:437 - この緑線を01:40:351に移動

1. 00:20:954 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - change normal-hitsound and try to go up the volume gradually.
2. 00:31:816 (1) - add finish at the beginning and the end
3. 00:32:506 (1) - ^
4. 00:38:885 (4) - It's not completely symmetrical. move 2 grid left.
5. 00:39:920 (2) - ^
6. 00:43:956 - unsnapped timing point
7. 00:43:971 (1) - remove whistle. it doesn't fit the music.
8. 00:49:747 (1) - remove new combo
9. 00:52:675 - unsnapped timing point
10. 00:57:333 (5) - add finish at the beginning
11. 01:01:644 (5) - remove new combo
12. 01:05:782 (1,7) - add clap
13. 01:07:161 (1,1,1) - some new combo are not necessary. And can you make another pattern like this? (same as sorda's opinion)
14. 01:15:265 (3,4,1) - The spacing is bad. Please fix it.
15. 01:15:437 (1) - unsanpped silder's end. (by AIBat)
16. 01:16:730 (2) - ^ , and add new combo
17. 01:22:851 (1) - remove new combo
18. 01:39:569 - unsnapped timing point
19. 01:40:437 (1) - same as Regular

S o r d a wrote:

[Asakichi's Expert]:

1. 01:10:265 (3) - 01:10:782 - i think end better?　　　　　no change

banvi wrote:

[Asakichi's Expert]

1. 00:22:678 ～ 00:33:368 - hitsoundが物足りなく感じるのでドラムに沿ってclap入れると良いと思います　　入れてみました
2. 00:20:954 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ノーマルヒットサウンド使って徐々に音量を上げていき連打の部分は下げると良いと思います　そんな感じに修正
3. 00:32:161 (3) - これはあまり音楽に合っていないので消してみては？　私としてはあっているので、とりあえず保留
4. 00:33:368 (1) - 先頭にfinish　fix
5. 00:38:885 (1) - ＾　　　　　　　　fix
6. 00:48:540 (4,5) - スペーシングが狭いです　fix
7. 00:56:127 (1) - remove new combo　fix
8. 01:40:437 - この緑線を01:40:351に移動　fix

S o r d a wrote:

from in-game

[overall]:

1. remove letter box fix
2. change tickrate2 better i think fix

[Master]:

1. 00:21:644 - maybe stream start this line? fix
2. 00:16:471 (5) - 2grid down then stacked 3 fix
3. 00:33:368 (1) - you should change this I cant first play this part i think other people too this diff is highest diff, so no change
4. 00:43:971 (1) - remove new combo fix
5. 01:03:196 (4) - stack with 01:01:816 (2) - i think look good fix
6. 01:07:161 (1) - near this note i think player confusion fix
7. 01:18:885 (3,1) - 3move to far? i think overlap bit messy i dont think so. sry, no change

[Regular]:

1. 01:28:196 (3) - looks bad I think stack 01:27:506 (3) - fix
2. 01:17:678 - useless this line fix

[Novice]:

1. 01:18:196 (1) - end add clap fix
2. finish good but this diff poor use clap please check this http://puu.sh/rIYY fix. thx for good advice ^^
   

good luck

banvi wrote:

modreq from in-game

Red: You must fix it or it's Unrankable stuff.
Blue: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Black: Just suggestion

[Novice]

2. 00:19:920 (1,2,3,4) - some whistles don't fit the music imo. add clap instead of claps? I think it's better. fix
3. 00:22:678 ～ 00:31:644 - Add claps to follow the drum. It would be better. (same as Sorda said) fix
4. 00:31:816 (4) - remove this note. It's hard to play for beginners. fix
5. 00:37:506 (1) - remove some whistle and add claps at the beginning, middle and end to follow the drum. fix
6. 00:38:885 (2) - add finish at the beginning? fix
7. 00:42:678 (2) - add clap at the end instead of whistle? I think it's better. fix
8. 00:58:885 (1) - add finish at the beginning and the end. fix
9. 01:25:092 (1) - remove new combo fix
10. 01:28:885 (1) - ^ fix

[Regular]

1. 00:22:678 ～ 00:33:368 - same as Novice fix
2. 00:32:161 (3) - Hmm, it doesn't follow the music well. I hope you remove this and try making another pattern. fix. changed a pattern
3. 00:55:782 (6,1) - swtich new combo fix
4. 01:23:627 - add a note to follow the backsound? fix
5. 01:29:230 (1) - remove new combo fix
6. 01:29:747 (1) - ^ fix
7. 01:31:127 (1) - ^ fix
8. 01:39:747 - Inconsistency in Kiai times of other diffs, kiai time should end here. fix
9. 01:40:437 (1) - move to 01:40:351 same as Asakichi's diff. Because I felt starting is delay. Also don't forget moving the green timing point. fix

[Master]

1. 00:20:954 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - change normal-hitsound and try to go up the volume gradually. fix
2. 00:31:816 (1) - add finish at the beginning and the end fix
3. 00:32:506 (1) - ^ fix
4. 00:38:885 (4) - It's not completely symmetrical. move 2 grid left. fix
5. 00:39:920 (2) - ^ fix
6. 00:43:956 - unsnapped timing point fix
7. 00:43:971 (1) - remove whistle. it doesn't fit the music. fix
8. 00:49:747 (1) - remove new combo fix
9. 00:52:675 - unsnapped timing point fix
10. 00:57:333 (5) - add finish at the beginning fix
11. 01:01:644 (5) - remove new combo fix
12. 01:05:782 (1,7) - add clap fix
13. 01:07:161 (1,1,1) - some new combo are not necessary. And can you make another pattern like this? fix
14. 01:15:265 (3,4,1) - The spacing is bad. Please fix it. fix
15. 01:15:437 (1) - unsanpped silder's end. (by AIBat) fix
16. 01:16:730 (2) - ^ , and add new combo fix
17. 01:22:851 (1) - remove new combo fix
18. 01:39:569 - unsnapped timing point fix
19. 01:40:437 (1) - same as Regular fix

がんばってください～！

Mikan wrote:

hi~ Wreath

MOD初心者です。np
投稿された事は全て提案です。
全部no changeでも問題ないです！

Master

00:15:092 (3) - を 00:14:402 (1) - の開始地点に重ねてみてはどうでしょうか。 00:14:402 (1,2) - がDS 1.13くらいなので3を1に重ねても1.12なので問題ないと思います。 fix. ここを修正してしまうとAIMが詰まってしまうので、前後を修正して配置を綺麗に修正しました

00:17:678 (5) - の開始が 00:17:333 (4) - の真ん中のとこと重なっていますDS1.0でやると少し間隔があくのでそのほうが綺麗だと思います。fix. ここもここを修正してしまうとつながりが悪くなってしまうので、前後を修正しました

01:17:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ここは　http://puu.sh/HEul　のほうが良いなと思いました。00:44:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - こことの統一化をはかり、叩くリズムを全く同じにしています、そのため no change です

and, fixed a notes and sliders placement

nicemap とても良かったです！ ありがとうございますㅠㅠ
Rankd目指して頑張ってください！ お互い頑張りましょう

Mikan wrote:

hi~ Wreath

MOD初心者です。
投稿された事は全て提案です。
全部no changeでも問題ないです！

asakichi's Expert

00:37:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - このほうが綺麗かなーと思います http://puu.sh/HExA
謎のこだわりを持った部分なのでno change

01:04:230 (5) - 1grid←?
01:37:333 (5) - 1grid→?
fix!


nicemap とても良かったです！
Rankd目指して頑張ってください！

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa Konnichiwa


[General]
* 2nd combo color seems blend the BG. Find another one? i will find a new one
edit : changed combo color~

[Novice]
00:23:713 (3) - Too much repeating slider can confuse beginners player fix
00:26:471 (4) - ^ fix
00:38:885 (2) - Add finish at head slider? fix
00:56:471 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Make a pattern like this to make a symetric pattern? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/368033 fix. thanks ^^


[Regular]
01:30:954 (3) - Move to X:272 and Y:152? So it's doesn't touch to the slider? fix


[Master]
00:55:437 (5) - Stack with 00:55:609 (1)? If you don't do this, players will confuse to know the path while gameplay fix
01:15:437 (1,1) - 1/8 repeating slider with fast speed is pointless, unless if you have a reason fix


Keep this map good! o.O! thank you ^^

hibarirailwayz wrote:

Excellent map!!
☆～～～～～

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~
You requested in my queue but I couldnt find anything. ><
But, good luck though ~
And star ~ ;D

Sonico Makaron wrote:

Hello hello

[General]
looks fine

[Novice]
your SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999 must be 1.0 http://puu.sh/JyuF http://puu.sh/Jyvi fix o.O!? ty~ ^^
01:26:471 (1) - add finish fix
01:30:265 (4) - remove finish and add clap fix
00:51:989 - not use green line delete it fix

[Regular]
00:18:196 (2) - remove finish fix
00:36:127 (1) - add finish end slider? fix
00:38:885 (1) - add finish fix
00:43:971 (x) - add note i think 4-notes stream is hard to play. so no change, sry ; ;
01:26:127 (3) - add finish end slider fix

[Master]
Beat snap divisor 1/8? you sure for this? change 1/4 plz oops fix~
00:18:196 (2) - remove finish fix
00:41:471 (3) - remove finish fix
00:42:678 (2) - add finish fix
00:42:851 (3) - remove finish fix
00:43:196 (1) - add finish fix
01:17:333 - not use green line delete it fix

good luck

espiritur00 wrote:

I like this song :3~
Good Luck for the ranked~
I dont have kudos Srry when i have i star this ^^

Good Luck !

Sonico Makaron wrote:

[Asakichi's Expert]
00:20:954 (1) - maybe use this place Normal hitsounds and 00:22:161 (6) - soft hitsound nice idea! I use this.
00:31:989 (2) - add finish add
00:32:851 (5,6,7,8) - maybe use normal hitsound? use this
00:33:325 - unsnaped green line snaped on 1/8 line, and I think this is no problem. so no change.

Hello !

1. 00:44:489 (1) - Feels very weird to start to stream here would be better if it starts on a Red line because it where the vocal says Sayonara. remove it

1. 00:43:713 (2,3,4,5) - i prefer taking away the 4 , 5 just personal preference you could aswell ignore
2. 00:50:437 (5) - New combo and remove new combo after that
3. 00:51:127 (3) - Add note here and stack with 4 , 5 personal prefference again