1. Cilvery's Hard (4.92 stars, 297 notes)
2. Easy (1.63 stars, 99 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 352 notes)
4. Normal (3.74 stars, 152 notes)

bbj0920 wrote:

:D/
Hard 만들어도 ㄷ..쿨럭 아 아닙니다

-Gamu- wrote:

hi >w<

Requests from my queue~

purple software
[General]

●Tags: Add "opening" "eroge" "hentai" "game"? // I don't see necessity to add them. Specially "hentai" D:
●turn off the "letterbox during breaks"? // It is needed for Easy and Normal diff.

[Easy]

●00:33:562 (2) - Move (x:324 y:160). Overlap with the previous (3). Looks pretty. // It isn't overlapped with anything
●00:51:720 (1) - Add a whistle? // Nope
●01:01:193 (3) - Add a new combo? Because it is at the start of the kiai time. // Since previous notes are short to divide combo group, I wanna keep them as it is.
●01:32:871 (1) - Add a whistle? // OK

[Normal]

●CS-1? For beginners. // CS3 is too big for normal imo, at least I have never used it in my maps.
●00:21:128 (2) - 1.2x spacing, why? Think should be 1.0x. Move (x:384 y:192) // Because it seems very close to previous note
●00:21:325 (3) - Move (x:404 y:148) // I don't see any big difference
●00:51:720 (1) - Same as Easy diff
●01:01:193 (3) - Same as Easy diff
●01:32:871 (1) - Same as Easy diff // Added

[Insane]

●01:00:009 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - It is recommended that you change the rhythm. Don't fit the music // Are you sure? Delete them and listen to music carefully. They fit perfectly.
●01:01:193 (5) - Same as Easy diff
●01:13:825 (5) - Add a new combo? // I explained above

That's all

good luck~

-Gamu- wrote:

hi >w<

Requests from my queue~

purple software
[General]

●Tags: Add "opening" "eroge" "hentai" "game"?
●turn off the "letterbox during breaks"?

[Easy]

●00:33:562 (2) - Move (x:324 y:160). Overlap with the previous (3). Looks pretty.
●00:51:720 (1) - Add a whistle?
●01:01:193 (3) - Add a new combo? Because it is at the start of the kiai time.
●01:32:871 (1) - Add a whistle?

[Normal]

●CS-1? For beginners.
●00:21:128 (2) - 1.2x spacing, why? Think should be 1.0x. Move (x:384 y:192)
●00:21:325 (3) - Move (x:404 y:148)
●00:51:720 (1) - Same as Easy diff
●01:01:193 (3) - Same as Easy diff
●01:32:871 (1) - Same as Easy diff

[Cilvery's Hard]

●01:01:193 (3) - Same as Easy diff
●01:03:759 (1) - Move (x:404 y:180)そして、01:04:351 (2) - Move (x:308 y:168). こうすると(2)が前の(6)のスライダーの始点に重なる。
●うーん、にゅーこんぼをもう少し細かく切ったほうがいいと思いました（個人的に）。Insaneみたいな感じの分け方。少し細かくしてみました！！
私としたら、Insaneのにゅーこんぼの分け方は良いと思う。

[Insane]

●01:00:009 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - It is recommended that you change the rhythm. Don't fit the music
●01:01:193 (5) - Same as Easy diff
●01:13:825 (5) - Add a new combo?

That's all

good luck~

1. The BG is... uh, you know... (Hint: Look at the lower left corner of the BG.) Maybe change it into something less revealing?
2. I think a 1500 ms lead-in should be enough; 2000 feels a bit too long.

1. AR+1? I played with AR2 (the current AR) and AR3 (my suggestion) and I think AR3 goes better. AR2 makes things look a little crowded, IMO.
2. 01:12:641 (3,4) - Uh... won't new players (well, they're the 'supposed customers' [the people supposed to play this] of this diff after all) get tripped by a 1/2 stack? Maybe you should change it to a 1/2 slider.

1. CS -1? With the current CS, the objects look too small and has a pretty wide spacing for a Normal diff.

1. 01:43:233 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - Are you serious with this? I need to play twice here to be able to sightread this pattern.

1. 01:00:009 (1) - Eh... Maybe make it louder as time passes? You know, gradual volume increase with inherited timing points? I think this slider will work better with that. But then again, this slider's appearance is pretty unexpected for me.
2. 01:39:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Uh... not sure with this. A 1/2 stream after hitting the 01:38:693 (4,5,6) triplet is... I don't know what to say, actually.

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo.

Let's mod this.

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General

1. The BG is... uh, you know... (Hint: Look at the lower left corner of the BG.) Maybe change it into something less revealing? // I will try to fix :3
2. I think a 1500 ms lead-in should be enough; 2000 feels a bit too long. // Let's go middle ground 1750ms

>Easy

1. AR+1? I played with AR2 (the current AR) and AR3 (my suggestion) and I think AR3 goes better. AR2 makes things look a little crowded, IMO. // The song isn't so fast, it's fine for me.
2. 01:12:641 (3,4) - Uh... won't new players (well, they're the 'supposed customers' [the people supposed to play this] of this diff after all) get tripped by a 1/2 stack? Maybe you should change it to a 1/2 slider. // fixed

>Normal

1. CS -1? With the current CS, the objects look too small and has a pretty wide spacing for a Normal diff. // I don't know what screen resolution you're using, CS4 is already big enough when over 1280*960

>Insane

1. 01:00:009 (1) - Eh... Maybe make it louder as time passes? You know, gradual volume increase with inherited timing points? I think this slider will work better with that. But then again, this slider's appearance is pretty unexpected for me. // Fixed volume
2. 01:39:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Uh... not sure with this. A 1/2 stream after hitting the 01:38:693 (4,5,6) triplet is... I don't know what to say, actually. // Uh... look at the pattern?

k, this mapset is great. I would love to make an Extra/Extreme/'whatever-you-call-it' diff but this is already pending and Insane is hard enough anyway

Good luck on the way

Also, this is the 100th mapset I have modded by request on my queue.

\:D/ // GJ :3

Ra-s wrote:

Everything is suggestion

[Easy]
01:50:141 (2) - 밑으로 한칸? // OK

[Normal]
ㅁㄴㅇㄹ

[Insane]
허허커헠
01:18:364 (4) - NC? // No
01:28:036 (2) - 흐름같은건 모르겠고 모양은 이런걸 선호함 (개인취향...ㅠㅠ) http://puu.sh/EwoO // 별 다른 차이가 없네요.

정말 쓸때없는 모딩 봐주셔서 감사합니다 (_ _)
반삭하러가기 전의 마지막 모딩 3>

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hello ~ ykcarrot ~

Random check beatmap ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Cilvery's Hard]

1. 01:07:509 (1) - Move 1 grid left looks better. Fixed
2. 01:29:417 (9) - Stack on 01:29:614 (1) - start point,flow much better.
3. 00:00:799 (1) - Remove simple new combo,looks confused. Fixed
4. 01:30:207 (1,1) - ^ Fixed
5. 00:47:772 (1,1) - ^ Fixed

That's all ~ awesome mapset ~

Call me back recheck ~ if you think ready for go ~