Hopefully last recheck
EasyThis mod will require considerable restructuring. You may want to keep a backup of your difficulty.
00:15:861 (3) - Not aligned vertically. x > 320
00:16:245 (1) - You should fix the overlap with 00:14:707 (2) -
Raising the point where the slider curves should do it. (These 00:17:784 (2,3,4,1) - will need to be repositioned, which isn't that big of a deal. You have plenty of room to place them. I even have a pattern in mind, but I think it will be better for you to figure a pattern here). Hint: Pick a pattern where this 00:19:322 (1,2,3) - starts and ends on the vertical line.00:22:399 (1) - You shouldn't start this in that position, it isn't fitting for this reason. The vocal here 00:21:630 - is extended through the gap. So this often indicates a forward movement. there's a much more complicated reason as well, but it's much harder to explain. Let me suggest you remap it a bit.
Instructions00:22:399 (1) - Move this here 00:22:784 - , replacing 00:23:361 (2) -. With that done, add a repeat to 00:20:861 (3) -. You could position it like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/399453 After that it's just a case of repositioning the notes until the spacing evens out.Hitsound adjustments00:20:861 (3) - Add whistle to the repeat just so it doesn't sound empty.
00:30:091 (3) - Add finish to start. Sounds like a significant beat.
00:36:660 (4) - Add whistle on end. A change of shape is in order. You should try this, so that the end works better with the next slider.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/39946000:53:198 (1) - finish on start.
01:04:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This is formless. You should remap this with more interesting patterns.
The combo after see what you can do with this
http://puu.sh/QLYE01:12:044 (2,3) - I think it would be better if you managed to reverse the position to right to left if you can....
01:14:737 (4) - new combo.
May I suggest that you not have a red tick transition here 01:14:737 (4,5,6) - . It doesn't sound the greatest. Try this?
http://puu.sh/QM4SRecheckEdit: I don't think I will ever stop rechecking this. I must be overstaying my welcome. I just want to make sure everything I'm instructing is making things better.
General00:47:035 - You should raise volume to at least 60% here.
EasyYour Easy will be a lot better after this mod. I don't think I will need to recheck.
00:30:111 (3) - I accidentally ended this on a blue tick. Actually I have another idea. You can reduce to here 00:30:881 - . This is similar to how you originally had it.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400394 Make sure you shift all the note patterns to fix distance snap afterwards. (This is how I have the next part
http://puu.sh/R2JL ) When you get here 00:32:804 (3,4,1) - , instead of having 4,1 directly above the end of 3, you should have them off to the side like this
http://puu.sh/R2Pk The notes after can be fixed. Make sure 00:36:650 (4) - is still exactly lined up with previous note.
00:36:650 (4) - I've made this slider a bit better. Try using these points.
1. x 60 y 192
2. x 160 y 192
3. x 140 y 268
4. x 240 y 268
Notice the symmetry in the points 60 and 160 and 140 and 240 are both 100 apart. A good trick for making nice sliders, if to note how many units two points are in a slider, and then making sure the exact same is done for the other side of the shape. You don't need to worry about whether the shape fits in the timeline. You can scale the shape so that it fits.
00:40:111 (2,3,4) - When you move these, you should move them all at the same time. Position them so that 3, is roughly centered between the slider ends of this slider 00:37:804 (1) -. It would be a nice touch.
00:47:034 (1) - Replace end clap with whistle.
00:49:342 (3) - Add whistle
00:51:265 (2) - ^
00:51:650 (3) - Replace clap start with whistle- fits better.
00:53:188 (1) - whistle + finish on start and end
00:53:188 (1) - I have a nice fix to your slider overlap issue.
http://puu.sh/R3gx Afterwards you can reposition 00:55:111 (1,2) - and then move this forward to the long white tick. You'll need the gap to properly position the notes. This seems to work pretty good.
http://puu.sh/R3iE Notice I slanted the slider to fit better with 00:57:804 (1) - . It will shift where you start the sliders more to the right than where you originally had it. You'll need to fix the spacings and symmetry of the parts after it. When you get to 01:02:419 (3) - I realized it's crooked. Make sure you move the slider so the middle point is exactly on the vertical line or x 256. You will see that the points on the left and right are at different heights. Move the right point to match the left point.
http://puu.sh/R3z6 Keep fixing the distance snap by moving the notes over. You will be able to even out the distance snap during this transition 01:10:111 (2,1,2) - .
01:13:188 (3) - You can fix this slider's shape a bit by changing the points like this.
1. x 116 y 192
2. x 168 y 24
3. x 344 y 40
Fix spacing afterwards. You should move 01:17:804 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1) - All at once. Try to center 4,6 on the vertical line. Even after centering 01:22:419 (2) - this still isn't centered. This indicated a symmetry problem with previous slider. I fixed your points, but the slider is slightly more compact. I hope that's alright.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400486
1. x 356 y 72
2. x 472 y 72
3. x 472 y 276
4. x 356 y 276
Just mirror this slider over.
NormalThis difficulty still needs some restructuring here and there. The difficulty should be a lot better after this mod.
00:07:996 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Move all of these up 1 unit to perfectly center them.
00:12:035 (1,2,3,4,5) - Center these? Move the whole pattern until 00:12:035 (1) - is at x 388
00:19:342 (1,3) - Sliders could be better. Make the points the same distance apart. Also I think you could use more symmetry in the pattern itself, and the overlap is unnecessary.
00:22:419 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern could be a lot better. I came up with this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400510Hitsound adjustments.
00:22:804 (2) - Replace finish with whistle?
00:23:381 (3) - Move finish here.
00:23:765 (4) - Replace finish with whistle
00:24:535 (6) - Add whistle to start
00:27:035 (3) - whistle
00:25:496 - Add note.
00:28:573 (1,2,3,4) - Move right 1 unit if the spacing didn't change. 1 is not lined up with 00:27:996 (5) -. Keep moving notes over until you find a place to even the spacing.
00:29:342 (2) - Add whistle
00:30:111 (4) - Add finish.
00:41:265 (1,2,3) - Isn't straight or perfectly lined up with previous note. (I lined them up below)
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00:41:265 (1) - Move to x 228, y 292. move second point to x 188 y 252
00:41:842 (2) - x 132 y 200
00:42:227 (3) - x 80 y 144
00:41:265 (1,2,3) - remove whistle from end of 1, replace with finish, add finishes to other notes too.
00:42:804 (4) - It sounds better if you moved it here 00:43:188 - and made it 1/2th long. you can fix the spacing with this pattern.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400522 Remapping 00:46:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - shouldn't be too much of a problem. I would have recommended you use a better pattern here anyways. Try seeing what you can do with this.
http://puu.sh/R4Dz00:43:958 (1) - Whistle on start. (There's a sound there)
00:50:111 (1,2) - The asymmetry bothers me. How about this pattern instead? It's a lot less 2010.
http://puu.sh/R4HX If you find you can't figure out how to respace the next part 00:52:804 (5) - can be deleted.
00:55:881 (2) - Move 1 unit to the right.
00:58:381 (2,1) - Spacing doesn't need to be so close. You have the whole screen to start the combo. Move the snap closer to 0.7 and you should space the notes like this in the timeline.
http://puu.sh/R4Of It will be easier to make a good pattern with that timeline.
01:04:342 (4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Move all these up 1 unit to fix alignment.
01:04:727 (1) - Clap spam. I would only have a clap on the second repeat and a whistle at the very end. The whistle is so the next part can be whistle, clap whistle.
01:10:111 (5) - Soft finishes sound better IMO.
01:15:688 (3) - Fix overlap.
01:16:265 (1,2,3) - You know you don't always have to maintain distance snap when you change combo. You could center this regardless of distance snap.
01:17:804 (1) - Whistle
01:18:188 (2) - whistle on end
01:18:958 (3) - end with finish
01:20:881 (5,1,2,3,4) - Claps aren't the best here. 01:20:881 (5) - finish, 01:21:265 (1) - whistle, 01:21:650 (2) - finish, 01:22:034 (3) - whistle, 01:22:419 (4) - finish.
HardAgain, still some things you should fix. But it's not far away from being a solid difficulty. You're almost there.
00:16:842 (2) - Finish
00:19:919 (4) - Remove clap from end
00:20:881 (6) - whistle?
00:23:381 (3) - ^
00:24:919 (6) - Isn't symmetrical. Change middle point to x 440, y 208, and last point to x 340 y 88
00:25:881 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This plays surprisingly well.
00:40:496 (2) - Add clap.
00:41:842 (5) - Replacing start whistle with finish
00:43:958 (1,2,3,4,5) - Bad looking curve.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400541 also in the screenshot, note the timeline. I suggest you use that configuration. It plays a lot closer to the vocals.
00:47:804 (3) - start and end with whistle
00:49:150 - Plays better if this was a single note and this 00:49:342 - was a slider that ends here 00:49:727 - . you probably don't need to fix the spacing with the combo after.
00:51:650 (5) - Replace clap with whistle. Whistle should be audible. So if you can't hear the whistle raise the volume. See General comment.
00:52:034 (6) - Remove claps. Only have whistle on the end.
00:52:804 (7) - Delete. Doesn't fit.
00:52:996 (1) - Move this note out of the corner. also consider starting where 7 was. Ends on long white tick. Add finish to the end. Also the timeline is weird through here. I suggest a 1/8th transition. This plays more closely to the vocals IMO.
http://puu.sh/R5V2 also look at this pattern
http://puu.sh/R5WC00:56:458 (3) - whistle
00:56:842 (5) - finish?
00:57:419 (8) - whistle
00:57:804 (1,2) - Add finish
00:57:804 (1,2) - Move two units left to fix alignment with previous note.
01:01:265 (6) - Remove finish from end and add whistle?
01:12:996 (5,6) - 1.2 snap would be better here.
01:20:881 (8) - Okay. This just throws me off. also I think it would be better if it didn't overlap with 7. You could remove the slowdown and do this.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400563Paste this into your .osu under hit objects
4,304,80881,2,0,B|220:452|280:152|512:308,1,540
01:22:419 - Add note at x 420 y 192 It will fall right into the next combo's pattern.
01:24:919 (2,3) - Stack better please.
ConclusionI've spent the time to make this beatmap perfect. I want this ranked. Don't give up.