Hello DakeDekaane~
Modding via M4M. <3
When I saw your avatar I couldn't stop laughing for like 10 minutes. In fact I'm still laughing now.
This song is short so I'll try and give a lot of suggestions with lots of pictures cause pictures R fun. :3
Do with them what you will in your own style.
Such a nice song, I'm going to be singing it for weeks. ._.
[General]
I hear this song as more like 78 BPM ._.
In general I think one of the largest things that's holding this mapset back is the hitsounding. It's just too loud at a lot of sections, and
the slidertick is SO loud and ugly and it drives me insane because this is a really soft and beautiful song.
I suggest adding a silenced slidertick like this.
http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav
Rename it "soft-slidertick" and place it in the song folder.It's like night and day with this mapset without that annoying slidertick, trust me.
I recommend reducing volume in all sections by 20-25%.
Soft is nice here.It's not Pokemon. <3
[Easy]
In general about this difficulty, why did you not stick with 1.0 spacing throughout? You have a lot of ugly overlap everywhere and I don't think the overlap is nice for this song.
00:03:762 (3) - I don't think we should use finishes until the kiai time. They really stand out because there's nothing like it in the music. Replace with whistle imo, or lower volume by a lot.
00:17:319 (1) - This is better on the white tick imo.
00:31:483 (1,2,3,4) - See this looks so bad without 1.0 spacing. ;_;
Nice and curved/constant flow.
00:36:868 (1,2,3) - Make better flow?
00:51:081 - Vocals miss followed here imo. We start the heart slider earlier than we should. Here's I suggest.
00:51:081 (1) to 00:56:081 = end of heart slider.
Here I used the scale feature to shrink the heart slider so that it's 8 beats long.
Here what it looks like:
Also maybe make the heart slider a NC and remove the NC at 00:57:619 (1).
00:57:619 (1,1) - I advise against stacking like this in an easy.
01:02:604 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing is inconsistent and looks bad. And the 5 jumps to the left of the line that the 4 is following. Try and make it all flow nicely in a steady line. It will fit this song much better.
01:04:912 (5) - This long slider hits early. I recommend moving the 5 to 01:05:296 and shortening it so that it ends at 01:06:066 and adding a circle at 01:04:912.
Then maybe NC at 01:05:296 and delete NC at 01:06:450 and NC at 01:07:989.
You should go through here and reposition everything in 1.0 DS. The map will look SO much better.
[Normal]
00:03:762 (5) - Again not sure about the finishes before kiai time. Would be better as whistles imo.
00:05:685 (2) - The 2 feels really rushed here and sounds bad. Just delete it imo. The spaced singles feel really nice here.
00:16:069 - Why don't we map the piano a bit here?
Decrease volume on the 1 by like 10% then in the middle of the 4 bring volume down to 10% or so. Sounds really nice when the slider end hits with the piano there.
00:35:522 (3) - I recommend repeating the same pattern as 00:32:445 (3,4) as it's more flowing and fits the vocals better. These two small sliders aren't fitting.
Although maybe use a different slider shape.
These long flowing sliders fit much better with this song.
00:36:868 (1) - Remove NC
00:37:252 (2) - NC here
00:38:791 (1) - Maybe remove NC
00:44:752 - Again just use that same pattern as above it will flow much better.
00:47:829 - ^
00:49:158 (1) - No need for this NC I don't think.
00:52:812 (2) - Remove finish from head.
00:57:619 (1) - No need for this NC I don't think.
01:01:835 -
In general here, these small sliders are hindering this map. This song is so smooth and flowing, you need long beautiful sliders. Instead of these short sliders you should just stack singles on top of sliders like you do at 01:00:296 (2,3) or 00:37:252 (1,2,3). That works really nicely to follow her moving vocals and hit her long notes with the long sliders.Lets try this here at 01:01:835:
01:01:835 (1) to 01:05:104 (5)
You should have these sort of rhythm ideas all over the map.
01:07:989 (3) - The slider is really bland like this. Maybe make it neater shape? Maybe another heart slider or a loop.
01:10:670 - Here also maybe like this:
01:10:670 (1) to 01:12:786 (5)
[Hard]
No circle size 5? :O.........jk <3In general here. Not enough sliders imo. It's not bad or anything, I just enjoy the normal difficulty more because the sliders fit the song better imo.
00:16:935 (2,3) - Move to white ticks please. ._. They sound weird to me on the blue tick and I always get a 100 on them.
00:05:685 (2,3) - These aren't fitting and feel terrible when playing. Delete them and replace with a 2 beat long slider starting at 00:06:069 leading into the00:07:031 (1). Feels much better with this part of the song.
00:20:329 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Wouldn't some sliders mixed in here feel nicer?
00:50:696 - Just a suggestion here because I don't like the rhythm.
Move the 1 to 00:51:465 and add a circle stacked on it at 00:51:081. Then add a slider at 00:52:042 and ending at 00:52:427 flowing down into that heart slider.
00:52:812 (4,5) - Transition to the 5 feels awkward and is unlike the other diffs. I suggest move the 5 to 00:56:081 and add a circle at 00:55:696. Remove finish from 5's tail. Have the 5 flow into the 00:56:850 (1).
00:58:196 (5) - Move to 248,192 to keep symmetry.
01:11:439 (1) - NC here IMO. New vocal idea is here and not 01:12:593.
01:14:516 - NC?
You could make the last spinner even more quite.
I think lower volumes will also help this map a lot as I said in the General section.
Geez I wish the chorus had more than one verse. ;_; It's so epic.
Anyways, I hope it's helpful.
I leave star.