Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hello. Sorry for sooo long delay :<

General

1. I heard that the name of albums is better to put to the tags, not to the source. So, replace it? Done !
2. Maybe add PPRR to the tags? Done !
3. Your .osb-file name is different from the name of the map, so delete it and do full submit. Done !
4. Also, you changed the title of the map but forgot to change the name of the topic. Change it to Pony Pony Run Run - Walking on a line. You can do this while submitting.Done !

Easy

1. There is too high Slider Velocity for Easy. Try to reduce it. Changed to 1,30 instead of 1,40
2. 00:09:818 (4) - put new combo here as long comboes are not good for Easy. 3-4 long comb is good. (Also, it's better to put new combo on downbeats, so 00:10:241 (5) - here, but putting on (4) make symmetry C:) Ok I understand ! Done !
3. 00:11:931 ~ 00:15:311 - why it's not mapped? I don't see the reason. Also, it's bad choice for break time. Map it, please. Done !
4. 00:17:424 (4) - Put new combo here, you know why! Done !
5. 00:18:269 (6) - Clap on the beginning, you missed it. Also (nazi) move it 1 grid up and right Done !
6. 00:19:114 (1) - maybe move it to the middle? 2 grids right for better symmetry. Also, add clap to the beginning Tried to do something more symmetric !
7. 00:21:649 - add a note here with clap to fill the blank space Done !
8. 00:23:339 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - You missed claps in this part! Also, check up all your maps and add missed claps. I will work on it ^^
9. 00:28:198 (5) - It's not good to have 1/2 rhythm in Easy diffs, you know? It's hard to read and play for newbies. So, remove this slider and add circle on 00:28:410 - Well it's here to follow the "ouhouhouh" lyrics, and as I don't have much 1/2 and as it is mapped on smthg, i'll keep it this way for now
10. 00:29:255 (1) - Make it more symmetrical as on this screenshot:
    
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    Oh damn how did i miss this one it looked terrible XD Thanks !
11. 00:32:635 (1) - again, 1/2 slider. Make simple 1/1 slider from 00:32:635 till 00:33:058 - Done !
12. 00:34:959 (3) - as 00:28:198 (5) - Same as previous ouhouhou thing
13. 00:38:973 (1) - reduce it to 00:39:396 - (1/2 rhythm >:O) Done !
14. 00:39:818 (2) - I don't like finishes on this slider. Remove? Done ! Didn't even know why i put one here XD
15. 00:41:931 - add a note with clap! Done !
16. 00:42:987 (1) - Too bad too bad! Firstly, 1/2 rhythm, secondly too much repeats is hard to read for newbies. I suggest this:
    
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    Done ! I did not used exactly the same pattern because I did not place the (4) where you did but i followed the same beat placement
17. 00:45:311 (4) - then new combo here! Done !
18. 00:49:959 (1) - symmetry, whatch your symmetry!
    
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    Oh god, yes XD
19. 00:51:649 (2) - reduce to 00:52:072 - Done !
20. 00:55:874 - add a note with finish Done !
21. 00:56:297 (1) - symmetry
    
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    Done !
22. 00:57:776 (2) - remove this note Done !
23. 00:58:198 (3) - start from 00:58:410 till 00:58:832 - Done !
24. 01:03:058 (1) - remove this and put circles on 01:03:058 - and 01:03:480 -
25. 01:03:903 (2) - also, extend this slider to 01:05:170 - and make it symmetrical C:
    
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    Done !Thank you very much for the pattern !
26. 01:10:029 (2) - remove
27. 01:10:874 (4) - buuu! Make this:
    
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    Done !
28. 01:12:987 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - again, very hard for Easy. I recommend you:
    
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    Done ! Not the same pattern but i made smthg way easier !
29. 01:17:634 (2) - remove it! Done !
30. 01:18:057 (3) - move to 01:18:269
31. 01:21:225 (4) - finish on the beginning Done !
32. 01:22:915 (5) - extend to 01:23:762 - Done !
33. 01:29:466 (1,2) - it's better to make this:
    
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    Done ! And added one too on the white tick before
34. 01:35:170 (1,2) - make one slider from 01:35:170 - till 01:35:593 - Done !
35. 01:37:705 (1) - make just one circle on 01:37:705 - Done !
36. 01:38:128 (2) - extend to 01:39:818 - Already was this way ^^
37. 01:40:874 (4) - You remembeer? Add just a circle to 01:41:086 - Ouhouhouh !
38. 01:43:832 (2,3,4,1,2) - haaaaard :< Make this!
    
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    Thanks, done !
39. 01:47:635 (4) - as 01:40:874 (4) - Same !
40. 01:48:691 (1) - whatch your symmetry!
    
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    Done !
41. 01:52:071 (1) - circles on 01:52:072 - and 01:52:494 - Done !
42. 01:52:705 (2) - start from 01:52:917 - and end on 01:53:762 - Done !
43. 01:54:396 (3) - you know what to do! Ahah well !
44. 01:55:240 (1) - start from 01:55:029 - Can't because of ^, but i placed it a tick later then
45. 01:55:874 (2) - make slider :< I'll let it this way for now, I like how it sounds =/ But if I have another remark about this Ill change it !
46. 02:01:790 - add a note? Done !
47. 02:02:635 (1) - make two circles on 02:02:635 - and 02:03:058 - or one slider Done, 2 circles !
48. 02:03:269 (2) - start from 02:03:480 - and end on 02:04:325 - Done !
49. 02:09:396 (1) - again, symmetry (like on 00:49:959 (1) - ) 00:49:959 (1) - Done !
50. 02:11:086 (2) - end on 02:11:508 - Done !
51. 02:14:889 - add a note with clap? Well I prefer just to add the next one ^^
52. 02:15:311 - ^ but with finish? D: Done !
53. 02:15:734 (1) - symmetry (like on 00:56:297 (1) - ) Done !
54. 02:17:213 (2) - delete this note Done !
55. 02:17:635 (3) - start from 02:17:846 - and end 02:18:269 - here Done !
56. 02:22:495 (1) - remove it and add notes on 02:22:494 - and 02:22:917 - Done !
57. 02:23:551 (2) - start from 02:23:339 - and extend to 02:24:607 - Done !
    
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    Done !
58. 02:29:466 (2) - remove Done !
59. 02:30:311 (4) - uh... make this:
    
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    Done !
60. 02:32:424 (1) - move to 02:32:212 - Done !
61. 02:32:846 (3,4,5) - gah, make this:
    
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    Done !
62. 02:37:071 (2) - remove this note Done !
63. 02:37:494 (4) - move to 02:37:705 - Done !
64. 02:42:353 (5) - extend to 02:43:198 - Done !
65. 02:45:945 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I see, these comboes have the same rhythm. It's good, but move all this notes 1/2 later.02:45:945 (1,2,3) - this must start from 02:46:156 - and so on. Even though I prefered the way it sounds on red ticks, I did it cause you're not the first one to tell it to me ^^
66. 03:02:424 (1,2) - make this:
    
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    Done !
67. 03:07:283 (2) - remove this note, then move 03:06:227 (1) - to 03:06:438 - and 03:07:494 (2) - to 03:07:705 - Done !
68. 03:11:297 (1) - remove this note. Done !
69. 03:11:508 (2) - and maybe remove finishes? Done !

Normal

1. At first, I think 1,6 slider velocity is too high for Normal D: Reduce it? Changed to 1,50 instead of 1,60
2. OD +1? Yes !
3. 00:10:241 (4,5,6) - watch your spacing! >:O and you forgot claps~ Check out all your claps, please Done !
4. 00:11:931 - again, map this break please Done !
5. 00:39:818 (4) - reduce to 00:41:086 - and make more symmetrical~
   
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   Done !
6. 00:41:931 (5) - clap! Done !
7. 00:42:353 (6) - finish here and new combo Done !
8. 00:42:987 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - hm... this is quite hard D: Maybe try this?
   
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   Done, thanks !
9. 00:47:847 (2) - I don't like that it's overlapped by 00:46:579 (1) - . Rearrange? Done !
10. 00:56:508 (2) - remove it, please. Doing this you make rhythm easier. Done !
11. 00:58:198 (6) - remove repeat and add note on 00:58:832 - Done !
12. 00:59:255 - and here note, please Done !
13. 00:59:466 (1) - then remove it. Done !
14. 01:02:212 - add a circle! Done !
15. 01:02:635 - this need a circle too Done !
16. 01:05:593 - ^ Done !
17. 01:19:536 - You'd better add here a note and remove 01:19:748 (1) - Done !
18. 01:23:762 (5) - change this slider by circle on 01:23:762 - Done !
19. 01:28:832 - note! Done !
20. 01:29:466 (1) - I don't like whistles here. They are unexpected and don't fit :< Removed ^^
21. 01:54:396 (1) - remove nc, there is no need to put it Done !
22. 02:09:607 (2) - whatch your symmetry as earlier Tried to make it look better !
23. 02:16:156 (3) - maybe remove one repeat and add a circle on 02:17:001? To make it easier
    
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    Well i did not do this but as you adviced me like 00:58:198 (6) ^^
24. 02:21:649 - circle! Done !
25. 02:28:410 - ^ Done !
26. 02:35:170 - ^ Done !
27. 02:43:198 (5) - change to one circle on 02:43:198 - ? Done !
28. 03:02:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you know, that's quite hard D: Maybe this:
    
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    Done; thanks for the pattern !
29. 03:11:508 (2) - remove finishes? Done !

Hard

1. HP drain -2, please -1 !
2. 00:11:931 - map this break! Done !
3. 00:17:635 (2) - me casts symmetry on it!! Ahah XD I'm not even able to say if it worked perfeclty XD
4. 00:20:381 - what? again, map this. Done !
5. 00:30:945 (5) - make it neater:
   
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   Done, thanks !
6. 00:32:001 (6) - (nazi) 1 grid left to line it with 00:30:311 (3) - Done !
7. 00:40:029 (4) - xD funny followpoints. Make this:
   
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   Ahah thanks !
8. 00:47:424 (6) - maybe some grids down to avoid touching circles? Done !
9. 00:50:593 (5) - followpoints :3 (just like it, haha) Well yes, I do have problems with sliders XD
10. 00:56:720 (3) - looks ugly. Make something like this:
    
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    Done !
11. 00:58:198 (6) - ^ Done !
12. 01:02:212 - add a note Done !
13. 01:19:114 - ^ Done !
14. 01:20:593 (4) - move it to the middle of x? :O Yes done !
15. 01:24:184 - note with clap!! Clap-clap! Sounds great
16. 01:24:607 - map it, huh! Done !
17. 01:53:762 - note? Done !
18. 02:16:157 (3) - shape~ Done !
19. 02:17:635 (6) - ^ Done !
20. 02:21:649 - note? Done !
21. 02:26:931 (5) - again, move it to the middle Done !
22. 03:11:508 (2) - remove finishes?

Oh, you really must work on your Easy and Normal. More and more. But your Hard diff is REALLY GOOD!
Good luck!

Kokatsu wrote:

M4M from my queue

[General]
Consider adding Kiaitime on all diffs. Suggestions would be the chorus parts:
00:55:874 - 01:23:762
02:15:311 - 02:43:198
Thank you for the suggestion ! If more people want a Kiak Time I'll add one, but isn't 30sec x2 a lottle bit long for a Kiai Time ?
You should also consider adding (at least one) Spinner in each diff to ensure different max-scores. (The End of the map would fit well for a Spinner 03:07:705 - 03:11:931)
Well I have to say I like maps without spinners even though i didn't think about this aspect, if I get more reflexions about it I'll add one
Remove "Pony Pony Run Run" from the Tags, as it is the artist, lol (Tags only add new search options and since you already get this map if you search for pony pony run run, you don't need to add this as a tag)
"You Need Pony Pony Run Run" is the name of the album, so I guess I have to keep it in the tags, no ?

[Easy]
This Diff still needs a lot of work, I will focus mainly on things you should reming yourself of when reworking the diff
Generally, an Easy diff should have a lot of breaks, especially on 1/1 basis (meaning that you leave out 1/2 sometimes to get a short break). Try to leave out notes whereever possible.
Well I had many breaks at the begenning and people told me to map them, so as I still have a few I won't, because I don't feel like removing notes as I think it fits the map where they are ^^
Your SV is too high. Reduce to x1.0 max (with that many notes and that "high" SV, it feels more like a Normal)
I already reduced it due to the same remarks, I'm afraid it can be boring with a lower SV s for now I'll keep it this way ^^
Also consider reduceing the Distance Spacing (0,7 seems fine at 1.00 SV, but you can also go for 0,6)
Ehh sorry I will look a lot stubborn but I don't think it's too hard this way XD
Since you should rework all sliders when changeing the SV, I cannot mod sliders in this mod. Please call me back when you reworked the sliders so I can take a look ath them~ I will mention some of them anyways.
Well if I finally decide to change it I'll call you for sure ! Thanks !
01:21:225 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). Done !
00:19:114 (1) - Okay, some basic stuff about easy diffs: since they are not hard, there are not many notes and there are close to no patterns, all you should check is the lookout, Easydiffs must look good and for this, you should rework sliders like this one to be more symmetrically. Tried to !
00:28:198 (5) - please avoid starting on a red tick on Easy, red ticks should only be used for Sliderreverses or 1/2 "streams" Replaced by a circle on the white tick for this one and all the others ^^
00:34:959 (3) - ^ PLUS the reversepart of the slider is closer to the previouse note than the sliderstart, which should be avoided in an Easy diff. Changed as I changed ^
01:38:128 (2) - okay, that's it, I tolerated this kind of sliders b4, but now I'm getting mad This kind of slider, without a real "center" in the whirl/curve/idk how to call it is confuseing for new players, they just see a slider with a big middlepart and since there is no real sliderpath that they can follow, because it's lapping with itself, this is unnacceptable. Make sure that - if you rework Sliders - there is always a clearly visible path of the slider to follow. Ok I understand, I will work on it !
01:57:142 (3,1) - Overlap, as already mentioned, Easys should look nice (and with nice I mean VERY NICE D:). Avoid all overlaps in Easy-diffs Oh yeah I did not see this one, thanks !
02:04:748 (1) - okay, getting angry again :< Sliders should be worked out with as less waypoints as possible to guarantee the best shape possible. Maybe you should check out this thread for some slider-basicknowledge~ Ahah y I know I have probs with sliders and followpoints, but this one doesn't look ugly for me, so are the followpoints really a problem as players won't see them ?

Sorry that this was no real mod, but the diff just needs a lot of rework <__<

[Normal]
A lot better than the Easy, here I can actually mod something \:D/
This looks more like a normal+/somewhat hard-ish for me ;_;
I would however recommend you to take a closer look at the sliders you used, once you've read the thread I mentioned in Easy-mod and dat SV. q__q XD I will look again yes ^^
00:30:311 (4) - shouldn't be overlapping with 6 Changed !
00:39:818 (4) - needs a clearly visible centerpoint Will work on it !
01:29:466 (1,2) - new players are not able to read this. remove 2 and let 1 repeat 2more times. Replaced it by 2 circles instead, I hope it's better now, beacause I don't like sliders with too many reverse on Normal, so I think it's a good in-between change ^^
02:17:635 (5) - remove clap from sliderstart? D: Done !

You should probably rename it to Normal+ to match the actual difficulty..
Well as it has quite easy settings, I guess it's ok !

[Hard]
This map actually is fun to play! :O Didn't expect that x__x
Settings are more Insane-ish than Hard
SV is too high q__q
AR-2
CS-1 and HP/OD -1 or HP -1 and OD -2 (would recommend the second version)
Wel if I reduce the settings it's only have 4 stars, and as it is playable like this (and I prefer it this way too ^^) sorry but I won't change the settings ^^

This looks fine

Good luck anyways~
Thanks !

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~
You requested in my queue ~


[General]
- You have some minor over lapping, try to space them put more. Ok I will !
- Some of your sliders can look better ~ Yes

[Easy]
00:14:043 (1) - Place where 00:11:931 (1) was? Wouldn't lood great imo as it's not aligned with the slider's end after ^^
00:26:297 (2) - You can fix this slider a bit so it will look better ~ Tried to !
00:42:353 (1) - ^ Ehh i see it symmetric ? XD
02:00:945 (2) - Place where 01:58:410 (1) was. Can't because of distance snap
02:42:353 (4) - This slider can look better ~ Eh ?
02:50:804 (3) - x:384 y:280 Can't because of distance snap
03:02:635 (1) - Line with previous note. Done !
03:11:508 (4) - Lower the volume at this part. If i got another remark I will ^^


[Normal +]
- HP Drain Rate +2 + 1 !
00:25:029 (1) - New combo ? No sorry ^^
00:29:255 (1) - Place where 00:27:565 (4) was. Distance snap
00:43:832 (3) - Make this slider go a different way so it doesnt interfere with the previous slider. Will think about it !
00:57:987 (4) - Move this down a bit so it forms a diagonal line. Done !
01:03:058 (1) - Remove one reverse arrow. Done and added a cricle
01:03:903 - Add a circle. ^
01:04:114 (3) - Delete this note. It follows the lyrics so I kept it ^^
01:14:255 (5) - New combo. Done !
01:14:255 (5,6,7) - They sort of look squish together, maybe break distance snap and space them more or make them go in a different direction. I'll think about it !
01:27:776 (5) - This slider is interfering with the previous note. If i want it to respect the distance snap and for it to look a bit good I have no choice ^^
01:37:072 (6) - ^ ^
01:40:874 (6) - New combo. Did it before, add several remarks so I'll keep it this way ^^
01:47:635 (6) - ^ ^
01:54:396 (4) - ^ ^
02:05:170 (3) - Slider can look better. Done !
02:33:691 (5,6,7) - Same as 01:14:255 (5,6,7) Same as well ^^
02:36:015 (1) - Place this were 02:34:536 (7) was. Distance snap
02:39:184 (1) - Place this were 02:37:072 (2) was. Distance snap
02:45:945 (1) - Starting from here, to 03:02:001, there's alot of copying and pasting. ._. Change some parts. I'll think about it, but well it's excaclty the same lyrics and rythm sooo...
03:09:184 (1) - Watch your spacing. Done !
03:09:607 (3) - Make this slider reverse at 03:10:029 ? Done !
03:11:297 (1) - Lower the volume at the part ~ Same as easyl ^^


Only modded 2 diffs.
Good luck! ~
Thank you

ykcarrot wrote:

[Hard]
00:17:635 (2) - Maybe encircling previous circle looks better? Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/358603 Curved it more, thanks !
00:19:536 (7) - Since its head and tail isn't symmetrized, change its shape like this? http://puu.sh/FdVq Ehh sorry I like this one straight ^^
00:40:029 (4) - Flip horizontally for better flow http://puu.sh/FdWV Done !
00:55:874 - Add a note here with finish. Starting kiai without note feels awkward. Done !
01:00:734 (5) - Add clap to reverse arrow Done !
02:15:311 - Add a note here with finish. Starting kiai without note feels awkward. Done !
02:20:170 (5) - ^ Done !

Well, since there was many straight sliders which feel boring. If you made some delicous sliders, it would be cool. Well I'll think about it !


[Normal +]

1. Remove '+' from the diff name. Normal+ also is in Normal Level.
   Adding '+' is not necessary, also we don't use it anymore in these days.Done !
2. Circle size 4 would make more sense in setting spread. Also you used many overlapping in this diff, it looks a bit messy due to its huge hitburst. Done !
3. AR+1

Done !

01:00:734 (5) - Add clap to reverse arrow Done !
01:03:058 (1,2) - This is hard to read for Normal skilled player, you should refrain from using this in Normal and Easy diffs. Changed !
01:19:536 (1) - I suggest unstacking Done !
00:55:874 - Add a note here with finish. Starting kiai without note feels awkward. Done !
01:36:649 (4,5,6) - No good overlapping http://puu.sh/FeqP Eh I see XD Changed ^^
02:15:311 - Add a note here with finish. Starting kiai without note feels awkward. Done !
02:20:170 (5) - Add clap to reverse arrow Done !
02:26:931 (5) - Add clap to reverse arrow Done !
03:09:184 (1) - OMG SPACING 1.93x Oh oops XD

Same opinion with Hard diff. Same as well !


[Easy]
01:22:917 (5) - Remove finish from head Done !
02:42:353 (4) - ^ Done !
03:11:508 (4) - NC Done !

Good enough for Easy


Good luck
Thanks you !

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

Bonjour~ Je suis bebe fraise~
lol poor franch
anyway, here's my mod~!
Ahah bonjour, merci !

Hard

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00:17:635 (2) - try to fix the shape by moving the 3rd tick left by 4 to 5 grids Done, thanks !
00:40:029 (4) - wierd shape actually, better?
Done, thank you for the pattern !

Normal

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00:39:818 (4) - better make the shape symmetrical Tried to !

Easy

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good

be careful to the sliders, better make them as symmetrical as possible due to the appearance.Good luck~!
Thank you !

Chewin wrote:

Hi, mod req from my queue.

[General]
You could to add a video here. Well I'm not fond of videos, so I'll just keep my background
No tags? D: Well no, I got the album and all in it, and I can't think of anything more to add XD (and I got nothing to write in the source)
I don't think it's a good idea to have this cut .mp3 at the end. It's weird :\ The song is like this, I did not cut anything

[Easy]
00:08:551 (1) - Finish fits good here. Add it? Done !
00:19:114 (1) - Bad slider D: Make it symmetric plz: http://puu.sh/FnnE

72,280,19114,6,0,B|196:280|256:220|256:220|324:280|460:280,1,390,8|0

Done, tank you very much for the code !
00:25:029 (5) - To avoid the overlap with 00:23:339 (3) you could make something like this: http://puu.sh/FnqT

140,124,25029,1,8
60,168,25452,6,0,B|60:300,1,130

Thank you once gain !
00:39:818 (2) - This part doesn't fit the sound like the previous part. You should to follow this rhythm:

Adding a clap on this slider's end 00:39:818 (2)
Done !
00:41:086 (4) - Clap Done !
01:05:593 (4) - Overlap with 01:03:480 (2) Stacked him well ! As when you don't see the (2) anymore when the (4) pops, it's not a problem imo
01:21:227 (4) - I can hear a finish from the song here. Add it on this slider's head? Done !
01:23:867 I think you should map this break >: It's useless. I'll think about it !
01:51:227 (3) - It touches hp bar, consider to move it Done !
01:58:410 (1) - Overlap better with 01:56:297 (2) plz. Done !
02:04:748 (1) - You should to move this 1/1 later and add a circle here:

Sorry I don't really like how the reverse sounds on a 1/2 tick ^^
03:11:508 (1) - Distance snap plz. Oh right, done !

[Normal]
00:13:621 (5) - New combo and remove it from 00:14:043 (1) for consistency Done !
00:17:212 (1) - Grid snap the second waypoint plz Done !
00:42:353 (3) - 1 grid left for consistency with 00:41:508 (1,2) Done !
01:06:227 (1) - 1 grid down always for consistency How did I miss this one XD
01:21:438 (6) - 1st waypoint 1 grid right, and last 1 grid left.. Done !

[Hard]
00:27:565 (7) - Move it further from 00:26:297 (6) since it isn't an 1/1 Well I don't think it's a problem, it's an hard and I think people should be able to read it
01:12:353 (9) - ^ ^
02:31:790 (9) - ^ ^

That's all, these maps look like to old maps lol I don't really know if I have to take this as a compliment XD But well, I map with my feelings soooo ^^
Good luck ;3
Thank you !

00:25:029 (6,7) is like hurrdurr considering that the last beat was on a red tick, I think that this is slightly hard. I dunno. x:

00:21:438 - note?

Eh no sorry it sounds weird for me

CXu wrote:

M4M~
Sorry I'm late, I was sleeping xD
Ahah you're not late at all, on the contrary thank you for your fast mod !

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I'd prefer that you quote my post and state which changes you make, and which you have not. Thanks~
If you have any problems understanding what the hell I'm talking about, feel free to poke me in-game!

[Color guide]

1. Red text means that the issue is unrankable.
2. Blue text is a strongly recommended suggestion.
3. Black text is a regular suggestion.

[General]

1. If you're not usingthe .osb, you should probably delete it~ I will !
2. I find that it sounds better if you use this soft-hitclap.wav, and then soft hitsounds for the map, rather than normal hitsound, allthough, that's up to you. Your current hitsounds work out too. Ahh thank you very much it really sound great !
3. Generally speaking, you can add a clap on the 2nd and the 4th beat of the song. I'll work on it !

I'll start with the Hard then as I saw you started with this diff

[Easy]

1. I modded [Hard] first, and now I'm lazy to write up the same hitsound suggestions, so if there is anything you like from the mod for [Hard], don't hesitate to use them here too!
2. For most of the song, you should follow a clap pattern where the claps land on the 2nd and 4th beat.
3. 00:29:255 (1) - Generally speaking, this loop might be confusing for newbies to play. It looks good though xD. Well, I'd say it's fine, but if anyone else is going to complain about it, change it to something else~ Ok thank you for pointing that out !
4. 01:05:170 - Here you switch to the 1st and 3rd beat. It sounds weird compared to 2nd and 4th, so I suggest changing it back. Sorry but I did not really understand what you meant there
5. 01:09:396 (4) - Finish.
6. 01:59:255 (2) - Part of the sliderpath is covered by the previous blue slider. I know the blue slider fades out and all, but with the hitburst as well as the general reaction time to a newbie, I'd say you should move this slider somewhere else.
7. 02:04:748 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Atleast mirror this somehow so that it's not exactly the same. If someone else point that out, I'll change it
8. 02:12:776 - Spinner, ending at 02:14:466. Done !
9. 02:53:762 (2) - Move this to x:228 y:192? So that it's not partially overlapped by the slider before. . Done !
10. 02:57:142 (2) - Same, just the other way :p . Done !
11. 03:00:522 (2,3) - Move these up-right a bit to not overlap. . Done !

Solid easy.

[Normal]

1. Check [Hard] for thourough hitsounding suggestions xD
2. 00:10:874 (6) - Move 1 gridlvl4 to the left. Done !
3. 00:44:677 (1) - Remove new combo.Done !
4. 00:45:734 (3) - New combo. Done !
5. 01:03:058 (1) - Not sure if this is easy to read or not (the extra repeat) so just pointing it out for now. Well the thing is I don't really know as well, I like it this way though so well fo now I'll keep it this way ^^
6. 01:27:776 (5) - Curve so it doesnt overlap (4)? Done !
7. 02:45:734 - I know you're following vocals, but I'm reaaally tempted to click here. I can understand it XD But I think it wouldn't fit the following notes/patterns if you know what I mean
8. 03:09:607 (3) - Remove 1 repeat imo. Well if I do it, I'll have to add a circle and the thing is I woudn't know where to put it, as under the (2) would be too hard and in another place wouldn't look good ^^ So for now, I'll keep it this way ^^
   
   Plus, I added 2 spinners at the same place as the Hard diff ^^

It's a bit cramped for my taste, but it's still good, so yeah.

[Hard]

1. 00:08:551 (1) - Add a finish here if you're using soft hitsounds. Ignore if not. Done !
2. 00:11:931 (1) - Remove clap here, then add a clap on 00:12:353 (2) to follow the same pattern as earlier.Done !
3. 00:13:198 (4) - Clap. Done !
4. 00:14:043 (6,7) - If you're using soft hitsounds, switch over to normal hitsounds here for the claps. I don't know why but it already was this way ! XD
5. 00:19:325 (6) - Stack this underneath 4, then ctrl+h to make this completely symmetrical. Oh thanks i didn't know i could do this !!
6. 00:19:536 (7) - Remove clap from sliderstart (here: 00:19:536). Also, you could try and make this curved? As you're not the first one to point this shape out, done !
7. 00:20:170 (8) - Remove clap. Done !
8. 00:20:804 (1,3) - Claps. Done !
9. 00:22:494 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The claps should be on 00:22:494 (1,3,7), so add them there, then remove them from 00:22:917 (2,5). Done !
10. 00:26:297 (6) - Clap on the 2nd repeat, that is 00:26:720. Ehh I don't know how to add a clap on only one reverse, if that's what you meant me to do ^^
11. 00:30:734 (4) - Move this 2 girdlvl4 to the right, so it's directly underneath (5). Done !
12. 00:30:945 (5) - Clap on sliderstart.Done !
13. 00:32:635 (1) - clap on sliderstart. Done !
14. 00:38:128 (2) - remove clap, add it at 00:38:550 (4) Done !
15. 00:38:762 (5) - Remove clap from sliderend, add it at 00:39:396 (1), then remove clap from 00:39:818 (3). Done !
16. 00:41:086 - Add a note with clap here? Done, sounds better !
17. 00:41:297 - Well, your difficulty doesn't have any spinners, which means that every SS score will be exactly the same. Maybe add a spinner here, ending at 00:42:353? Someone already pointed that out, and I think this place fits a spinner perfectly so, done !
18. 00:42:776 - Make an inherited section here where you lower the volume to, say 50% or something. Wow yes, sounds great !
19. In the next section, try having claps land on every 1st and 3rd beat, and whistles on every 2nd and 4th beat. Well as I got many notes on 1/2 ticks I was a bit lost but ehhh... XD
20. 00:49:114 (7) - Line up with the slider xD Oops,done !
21. 00:51:227 - I would add a note here for flow. Done !
22. 00:52:072 (4) - Well, he starts saying the next word at 00:52:283, which is now not mapped, and there is also this guitar thing here, so I suggest moving the slider to start at 00:52:283, ending at 00:52:917, and instead just have a regular beat at 00:52:072. Done ! And a remove the note which was at the preivous slider's end ^^
23. 01:00:734 (5) - I'm guessing you're making a straight line due to the lyrics Try put this exactly in the middle of the play field? You can check this by using ctrl+h and see if the start- and endpoints line up. Yayyy awesome tool XD
24. 01:03:058 (1,2) - Clap on sliderstart of (1), and not (2). Done !
25. 01:04:325 (4,6) - swap clap. Done !
26. 01:04:959 (7) - I don't think this needs to be straight too? Maybe add a curve or something else, for more variation. Done !
27. 01:07:494 (5) - Make a ~ slider? Ehh sorry I like it this way ^^
28. 01:09:412 - Add a note here. Done !
29. 01:09:818 (1,3) - Swap clap. Done !
30. 01:11:508 (7) - Move down 1 gridlvl4 to make everything even. Done !
31. 01:11:720 (8) - Clap.
32. 01:14:889 (8) - ^
33. Well, I guess you get the point. Generally speaking, add the claps on the 2nd and 4th beat. Yes I'll try to !
34. 01:22:494 - From here to the break, follow the same whistle/clap pattern as the beginning~
35. 01:25:452 (3) - Move 2 gridlvl4 to the left. Done !
36. 01:25:874 (4) - Move 1 gridlvl4 to the left. Done !
37. 01:38:339 (1) - Move 1 gridlvl4 to the left. Done !
38. 01:44:466 (1) - This is fairly high, maybe move this pattern down a bit? Done !
39. 02:00:522 (1,2,3) - Switch to normal hitsounds if you're using soft. Done !
40. 02:02:212 - Same as earlier, lower the volume, then use the same whistle/clap pattern as before.
41. 02:10:663 & 02:11:508 (4,5) - Same as before. Done !
42. 02:12:565 - Spinner ending at 02:14:889? Done !
43. 02:15:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ctrl+h and ctrl+j so that it's not the same as earlier. Awesoooome XD
44. Well, same suggestions as the earlier chorus.
45. 02:44:043 - Makes more sense to map up to here. Just add 3 notes and it's good~ Done !
46. 02:45:945 (1) - Finish?
47. 03:00:734 (5) - Place in a straight line downwards from (4). Done !

Mostly hitsounding suggestions. The map itself is good, and somehow it reminds me of some of the good, fun, old maps Good job!


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Good for your first map, really Good luck!
Thank you very much !
Long modpost is long
Helped me a lot !

KersiTyan wrote:

Hi ~ from my queue

[Hard]

00:13:410 - add note Done !
00:14:889 (9) - remove finish and add clap Done !
00:17:424 - add note and add clap Done !
00:19:959 - add clap Done !
00:30:311 (3) - move to 00:30:100 No sorry I think where it is now fits the music better
00:31:579 - remove clap Done !
00:42:353 - add finish? owo Done !
00:52:072 (4) - add clap Done !
01:17:424 - ^ Done !
01:17:001 - remove clap Done !
01:17:846 (3) - ^ Done !
01:18:269 (5) - add clap Done !
01:19:114 - ^ Done !
01:25:029 (2,4) - ^ Done !
01:39:396 (6) - ^ Done !
01:47:001 (8) - ^ Done !
01:48:691 (1) - ^ Done !
01:49:114 (3) - remove clap Done !
01:49:959 (5) - ^ Done !
01:50:381 (7) - add clap Done !
02:04:748 (4) - ^ Done !
02:08:128 - ^ Done !
02:11:508 - ^ Done !
02:29:255 (1) - ^ Done !
02:29:677 (3) - remove clap Done !
02:30:522 (5) - ^ Done !
02:31:156 (8) - ^ Done !
02:30:945 (7,9) - add clap Done !
02:33:903 (6) - remove clap Done !
02:34:325 (8) - add clap Done !
02:34:748 - remove clap Done !
02:35:170 (10) - add clap Done !
02:38:551 (7) - ^ Done !
02:44:466 (2,4) - ^ Done !
03:02:635 (2,6) - remove clap Done !
03:03:058 (4) - add clap Done !
03:11:508 - remove Done !

[Normal]

Better than Hard diff..
Nothing to say

[Easy]

00:25:874 - add clap Done !
00:42:353 - add finish Done !
00:47:846 - remove finish Uh ? There was no finish ^^
00:51:227 - remove clap Done !
00:52:917 - ^ Done !
Fine

Good luck ~
Thanks !
sorry, i hate this song ._.

344,124,42353,6,4,B|312:28|248:16|180:28|160:124|160:124,1,260,0|8
160,212,43621,1,0

300,260,160663,2,0,B|284:308|224:328|152:308|140:244,2,195,0|8|0

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

hello~

[General]

there is a problem with hitsounds. I hope you can do it yourself? If not I will help you in ingame.

osb.file delete

[Easy]

●00:13:198 (4) - maybe try to put this slider in the middle? like this 00:10:663 (3) http://puu.sh/4l5wM.jpg Done !
●00:22:494 (1,2) - spacing. Note the distance between them Done !
●00:17:846 (2,3) - ^ it is the easiest diff in your map. Why do you have so jumping distance? make sure that the whole song was one distance.

http://puu.sh/4l5F7.jpg this is really unacceptable. I hope you will understand me and do remap. you just need to do the same distance. just follow Distance snap. Oh my, sorry I didn't notice I didn't resnapped this one last time I made changes

●00:23:339 (3,5) - clap Done !
●00:29:255 (1) - it does not sound. finish slider here 00:30:945 Oh yes right, done
●00:45:311 (1) - http://puu.sh/4l5TD.jpg do so. play better and sound better (do not forget to claps) Sure, done !
●02:04:748 (1,2,3) - ^ Done !
●00:52:494 (3) - http://puu.sh/4l60l.jpg Done !
●01:22:917 (5) - remove break.better to put the objects here Done !
●02:42:353 (4) - ^ Added a spinner
●01:30:945 (5) - ^ I have a break here in all my diffs, otherwise there wouldn't be enough I think
●03:03:903 (2) - ^ But you're right for this one and will remove it from the Hard one as well
●01:48:691 (1) - clap Done !
●01:51:227 (3) - ^ Done !
●01:59:255 (2) - finish here 02:00:100 Done !
●02:22:072 (4) - new combo and 02:22:494 (1) - remove new combo Done !
●02:47:424 (3) - http://puu.sh/4l6bx.jpg slider one tick back.and followed by two Circle Done !
●02:50:804 (3) - ^ Done !
●02:54:184 (3) - ^ Done !
●02:57:565 (3,3) - ^ Done !

I feel like your spacing is really inconsistent! Sincethis is the easiest diff such things are totally unacceptable! Please try to re-arrange your spacing and make it consistent.Beginners are unable to understand spacing changes, remember! I don't really understand why you're saying this. Except the distance problem you pointed out earlier, everything is mapped following the distance snap, so well^^

[Normal]

●00:17:212 (1) - agree sounds bad. I propose to do so http://puu.sh/4l6ov.jpg Done !
00:20:381 (5) - add note. (circle or Returns slider) Done !
00:26:086 (3) - move to the right on the white tick and 00:26:086 add circle Done !
00:39:818 (4) - finish here 00:40:663
and 00:41:297 (1) - start here and finish here 00:41:086 I think it's ok like it is as the main white tick is on the top of the loop ^^

almost all unreadable. also try to do everything Distance snap please. It is done with it, check AI Mod if you don't believe me XD All the 6 he reports to me are notes too far by 0,01 that I can put like this thanks to the DS.And it's completly readable if you follow the lyrics.

[Hard]

00:20:381 (6) - add slider http://puu.sh/4l6GD.jpg Not sure about that yet but I'll definitely consider it
00:37:494 (6) - replace 00:37:494 circle , 00:37:705 slider - http://puu.sh/4l6IW.jpg I think it's smoother the way it is and so I prefer it this way ^^
00:40:029 (4,5) - swap them http://puu.sh/4l6JU.jpg ^
00:47:424 (6) - finish here 00:48:269 (7) - and 00:48:691 add circle Done !
01:27:776 (5) - replace this. 01:27:776 circle 01:27:987 slider 01:29:255 -sircle - http://puu.sh/4l6OI.jpg Done !
01:30:734 (1) - delete. then put the slider Sorry I like it the way it is
01:56:720 (6,1) - bad jump I don't think so ^^
02:04:325 (2) - align at the end of the slider Done !
02:31:156 (5,6) - spacing Done on purpose ^^
02:48:269 (1) - delete. then put the slider Like it this way :p
02:51:649 (1) 02:55:029 (1,1) - ^ ^

I advise to remove all clips with red ticks

good luck! Call me if anything