1. Lv.10 (5 stars, 543 notes)
2. Lv.3 (2.92 stars, 133 notes)
3. Lv.7 (4.87 stars, 259 notes)

Yu-Izanagi-12 wrote:

From my queue part 1
don't kudos this because this is just a heads up
the notes are out of sync
make your BPM 162.50
then let me know so i can give a good mod

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod.....

[General]
hmm.....你还需要一个Normal~因为rule有写~难度不能有跳跃~你有的easy就要有normal~

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Difficulties of a mapset must be in a consecutive order. Making three hard/insane difficulties and throwing an easy or normal in is unacceptable and won't get your map ranked. Therefore, difficulties must be in a consecutive order such as Easy-Normal-Hard or Normal-Hard-Insane. A gap in difficulties (e.g. Easy-Normal-Insane) will not be allowed.
難度曲線必須有連續性。大意是說像Easy-Normal-Hard或Normal-Hard-Insane，而像Easy-Normal-Insane（中間缺了Hard）是不允許的。

[Easy]
00:03:676 (3,4,1) - 距离一致~~
00:16:268 (3,1,2) - ^
00:22:193 (4,1) - ^
00:51:080 (1,2,1) - ^
01:20:698 (1,2,1) - ^

[Hard]
♪~

[ver. Extra]
00:12:935 - nc
00:13:305 - remove nc

hmmmmmmm我居然找不到几个问题。。。。
这居然是第一张。。。虽然放得挺随意的~但是没有感觉到太大的违和感。。。
节奏多听下。。。。很多地方的节奏感觉被拆开了。。。如果你出现不知道怎么放NC的时候那个地方的节奏就可能有问题~xD
gOOd LucK~

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

❤你好啊~！iroseka的M4M所以我来mod！

❤总的来说

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我觉得皮肤中缺少的项目：
approachcircle
reversearrow
sliderfollowcircle
嗯。。。基本就这些了

[原版的ac和ra挺好的呢，所以就不换了]

❤【Ver. Extra】

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AR9我觉得可以接受，但是OD我觉得略高，改成7比较好，因为好长的一首歌打完超低的话我会哭的，anyway，还是看你想怎样咯。如果OD不动的话把掉血-1.[嗯]
00:32:193break time？[太短了……]
01:00:328 (1) - 这个我建议在01:00:143开始[已修复~]
01:03:291breaktime？[太短了呢……]
这个难度的mod我力不从心啊。。。

❤【Hard】

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00:17:008 (1,2,3,4) - 我觉得这个可以改成这样http://puu.sh/z8YA[已修复呢~]
00:32:258 breaktime？[同上，太短了呢]
00:54:506breaktime？[已加~]
00:59:228 (1) - 这个有点太长了，我觉得前半部分完全可以map掉[加了一些note……]
01:03:461breaktime？[作为一个难点摆在那里吧~]

❤【Normal】

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00:54:542这一大段breaktime有点多了，至少到00:55:525是可以map掉的。。。其实这段breaktime我觉得吧没什么必要，中间节奏挺强烈的被break两边节奏轻的被map反而会觉得有点别扭。。。你觉得呢？[map掉了一部分~]
01:34:402 (1) - 这里开始01:34:217，同样，这转圈太长了，到01:36:995停止完后map掉其余[已修复~~~]

我觉得整个mod都水水的。。。
说实话吧我觉得这个map做的想法太少，不过背景啊拉条啊SB啊着实吓着我了
anyway，goodluck~！

Laurier wrote:

mod4mod

General
Use AudioLeadIn 500 ? just a little fast now done

Lv3
rearranged many ncs and claps.

Lv7
00:10:875 (3) - move x224y184 done
00:34:764 (1,2) - - like this ? done
http://puu.sh/33zWq.jpg http://puu.sh/33zX8.jpg
00:59:949 (1) - remove nc no need imo
01:38:467 (6) - nc done
01:48:652 (6,1,2,3,4) - use more far spacing ? done
http://puu.sh/33A0P.jpg

Lv10
00:07:727 (1) - remove nc done
00:09:578 (7) - nc done
00:10:319 (1) - remove nc done
00:11:801 (1) - remove nc done
00:12:541 (7) - nc done
please keep this pattern mostly fixed
your nc pattern is suitable
00:58:189 - delete this not try this http://puu.sh/33A65.jpg I prefer current pattern
01:06:060 (2,3) - ctr+G ? how about this ? I prefer the user having a rest, before the crazy kiai
01:09:023 (2,3) - ^
01:15:041 - add note keep until more mods
01:34:208 (1) - crazy stream o_o umm, I will keep this stream until someone is willing to collab with me. I think this pattern is a feature.

1. You may need check at "Display epilepsy warning".

1. 00:09:578 (3) - How about using same shape as 00:08:097 (1) -
   
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2. 00:20:319 (1) - remove this note. Circle immendiatery after spinner is too difficult for newbie players imo.
3. 01:16:801 (2) - rhythm suggestion.
   
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4. 01:25:134 (3) - I prefer if this slider returns one more time. I don't want to rest at 01:26:245 - .
5. 01:33:652 - Add a note. The cymbal is ringing at this time, additionaly, a cymbal sound should be tried to refrain from omission imo.

1. 00:10:319 (2) - same slider as 00:09:578 (1) - ?
   
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2. 01:22:727 (2) - rhythm suggestion.
   
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3. 01:38:467 (1) - I felt that this kick slider is too long. I would divide it in two if I were you.
   
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4. 01:41:430 (4) - move to (300,96) to make rhombus.
5. 01:45:134 (3) - How about this shape? I don't think the slider near 01:45:875 (1) - is very good.
   
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1. 00:16:245 (3,4,5) - I feel these are too close. 0.7x is suit to this map imo.
2. 00:22:912 (1,2,3) - ^
3. 00:23:652 (1,2,3) - ^
4. 00:41:430 (3,4) - 3.38x is too far, I think. Use Ctrl+G to each slider?
5. 01:14:764 (3,4,5,6) - Add circle at 01:15:041 - and how about like this?
   
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6. 01:18:096 (2,3) - rhythm suggestion.
   
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7. 01:20:967 (2,3) - ^
8. 01:22:449 (2,3) - ^
9. 01:30:319 (7) - add NC?
10. 01:36:986 (1) - add Finish
11. 01:38:467 (1) - ^
12. 01:39:208 (1,3) - ^
13. 01:39:578 (1,3) - ^
14. 01:49:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think here is not 1/4 but 1/3. When fix it, I would use kick slider if I were you.

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

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hello, my dear, Otoha.

[General]

http://puu.sh/33Er4.png - here you need to put a tick (for all diffs) It's not epilepsy. I will tick it only when a BAT says so.

[Lv.3]

00:18:467 (1,1) - for the easy this bad ... newbie confused, but I think this is acceptable (if it is impossible to present a different) I will keep this xD
00:59:949 (3) - delete note and 01:00:134 (1) - move here 00:59:949 (3) (spinner finish here 01:02:912 (1) - ) I tested and the hp drain allows even a whole miss of the spinner. Keep.
01:48:838 (1) - delete new combo done
01:49:208 (x) - add note sounds strange to me. keep for more discussion
00:25:504 (4) - this slider to replace it http://puu.sh/33EKR.jpg
00:39:208 (1) - new combo okay
01:08:838 (1) - remove new combo 01:09:578 (2) - add note (not new combo) 01:09:949 (3) - delete slider and 01:10:319 (x) - add note (new combo) umm, not a bad idea, but I prefer to keep mine at the moment.

[Lv.7]

01:15:319 (6) - add note what...
00:58:838 (2,3) - so that they do not touch each other done
01:48:838 (1,2,3,4) - may make them more equal? http://puu.sh/33FuX.jpg done
01:32:912 (2) - remove slider and add note.01:33:282 (3) - - move here 01:33:097 (3) (finish slider here 01:33:838 (x) - ) I like current pattern. keep at the moment.

nice, good luck

ryuu wrote:

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hi :3
little mod.

[Lv.3]

00:26:986 (2,3,4) - mb like this? good idea

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00:29:208 (1,2) - and this

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00:52:171 (2) - little to the left and I don't think keeping this on center is necessary. so keep
00:52:541 (1) - x:256, y:336
00:58:467 (1,2,3) - mb like this? done.

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aaaaaand all.
everything else is fine for me.
good luck ~

1. note顏色改一改 這個感覺有點過於亮了

1. 00:13:652 - +note
2. 00:36:245 (1) - 去掉new combo
3. 00:46:615 (1) - ^
4. 00:49:578 (1) - ^
5. 00:52:541 (1) - ^
6. 01:08:838 (1) - ^
7. 01:10:690 (5) - +new combo
8. 01:11:801 (1) - 去掉new combo
9. 01:14:023 (5) - +new combo
10. 01:16:245 (1) - 這裡不要跟旋律 會造成新手讀圖困難 建議remap 就1/2拍塞滿就好了
11. 01:35:504 (1) - 去掉new combo

1. 00:53:652 (4) - 不試試做個spin嗎
2. 01:27:171 (2) - 這個slider的形狀不好看 至少讓他的尾巴和後面的3和1組合得好看點
3. 01:28:838 (1) - 去掉new combo
4. 01:31:801 (1) - ^

1. 01:20:690 (1,2) - 間距過大讀不出來 建議把2拆成兩個note 一個疊1末尾 一個疊2開頭
2. 01:34:208 (1) - 去掉new combo 以及為什麼這個串就要4個一組new combo？前面有幾個長串都是一個combo下來的
3. 01:45:689 - +note

1. 31801、76245 - green_eyes.jpg 這個太嚇人了而且看上去也沒有起到強調的效果
   試試這樣會好一些
   
   【代碼替換之前請先備份原osb文件】
   
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"green_eyes.jpg",320,240
    F,0,31801,33282,1,0
    S,0,31801,31893,0.63,0.72
    S,0,31893,33282,0.72,0.75
    S,0,76245,76338,0.63,0.72
    F,0,76245,77727,1,0
    S,0,76338,77727,0.72,0.75

   
   【由於這個我直接改了所以忘記存源代碼抱歉 不過大概osb檔裏有31801的數字大概就一組..】
   
2. 99949 - inversed_type.jpg 同上
   
   

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"inversed_type.jpg",320,240
    M,0,76262,,320,240
    S,0,76262,,0.63
    F,0,76262,99962,1
    F,0,99962,100333,1,0
    S,0,99962,100333,0.63,0.8668799

   
   改為
   
   

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"inversed_type.jpg",320,240
    F,0,76262,99962,1
    F,0,99949,101430,1,0
    S,0,99949,100041,0.63,0.72
    S,0,100041,101430,0.72,0.75

1. 00:21:060 (5) - i suggest removing the second clap, and add a clap at 00:21:060
2. 00:29:856 - add a note at this place and make stream, it seems to fit the music; for example, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/785000
3. 00:30:319 (1) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot2173.jpg
4. 00:30:689 (2,6,12) - make a curve of this stream ww http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot2174.jpg
5. 00:40:689 (1,2) - it overlapped in the middle, should take 4 grids each to the outside

1. 00:10:875 (3) - since 1/1s are so close, this sould be surprising a little, i suggest x:208 y:216
2. 01:17:727 (1) - slider here.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/785008

1. 00:39:949 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/785009 wwwwww

1. 01:42:171 (3,4) - this object is too far from the previous object
2. 00:07:727 (2) - replaced by note
   
3. 00:14:023 (1) - start add finish
4. 00:20:319 (1) - it comes out too fast with spin ....... should review
5. 00:36:245 (3) - NC. make same as before
6. 00:45:134 (1) - Remove NC
   if you do so ?
   00:45:875 (3) - NC here
   00:47:356 (5) - NC here
   00:48:097 (1) - Remove NC
   and 00:48:838 (2) - NC here
7. basically, it's have a little confusion
   

1. 00:17:727 (3,4) - it's copy of before, so you it must is x360 y70
   [img]http://puu.sh/3bPp7.jpg
   [/img]
2. 01:17:912 (2) - i think remove note here better
   01:26:245 (2) - to 01:26:615 (1) - i think is stream or add here 01:26:523 - a note
   

1. 00:22:171 (7) - NC
2. 00:30:319 (7) - Remove NC
3. 00:30:689 (8) - NC
4. 00:31:245 (1) - NC
5. 01:46:986 (3,4) - remove,
   01:46:615 (1,2) - copy and paste to 01:46:615 (1,2) - here and Ctrl + H and Ctrl + G and remove NC
   as so, we are will have balance
   
   
   because this is a hard diff,should, I just have a little talk about NC for it with appropriate HP