Chewin wrote:

[General]
Fine ~

[Easy]
00:25:473 (1) - Finish on the head +
00:29:262 (3) - Remove clap from the beginning hmm...it's sound pattern on the same parts. not changed
00:53:262 (4) - New combo and remove it from 00:54:525 (1), it fits better. +
00:55:788 (1) - Finish on the head +
00:59:578 (3) - Remove whistle +
Fine, just suggestions.

[Normal]
00:24:210 (1) - Remove NC for consistency with the previous and next part plz +
00:27:683 (1) - Remove NC and use it here instead: 00:27:999 (2) +
00:35:262 (4) - New combo for consistency with 00:32:736 (1,2), remove it from 00:35:894 (1) +
01:04:631 (1) - New combo here is useless. +
Fine

[Hard]
00:25:157 (1) - Instead to overlap this slider with 00:24:999 (5), what about to make something like this for a better flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/352840 y, it's will be better. +
01:00:210 (3) - 2nd waypoint 1 grid down +
01:30:525 (6) - clap +

01:45:999 (4) - unreadable slider. Don't overlap it with 01:45:367 (2) ok. fixed


[Insane]
01:06:525 (4) - What about to ctrl + r it? i like. +
01:49:789 (4) - 2nd waypoint to x:34 y:95 make this slider more flowing you write 1st waypoint coord. nvm, fixed
02:31:473 (13) - Finish on the end +

That's all, good luck ;3

DarkDunskin wrote:

Late Mod from King's Lair~

[Easy]

• 1. 00:35:578 (1) - Finish on Sliderstart please. +
  2. 01:05:894 (1) - Finish on Sliderstart please. +
  Good job, looks pretty nice.
  
  [Normal]
  

1. 00:20:420 (1) - Add Finish. +
2. 00:25:157 (6) - Finish on Sliderend~ +
3. 02:06:525 (3) - Add Finish. +
4. 02:21:683 (1) - Add Finish on Sliederstart. +
5. 02:24:525 (2) - Supernazi: Move that note to x:302, deactivate grid snap to do so. +
6. 02:26:736 (1) - Finish on Sliderstart please. +
7. 02:27:999 (4) - Add clap on all slider points? no.

This is also pretty good o.0

[Hard]

• 1. 00:25:157 (1) - Add Finish on Sliderend. +
  2. 00:40:315 (1) - Add Finish on Sliderend. +
  3. 00:50:736 (1) - Add Finish. +
  4. 01:39:999 - There's a lot of 1/2 spamming in this diff, maybe try to get some variation with Adding 1/3 Sliders here? http://puu.sh/EzSU try it. i don't like. whatever this parts need remap - looks very strange. but not now - i'm so lazy and busy :p
  5. 01:50:104 - 1/3 Sliders would fit here. Obviously doesn't fit. Or i don't understand, what you mean
  It gets clearer and clearer, you're a pro mapper.
  
  [Insane]
  

[*] 00:50:736 (1) - Finish on Sliderstart please. +

Okay this a map I like to see ranked soon.
No Errors and everything mapped properly and beautiful.
SB totally fits the song, Good Job Mr. Tigrus.
Have a Star.

188,212,22946,1,2
188,212,23104,1,0
120,172,23262,2,0,B|88:232|132:288|180:292,1,160,8|0
256,272,23736,1,0
331,292,23894,2,0,B|380:288|424:232|392:172,1,160,8|0

-Bakari- wrote:

yo~

[General]
same SV for all diffs
didn't really liked your star difficulity gap. but it's impossible to fix it now, anyway :/

[Easy]
HP Drain - 1 no
00:39:999 (4) - pls, make this slider more readable. it's hard to read for beginners +
00:43:157 (1) - remove new combo (00:44:420 (3) - put it here or not, it's up to you) to follow your pattern +
01:33:683 (5) - NC here to follow your comboing and to avoid unrankable(?) +6 on circle (if i got it right, +6 on circles = unrankable) +
01:39:999 (5,1) - NC swap +
01:45:052 (4,1) - ^ +
01:48:841 (4) - NC +
01:58:946 (4) - blah.blah.blah, ya know what to do. right?(yea, make it more readable) +

[Normal]
don't like your overlappy pattern in some places (it's just me, nvm)
AR + 2 (for your bpm it's would be good idea) +
00:11:578 (1) - nah, remove new combo +
00:34:315 (1) - make a new green section -5-8% volume here / don't forget to put another section and get previous hitsound volume useless i think
01:03:999 (2) - nazi: x330 y182 (01:04:315 (3) - don't forget to fix spacing if you will fix it) +
01:08:420 (5) - nc here looks better +
01:50:104 (4) - http://puu.sh/K92S doesn't looks really good +

[Hard]
OD +2 no
good job

[Insane]
HP drain + 1 or +2 ok
01:54:525 (5) - so random. make more readable shape, please :/ done
02:00:052 - circle added

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gl~

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oh.. forgot to say: you can keep your bookmarks and files in beatmap's folder. it's fine

Genshin wrote:

omg i love this **

from modding queue

[Easy]
00:38:736 (2) - place this on the same (but reversed) position of this one 00:36:841 (2) - (ctrl + c then ctrl +v then ctrl + r) http://puu.sh/KsE0
after that, fix distance with next 2 notes done

[Normal]
OD 3 no
00:52:946 - place a note here added
01:21:052 (1,2,1) - spacing (u can rotate those 2 sliders vertically, like this http://puu.sh/KsNk) fixed
01:59:736 - place a note here or make this rev slider 01:58:946 (4) - repeating one more time added note

[Hard]
seems all ok...

[Insane]
AR 8 no. definitely no
01:58:946 (4) - this jump is a bit...exceeding xD, soif u wanna keep that pattern, i suggest u to flip horizontally these 5 changed some place
00:38:578 (5,6,7,8,9) - , like this: http://puu.sh/KsWr no

else is ok

Good luck~

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue


Easy

1. fine~

Normal

1. 00:38:350 (2) - try to make smoother for blanket? done

Hard

1. 00:33:929 (6) - spacing? move with purple (8) up a little +
2. 01:31:087 (2) - ?? remaped this part. 1/3 slider must be here
3. a bit hard orz

Insane

1. 00:26:982 (10) - You can try to make a hexagon shape here like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/379167 +
2. 00:42:613 (4) - I think stacking at a fast sldier end can break flow here._. stack with next note
3. 01:39:929 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - why is this one spacing so random._. fixed
4. 02:30:534 (2,12) - move more outside..? no

nice map and pulse effect :3

Good luck~