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Sean Paul - She Doesn't Mind (Daniel Ngo Remix)

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Topic Starter
BounceBabe
Thanks!
Sonnyc
The song is like http://osu.ppy.sh/s/53986 lol

Easy:

00:15:000 (1) - 1 Grid up
00:41:250 (5,6) - Use whistle for consistency?
00:45:000 (1,2,1) - I don't think Clap quite fit well here
00:50:625 (2) - Delete Clap at the first
00:52:500 (1,3) - Delete Clap?
01:37:500 (1,3) - ^ Well there are similar things I can find afterwards but never mind if those were your intention
01:52:500 (1) - Finish at (2,3) sounded quite odd. So add Finish at the start to prevent that
02:21:562 (3) - (120,56) for spacing
03:18:750 (1) - 1 grid left

Normal:

00:50:625 (5) - Quite an odd finish to me
01:51:562 (4) - Delete this? I don't think this is the perfect beat for a normal
02:22:500 (1) - Change the form? Imo sharp curve don't look nice
03:05:156 (3) - Clap sounds better than Finish
03:07:500 (2) - Add Finish at the start

Hard:

01:07:500 (1) - Put at the end of (3)?
01:12:656 (5) - Make this symmetry like 01:10:781 (5)
01:18:750 (1) - End of (6)?
01:22:500 (4) - Shouldn't NC start at here, due to your pattern?
01:27:656 (5) - Make the slider like this, for a better flow : http://puu.sh/1Phhe
01:30:000 (1,2) - I'm not sure if this is the perfect space reduction
01:31:406 (3,4) - ^
01:40:078 (3) - End of (1)?
01:47:812 (1) - Place somewhere like (376,56) to make more readable? (the suggested space isn't the perfect place >o<)
01:50:156 (6) - Ctrl+G to make relate this pattern with 01:53:437 (2,3)?

Collab:

00:21:679 (8) - Delete this. Feels overmap
01:06:093 (2) - Uhh reduce space with the previous note. 1/4 slider hit isn't expected in this kind of spacing.
01:30:234 - Consider adding a note
02:49:453 (4) - Why not place up at (2)?

Imo hit sounds sounded quite random, but I think it's fine. Take my star~~

Actually I almost got this post lost lol Chrome prevented though :3
Topic Starter
BounceBabe
Haha, and thanks for mod and star!
quiz-chan_DELETED
Whazuuup~

[General]
If you want to do something for the aesthetics, you can remake three-node sliders with the circular slider feature.

[Easy]
00:33:750 (1) - New combo, please.
Easy diffs shall have frequent NCs.
00:41:250 (5) - ^

Yes, that was it already ...for this diff...

[Normal]
00:18:750 (1,2) - I don't like how (1)s end overlaps with (2)s track. Could you change that somehow?
01:36:562 (4) - Feels so "lonely" there, please space it properly *if possible*

Perfection.... that's it again

[Hard]
01:13:359 (6,7,1) - Personally I would have stacked this. Again, personal taste.

Flawless!!

[Collab]
02:58:125 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - This might confuse players a bit because the 1/2 beats have more space between them and yet one needs to tap faster compared to the other three beats that are closer to each other. I hope you can understand my point in this.

Sorry for extremely short "mod" but there was nothing else I could possibly point out. :P
Topic Starter
BounceBabe
Thanks updated!
Reiji-RJ
http://puu.sh/1PBzu
Thanks for helpful mods, guys!
Sushi
Totally not a 1h30 IRC mod.

SPOILER
17:34 Sushi: how many people are involved in this collab
17:34 BounceBabe: 2 why
17:34 Sushi: Good
17:34 BounceBabe: o.o
17:35 Sushi: I hate collabs involving lots of people for short songs
17:35 BounceBabe: oh
17:35 Sushi: The difficulty gets completely wtf
17:36 Sushi: no particular consistency, style which are not blending well, etc
17:36 BounceBabe: ^^'
17:36 BounceBabe: i like reiji's style
17:36 Sushi: Even if I'm ok to participate into these kind of collabs from time to time, I know they generally don't look great
17:36 BounceBabe: ye.. xD
17:36 Sushi: except if it is well managed, deciding exactly how the map should look, etc
17:37 BounceBabe: well, it flows good imo
17:37 BounceBabe: and the two styles fit together
17:37 Sushi: I'll see that
17:37 Sushi: Yeah, in general, when it's just 2 people, it feels ok
17:41 Sushi: black sliders eeeeeeeeew
17:41 Sushi: it totally doesn't fit
17:41 BounceBabe: D:
17:41 BounceBabe: its does!
17:41 BounceBabe: everything is black on this map, black n white o.o
17:42 Sushi: Huh, if the combo colour were black and white, I wouldn't mind but...
17:42 BounceBabe: i thought black is unrankable
17:42 Sushi: Or at least gray or something
17:42 Sushi: With the colors it just look huh
17:43 Sushi: or something close to grey
17:43 Sushi: Like gray-blue
17:43 Sushi: gray-green, etc
17:43 BounceBabe: for the slider
17:43 Sushi: for the combo colors
17:44 BounceBabe: oh god no, i always use bright colours so its more visible
17:44 Sushi: Ok, but the black sliders look weird imo
17:44 BounceBabe: especially when its a techno, trance whatever song is
17:44 Sushi: That was the first thing I saw
17:45 BounceBabe: wtf wheres my skin u.u
17:45 BounceBabe: orz
17:48 BounceBabe: ok, uploaded again WITH skin
17:48 BounceBabe: now it should be better
17:48 Sushi: The hitnormal is noticeable only in the collab >_>
17:49 BounceBabe: oh?
17:49 Sushi: A little in hard
17:49 Sushi: I mean it really blends too much with the music
17:49 BounceBabe: i can here it perfectly fine o.o
17:49 Sushi: In easy and Normal, you don't even know there is a hitnormal xD
17:49 Sushi: I first thought it was silenced in normal and easy
17:50 BounceBabe: ok in easy you almost cant hear it but on the other ones its fine
17:51 BounceBabe: hmm
17:51 Sushi: That slider ball needs something more
17:51 Sushi: it feels....... dead...
17:52 BounceBabe: uh?
17:52 Sushi: A little animation
17:52 Sushi: (the skin)
17:52 BounceBabe: yes
17:52 BounceBabe: it was like it was on the skin
17:52 BounceBabe: there only was this element
17:52 BounceBabe: hmm
17:56 Sushi: 00:58:593 - I love that thing with the SB <3
17:57 BounceBabe: yes, i tried to SB to the sound
17:57 Sushi: It really is nicely done
17:57 BounceBabe: thank you ^-^
17:59 Sushi: I'd say there are some sliders that could be polished, specially with the new 3 points sliders
18:01 Sushi: In normal, for example : 01:52:500 (1) -
18:03 BounceBabe: kk
18:08 Sushi: In the Collab
18:08 Sushi: 00:24:609 (3) - I would have seen this one a lil bit closer
18:08 Sushi: in term of flow
18:09 Sushi: As the previous note, as it is stacked kinda break the movement
18:10 BounceBabe: k fixed
18:12 Sushi: Hmmm
18:13 Sushi: I got something but It's not the kind of things I like to suggest
18:13 Sushi: Cuz that will break the intention of the pattern
18:13 BounceBabe: tell me where and what :)
18:14 Sushi: 01:16:875 (1,2,3,4) - In terms of musicality I find it better with two
18:14 Sushi: And the current pattern, put whistle on 1 and 3 rather than on 2
18:14 Sushi: or 1 and 4
18:14 BounceBabe: lets see
18:16 BounceBabe: changed the whisles but how do you mean with only two?
18:16 Sushi: Ah
18:16 Sushi: I mistyped xD
18:16 Sushi: 01:16:875 (1,2,3,4) - In terms of musicality I find it better without (2)
18:16 Sushi: Is what I meant
18:16 Sushi: This particular one, I don't like to have suggestions like that
18:17 Sushi: So I'm trying to see if there is a way to make it sound better
18:20 BounceBabe: ok
18:20 Sushi: maybe use the soft sampleset for (2)
18:21 Sushi: Oh, using it for 2 and 3 might work
18:22 BounceBabe: yes that sounds good
18:22 Sushi: That could be applied on next similar patterns
18:22 BounceBabe: will do ofc
18:22 Sushi: <3
18:24 Sushi: 01:58:242 Please don't make it so low volume here, with the slider not having ticks, you don't know it's length, don't hear when it ends, etc, plus there's a note on 1/4 right after, that's just confusing
18:24 Sushi: Crap xD
18:25 BounceBabe: xD
18:25 Sushi: 01:58:242 -
18:26 Sushi: you can add a hitsound to lower the sliderslide volume (not totally mute it, heh)
18:26 Sushi: and put the section at around 40-50%
18:26 Sushi: and whistles on 01:58:828 (2,1) -
18:27 BounceBabe: kk done
18:27 BounceBabe: i had it with more volume once but since theres not much sound
18:28 Sushi: 02:58:476 (2,3,1,2) - :(
18:29 Sushi: The anti-jump between 3 and 1 is not good here :(
18:29 BounceBabe: ._.
18:29 Sushi: Maybe a little too close
18:29 BounceBabe: shall i flip 2 and 1?
18:30 Sushi: no no, I mean, the anti jump feels a little non instinctive
18:30 BounceBabe: mh
18:30 Sushi: Owait
18:30 Sushi: nvm
18:30 Sushi: It's good
18:30 BounceBabe: ... what now :'D
18:30 Sushi: It was a bad feeling I had
18:31 Sushi: But it actually looks good
18:31 Sushi: And plays fine
18:31 BounceBabe: ok xD/
18:33 Sushi: The SB will have a little issue with Widescreen : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/575490
18:36 BounceBabe: orz i know
18:36 BounceBabe: unfortunately
18:36 BounceBabe: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/575492
18:36 BounceBabe: hm
18:36 BounceBabe: on editor there is one though on the side
18:36 BounceBabe: left side
18:36 BounceBabe: for me
18:37 Sushi: aw
18:37 Sushi: Then it's not your SB fault, then
18:37 Sushi: 02:25:312 (3,4) - This plays weirdly
18:37 Sushi: The jump feels kinda random
18:38 BounceBabe: its a pattern
18:38 BounceBabe: 02:22:968 (3,4,3,4,3,4) -
18:38 Sushi: If it was on the "does" of "doesn't mind", it might play better, but there's nothing with the music that would really explain this pattern here
18:39 Sushi: on 02:22:968 (3,4) - that's exactly what I said ^ :3
18:39 Sushi: It fits
18:39 BounceBabe: kk
18:39 BounceBabe: youre right
18:40 Sushi: That's what you should always keep in mind, for jumps
18:40 Sushi: "does it fit the music ?"
18:40 Sushi: "or is it just a jump to have a jump?"
18:41 BounceBabe: .. xD ok
18:41 Sushi: Damn, I hope the PM savelog problem is solved xD
18:41 Sushi: YUSS it is
18:41 BounceBabe: there was a bug? O.o
18:41 Sushi: Yeah
18:42 Sushi: When you wanted to savelog a PM
18:42 Sushi: It first gave you an in-game error
18:42 Sushi: And if you tried one more time
18:42 Sushi: Craaaaash
18:42 BounceBabe: lol
18:42 BounceBabe: never happened to me
18:42 Sushi: Yeah, it was with the previous update
18:43 Sushi: didn't last long
18:43 BounceBabe: oh
18:44 Sushi: so yeah, same applies to 02:27:187 (3,4) -
18:45 BounceBabe: not sure about this jump now http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/575506
18:45 Sushi: Nah, this one fits imo
18:45 BounceBabe: ok
18:45 Sushi: If you are unsure
18:46 Sushi: You can reduce it a bit, and try to make the same on the next patterns
18:46 BounceBabe: its fine now moved these 02:26:601 (1,2) - a little then
18:47 Sushi: We have the same thing here 03:18:750 (6,1) -
18:47 Sushi: I'd rather put the jump on (6) rather than on (1)
18:48 Sushi: And if (6) is like near (1), the feeling the jump provides towards the music is just awesome
18:49 BounceBabe: how about stacking on 1
18:50 BounceBabe: no thats odd xD
18:50 Sushi: yeah, pretty much xD
18:50 BounceBabe: hmmm
18:51 BounceBabe: and onto 03:19:453 (4) -
18:52 Sushi: hm ?
18:53 BounceBabe: stack 6 on 4
18:54 Sushi: No, not good
18:54 Sushi: The thing is
18:54 Sushi: What you should try to do is putting (6) somewhere it will trigger a jump between (5) and (6)
18:54 Sushi: and a normal play between (6) and (1)
19:00 BounceBabe: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/575523
19:00 Sushi: Oh wait
19:00 Sushi: I think we weren't on the same pattern xD
19:01 Sushi: Ah, actually yes
19:01 BounceBabe: o.o
19:01 Sushi: You didn't get what I meant xD
19:02 Sushi: I meant something like that : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/575525
19:03 BounceBabe: jericho says how its now it suits better
19:03 Sushi: it suits better, but puting a jump on (6) is even better imo
19:04 Sushi: But oh well, opinions xD
19:11 Sushi: That was basically the (only) things I needed to point out
19:11 Sushi: >1h30 modding yeaaaaaaaaaaah
19:12 Sushi: That's a good sign, if I spend time on modding something, that's either something I like and I want to improve
19:12 BounceBabe: ehe, i remapped something due to jumps
19:12 Sushi: Or something crappy xD in that case, first option
19:12 BounceBabe: only the last part
19:12 BounceBabe: lol
19:12 BounceBabe: jeri agrees
19:13 Sushi: :3

This looks good!

*shoots a kd*


EDIT : Stuff were done, and the map is pretty much in a good shape. I think I can throw a Bubble !
Aurele
Yay♥
Topic Starter
BounceBabe

Gabe wrote:

Yay♥
Yay :D
Makar
Shouldn't it be (Daniel Mastro Remix) ...?
Topic Starter
BounceBabe


So cruel D:, actually both is right
Birdy
Hey, should I mod this one or some other non-Nightcore map you have submitted? You asked for a mod for this and Dear You, but I couldn't mod Dear You before it got ranked, and I see this is bubbled already.
thesameplayer
Pretty nice map, waiting for approve :P
ztrot
BAM ranked.
Makar
grats!
mancuso_JM_
Congtatulations Bounce, Nice song :3
Dark_Ai
Finally :D

Glückwunsch ^^ ♥
XinCrin
Gratz BB :)
Topic Starter
BounceBabe

ztrot wrote:

BAM ranked.
Yus *Q* Thank you all for your help
Stefan
GamerX4life
Glückwunsch :)
Aurele
\:D/
Cloudchaser
C-C-Congratz Bounce!! :3
I like so much this song! (and map)
Luce
sehr schöne map ^-^
und cooler skin^^
Gonzvlo
Good job, I really like the map and the design it's nice.

XATs/BounceBabe, I've noticed an obvious problem with the skin. Remember that when designing a custom spinner, there's must be something visible spinning. The current spinner-circle is completely transparent which makes it unrankable. Please keep this in mind for your next maps.

Keep it up!
narakucrimson
What to do then?

Anyway I gotta love this.
Mercurial

Gonzvlo wrote:

The current spinner-circle is completely transparent which makes it unrankable.
huh?
Gonzvlo

Mercurial wrote:

Gonzvlo wrote:

The current spinner-circle is completely transparent which makes it unrankable.
huh?
Gameplay elements should always be visible, this is an old "rule". IIRC it's included in the new ranking criteria too.

narakucrimson wrote:

What to do then?

Anyway I gotta love this.
I guess we could make a quick re-rank, no scores would be affected. I'd like to read BounceBabe's reply first though.
Topic Starter
BounceBabe

Gonzvlo wrote:

Good job, I really like the map and the design it's nice.

XATs/BounceBabe, I've noticed an obvious problem with the skin. Remember that when designing a custom spinner, there's must be something visible spinning. The current spinner-circle is completely transparent which makes it unrankable. Please keep this in mind for your next maps. I already doubted this. Thats fine, created a new circle!

Keep it up!Will! :D
Gonzvlo
Unranked, no scores will be affected, brb

Edit: Re-ranked.
Stefan
Re-Grats
Laharl
Yes.
XinCrin
Topic Starter
BounceBabe
Haha, thanks xD
Roddie
Shouldn't the beatmap be classified as Techno (English)? I mean, I can hear Sean Paul singing in English.

Oh, and congrats, Babe. :D
Stefan
Yeah, English would be correct.
Cloudchaser
re-gratz :D
K i A i
:D
JipJapJeppe
Can you make the skin available for download? if you can please send me a message. thanks :)
Topic Starter
BounceBabe

JipJapJeppe wrote:

Can you make the skin available for download? if you can please send me a message. thanks :)
I put the actual Skin on my Userpage, have fun.
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