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HabiHolic wrote:

Hi banvi~ from my Queue~

[Easy]

01:00:089 (3) - This batter yap, but I want to make more sharp patterns, so I'll keep. And I think it's not so bad...


01:56:446 (4) - NC? no, due to consistent combo

02:37:803 (1) - Try This? okay! arranged


[Normal]

OD -1? no, due to diff balance

00:45:731 (4) - delete? I don't wanna delete this ><
01:32:446 (4) - ^ ^
02:01:803 - Finish? already added o.o

[Hard]

00:49:374 (4) - Do you like jump? I wanted to keep distance... but it's really nice flow! so changed! nice suggestion!! :)


01:58:374 (1) - Try This? hmm.. no, I wanna use a smooth slider at this time


01:59:445 (3) - ^ ^


[Jumping]

00:54:946 (5) - NC?
01:11:231 (7) - ^
01:17:874 (2) - Ctrl + g nah...
01:20:874 (6) - NC?
02:24:945 (7) - ^
02:34:589 (6) - ^
Umm, I think these NC are needless ._.

Good Map banvi have this~(>^_^)>Thanks~ ;)
Thanks for your modding and star!! :)
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Hi, banvi san :3

[General]
  1. The Source should be " Colorful Kiss ~12 ko no Mune Kyun!~ ". http://vndb.org/v1472
  2. Why don't you to put " opening eroge visual novel " to tag ? i often see these things on ranked map. so consider adding it.


[Easy]
  1. 00:15:841 - , 00:32:762 - ,02:08:924 - These are unsnapped green sections, please resnap on 1/4 line.
  2. 00:35:874 (2,3) - Rhythm suggestion : this part would not fit well with this kind of music. i agree your #2 part at here 01:49:589 (2,3,1) - .it will be able to follow the vocal , also you can add a clap to the tail of the slider. so please try my suggestion like this

    at last, If you follow my suggestions, don't forget to remove green sections of this part.
  3. 00:58:374 (1) - i feel this part looks crowded so try to move this note down like this my suggestion ,it will flow more naturally.
  4. 01:01:374 - i feel kinda empty here, it is better to use 1/1 rhythm for playing also i can hear sound of a bass drum. so consider adding a note here.
  5. 01:41:231 (1,2) - As you can see here, the transition from this to the next slider almost feels like unnatural flow. i recommend you to use ctrl + G like this
  6. 02:04:803 (4,1,2,3,4) - This part feels too hard, i hope you remove it and remake some sliders.
  7. 02:15:089 - same as here. 01:01:374 -
  8. 02:54:946 (2) - a bit nazi mod, how about adding a new combo here ? Because you put kiai time to here. Try comparing this to the other diffs :3 and you should put more volume around 65~75% for the climax!


[Normal]
  1. HP Drain rate -1. I think " 4 " is a little difficult for beginners
  2. 00:18:731 (4) - ,00:19:589 (2) - missing clap here.
  3. 00:33:517 (3) - ,01:47:446 (3) - add a soft whistle to the repeat of the slider here to follow the vocal, or add a clap to follow the bass drum.
  4. 00:37:374 - i want to add a clap here, so why don't you extend previous slider ?
  5. 01:18:731 (4) - ,01:19:589 (2) - same as here. If you follow my suggestions, you should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the part.
  6. 01:53:874 - you should follow the vocal "pun pun" lol because this voice feels so sweet. so consider adding a note here.
  7. 01:58:374 (1,2,3,4) - remove drum sound to this part since it follows nothing.
  8. 02:47:231 (3) - flow suggestion: how about moving this slider right for the flow ? so the slider repeat will flow more naturally and beautifully.
  9. 02:54:946 (3) - Same as Easy diff.


[Hard]
  • /me eats this girl :3
  1. 00:19:803 (3) - hmm... this repeat is same as normal diff. it is better to put more sound on this difficulty imo. so why don't you put 3 hits ? like this
  2. 00:33:731 (1) - ,01:47:445 (1) - add a soft whistle to the repeat of the slider here to follow the vocal, or add a clap to follow the bass drum. (same as normal diff.)
  3. 01:33:517 (3) - same as here.00:19:803 (3) -
  4. 01:54:089 (8) - i expect something related to previous slider. i recommend you to use a curve slider in place of straight slider. it looks better to me.
  5. 01:59:446 (3) - it is better to use 1/2 rhythm for playing also you can put a clap to the tail of the slider. try my suggestion like this


[Insane]
  1. 00:33:731 (1) - ,01:47:446 (1) - add a soft whistle to the repeat of the slider here to follow the vocal, or add a clap to follow the bass drum. (same as normal diff.)
  2. 00:46:803 (4) - i want to put a new combo on this stream, like your previous part 00:40:160 (1) -
  3. 01:06:946 (1,2,3) - flow suggestion: i recommend you to put more jump at (3) -> (4) , try my suggestion like this
  4. 01:13:803 (1,2,3) - ^
  5. 02:02:660 (1) - i feel it doesn't need new combo here. so consider removing it like your previous part. 00:48:088 (1,2,3,4) -
  6. 02:54:303 (1,2) - ctrl + G, As you can see here, the transition from this to the next note almost feels like unnatural jump. The jumps will flow more naturally.


anyway, almost all patterns is excellent =3=

Call me back for recheck when you are ready :D
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alacat wrote:

Hi, banvi san :3 :333

[General]
  1. The Source should be " Colorful Kiss ~12 ko no Mune Kyun!~ ". http://vndb.org/v1472 fixed
  2. Why don't you to put " opening eroge visual novel " to tag ? i often see these things on ranked map. so consider adding it. oh, I didn't know that, added


[Easy]
  1. 00:15:841 - , 00:32:762 - ,02:08:924 - These are unsnapped green sections, please resnap on 1/4 line. fixed
  2. 00:35:874 (2,3) - Rhythm suggestion : this part would not fit well with this kind of music. i agree your #2 part at here 01:49:589 (2,3,1) - .it will be able to follow the vocal , also you can add a clap to the tail of the slider. so please try my suggestion like this

    at last, If you follow my suggestions, don't forget to remove green sections of this part. okay, arrenged
  3. 00:58:374 (1) - i feel this part looks crowded so try to move this note down like this my suggestion ,it will flow more naturally. ok
  4. 01:01:374 - i feel kinda empty here, it is better to use 1/1 rhythm for playing also i can hear sound of a bass drum. so consider adding a note here. hmm, I don't want to add a note here. This empty is needed as easy diff imo
  5. 01:41:231 (1,2) - As you can see here, the transition from this to the next slider almost feels like unnatural flow. i recommend you to use ctrl + G like this ok
  6. 02:04:803 (4,1,2,3,4) - This part feels too hard, i hope you remove it and remake some sliders. oh really? well... changed to a slider at 02:06:089 (3,4)
  7. 02:15:089 - same as here. 01:01:374 - same as
  8. 02:54:946 (2) - a bit nazi mod, how about adding a new combo here ? Because you put kiai time to here. Try comparing this to the other diffs :3 and you should put more volume around 65~75% for the climax! I was hesitant to put a new combo here. ok, added :3 and raised a volume to 70%


[Normal]
  1. HP Drain rate -1. I think " 4 " is a little difficult for beginners ok
  2. 00:18:731 (4) - ,00:19:589 (2) - missing clap here. missing? hmm, it sounds weird a bit for me...
  3. 00:33:517 (3) - ,01:47:446 (3) - add a soft whistle to the repeat of the slider here to follow the vocal, or add a clap to follow the bass drum. a soft whistle sounds weird for me, so added custom clap
  4. 00:37:374 - i want to add a clap here, so why don't you extend previous slider ? Hmm, I know but if I extended this slider, it sounds really weird for me. anyway I want to follow the vocal at this part, so didn't change sorry ><
  5. 01:18:731 (4) - ,01:19:589 (2) - same as here. If you follow my suggestions, you should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the part. same as
  6. 01:53:874 - you should follow the vocal "pun pun" lol because this voice feels so sweet. so consider adding a note here. lol I agree, changed!
  7. 01:58:374 (1,2,3,4) - remove drum sound to this part since it follows nothing. it's just my mistake, fixed
  8. 02:47:231 (3) - flow suggestion: how about moving this slider right for the flow ? so the slider repeat will flow more naturally and beautifully. ok
  9. 02:54:946 (3) - Same as Easy diff. ok


[Hard]
  • /me eats this girl :3 I ate =3=
  1. 00:19:803 (3) - hmm... this repeat is same as normal diff. it is better to put more sound on this difficulty imo. so why don't you put 3 hits ? like this okay, but used a slider instead of 3 notes because I think 3 hits are a little hard at this part for hard diff.
  2. 00:33:731 (1) - ,01:47:445 (1) - add a soft whistle to the repeat of the slider here to follow the vocal, or add a clap to follow the bass drum. (same as normal diff.) ok, same as normal diff
  3. 01:33:517 (3) - same as here.00:19:803 (3) - ok
  4. 01:54:089 (8) - i expect something related to previous slider. i recommend you to use a curve slider in place of straight slider. it looks better to me.
    I want to a straight slider here. It's just my feelings, sorry ><
  5. 01:59:446 (3) - it is better to use 1/2 rhythm for playing also you can put a clap to the tail of the slider. try my suggestion like this I like this pattern at this time. I really don't want to change ><


[Insane]
  1. 00:33:731 (1) - ,01:47:446 (1) - add a soft whistle to the repeat of the slider here to follow the vocal, or add a clap to follow the bass drum. (same as normal diff.) ok
  2. 00:46:803 (4) - i want to put a new combo on this stream, like your previous part 00:40:160 (1) - ok
  3. 01:06:946 (1,2,3) - flow suggestion: i recommend you to put more jump at (3) -> (4) , try my suggestion like this Really nice suggestion!! changed
  4. 01:13:803 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
  5. 02:02:660 (1) - i feel it doesn't need new combo here. so consider removing it like your previous part. 00:48:088 (1,2,3,4) - ok
  6. 02:54:303 (1,2) - ctrl + G, As you can see here, the transition from this to the next note almost feels like unnatural jump. The jumps will flow more naturally. ok


anyway, almost all patterns is excellent =3= Thanks!! kiss me~ >3<

Call me back for recheck when you are ready :DI sent form-PM ;)
Thank you for your great modding! :)
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From my queue~

all good! 少しの提案ですが...
[Normal]
  1. 02:13:803 (3,4) - ちょっと見難かったのでこんな配置はいかがでしょう?

[Jumping]
  1. 00:44:660 (1) - Ctrl+Gした方がプレイしやすかったです
  2. 01:55:589 (1,2,3) - DSを01:54:946 (1,2,3) - とそろえて正六角形~
    116,212,115589,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    237,123,115803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    100,62,116018,1,0,0:0:0:0:


"Jumping"楽しかった~
こういう譜面大好きです☆
~Good Luck for Ranked~

-No Kds-
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RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

all good! 少しの提案ですが...
[Normal]
  1. 02:13:803 (3,4) - ちょっと見難かったのでこんな配置はいかがでしょう? タイトルやここの歌詞のキッスと合わせてると言う私のどうでもいいこだわりがありますので変えませんでした>< まあノーマルなのでこの配置でも大丈夫だと思います

[Jumping]
  1. 00:44:660 (1) - Ctrl+Gした方がプレイしやすかったです 確かに、前後の流れが良くなったように感じました!changed!
  2. 01:55:589 (1,2,3) - DSを01:54:946 (1,2,3) - とそろえて正六角形~ うーむ、ここはわざとスペーシングを大きくしたいので変えませんでした><
    116,212,115589,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    237,123,115803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    100,62,116018,1,0,0:0:0:0:


"Jumping"楽しかった~
こういう譜面大好きです☆ ありがとうございます!私も大好きです☆
~Good Luck for Ranked~

-No Kds- あらら、ここ見逃していてkdsあげてしまいました... 1つですが参考になった所がありますので受け取ってくれると幸いです ;)
Thanks for modding and star~ :)
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checked again. Alright, looks fine to me ;)

Bubbled

give my first to you :3
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Go! Go!
bubble by neko nyan :3
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[General]
Disable letterbox during breaks? It's kinda uncommon recently.

[Insane]
I'm against Stack Leniency 0.5. Though a few patterns look better with it, I don't think they warrant it.
00:17:874 (4,5,6) - I personally think this pattern can flow better if you rearrange it like this; http://puu.sh/59ttO.jpg
00:18:946 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Feels weird that only (1,2,3,4,5) has a different color. So how about adding newcombo to 00:19:374 (2,3) - ? It's also corresponding to 01:32:660 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - .
01:09:410 (5) - The angle of this slider makes the whole pattern flow worse imo. You can make it better by rotating it by 20 degree or so. http://puu.sh/5cWQQ.jpg
01:55:589 (1) - What's the point of this newcombo? I don't think it's really needed.
02:13:803 (1,2) - This pattern is too easy compared to 01:00:088 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - , do you mind making it a little harder?
02:34:589 (6) - The current pattern doesn't flow well imo, how about doing like this? http://puu.sh/5cWYx.jpg
02:45:946 (5) - http://puu.sh/5cX1t.jpg This one flows better to me.
02:54:303 (1,2) - I prefer its previous state (CTRL+G). The current flow is indeed natural, but i don't think it plays good. Or you can rearrange it like this; it's perfectly symmetrical. http://puu.sh/5cX5B.jpg

[Hard]
00:20:446 (4) - This one looks better doesn't it? http://puu.sh/5cXh8.jpg Same for 02:47:874 (4) - .
01:50:874 (4) - Arrange the placement like this so it makes a blanket? http://puu.sh/5cXMB.jpg
01:54:089 (8) - This straight slidr is kinda unfitting to me considering your all other ones are curved.
02:31:374 (4) - Remove this clap which is inconstant with the prvious part and Insane difficulty.
02:54:303 (4,5) - A jump here would be nice.

[Normal]
00:17:660 - 01:17:660 - 01:31:374 - 02:31:374 - 02:45:089 - I'm not sure if this is intentional or not, and I dont mind either way, but these claps are inconsistent with Insane.

[Easy]
00:17:660 - 01:17:660 - 01:31:374 - 02:31:374 - 02:45:089 - Same as Normal.

Nothing more to say, pretty much a perfect map. I haven't seen such a good map for a while. Forum pm me for a recheck.
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Melophobia wrote:

[General]
Disable letterbox during breaks? It's kinda uncommon recently. ok

[Jumping]
I'm against Stack Leniency 0.5. Though a few patterns look better with it, I don't think they warrant it. fixed
00:17:874 (4,5,6) - I personally think this pattern can flow better if you rearrange it like this; http://puu.sh/59ttO.jpg
hmm, no. I prefer current pattern and it's good to play imo
00:18:946 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Feels weird that only (1,2,3,4,5) has a different color. So how about adding newcombo to 00:19:374 (2,3) - ? It's also corresponding to 01:32:660 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - . looks good!! ok changed. and I noticed that I also should do to 02:46:374 (1,2,1,2,1,2) for the consistant.
01:09:410 (5) - The angle of this slider makes the whole pattern flow worse imo. You can make it better by rotating it by 20 degree or so. http://puu.sh/5cWQQ.jpg ok
01:55:589 (1) - What's the point of this newcombo? I don't think it's really needed. I don't want to remove this newcombo. I always add newcombo to this pattern because it looks good for me.
02:13:803 (1,2) - This pattern is too easy compared to 01:00:088 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - , do you mind making it a little harder? I know but I wanna use two sliders here ;_;
02:34:589 (6) - The current pattern doesn't flow well imo, how about doing like this? http://puu.sh/5cWYx.jpg hmm, I think current pattern is fun to play than your suggestion. so didn't change, sorry ><
02:45:946 (5) - http://puu.sh/5cX1t.jpg This one flows better to me. I agree, changed!
02:54:303 (1,2) - I prefer its previous state (CTRL+G). The current flow is indeed natural, but i don't think it plays good. Or you can rearrange it like this; it's perfectly symmetrical. http://puu.sh/5cX5B.jpg If I changed to symmetrical pattern, it would be the same as 01:47:446 (1,2). So only Ctrl+G'ed.

[Hard]
00:20:446 (4) - This one looks better doesn't it? http://puu.sh/5cXh8.jpg Same for 02:47:874 (4) - . yes, but current one also looks good imo.
01:50:874 (4) - Arrange the placement like this so it makes a blanket? http://puu.sh/5cXMB.jpg no. I prefer current formation.
01:54:089 (8) - This straight slidr is kinda unfitting to me considering your all other ones are curved. oh well... ok changed!
02:31:374 (4) - Remove this clap which is inconstant with the prvious part and Insane difficulty. maybe I forgot adding clap to jumping diff.
02:54:303 (4,5) - A jump here would be nice. Ummm, I wanna keep the simply ending on hard diff and I have no idea ;~;

[Normal]
00:17:660 - 01:17:660 - 01:31:374 - 02:31:374 - 02:45:089 - I'm not sure if this is intentional or not, and I dont mind either way, but these claps are inconsistent with Insane. I don't know why I don't add these clap to jumping diff. lol added to jumping diff and hard diff.

[Easy]
00:17:660 - 01:17:660 - 01:31:374 - 02:31:374 - 02:45:089 - Same as Normal. ^

Nothing more to say, pretty much a perfect map. I haven't seen such a good map for a while. yay kiss me~ >3<
Forum pm me for a recheck. ok ;)
Thanks for your great modding~ :)
実はめろさんが来てくれる事にすごく期待してましたw
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Ranked.
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おめー!
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おめでとーです!
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キタ━(゚∀゚)━!

おめでとうございます:3
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omedeto ~ :oops:
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Gratzz!! banvi!!^^
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grats! one of my favourite Kotoko song lol
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おめでとうございます!
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おめです :oops:
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おめでとう~ :D
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Thank you all~ <333 I hope enjoy!!

maybe I haven't got ranked map for 10 months? wow
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