Rita - Koi no Process

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Miya
o.o
Thank you BeatofIke :D
Melophobia
ecchi miya><
Topic Starter
Miya
blame the video =3=

/me thanks to Melophobia :3
Yasora
hentai miya
/me runs
Topic Starter
Miya
=3=
I'm not hentai, orz
f e a r
Hai from modqueue. I'm still quite bad, but I'll try my best. I'm gonna try hitsounds this time, feedback would be appreciated but whatever. \o\

[Easy]
00:15:698 (2) - add repeat?
00:40:761 - note?
01:29:369 - ^
00:43:039 - add clap
00:43:419 (1) - remove clap, add finish
00:45:318 - add finish
00:46:077 (5) - add clap
00:53:672 - ^
\o\

[Normal]
00:29:369 - add slider to 00:29:558?
lolz

[S o r d a's Hard]
00:11:141 (1) - add clap?
00:17:976 (2) - ^
00:21:394 - remove whistle
00:21:014 - add whistle
01:29:369 - add clap?
01:31:267 - ^
01:31:647 - ^

[Sekai's Hard]
00:11:900 - whistle?
00:17:976 - ^
00:27:090 - ^
00:30:318 - clap
00:31:077 - ^
01:28:609 - replace with clap?
/o/

[S.S]
00:55:476 (1) - add finish?
01:09:906 (2) - clap?
01:10:571 (6) - ^
01:28:799 (6) - ^
01:19:780 (1) - add finish and lower volume to 50% or smth
\o/

[Insane]
00:26:900 - note?
move 00:29:369 (5) to 00:29:558 then add note at 00:29:369?
00:19:495 - add whistle?
00:21:014 - ^
00:30:888 (10) - clap?
00:31:077 (12) - ^
01:28:799 (7) - ^

Done done. \o\ Very nice mapset and stuff. Star'd.
Thanks for letting me mod this. Bai \o
S o r d a
some fixed
thanks for mod~
http://puu.sh/zRPx
DNR


Insane:
00:09:812 (5) - Random jump o-o
00:11:331 (6) - ^
00:15:888 (5) - ^
00:30:128 (6) - Add NC
00:36:774 (12) - ^. Or just somewhere in this combo, it's way too long
00:48:736 (7) - Add clap on beginning of slider. It goes with the music :D
00:57:090 (1) - Add finish
01:27:280 (7) - Random jump
01:31:837 (7) - ^
01:41:046 - 2 timing points in the same place ;~;

S.S:
00:02:976 (3) - Not moe overlap D:
00:31:647 - Add claps starting at this area?~
01:18:166 (4) - Remove finish

SEKAI:
00:21:774 (3) - Make this curve more sharper

SORTA:
00:17:976 (2) - Add clap
00:36:963 (6) - Move this so it doesn't overlap
01:28:989 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
01:29:748 (2) - Remove clap
01:31:267 (1) - Add clap on end of slider

Normal:
00:49:495 (1) - Make the curve more notable

Easy:
00:35:824 (2) - Remove clap from beginning of slider

yaay~
Sekai
Topic Starter
Miya
@f e a r : Sorry, didn't fix anything in my diff. But thank you for the mod and star ;)

@CDFA :


CDFA wrote:

Random mod? o.o

Insane:
00:09:812 (5) - Random jump o-o It's not random jump. I place a little jump there to follow intense beat there from 'piano?' And it's consistant throught out diff.
00:11:331 (6) - ^
00:15:888 (5) - ^
00:30:128 (6) - Add NC ok
00:36:774 (12) - ^. Or just somewhere in this combo, it's way too long It's breaking my combo consistencies. No >.<
00:48:736 (7) - Add clap on beginning of slider. It goes with the music :DGood, added :3
00:57:090 (1) - Add finish ^
01:27:280 (7) - Random jump
01:31:837 (7) - ^
01:41:046 - 2 timing points in the same place ;~; orz, fixed >.<

Normal:
00:49:495 (1) - Make the curve more notable done

yaay~
Thank you for the mod and star too ;)
S o r d a
Melophobia
a happy new year~ (ノ゚ω゚)ノ

[General]
  1. i think you need to rename S.S diff into something like "S.S's Extra" so that the diff name shows that the diff is harder than Insane
    at least S.S's diff should be listed below insane diff in game


[Easy]
  1. 00:10:001 (1) - CTRL+J for better flow
  2. 00:12:660 (3) - sorry for nazi mod but 1grid left and up looks better imo
  3. 00:30:508 (2,3) - these finishes dont fit music well
    so try this rhythm instead? it will be kinda hard tho.
  4. 00:41:900 - compare with 00:41:900 - , i think finish is better than clap
  5. 00:42:470 - ^
  6. 00:52:533 (1) - the rhythm sounds weird to me. so try this rhythm
  7. 01:36:394 (3,4) - this 1/2 rhythm is not suitable in this diff imo since you didnt use it for everywhere else.
    i think you can avoid it by using short slider
  8. 01:38:103 (1) - start this at 01:37:913 - ? i think it will be much better and suit music well


[Normal]
  1. 00:06:584 (1) - try this rhythm to follow music better
  2. 00:17:406 - add finish here? here's stronger than others i think
  3. 00:23:293 (2,3) - spacing is a bit far although it's minor thing
  4. 00:24:812 (2) - add whistle at the end? sounds good to me
  5. 00:29:748 (1) - how about adding whistle here? it suits music well
  6. 00:30:698 - ^ same here, it's strong enough to use finish compare with 00:31:267 -
  7. 01:08:862 (3) - add finish at the end since i can clearly hear it in music
  8. 01:33:166 (2) - same here, add finish at the end


[S o r d a's Hard]
  1. 00:09:242 (2,3) - overlapが凄い気になるからもうちょっと遠めに配置で
    http://puu.sh/zZvt
  2. 00:12:660 (3,1) - このjumpの後に1拍置くのはかなり読みにくいからもうちょっと広く配置
  3. 00:14:369 (1) - なんだこの汚いスライダー(驚
  4. 00:15:888 (1) - CTRL+R2回押すとちょっとキレイになる
  5. 00:28:229 (1) - finishはちょっとやりすぎに感じる removeか最低でも音量下げる感じで
  6. 00:30:698 (1) - 終点clap?
  7. 00:34:115 (7,8) - spacingが0.04くらいズレてて美しくない
  8. 00:35:444 (2) - もうちょっと綺麗にstack出来るはず
  9. 00:37:913 (2) - spacing揃えよう
  10. 00:43:039 (3) - clap追加
  11. 00:44:748 (4) - 始点finish
  12. 00:55:191 (5) - 音量下がったのに凄い違和感あるんだけど何か理由が?
  13. 00:55:381 (1) - 始点は00:55:571 - で
  14. 01:02:786 (5) - vocal的な意味で始点を01:02:976 - に?
  15. 01:09:052 (5) - 始点finish
  16. 01:15:698 (5,1,2) - 特に理由無さそうだからspacing揃えた方が美しい
  17. 01:16:267 (2) - 01:16:457 - に音が欲しい気がする
  18. 01:16:837 (1) - spinnerは合わないし2連続だし消してnote置き直すのが良いと思う
  19. 01:23:672 (2,3) - せっかくだし対照に置いてみては
  20. 01:24:812 (4,5) - spacing揃えましょう
  21. 01:28:989 (1) - 始点finish
  22. 01:34:305 (4) - どちらかといえばこのkicksliderは01:34:115 - に置きたい


[Sekai's Hard]
  1. 00:14:558 (1) - it doesnt fit music well because accent is on previous red tick so start this slider at 00:14:369 -
  2. 00:16:077 (5) - ^ same reason as above, this slider should start at 00:15:888 -
  3. 00:18:261 (1) - this spinner is too short although it's still rankable. i think it would be better to remove it and remap here
    it may be hard for hard players and it also may surprise them
  4. 00:29:748 (5) - add clap at the end instead of finish. it's too much and clap fits music better
  5. 00:37:343 (1) - i suggest to add finish at the beginning because i can hear it in music
  6. 00:42:090 (5) - remove this note and rhythm would be much better imo
    at least replace (4) with a slider
  7. 00:42:850 (1,3) - add claps to them and increase volume step by step?
  8. 00:44:179 (6) - this slider is not suitable and doesnt fit music at all
    start it at 00:44:369 - please
  9. 00:47:217 (3) - same here, start this at 00:47:406 -
  10. 00:54:242 (7) - 12 combos are too much for a Hard diff, imo so add newcombo here
  11. 00:55:761 (1) - clap sounds nice here imo
  12. 01:00:128 (1) - this doesnt suit music/vocal imo and it should start at 00:59:938 -
  13. 01:00:888 (3) - use same shape as (1)? the current one doesnt look that good to me
  14. 01:02:786 (4) - start this at 01:02:596 - to follow vocal better please
  15. 01:35:065 (1) - this spinner is too long imo it's better to start it at 01:37:913 - and remap there


[S.S]
  1. 00:05:255 (1,3) - i think they can be stacked more nicely
  2. 00:07:723 (3,4,5) - looks bad and spacing is inconstant so make them perfect triangle please
  3. 00:12:280 (3) - it's not stacked correctly
  4. 00:30:128 (4) - clap sounds better imo
  5. 00:31:077 (3) - ^
  6. 00:41:520 (3) - why not place this note at the center? o.o
  7. 00:47:406 (2) - compare with 00:47:217 - , this should be stronger than it so add finish here and remove finish from 00:47:217 -
  8. 00:55:476 (1) - this spinner should start at 00:55:571 - to follow downbeat i think
  9. 01:18:736 - finish and clap are too much here imo remove either please
  10. 01:19:780 (1) - same reason as 00:55:476 (1) - , start this at 01:19:875 -
    also the end of this should be at 01:22:343 - or 01:21:963 -
    at least mute the end please
  11. 01:38:008 (1) - i dont think whistle sounds that good because it follows nothing


[Insane]
  1. 00:17:406 (5) - add finish here since this part is stronger than others
  2. 00:26:331 (3) - i prefer adding note to the middle of this slider to follow vocal better
  3. 00:30:698 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - these are kinda overmapped imo...
  4. 00:31:077 (7) - missing clap?
  5. 00:44:369 (2) - add finish to the end as well?
  6. 01:10:191 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this stream shape is kinda hard to hit imo
  7. 01:19:115 (5) - i think the slider should be more curved for better flow
  8. 01:21:394 (1) - this can be stacked more nicely i think
  9. 01:35:824 - whistle should be at 01:35:634 - instead


moe song >a<
i already star'd this, so i wont star in this time but really nice map ><
good luck Miya, i hope this mod is helpful to you~
Topic Starter
Miya
Most of them fixed. Too lazy to write replies :P
Thank you for the mod Melo <3
Low
Heyo!

General

You should make the kiai times consistent throughout the difficulties.
Consider adding custom combo colors.

Easy

00:10:001 (1) - Flip this vertically. It looks better than just simply copy and pasting one slider. It also flows better, as each object curves nicely into another.
00:46:457 (1) - This slider's curves are pretty tight, making it less visually appealing. Try something along the lines of this.
00:55:571 (1) - Odd looking slider in my opinion. Try making the curves less tight like 00:50:255 (2).
01:38:103 (1) - The song doesn't call for a whistle at the end of this spinner.

Normal

In the beginning of this difficulty, there are a lot of short 1/2 sliders, making that part of the map feel really empty when it has more potential. You should remap it (the beginning).
+1 AR due to the semi-high BPM and SV would help in the readability of some of the patterns (especially stacked ones).

S o r d a's Hard

00:19:115 - Unused timing section at this point.
00:29:748 (5) - Add a finish to the end of this slider considering the fact that it's present in the music.
00:38:482 (1) - Ctrl + J for better flow as each slider leads into another.
00:40:761 (2,3) - Spacing error.
00:43:419 (1,2) - ^

Sekai's Hard

00:19:495 (1) - You need to add a NC to this note due to an unrankable combo glitch.
00:52:723 (2,3,4) - These sliders are offbeat, meaning that they end where they should normally start. There are discouraged and feel like you're just placing beats to the rhythm.

S.S

You need to made the AudioLeadIn larger. The notes appear very quickly at the beginning of the song.
00:43:039 (1,2,1) - Space these just a bit farther apart so that they aren't touching.

Good luck!
S o r d a
Sekai
some fixed!
http://puu.sh/A8Yi
Topic Starter
Miya
No fix in my diff. But thank you for the mod >.<
riffy
hi! :D

[General]

Yasora wrote:

hentai miya
/me runs
[Easy]
AR - 4 D: use 2 or 3 D:
the same with HP Drain
00:19:875 (1) - overlap with spinner's hitburst! >3<

00:55:571 (1) - /me nazi: how about make shape a bit softer? http://puu.sh/AdQF
01:19:685 (1) - appears too suddenly for beginners :< make at least 1/1 pause before spnner :<
01:26:710 (1) - touches hp bar >3<
01:23:672 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - >3< TOO MANY NEW COMBOS! /me going to cry :( Beginners can be wery confused >3<

[Normal]
srsly, make hitsounds at kiai a bit louder :<
00:09:622 (1) (and so on..i won't write down the same sliders again :3) - use reverse here? big white line without hitobjects a bit confusing for me.
00:34:305 (1,1) - nazi: stack?
01:03:546 (4,5,1,2) - nazi: http://puu.sh/AdU1
01:37:533 (4) - whistle here?

[S o r d a's Hard]
01:16:837 (1) - start here 01:16:077 (1) / or map this spinner
01:35:065 (1) - instead of this loooong booring spinner make heart-saped slider with slowdown :3

[Sekai's Hard]
i want more claps :< just listen to song (from 00:19:495 to 00:28:039 (8) - you can use claps more :(
01:35:065 (1) - it's just me or this spinner becomes longer and longer?D:

[S.S]
whoa? so fast..and..so awesome :O
00:44:748 (1) - only remove new combo here :|

[Insane]
2 insane diffs! Y U NO USE AR9? D:
/me gives up
this diff is really awesome >3<

~~~~~
gl~
S o r d a

Miya wrote:

No fix in my diff. But thank you for the mod >.<
Topic Starter
Miya
Sorry, Bakari, no fix. Orz.Dx
Thank you for the mod btw :D
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