1. Easy (1.52 stars, 150 notes)
2. Hard (4.66 stars, 394 notes)

Airi wrote:

Hey~
Maybe you need to add space in song name?
Kachou fuugetsu
I think it's proper variant.

jonathanlfj wrote:

There is this weird beeping sound in your mp3:

I think maybe because you stripped audio directly from video, and this happened during the conversion.
Consider getting a better mp3. I included one that I have atm, if you can find even better quality then use that instead.
http://puu.sh/yq9b
offset is the same i think...
Keep up the good work! Would love to see this ranked~~

Edit: if the link above doesn't work dl from this http://puu.sh/yqeE

RoxasGrylls94 wrote:

Modding :3

Isn't better to put a silent slider sound? :3
I see,thanks

EASY

00:05:693 (1) : Add clap in the end of the slider
fixed
00:11:547 (4) : Same
fixed
00:23:254 (4) : Same
fixed
00:29:108 (1) : Same
fixed
00:34:961 (4) : Same
fixed
00:46:669 (4) : Same
fixed
00:58:864 (1,2,3,4,5) : Same
fixed
01:06:181 (2,4) : Add clap
fixed
01:10:571 (5) : Add clap in the end of the slider
fixed
01:37:888 (2,4) : Add clap
fixed
01:45:693 (1,2) : Add clap in the end of the slider
fixed
01:53:498 (2,3) : Same
fixed
02:01:303 (2) : Add clap
fixed
02:03:254 (3) : Add clap in the end of the slider
fixed
02:05:205 (2) : Add clap
fixed
02:07:157 (1) : Same
fixed
02:09:108 (2,3) : Add clap in the end of the slider
fixed

Franc[e]sco wrote:

Lovely map :3

Here are my suggestions:

[Hard]
03:01:303 (3,4,5,6) - This is personal taste, but I think most people will hate those mini sliders on their first play of this map
fixed
02:11:059 (3,4,5,6,1) - Maybe make this a normal non-stacked stream since it's more than three beats?
fixed
02:53:010 (1) - Remove new combo so that you don't get confused on the order of the beats?
fixed
02:53:986 (1) - ^
fixed

Kudosu if it helped, pweeaaase?~

cookiegonyaa wrote:

I tested the hard map, and it is good ^^
good luck c:

Regou wrote:

oops we're working on the same song lol
good luck :3

Byakugan249 wrote:

the diff spread is too big. you need to make a normal diff to make it even. no kd for this post.

Sakuya Lv 9 wrote:

First time modding
The easy is quite well done, but I think the hard is not really good. Some parts of it are like TAG4 map while some are like, 3 stars. The change of pace is too quick for me. I never failed one 4.5 star map (I usually get an S), but this, I really don't have the confidence to pass it.
(EDIT: passed it, got a B, 16 Xs, still abnormal for me and for a 4.5 star map.)

EASY

01:50:083 (1) - Too far away from the previous slider. Move it closer.
fixed
02:49:595 (2,3) - These might be too quick compared to the rest of the map.
fixed
03:02:278 (1,2,3,4,1) - I really like the volume adjustment here.
I think that this is no problem

HARD
00:09:108 (6) - Rhythm is kind of strange.
fixed
00:10:571 (6,7) - Having them stack together seems weird.
fixed
00:11:059 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not distance snapped.
These are "Jump" zone
00:15:937 (7) - Same
These are "Jump" zone
00:20:083 (4,5) - Same
These are "Jump" zone
00:21:059 (1) - Same
fixed
00:22:278 (4) - Same
These are "Jump" zone
00:26:669 (1) - Same
These are "Jump" zone
00:28:132 (1) - Same
fixed
00:32:035 (6) - Rhythm is kind of strange.
fixed
00:36:425 (6,1,2) - Same
These are "Jump" zone
00:38:376 (4) - Same
fixed
00:39:596 (9,1) - Same
These are "Jump" zone
00:43:498 (4,5) - Same... I suppose you get the point?
I am going to stop talking about distance snapping from now on and focus on other things (or this "same" will go on forever).
Try turning distance snap on and move each of the notes around.
Continuing:
Like above my reply,these are Jump. I dare to shift these. If all are same distance,I think that them are tedious.
01:11:669 (2) - It's not matching with the rhythm of the song. Make the start and end of this slider on the red(1/2) tick, not the blue(1/4) ones.
fixed
01:19:108 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Actually I think this part don't need the distance snapping, so skip this part when fixing that.
I dare to make jump with distance snap
01:40:327 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I guess this is too much stars in a short period of time.
fixed
01:49:108 (3) - The sudden change of pace is certainly intended, but I don't really like it. Maybe it's just me.
I know you wanna say.In fact, I worried either normal speed or slow speed
02:34:474 (3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe this is too much whistles? I don't really know about this.
fixed
02:52:766 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Actually I think this part don't need the distance snapping, so skip this part when fixing that.
I dare to make jump with distance snap
03:02:278 (1,2,3,4,1) - I really like this part.
same normal