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Garven
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S o r d a
thanks IRC mods Garven~

12:15 <Garven> : 00:03:110 (1) -
12:15 <Garven> : Why here
12:15 <Garven> : 00:00:710 - but not here?
12:15 <Garven> : 00:05:510 (2) -
12:15 <Garven> : etc
12:15 <Garven> : Inconsistent rhythm is confusing
12:15 <S_o_r_d_a> : maybe no need?
12:15 <Garven> : Either follow bass more
12:15 <Garven> : or claps only
12:15 <S_o_r_d_a> : ok,I follow claps only
12:16 <Garven> : 00:14:735 (5,7) - overmapped
12:16 <Garven> : 00:17:660 (2,1) - I didn't feel this jump at all
12:16 <Garven> : Might read better as sliders instead of circles
12:16 <Garven> : 00:18:560 (1) - make the slider ticks quiet here
12:17 <Garven> : 00:29:510 (1) - add finish
12:17 <Garven> : It would be cool if you had a hitsound to use to emphasize the strings at 00:24:710 - and 00:25:160 - and
12:17 <Garven> : 00:25:910 - and 00:26:360 -
12:17 <Garven> : etc
12:18 <Garven> : 00:32:360 - a custom slider tick sound to fill in the second snare hit would be neat too
12:18 <Garven> : 00:33:335 (7) - overmapped
12:18 <Garven> : 00:36:485 (5) - etc
12:18 <Garven> : I don't like those since there's nothing in the music to justify them. :<
12:19 <Garven> : 00:37:910 (1) - Why is this its own combo?
12:20 <S_o_r_d_a> : remove nc?
12:20 <Garven> : 00:38:210 (1) - remove nc here
12:21 <Garven> : 00:39:410 (2,3) - this spacing keeps messing me up
12:21 <Garven> : huge jumps to normal spacnig to huge jumps again
12:21 <Garven> : Doesn't fit the song at all
12:21 <S_o_r_d_a> : hmm,I call saymun :3
12:21 <Garven> : 00:40:610 (2,3) - And right afterward
12:21 <Garven> : It's even smaller spacing
12:21 <S_o_r_d_a> : k,changed
12:22 <Garven> : 00:43:910 - add note
12:22 <Garven> : 01:08:510 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - :/
12:22 <Garven> : Also 10,11,12 sound bad
12:22 <Garven> : especially when you don't have a finish to follow it up 01:09:110 (1) -
12:23 <S_o_r_d_a> : 01:13:910 (1) - too?
12:23 <Garven> : Yeah, should be okay there
12:23 <S_o_r_d_a> : k,added
12:24 <Garven> : That chorus part has a lot of whistles, haha
12:24 <S_o_r_d_a> : xD
12:24 <Garven> : 02:02:960 (5,6) - after all those curved sliders, seeing this linear slider looked out of place
12:25 <Garven> : 02:06:410 (4,1) - not stacked properly
12:25 <Garven> : 02:07:610 (6,1) -
12:25 <Garven> : 02:11:060 (1) - remvoe new combo
12:25 <Garven> : 02:11:510 (2) - new combo
12:25 <Garven> : 02:12:110 (1) - remove new combo
12:25 <Garven> : 02:12:710 (2) - new combo
12:26 <S_o_r_d_a> : kk all fixed
12:26 <Garven> : 03:05:810 (1) - too quiet
12:26 <Garven> : Compare to beginning of the song
12:26 <Garven> : 03:15:410 - start kiai here
12:27 <Garven> : 03:54:260 (3,1) - These woudl play a lot better with larger spacing imo
12:28 <Garven> : Maybe 1.5x+
12:28 <Garven> : Right now they feel way too close
12:28 <Garven> : 04:01:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and it makes this feel really out of place
12:30 <S_o_r_d_a> : if you can 04:01:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - please call me idia>_<
12:33 <Garven> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/331470
12:38 <S_o_r_d_a> : okk fixed
inaba-tan
may i make taiko diff ?
Frostmourne
Hi , as per your request :)

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00:39:110 (1) - I guess you miss finish at the start here
00:50:960 (7) - whistle at the start , according to this note 00:46:160 (1) -
00:57:860 (1,2,3) - first time , it looks like stream, I suggest you to new combo it every note like 01:23:210 (1,1,1) - (it makes very clear)
01:01:910 (5) - emm large spacing , new combo here ? , It's ok imo
01:52:310 (1) - clap with finish is better than only clap here like this 00:39:110 (1) -
01:57:710 (3) - emm, it cuts the flow I think, it must be repeat slider imo , better much for me :)
01:59:060 (4) - clap at the end ?
01:59:810 (3) - clap ?
02:04:010 (4) - ^
02:36:560 (1) - ^ at the start of the slider , finish here is better
03:17:210 (7) - miss clap here
in these pattern
add clap 03:21:410 (6) - , 03:21:560 (7) - , 03:21:710 (8) - <only red tick and the end of slider , I hope this sound will make it better much
03:22:910 (4,5,6,1) - can you make jump here ? , I think it's very good position to make it :)
03:24:560 (1) - finish at the end
03:32:810 (7) - add note here with clap please , it's very empty :?
03:34:310 (1) - finish at the start
04:00:710 (1,2) - (1) is too short from (2) I think at least me will miss at this slider cuz it looks like 03:59:960 (1,2) - <but this is 1/2

imo , some point like this 03:22:310 (2) - and 03:23:510 (2) - in other part aren't still be added finish yet . add it more for more exciting ! :P

very fun mapset and good song xD
star here , Good luck for approving !! :)
GiNa
Kore kowai map desu ne ~
star >_<
maybe mod this if I have time (and not lazy) or when yuca-chan gives mod to my map
Sorda-chan good luck ~
Snowy Dream
Mod request from PM request
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[General]
OFFSET: 700-705 would be better IMO


[Attention]
00:17:505 (1) - spacing! (you should do a jump here imo)
00:29:055 (5) - :< can move it to another position?
00:52:605 (9) - NC
01:47:955 (2,3,4,5,6) - not the regular star shape
01:49:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not the regular hexagon
01:51:105 (5) - NC
02:15:705 (4) - jump? (x:322 y:244)
02:17:355 (5) - add a note?
02:41:130 (8,9,10) - try to increase the spacing
03:19:605 (1) - why NC?
03:29:280 (5,6) - make it more fluent
03:57:705 (6) - NC
03:55:905 (1) - jump?
04:00:705 (1) - ^
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ya > <
Perfect Mapset (1st)
And star :3
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S o r d a
fixed most above~
thanks!
but offset cant change
also,I ask Niva timing check

11:17 <S_o_r_d_a> : yo Niva~
11:17 <Niva> : hi S o r d a (:
11:17 <S_o_r_d_a> : can you check offset?
11:17 <Niva> : ah, sure
11:18 <S_o_r_d_a> : thanks ~
11:18 <Niva> : map's link? xD
11:18 *S_o_r_d_a is listening to (IA - Kisaragi Attention)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/51765]
11:18 <Niva> : ok, downloading~
11:18 <S_o_r_d_a> : setup Charles445 but modder's said 700~705
11:18 <S_o_r_d_a> : I think bit wrong offset now:>
11:23 <Niva> : hmm, I agree with Charles445 more
11:23 <S_o_r_d_a> : oh,okey>A</
11:23 <S_o_r_d_a> : I can show this log?
11:24 <Niva> : hmm, yep
11:24 <Niva> : for example
11:24 <Niva> : in 01:42:710 (2) -
11:24 <Niva> : in 25% playback 710 sounds better~
11:25 <Niva> : (:
11:25 <S_o_r_d_a> : I see! thanks Niva~
also thanks for star all!
banvi
散々だった今日に、ちょっと期待しちゃいそーだ

modreq from in-game

[Attention]

S o r d a
  1. 00:01:010 ~ 00:08:810 - うーむ、ニューコンボの間隔がばらばらなので下のように変えたほうが統一感あっていいかなあって思います
  2. 02:16:460 (1) - silderslideがうるさいので http://puu.sh/ywEl 使ってみてください
  3. 03:19:310 (1,2) - (5)のスライダー、hitburstとかぶらないところに置くとベターだと思います
  4. 03:57:785 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 下のように形整えたほうが綺麗でいいかなあって思います
  5. 04:02:510 (1) - new combo? (かっこつけ程度にw)


y u c a
  1. 00:50:960 (7,1) - ニューコンボの入れ替え
  2. 01:03:110 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - スロー再生で何回か聞き直しましたが曲の音とずれててかなり違和感を感じます…(微妙に変速がある(?))
    複雑な問題になりそうな感じならここは消すのも一つの手かも… う~ん、私の勘違いかもしれないですがorz
  3. 01:40:160 (1) - remove new combo
  4. 01:40:610 (2) - new combo
  5. 01:47:510 (1,2) - ここのスペーシングは直した方が良いと思います
  6. 01:49:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - うーん、私としてはもうちょっと綺麗に6角形作って欲しいです
  7. 02:24:710 (1) - もうちょっと綺麗にスライダーの形を整えたほうが良いです
  8. 02:33:710 (1) - nazi : move 2 grid right
  9. 02:35:810 (1,2,3,4,5) - スペーシングを整えたほうがいいと思います


saymun
  1. 00:29:060 (5) - Hmm, not stacking here would be better I think. move to another place?
  2. 00:36:110 (3) - ctrl+r would be better to flow I think.
  3. 01:14:810 (5) - nazi : move 1 grid right
  4. 01:23:210 (1,1,1) - weird placement for me. Change like this? ↓


That's all I can find ><
Good Luck ;)
Thite
S o r d a
00:05:204 (3) - もう少し(2)から遠ざけてみては?
00:16:154 (1) - ここのfinish消して(2)のスライダーの頭にfinishつけてみては?
00:19:454 (2) - ホイッスル追加?
03:19:604 (1) - このnew comboはいらない気がします
03:29:354 (6) - ホイッスル追加?
01:59:354 (1) - スライダーの頭にホイッスル?
04:01:754 (1,2,3,4,5) - ちょっと見栄えが悪いんでこんな感じで対称にしたらいいかなぁって思います http://puu.sh/yzbz


y u c a
01:03:692 (5) - new comboの位置に少しだけ違和感があるような?
01:36:404 - note追加してみては?
01:48:554 (6) - 綺麗な5角形にしたらいいかなぁなんて
01:54:704 (1) - しっかりスタックさせてみては?


saymun
00:35:354 (1) - add whistle this slider's top?
00:31:904 (1) - remove this new combo and put next note?
01:04:304 (1) - add finish?
01:12:704 (1) - ^
02:40:004 (4) - stack exactly like this? http://puu.sh/yz5Z

ふぁいとー! :)
Reiji-RJ
Hello! :3

Attention

S o r d a

  1. 00:04:604 (1,2) - maybe stack them as all? :O
  2. 00:12:254 (2) - move it some grids down and left and stack 00:12:554 (3) - with 00:11:804 (6) -
  3. 02:01:604 (5) - maybe stack with 02:01:004 (1) - ? Return pattern C:
  4. 02:04:154 (1) - finish
  5. 02:07:454 (5,6) - default clap on them!
  6. 02:08:654 (5,6) - ^
  7. 02:11:054 (4) - custom clap on the beginning and end?
  8. 02:15:554 - add a note here and 02:15:629 - here?
  9. 03:17:504 (1) - finish?
  10. 03:26:804 (5) - remove clap from the end
  11. 03:31:904 (3) - finish
  12. 04:00:104 (2) - change finish to clap


saymun

  1. 01:04:304 (1) - add a finish
  2. 01:06:704 (1) - ^
  3. 01:08:804 (9,10) - maybe continue triangle pattern? So that 01:08:804 (9) - will be stacked with 01:08:354 (6) - and 01:08:954 (10) - with 01:08:504 (7) -
  4. 01:14:504 (3,4) - ctrl+r? for better flow :O
  5. 01:16:304 (1) - finish?
  6. 02:41:354 (1) - ^
  7. 02:50:954 (1) - ^
  8. 03:39:104 (1) - ^
  9. 03:43:904 (1) - ^
  10. 03:48:704 (1) - ^


y u c a

  1. 00:50:954 (7) - finish!
  2. 00:55:154 - add a note with custom clap
  3. 01:39:404 (3) - as you started to map another sound, remove this slider and add one from 01:39:554 - till 01:39:854 -
  4. 01:42:704 (2) - move nc here
  5. 01:54:404 (9,1) - stack them properly
  6. 02:19:904 (1) - finish
  7. 02:24:704 (1) - ^
  8. 02:27:104 (1) - it's quite hidden by stream's hitbursts D:
  9. 03:05:804 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - add claps to them!


Wow, good map! *^*
Good luck~
y u c a
01:39:404 (3) - as you started to map another sound, remove this slider and add one from 01:39:554 - till 01:39:854 -

03:05:804 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - add claps to them!
no changed there because my baka teacher modded and changed it like this :)
ばんびさんの変速の件は赤線入れることになりました!ありがとうございました!

thanks mod guys( * ・ ◡・ ) fixed verstion here :arrow:http://puu.sh/yFDC
mjw5150
[S o r d a]
01:57:404 - add finish here?
02:06:179 (2) - move it to 02:06:029?sounds better imo

[saymun]
00:41:204 (5) - del finish?sounds not so good to add a finish here
00:43:679 (8) - del this note?
01:23:204 (1,1,1) - not so good to use this style at the end of kiai lol(missed in my first play lol

[y u c a]
00:56:504 (6,7) - make 7 right a grid so that they could be symmetrical
00:58:304 (1) - down 2 grid?it will look better if you make the spacing equal for these 4 notes
01:52:304 (1) - down 1 grid the spacing will be better

really nice mapset~
☆~
GiNa
[Sorda]
02:04:154 (1) – endpoint move to x:304 y:200, looks better like that
03:17:804 (2) – middle point move to x:240 y:244
03:24:479 (7) – this doesn’t fit, maybe delete

[yuca]
baca
01:38:804 – add a note here
01:40:304 – ^, there’s a sound

[saymun]
01:20:804 (7,8,9) – I think this doesn’t fit, maybe delete 8 ? perhaps it’s weird to start on white tick
03:50:204 (5,6,7) – ^, maybe delete 6
03:58:229 (8) – move to x:216 y:204

Good luck you guys >_<
James
lol circles under sliders with AR9? this game is getting weirder and weirder....
its not even fun to play, everything including the rhythm makes it tiring wtf
Miya
AR 8 is better for me. More playable at AR 8. It's hard to read the rythim at AR 9.
Very hard for me. A lot of miss. Orz.
Frostmourne
for me , AR 9 is better much , jumping with AR 8 + BPM 200 is tiring and irritating :(
xsrsbsns

Frostmourne wrote:

for me , AR 9 is better much , jumping with AR 8 + BPM 200 is tiring and irritating :(
This, AR9 hands down.
those
Eh..
[Attention]
  1. I find AR8 fits better.
  2. Just by first playing, 00:01:004 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - appears to have no pattern in distance spacing, whatsoever. It's very untidy, so you should have come up with a pattern. This needs fixing.
  3. 00:17:804 (1) - Remove the new combo, it appears to be unneeded.
  4. 01:03:092 - and 01:04:304 - should definitely not be necessary.
  5. 01:22:754 (9,1,1,1) - REALLY bad anti-jumps.
  6. 02:53:954 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Misleading.
Topic Starter
S o r d a

those wrote:

Eh..
[Attention]
  1. I find AR8 fits better.
  2. Just by first playing, 00:01:004 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - appears to have no pattern in distance spacing, whatsoever. It's very untidy, so you should have come up with a pattern. This needs fixing.okey,Fixed spacing used0.7
  3. 00:17:804 (1) - Remove the new combo, it appears to be unneeded.fixed
  4. 01:03:092 - and 01:04:304 - should definitely not be necessary.talked Suzully,if deleted this redline doesnt fit music so,I'll keep this
  5. 01:22:754 (9,1,1,1) - REALLY bad anti-jumps.ok,I call saymun
  6. 02:53:954 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Misleading.I dont think so some players clear this part keep now
thanks for mod those~

also thanks many guys!
I ask for some japanese players and xsrsbsns
guys said AR9 better for now
I think so keep it AR9
CXu
Star because~
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