DoKoLP wrote:

1. 03:36:830 (7) - Dafuq? 1/8? Y u no use 1/4 stream until 03:37:068? it's suposed to be 1/6. I was going to fix this sooner or later, but i guess it was later lol.
2. 03:44:068 (1,1,1,1) - Lovely sliders <3
3. 04:19:711 (7,8) - Slightly hidden by 6. i think it's ok. People should be able to play this.
4. 05:08:173 (1) - Not sure with that 1/8 beat. I'd place it on the red one. well, I tried placing it on the red tick, and it sounded off. The 1/8 tick sounded more on beat. Anyways it's the last note, and there actually no beat anyways at that point, so the player has to mostly rely on the approach circle anyways

Fun to play. Nothing to mention except for the suggestions above.

Good Luck! (:[/list][/notice]

frans_niko wrote:

May i ask? this is for approval right? yup

Marsh x Phish
HP+1(for make it more harder) seems ok
CS+1(^) no, I dislike having mapped something on a certain CS and then changing it afterwards, sorry

because it i will give star Thanks

frans_niko wrote:

Jenny x Wibber
AR9? why not AR8? it was hard T_T

just give suggestion (for Jenny and wibber1)

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1. The 2nd timing section at 04:46:227 has different BPM. Change the bpm to 176 in [Marsh x Phish].

1. 00:02:639 (3) - clap
2. 00:03:068 (5) - clap on sliderend
3. 00:07:211 (2) - clap
4. 00:08:639 (2) - ^
5. 00:11:068 (8) - Try something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354473
6. 00:28:211 (4) - Move 1 gridlvl3 to the right, then 00:28:782 (5) - 1 gridlvl3 to the left.
7. 00:26:211 (5) - Move this to x:392 y:292 so that (4,5,6,7) looks more triangulary (cool word)
8. 00:31:068 (5) - New combo?
9. 00:32:354 (10) - ^
10. 00:40:354 (7) - Because of the claps on (8), you should remove the clap here imo. (00:42:639 (9) 00:44:925 (7) etc)
11. 00:40:782 (8) - You have this thing with having a new combo on these sliders later on, so new combo here.
12. 00:43:068 (10) - ^
13. 00:45:354 (8) - ^
14. 00:47:211 (7) - Clap
15. 00:47:496 (8) - Make this a slider to follow the vocal, or a sequence of 1/2 to follow the drums/whatever?
16. 00:49:925 (1) - you have claps earlier and later, so why not here :p
17. 00:57:211 (1,2,3,4) - This sequence of sliders are kinda boring to play. Atleast spread them out somehow. (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354482 This is just one of many possible solutions~)
18. 00:59:496 (1,2,3,4) - ^
19. 01:01:925 (1) & 01:06:354 (1) - So many long spinners so close together ;_; You should atleast map one of the 2 spinners.
20. 01:06:211 (4) - 1 gridlvl4 to the right.
21. 01:06:354 (1) - If you end the spinner at 01:07:925, you can use a slider to map the long vocal at 01:08:068, or just in general map something \o\
22. 01:08:639 (1,2) - Everything's so straight in this chorus ;_; curve these?
23. 01:26:639 (1,2,3,4,5) - Imo, this part feels better to click if you arrange it like this:
    
24. 01:32:782 (9,10,11) - Increase the volume here
25. 01:35:925 (9,11) - Clap on sliderend.
26. 01:35:925 (9) - New combo.
27. 01:38:354 (1) - God this is long ;_;
28. 01:42:496 - 01:42:925 - Make a 1/2 stack or something here.
29. 01:53:925 (1) - If you want to follow earlier patterns, then clap on start and end.
30. 01:56:211 (1) - ^
31. 01:56:782 (2) - New combo for consistency
32. 01:58:496 (1) - Claps.
33. 02:00:639 (6) - Try make a 1/8 slider here, ending at 02:01:175 (if you do this, remember to lower the volume here xD)
34. 02:09:354 - Well, I feel it's a bit empty and anti-climatic I guess.
35. 02:12:639 (5) - New combo?
36. 02:13:211 (7) - 1 gridlvl4 to the left.
37. 02:13:497 (8) - ^
38. 02:19:782 (3,7, 9) - Claps.
39. 02:21:211 (1) - Clap on repeat.
40. 02:23:782 (10) - Move 1 gridlvl4 up.
41. 02:23:925 (11) - ^, just down instead.
42. Well, claps in general after the spinner.
43. 02:28:639 (1) - Move the sliderstart to x:136 y:160. Then put the red anchor point at x:168 y:120 and the sliderend at x:216 y:120.
44. 02:31:782 (6) - Line up with 02:31:925 (7)
45. 02:37:782 (1) - The slowdown is a bit sudden and huge. Maybe x0.75? Well, if you're keeping x0.50, then try make the blanketing prettier:
46. 
47. 02:50:211 (4) - Well, it's readable, but the antijump feels weird imo.
48. 02:51:496 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Put all the claps on the sliderstart.
49. 03:03:496 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern feels better imo:
    
50. 03:30:782 (3) - Move the sliderend 4 gridlvl4 up.
51. 03:40:782 (7) - New combo.
52. 03:42:068 (11) - ^
53. 03:57:925 (7) - ^
54. 04:05:496 (4,5,6) - Try make this line a bit more straight.
55. 04:06:925 (1,2,3,4) - Same as earlier
56. Also, copy-paste is ;_;. You should remap and make something cool \o/ Well, if you're keeping the copy-paste, just check my mod for the earlier part.
57. 04:19:496 (3) - New combo here.
58. 04:20:496 (1) - Remove new combo.
59. 04:43:354 (16) - Just me being weird but; replace this with a x0.5 speed slider that ends at 04:43:496? Also, silence the sliderend.

1. 00:27:496 (10) - New combo.
2. 00:38:781 (4,1) - This jump is awkward.
3. 00:42:639 (7) - Remove whistle from sliderend.
4. 00:54:068 (7,1) - These are quite high, and almost touch the HP bar. You should probably move them a tad bit down.
5. 00:56:068 (1) - Weird slowdown. Also, if anything, try make a more interesting shape for this.
6. 00:57:211 - Hitsounds are loud. try 50%
7. 01:06:068 (6) - This slowdown doesn't feel good at all. Just keep it at the same speed, really.
8. 01:12:354 (1,2,3,4) - Please move this somewhere else, so that it's not covered by the spinner-osu.png.
9. 01:24:639 - After the break here you stop using the taiko-hitsounds. consider using them in the same sections as you did earlier.
10. 01:24:639 (1,2,3,4,5) - Follow the vocals like you do later.
11. 01:26:639 (1) - Remove finish.
12. 01:26:925 (2) - Volume 50%
13. 01:32:782 (4) - New combo.
14. 01:34:782 - 01:38:354 - Way too many finishes. Remove some of them Also, put the highest volume at 50%.
15. 01:46:925 (1) - Remove whistle.
16. 01:50:782 - I'd like to see this note mapped, but it's up to you.
17. 01:51:211 (5) - Move 1 gridlvl4 up so it's blanketing at the same distance as 01:51:496 (6).
18. 02:02:925 (1) - Because the curve on this is kinda weird, make it blanket 02:03:354 (2).
19. 02:05:211 (1,3) - Swap where the clap is.
20. 02:08:639 (4) - There is nothing at 02:09:068. If you want this slider, extend it so that the repeat is at 02:09:211. This will make a long-ass slider, but currently, this doesn't play well. You could also put the sliderspeed at x0.75, but that also plays fairly bad, so I don't really recommend it.
21. 02:10:354 (11) - Finish.
22. 02:10:354 - 02:18:354 - Wait, why the random volume decrease? Please increase it a bit.
23. 02:38:068 (1,2,3,1) - Uhm, horizontal flip? You've started in the top-left corner many times now after a spinner, so for some variation.
24. 02:48:587 - Unsnapped green section.
25. 02:51:496 (1,2,3,4) - Idk about you, but I'd like to hear some Normal-hitwhistles here :<
26. 02:53:925 - You should have the first wiggly top/bottom here, so that the sliderball actually feels like it decreases in speed at the right spot, instead of at around 02:53:996.
27. 02:55:496 (3) - Slider should end on 1/3 at 02:55:687 And I suggest making this a repeatslider, removing 02:55:877 (4).
28. 02:56:925 (2) - Repeat this slider?
29. 02:57:425 - Add a note here.
30. 02:58:925 - 03:00:639 - This section should be 1/3:
    
31. 03:00:639 (1) - Why have this note with a bit higher volume ;_;
32. 03:05:211 (1) - Meh, this hook plays a bit weirdly.
33. 03:19:211 (3) - Missed a clap here.
34. 03:19:925 (6) - You're totally not expecting this hook when you're playing. You should probably just make this slider a regular slider imo. Or you could make a mirrored copy of 03:19:354 (4)
35. 03:36:877 (7,8,9) - Nothing wrong, but a slider would probably be better, as it's hard to read this as 1/6.
36. 03:39:354 (4) - Clap.
37. 03:41:639 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,1,1,1,2,3) - Friggin' brilliant.
38. 03:43:639 (6) - Make the sliderstart a clap instead.
39. 03:54:639 (8) - Why these hooks ;_;
40. 03:57:211 (1,2) - Clap?
41. 04:06:925 - Volume is so high in these choruses. Try lowering it a bit.
42. 04:18:211 (10,11) - You don't have these claps on the triples before this. Remove them, and add a whistle on (10) to keep consistency.
43. 04:19:711 (7) - This one is very hard to see, as the note is almost completely hidden by the sliderpath of (6), and since the approach circle is the same color as the sliders (6,8). Try change it a little bit? I know I didn't expect this note.
44. 04:21:782 (1) - Remove new combo.
45. 04:24:996 (6) - Move 1 gridlvl4 to the left.
46. 04:27:068 (9) - Stack with 04:26:639 (7)?
47. 04:29:067 (9) - That random wiggly at the beginning xD It doesn't really have any purpose, but it's not really annoying or anything either, so whatever.
48. 04:30:354 (1) - Remove new combo.
49. 04:30:783 (4) - Remove clap and add whistle on sliderend.
50. 04:31:211 (6) - Remove whistle, add clap.
51. 04:38:211 (8) - Move this slider 1 gridlvl4 up, then move the sliderend 1 gridlvl4 up.
52. 04:39:497 (1) - Remove new combo.
53. 04:42:210 (6) - Same as 03:19:925 (6)
54. 05:02:420 (1) - Whistle on sliderend.
55. 05:08:173 (1) - Make this a triple? 8D Note at 05:08:258 and 05:08:343.

CXu wrote:

Generally, the map feels like it's trying to be hard just for the sake of being hard [...]

CXu wrote:

Derp why so long song.

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I'd prefer that you quote my post and state which changes you make, and which you have not. Thanks~
If you have any problems understanding what the hell I'm talking about, feel free to poke me in-game!

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[General]

1. The 2nd timing section at 04:46:227 has different BPM. Change the bpm to 176 in [Marsh x Phish].

[Marsh x Phish]

1. 00:02:639 (3) - clap done
2. 00:03:068 (5) - clap on sliderend done
3. 00:07:211 (2) - clap done
4. 00:08:639 (2) - ^ done
5. 00:11:068 (8) - Try something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354473 :/ actually it's kinda weird but i added it...
6. 00:28:211 (4) - Move 1 gridlvl3 to the right, then 00:28:782 (5) - 1 gridlvl3 to the left.
7. 00:26:211 (5) - Move this to x:392 y:292 so that (4,5,6,7) looks more triangulary (cool word)
8. 00:31:068 (5) - New combo?
9. 00:32:354 (10) - ^
10. 00:40:354 (7) - Because of the claps on (8), you should remove the clap here imo. (00:42:639 (9) 00:44:925 (7) etc) yes, that's exactly what i thougt when i played it the last time :3 all done
11. 00:40:782 (8) - You have this thing with having a new combo on these sliders later on, so new combo here. yep, done
12. 00:43:068 (10) - ^ done
13. 00:45:354 (8) - ^ done
14. 00:47:211 (7) - Clap done
15. 00:47:496 (8) - Make this a slider to follow the vocal, or a sequence of 1/2 to follow the drums/whatever? ok :0 i tried to set a slider here...
16. 00:49:925 (1) - you have claps earlier and later, so why not here :p i set claps here and i deleted on 00:49:496 (6) - (again the whole part as you said before )
17. 00:57:211 (1,2,3,4) - This sequence of sliders are kinda boring to play. Atleast spread them out somehow. (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354482 This is just one of many possible solutions~)
18. 00:59:496 (1,2,3,4) - ^
19. 01:01:925 (1) & 01:06:354 (1) - So many long spinners so close together ;_; You should atleast map one of the 2 spinners. YES MARSHALL INDEED, GET YOUR FAT ASS UP AND MAP BOTH!
20. 01:06:211 (4) - 1 gridlvl4 to the right.
21. 01:06:354 (1) - If you end the spinner at 01:07:925, you can use a slider to map the long vocal at 01:08:068, or just in general map something \o\
22. 01:08:639 (1,2) - Everything's so straight in this chorus ;_; curve these?
23. 01:26:639 (1,2,3,4,5) - Imo, this part feels better to click if you arrange it like this: i don't know why you think this, i played it 1000 times now and i watched it on 25% and 50% for like 23453456345 times, and i think i don't change this :p
    
24. 01:32:782 (9,10,11) - Increase the volume here aye
25. 01:35:925 (9,11) - Clap on sliderend.
26. 01:35:925 (9) - New combo.
27. 01:38:354 (1) - God this is long ;_;
28. 01:42:496 - 01:42:925 - Make a 1/2 stack or something here.
29. 01:53:925 (1) - If you want to follow earlier patterns, then clap on start and end.
30. 01:56:211 (1) - ^
31. 01:56:782 (2) - New combo for consistency
32. 01:58:496 (1) - Claps.
33. 02:00:639 (6) - Try make a 1/8 slider here, ending at 02:01:175 (if you do this, remember to lower the volume here xD)
34. 02:09:354 - Well, I feel it's a bit empty and anti-climatic I guess. k, i added some circles there
35. 02:12:639 (5) - New combo? done
36. 02:13:211 (7) - 1 gridlvl4 to the left. o.o done
37. 02:13:497 (8) - ^ done
38. 02:19:782 (3,7, 9) - Claps.
39. 02:21:211 (1) - Clap on repeat.
40. 02:23:782 (10) - Move 1 gridlvl4 up.
41. 02:23:925 (11) - ^, just down instead.
42. Well, claps in general after the spinner.
43. 02:28:639 (1) - Move the sliderstart to x:136 y:160. Then put the red anchor point at x:168 y:120 and the sliderend at x:216 y:120.
44. 02:31:782 (6) - Line up with 02:31:925 (7)
45. 02:37:782 (1) - The slowdown is a bit sudden and huge. Maybe x0.75? Well, if you're keeping x0.50, then try make the blanketing prettier:
46. 
47. 02:50:211 (4) - Well, it's readable, but the antijump feels weird imo. i had that in recent mods, but i won't change that >:c you say it's readable, so it will be ok <3 (and i don't know how to change this, it would look awful, lol...)
48. 02:51:496 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Put all the claps on the sliderstart. yessir
49. 03:03:496 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern feels better imo:
    
50. 03:30:782 (3) - Move the sliderend 4 gridlvl4 up.
51. 03:40:782 (7) - New combo.
52. 03:42:068 (11) - ^
53. 03:57:925 (7) - ^
54. 04:05:496 (4,5,6) - Try make this line a bit more straight. i used a ruler now
55. 04:06:925 (1,2,3,4) - Same as earlier
56. Also, copy-paste is ;_;. You should remap and make something cool \o/ Well, if you're keeping the copy-paste, just check my mod for the earlier part.
57. 04:19:496 (3) - New combo here.
58. 04:20:496 (1) - Remove new combo.
59. 04:43:354 (16) - Just me being weird but; replace this with a x0.5 speed slider that ends at 04:43:496? Also, silence the sliderend. done

Well, a few parts are a bit... empty? I guess, and I would love to see those parts mapped. And Marshall's chorus should be worked a bit more on imo. Well, in general, the map is fun, and lolfml 2x100. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354505

• marshall
  Phish
  both

Jenny wrote:

BinJip vs Jenny x Winber vs Xakyrie

Jenny wrote:

You might want to add Jun Maeda to tags since he's the composer of the instrumental in this song (not sure if just for piano or in general but he's definitely in).

IRC:

• marshall
  Phish
  both

IRC

15:01 <Jenny> : in deinem 1. part is mir das a) zu vocal-gebunden (und dadurch langsamer als phish's anfang) und b) zu sparsames hitsounding
15:01 <Jenny> : probier paar katpatterns
15:02 <marshall_racer> : kkdkkkkkkkkkdkkdkdkdkdkdkddkkdkdkdDEINFASDKFHASDKLAS
15:02 <marshall_racer> : ich mag hitsounding nicht
15:02 <marshall_racer> : da komm ich immer zu schnell durcheinnander
15:02 <marshall_racer> : ICH WEIß wie's funktionfduawehghfajklwfhaljk
15:03 <Jenny> : 00:28:782 (5) - der reverse-arrow liegt nich genau auf 2, mach gridsnap aus für die sliderpunkte
15:04 <Jenny> : 00:32:354 (6) - NC
15:04 <Jenny> : 00:32:639 (7) - der sliderpunkte sollte weiter links und weiter oben liegen damit man erst nen leichten auf- und dann nen stärkeren
15:04 <Jenny> : abschwung hat
15:04 <Jenny> : 00:33:068 (8) - hier das ende etwas hochziehen damit man wieder aufschwung kriegt
15:05 <Jenny> : 00:34:354 (1) - bis zum großen weißen verlängern, finish drauf
15:07 <Jenny> : achja und magst du phish nochmal anpoken dass das SB bitte mehr aufm takt blinkt und bitte nur jeden 2/1
15:07 <Jenny> : und außerhalb der kiai-times etwas dezenter bitte öhm die Dinger sind doch schon auf 2/1? wie gut das ich mich mit Takten so gut auskenn... ich kann nur das offset und die stellen im lied in den Editor kopieren und dann sehn wie toll das aussieht <3 ich hab einfach jetzt bei eurer Diff die Strobes von 1.5 auf 1.2 verkleinert, ich finde zwar das sieht jetzt lahm aus, aber das is das einzige was ich für dich tun kann. wenn ich jetzt die strobes nochmal differenziere (schreibt man das so?) von normalen stellen und kiai time, dann müsste ich nochmal komplett neue Blöcke schreiben und alles neu loopen und die neuen offsets raussuchen, und jetzt wo ich gar nich mehr im SB'n drinbin hab ich da ehrlich gesagt gar kein bock zu :p wenn dir das SB jetzt GAAR nich gefällt können wirs ja löschen und du suchst für eure Map jemanden ders so macht wie du dirs vorstellst <3 UND: es blinkt aufn takt o___O schaus dir bitte auf 25% an... ich kann das nich einfach so machen das es offbeat blinken würde :0 steht ja im Editor mit den loops.. schau da mal rein xD das kann gar nich sein das das NICHT aufm Takt blinkt.
15:08 <Jenny> : 01:35:496 - NC
15:08 <Jenny> : *ich mach hier nu kein hitsounding weil ich erstmal nen eigenen rework von euch da sehen wollen würde, dann kann ich da nochmal dran
15:08 <Jenny> : rumfeilen
15:09 <Jenny> : kannst ja meine und winber's diff angucken für ein bisschen idee o3o
15:09 <Jenny> : 01:55:925 (8) - add note
15:09 <Jenny> : und ihr könntet eure combofarben vlt. auf jeweils 3 ändern und etwas mehr farbliche abwechslung in die einzelnen parts bringen ich finde das es sehr schön aussieht so wies ist.
15:09 <Jenny> : weil deine sind einfach blau
15:10 <Jenny> : und phish's grün
15:10 <Jenny> : das is langweilig o3o
15:10 <Jenny> : watweißich noch nen beigeton und nen braun oder so
15:10 <Jenny> : 02:37:782 (1,3) - bitte um die mitte als blanket legen
15:11 <Jenny> : (also auf den approachcircle von 2 ausrichten)
15:11 <Jenny> : 02:51:496 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - die stelle is ja so viel gemeiner als der rest o_o
15:11 <Jenny> : Phish hat wieder seinen sadistischen die Leute die ich testen lassen hab, ham aber ganz wo anders die 100er gemacht... und das ausgerechnet du die Stelle schwer findest o3o
15:11 <Jenny> : und die pause danach passt nich die passt säähr nice >w< ist sowieso die einzigste Pause von der langen Map, die bleibt wo sie is.
15:12 <Jenny> : 03:05:211 (1) - whistle oder finish
15:12 <Jenny> : 03:20:854 (10,11,12,13,14) - 1/4 auf einfach nur hitnormal klingt mit taikosounds in standard mistig joar das stimmt... hab mal versucht whistles reinzumachen ;_; wenn sich noch jemand drüber beschweren sollte werd ich die stelle wahrsch. ganz umbaun...
15:13 <Jenny> : 03:34:925 (1,2) - die sind mir zu nah annander
15:14 <Jenny> : *ja ich sag hier erstmal nur das was mir direkt auffällt und was ich bitte doch raushaben möchte o.o
15:14 <Jenny> : *bzw. anders
15:14 <Jenny> : und das ende könntest du auch noch "mappen"
15:15 <Jenny> : oder zumindest nen SB-element an's ende legen damit's nich immer abgebrochen wird und man es noch zuende gucken kann abgesehn davon das sowieso jeder das Ende mit space überspringen würde... aber ich überleg mir vlt. irgendein schlechtes "thx for playing" reinzubaun wenn ich mal das karma dazu hab
15:21 <marshall_racer> : so
15:21 <marshall_racer> : was zu Phish gehört sagst du ihm bitte selber
15:21 <marshall_racer> : ich hab einiges übernommen
15:21 <Jenny> : ich bitte um variierendes hitsounding o3o
15:21 <Jenny> : mit viel fantasie
15:21 <Jenny> : ooooder sampleset-switches wie bei mir und winber (jeweils 1 taiko-part)
15:22 <marshall_racer> : .i.
15:22 <Jenny> : das ganze don-gedonner (pun intended) is zu monoton
15:22 <Jenny> : und geht zu lasten des songs
15:22 <Jenny> : :< don don don don don don don ... ich werd nich alles nochmal überarbeiten mit den hitsounds, geschweige denn inhert sections reinzubasteln und dann die normal sets zu benutzen. ich nehm gern vorschläge fürs hitsounding in den mods an, so wies cXU gemacht hat, aber so ein "überarbeite mal bitte schnell deine ganze map" find ich persönlich ja ziemlich unproduktiv

Also, @CXu: As you can see from the new update, I applied stuffs.

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

Okay..

[Marsh x Phish]
00:25:211 (1) - Schieb den ein wenig von 00:24:211 (5), da sich beide berühren.
01:03:782 (1) - Der NC ist unnötig, selbst wenn es die lange Kombo davor stoppt.
01:47:068 (7) - Der Mittelteil passt, meiner Meinung nach, nicht hin. Bei 01:47:068 und bei 01:47:354 ist es angebracht.
02:10:068 - Da fehlt mir irgendwas.. :s nope das kam schon in vorhergehenden mods vor, da änder ich nix mehr
04:26:925 (8) - Vielleicht den Endpoint auf den Anfang von 04:26:211 (6) aufstacken? nein, der 6er is mit der approach rate eh schon lang weg, ausserdem finde ich das pattern sehr schön so wie es ist
04:43:354/04:43:496 - Sollte da nicht auch was sein? So gesehen endet die Musik erst ab 04:43:496. is marsh's entscheidung ob er da jetz noch was reinmappt oder nich.. mir persönlich gefällts so :3

Tshemmp wrote:

...

Tut mir Leid, dass es so ewig gedauert hat, ich konnte mich einfach nicht zum Modden aufraffen...

[Marsh x Phish]
Da Pish jetzt Dick heißt, muss diese Diff entsprechend umbenannt werden. Und das SB muss auch geupdatet werden.
marshall_racer:
00:22:711 - hier würde ein Circle gut passen (irgendwie erwarte ich hier auch einen)
00:28:782 (5) - ctrl+r? Dann ist das Spacing zum nächste Circle besser.
01:00:782 und 01:01:068 - fühlt sich zu leer an, der lange Ton hält immer noch an aber anstatt weiter durch zumappen machst du jetzt diese Mini-Breaks (die Musik ändert sich nicht, die Map aber schon --> nicht so gut)
01:43:782 - wieder Leere. Sowas nimmt den Flow raus.
01:46:068 - ^
01:48:354 - ^
03:40:354 (6) - +1 repeat? Das füllt wieder eine dieser Lücken.
04:08:211 bis 04:10:782 - hier kommen schon wieder so viele Lücken. Man könnte zum Beispiel auch lange Slider benutzen, um sie zu überbrücken.
Dein Teil fühlt sich generell an einigen Stellen ziemlich leer an, das killt wie gesagt den Flow für mich. Man muss nicht mal alle Lücken füllen, schlimm ist vor allem, wenn es so viele sind.