iMercurial wrote:

What the hell are you talking about? The iNiS style is awesome.

Keep going, Jacob, this is for Larto :3

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180,80,45173,1,4
172,272,45932,6,0,B|181:313|145:355|106:353,2,120,2|8|2
264,244,47071,1,2
356,272,47451,2,0,B|346:313|382:355|421:353,2,120,2|8|2

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• I'm not approving AR5 for a Normal diff, but meh, is your map.
  00:28:084 (2) Why not parallel sliders? http://puu.sh/DVJ5
  00:42:894 (1,2,3,4) Maybe center this pattern? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/353907
  00:52:008 - This break could start where the rhythm change is http://puu.sh/DVUt
  01:15:173 (2) Same as 00:28:084.
  01:31:502 (1,2,3) Center this pattern http://puu.sh/DVW0
  02:10:995 (1,2,3) ^

• 00:26:945 (4) Seriously Touching HP-Bar http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/353917
  01:07:578 (2,3) Intentional Spacing? http://puu.sh/DW1s
  01:12:514 (4) Touching HP-Bar

iMercurial wrote:

Larto ♥


Normal

• I'm not approving AR5 for a Normal diff, but meh, is your map. It fits considering the high SV normal difficulty.
  00:28:084 (2) Why not parallel sliders? http://puu.sh/DVJ5 The reverse of (2) blankets (4).
  00:42:894 (1,2,3,4) Maybe center this pattern? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/353907 This really doesn't matter.
  00:52:008 - This break could start where the rhythm change is http://puu.sh/DVUt It already does?
  01:15:173 (2) Same as 00:28:084. Same thing.
  01:31:502 (1,2,3) Center this pattern http://puu.sh/DVW0 Barely makes a difference. How do you even notice this?
  02:10:995 (1,2,3) ^ d00d

Hard

• 00:26:945 (4) Seriously Touching HP-Bar http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/353917 So many people have suggested this. 1. It's meant to blanket the previous note. 2. This is a hard difficulty, HP bar notes isn't that bad.
  01:07:578 (2,3) Intentional Spacing? http://puu.sh/DW1s Yep!
  01:12:514 (4) Touching HP-Bar Same response.

Yeah ♥

Sexy Marinalicious.

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SuperMICrophone wrote:

Yaaaaay! Request just to mod Easy. If you don't take much from it, no kds~

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[Easy]

Although I'm perfectly fine with this copypaste style, consider varying sliders a bit? I feel like you overused those birdy sliders. :[

00:27:325 (1) - Grid snap in a down-right sort of way and then move up one grid. Yep.
00:31:122 (1) - I think you'll have to turn off grid-snap for this one... looks a bit messy imo. Not to me.
00:33:780 (1) - Consider clap or whistle? Still sounds fine if left blank... I guess. Whistle.
01:12:894 (1) - Same as 00:27:325
01:16:691 (1) - Same as 00:31:122
01:19:350 (1) - Same as 00:33:780
01:42:135 (2,3,4) - I was going to suggest polarity rules because that's what I thought, but according to Charles 3/2 is okay. I almost tripped in this part during my playthrough, might wanna consider some slider stuff. But I guess this is fine as is, dunno how far readability issues go. I'm not seeing how you messed up here, but I'll fix something.
01:45:932 (3,1) - I recommend adding a repeat to three and moving (1) ahead 2 ticks. (Then shortening it by 2 ticks.) This stresses the "faaaaaaaaaaan" part more. I'd recommend a Finish on the end of three if you do use my suggestion. I think that I'm gonna keep it the way that I did it in the other difficulties. Not really much of a big deal.
02:23:147 (1) - Looks a bit messy this here blanket. If you care for some slider Nazi on the slider as well... You should re-grid snap the entire slider, make it rotationally symmetrical, and play with the ends a bit so the blanket... blankets a bit better. As of now, the anchor isn't right there in the centre. Fixed for the most part.

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384,148,143147,6,0,B|335:135|319:87|319:87|306:43|259:26,1,180,4|2

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Welp, there's my short mod. Good luck with rank!

Jacob's Signature wrote:

• • The ranked's Marina & The Diamonds map doesn't have the "The" capitalised ("Marina & The Diamonds "), so you should to have fix this thing

Derekku wrote:

Yummy. brb modding

[General]
*I agree that the artist should use an uncapitalized "the". Like you said, the website and Wikipedia both use lowercase, and so do many other places on the internet. Thus, there's no need to change anything.
*I expected the lilac/purple-colored combo color to be a deeper purple like in the background. What do you think? Added a purple.
*I wish "MARINA AND THE DIAMONDS" in the background was down lower (since it gets covered by the HP bar and letterboxing), but I guess we can't really fix that. :p
*Would you like any colors for the title text? I was thinking of purple or pink for at least the title, but I suppose that purple might blend in too much with the artist block at the top left. Purple and pink at the first break, please.

[Easy]
*Difficulty settings seem a bit high for an Easy, but that may just be because most Easies use very low settings! :p I'd suggest dropping both AR and Drain one tick each, though! I'm keeping the AR due to the fast paced nature of the song.
02:30:742 (3) - ends in a whistle in normal/hard Fixeeeeed

[Normal]
00:33:780 (1) - this is a whistle in the other diffs yerp

[Hard]
01:12:514 (4) - would it be possible to move this down a bit? it's probably already been mentioned, but it goes under the HP bar. A few other sliders in the map touch it, but this one is the worst. So many people have suggested this. I'm not changing because the slider follows an obvious path. It's pretty hard to miss.

And that's it! Great mapset; I can't wait to rank it!

LKs wrote:

I took 5-day-long time to clear requests before yours. Seems I'm late.

This map has obvious western-mapping style. Decent arrangement, clear hitsound, which provides a uninhibited and chic experience. But still there are some patterns that could be placed/set better. I can give you a list of cosmetic suggestions if you want.