SOOOO JESSEEEE
i was thinking about modding your map in german >:D but no.
and btw, my english is terrible, but you know that already <333 bff
General> Your .mp3 has a bitrate of 320, maximum is 192. after changing that your offset will be probably fucked up.
> Background Image is missing, remember, max. 1024 x 768
[Insane]
> use a bigger circle size or i kill you
> you should'nt mod with this big grid rly. try small instead of medium! Spacing is always strange with those big grids...
> overlapping is a big problem in your map :/
> i also dont like the overall hitsounding, you spammed too much claps or finishes in some parts. You could try to follow a rythym with the claps, like on every second white tick.. something simple but something what feels more like hitsounding and not spamming. i also saw that you use JUST claps or JUST finishes... :/ why not both?
00:06:693 - add note here
00:07:256 (3,4) - the slider should start on 3. if you start slider on red ticks they feel awkward to play (in most cases) and don't rly fit to the rythym.
00:09:318 (1) - delete this note? listen to the music..
00:09:506 (2,4) - overlapping! with your slow approach rate its ugly to play such patterns, always test your maps with the standard osu skin, then you will see how this fucking big "300" nearly covers the whole slider
00:11:006 (6,7,8,9) - this does'nt fit to the music, and there is this red slider tick slider again who feels really strange... i suggest to use a single slider on 00:11:006 (6) - and to put a reverse arrow on this one. try it please
00:15:318 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i see many overlapping here, try to spread it out so there is no overlapping anymore...
00:38:756 (10,1) - overlappinngggg
01:39:318 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - with your slow AR i think this is kinda... distracting..
02:02:006 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - i dont like how the sliders are placed in the previous circles, maybe put them more to the side
02:41:006 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i overally like the hitsounding in this part, but you could delete some finishes on the end of the sliders, would sound better.
- from now on i like the hitsounding more! but the irregularly claps in the first half of the map feels strange -
03:30:131 (7) - stack with the end of (5) ?
03:32:756 (7) - stack the end of this slider with the end of 03:32:006 (5) - ? this is the overlapping again :/ its just weird, i cant see the sliderend cause the big 300 covers it.
03:36:506 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - all sliders overlap with themselfes, spread them out with a bigger spacing please
04:08:756 (12) - NC
04:35:099 (6) - bish pls srsly every single reverse arrow a finish? oh boi
04:47:006 (4) - ^
i kinda like your map, especially the second part, somehow the song is breathtaking and the long sliders are fitting very well. it was even more epic when you mirrored the sliders.
But i hope you know that this is some kind of "exceptionally" map, so it will be hard work for you. some people like this mapping style, and even more not
i wish you good luck and i hope everything i wrote is understandable (i got a B in English, how the fck is this possible?)
BFF :*