Bass wrote:

[Hard]

1. 01:07:864 (6) - slider kinda feels weird, how about this ? Done
2. 02:44:432 (9) - I'd remove this note, if this note is here, then it's 1/4 rhythm and then 1/3 and it might cause confusion while playing Done

Mapset is nicely done but I agree with Reiji. There is too much 1/4s in Hard and feels kinda overmapped. I don't think so =/

Raging Bull wrote:

Hiya from #modreqs.

Everything I say is a suggestion unless I mention it in red or so. And if you disagree with a mod, please explain why instead of a "no"

Easy:
00:29:302 (4) - NC Here? It seems the best because it would make your NC pattern consistent since you're NCing after every 4/1. Done
01:23:550 (3) - Consider removing one repeat from this slider. I think it would play better since you can click a note as the chorus ends. Plus you can also NC the note afterwards because the slider ends where an NC should be. I prefer it my way
02:00:805 (4) - NC here to keep it consistent with 00:58:060 (1) - ? Done
02:26:295 (3) - Same idea as 01:23:550 (3) - Remove that repeat and add a note to replace it and NC it. I think it would play better since clicking on a downbeat is boss. Same answer as 01:23:550 (3) -
04:07:929 (3,4) - Perhaps change it to http://puu.sh/yF0S ? The slider ends on where an NC should be and seeing as your NC pattern is nearly the same throughout the entire song, it would be a shame to see this combo ruin it. I think that shortening 3 by 1/2 and adding a note to replace it would be better and plays better since it follows vocals better. Sorry, but imo it fits this way, and a "combo ruin" is not the worst thing on earth
04:41:589 (3) - Same as 01:23:550 (3) - ? Same as 01:23:550 (3) -

Normal:
00:29:302 (6) - NC here to keep it consistent with 00:39:759 (1) - Done
00:44:988 (4) - NC here for consistency? Done
00:54:792 (4) - Remove repeat and replace it with a note instead? I usually feel like a click for downbeat would be a lot better than a slider ending there. If you do follow this, NC here and remove NC at 00:56:099 (1) - Diaggree here
00:58:060 (5) - Remove NC for consistency? Done
01:23:550 (4) - Remove repeat and replace with note + NC? Same as in easy
[spoilerbox=NCing mod here since it looks little weird]
01:37:276 (3) - NC Done
01:38:583 (1) - Remove NC Done
01:39:890 (6,1) - Swap NC Done
01:42:504 (4) - NC Done[/spoilerbox]
01:47:406 (5) - Replace this slider with 2 1/1 notes and NC the downbeat? Avoid ruining NC pattern that you have. Diaggree
01:57:537 (1) - Change this to 1 1/2 slider and add a note at the downbeat with NC? Same reason as above. Same answer as above
02:00:805 (5) - NC? Done
02:14:204 (2) - Perhaps shorten this to 1/2 slider and make a 1/1 slider at 02:14:857 (3) - then add a note at 02:15:838 (4) - ? I think it follows the vocals better than what you have. http://puu.sh/yFaG Disaggree
02:26:295 (4) - Same as 00:54:792 (4) - ? Same as 00:54:792 (4)
The ending NC seems alright to me since you changed it and it was quite consistent at the end with your new NC pattern.

Hard:
00:58:713 (1) - I think replacing the spinner with some hitcircles/sliders would be better. I don't feel like spinning feels good here since there are few things you can follow here that you can clearly hear. Yeah, but that rhythm is kinda strange, and I prefer a spinner
02:01:459 (1) - ^ ^
02:46:774 (6) - Perhaps silence that tick? Seeing as how this specific part is a 1/3 the tick sounds rather awkward. I can hear the "t" of "last name" here, so no

Lizbeth wrote:

Hellow~

[Hard]
When the black combo color circles are on top of the hat, the approach circle blends with it, switch combo colors in those parts to avoid this. I lightened the black a bit, I hope this solves the problem as well
02:44:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not sure about this, threw me off while playing. I think you should use 1/8, something like this: http://puu.sh/z1EN Changed
03:50:609 - 04:01:066 - why not add another break here? I disaggree on this. There are already two breaks, and even if it's a long song I think they are enough
[Normal]
Same about the black combo color and the break I mentioned on hard. Same answers

[Easy]
Same about the black combo color and the break I mentioned on hard. Same answers
And I didn't like notes half beat apart, Would be perfect if you avoid it in the easy diff ~ I think with only 1/1 notes this song would be very, very monotonous, and additional it's almost 5 minutes long. THis should be okay.

Really nice mapset btw

1. Have you thought about using a custom hit sound (maybe just use hitnormal) to emphasize the drum sound?

1. +1 Approach Rate?

1. This is overmapped imo. Lots of 1/4 notes that don't follow anything. Some examples: 00:21:949 (2) - and 00:22:602 (4) - and 00:24:563 (2) - etc etc all throughout the map. All those 1/4 notes really inflate the score; I'd recommend cutting them but you'd have to rethink your patterns / mapping. Maybe the other MATs disagree?

Shulin wrote:

[General]

1. Have you thought about using a custom hit sound (maybe just use hitnormal) to emphasize the drum sound? No, I haven't, because I don't like normal-hitsounds.

[Easy]

00:17:864 (1) - Extend to 00:20:805 - ? Disaggree, because then the space to the next note would be too short.
00:55:445 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe arrange these into a triangle pattern? The end of 00:54:138 (3) - and 00:55:445 (1,2) - build a triangle, and 00:56:099 (2,3,4) - do the same. I think there are enough triangles in this 5 combos.
01:23:550 (3) - This looks better if it's straight vertically imo. Changed
01:43:158 (2,3) - Align these vertically? Done
03:20:870 (2) - Make this horizontally straight and then align 03:19:236 (1) - and 03:21:851 (1) - will look neater. Done
03:42:766 (1) - Align this with 03:42:766 (1) - ? Disaggree
03:59:106 (2,3) - Align these vertically. Looks ugly in game. Done

[Normal]

1. +1 Approach Rate? Disaggree

00:17:864 (1) - Extend to 00:20:805 - ? Same as in Easy
01:02:635 - Note? It seems strange to ignore the vocal here. This isn't easy so the gap between spinner and notes have to be this big. Done
01:02:962 - ^ ^
02:05:380 - ^ ^
02:05:707 - ^ ^
02:53:093 (1) - Move it down some to make it align with 02:52:439 (5) - much neater. Done
03:03:550 (1) - Move it up some to make it align with 03:02:896 (3) - Done

[Hard]

1. This is overmapped imo. Lots of 1/4 notes that don't follow anything. Some examples: 00:21:949 (2) - and 00:22:602 (4) - and 00:24:563 (2) - etc etc all throughout the map. All those 1/4 notes really inflate the score; I'd recommend cutting them but you'd have to rethink your patterns / mapping. Maybe the other MATs disagree? We'll see

01:47:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This sounds really strange, it sounds like you're trying to follow the vocal but it doesn't really work. Maybe follow instruments here instead? I'll keep it for now.

Apart from this I have nothing else to add, good luck!

1. I agree with the modders above about the overmap. Some of the 1/4 notes in this diff doesn't fit with the song. It's better if you just follow the vocal or the drum rather then using 1/4 notes that doesn't justifies anything in the song. For example in 00:21:459 (1,2,3,4,5,6) if you remove the 1/4 the rhythm will follow the vocal (even though it'll be a simple 1/2 beats note). Try to use jumps instead to give challenge for the diff, 01:02:635 is one of the good places for jump imo and it'll give a good built in for the kiai too
2. 01:07:864 (6,7,8) - These notes doesn't sound very fit with the song as there aren't many beat in the current place of the music that correspondence well with all those objects. I suggest to follow the vocal all together, something like this one below
   
3. 01:10:478 (3,4,5,6,7) - Almost the same as above. For this one rather than using circle for the 1/4 note, maybe try using slider instead, kinda like this
   
4. 01:35:151 (2) - Another one of unnecessary offbeat. If you're trying to follow the vocal, it's supposed to be on 01:35:206 which is a 1/6 beat. Because it doesn't follow anything just remove the note
5. 03:06:164 (1,2,3) - Same as 01:07:864 (6,7,8) changing 2 into a 1/2 beat long slider works too, you can also add jump to spice things up
6. 03:16:622 (1,2) -This will sound better if you use a single 1/2 beat long slider rather than 1/4 slider repeat for 1 & 2
7. 03:26:426 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as 01:07:864 (6,7,8), for this one I suggest something like this
   

paseli wrote:

From modding queue~ (2 Jahre schon, wow. Das sieht man selten^^)

[Normal]
00:13:615 (1,2,3) - this sounds weird if you don't put a4th slider at 00:17:864 - to 00:18:844 - . I have this spinner at that part in all diffs. I think it works fine =/
01:47:406 (5,1) - the offbeat slider really don't feel good here, try to go with circle-slider-slider instead I will Keep it for now, if mentioned again, Change will come


[Hard]
This should be hard+ with all the sudden jumps in here. Then you haven't seen my newest [Hard] xD

00:15:249 (1,2) - chromosome pattern ftw :3
00:35:184 (2,3) - really sharp flow here, maybe put slider 3 up a bit Kept it
00:45:478 (2,3,4) - this sounds really strange, i dunno. i would make slider 3 end on blue tick It's mapped on like every Sound that appears there, and well, for now Keep it.
01:58:517 (1,2,3,4,5) - pretty sharp stream, make it flatter maybe I don't think it's sharp
02:17:145 (3) - could improve blanket here, but this is Preference Keep it
02:40:511 (5) - set at x:352 y:72 for better dropoff flow maybe Changed

These are some really nice beatmaps, i rarely see someone mapping low bpm songs that good. Keep your work up mate! I will, don't worry :3

Greetings,
paseli

TrigonometrY wrote:

Hello from my queue!

[Hard]
Overmapped parts (you can check them in any Audio Editor):
00:02:831 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/be4MW/0bda12229f.png
00:08:060 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/be4YR/eb921b5336.png
00:13:289 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/be53L/8111cfe784.png In all three cases there is a Sound on the yellow tick (1/8) afterwards, but I don't want to use 1/8 here, and I think this triplets still Plays fine, because on 100% Speed you can't figure out the Sound is really a bit leater.
00:44:172 (6) - http://puu.sh/be5xN/7589dc07d1.jpg The "Mo-" from Money stops here, so I don't think this note is too much.
01:02:798 (2) - http://puu.sh/be5I7/6fdc22d084.png There may not be a Sound in here, but this note still gives the "intro" of the Kiai a bit more than 2 1/2 notes. In my ears both sounds good, so I will Keep it.
01:35:151 (3) - quiet and nothing else. Same like at the start, here it is the "My".
02:00:315 (9) - ^ Again it fits with the voice. Since People Play this map on 100% Speed, this note fits
02:57:831 - ^ replace it with 1/2 slider Same like 1:02:798 -
03:14:498 (2) - remove it
03:27:570 (2) - ^
03:45:870 (2) - ^ These three notes don't bother me at all, since they give a nice ongoing in the map and create their own rhythm which fits the song. No changes

1/4 to 1/6:
01:10:968 (2) - I'm pretty sure it follows 1/6 rhythm, not 1/4. Move circle to 01:11:023 - and listen carefully
01:13:256 (2) - same here. Blue tick is empty, her vocal matches 1/6 01:13:201 -
since 1/6 might confuse player, I suggest to remove that circle.
01:14:236 (2) - ^
02:05:544 (2) - ^
02:16:001 (2) - 02:16:981 (2) - ^ To all above: As 1/6 may be to complicated to Play or even recognize here, I won't Change it on the timeline, nor will I remove those notes. Same reason as in the "overmapped" section - last mentioned Points.
02:38:060 (2,3) - it should be like 1/3 or 1/2 (if you don't want to skip piano), not 1/4 (again, blue ticks are empty): http://puu.sh/beaoM/139e615208.jpg or http://puu.sh/beaqX/0649e8fde5.jpg
03:19:727 (2) - move to 03:19:672 - or delete
03:38:027 (2) - 03:38:681 (4) - ^ Actually, there is 1/3 vocal, so my suggestion: http://puu.sh/bebgb/11ce5d1789.jpg
03:40:642 (2) - http://puu.sh/bebDI/2d9202f76e.jpg
03:43:256 (2) - to 03:43:201 -
03:48:485 (2) - to 03:48:539 -
03:48:648 (3,4) - it's 1/3: http://puu.sh/bebTo/d9f5748c43.jpg
04:27:047 (2) - to 04:27:101 -
Check carefully all such stuff - I could be mistaken or miss something. All the changes from 1/4 to 1/6 seem reasonable in the way, that the vocals really appear there, but while playing, Player woulnd't recognize the different snapping and just 100 such cases. Additionally, the 1/4 rhythms don't Play bad and are intuitive, so I will Keep them. Sorry.

Other:
01:46:426 (3,4) - fix blanket: http://puu.sh/be9BK/e6dd38439b.jpg Done
01:45:445 - 01:50:674 - don't skip beats and put circles maybe? I didn't add here circles to emphatise the vocals - no changes
01:51:001 (1) - what about to make accent on 1/3 vocal? http://puu.sh/be9OW/6f3c28002c.jpg Prefer it the way it is
02:47:864 - aww, favourite part of song :3
03:08:779 - I like how you used claps there!

[Normal]
00:13:615 (1,2,3) - what do you think about changing the flow after each slider? AS for me, it fits vocal nicely: http://puu.sh/bedsR/1446dd81ac.jpg http://puu.sh/bedtP/5d4594880f.jpg Done
00:31:916 (1,2,3) - make it more symmetrical: 00:32:570 (2) - move to 112;120, 00:33:223 (3) - to 220;152 Done
00:42:374 (1) - 00:43:681 (3) - old-style sliders (yeah, just noticed them)
I looked through diff and want to say that it reminds me old-style mapping. I saw your Hard before and after remapping, so now Hard looks smoothly and nattily. I suggest to remap at least such part like 01:42:504 (1,2,3,4) - 01:47:406 (5,1,2,3) - 01:51:981 (3,1,2,3) - objects are placed disorderly, randomly.
Changed them
Easy is good for me.

I'm really glad you have mapped this song, I love it since childhood
Take one more star and rank this map please!