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Kagamine Rin - Hiifuumiiyo

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Smoothie
558 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Smoothie
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sonntag, 03. Juni 2012 at 13:37:08

Artist: Kagamine Rin
Title: Hiifuumiiyo
Source: njPeperon
Tags: VOCALOID
BPM: 179
Filesize: 9136kb
Play Time: 04:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Rin (4,9 stars, 838 notes)
Download: Kagamine Rin - Hiifuumiiyo
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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~for approval~ (needs to be modded)
Last edited by Smoothie , edited 3 times in total.
Lidan
268 posts
Joined February 2011
Lidan
Hey~

[General]
  1. bg.png & Pulse.png are the same. Delete Pulse.png and use bg.png instead in the storyboard?
  2. Maybe use less combo colours? 7 combo colours are a bit much imo.

[Timing]
  1. 03:17:094 - Unsnapped timing point, move to 03:17:089

[Rin]
  1. You should use other combo colours at the part with the red bg. Red on red makes it pretty hard to read :s
  2. 00:14:910 (11) - New combo
  3. 00:15:916 (1) - Remove new combo
  4. 00:16:251 (2) - New combo
  5. 00:18:933 (6) - ^
  6. 00:20:106 (6) - ^
  7. 00:24:296 (6) - ^
  8. 00:25:637 (6) - ^
  9. 00:26:642 (1) - Remove new combo
  10. 00:26:977 (2) - New combo
  11. 00:29:659 (6) - ^
  12. 00:49:268 (1) - Remove that red point? The slider looks a bit cramped :s
  13. 01:09:882 (11) - New combo
  14. 01:20:273 (10) - ^
  15. 01:21:614 (1) - Remove new combo
  16. 01:21:949 (2) - New combo
  17. 01:25:637 (10) - ^
  18. 01:26:307 (1) - Remove new combo.
  19. 01:29:994 (6) - New combo
  20. 01:31:335 (6) - ^
  21. 01:32:340 (1) - Remove new combo
  22. 01:32:676 (2) - New combo
  23. 01:35:357 (6) - ^
  24. 01:36:363 (5) - ^
  25. 01:36:363 (10) - ^
  26. 01:40:720 (6) - ^
  27. 01:42:061 (11) - ^
  28. 01:43:067 (1) - Remove new combo
  29. 01:43:402 (5) - New combo
  30. 01:46:083 (6) - ^
  31. 01:48:765 (5) - New combo?
  32. 01:54:799 (8) - Remove? Sounds better imo.
  33. 02:02:508 (6) - New combo
  34. 02:20:609 (10) - ^
  35. 02:25:972 (10) - ^
  36. 02:49:268 (4) - Change to something else? Looks so cramped :s
  37. 02:50:273 (6) - New combo
  38. 02:52:955 (3) - Add clap on end?
  39. 02:53:458 (4) - Add clap?
  40. 02:55:804 - That SV change here feels weird, the song doesn't really get faster, Rin just starts singing.
  41. 02:58:486 (4) - New combo
  42. 02:59:994 (1) - Remove new combo
  43. 03:01:000 (1) - New combo
  44. 03:22:452 (4) - Change to this? Suits it better imo.
    SPOILER
  45. 03:23:793 (4) - Same as above, just copy it and then flip it horizontally.
  46. 03:25:804 (5) - New combo
  47. 03:33:011 (10) - ^
  48. 03:34:352 (1) - Remove new combo
  49. 03:34:687 (2) - New combo
  50. 03:43:737 (10) - ^
  51. 03:46:754 (1,4) - Not sure about those sliders, I would recommend you to change them, don't really fit with the song and if I'm not mistaken they are unrankable.

That's all~
Nice map actually, the combo's felt a bit random though.
Good luck :)
Smoothie
558 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Smoothie

L i d a N wrote:

Hey~

[General]
  1. bg.png & Pulse.png are the same. Delete Pulse.png and use bg.png instead in the storyboard? i know... but for a weird reason the bg turns to black when i do that D:
  2. Maybe use less combo colours? 7 combo colours are a bit much imo.
Yea...maybe, lol

[Timing]
  1. 03:17:094 - Unsnapped timing point, move to 03:17:089
done

[Rin]
[notice]
  1. You should use other combo colours at the part with the red bg. Red on red makes it pretty hard to read :s used a other color :s
  2. 00:14:910 (11) - New combo done
  3. 00:15:916 (1) - Remove new combo done
  4. 00:16:251 (2) - New combo done
  5. 00:18:933 (6) - ^ ^
  6. 00:20:106 (6) - ^ ^
  7. 00:24:296 (6) - ^ ^
  8. 00:25:637 (6) - ^^
  9. 00:26:642 (1) - Remove new combo done
  10. 00:26:977 (2) - New combo done
  11. 00:29:659 (6) - ^ ^
  12. 00:49:268 (1) - Remove that red point? The slider looks a bit cramped :s true...i removed it :s
  13. 01:09:882 (11) - New combo done
  14. 01:20:273 (10) - ^ ^
  15. 01:21:614 (1) - Remove new combo done
  16. 01:21:949 (2) - New combo done
  17. 01:25:637 (10) - ^ ^
  18. 01:26:307 (1) - Remove new combo. done
  19. 01:29:994 (6) - New combo done
  20. 01:31:335 (6) - ^ ^
  21. 01:32:340 (1) - Remove new combo done
  22. 01:32:676 (2) - New combo done
  23. 01:35:357 (6) - ^ ^
  24. 01:36:363 (5) - ^^
  25. 01:36:363 (10) - ^^
  26. 01:40:720 (6) - ^^
  27. 01:42:061 (11) - ^^
  28. 01:43:067 (1) - Remove new combo done
  29. 01:43:402 (5) - New combo done
  30. 01:46:083 (6) - ^ ^
  31. 01:48:765 (5) - New combo? ^
  32. 01:54:799 (8) - Remove? Sounds better imo. Hum yeah...
  33. 02:02:508 (6) - New combo done
  34. 02:20:609 (10) - ^ ^
  35. 02:25:972 (10) - ^ ^
  36. 02:49:268 (4) - Change to something else? Looks so cramped :s done
  37. 02:50:273 (6) - New combo done
  38. 02:52:955 (3) - Add clap on end? done
  39. 02:53:458 (4) - Add clap? done
  40. 02:55:804 - That SV change here feels weird, the song doesn't really get faster, Rin just starts singing. Uh...i have no clue why i did that there...
  41. 02:58:486 (4) - New combo done
  42. 02:59:994 (1) - Remove new combo done
  43. 03:01:000 (1) - New combo done
  44. 03:22:452 (4) - Change to this? Suits it better imo.
    SPOILER
    done
  45. 03:23:793 (4) - Same as above, just copy it and then flip it horizontally. ^
  46. 03:25:804 (5) - New combo done
  47. 03:33:011 (10) - ^ ^
  48. 03:34:352 (1) - Remove new combo done
  49. 03:34:687 (2) - New combo done
  50. 03:43:737 (10) - ^ done
  51. 03:46:754 (1,4) - Not sure about those sliders, I would recommend you to change them, don't really fit with the song and if I'm not mistaken they are unrankable.
They are? I've seen a few sliders like them on other ranked maps. Anyways...i'll change them.

That's all~
Nice map actually, the combo's felt a bit random though.
Good luck :)
I know... i kinda suck at placing new combos. (-__- *)

Thank you!
B2IN
B2IN
Hi ~! Smoothie :D

from #modreq

[General]
The map has a very small amount of finish..
i recommend OD+1 to you
[Rin]
00:23:290 (2) - up 1grid
01:09:547 (10) - i think.. left 1grid imo :3
01:22:117 (3) - this overlap .. um.. not good. I hope replacing
01:42:229 (12) - move to here 01:42:061 (remove note 11). end the slider till 01:42:396. sounds nicer
02:26:810 (13) - down 1gird
02:51:949 () - add note ?
04:05:860 (12) - stack. tail of (10) slider
04:12:229 (1,2,3) - Why don't you use the jump? try jump :3

good luck !
Smoothie
558 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Smoothie
Heya :)

B2IN wrote:

Hi ~! Smoothie :D

from #modreq

[General]
The map has a very small amount of finish..
i recommend OD+1 to you done :3
[Rin]
00:23:290 (2) - up 1grid done
01:09:547 (10) - i think.. left 1grid imo :3
  • The slider wouldn't be in the middle of 01:08:542 (6) - 01:09:128 (9) - 01:09:882 (1) - and 01:10:385 (3) - anymore if i would do that. Looks a bit awkward though :s
01:22:117 (3) - this overlap .. um.. not good. I hope replacing Changed it...i hope it's better now :3
01:42:229 (12) - move to here 01:42:061 (remove note 11). end the slider till 01:42:396. sounds nicer done
02:26:810 (13) - down 1gird done
02:51:949 () - add note ? done
04:05:860 (12) - stack. tail of (10) slider done
04:12:229 (1,2,3) - Why don't you use the jump? try jump :3 Added a jump there :3

good luck !
Thank you! :)
Last edited by Smoothie , edited 1 time in total.
Smoothie
558 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Smoothie
Ah damn...double posted by accident :(
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