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supercell - My Dearest (TV Size)

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Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年6月4日 at 19:12:09

Artist: supercell
Title: My Dearest (TV Size)
Source: Guilty Crown
Tags: ryo koeda opening
BPM: 168.7
Filesize: 4162kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dearest (4.99 stars, 289 notes)
  2. Hard (4.46 stars, 158 notes)
  3. Normal (2.86 stars, 102 notes)
Download: supercell - My Dearest (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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*Guilty Crown OP1*


Normal - done
Hard - done
Dearest - done


enjoy this song =)
-------I'm your's-------
Last edited by Melt , edited 16 times in total.
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Skystar
沙發
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
raririn
占位
Genkishi
566 posts
Joined September 2010
Genkishi
  • Hello!

    Here's my mod

    [General]
  1. Uncheck "Enable Countdown"
  2. Uncheck "Letterbok During Breaks"
  3. Add "ryo" in tags

    [Normal]
  4. Make the distance spacing consistent since it's normal.Try Distance spacing x1.0, fix the spacing of every notes after making the spacing x1.0
  5. 00:01:180 (2,1,2) - The first slider seems offbeat.Try this instead? after that, fix the spacing
    SPOILER
  6. 00:02:069 (3) - Remove new combo
  7. 00:12:586 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try this pattern?
    SPOILER
  8. 00:15:434 (1) - Remove this new combo
  9. 00:15:790 - Remove break since the space is too short
  10. 00:36:876 (1) - ^ after removing the new combo add a new combo here 00:38:305 (1)
  11. 00:48:332 (2) - Jumps in Normal? Never add some in a Normal diff..Fix it
  12. 00:52:444 (1) - Remove New combo
  13. 01:26:410 (1) - ^
  14. -1 Circle Size
  15. -1 Approach Rate
  16. -1 HP drain

    [Hard]
  17. 00:24:021 (3) - New combo
  18. 00:25:801 (1) - Remove new combo
  19. 00:26:884 (1) - Add New combo
  20. 00:41:687 (3) - Extend this slider until 00:44:011
  21. 00:55:483 (1) - New combo
  22. 00:58:165 (7) - Remove New combo
  23. 01:09:048 - Reduce the volume into 50%
  24. 01:09:793 - Increase this volume by 10%
  25. 01:12:651 (2) - put finish instead of clap
  26. 01:13:723 (4) - put clap and remove the clap in this slider 01:13:902 (5)
  27. 01:14:617 (7) - remove clap on this slider
  28. 01:15:332 (1) - Remove new combo and add some in the next note
  29. 01:15:332 (2) - If you add a new combo in this note.Add finish on it's head and remove the clap on it's end
  30. 01:15:868 (2) - put a clap on it's head
  31. 01:16:940 (5) - add clap and remove the clap on this slider 01:17:118 (6)
  32. 01:15:332 (9) - Remove new combo and add here 01:18:369 (2)
  33. 01:18:726 (1) - Remove new combo
  34. 01:19:262 (1) - ^
  35. 01:20:871 (1) - ^ and add here 01:21:228 (2)
  36. 01:22:836 (5) - add clap on the tail of this slider and after that remove clap here 01:23:193 (6)
  37. 01:23:729 (1) - ^ and add finish on the slider's head
  38. 01:24:444 (3) - add clap on the head of this slider
  39. 01:26:231 (7) - Remove NC
  40. +1 OD

    [Dearest]
  41. 00:13:832 (7,8,1) - How about like this?
    SPOILER
  42. 00:16:680 (7,8,1) - It's better if you make it a stream like this
    SPOILER
  43. 00:33:660 (5) - remove note and move the slider in this place and the result should be like this:
    SPOILER
  44. 00:38:663 (8) - New combo
  45. 00:39:006 (1) - Remove new combo
  46. 00:40:793 (1) - New combo
  47. 01:09:048 - Reduce the volume into 50%
  48. 01:09:793 - Increase this volume by 10%
  49. 01:09:971 - Remove timing section
  50. 01:25:874 (8) - New combo


That's All!

PM me if you have questions :)
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

Genkishi wrote:

  • Hello!

    Here's my mod

    [General]
  1. Uncheck "Enable Countdown"
  2. Uncheck "Letterbok During Breaks"
  3. Add "ryo" in tags

    [Normal]
  4. Make the distance spacing consistent since it's normal.Try Distance spacing x1.0, fix the spacing of every notes after making the spacing x1.0
  5. 00:01:180 (2,1,2) - The first slider seems offbeat.Try this instead? after that, fix the spacing
    SPOILER
  6. 00:02:069 (3) - Remove new combo
  7. 00:12:586 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try this pattern?
    SPOILER
  8. 00:15:434 (1) - Remove this new combo
  9. 00:15:790 - Remove break since the space is too short
  10. 00:36:876 (1) - ^ after removing the new combo add a new combo here 00:38:305 (1)
  11. 00:48:332 (2) - Jumps in Normal? Never add some in a Normal diff..Fix it
  12. 00:52:444 (1) - Remove New combo
  13. 01:26:410 (1) - ^
  14. -1 Circle Size
  15. -1 Approach Rate
  16. -1 HP drain

    [Hard]
  17. 00:24:021 (3) - New combo
  18. 00:25:801 (1) - Remove new combo
  19. 00:26:884 (1) - Add New combo
  20. 00:41:687 (3) - Extend this slider until 00:44:011
  21. 00:55:483 (1) - New combo
  22. 00:58:165 (7) - Remove New combo
  23. 01:09:048 - Reduce the volume into 50%
  24. 01:09:793 - Increase this volume by 10%
  25. 01:12:651 (2) - put finish instead of clap
  26. 01:13:723 (4) - put clap and remove the clap in this slider 01:13:902 (5)
  27. 01:14:617 (7) - remove clap on this slider
  28. 01:15:332 (1) - Remove new combo and add some in the next note
  29. 01:15:332 (2) - If you add a new combo in this note.Add finish on it's head and remove the clap on it's end
  30. 01:15:868 (2) - put a clap on it's head
  31. 01:16:940 (5) - add clap and remove the clap on this slider 01:17:118 (6)
  32. 01:15:332 (9) - Remove new combo and add here 01:18:369 (2)
  33. 01:18:726 (1) - Remove new combo
  34. 01:19:262 (1) - ^
  35. 01:20:871 (1) - ^ and add here 01:21:228 (2)
  36. 01:22:836 (5) - add clap on the tail of this slider and after that remove clap here 01:23:193 (6)
  37. 01:23:729 (1) - ^ and add finish on the slider's head
  38. 01:24:444 (3) - add clap on the head of this slider
  39. 01:26:231 (7) - Remove NC
  40. +1 OD

    [Dearest]
  41. 00:13:832 (7,8,1) - How about like this?
    SPOILER
  42. 00:16:680 (7,8,1) - It's better if you make it a stream like this
    SPOILER
  43. 00:33:660 (5) - remove note and move the slider in this place and the result should be like this:
    SPOILER
  44. 00:38:663 (8) - New combo
  45. 00:39:006 (1) - Remove new combo
  46. 00:40:793 (1) - New combo
  47. 01:09:048 - Reduce the volume into 50%
  48. 01:09:793 - Increase this volume by 10%
  49. 01:09:971 - Remove timing section
  50. 01:25:874 (8) - New combo


That's All!

PM me if you have questions :)

All fixed

thx for your modding :)
Athena Tennos
1,038 posts
Joined February 2010
Athena Tennos
A-tan's mod.....

[General]
♪~♪~♪~~~

[Normal]
♪~♪~♪~~~

[Hard]
01:01:166 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 对齐点~

Hard有很多地方违反了这个rules。。。。虽然我觉得没关系- -。。。你自己决定把~。。貌似那种重叠也不是很美观~提议~被隐藏的note往下移一半出来~或者 折回一下就好了~不要完全遮住就好了~~~自己决定把~
Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule.
圈圈物件（Hitcircles）不能被拉條軌跡遮擋。（包含部分與完全遮擋）Insane難度可以違反此項規則。

[Dearest]
00:06:870 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 感觉好乱。。。可以试着换种跳法~分散点~ ~像01:01:881 - 就不错~至少不会很挤~xD

Nice mapset~
红线觉得怪怪的。。。。可以找人家测一下去。。。
Good Luck♪~
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod.....

[General]
♪~♪~♪~~~

[Normal]
♪~♪~♪~~~

[Hard]
01:01:166 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 对齐点~

Hard有很多地方违反了这个rules。。。。虽然我觉得没关系- -。。。你自己决定把~。。貌似那种重叠也不是很美观~提议~被隐藏的note往下移一半出来~或者 折回一下就好了~不要完全遮住就好了~~~自己决定把~
Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule.
圈圈物件（Hitcircles）不能被拉條軌跡遮擋。（包含部分與完全遮擋）Insane難度可以違反此項規則。

[Dearest]
00:06:870 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 感觉好乱。。。可以试着换种跳法~分散点~ ~像01:01:881 - 就不错~至少不会很挤~xD

Nice mapset~
红线觉得怪怪的。。。。可以找人家测一下去。。。
Good Luck♪~
改掉了一些 thx~
x847606653
524 posts
Joined January 2011
x847606653
Hi._.
just some suggestions

slider tick rate -1
再去找个更适合歌曲normal-clap怎么样？

Normal
排版有点单调

Hard
00:15:434(4) finish?

Dearest
00:43:833(2) remove finish?

没什么可说的，star
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

x847606653 wrote:

Hi._.
just some suggestions

slider tick rate -1 fixed
再去找个更适合歌曲normal-clap怎么样？

Normal
排版有点单调 改掉了一些

Hard
00:15:434(4) finish? 这个地方音量有点大，finish会不会太吵了一点orz

Dearest
00:43:833(2) remove finish?

没什么可说的，star
音效的话我再去找找orz

thx for your modding and star :)
Kanari
1,311 posts
Joined June 2011
Kanari
Harro >w<
You requested in my queue ~
Gahhhh !
I love this anime <33


[General]
- Keep the same combo colors for each diff?
- Add koeda and opening to the tags?

[Normal]
00:27:774 (3) - Move this to 00:27:952
00:28:664 (4) - Delete this (If you did that^)
00:29:732 (6) - End this slider on 00:30:801


[Hard]
- Approach Rate -1
00:41:687 (3) - Place under (2)
00:51:014 (4) - Reverse?
01:09:033 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).


[Dearest]
00:11:557 (1) - This spinner is so short >< Remove it.


Well mapped! >w<
3 Stars and good luck !
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Harro >w<
You requested in my queue ~
Gahhhh !
I love this anime <33


[General]
- Keep the same combo colors for each diff? fixed
- Add koeda and opening to the tags? fixed

[Normal]
00:27:774 (3) - Move this to 00:27:952
00:28:664 (4) - Delete this (If you did that^)
00:29:732 (6) - End this slider on 00:30:801
all fixed

[Hard]
- Approach Rate -1 I think ar7 is ok for this song
00:41:687 (3) - Place under (2) fixed
00:51:014 (4) - Reverse?
01:09:033 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). fixed


[Dearest]
00:11:557 (1) - This spinner is so short >< Remove it. fixed


Well mapped! >w<
3 Stars and good luck !
>w< thank you so much for your mod and star~
f e a r
317 posts
Joined March 2011
f e a r
Hiii~ modqueue

[Normal]
00:15:434 (6) - make this a slider to 00:16:146 - then stack a note ontop of sliderend 00:16:502?
00:47:974 - stack note ontop of sliderend?
00:49:405 - ^
00:50:835 - ^
00:52:265 - note ontop of 00:52:444 (3) to follow piano?
(Nazi) 01:13:366 (2) - move 1 grid left
\o\

[Hard]
00:53:517 - add note
00:54:053 (4) - move this back to 00:53:874
00:55:126 - add note
/o/

[Dearest]
00:14:544 - add note
00:28:486 - ^
00:28:842 - ^
01:03:848 - ^
00:56:914 - Add a note
00:57:092 (4) - move slider so sliderstart is at 00:57:271 and extend to 00:57:629 -
00:57:092 - Add note

Done. Star'd, good mapset and good luck with it \o
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

f e a r wrote:

Hiii~ modqueue

[Normal]
00:15:434 (6) - make this a slider to 00:16:146 - then stack a note ontop of sliderend 00:16:502? change it to a slider
00:47:974 - stack note ontop of sliderend?
00:49:405 - ^
00:50:835 - ^ i dont wanna add too many note since its a normal diff
00:52:265 - note ontop of 00:52:444 (3) to follow piano?
(Nazi) 01:13:366 (2) - move 1 grid left fixed
\o\

[Hard]
00:53:517 - add note
00:54:053 (4) - move this back to 00:53:874
00:55:126 - add note
/o/
all fixed

[Dearest]
00:14:544 - add note
00:28:486 - ^
00:28:842 - ^
01:03:848 - ^
00:56:914 - Add a note
00:57:092 (4) - move slider so sliderstart is at 00:57:271 and extend to 00:57:629 -
00:57:092 - Add note
I'll spend a little time to think about these changes

Done. Star'd, good mapset and good luck with it \o
thanks for your help>.<
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
hi there! request from my queue

[General]
please, keep in kiai times and RED timing sections for every diff >3<
i think there's something wrong with timing :< please check red timing section

[Normal]
louser hitsounds? ~_~
01:15:510 (1,2,3,4) - placing like this really hard for easiest diff
00:41:508 (4) - uncomfortable to play

[Hard]
00:18:995 (5) - add new combo. now it's confusing
00:52:623 (2) - touches hp bar
00:58:306 (2,3,1,2) - booring ~_~
01:14:259 (6,8) - maybe avoid overlap?

[Dearest]
why not [Insane]? D:
feels like AR+1.. i'm not sure >3<

~~~~~~~~~

gl~
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

-Bakari- wrote:

hi there! request from my queue

[General]
please, keep in kiai times and RED timing sections for every diff >3< fixed
i think there's something wrong with timing :< please check red timing section i'll check it later :3

[Normal]
louser hitsounds? ~_~
01:15:510 (1,2,3,4) - placing like this really hard for easiest diff fixed
00:41:508 (4) - uncomfortable to play

[Hard]
00:18:995 (5) - add new combo. now it's confusing fixed
00:52:623 (2) - touches hp bar fixed
00:58:306 (2,3,1,2) - booring ~_~
01:14:259 (6,8) - maybe avoid overlap? fixed

[Dearest]
why not [Insane]? D:
feels like AR+1.. i'm not sure >3<
i think ar8 is enough :D
~~~~~~~~~

gl~
thanks for your modding :)
Urlangce
98 posts
Joined October 2010
Urlangce
这个。。三个diff有个地方的颜色不一样。改过来？
- [Dearest] :
Combo1 : 244,77,34
Combo2 : 60,60,60
Combo3 : 120,120,120
 Combo4 : 192,192,192
Combo5 : 255,0,0
Combo6 : 255,100,255

- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 244,77,34
Combo2 : 60,60,60
Combo3 : 117,117,117
Combo4 : 192,192,192
Combo5 : 255,0,0
Combo6 : 255,100,255

- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 244,77,34
Combo2 : 60,60,60
Combo3 : 117,117,117
Combo4 : 192,192,192
Combo5 : 255,0,0
Combo6 : 255,100,255

写在前面关于三连的事情。。
一般音乐中没有而map中加的三连要尽量加红线三连，因为三连的最重的打击感在第三个音上，红线三连的重音刚好在白线。但是也有例外，跟vocal的三连是不受限制的。你里面有很多白线三连哦。
[Normal]
00:19:707(1)(2)(3)(4)：Circle有部分被挡住了。。。
00:21:179(1)(2)(1)(2)：Normal不建议用这样的？觉得Normal还是照顾下新人？后边有一样的就不列出了。

[Hard]
00:14:722(2)：把这个移动到00:14:544 会好点吧。
00:17:571(2)：^
00:27:952(2)：这个slider感觉在00:28:664结束会好些。
感觉从01:09:048(1)开始到最后这里感觉clap有点混乱？LKs在这方面很拿手，你能找她帮你Mod一下最好了。。

[Dearest]
就是白线三连的主要问题。还有就是摆放上稍显乱了点。其它的我是不怎么看得出来了

唔，水平所限，只能帮助这些了~
GL~
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

Urlangce wrote:

这个。。三个diff有个地方的颜色不一样。改过来？ 诶 我明明记得之前改掉了orz
- [Dearest] :
Combo1 : 244,77,34
Combo2 : 60,60,60
Combo3 : 120,120,120
 Combo4 : 192,192,192
Combo5 : 255,0,0
Combo6 : 255,100,255

- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 244,77,34
Combo2 : 60,60,60
Combo3 : 117,117,117
Combo4 : 192,192,192
Combo5 : 255,0,0
Combo6 : 255,100,255

- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 244,77,34
Combo2 : 60,60,60
Combo3 : 117,117,117
Combo4 : 192,192,192
Combo5 : 255,0,0
Combo6 : 255,100,255

写在前面关于三连的事情。。
一般音乐中没有而map中加的三连要尽量加红线三连，因为三连的最重的打击感在第三个音上，红线三连的重音刚好在白线。但是也有例外，跟vocal的三连是不受限制的。你里面有很多白线三连哦。
[Normal]
00:19:707(1)(2)(3)(4)：Circle有部分被挡住了。。。 fixed
00:21:179(1)(2)(1)(2)：Normal不建议用这样的？觉得Normal还是照顾下新人？后边有一样的就不列出了。感觉normal里这好像不算太难 再有人提我就改掉吧orz

[Hard]
00:14:722(2)：把这个移动到00:14:544 会好点吧。
00:17:571(2)：^
00:27:952(2)：这个slider感觉在00:28:664结束会好些。fixed
感觉从01:09:048(1)开始到最后这里感觉clap有点混乱？LKs在这方面很拿手，你能找她帮你Mod一下最好了。。这里音效确实有点乱 我会想办法改一下的

[Dearest]
就是白线三连的主要问题。还有就是摆放上稍显乱了点。其它的我是不怎么看得出来了
大部分都改掉了
唔，水平所限，只能帮助这些了~
GL~
帮助很大诶 多谢 :D
Amainya
157 posts
Joined January 2011
Amainya
嗨i~ > <



因为mod不大在行,所以给不了太多建议,觉得违和的地方列一下>A<



General


其实我觉得转盘那个图当bg比较好?(我又2了orz


Dearest


00:06:870 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
删掉00:09:715 (1) - ,然后00:08:293 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -整体 向后移动,如图(可选
SPOILER

00:18:283 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - (可选
SPOILER
SPOILER

00:24:377 (2) - 删掉,然后把(1)拉长到00:24:377 - (可选

01:12:473 (5,6) - 突然跳了然后逆向什么的

01:16:404 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - (可选
看难度文件吧orz..不懂描述..
http://puu.sh/yKDw
(右键另存为下载)


End


有些梗感觉和歌曲没什么关联orz...(可能是我理解不到orz
个人觉得如果人声后的鼓点不是比较强的话..分开做比较好orz
有些地方的节奏那个奇怪..需要努力一下ww
因为mod不大在行,所以以上意见都是参考下就好orz
总体打起来还是蛮舒服的.
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

OrangeNeKo wrote:

嗨i~ > < 嗨> <



因为mod不大在行,所以给不了太多建议,觉得违和的地方列一下>A<



General


其实我觉得转盘那个图当bg比较好?(我又2了orz


Dearest


00:06:870 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
删掉00:09:715 (1) - ,然后00:08:293 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -整体 向后移动,如图(可选
SPOILER
感觉空一拍好奇怪
00:18:283 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - (可选
SPOILER
SPOILER
这个改掉了
00:24:377 (2) - 删掉,然后把(1)拉长到00:24:377 - (可选
感觉一个减速滑条和后面那串单点有点不协调
01:12:473 (5,6) - 突然跳了然后逆向什么的
我故意的orz
01:16:404 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - (可选
看难度文件吧orz..不懂描述..
http://puu.sh/yKDw
(右键另存为下载)
这个改掉了 前面一段相似的也改掉了:3

End


有些梗感觉和歌曲没什么关联orz...(可能是我理解不到orz
个人觉得如果人声后的鼓点不是比较强的话..分开做比较好orz
有些地方的节奏那个奇怪..需要努力一下ww
因为mod不大在行,所以以上意见都是参考下就好orz
总体打起来还是蛮舒服的.
:D
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
Hi there~~mod for request~~

[General]
  1. 第一个红线前不要放东西（包括note或者绿线都不可以）
  2. Timing，我自己测的……可能还是有偏差所以只是参考下就好了，这曲子我强烈建议你去找个timing专精的帮你校准一下……
    1. 168.000 offset 1195
    2. 168.500 offset 12624
    3. 168.000 offset 24019
    4. 164.000 offset 66876
    5. 168.000 offset 69802
[Skin]
  1. 因为有自定义hitcircleoverlay的缘故，所以你需要手动指定sliderborder的颜色，方法如下：
    1. 在osu文件的[Colours]项目下，添加：
      SliderBorder : （具体的RPG值）
      就我个人而言，我比较建议使用的数值是192,192,192或者160,160,160这样的灰色，所以就是
      SliderBorder : 160,160,160
  2. Skin的添加是要求成套的，也就是说如果你选择使用了sliderfollowcircle的话，那么应该相应的也该添加一套sliderb
  3. 如果可以的话，把300k和300g做的稍微有些不一样会比较好
[Normal]
  1. 整体上：我觉得Easy和Normal这样的难度里尽量避免遮挡和重叠吧……现在的情况是可能因为你SV选的不是很好导致了大量的重叠，加上各种直线的slider使得整个难度都显得很生硬而且并不整洁，特别是出现像00:01:180 (2) - 这种slidertick和circleoverlay重叠在一起的情况时加重了凌乱感……

    所以我的建议是尽量避免使用重叠和遮挡，多放一些弧线的slider把note之间的距离拉开也许效果会更好。使用DS来做是很好的选择，不过其实对于Normal而言并不一定非要卡着1.0x的来做，如果发现因为sv过低导致排不开的话，1.1或者1.2的DS也是可以选择的。另外，有时候缩小一号CS也是可以的，不过多数情况下不推荐这么做除非有Easy。
  2. 另外E/N难度的话，尽量combo长度不要超过6个把……
  3. 00:12:586 - 到00:24:021 - 这段应该有音效的，否则音乐强度上来了之后本身soft音效就很软，完全无法支持你的打击感呢。
  4. 00:16:858 (1) - 这里应该是典型的把whistle当finish用了……其实说起来这里我觉得既然鼓点很重的话可以试试normal音效的，你觉得呢？
  5. 00:19:707 (1,2,3,4) - 这个排列感觉不是很好看呢……试着弄圆滑一些？
  6. 00:21:179 (1,2,1,2) - 虽然能够理解节奏的摆法，但是因为音乐本身鼓点的缘故很容易给新人造成困扰的，所以避免这种遮挡吧。
  7. 00:26:528 (1) - 其实我觉得这种地方没有必要硬跟vocal的节奏……anyway，自己决定啦～
  8. 00:39:006 (2) - 简单来说……这种落在红线上的note往往都是丢acc的罪魁祸首……
  9. 00:40:793 (1,2,3,4) - 恩……这里有个明显的节奏错位……如果你想跟vocal的话……
  10. 00:46:902 (1,2) - 所谓会造成排版不干净的“不必要的遮挡”，这里算是个很典型的例子了:)
  11. 00:58:306 (1,2,3,4) - 依然是不建议在Normal里就这么放……后面的不说了……
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:586 (1) - 这个跳下的好莫名…………
  2. 00:19:707 (1,2,3,4) - 试着排一个倾斜的正方形？
  3. 00:27:952 (2) - 唔……你真的很喜欢这种排版呢……
  4. 00:53:874 (5) - 像这种长度slider的双次折返我觉得可以考虑拆成两个slider，打起来会更舒服一些～
  5. 00:59:736 (1) - 啊……这个跳……
  6. 01:18:369 (1) - 这里前后两个combo colour好像是一样的？应该是NC BUG了重新整理一下吧，要不然就是你combo4和6的颜色太接近了导致无法区分……总之，不好
Hard前面那段的质量明显要好不少……后面kiai段感觉还需要再多调整调整……

[Dearest]
  1. 00:06:870 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这一堆看的时候感觉还可以，但是test的时候很别扭……可能是因为timing的缘故也可能是因为音效的缘故……
  2. 00:12:586 - 音效什么的和Normal的建议类似，这种鼓点很重的地方推荐Normal
  3. 00:40:793 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这一段的节奏感觉有些怪怪的……要不要试试这种？

    相应的排列什么的你也可以参考下……总之随手试了试希望能有帮助吧

  4. 00:46:723 (1,2,3) - 唔……还是想吐槽这个造型真的不好看……
  5. 01:20:334 (8,9,10,11) - 这里挑个典型吧……应该说clap不是这么用的……一般而言，clap更多用于每小节的固定位置，比如说经典(或者说被用烂了的)2/4白线clap之类。整个kiai段里都有clap乱用的情况，总之建议你整个再调整一下会更好些吧:)
  6. 01:24:533 (3) - 建议删了……不好听也不舒服……
大致上就这些了～～～对于新人而言算是还不错的了，不过排版上再努力努力吧～～加油的说
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt
这两天实在太忙 过段时间我会来改图的QAQ
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
hi from my mod Q ^.^

General

in file .osu you should add color of edges of a slider (sliderBorder)

Dearest

00:02:780(6,7) - stack better
00:03:313 - add note
00:06:159 - ^ and on next white tick
00:10:071 - make break time here
01:18:548 - add note
01:21:228(1,2) - stack better

Hard

00:19:707(1,2,3,4) - make identical distance between this notes
00:21:713 - add note and replace next slider on 3 notes
00:44:727 - make here breack time >.<
00:51:729 - add slider to big white tick
01:19:262(4) - put this note on spacing

It's all for me good luck~~
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa
[General]
-我覺得00:12:586到00:24:021的音效用soft顯得無力，可以試試看normal

[Normal]
-很多人說的遮擋問題可能要再改一下，畢竟這是你最簡單的難度，不要遮太多比較好
-還有滑條可以試著拉圓一點，直線或尖的不是很好看我覺得
單論節奏的話其實是不錯的，不過看下來就是覺得有哪裡怪怪的，整體排的並不是很美觀

[Hard]
-間距可能有點亂，雖然這是Hard，不過多少還是希望你能整理一下
00:02:424 (5) – 開頭加whistle
00:05:270 (5) – ^
00:06:337 (7) – add whistle
00:27:952 (2) – 這個建議就別疊了，疊了但並沒有特別好讀
00:46:723 – 這是無用綠線，請刪掉這個，然後用00:46:187的紅線把音量調成70%即可
00:50:835 (4) – 為什麼尾部要靜音？
-kiai開始後的音效我個人覺得非常亂，聽起來也很突兀
一般的mapper都是在1放重音（像finish），然後2跟4放clap或whistle（當然有更好的音效梗的話就不必在意這個了）。
你的我就不多說了，我覺得有點吵Orz
01:19:620 (5) – 沒有跟到vocal或樂器，請在01:19:620加個circle就好

[Insane]
01:04:027 (1,1,1,1) – 別的難度都沒有這樣的話，後面三個的NC還是拿掉吧
01:10:329 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – 我覺得這個串完全對不上
音效吵，請參考一下我Hard裡寫的，先這樣了

加油 8-)
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